My favorite character is definitely Alex at the moment- he feels like a really natural father. And I've got a strange feeling that he's going to have a mildly comedic role throughout the story.
I'm glad you like him! He's definitely a fun one to read about, so I hope you enjoy his appearances.
It's definitely really fast-paced at the beginning, so I did end up reading that intro twice, because I had a hard time figuring out what was going on the first time.
Hard to follow, huh? Yeah, it was definitely an explosive opening. Maybe I could look into clarifying the opening a little, though it's definitely hard to judge since you're unfamiliar with PMD. Might be worth me looking into anyway, perhaps in the future.
I'm a little bit confused by how Amia, Alex, and Owen can be a possible family, since none of them are in the same egg group, but maybe that has two do with the fact that it's PMD...
There's actually a simple answer for this one. Owen's adopted!