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Pokémon Time Enough (Bingo fic, SV spoilers)

Time Enough

Blackjack Gabbiani

Merely a collector
Pronouns
Them
Partners
  1. shaymin
  2. dusknoir
The last Sada had seen of her fiancé was slamming the door in his face.

She couldn't even remember what they had been fighting about.

She'd headed to Zero Lab out of spite, hoping the beauty of science and hard work would clear her mind, but something had gone wrong. Something she could never fully understand. But when Sada had come to, the machine lay dormant. The lab above was in ruins, seeming to have had no human presence in eons.

And perhaps it was scientifically inaccurate to use that word, but "eons" was exactly how long it felt.

The time machine had worked. Turo would be overjoyed.

Would have been overjoyed, she realized, when it dawned on her that her fiancé was long gone.

Even knowing that, even with the full scope of time that had vanished in the blink of an eye, it took her until seeing the fallen cliff where the lighthouse had once been to realize that her newborn son was long gone as well. Arven had been his name, and she had barely gotten to hold him.

They would have lived long lives, she told herself. She hoped they were happy ones.



Though she couldn't fix the time machine, she could monitor it. The vast future was hers to explore, and though it wasn't the era she had studied, preferring to focus on the distant past, she couldn't deny that it was still fascinating. Now and then she would make her way back to Zero Lab, slowly fixing it up through the years. And, beyond even her advanced understanding, sometimes the machine would briefly clip to life, and a nearby pokémon would disappear. At all other times, it seemed to be entirely depowered. Some force in another era had to be manipulating it. It was the closest she came to a working theory.

It had been nearly seventeen years since Sada had been flung carelessly through time. The machine never remained active for more than a moment.

Until one day, where it roared up and did not stop.

The monitor Sada had cobbled together alerted her and wouldn't turn off. Her first notion was that it was buggy, but she couldn't rule out that the machine really was running for that long. She had to see it for herself.

She couldn't deny her excitement. What could this mean?, she asked herself under her breath, and found that she was saying it every few seconds. Into the lab, down the elevator, a mantra of the unknown.

As she entered the crystalline chamber, some grand portal was open above it. The same portal that had taken her, but she had never before realized just how beautiful it was.

And it shuddered close, vanishing as if it had never existed, save for a figure fallen through.

She approached the figure. Human, in a white and purple lab coat that was oh so familiar. In his outstretched hand was a purple book that she knew well; her fiancé's favorite, one he was rarely without.

It couldn't be.

He was moving, which was hopeful, even if it seemed to be a pronounced spasm that bordered on a seizure. But it was a sign he was alive.

Seeing his face at long last pulled the air from her lungs. As much as she had denied it for years, she had long ago forgotten what her fiancé looked like, but every aspect of him returned to her through the ages. He was older, confirming that time had passed the same as it had for her, and he was bearded and looked like he had been through hell and back, but this was her Turo.

Without a word, she cradled his head in her lap, smiling gently down at him and stroking his hair as she waited for his twitching to stop. In lieu of speech, she hummed softly, soothingly, a song that had played soon after their engagement. It was likely she was the only one who had sung it in thousands of years, and now it belonged to only the two of them.

After a few seconds his eyes closed, head drooping to the side, and the unnerving spasm stopped. She kept up the soft touch as she kissed his forehead. "I've missed you..." she murmured, taking in his features. He had talked about growing a beard to appear suitably fatherly, and it spoke well to her that he still had it. He wore a ridiculous bodysuit that seemed more at home on the set of a science fiction movie, but he was always one to have a sense of the dramatic. And she wouldn't have it any other way.

Just for a moment, it seemed as if he wasn't breathing, and a cold chill shuddered through her, hand stilling in his hair. But then his eyes opened, and all was well. He blinked a few times and looked up at her. "...Professor Sada...?"

