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Chapter 1 - Dream

NebulaDreams

Ace Trainer
Partners
  1. luxray
  2. hypno
Well, hello there! Turns out I’m not completely done with fanfic (just when I thought I was out, they pull me back in). I ran out of inspiration for original stuff so I ended up coming back to the other Jung WIP I was working on alongside Teamwork Makes the Dream Work. I think I started work on it all the way back in April last year, then kept picking it back up in bursts.

In any case, this is probably the longest Jung project I’ve worked on and also my most ambitious one at a whopping 6 chapters (30k words altogether) and with a lot of chapter art to illustrate it. I will be posting these chapters every 4-5 days, and everything has been written in advance, so I’m confident that it will stick to a consistent schedule.

About Dreamdiver: Dreamdiver is a collection of episodic stories that each follow the adventures of Jung: a Hypno therapist who reads the dreams of distressed Pokemon in order to help treat them, each story following a different patient or problem. While this is an ongoing series, you don't need to read the previous stories to enjoy this one as they're self-contained, though it also enhances your reading experience if you have caught up with everything. The links to these stories are down below:
  1. The Inalienable Dreamless
  2. The Dreamer is Still Asleep
  3. Teamwork Makes the Dream Work
Summary: Jung the Hypno therapist starts suffering from panic-inducing nightmares that interfere with his work. There have also been cases of Pokemon being kidnapped near his city, and people accuse Hypno of being behind it. Determined to clear his own name and put a stop to his night terrors, Jung embarks on a journey to reconnect with his own kind and find the truth.

Content note: Although it still sits at a T rating, this fic is heavier than my other Jung stories. The nightmarish imagery from Dreamless is back, but this fic also focuses on themes of discrimination, both of which can get quite heavy at times, so be forewarned.

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Chapter 1: Dream

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Tar-like sand enveloped Jung. It covered his feet, his legs, his chest, his neck, everything save for his face. He barely breathed with the grains blanketing him like a steel duvet. It was barely enough to see the world ahead of him.

The sun bled into the sky. The sky was the colour of decayed oranges. There was nothing but tar ahead. Brown in a million different shades. A cold, dead wind blew dust everywhere, invading Jung’s dehydrated eyes and mouth. Not enough to bury him. Never enough to bury him. Just enough to make him suffer slowly, and for him to digest every particle of sand that life threw at him.

Wind howled. Roared. Screamed. Sang. The sand absorbed all the sound into tiny pockets, making the tone sound as dull as a rusted pendulum. Pendulum. Chimes. Clocks. Bong. Bong. Bong.

Nothing. The wind cut short. The dust settled. The sun’s wound dried, then decayed, oozing black. Black. Blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack. It loomed over Jung, taunting him. His only friend, the sun, a shell of its former self, like a hollowed walnut. Now he was alone. Alone. Always alone. Trapped, but never sinking. Living, yet suffocating all the same. Everything stayed still. He was the only living thing that moved. Or maybe, everything else moved along with him while he remained stationary. Like time. Clocks. Chimes. Pendulum. Pendulum. Pendulum.

Hypno.

“Hypno. Hypno… Hypno!”

He lost his ability to speak. All he’d been reduced to were the ramblings of a skipping record or an infant. No words, only names. All Jung had was a name. Not even a name. His species. The only thing that mattered. The only thing that made him matter to people.

“Hypno! Hypthhh! Fhhhh. Ghhhhhhhahhghghghghghg–”

Sand climbed down his throat and filled his maw.



Jung’s heart thundered in his chest. The sheets suffocated him, he couldn’t breathe, it was so dark, everything was disappearing, help, help, help–

No, that wasn’t it. Deep breaths, deep breaths. Oh god, his poor heart. Was this cardiac arrest? No, he just woke up. He remembered sand. Suffocating. Feeling completely and utterly alone and helpless.

Jung had another nightmare. Great.

This had been happening for the past few days. It had affected his performance to some extent – the sleep debt took its toll on his ability to dream read, but he still functioned and carried out his duties. This, however, was getting old. Jung didn’t even remember his nightmares in broad strokes, just that it felt petrifying and he hyperventilated after he woke up. But whatever he experienced, Jung didn’t want it to happen again. He already had a tough week since that Eevee had a breakdown and got aggressive with the other inpatients, though that wasn’t necessarily their fault. They had been through hell and back in the past.

Jung held onto his Plusle for comfort, though it did very little. Ultimately, it was just some stuffed toy he got from the local Make a Mon shop. Still, cuddling it relaxed his heart. Eventually, it slowed to a steady pulse, and he breathed a sigh of relief.

What would he do next? Jung wanted to go back to sleep, and he could’ve hypnotised himself into slumber, but that still wouldn’t remove the nightmares since he must’ve been troubled by something deeper. If that was a risk, then he was better off staying awake. Then what would he do? Twiddle his thumbs or cuddle his plushies all night?

He got out of bed to see what was on the news. First, on worldly affairs, Galar just launched their new Pokejobs programme. Good for them. There was a local article from the Daily AniStar, featuring some fluff piece about a Gogoat who won a gold trophy in a race, plus a champagne hamper for his trainer. He wondered if the Gogoat got any compensation for it.

Then, something else caught his eye, with a picture of a Hypno in the woods, no less. The headline read: ‘Police send out search party for missing Pokemon’.

Jung dove into his desk and chomped on a couple of chocolate bonbons. This wasn’t going to be pleasant.

‘Multiple Pokemon have been reported as missing from numerous trainers, including the famed battler Thierry Matthias. No concrete details have surfaced, though Hypno were found wandering Route 18, and as a precaution, police have sent out patrol Pokemon in order to investigate.’

There was a lot more to the article, but Jung couldn’t focus on that as he ate the whole bag of bonbons in one sitting. Oh, crumbs, this was a palaver and a half.

First, there was the fact that Pokemon went missing. That could’ve been anyone, including his patients or even himself. Second, Hypno were rumoured to be involved, and whether or not they actually were, it didn’t bode well for either party. Third, the news already framed the Hypno being behind it even if they didn’t confirm it as such. If someone who didn’t know any better read that, that would give them another reason to go against any Hypno they saw.

