Pokémon The kalosian journeys

[kingvoid]

Introduction
hi i am a pre-teen who likes pokemon here is my shonen take on pokemon journeys
the main core stuff of the story :
1.Ash is not ten he is eighteen here
2.There is one year for every gen like in kanto he was 10 and in kalos he was 16 showing his growth in alola he was 17 and now he is 18
3.We will meet a king from XYZ
4.Villains will be there but not like your usual giovanni
5.Moves that don't exist will be here
6.Power scaling here is known as bond hertz or pokespirit
7.Domain expansion
8.Ash is more mature here and can take hints of intimacy
Characters
1.Ash
2.Serena
3.Clemont
4.Goh
5.Bonnie
6.Prof cerise (idc about yall saying "the spelling is wrong" i will spell it this way)
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Character descriptions!
Ash : Ash is now 18 its been 2 ye- 2 YEARS! since he went on his journey through kalos he is brave intimate and mature and his battle IQ is stated to be about 200 and his IQ is 130.
Goh : Goh is Ash's companion here he is also 18 and he likes data but not that much of course!
Serena : Serena is ash's companion but more special then Goh , you'll see why later ,she is 18 too , she loves macrons and performing.
Clemont : Clemont is the smartest one in the group his IQ is a staggering 170 even if his machines blow 99.99% of the time his Battle IQ is 110. he is also 18.
Bonnie : Bonnie is Clemont's sister and is the only one in the group who is 9 her IQ is 110 and her Battle IQ is about 70.
Cerise : Is addicted to data and wants to archive Ash's phenomenal power he is stated to be 37 years old. His IQ is about 150 and his battle IQ is 90. and he doesn't have any family now due to a failed experiment that killed them.

 

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Chapter 1: The Obsidian Resonance
The air in the Cerise Laboratory usually smelled of ozone and sterile data, but today, it felt heavy like the atmosphere before a catastrophic storm.
Ash Ketchum, eighteen and standing a head taller than he did a year ago, wasn't looking at a monitor. He was staring at Goh’s Frogadier. The blue Pokémon was practicing its Aerial Ace, but to Ash’s eyes, the movements were... slow. Simplified.
"The form is good, Goh," Ash said, his voice deeper, carrying the weight of the Alolan throne. "But it’s hollow. There’s no Pokespirit behind the strike."
Goh looked up from his Rotom Phone, his eyes bloodshot from a fourteen-hour "Data Grind." "What are you talking about, Ash? The math is perfect. His velocity is top-tier for his level."
Ash didn't blink. He felt a phantom itch in his chest—a literal tugging on his soul that stretched across the ocean, all the way to the Kalosian woods. The Bond Phenomenon wasn't just a move anymore; it was a heartbeat he shared with a King.
"He's hitting the target," Ash whispered, his eyes beginning to shimmer with a faint, obsidian blue light. "But he’s not deleting it."
Across the room, Professor Cerise froze. On his massive wall-sized monitor, a needle labeled [pokespirit] suddenly spiked from a calm 40 bHz to a screaming 850. The cooling fans in the supercomputer began to wail in agony.
"Ash?" Cerise's voice trembled, his 'Data Addiction' kicking in as he scrambled to record the anomaly. "What are you doing? Your molecular density is... it's shifting! GIVE IT TO ME! Give me the readout on that pulse!"
Ash ignored the Professor. He turned toward the window, looking toward the horizon where the Kalos region lay.
"Goh, pack your bags. " Ash shadow-boxed a single, lightning-fast jab into the empty air. The friction caused a miniature sonic boom that shattered a nearby beaker. "We’re going back to the roots. It’s time I showed you what a 100% Sync actually looks like."
In the shadows of the lab, Cerise’s eyes widened. He didn't see a student anymore. He saw a glitch in the universe that he needed to archive.
The Kalosian Journey had officially begun.

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Chapter 2: Freeing Kalos
Ash and Goh finally reach lumiose airport where they are greeted by Clemont and Bonnie
The air felt fresh and alive Ash relived his first time landing in Kalos with Alexa
Ash "Hey Bonnie how have you been?"
Bonnie: "Ash! Clemont says i'll get my first pokemon today!"
Ash: "Woah Bonnie really which one?"
Bonnie: "Ash you know which one its obviously dedenne"
Ash "Oh yea where is it anyways?"
Bonnie "Hmph its sleeping."
Clemont "Bonnie come on let's go"
Ash and the gang go to the Lumiose woods , where Greninja spends his time defending Kalos from team Flare's corrupted vines
The air was dusty and corrupted Ash was very excited to see Greninja again!
Ash suddenly feels a familiar feeling like the Kalos league again
Cerise was just screaming "Ash, this isn't possible your bond hertz is rising above the normal level! GIVE IT TO ME"
Ash ignores Cerise's weird behavior and whispers to Goh "Please act like your range is cutting out he is annoying me"
Goh cuts Cerise video call acting like his range was cutting out
Ash feels the feeling getting stronger he can feel Greninja
Out of nowhere a big vine radiating a energy that other Corrupted vines radiated but this one was one of the biggest he sensed in the forest
This was the Mother Vine this vine is the root of all Corrupted Vines if Ash defeated it the terror the vines caused would end
Goh "Ash i got this Cinderace will beat it to a pulp."
Ash "Goh you already don't need to i can defeat it no prob!"
Goh "*laughing* how are going to defeat that with a pikachu *laughing harder*"
Ash "Oh i won't be using pikachu ... Greninja lets go"
Suddenly Greninja appears from the trees ready to fight
Greninja "Nin-ja!"
Goh "*Laughing even harder* you're gonna beat a grass type with a water type *still laughing*"
Clemont "Don't underestimate Ash even if he has the type disadvantage he can still turn the tides"
Ash "Come on Greninja use Ice Beam!"
Greninja uses a ice beam dealing a little damage not that much but enough to show he has a weakness
Goh brings out Cinderace
Goh "Cinderace use Pyro-Ball!"
A super effective move but the Mother Vine absorbs the kinetic energy from it Goh is shocked and suprised it did nothing!
Ash uses his insane battle IQ to invent a new move
Ash immediately bonds with Greninja and ready to fight
Ash "Greninja use Ice Impact!"
Greninja "Nin-Ja
Goh "Ash that's not even a move!?!?!"
Even if it wasn't a move Ash's sheer B hrtz (bond hertz) was so powerful that he signaled telepathically that "condense a ball of water into your hand and just as you hit the Vine Freeze it into Ice"
Now The Mother Vine was frozen solid with sheer power of Ice Impact
Clemont "Ash you really used your bond with Greninja to improvise a new move! that's Genius!"
Now the finishing blow was required to finish it off!
Ash "Greninja! , use Aerial Ace!"
This shatters the ice and ends The Mother Vine's Corruption
The air was eerie and dark now shifted to a happy and pleasant atmosphere.
Serena was just practicing for her next performance in the Lumiose woods and heard the clash
Serena "Pangoro Follow me!"
Serena rushes to the area where she heard the Impact
She knew greninja was here and knew that she would hear some clashes but she didn't expect one this powerful!
She reached and saw a crater with smoke coming out the dust clears out and she sees ash
Ash "Serena! Long time no see!"
Serena "I always missed you Ash so great to see you again and greninja such a big clash didn't except that"
Ash "Missed you too!:
Greninja "Ninja!"
They head to a hotel to rest.
The End of this chapter