Sada tried to maintain her gentle smile, but at the sound of his voice she burst into wild tears. "I've been here, Turo! I've been in your future...I thought I would never see you again!" Not wanting to overwhelm him, she slowly moved to his left side so as not to disrupt his precious Violet Book, setting his head gently down as she moved, and sliding her hands to his shoulders.

"I see...you did not abandon..." He closed his eyes again, and she swore she could see an odd blue light shining. "That does change things..."

"I could never abandon you! I know we had a fight but I'd never leave you! I love you! I love Arven!" Her hands tightened on his shoulders, her arms shaking, and she drew him up into a tight hug. "I love you so much...I thought I would never see you again. My Turo..."

He sat up, pulling them both into a sitting position, and cautiously wrapped his arms around her, resting a hand on the back of her head. "Sada..."

She didn't care if his skin was cold. She didn't care if she couldn't feel his heartbeat through that silly garment. He was there and he was alive and he was hers and that was all that mattered.

"Sada...there is something I must confess to you." There was a regret to his voice, a tiredness, but also a familiar softness she had longed for. "I am not Professor Turo..."
 

Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. lugia
  5. growlithe
  6. quilava-fobbie
  7. sneasel-kate
  8. heliolisk-fobbie
Heya, I said that I’d be back for some of your bigger fare. This admittedly wasn’t what I had in mind and I still have my eyes on something a bit more substantial about this for the upcoming week, but I wanted something a bit smaller to end the night on and it begins with one of the Paldean professors getting door slammed in their face, so let’s just pop on in and see where this goes, huh?

The last Sada had seen of her fiancé was slamming the door in his face.

She couldn't even remember what they had been fighting about.

Your mutual obsessions about your different fields of science while having a kid that needed to be taken care of? Since just saying, if Sada/Turo are alive in the SV version where they’re not the professor, I’m sure they were still plenty obsessed about their day jobs given how a cosmic “for want of a nail” is basically the thing that determines which of them go to Area Zero.

She'd headed to Zero Lab out of spite, hoping the beauty of science and hard work would clear her mind, but something had gone wrong. Something she could never fully understand. But when Sada had come to, the machine lay dormant. The lab above was in ruins, seeming to have had no human presence in eons.

I’m going to take that as a sign that Turo was the professor in this continuity, though boy that must’ve been awkward for Sada to learn about there.
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And perhaps it was scientifically inaccurate to use that word, but "eons" was exactly how long it felt.

The time machine had worked. Turo would be overjoyed.

Would have been overjoyed, she realized, when it dawned on her that her fiancé was long gone.

Um… Sada? Shouldn’t you be worried more about spending more quality time with your son given that you’re absent enough from his life that Arven literally never mentions you in Violet’s plot?
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Even knowing that, even with the full scope of time that had vanished in the blink of an eye, it took her until seeing the fallen cliff where the lighthouse had once been to realize that her newborn son was long gone as well. Arven had been his name, and she had barely gotten to hold him.

Oh.
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So wait, did she make it to Area Zero before the rest of the party and the time machine just sucked her up, or…?

They would have lived long lives, she told herself. She hoped they were happy ones.

Lol. Lmao.

I mean, Arven’s was eventually happy? Or at least as happy as being orphaned and having to fend for himself at school could be. ^^;

Though she couldn't fix the time machine, she could monitor it. The vast future was hers to explore, and though it wasn't the era she had studied, preferring to focus on the distant past, she couldn't deny that it was still fascinating. Now and then she would make her way back to Zero Lab, slowly fixing it up through the years. And, beyond even her advanced understanding, sometimes the machine would briefly clip to life, and a nearby pokémon would disappear. At all other times, it seemed to be entirely depowered. Some force in another era had to be manipulating it. It was the closest she came to a working theory.

You’re sure that’s another era as opposed to another world there, Sada? Since just saying, I remember that one cutscene from the very end of Indigo Disk and what happened in it.