Oh, crumbs, crusts and…

Crap.” That was all Jung could say.

He had purposely avoided all of this discourse about Hypno until now. There was no point in reopening wounds about how his kind was perceived. But that nagging voice at the back of his mind needed to know. When he searched ‘Hypno Pokemon’ into Rootom, he found his own Pokedex entry:

‘It carries a pendulum-like device. There once was an incident in which it took away a child it hypnotised.’

It. What an ugly word. Jung wasn’t an it. Hypno weren’t ‘it’. They were just Hypno.

The rest didn’t inspire much hope, even with a plethora of articles and web pages to browse through. One popular site for trainer resources had one blog titled: ‘Can You Train a Hypno?’, which basically advised trainers to avoid Hypno at all costs even though it wasn’t illegal to capture and train one. They were seldom seen in actual league battles according to the page. There were also numerous mentions about Hypno horror stories in the Spookyghetti genre, which involved fictional accounts of Hypno kidnapping children or hypnotising people for certain... purposes. The less he knew about those purposes, the better.

Then there was that article about the Dreamdivers–

No, not now. Jung didn’t want to think about that now – he was doomscrolling at this point.

Either way, there wasn’t a lot of official coverage about Hypno as they mostly kept to themselves, and humans mostly kept away from them. It was like looking into a black box. But he also found an article that featured Drowzee and Komala hanging out with each other on a tree, documenting how some Alolan Drowzee kept Komala company in the wild. That was something to cling on to at least, like a cookie in a box of razor blade apples. Mmm, cookies.

Jung took his mind off of that report for now as he surfed through the web and played some browser games, including one that involved clicking cookies for hours on end, while eating from a pack of cookies in his stash. Before he knew it, light streamed in from the blinds of his window.

Did he seriously just spend hours pushing on a virtual collection of pixels to see numbers go up? And he also went through two packs of those choco chip confections. Jung massaged the lumps on his waistline… this was troublesome indeed. More hours at the gym today. But he had to work. There was another meeting soon. And he had to shower, and groom his crumb-crusted fur, and… oh, drat, he couldn’t remember.

Jung rubbed sleep from his eyes as he clicked on that imaginary biscuit, occupying himself until it was time to go. He didn’t even get changed into his uniform.

His movements through the hall were sluggish, so the hallway that only took him a minute to navigate to the briefing room felt like one of those five-and-a-half-minute hallways he encountered in his dreams. His three coworkers stared as he entered the room and gave a half-hearted reply.

“Are you okay, Jung?” Amelie, his boss, asked. “You’re five minutes late.”

I am?” That jolted him awake like the shock from a splash of ice water. “Oh my god, I’m so sorry, I lost track of the time!”

“Just sit down,” she curtly said.

This was bad. He was never late. Oh well, he’d make up for it by hanging onto Amelie’s words-- wait, no. If her speech was a precipice, then Jung had long since slipped off. His head bobbed up and down with the rising and falling cadence of her voice. He took a sip of coffee to awaken himself, but that didn’t cure his ailment. His eyes felt heavy, getting heavier, until finally, they shut and his head hit the table.

The noise startled everyone, Jung included. But pain overtook shock as he nursed his crooked nose. Definitely dislocated. Why did Arceus have to give him such a huge snout?

Ow…” he groaned.

“Jung.” Amelie pointed her marker at him. “What are you doing?”

Ah…” It suddenly dawned on him. “I just… fell. Fell asleep.”

He smacked his forehead. What a stupid Hypno.

I couldn’t sleep, I had those night terrors again. It’s no excuse, I know, but–” he stopped to yawn–”I’ve never felt this tired before, I’m sorry.”

“It’s alright, Jung.” She put the pen down. “Look, you’re in no condition to work at the moment. Have a break for the weekend and get some rest if you can.”

No, I’ll be fine.” He straightened his undone collar. “I can’t not work, especially with everything going on, I need to make myself useful or else–”

“No one else here takes their job as seriously as you do.” She looked to the two other therapists, and they nodded along with her. “Of course, it’s serious work, and it’s challenging as well. But you can’t work running on fumes when it’s such a cerebral process.”

What about that Eevee?”

“We can handle them.” Amelie took a deep breath. “Just give yourself some time to relax and sort this out.”

So they took Jung off his schedule. Dammit, what a failure. There was no point in arguing, however, and deep in his heart, he knew she was right. But what would he do with the rest of today? How would he get some rest? Maybe he could’ve had a herbal solution, or that Roserade’s aromatherapy, anything would’ve helped.

If it meant going to her shop, Jung would even buy some of Liliane’s wares. Besides, a part of him wanted to check up on Tupelo’s progress.

Jung couldn’t be bothered to get dressed. He only grabbed his bag, then ventured into town, retracing his steps back to her place with the nearby store. He tried to focus on the path ahead, not the people staring at him or occasionally whispering in hushed tones. After the news of that kidnapping, he imagined what they were all thinking, especially with the police being very active here.

The one saving grace was that he knew someone on the patrol force: Jet. He took a detour to the ice cream vendor to see if he was on break, but it was still morning. Right, of course. Jung already took too much time diverting from his path. He noticed more people staring. More humans questioning. He passed by a group of teens and–

One poked their leg in front of Jung’s feet, tripping him up, though he didn’t fall down.

“Go back to Lavender Town, creep!”

Fortunately, they just laughed it off and went on their way. Jung continued his journey, as usual, forcing himself to smile. He couldn’t let anyone see that it got to him.

The various strong scents of herbs, spices and berries greeted Jung’s lopsided nose as he entered. There were many leaves, nuts, vitamins and other health foods on display, and the woman, Liliane, was in the middle of the shop floor, stocking shelves from a trolley. As soon as she heard the bell, she turned and smiled, though it didn’t entirely reach her eyes.

Hello, Liliane,” Jung said, straightening his posture.