 

[Tango]

Hello again! With you being new and having such wonderfully short chapters, I decided to pop in for some reviews of your fic! I hope you enjoy!

hi i am a young teen who likes pokemon here is my shonen take on pokemon journeys

Oh, I thought you said you are a pre-teen in your intro post? But no worries!

I hid most of my comments behind a spoiler tag so it doesn't take up too much space in your fic. Just click it to expand!

Spoiler: Line by line

the main core stuff of the story :
1.Ash is not ten he is eighteen here

Ash being forever a kid is something that always bugged me. Good choice.

2.There is one year for every gen like in kanto he was 10 and in kalos he was 16 showing his growth in alola he was 17 and now he is 18

Simple and works well. Nice!

3.We will meet a king from XYZ

Seems like a little spoiler but it can also build anticipation, so it still works!

4.Villains will be there but not like your usual giovanni

Hmm! Sounds neat!

5.Moves that don't exist will be here

Sounds cool.

6.Power scaling here is known as bond power or pokespirit

Sometimes it's nice just having the rules of a fic laid out. Makes it easy to understand!

7.Domain expansion

Could this be an inspiration from a certain popular anime??

8.Ash is more mature here and can take hints of intimacy
Characters

Yes PLEASE!! I always hated how the anime never allowed Ash to be in any kind of relationship. They really dropped the ball on that.

1.Ash
2.Serena
3.Clemont
4.Goh
5.Bonnie
6.Prof cerise (idc about yall saying "the spelling is wrong" i will spell it this way)
7.Mew
8.Arceus (jokingly called Arkoos as he will be overshadowed alot)
9.Giovanni
10.Team Rocket

Nice cast of characters here! Sounds promising.

I will uploading this very soon

Always good to see a fellow author excited to post stuff!

Post your feedback

Smart of you to include this line. It helped me confirm that feedback was something you wanted!

But I'm not done. Let's take a look at your chapters!

Chapter 1: The Obsidian Resonance

Oh wow. Now that's a cool name for a chapter! Cool points awarded here for you.

The air in the Cerise Laboratory usually smelled of ozone and sterile data, but today, it felt heavy like the atmosphere before a catastrophic storm.

Ooo! What a tense way to start!

And by the way, I'm impressed how little spelling and grammar errors I'm seeing here and you seem to have a knack for some cool descriptions!

Ash Ketchum, eighteen and standing a head taller than he did a year ago, wasn't looking at a monitor. He was staring at Goh’s Frogadier. The blue Pokémon was practicing its Aerial Ace, but to Ash’s eyes, the movements were... slow. Simplified.

Neat way of communicating Ash's experience in the way that he observes!

"The form is good, Goh," Ash said, his voice deeper, carrying the weight of the Alolan throne. "But it’s hollow. There’s no Pokespirit behind the strike."
Goh looked up from his Rotom Phone, his eyes bloodshot from a fourteen-hour "Data Grind." "What are you talking about, Ash? The math is perfect. His velocity is top-tier for his level."
Ash didn't blink. He felt a phantom itch in his chest—a literal tugging on his soul that stretched across the ocean, all the way to the Kalosian woods. The Bond Phenomenon wasn't just a move anymore; it was a heartbeat he shared with a King.

Seems like you are setting up some interesting plot threads!

"He's hitting the target," Ash whispered, his eyes beginning to shimmer with a faint, obsidian blue light. "But he’s not deleting it."
Across the room, Professor Cerise froze. On his massive wall-sized monitor, a needle labeled [pokespirit] suddenly spiked from a calm 40 bHz to a screaming 850. The cooling fans in the supercomputer began to wail in agony.
"Ash?" Cerise's voice trembled, his 'Data Addiction' kicking in as he scrambled to record the anomaly. "What are you doing? Your molecular density is... it's shifting! GIVE IT TO ME! Give me the readout on that pulse!"

Ooo that sounds significant!

Ash ignored the Professor. He turned toward the window, looking toward the horizon where the Kalos region lay.
"Goh, pack your bags. " Ash shadow-boxed a single, lightning-fast jab into the empty air.

I'm really curious if this is your first fic. Your prose is unexpectedly nice!

Quite a bit of mood and intrigue you set up here!

The friction caused a miniature sonic boom that shattered a nearby beaker. "We’re going back to the roots. It’s time I showed you what a 100% Sync actually looks like."
In the shadows of the lab, Cerise’s eyes widened. He didn't see a student anymore. He saw a glitch in the universe that he needed to archive.
The Kalosian Journey had officially begun.

Ok ok!! Yeah! Nice way to start a fic!

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The small chapters make it so easy for people to pop in to give you reviews. Any ideas on how long you plan to make your fic?

I've got a fic at the bottom of my post here with a link too if your are curious.