It had been nearly seventeen years since Sada had been flung carelessly through time. The machine never remained active for more than a moment.

Until one day, where it roared up and did not stop.

Oh…. oh dear…
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The monitor Sada had cobbled together alerted her and wouldn't turn off. Her first notion was that it was buggy, but she couldn't rule out that the machine really was running for that long. She had to see it for herself.

She couldn't deny her excitement. What could this mean?, she asked herself under her breath, and found that she was saying it every few seconds. Into the lab, down the elevator, a mantra of the unknown.

Would suggest formatting Sada’s thoughts here as italics to set things apart from the rest of the narration. Though this is going to lead to Sada becoming the Game!Sada of some universe, isn’t it? .-.

As she entered the crystalline chamber, some grand portal was open above it. The same portal that had taken her, but she had never before realized just how beautiful it was.

And it shuddered close, vanishing as if it had never existed, save for a figure fallen through.

She approached the figure. Human, in a white and purple lab coat that was oh so familiar. In his outstretched hand was a purple book that she knew well; her fiancé's favorite, one he was rarely without.

Oh, hello, RoboTuro. Time for things to get nice and awkward here.

It couldn't be.

He was moving, which was hopeful, even if it seemed to be a pronounced spasm that bordered on a seizure. But it was a sign he was alive.

Seeing his face at long last pulled the air from her lungs. As much as she had denied it for years, she had long ago forgotten what her fiancé looked like, but every aspect of him returned to her through the ages. He was older, confirming that time had passed the same as it had for her, and he was bearded and looked like he had been through hell and back, but this was her Turo.

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Without a word, she cradled his head in her lap, smiling gently down at him and stroking his hair as she waited for his twitching to stop. In lieu of speech, she hummed softly, soothingly, a song that had played soon after their engagement. It was likely she was the only one who had sung it in thousands of years, and now it belonged to only the two of them.

After a few seconds his eyes closed, head drooping to the side, and the unnerving spasm stopped. She kept up the soft touch as she kissed his forehead.

"I've missed you..." she murmured, taking in his features. He had talked about growing a beard to appear suitably fatherly, and it spoke well to her that he still had it. He wore a ridiculous bodysuit that seemed more at home on the set of a science fiction movie, but he was always one to have a sense of the dramatic. And she wouldn't have it any other way.

Um… if his voice is still glitching out like it was when the PPP was active, I can already tell that that’s going to be a really, really nasty shock for Sada there. Not that she won’t get there eventually.

Just for a moment, it seemed as if he wasn't breathing, and a cold chill shuddered through her, hand stilling in his hair. But then his eyes opened, and all was well. He blinked a few times and looked up at her.

"...Professor Sada...?"

Sada tried to maintain her gentle smile, but at the sound of his voice she burst into wild tears. "I've been here, Turo! I've been in your future...I thought I would never see you again!"

Not wanting to overwhelm him, she slowly moved to his left side so as not to disrupt his precious Violet Book, setting his head gently down as she moved, and sliding her hands to his shoulders.

AI!Turo: “Um… I don’t know how to say this, but I have some bad news for you…”

"I see...you did not abandon..." He closed his eyes again, and she swore she could see an odd blue light shining. "That does change things..."

"I could never abandon you! I know we had a fight but I'd never leave you! I love you! I love Arven!" Her hands tightened on his shoulders, her arms shaking, and she drew him up into a tight hug. "I love you so much...I thought I would never see you again. My Turo..."

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Yeah, I can already tell the mood’s going to go places when Sada realizes that she’s talking to a robot.

He sat up, pulling them both into a sitting position, and cautiously wrapped his arms around her, resting a hand on the back of her head.

"Sada..."

She didn't care if his skin was cold. She didn't care if she couldn't feel his heartbeat through that silly garment. He was there and he was alive and he was hers and that was all that mattered.

"Sada...there is something I must confess to you." There was a regret to his voice, a tiredness, but also a familiar softness she had longed for. "I am not Professor Turo..."

