Recent content by Joshthewriter

Ok, finally here for catnip! I gotta say, the growth of your writing quality is evident immediately. Scene description was already a strength of yours and I feel like it’s pretty obviously improved in this first chapter alone. I won’t lie, I was so engrossed in it that I didn’t even stop to...

Journey Death of Duty Part 8: Ending and Beginning Resurrection The lives of the dead are placed in the memories of the living. — Elite Agatha Kikoku I picked my way through the rubble, stepping atop a concrete slab with stray bits of rebar jutting out. My left knee twinged with pain and...

Alright, so first off I’ll let you know right now that pokemon X human is very not for me. I’ll not mention this again, just wanted to let you know since it may tint the review itself. Also not usually a fan of present tense. Doesn’t vibe with me very well. I will say though, that Glen does...

Journey Death of Duty Part 7: Fall of the Pokemon League Deicide We attempted to create the most powerful Pokemon in existence… We succeeded. — Ichiro Fuji I stood at the roof's edge, gazing down at the plaza below. More trainers were still teleporting in, hundreds by the minute. I...

Journey Death of Duty Part 7: Fall of the Pokemon League Defeat We need to be better than our primal nature. If we are not? Nature may take its course. — Professor Samuel Oak Savage growled, a deep and predatory noise that vibrated the loose rubble around us both. His pupils found me...

Progress check! 07-06-2025 — 126 words 07-07-2025 — 1801 words 4 Day writing streak! Total words — 4599 Luna has leveled up to level 10!

First progress check in for Luna and Journey! 07-04-2025 — 1066 words 07-05-2025 — 1606 words 2 day writing streak! Total Words — 2672 Luna has leveled up to Lvl 6! Josh found a Fire Stone! Josh put the Fire Stone in his bag! I have the item already lol, but I’m not evolving her yet. Want...

User: JoshtheWriter My Team: (current projects) Name: Luna ♀ Fic: https://forums.thousandroads.net/threads/journey.1050 Level: 10 Words to lvl up: 401 Achievements: Box 1 (past projects)

Alright, I have recovered from an aggressive migraine and I’m here now. First off, I love the way you started this. Beautiful imagery and a sense that Dali is maybe missing his old home in the desert. I love the touch of Chase holding onto an old tire for a chew toy. Hilarious image to think...

Ok, so I was here for catnip and only planned to do the one chapter. That… went out the window. Good god, your story is not what I expected from the blurb at the beginning. Believe me when I say that was a very good thing. Normally I’d comment on individual lines and parts that I liked but I...

Curious about the pronunciation of this. I read it as Aim-Loo, but I’d like to be sure. I know you said that the story is a raven who’s turning intoa god. I’m wondering how accurate that description is. Are real animals living alongside pokemon? Or is this just a Murkrow? OH HELL YEA BODY...

Journey Death of Duty Part 7: The Fall of the Pokemon League Death Artemis' talons tore out of my midsection in a spray of blood. I tumbled out of her grip, rolling with the momentum. The world spun around me and I found myself suddenly facing the ground. Janine hit me in the midsection...

I’m back! Merry Blitzmas! Chapter 4 More politics to open the chapter! Delightful! I also really like the cracks in Vortex’s cheery armour starting to show. Yuna definitely is a trouble magnet, what with her being our protagonist and all. Glad Vortex is at least somewhat realistic about things...

Alright! Attempt 2 at pushing myself to actually read this! Prologue I adore the fantasy feel of this. It’s so… idk how to really describe it but I love the vibes this puts off. I know you said it pivots hard to sci-fi, but this style and this genre seems like you’re really comfortable with...

Journey Death of Duty Part 7: The Fall of the Pokemon League War The point of war is not to die for your beliefs. Its to make the other poor bastard die for his. — Ranger Lt. Col. Emmet "Surge" Roth The world flipped end over end as I tumbled through the air. I would have screamed if I...