Have a great day! 😉

 

[kingvoid]

Chapter 3: Sweet Romance
Lumiose City at night was a sea of neon, but the Macaron shop was a quiet sanctuary of warm light and the smell of toasted sugar. Ash, Serena, Clemont, and Goh sat at a circular booth.
Goh was staring intensely at his Rotom Phone. "Ash, I’m still trying to process that 'Ice Impact.' My sensors recorded a localized temperature drop of absolute zero for exactly 0.01 seconds. That shouldn't be physically possible for a Greninja......"
Ash leaned back, looking much more relaxed than he did in the woods. "The data doesn't matter, Goh. It’s about the Pokespirit. When you stop looking at the data, you start seeing the soul."
Serena laughed, placing a tray of colorful macarons on the table. "You’ve definitely grown up, Ash. You sound like a philosopher now instead of just a kid who wants to battle."
"Two years and a throne in Alola will do that to you," Ash said, his voice dropping an octave. He looked directly at Serena, not missing the way she blushed.
Bonnie giggled from the next table over. "Clemont, look! Ash is actually looking at her! He’s not even eating his macaron yet!"
Clemont adjusted his glasses, looking nervous. "Bonnie, shush! Let them have their moment."
As they ate, the conversation flowed easily, but Ash could feel the romantic energy between him and Serena humming it wasn't like b-hrtz it was love at first sight serena resonated golden
"Serena," Ash said suddenly, standing up. "Let's walk. Just us."
Goh looked up, confused. "But we haven't finished the Data Sync on the..."
Clemont grabbed Goh’s collar and pulled him back down. "The data can wait, Goh. Trust me."
Ash and Serena walked out onto the balcony of the shop, overlooking the Prism Tower. The wind caught Serena's hair, and for a moment, the 'King of Alola' felt like just a boy again but a boy who finally knew what he wanted.
"Ash?" Serena whispered. "You’ve changed so much. You're... stronger. But you feel different."
"I spent a long time chasing the horizon, Serena," Ash said, stepping closer. "I realized that being a Master isn't just about winning. It's about who you want to share the world with when the battle is over."
He didn't wait for her to drop a hint. He didn't wait for a sign.
Ash reached out, gently cupping her face, and pulled her into a firm, meaningful kiss.
The air around them didn't explode with ice or shadow. Instead, the Prism Tower behind them flickered with a soft, celebratory gold. For the first time in years, the "Obsidian" light in Ash's eyes softened into something human.
Serena pulled back, breathless, a radiant smile on her face. "Took you long enough, Ash Ketchum."
Ash smirked, the 'King's' confidence returning. "I had a lot of training to do. But I think I finally got the timing right."
RIP DENSE ASH
The End of Chapter 3

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Chapter 4 :Dark origins
Where Lysandre's cafe used to be
a eerie energy surrounded the area. atmosphere was very scary
two people
Jerry and Adrie
Two ex-team flare members
trying to bring back Lysandre....
They tried a ritual to bring him back from the zygarde seal
they made a circle with with white chalk and put a piece of debris from the Body of Rocky Zygarde in the middle
They put the debris on the fire the chalk disappears
In the middle stands a dark figure but not Lysandre
Mysterious man says excitely "Oh finally i'm back!"
Jerry says in fear "W-w-w-w-who are y-y-you"
Mysterious man says mysteriously "You won't live to know"
He immediately brings out his houndoom and knocks them out
Mysterious man said maniacly "The world shall know the name of AZ"
Back to Ash and Serena
Serena is shocked that Ash actually got her hints.
Ash said calmly "Serena you feel that i just felt 2 people getting erased"
Serena said confused "Ash what are you talking about?"
Ash yelled "Goh , Clemont . Bonnie let's go!"
Ash and the gang rush to the area and they Jerry and Adrie lying on the floor
Ash said quickly "Serena check their pulse"
Serena checks their pulse and finds them alive but still not awake
Serena "They're alive!"
Ash says "Rush them to the pokemon center!"
To be continued

 

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Chapter 5 : Team Flare again?
As they rush Jerry and Adrie to the pokemon center
They can see a man mysterious figure to running to geosenge
Ash "We'll check that out later"
they put Jerry and Adrie outside the poke center
As they run
Clemont "No worries Ash i have a bond hertz measurer we can measure his power with the power of science!"
Ash "Hehe Clemont you and your science we might need it but it can't explode ok..."
They finally reach Geosenge
Clemont "Ash the b-hrtz meter it growing and it's not yours"
Goh "Oh my god is that the ancient king who made the ultimate weapon?"
Clemont "You mean AZ?"
Goh "Yea!"
AZ spots them from the distance
AZ thinks "Ah great some kids interfering with my plans"
AZ runs towards them with houndoom
AZ said "Pokedomain open Ancient Ruin"
Ash confused he said "Hey who are you?"
AZ said "Your b-hrtz is powerful but not enough to stop your demise"
Ash said calmly "So your new villain"
Goh "He feels stronger than just our normal team rocket"
The air now feels heavier in Geosenge Ash can feel the pokemon crying because of the Kalos war
Ash gets ready to pull out Greninja
Ash "Go Greninja!" "With our bond and power transform!"
Goh thinks "That's a cool phrase to use the bond phenomenon"
Greninja transforms into a form similar to the one from the Kalos league but stronger faster and sharper
Ash telepathically to greninja "Alright greninja do something same as Ice Impact but expand the water instead of freezing it"
Ash yelled "Greninja use Water Impact!"
Greninja said "Nin-ja!"
Goh said suprised "Ash , how did you make another move"
Ash said with excitement "Our bond is stronger than ever!"
Ash swiftly creates a distraction for him and the gang to escape
Ash "Guys let's go quick before he tries to end us again"
At the pokemon center
Goh "Ash can you explain to me how the f#ck did you make a new move?"
Ash "Its really simple Goh , mine and Greninja's bond is so power that we telepathically communicate how to use the move and it looks cool!"
Goh "Ash what the fu##. How can you telepathically talk your pokemon!?!?!?"
Ash "Isn't it simple Goh? Our bond hertz is off the charts"
Goh "I don't know how did you train that"
Serena "Its really simpe Goh i don't know how you can't understand it" "Many people understand but can't implement"
Ash "Ata girl"
Clemont "We should go to pallet town before AZ comes to make our "demise" again"
Ash "Alright let me take charizard here with the pokeball transfer system"
Charizard "Char Char"
Ash "Guys sit on Charizard's back we are Flying to kanto"
Bonnie "Wooho flying!"
After soaring in the skies to kanto they reach pallet town and crash at Ash's mom's house
Ash "phew... we escaped that guy"
Delia "Sleep tight kids , have fun on your adventures!"
Delia talks in private with ash
Delia said "That lip you kissed that girl huh"
Ash replied while blushing "I did"
Delia to Ash in private "You like her huh?"
Ash to Delia while still blushing "Yea Mom i really do!"
Delia Thinks "Finally my son isn't dense"
RIP DENSE ASH 💀
End of Chapter 5

