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Hi catnip and blitzong chapter 4 today! As in a human human, or a mon turned into a human? With this cast and setting who knows.. Question answered. Wonder ifnits a roaming professor. Hope its not birch, mans a danger to himself and everyone around him. Is this a iv ev farm/daycare...

Review for blitz, we are in the final dash! Its interesting to see that Red is with some of Greens team... also initially i was a bit surprised he iant having Sniffy and his other dig inclined 'mon join in... And Red, ironically fails the social intellegence game but wins the emotional one...

Hi lets get six over the line for this blitz! So is there a mirror? I kinda wanna know why they latched onto Green so enthusiastically. Umbreon: for you to get a hint... For some reason, I thought he was initially traveling with Espeon, not Umbreon. So, not quite a literal mirror, bad...

Hi let's tackle five tonight shall we! Nah, his maturity likes to hang out in the five year old category... That's what? Pre-schooler, not baby, levels? I can only imagine, old world orders been shattered and all his familiar faces is off doing different things. THat's gotta be jarring...

Happy fourth chapter, lets blitz it, shall we? I wonder if, per scenery and cold, he's not seeing Mt. Silver from Red's perspective. Love the symbolism of Green failing to put what he broke together again. This dream is tapping hard on some very real, psyche deep, fears he's carting...

Hi, here for chapter 3, blitzing, let's get going. Also, tiny quibble, not having threadmarks is a nightmare and a half (I'm having to use desktop time to run each chapter through Word counter since it won't on my phone is a pain.) I'm hoping you'll have time to repedy it sometime in the future...

You leave a nice little trainer fic all by it's lonesome, and does anyone read it? Noooo. Well, let's fix that, happy blitz by the way. Guessing Green's musing about Red, unless he's locking horns with Blaine for a rematch? Ah, so definitely taking on and talking to Red. Nice to know...

weekly fic rec. week 2 theme: You leave a quality fic all by itself until Blitz to see if anyone else will read it... and nope. Oh well, here's a chance to for me and any others interested to remedy that mistake. What can I say? I was in a romantic mood. This story is definite slow burn...

And at 6 at last. Lets wtap this up shall we? I mean ghost type are a thing... Lovely. Not only did some poor soul die but got rabies in passing. A wonderful two for one scenario. Says the fighting type. Riki was a riolu right? Its been awhike since a hint dropped. Oh yeah no type...

Hi again, figured I'd pick this puppy clean, let the Kratos trama continue! Excuse me but you, Nyra, are interrupting the "Kratos trauma train", this is not the road trip I came for. But perhaps this is a snippet into the inner lives of big bads? A beaky smile, I'm imagining either a bird...

Hi, I'm baaaack, let's take a crack at the rest of this symphonia nostalgia trip, shall we? CHAPTER 3 REVIEW BLITZ! Love how kratos is being so logic-oriented. Very canon. It's interesting to see him be this social w a new group, considering his interactions with the canon group (both...

Hi author to the longest tale on my new-writer-to-do list. I thought i'd take a poke before next week's subject change, missed the boat, and decided, "what the heck," I'll finish things anyway. Wow that long. No pressure. Sounds vaugly england, with alternating gloom, rain, and wind. Of...

Basically its gios history notes wrapped up in a guise of filling prompts. Well obe tries to offer suprises. Grammarly is a bloody godsend. I cant see 90% of the errors it catches. I'll brush up post blitz as time permits. It was a sacrifice i made since gio was bluffing and when...

Hi, welcome to the blitz I'll be your reviewer today lets see what we got... Had to skip the link. Music and this phone are no goes. Theres some tense scrambling. I popped in some corrections. Sounds like a case of missing time gear... Okay so not time gear. I wonder where pialka went...

Hi i saw your story floating around the forum and thought inwould say hi with a blitz review. Twitches eyebrow in amusement. I mean the title kinda covers one of those triggerwarning alone... Per light and sterility is this the wake up call via nightmare a medical setting? Love the...

Hi , here for the last gasp of week one. Tango mentioned this fic, so i thought i'd say hi via review and a warm welcome to the forum. Aww our first white collar crime story. And non-trainer centric. Sounds like a blast. Lets see how it goes. Love how smart she is. Going independent in...

Theres some pretty plotty reason as to why they lean more italian stereotype than yakuza. But for now, enjoy the tangled saprano-esk madhouse that ruked gios life from chikdhood to young adulthood. Insanely so. They get worse the longer you know them. Of this generation Gemma is probably...

Hi, Kasan Soulblade here, thought I'd toss my hat into the ring and see how it goes. Welcome to my lair of Manga AU and trainer-centric tales. I'm an unrepentant Team Rocket nerd who likes to dig into the sociological and psychological side of the fandom. Specializing in rich character...

hi, welcome to the forum, I'm here for a look-see and to scratch another story off my blitz to-do list lets see how it goes. Sounds like pure mental chaos. Are they losing memories, reliving them through a kelidascope of someone else's needs, or just having a wild nightmare? Its the mon...

Hi, as there doesn't seem to be a more modern version i figure'd i'd poke at this story for plot reasons rather than editing angles. Joyous day, looks like this is gunna be ine heck of an opening. I'm surprised he didn't get hit of the smell well before he got on the scene. So is he...