“Oh, hey Jung.” She glanced at the floor while holding a bag of cashews. “Um, how can I help you today?”

Jung rubbed his head. “I’ve been having these terrible dreams lately. I thought about possible solutions, and I think one of your remedies would help.”

Liliane paused for a moment, either thinking about what to recommend or mulling over Jung’s presence. She probably still hated him for what went down with Tupelo. Finally, after a few uncomfortable seconds, she put the bag of nuts away.

“I recommend chamomile tea -- the Galarish blend is the best, though I’d start with the teabags just to test the dosage.”

Would these get rid of nightmares or does it only help you to relax before bedtime?

“Depends on how your body reacts to it. I don’t wanna force you into it if you’re not sure, though.”

Well, I might as well get this.” Jung grabbed the teabags. He also found a box of pills on one of the shelves. Jung inspected the label, peering through his glasses. Somnifera. They were sleeping tablets, manufactured using the spores of various Grass Pokemon.

“Oh,” Liliane started, “and those would definitely work, but the dosage is a lot stronger. I’m not sure I’d recommend it since…”

Jung peered at the small print, which said ‘please consult your vet before giving to Pokemon’. What a load of steaming Houndour… manure. What was Jung supposed to do, go for a consultation himself? Would they give him a cone? Then again, he went to a groomer to get his coat trimmed, so it wasn’t a huge stretch.

I might as well get these too. They might not work well for me, but I’m just desperate at this point.

“I know, but I don’t want to be liable in case you get hurt.”

Trust me, I’m capable of making my own decisions.” He said it in a much sharper tone than he intended. Damn his lack of sleep. “Sorry, I don’t mean to sound so cranky.

“Well, alright, I guess if you’re sure.”

Liliane went behind the counter to serve him. She scanned the items, recited the price, accepted Jung’s money then gave him his change and his purchases in a bag.

Thank you, Liliane. I hope you’re doing well these days.” He turned to the door. “Take care.”

“Wait,” she called, reaching out from behind the counter. She maintained eye contact with him that time. “Um, I just wanted to say, I’m really sorry about the way I treated you the other week. I thought about it after Tupelo’s session and I honestly just felt really crappy afterwards.”

It’s alright. I know it takes some getting used to, talking to a Hypno like it’s normal.”

“It shouldn’t be that way, though.” Liliane looked at Jung with lowered eyes. “I guess I had it in my head for so long that Hypno were bad news with all the stories I heard that I couldn’t shake it off. Like a gut reaction, you know?”

I know.” He sighed. “I appreciate the thought, and I hope we can move on from here.”

“I do too.” She smiled, more genuinely this time. “If you’re curious, Tupelo’s doing better. I took your advice and–” she clicked her tongue– “okay, I only took part of your advice. I got him a new friend, one that can keep him company while I’m out of the house.”

Oh, which Pokemon?”

“A Pidgeotto, another rescue from his old reserve. He’s pretty intelligent and docile, and he can sit atop that tree, so he’s a good companion for Tupelo.”

Ah, good to hear.” He smiled back. “Let’s hope that his condition improves from here on out. Though if he doesn’t, please consider my other recommendation.”

“Yeah, of course.” Liliane slunk to the counter, resting her elbows on the surface. “It’s scary stuff. I heard this thing about traffickers, and if it’s anything like what Tupelo experienced, I can’t imagine what they’re putting other poor Pokemon through.”

Right, that. He offered a sympathetic look.

I expect the police will do all they can to find out the cause of it.” Of course, it meant a few Hypno were caught in the crossfire, but there was nothing he could do about that.

“Right. Well, I hope you get some sleep.”

Yes, thank you, and I hope the rest of your day goes well.” Jung waved before he left the shop for good, bag in hand.

Jung went on his merry way, skipping as he walked. He was happy that his efforts paid off and didn’t fall on deaf ears. As he walked through town, he also got a box of cupcakes from his favourite bakery as a pick-me-up. Now all he had to do was go back to the clinic, safe and sound, get to bed, put on some music, and relax to a nice hot cup of–

Bonk.

He fell to the ground. His head burned. He didn’t entirely know what happened at that moment, but once the pain cleared, he got up and saw the empty Pokeball which lay on the paved road. Did… someone throw that at him? And his cupcakes, oh no! All splattered on the cobblestones, baking in the sun.

Jung saw a pair of booted feet which belonged to a young trainer, who kept on guard with his Delphox while bystanders watched. The boy stood in shock, staring at the metal sphere.

“Oh, shoot,” he said. “It’s already got a trainer.”

It? Did he just call Jung an it? All this time carving out a name for himself, as an individual, only to get reduced to an it. An object. Inhuman.

That was it, indeed.

Jung stood and grabbed the Pokeball.

You, boy!” he yelled in human tongue, which really got his attention, as did everyone else. “What on earth were you thinking, throwing it at me?!”

“I--” he sharply turned to his partner, who shrugged. “I thought you were one of those kidnappin’ Hypno.”

Does it look like I’m snatching Pokemon away?” He gestured to his longcoat– wait, no, he didn’t put his uniform on. Everybody probably thought he was a wild Pokemon, yet why would he be wearing glasses or carrying a bag around if he wasn’t civil? Arceus, forgive him for what he was about to say. “Pardon my Kalosan, but are you effing kidding me?! I look after Pokemon for a living, the ones who need protecting, and all you do with your life is run around fighting animals and collecting trinkets, you waste of human skin!”

Even though it was directed at someone who totally deserved it, Jung felt bad for that insult, but it was too late to stop once he started.

And look what you’ve done to my cupcakes!”

“But, I…” The boy was close to tears. “I didn’t mean–”

I don’t care, you owe me 800 Pokedollars! You know, the thing you use to buy money, which I own and use because of all the work I’ve done! What, you’ve never seen a Pokemon using money before?! You’ve never seen me before, oh look, a dream therapist, he’s actually using his powers for good this time, he isn’t just some rotten Hypno that wouldn’t think twice about biting the heads off of newborn babies, I’ve never been more insulted in my life! I–”

Jung went on for what felt like minutes, so long that his throat burned. He had already caused a scene giving this youngster the dressing down of his lifetime, and as Jung went on his rant, nobody stepped in, not even the Delphox who passed the time by polishing their claws with a wooden nail file.