 

[kingvoid]

The Kalosian Journeys: Power Scale & Mechanics
The bHz (Bond Hertz) Scale:

• 0 - 50 bHz (Civilian/Rookie): Standard connection. Most trainers stay here.
• 50 - 200 bHz (Ace Trainer): Pokemon starts to predict the trainer's thoughts. Gym Leader territory.
• 200 - 500 bHz (Elite Level): The "Resonance" starts. Physical air pressure begins to change.
• 500 - 800 bHz (Champion/King): "Obsidian Blue" territory. The trainer and Pokemon share a single soul. Can create new moves like Water Impact.
• 1000+ bHz (The Glitch): Breaking the laws of physics. Molecular density shifts. Only Ash (Alolan Throne) and Ancient threats like AZ have been seen touching this.

Techniques:

• Bond Phenomenon: A 100% Sync that physically transforms the Pokemon.
• Telepathic Combat: Ash's ability to "program" moves mid-fight via bHz pulses.
• Pokedomain (Domain Expansion):A high-level technique where a trainer uses their Pokespirit to overwrite reality.
  • Example: AZ’s "Ancient Ruin" traps the opponent in a space where his Houndoom's power is absolute.

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Chapter 6: Kantonian training!
The morning sun in Pallet Town didn't just rise it ignited the dew-covered fields of the Oak Laboratory. Ash stood at the fence, the wind tugging at his jacket, looking less like a traveling trainer and more like a young general reviewing his troops.
Oak "Oh Ash so great to see you oh and who's that pokemon"
Ash "Prof meet greninja"
Oak "And when did you meet him?"
Ash "2 years ago remember the froakie i told you about?" Oak "Yeah" Ash "This is him right here" Oak "Fascinating indeed"
Greninja "Nin-ja (means: Ash can i meet up my buddies? dap them up a bit?) Ash "Sure why not its been 2 years"
Greninja daps the whole Kalos team up finally meeting after 2 years Ash yelled , excited "Alright guys lets start some training"
The air now smelled fresh and powerful everyone training to become stronger
Greninja is training with the whole squad with Charizard trying increase his b-hrtz from 150 to 500 trying to reach greninja's level of bonding with ash Ash "Charizard you're becoming weaker you need some training to increase your b-hrtz"
Greninja is guiding Charizard telling "feel Ash's power connect feel the care and love he feels for you connect with him as you are one become the flame not Charizard and ash"
Charizard does that and finally transforms into his bond state intially it looks a mega charizard x just a copy of a mega evolution his bhz now 400
Greninja "Become unique not a copy of a Gimmick" "You are Ash and Ash is you" "Push yourself to greater limits"
Charizard powers up even more Prof oak analyzing him with monitors there
Charizard surrounded by lab equipment now shows his skin a black matte and crystalization of flames while keeping a blue flame on his tail he had now become crystalized red rivaling obsidian blue. In the basement of Cerise labs Prof cerise spots a mega charizard x jump to bond phenomenon Cerise knew this was one of ash's pokemon and his data addiction kicked he called ash and said "GIVE IT TO ME THAT CHARIZARD GIVE IT TO ME" Ash immediately cuts the phone and knows something is up with professor to be acting so weird and the air gets heavier
TO BE CONTIUNED
The end of chapter 6

 

[kingvoid]

so yall before the 7th chapter which is major game changer for ash here is ash's team

1. Pikachu: [Elec/Steel/Fight] — The Glitch Anchor.
2. Charizard: [Fire/Fly/Drag] — The Obsidian General.
3. Greninja: [Water/Dark/Ice] — The "Awakened" Shinobi.
4. Donphan: [Ground/Steel/Rock] — The "Cannonbolt" Juggernaut.
5. Sceptile: [Grass/Ghost/Poison] — The "Rotting Phantom."
6. Heracross: [Bug/Fairy/Crystal] — The "Prismatic Destroyer."

these also have typings the whole team has triple typing to symbolise how op they are their nicknames
I also added a custom typing for heracross i couldnt get him a normal one cause i hated all of them for heracross and i don't want type overlappings here and i built this team to help ash beat AZ and also cerise's data addiction

 

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Chapter 7 : Pokeheros unite! (teaser)
Ash's pokemon inspired by Greninja's motivation transform just as ash puts them in their pokeballs he opens all of them to find 4 special heros emerged Donphan Sceptile Heracross and Of course Pikachu all with new forms ready to rumble
Donphan emerges with a Matte Black Obsidian shell, immediately curling into his wrecking ball form and vibrating the lab's foundation.
Sceptile appears as a phantom of the night with leaf blades now a green obsidian shows off by using his leaf blade to wreck a tree

 