Sada:
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Yeah, I had a feeling that things were leading up to some sort of knife twist ending about a third of the way in, but it’s still really well done. Like there’s not really all that much explored in the games or even in a lot of SV fanfic about what became of the other professor that the story doesn’t center around, and this felt like a pretty fun (well “fun”) “what if” exploring some of the possibilities that could’ve happened. The main star of the show is just getting into the head of Sada here, which feels at once plausible for someone who would’ve had a falling out with Turo over him growing obsessed over his work and dream, while clearly having some of that same spark in her herself.

I didn’t really have all that much in the way of critiques beyond a couple of formatting things that I didn’t see quite eye to eye on. I do wonder if the ficlet would’ve benefitted from being a bit longer to progressively build up to the final moment (e.x. showing off more of the future world and Sada navigating around in it), but it was written for a Drabble Bingo, so I won’t judge too hard since it’s inherently an event devoted to being experimental.

Hope the feedback was fun @Blackjack Gabbiani . I enjoyed myself with this piece, and if all goes well this upcoming week, this won’t be the last time that you hear from me before the end of Review Blitz.
 

Blackjack Gabbiani

Merely a collector
Pronouns
Them
Partners
  1. shaymin
  2. dusknoir
Awesome!

This was written before the DLC so I had no idea what the Indigo Disk was going to yield haha.

I'm glad you like my stories so much! Yeah I was writing these in a day so this set didn't get all that polished.
 

K_S

Unrepentent Giovanni and Rocket fan
The last Sada had seen of her fiancé was slamming the door in his face.

She couldn't even remember what they had been fighting about.

Yeah theres an intro to inspire a guilt trip. Poor sada...

She'd headed to Zero Lab out of spite, hoping the beauty of science and hard work would clear her mind, but something had gone wrong. Something she could never fully understand. But when Sada had come to, the machine lay dormant. The lab above was in ruins, seeming to have had no human presence in eons.

And perhaps it was scientifically inaccurate to use that word, but "eons" was exactly how long it felt.

The time machine had worked. Turo would be overjoyed.

Less so if he's her spouse and realizes she's missing... this definitly puts a new spin on Turo's intensity to get things going and is another stab at Avern if this is his mom. Or even if it isn't... different wound for that scenario.

Would have been overjoyed, she realized, when it dawned on her that her fiancé was long gone.

Even knowing that, even with the full scope of time that had vanished in the blink of an eye, it took her until seeing the fallen cliff where the lighthouse had once been to realize that her newborn son was long gone as well. Arven had been his name, and she had barely gotten to hold him.

They would have lived long lives, she told herself. She hoped they were happy ones.

While I feel for Sadda I feel doubly for Avern. Kids gunna have it rougher than canon.

Though she couldn't fix the time machine, she could monitor it. The vast future was hers to explore, and though it wasn't the era she had studied, preferring to focus on the distant past, she couldn't deny that it was still fascinating. Now and then she would make her way back to Zero Lab, slowly fixing it up through the years. And, beyond even her advanced understanding, sometimes the machine would briefly clip to life, and a nearby pokémon would disappear. At all other times, it seemed to be entirely depowered. Some force in another era had to be manipulating it. It was the closest she came to a working theory.

It had been nearly seventeen years since Sada had been flung carelessly through time. The machine never remained active for more than a moment.

Until one day, where it roared up and did not stop.

The monitor Sada had cobbled together alerted her and wouldn't turn off. Her first notion was that it was buggy, but she couldn't rule out that the machine really was running for that long. She had to see it for herself.

I'm surprised she didnt glue herself to that machine. Maybe hoping for rescue or just a connection to the familiar. But a distant monitor works too.

She couldn't deny her excitement. What could this mean?, she asked herself under her breath, and found that she was saying it every few seconds. Into the lab, down the elevator, a mantra of the unknown.