Then Jet arrived, that Blastoise who was usually always seen with ice cream in his stubby paws. Oh, great, what was he going to do?

“What’s goin’ on here?” he asked as he stepped in.

I’ll tell you what, this utter troglodyte threw a freaking Pokeball at me, which, by the way, is classed as assault! It’s assault, for god’s sake, human or Pokemon!”

Perhaps it was because some form of help arrived, or because he had ranted and raved to the point of exhaustion, but Jung collapsed to his knees and swiped his glasses off, pawing at his teary eyes.

Is this all it amounts to, being pelted at in the street?” He laughed, but not out of amusement. “What’s the point anymore? I’m so sick of dealing with this, every day.”

Jung tried to take a few deep breaths, but he was tired. So tired.

“Jung, breathe.” Jet held out his paws. “Breathe with me.”

“No, no, no!” Jung couldn’t be bothered to speak in human anymore. “Don’t tell me to breathe, I’m trying to do exactly that, all I can ever do is keep calm, god forbid I show any sort of emotion or express any sort of disagreement, I have to be the bigger Hypno all the time, I–”

Jet splashed water in his face. The cold rush, as well as the odd sensation of his wet fur clumping up, distracted him for a moment.

“What did you do that for?” Jung asked.

“Well, you needed to calm down. I’ve seen people on my trainer’s TV do that all the time. I hope it helped.”

Jung took a deep breath, running his hand across his drenched face. Well, it stopped his tirade, and people no longer looked on in morbid curiosity, having a mix of reactions from puzzlement to remorse. In the middle of this mess, the kid slunk away and his Delphox followed. Chasing him was pointless. He didn’t care about the money he owed at this point.

“Well, I feel better. Not good, but better.” Jung stood up, handing his glasses to Jet so he could dry his face. “Thanks, Jet.”

“No problem.” Jet presented his lanyard to the crowd and waved in an effort to drive them away. Thankfully, they took that gesture to heart as they dispersed. “Say, shall we talk about this over some ice cream? My treat.”

Jung took those glasses back and forced a smile, shaking Jet’s paw. “Yes, I’d love that.”



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Jet spared no expense when he said it was his treat. They went to the gelato truck that Jung frequented, and that was a usual place of solace for him outside of the clinic. The vendor knew Jet quite well as he gave him a gallon of his favourite vanilla bean ice cream. When Jung explained he was Jet’s friend, the human gave him a choice of up to three scoops on the house, even though Jung insisted on paying. So there they sat, on the fountain next to Anistar’s seaside.

The sun glistened on the sea, and the Wingull soared through the air, crying their various battle caws, mating calls and squawks as they swarmed this part of Anistar, preying on unsuspecting patrons for their meals.

“Sorry ‘bout that,” Jet said. “I know it ain’t always easy for you anyway.”

“It never has been, Jet.” Jung took a big bite out of a strawberry and clotted cream scoop. He was about to speak when his head suddenly ached, and he groaned in pain.

“Brain freeze,” Jet said.

Jung waited for the sensation to die down, then exhaled. “I thought people in Anistar would know better by now.”

“Well, it’s a mighty big place. Lots of trainers comin’ in for gym battles.”

“So it makes it okay for them to treat Pokemon like objects?”

“Nah, it doesn’t.” Jet ran his claws along Jung’s back – that always felt nice against his fur. “You’d be surprised by all the humans I run into that just don’t get it.”

“I wouldn’t be surprised, I’d just be saddened.” Jung sighed. “Sorry I’m being such a negative Nancy.”

“It’s alright to be upset.”

“I know.” Jung kept forcing a smile, hoping it would trick himself to feel better. “How has your day been so far?”

“Eh, okay.” Jet smacked his vanilla-coated lips. “A little boring, just keepin’ watch since a lot of trainers are comin’ in today.”

“So you’ve got nothing to do with the patrol going on at Route 18?”

“Nope.” Jet ate another big spoonful. “I know the actual police force have started lookin’ while I’m here patrollin’. Lookin’ for grunts, basically.”

“Grunts?” Jung tilted his head. “From what, Team Rocket?” He let out a hollow laugh, then coughed. “Sorry, couldn’t resist.”

“If I had a nickel.” Jet groaned. “But these guys aren’t made up like in those cartoons, they’re legit. Whoever they are, they’ve caused a great deal of trouble. Drugs, mainly.”

“So I’ve heard, not that I’ve known anyone having that problem.”

“Though, it’s when Pokemon like us start going missing that the real trouble starts. But that’s usually a job for the Lucario and such to chase after – mind readers, y’know.”

“I can imagine.”

Jet grit his teeth and dunked his head into the whole tub, slurping up its remains until he had more of it on his face than he did in his body. He shot a tiny splash of water from his back cannon into his hand.

“I still wonder how your water powers work.”

“Beats me, all I know is that this ice cream fills it back up. Anyway, this kidnapping business’ bad stuff. All of it.” He washed his face with the remaining water. “And unlike that show, these thugs aren’t just from one group of bad apples, they’re from trees that keep growin’ bad apples that keep growin’ into more trees, if that makes sense.”

“Yes.” Jung mixed it up by combining the strawberry with the coffee ice cream, which was delicious. “And now people are thinking that I’m responsible, or Hypno are responsible for what happened, just because some of them happen to live near where it happened.”

Jet crossed his blubbery arms. “They don’t think you guys are behind it, they’re just not rulin’ it out.”

“That’s absurd!” Jung crammed another scoop in his maw to pacify himself. “When was the last time a Hypno did something criminal in your line of work?”

“Well, I haven’t had to deal with Hypno, and the one Hypno I know, I trust with my life.”