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Chapter 7 : Pokeheros unite!
Ash's pokemon inspired by Greninja's motivation transform just as ash puts them in their pokeballs he opens all of them to find 4 special heros emerged Donphan Sceptile Heracross and Of course Pikachu all with new forms ready to rumble
Donphan emerges with a Matte Black Obsidian shell, immediately curling into his wrecking ball form and vibrating the lab's foundation.
Sceptile appears as a phantom of the night with leaf blades now a green obsidian shows off by using his leaf blade to wreck a tree
Pikachu’s yellow fur turns a Deep Matte Yellow, but his iconic red cheeks now glow with a Glowing Red electrical discharge. Instead of soft fur, his back and tail have developed a Steel plating that looks like samurai armour.
Pikachu doesn't use Thunderbolt. He stands on two legs, his paws coated in metallic blue energy. He punches the air, and the Steel and Electric type friction creates a vacuum that sucks the oxygen out of the room.
Heracross’s blue shell has shattered and reformed into a Transparent Shining Crystal You can see his "Pokespirit" pulsing inside his chest like a heartbeat. His massive horn is now a Diamond Blade that refracts light into a thousand deadly rainbows and as sharp as or even sharper than the sharpness ability of pokemon.
He spreads his wings made of obsidian as he beats them a fairy energy radiates creates a slice with his horn creating a sonic boom.
Oak has seen a lot of Legendaries, but seeing a whole team reach "Glitch" status simultaneously is terrifying for him. He's likely realizing that Ash is the only thing standing between the world and AZ.
Now Ash and Greninja know the fundementals to a pokedomain they tried to open one BANG!
a barrier with only Ash and the gang and the evolved pokemon appeared Ash could make his domain how ever he wanted
he said Coldly "Its time Cerise knows a end to his addiction permanently"
Meanwhile in Cerise's basement
Cerise "YES ASH YOU DID IT YOUR POWER IS READY TO BE ARCHIVED *Villainous laugh*" he immediately calls ash "ASHY BOY YOU ARE READY TO - " Ash cuts the call and realises "Professor Cerise is way too insane to save him"
He immediately told the gang except Bonnie"Guys this is a problem , we might have to cerise permanently to sleep......."
TO BE CONTIUNED
The end of this chapter

 

[kingvoid]

Chapter 8 :- Dark justice
The air is dark and cold. As Ash and the gang walk Serena says "Ash i think you're right professor cerise is out of control he even dared to call you 'ASHY BOY' he isn't the cerise you know he is too polite not a archiver..." Goh "SERENA! Are you out of you're mind? professor cerise would never" said out in a fit of rage
Serena "Goh i literally heard him say that, you can't prove that isn't he is mentally insane *Serena said angrily*.I'm not out of my mind you're too emotionally attached to him... let it go "Serena Said coldly. As the air responds to the bhz around the gang
Clemont says coldly as well "Goh she's right Cerise has gone mad over data you can't prove otherwise... don't fight the truth Goh you're only making it worse... i delibrately didn't bring Bonnie ,shes too light hearted for this, she isn't ready for this yet."
Goh thinks "Damn i can't believe professor Cerise of all people really has gone mad..."
Ash says coldly "Guys stand back i'll go handle this"
Ash t-poses and says "POKEDOMAIN OPEN NINJA'S ULTIMATE VOID!!".
Ash moves into the lab. The air is cold and dark the smell was sterile data was worse than ever even Ash couldn't stand it anymore , he thinks "its about time he falls" Professor Cerise announces crazily on the speakers "ASHY BOY! YOU FINALLY CAME READY FOR EXTRAC-"Ash immediately orders pikachu to absorb all the power in the house and Prof. Cerise drops in his artificial pokemon Glitchie drops down in front of ash and whispers to him self "OH BOY HE IS READY FOR EXTRACTION!. Prof Cerise "Pokedomain open :Infinite Archives". immediately a domain clash happens ash overpowers Cerise engulfing the lab in a obsidian void now glitchie was only at 5% Ash didn't show mercy he knew Prof Cerise did it to trap him he orders pikachu coldly "Absorb its power too"
All of a sudden Goh bursts in and says coldy as well "Ash i realized Cerise isn't worth trying to save i'll handle him"
he sends out Cinderace and moves into the basement where Cerise stands cowering in fear infront of Goh Professor Cerise said in fear "G-G-Goh d-d-d-dont do this to your mentor" Goh says coldly "Professor you're too insane i won't let you roam free... Cinderace Charge a pyro-ball and send to towards pipsqueak Cerise I'll watch as in a proud professor addicted to data likes a pyro-ball" Cinderace says sadly "Ace..."
Ending the terror of "Archiver Cerise" Goh sheds a tear as his mentor meets his demise
The gang now talk about Cerise untill they get back to pallet town
Bonnie was still asleep Clemont told her "Bonnie this mission's to dangerous for you go to sleep i'll wake you up when we come back"
Ash cries to his mom "I had to make him sleep for eternity..." Delia feels Ash's guilt and knew he did what he what to she says "Sweetie we make choices they can be bad or good Cerise wasn't human he was too insane to handle i respect your decision son... don't carry the guilt" in ash's eyes he sees Delia as not just a mother but the ultimate mentor to him those words were enough for him to stop crying Clemont wakes Bonnie up we're back home Bonnie. Bonnie said excitely "So what happened to Cerise?" Clemont "Well Bonnie Ash knocked Cerise out and the
poke-police put him in the most defended jail ever he could never escape" Everyone nods Bonnie was to innocent to traumatize at such a young age. Clemont hides the truth of Goh's and Ash's Act he cared for his sister everyone agrees that AZ is next on the list
Ash and the gang decide to go back to lumiose to attack AZ
They hop on Charizard's back and fly majestically to Lumiose
TO BE CONTIUNED
The end of the dark chapter 8

 