Even tho its been 17 years her priorities are still so much the same. Shes very much the mad scientist that started playing with time. Considerong canon i suspect a certian ai is going to pop in...

As she entered the crystalline chamber, some grand portal was open above it. The same portal that had taken her, but she had never before realized just how beautiful it was.

And it shuddered close, vanishing as if it had never existed, save for a figure fallen through.

She approached the figure. Human, in a white and purple lab coat that was oh so familiar. In his outstretched hand was a purple book that she knew well; her fiancé's favorite, one he was rarely without.

It couldn't be.

Oh no... I didn't want to get this right... but shes 17 years older... shouldn't she be noticing how Turo aged?

He was moving, which was hopeful, even if it seemed to be a pronounced spasm that bordered on a seizure. But it was a sign he was alive.

Seeing his face at long last pulled the air from her lungs. As much as she had denied it for years, she had long ago forgotten what her fiancé looked like, but every aspect of him returned to her through the ages.

Ah that explains it. Winces.

He was older, confirming that time had passed the same as it had for her, and he was bearded and looked like he had been through hell and back, but this was her Turo.

Without a word, she cradled his head in her lap, smiling gently down at him and stroking his hair as she waited for his twitching to stop. In lieu of speech, she hummed softly, soothingly, a song that had played soon after their engagement. It was likely she was the only one who had sung it in thousands of years, and now it belonged to only the two of them.

After a few seconds his eyes closed, head drooping to the side, and the unnerving spasm stopped. She kept up the soft touch as she kissed his forehead. "I've missed you..." she murmured, taking in his features. He had talked about growing a beard to appear suitably fatherly, and it spoke well to her that he still had it. He wore a ridiculous bodysuit that seemed more at home on the set of a science fiction movie, but he was always one to have a sense of the dramatic. And she wouldn't have it any other way.


I can only imagine the insane showboating his fkare summoned. As well as the arguments over movie night where he pics the scifi thriller for the umpteenth time...

Just for a moment, it seemed as if he wasn't breathing, and a cold chill shuddered through her, hand stilling in his hair. But then his eyes opened, and all was well. He blinked a few times and looked up at her. "...Professor Sada...?"

Sada tried to maintain her gentle smile, but at the sound of his voice she burst into wild tears. "I've been here, Turo! I've been in your future...I thought I would never see you again!" Not wanting to overwhelm him, she slowly moved to his left side so as not to disrupt his precious Violet Book, setting his head gently down as she moved, and sliding her hands to his shoulders.

"I see...you did not abandon..." He closed his eyes again, and she swore she could see an odd blue light shining. "That does change things..."

"I could never abandon you! I know we had a fight but I'd never leave you! I love you! I love Arven!" Her hands tightened on his shoulders, her arms shaking, and she drew him up into a tight hug. "I love you so much...I thought I would never see you again. My Turo..."

He sat up, pulling them both into a sitting position, and cautiously wrapped his arms around her, resting a hand on the back of her head. "Sada..."

She didn't care if his skin was cold. She didn't care if she couldn't feel his heartbeat through that silly garment. He was there and he was alive and he was hers and that was all that mattered.

"Sada...there is something I must confess to you." There was a regret to his voice, a tiredness, but also a familiar softness she had longed for. "I am not Professor Turo..."
Oh no she missed all the hints. My heart sunk at him calling her by her title, and i was expecting her to catch on then. It justs heartbreaking to see how much she misses him. That shes willing to look away from flaming red flags. I wonder how shes going to take the revlation that her Turo died, or what her sons been up to, ornwhat Turo's obsession wrought. For sada the pain ride is just starting..

Thanks for sharing this poingoint one shot.
 

Blackjack Gabbiani

Merely a collector
Pronouns
Them
Partners
  1. shaymin
  2. dusknoir
The next few hours are going to be awful.

But I like to think they can be happy.
 
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