Jung tried not to blush at that, burying his surprise and annoyance with yet another mouthful. “Okay, but you’ve heard the stories, right? What about outside of your area? Does your trainer watch the news?”

“Sometimes. But a case like that hasn’t happened with Hypno for a while.”

“Exactly!” Jung got to his scoop of lemon sorbet, about to take another bite when he saw that scoop looked suspiciously Hypno coloured. He couldn’t go anywhere without something reminding him of Hypno outside of living in his own skin. “You know what, I’m going to prove it and go out there.”

“To Route 18?”

“Yes. I want to know for sure that they’re not behind it.”

“But what if you get caught while you’re out there, if it is a trafficking problem?”

“Yes, that’s a good point, I suppose.” He chomped on the crispy wafer cone. “I’ll have to be on my guard. I don’t like using my powers, but if it’s in self defense, then by all means, I’ll do it. I just have to get to the bottom of this, I don’t think I can sleep knowing I’m not safe in my own city. Literally, I can’t sleep.”

“Why?”

“I wish I knew myself, but maybe those Hypno would help me find the cause of it, if I can find them.”

“It’s a long shot.”

“Absolutely. But I want... no, I need to do this.” Jung bit the last of his ice cream and stood up. “Besides, it will be nice to go for a bit of a walk. Clear my head. Get out of the city. I don’t do that often enough.”

“Well, you’re always free to walk along the beach with me again if you ever want to ask.”

“Thanks, Jet, I appreciate the offer.” He smiled. “Don’t you have to get back to patrolling soon?”

“Yeah, I do.” He returned the tub to the vendor. “I wish I could come with you but, you know, it’s not my place.”

“Of course.”

Before they left, Jet gave Jung one of his ‘big ol’ hugs’. Jet was substantially stronger than Jung and could’ve crushed him with his weight, yet he showed a great amount of restraint. Jung always appreciated his cuddles, especially at times like this. He wished it would last longer than this, but alas, they both had plans.

Jet stomped off into the distance, and Jung looked the other way where the sign indicated the distance to Route 18. He didn’t know how far the journey would be or where it would take him, but he had nothing to lose at this point.
 
Chapter 2 - dReAm

NebulaDreams

Ace Trainer
Partners
  1. luxray
  2. hypno
Chapter 2: dReAm

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For whatever reason, Jung thought it was a good idea to use repellent spray on himself. He only wanted to repel other Pokemon and avoid conflict, but if anything, it repelled himself with its noxious, musky stink: a mix of ammonia and carrion flowers. He preferred to smell like his favourite strawberry flavoured fur conditioner, not like a Skuntank.

Jung’s biggest concern was bumping into a human along the route, particularly another trainer. Sure, nobody wanted to capture a smelly Hypno, but what was the chance of another self righteous trainer looking to scapegoat a smelly Hypno?

For the most part, any trainer he crossed paths with moved out of the way. Their travelling Pokemon wanted nothing to do with him, especially put off by his odour. An Oddish even muttered ‘gross’ as she brushed past him. But Jung took it on the chin, unlike last time. He walked for long enough that the trek through Route 18 felt like a leisurely stroll rather than an uncertain march through a rocky path next to a Pokemon-infested river.

While Jung didn’t need to worry about trainers or wild Pokemon, he found that he needed to worry about rangers instead.

Rangers were valuable peacekeepers most of the time. They surveyed the land to rescue anyone that had wandered too far off. Feral Pokemon straying too far into the route would be considered both a danger to humans and themselves. Pokemon like Hypno, apparently.

Jung tried to ignore their suspicious stares and their battle ready postures, Pokeballs gripped tight. A lot of them saw his clothes and seemed to sense that he wouldn’t do any harm, though they still kept guard.

One in particular, a hardened-looking man with faded scratch marks on his face, blocked Jung’s path. He pointed forward and a Houndoom emerged from behind to protect him, snarling at the sight of him.

Wait, what are you doing?” Jung pleaded, holding his paws up. “I bear no ill will, I’m just going for a walk.”

The ranger’s face shifted ever so slightly, but the Houndoom still stood, hackles raised. Jung’s heart was a jackhammer. He loved dogs, just not this one. Especially not one that breathed fire. And that ranger wouldn’t stop staring at him.

“What’s your business, Hypno?”

My name is Jung,” he said between clenched teeth. “What’s yours?”

Fabian.”

Well, Fabian, I’m sorry my presence intimidates you so much that you have to send out Pokemon on me.”

“Hey, I’m just doing my job. We’ve all been told to keep a lookout for anything suspicious.”

Because I’m a Hypno?”

“That includes Hypno, yes, but only because they’ve been seen where other Pokemon were last found before they were kidnapped.”

Jung’s ears twitched. It was best not to mention his quest searching for his own kind.

“You wouldn’t happen to know anything about that, would you?”

Fabian stepped forward, flowers crunching underneath his boots. The Houndoom accompanied him as well, sniffing Jung down. Hot breath tickled his leg fur. Jung straightened his back and inhaled. He wasn’t going to be bullied into submission.

You have no reason to interrogate me. I live in Anistar, okay? I’m a therapist, I help Pokemon with their problems, and it’s a highly stressful job, but somebody needs to care for them, someone who understands them.”

Fabian stepped back.

I don’t know any more than you do, but I’ve experienced the aftermath through you humans. All I want is to spend my spare time peacefully without being bullied or badgered by ignorant trainers. So, no, I don’t know anything about these other Hypno, especially since I’ve never known any other Hypno in my life.”

Fabian glanced at the Houndoom, who pawed at something in Jung’s longcoat. For good measure, Jung pulled out his wallet, his ID, and a pack of bonbons he brought as travel snacks. He had more in his backpack, but that dog didn’t seem interested in that.

Finally, Fabian knelt down and patted the Houndoom’s rump.

“Right, I’m sorry. As I said, I’m only doing what I’ve been told to do, and I didn’t expect you to speak either.”

That’s okay. I don’t blame you for keeping everybody’s best interests in mind, I’m just tired of these kinds of questions.”