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Chapter 8.5 : Stabilizer Serena
The atmosphere was dark the gang were sleeping in 2 hotel rooms
While Clemont , Bonnie and Goh were in the first room. Bonnie was sleeping Goh was thinking about what he did to Cerise, haunted not able to sleep While Clemont thinks about how he lied to Bonnie he knew he protected her but at the cost of his honesty
in the upstairs room Serena and Ash couldn't sleep they decided to go to the terrace to feel the atmosphere was changing. the obsidian squad was standing guard making sure AZ couldn't be found Ash says to Serena "10 years of pining me did pay off eh Serena?"
Serena says "Well it really did" as she leans into a kiss on the cheek. Ash says "You'll never change and i like that" The air now feels light and tense as ash said that Serena blushed when she heard that Ash continues "A decade that paid off for you and you never left trying to chase me it felt like nothing to me in our journey through kalos until the airport i still remember that to this day" Serena replies "That was just your reward , i was shocked all the way you didn't fall for me. I had to give a shock y'know?" Now Ash and Serena make out the air wasn't just tense it was heavy it was... romantic...While the downstairs room the air felt dark and toxic. the sounds the made hummed and felt shocking to Serena. Ash pulls back from Serena's face realizing Serena wasn't just a girlfriend she was a stabilizer to Ash's Obsidian resonance and dives right back in Serena thought "Finally after 3 kisses" Then go back to the room sleeping peacefully
RIP DENSE ASH
TO BE CONTINUED
The end of the tense but romantic chapter 8.5

 

[kingvoid]

Hello again! With you being new and having such wonderfully short chapters, I decided to pop in for some reviews of your fic! I hope you enjoy!


Oh, I thought you said you are a pre-teen in your intro post? But no worries!

I hid most of my comments behind a spoiler tag so it doesn't take up too much space in your fic. Just click it to expand!

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Ash being forever a kid is something that always bugged me. Good choice.


Simple and works well. Nice!


Seems like a little spoiler but it can also build anticipation, so it still works!


Hmm! Sounds neat!


Sounds cool.


Sometimes it's nice just having the rules of a fic laid out. Makes it easy to understand!


Could this be an inspiration from a certain popular anime??


Yes PLEASE!! I always hated how the anime never allowed Ash to be in any kind of relationship. They really dropped the ball on that.


Nice cast of characters here! Sounds promising.


Always good to see a fellow author excited to post stuff!


Smart of you to include this line. It helped me confirm that feedback was something you wanted!

But I'm not done. Let's take a look at your chapters!


Oh wow. Now that's a cool name for a chapter! Cool points awarded here for you.


Ooo! What a tense way to start!

And by the way, I'm impressed how little spelling and grammar errors I'm seeing here and you seem to have a knack for some cool descriptions!


Neat way of communicating Ash's experience in the way that he observes!


Seems like you are setting up some interesting plot threads!


Ooo that sounds significant!


I'm really curious if this is your first fic. Your prose is unexpectedly nice!

Quite a bit of mood and intrigue you set up here!


Ok ok!! Yeah! Nice way to start a fic!


The small chapters make it so easy for people to pop in to give you reviews. Any ideas on how long you plan to make your fic?

I've got a fic at the bottom of my post here with a link too if your are curious.

Have a great day! 😉

woah thank you for your review here ill also put a spoiler tag open it to see your answers
and i'll be writing casually here i only write formally so my chapters look apealing

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first of the intro thread was after i thought writing young teen was better idea but i have changed it
and also the cast of characters uh yea i don't think those are relevant anymore
and yes it is my first fic i couldn't use images much (my drawing is horrible) i decided to go for a more prose approach here
i really think you will like the idea i've taken with the chapters a bit
and the chapters we are making it longer then ever
if you read the chapters and have any more questions don't be shy to ask
Edit: Oop i kinda forgot to change the character cast in the intro its now relevant as some characters were a bit too much to put in now and i already kinda revealed the major and minor villain so the edited the cast is relevant but these are ash and the gang not the whole characters

 

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Chapter 9 :The bite of Ash?
While Ash and Serena were doing their romance AZ was working on the ultimate weapon ready to wipe the world.
AZ said maniacally"YES YES FINALLY ITS STABLE! [insert laughing here] THOSE KIDS WON'T KNOW WHAT'S FOR THEM [insert heavier laughing]"
its morning
[Insert chicken cockadoodledooo]
well AZ looks like he is hyped on the weapon there he doesn't know ash reformed his team.
Back to Lumiose
Goh observes Ash's eyes and sees a golden spark (this basically symbolizes Serena stabilized Ash)
Goh thinks "Ash really got some good sleep while i'm still being haunted curse you professor Cerise"
The obsidian guardians see AZ's weapon fired!?!?!?!??!
Ash feels a sudden rise of bhz in Geosenge the town members flee on hearing the sirens
Ash says to everyone "EVERYONE GET READY QUICK AZ IS NOT PLAYING GAMES".
Ash and the gang get ready and fly over to Geosenge to see panic among civillains. Ash commands "CHARIZARD LAND , CLEMONT SERENA HELP THE CITIZENS GOH YOU'RE WITH ME LET'S MOVE"
Ash isn't playing games as well Serena and Clemont guide the citizens to the closest place of safety this wasn't just the normal corruption incident. AZ has returned but way more powerful
as they charge in into the ultimate weapon's room Ash sees AZ laughing and talking while looking at the surveillance "Hah just look at them running panicking oh its so funny [Insert maniac laughing here]"
Ash yells "AZ I WON'T LET YOU TERRORIZE THESE INNOCENT CITIZENS!"
Goh standing just by the side of just looking traumatized still feeling guilty because of Cerise just stands there
AZ says happily "Oh just look at your little sidekick traumatized from the blast [More laughing]"
Goh says coldy "It isn't because of the blast AZ it's something way darker"
Just by saying this Goh's bhz rises
Ash says coldly "Goh this time i'll do it with you"
Ash's obsidian heart unlocks due to years of light-hearted journeys it finally gets some show time due to the terror of AZ.
He shows a sinister smile something Goh has never seen
Goh says "Ash what happened to you?"
Ash replies laughing sinisterly "Goh i've went on light-hearted journeys for 8 years the terror of AZ has cracked a shell that that's darker than Cerise sleeping. AZ you're not facing a light hearted guy you're facing a true monster , you aren't just sleeping today". Ash continues "[Insert sinister laughing here] AZ!, prepare to meet your demise "
TO BE CONTINUED
End of the foreshadowing chapter 9

 

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Chapter 10 :- Ash? (teaser)
AZ says manically "Ah sh#t here we go again" he continues "Let's dance kids. Go houndoom!"
Houndoom comes out and AZ and Ash pull both in sync "Pokedomain open:" "Ancient Ruin!" "Crystal Void!" As Ash sends out battle bonded heracross the air got heavier just like before in Ancient Ruin but Ash's Crystal void allowed him to push forward this wasn't just a domain clash Crystal void's crystals weren't just staying still they were piercing Ancient Ruin's dust and AZ's pokemon
eventually AZ overpowers Ash but Ash quickly disables AZ's domain this severely weakens AZ's bhz
(Authors note :- Ash rocked AZ shocked)
Ash telepathically says to Heracross "Heracross use moon blast when i say use sun blast but this time use the power of the sun Let's see how AZ likes the heat of a Sun on Houndoom" Ash also telepathically said to Goh now Goh wasn't just saying what the #### he now understood and will be implementing Goh thinks "Damn Ash really does those moves like that looks like i got a trick up my sleeve"
Goh yells "Go Cinderace" through ash's greninja's word he remembered i don't need a fancy gimmick mine and my pokemon's bond is enough
he ignited a spark in Cinderace releases the guilt in Cinderace and now releases it with dark flames that look like smoke emitting from his body
Teaser ends here
Authors note :- I released this as a teaser to build hype
chapter 10 will be crazy trust

 

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Chapter 10 :- Ash?
AZ says manically "Ah shi# here we go again" he continues "Let's dance kids. Go Houndoom!"
Houndoom comes out and AZ and Ash pull both in sync "Pokedomain open:" "Ancient Ruin!" "Crystal Void!" As Ash sends out battle bonded heracross the air got heavier just like before in Ancient Ruin but Ash's Crystal void allowed him to push forward this wasn't just a domain clash Crystal void's crystals weren't just staying still they were piercing Ancient Ruin's dust and AZ's pokemon
eventually AZ overpowers Ash but Ash quickly disables his domain this severely weakens AZ's bhz
(Authors note :- Ash rocked AZ shocked)
Ash telepathically says to heracross and goh "Heracross use moon blast when i say use sun blast but this time use the power of the sun Let's see how AZ likes the heat of a Sun on Houndoom" Ash also telepathically said to Goh now Goh wasn't just saying what the #### he now understood and will be implementing Goh thinks "Damn Ash really does those moves like that looks like i got a trick up my sleeve"
Goh yells "Go Cinderace" through ash's greninja's word he remembered i don't need a fancy gimmick mine and my pokemon's bond is enough
he ignited a spark in Cinderace releases the guilt in Cinderace and know releases it with dark flames that look like smoke emitting from his body
now Serena and Clemont Appear behind they see Goh's Cinderace ready for battle with a new look they only see sneakily
Ash yells "Let's go Heracross use Sun-Blast!" Heracross charges a moon blast but with the power of the sun almost knocking Houndoom out
Finally Goh telepathically to Cinderace "Cinderace don't carry the guilt form it into a weapon when i say use dark pyro ball power all your guilt into a normal pyro-ball" Goh yells "Let's go Cinderace finish him off with a Dark pyro-ball!" As Cinderace powers his guilt into a pyro-ball it turns dark as he fires it is a dark fire type move but eliminates Houndoom.AZ sends out eternal flower floette Ash says "AZ you're not getting away with this" As he switches into Charizard he yells "Charizard with your and my bond TRANSFORM!" and then charizard transforms
he is ready to beat eternal flower floette he doesn't care about mercy he was linked with ash's heart and knew AZ wasn't going to either...
Floette tries to use light of ruin but Ash quickly says telepathically "Charizard use your fire power to create a shield when i say use flame protection" Floette charges and just before it hits ash and goh. Ash says "Charizard use fire protection!" Charizard blocks light of ruin.
AZ staggered back, his eyes wide. "Impossible... no shield can hold against the Light! What have you done to that Pokémon?!"
Ash stepped through the smoke, his silhouette glowing with a faint, dark aura. "It's not about the move, AZ. It's about the heart behind it. You’re fighting for a world that died three thousand years ago. We’re fighting for the one that lives today."
Ash didn't even look at Floette. He pointed a single, steady finger past the legendary Pokémon, straight at the pulsing core of the Ultimate Weapon.
"Charizard! Ignore the Floette. Use Flamethrower on the Ultimate Weapon! CRACK THE CORE!"
Charizard didn't hesitate. He ignored the Light of Ruin, ignored the Floette, and unleashed a torrent of blue-black flames directly into the machine's heart. The energy of the 3,000-year-old weapon groaned, its internal systems screaming as the Crystalized Red heat melted its ancient circuits.
"NO!" AZ screamed, reaching out as the machine began to fracture.
But it was too late. The "Bite of Ash" had landed. As the Ultimate Weapon began to collapse in a shower of sparks and melting iron, Ash turned his back on the explosion, his eyes finally beginning to soften back into their brown state as the Crystalized energy receded.
Without another word, AZ recalled his Floette and threw a smoke-bomb laced with distorted Pokespirit. By the time the black mist cleared, he was gone, retreating into the shadows of the Kalosian underground.
Goh deactivated his connection to Cinderace, falling to his knees as the "Dark Pyro-Ball" energy finally receded. He was shaking, the guilt of Cerise and the rush of the fight finally hitting him at once. "He... he ran, Ash. We actually broke him."
Clemont’s scanner beeped a steady, rhythmic green. "The bHz levels are stabilizing... Ash, you're back to normal! The resonance is holding at a perfect 120. You're... you're really back!"
Serena didn't wait for the data. She reached out, her fingers brushing against Ash’s cheek as she searched his eyes. The obsidian void was gone, replaced by the warm, brown depth she had known since they were kids.
Ash let out a soft, non-crazy laugh, catching her hand and holding it firmly. "Serena... he was just an illusion. I keep this side of myself locked only for the worst situations, but I promise you, I am always in control. I'm not the monster AZ wanted me to be."
Goh stood up slowly, wiping the soot from his forehead. He looked at Cinderace, who was no longer emitting dark smoke but was leaning against him for support. "You had us worried there, Ash. For a second, when you were smiling like that... I thought we were losing you to the same madness that took Cerise."
Ash’s expression turned serious, his voice dropping into that deeper, mature tone that carried the weight of the Alolan throne. "Cerise let the data consume him. AZ let the past consume him. But I realized something today. I realized that this region doesn't belong to the past, and it doesn't belong to the machines. It belongs to us. To the people who actually live and breathe in it today."
"AZ ran," Ash continued, his gaze shifting to the shadows where the smoke-bomb had detonated. "He saw that 3,000 years of history couldn't stand against the bond we have right now. He’s out there somewhere in the underground, but he knows he isn't a King anymore. He’s just a fugitive."
Ash pulled Serena closer, his "Golden Stabilizer" energy finally bringing his heart back to a peaceful rhythm. "Let's get out of here. We’ve had enough dark domains for one day."
They go home and sleep until they are taken in there sleep and in the lumiose national corps they were sleeping until they woke up
TO BE CONTIUNED
End of the terrifying chapter 10