“I bet.” He looked ahead to the rest of the route’s path. “So you said you were going for a walk, then?”

Yes, I’ve been stressed lately so I need to clear my head for a while. Is that a good enough explanation?”

“Yeah, yeah, perfectly fine.” Fabian tilted his cap. “Well, stay safe. If you do see anything suspicious or are in any sort of danger, report it to another ranger ASAP.”

Alright, I will.” Jung forced a smile. “I wish you the best of luck with your search.”

He walked off with a huff, shoving his paws into the pockets of his longcoat. That Houndoom still stared even as Jung strolled away.

Jung didn’t face any more trouble on his journey, but the more he walked, the more his encounter played on his mind. He only had a jumbled puzzle board to play with, and none of the pieces told a complete picture. As much as Jung didn’t want to, he came up with his own theories about what happened, about people taking Pokemon to that coal mine and committing unspeakable atrocities and performing illicit deals. It would be the perfect place to hide.

Perhaps the truth was simpler than that. Jung wouldn’t know for sure until he found what he looked for, but where would he find it? The only lead he had was an old, stuffy mine, and that was…

Just up ahead.

Jung’s blood curdled as he saw the first tracks to his right. His sight lingered to the rest of the ruins. Interlocking rails. Rusty minecarts tipped over to the sides like abandoned shopping trolleys. Stray lumps of coal strewn about carelessly. The tracks disappeared into the pitch black of the caves.

He sensed psychic energy pulsing from there. That was enough for him to go off and investigate.

Jung gulped, then took the first step into the ruins. Dusty pebbles crunched beneath his paws. No one else could be seen nearby. Birds chirped overhead, disrupting the disquiet. For his own protection, Jung clutched his pendulum. If there was a malevolent force behind this all, then Pokemon spray wouldn’t be good enough to stave it off.

Despite having no map or compass, Jung trusted his intuition as he followed the tracks. As he walked, cold wind blew through his longcoat. Clutching his body didn’t ward the chills away. The further he walked, the colder he felt, except it was a different type of cold. Like a draft blowing through a window.

Jung could’ve turned back at any point. He could’ve returned to a warm, comfy bed with all his plushies and his sweets beside him. And what would finding other Hypno solve? It’s not like he had the power to change other people’s opinions on his kind. But what if he didn’t like what he saw?

A figure appeared in the distance. A familiar set of pointy ears. A familiar yellow coat. A familiar human-like frame. A Hypno. With a… cape? Jung held the grip on his pendulum.

The Hypno shambled with a zombie-like gait and stood before him in a slouched stance. Jung got a good look at them, or her. She had a blanket tied around her neck. For what purpose, he didn’t know yet. She opened her maw and released a mighty yawn.

“Yo,” she said, covering her mouth. “Thought you were a human or something at first, especially with those funky clothes.”

“Well, I’m pleased to meet another Hypno at last.”

“Where are you from?”

“Anistar City.”

The Hypno scratched her wiry neck. “Hmm, why’d you live there, of all places?”

“To help other Pokemon.” Jung sighed. “I don’t know what you think about how I use my powers, but I read the dreams of Pokemon and give them advice to deal with their trauma.”

“And those humans are fine with this?”

“The humans I work with are.”

The Hypno nodded and sat on the stony ground, tucking her impromptu cape behind her. “And what are you doing here?”

Jung matched his sitting position. “To talk to more Hypno, I suppose. I had a feeling you resided here. So I’d like to visit.”

“Yeah, but why should we let you in?”

Good question. Jung didn’t have a proper response for that. “I don’t know. Why wouldn’t you?”

“Because some people are funny about letting outsiders in. Even another Hypno. Unless you can bring something to the table.”

He dug into his pocket and retrieved a bag of strawberry bonbons. “Maybe I could share these, if anyone wants to try them. They’re really good.”

The Hypno sniffed and raised a paw. Jung tossed a bonbon from metres away, expecting it to fall, when it levitated in the air, spinning like a basketball on an athlete’s finger. Right, telekinesis. One trick Jung never taught himself. The Hypno wiggled a finger to guide it into her mouth, chewed, then swallowed.

“Interesting,” she said, expression unmoving. “I’ve had many dreams that have tasted like this before, except much stronger. The powder’s nice, though.”

“That’s sugar… wait, you’re a dream eater?”

“Why’s that a surprise? You got a problem with that?”

“Oh god, no.” Jung laid his hand on his heart. Well, he didn’t think he had a problem with it. “I’d be a huge hypocrite if I did. You could say I’m on a dream diet, though.” He massaged the lumps on his waist. “I’m out of shape.”

“You’re weird. And we’re a weird bunch so you’ll fit right in.” She licked her lips. “That just makes the dreams taste sweeter.” A chill trickled down Jung’s spine. She was hard to read. Her cravings didn’t help matters either. But those fears dissipated when the Hypno stood up and offered her paw. “I’m Moony.”

What a peculiar name. Jung returned the handshake. ”Jung, nice to meet you.”

“Well, that’s a weird name.” She lifted Jung up. “What does it mean?”

“It’s a name I got from someone else, an inspiration of mine.” Jung had had a name before that but he had thrown that one away long ago. “And yours?”

“The moon is the first thing I dreamt about.” Moony gestured to the sky. “I always like to see it at night. How the light reflects off the ground, how it scrapes past the trees. It feels alive somehow, and in my dreams, it is.”

“How were you named after the symbol that appeared in your dreams before you were born?”

“Time travel.” Moony stuck her tongue out. “Nah, I’m kidding. We get them when we’re Drowzee.”

Right, that made sense. God, Jung wasn’t used to being so out of touch.

“Anyway, I should probably take you to our hiding place.” Moony let go and walked along the tracks, Jung tailing her.

“What do you mean, hiding place?”

“We don’t like humans sticking their noses in our business. So we’ve been living in these ruins.”

That made sense, especially if there were kidnappings going on. Moony led Jung past the tracks and walked further among the ruins until they found a long building.