 

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Chapter 10.5: The League's Decree (teaser)
The High Council chamber of the Kalos League was a tomb of cold marble and suppressed power. The air was thick with the scent of 120 bHz dampeners—heavy lead plating designed to keep "Glitches" from tearing the room apart.
Ash, Serena, Goh, and Clemont sat at a long stone table, they had just woke up . Across from them sat the Elite Four and Champion Diantha, their faces masks of grief and political exhaustion. To the side, two empty chairs draped in black cloth stood as a silent, agonizing reminder: Meyer and Bonnie were gone.
"Let’s address the elephant in the room," Diantha began, her voice a cold, sharp blade. "Professor Cerise is dead. His laboratory is a crater. And two of our own a Gym Leader’s family were vaporized when the Ultimate Weapon discharged. The charge brought against you was murder, Ash and Goh. Murder of a Professor, and the catastrophic negligence that led to the deaths of your own friends."
The doors at the back of the hall slammed open with a sound like a thunderclap. Champion Lance stepped into the light, his dragon-scaled cape whipping behind him. He didn't wait for an invite. He marched to the table and stared down the Council with eyes that mirrored Ash's intensity.
"I’ve reviewed the black-box data from the Cerise Lab," Lance barked, his voice a draconic bass that rattled the dampeners. "Cerise wasn't a Professor at the end; he was a cancer with a PhD. He was harvesting bHz signatures from his own staff. He was too insane to begin with. As for the charge? I say good riddance."

 

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Chapter 10.5: The League's Decree
The High Council chamber of the Kalos League was a tomb of cold marble and suppressed power. The air was thick with the scent of 120 bHz dampeners heavy lead plating designed to keep "Glitches" from tearing the room apart.
Ash, Serena, Goh, and Clemont sat at a long stone table, they had just woke up. Across from them sat the Elite Four and Champion Diantha, their faces masks of grief and political exhaustion. To the side, two empty chairs draped in black cloth stood as a silent, agonizing reminder: Meyer and Bonnie were gone.
"Let’s address the elephant in the room," Diantha began, her voice a cold, sharp blade. "Professor Cerise is dead. His laboratory is a crater. And two of our own a Gym Leader’s family were vaporized when the Ultimate Weapon discharged. The charge brought against you was murder, Ash and Goh. Murder of a Professor, and the catastrophic negligence that led to the deaths of your own friends."
The doors at the back of the hall slammed open with a sound like a thunderclap. Champion Lance stepped into the light, his dragon-scaled cape whipping behind him. He didn't wait for an invite. He marched to the table and stared down the Council with eyes that mirrored Ash's intensity.
"I’ve reviewed the black-box data from the Cerise Lab," Lance barked, his voice a draconic bass that rattled the dampeners. "Cerise wasn't a Professor at the end; he was a cancer with a PhD. He was harvesting bHz signatures from his own staff. He was too insane to begin with. As for the charge? I say good riddance."
The room went dead silent. The "Murder" charge was dismissed with a single sentence from the Dragon Master.
"The League has reached a verdict," Diantha said, leaning back as she looked at the teenagers who now looked like war veterans. "Geosenge is in ruins, but the 'Ultimate weapon' didn't take the whole region because you cracked the core. We aren't stripping your licenses. Instead, we are designating you as the first authorized Vigilante Unit in history The Obsidian Heroes. You have full jurisdictional immunity... and the blood of the innocent on your hands to remind you why."
Ash didn't smile. He didn't thank them. His eyes were a steady, matte brown, but the air around him still distorted with a 850 bHz hum.
"I was too busy battling AZ to see them running toward the light," Ash said, his voice deep and final. "I was locked in a 15,000 bHz clash with AZ. I did my job. Now, I’m going to finish it."
Suddenly, Clemont stood up. He wasn't the nervous "Science Bro" anymore. His glasses reflected the dim light, hiding his hollow eyes, and his hands were steady as he reached for the central console.
"Diantha," Clemont said, his voice cold and vibrating with a new, dark resonance. "I don't want a medal. And I don't want your sympathy. I want every restricted file in the National League archives. Every bHz signature, every Team Flare remnant, every shadow AZ has stepped in for 3,000 years."
Diantha hesitated. "Clemont, those are 'Black Files-"
"I'm not stopping until we take payback," Clemont interrupted, his voice cutting through her like a blade. "My sister didn't die for a 'Not Guilty' verdict. She died because we were blind. I’m going to map every vein of corruption in this world, and then Ash and Goh are going to cauterize them."
Lance pulled an encrypted drive from his belt and slid it across the stone table toward Clemont. "The files are yours. But be careful. When you stare into the Abyss... sometimes the Abyss stares back."
Ash stood up, the Obsidian Resonance flaring for a split second, blowing the heavy oak doors open without him even touching them.
"Give us the files," Ash commanded, the King’s authority final. "The League failed Bonnie and Meyer. We won't. It's time the shadows learned that the 'Heroes' have arrived."

"The League failed them. We won't. This is the official start of the Obsidian Heroes arc. Payback isn't just a move it's a decree. #Anomaly246 #RIPBonnie #ObsidianHeroes"

TO BE CONTINUED
The end of chapter 10.5