From the outside, it had seen better days. The sun-bleached wood made the foundations look brittle, and there were holes in various places, especially on the roof. It looked like it could’ve collapsed at any minute. Jung guessed this used to be a dormitory for the miners. He wondered how it was still inhabitable. And with the psychic energy that radiated from the building, it felt like a haunted house.

Jung’s fur stood on end. What for? These Hypno meant no harm, right? Right. He couldn’t let it get to him.

The wooden steps creaked beneath Jung as he climbed up the porch. The door squeaked open. This led to a common room where various Hypno and Drowzee congregated.

Both on the outside and the inside, the place showed its age. Monochrome photos and parchments in damaged frames decorated the walls. Overcast light streamed in through the cracks in the planks and the holes in the ceiling. Old, ratty sofas sat in various places of the lounge, and debris littered the dusty floor. The snores of Hypno filled the room — two lay down to the right of the room covered in patchy blankets while Drowzee crowded around them in a trance, snuffling with their long snouts. They appeared to be eating their dreams. Jung could smell them too, and they were pleasant dreams that tasted of vanilla icing and curry.

“Yup, this is our home,” Moony said.”

“Right, it looks… quaint.”

“You can just say it looks like trash, I don’t care. I know that’s what you’re thinking.”

Jung could’ve slapped himself. He really needed to choose his words carefully.

To his left, another Hypno slept upright on a hole-filled armchair. She clutched a book close to her, which she must’ve picked up from the stack of tomes lying at her feet. Her dream scent was hard to pin down. It tasted like beef stew and sauteed onions, but also had a strong waft of charcoal and molten metal. Unlike the other Hypno, she was completely unoccupied.

“So is this all that you do, just sleep?” Jung asked.

“Nah, just during the day.” Moony stretched and yawned. “The Drowzee feed off the Hypno around this time, and the Hypno feed off the Drowzee when it’s night. And in between, we do all sorts of stuff since we have different roles.”

“So what do you do?”

She slouched back in her zombie-like position. “I’m the patroller. That’s why you saw me out there.”

“You seem very drowsy for a guard,” Jung said.

“Because I have to be awake when all the other Hypno are sleeping. But I can put up a fight if I need to.” Moony yawned as she rubbed the sleep from her eyes. “I need to get back out there, you never know what humans could be nosing around where they don’t belong.”

Jung turned to the sleeping Hypno, then back to her. “So I’m okay on my own here?”

“Eh, just talk to Hoothoot.”

“Wait, who’s—”

Before he could finish, Moony shambled off, closing the front door behind her. So Jung was all alone in that house. What was he supposed to do? Rudely awaken a bunch of Hypno, who could easily hypnotise him to—

No, wait, what was Jung thinking? This was his kind. He supposed he never grew up around Hypno, so despite everything he’d heard second hand, it was different being in a room full of them. The time ticked by, except there was no clock to tick. If Jung spent any longer standing around, he would’ve twiddled his thumbs all day until they woke up.

Jung wrinkled his nose. It only occurred to him now that a really bizarre smell wafted from one of the other rooms. It wasn’t necessarily bad — somewhere between really strong cheese and flour. Just odd. He peeked into the room to investigate.

As soon as he entered, he covered his nose. Definitely really strong cheese. Maybe overripe. Putting that aside, the room turned out to be the kitchen of the mining quarters. The main thing that caught his eye was the wood stove in the corner. Its mere presence made the room look frozen in time — who still used a wood stove in this day and age? Another Hypno dozed off on the floor, snoring as he clutched a half-eaten wheel of blue cheddar like his life depended on it. That explained where the smell came from if he had those cheese dreams.

Perhaps it was better to dive into the dreams of the bookworm as opposed to the cheesemonger. Maybe she could tell him where Hoothoot was. Or who Hoothoot was.

Jung re-entered the lounge and approached the upright sleeping Hypno. On closer inspection, the front cover depicted a female human knight, probably Jeanne D’Ardu, so he gathered it was a history book. He raised the pendulum before him, putting himself in a lowered state of consciousness so he could link up to this Hypno’s dreams. One… two…

Wait, he didn’t think about sitting down before—

Three.



Jung skydived through the clouds. The air whipped his face and snatched his longcoat away. His pendulum rattled in the wind. Beneath him, he saw everything: a castle with a moat, a green expanse with many Pokemon roaming through the forests, and a giant theme park, sticking out like an iridescent splinter in one’s paw. He much preferred rollercoasters to medieval castles. Then an Alolan Exeggutor beneath Jung expanded his neck to skyscraping heights, helping Jung to slide down to land. The Exeggutor’s neck snapped and swayed like an elastic palm tree, and lights also stuck out of their spine, shooting rainbows out of their lamps.

“Oh, right,” the Exeggutor said, “where are your tokens?”

“I didn’t know I was supposed to bring them,” Jung said flatly, despite the G-force in his face.

“Alright then, you sneaky sneak, you ain’t getting a smooth landing.”

“But wait, I have money!” A purse materialised out of nowhere, but Jung couldn’t catch it, so it fell a hundred stories to the ground. Jung was about to reach the end of the ride. “Oh cr—”

The Exeggutor’s tail swung and catapulted him into the kingdom. Jung’s landing wasn’t smooth at all as he left a crater in the cobblestoned road. As soon as he dusted himself off, he got a good look at the townsfolk, who all gathered around him with various looks of surprise and horror on their faces. They all wore tunics and armour, fitting for their time.

“Is it the Organ Grinder?” one said in hushed tones.

“’e’s come ta take our kids!” another shouted.

Someone’s baby cried in their grasp, and they wrenched themselves away from the Hypno’s sight. A royal guard wielding a crystal halberd pointed the tip of his spear to Jung.

“Move, beast,” he snarled. “You are brave to show your face again after what you did.”

Jung raised his arms in defense. “Wait, what did I do?”

“You took our children and murdered them, you foul Hypno.” He stepped forward, and Jung stepped back, not wanting to be a living shishkabob. “And you’re unarmed as well — you don’t have your organ grinder on hand.”

“Hold on, who said anything about grinding organs? That’s barbaric!”

“You probably ground their bones into dust and made bunting out of their guts, knowing you.”

The flags decorating the town centre’s walls were now lines of intestines — flecks of rainbow blood blew over everyone in the wind, including Jung. It tasted like chocolate. He put another pawful to his mouth— wait, this was gross, what was he thinking?! The townsfolk were just as horrified as they groaned at the sight of the cocoa-thirsty Hypno.

“I will make a coat out of your hide, Organ Grinder!”

“Wait a sec!” a voice called from far away, along with the pounding of hooves on the pavement. Everyone stopped in their tracks, including the guard, who retreated his spear. The bloody chocolate had melted in the sun, and the bunting became a colourful set of flags again.

The townsfolk bowed as a knight in shining armour approached on the back of a Rapidash. They were also accompanied by a band of merry men, all historical figures throughout the ages: a priest, a samurai, an aproned man holding a chisel, a Delphox with a feather quill. The knight hopped off their steed and fed him an apple.

“Thank you,” the Rapidash said, “m’neighdy.”

“You’re welcome.” The knight took her helmet off, revealing a Hypno with lustrous lemony fur. She turned to the halberd-wielding guard, bopping him on the nose, turning his face inside out. “What’ve I told you about the Organ Grinder?”

He sighed, rearranging his broken face. “An organ grinder isn’t a barrel organ, but a hurdy gurdy, Dame Jeanne. Nor a machine that turns stomachs into sausages.”

“Exactly.” Jeanne turned to Jung and smiled. “Hope these guys didn’t give ya too much trouble.”

“It’s no problem.” Well, almost being made into a scarf was a problem, but that was water beneath the Grimmsnarl’s bridge. “It’s a pleasure to meet you, Dame Jeanne. I am honoured to be in your presence.”

“Well, aren’t you chivalrous? You know you’re in a dream, right?”

Jung blinked. Oh, right. It was easy to forget sometimes, and it depended on the dreamer as well. But this wasn’t his dream either, so he didn’t have much control over the dreamscape.

“I got distracted by the guards here.”

“Ah, lemme fix that.” She snapped her fingers and they all turned into clucking Torchic, leaving their clothes and armour behind. The townsfolk went about their day as if nothing happened, washing their clothes in basins, playing the lute for coin, tap dancing with the stray Meowth. A glass table also materialised in front of them with tea sets and cakes before them. It didn’t take long for Jung to gorge himself on those sweets, even though they tasted of nothing. That took empty calories to a whole new level.

“So,” Jeanne said, “where’d you come from?”

“My place,” Jung said, wiping the cream off his nose. “Well, I’m not from your dwelling since I came from the city.”

“A city slicker, cool! So you’re with a trainer, yeah?”

“Not exactly.” Jung started talking about his business in the human world. He rattled off his job like a resume since he was so used to telling strangers in Anistar what he did to ward off suspicion. Even in his dreams, he still couldn’t escape from reality. Jeanne listened intently as she read a book where all the pages were blank.

“I never knew you could do that with your powers,” Jeanne said, ”that’s awesome.”

“Well, thanks.” Jung’s heart warmed – finally, a compliment for his hard work. “I try my best to help who I can.”

“And I know a lot of Pokemon who have to deal with stuff trainers can’t fix. Heck, Chansey historically offered soldiers and their Pokemon emotional support off the battlefield. Did you know in one account, 200 years ago, that an Arcanine of a soldier who was killed in action waited 20 years for him to come home?”

The samurai from before walked in and sat by the table, nursing a cup of green tea. “Have you seen my dog? I think I left him in the car— no, wait, he’s a fire dog, he can take care of the heat.”

“Okayyyy.” Jung swirled his tea — it turned into sludge which overflowed from the cup like molasses. “But yes, I’ve seen the statue in pictures—”

“And that statue was built in Saffron City 4 years after the Arcanine’s death, and the sculptor who created it also erected 50 statues across Kanto, and–”

An Alakazam levitated the table up in the air, spilling all of the plates, cakes, and tea sets on the floor. He flung it against the spires of the castle, knocking it into another set of spires like dominoes.

“I, the Great Balthuqur, shall save you from your corrupt parasite of a king!” the Alakazam shouted.

“Isn’t Balthuqur supposed to be from that book, The Five Towers?” Jung asked.

“Yup. I read all sorts of stuff, anything involving wizards or knights is my bread and butter.” She took a bite out of a plain sandwich with no fillings in it. “I get a bit carried away though, though at least you can’t get bored in a dream.”

“No, that’s alright. I know the feeling. I don’t know the last time I gave myself the luxury of reading a book in my spare time, but I have stacks of them waiting at home.” A leaning tower of books emerged behind her, which stood higher than the towers around them. “You seem well read.”

Jeanne raised the blank book, which flapped its pages and flew away like a Wingull. “Yeah, I read for fun a lot when I was with a trainer.”

“You had a trainer? I heard they were discouraged from training Hypno to begin with.”

She hugged herself. “Yeah, you could say that. But whatever, now I’m here, I enjoy it a lot more than battling other Pokemon. I can read whatever I want without anyone bothering me, well, except everyone else in this dwelling—” she stopped when a human in trainer gear strolled past, playing the hurdy gurdy, followed by a line of Rattata who were hypnotised by his song. “Anyway, I’d say it’s like a family over here.”

“It seems like quite the community,” Jung said. Even though most of the Hypno and Drowzee there were asleep, including himself and Jeanne. “And on that note, one of your kind, Moony, told me to meet Hoothoot, whoever that is.”

“Who?” a Hoothoot hooted behind him.

“That’s what I’m asking, who.”

Jeanne blew a raspberry — razzberries sprayed from her mouth. “Eh, that old geezer, just another Hypno. You only really need him if you’re new to the dwelling and want his blessing. Either that or you’ve got nightmares for him to gobble up.”

Jung leaned forward in his invisible chair. “Wait, he can eat nightmares?”

“Yeah, that’s what I said.”

“Then he can help.” He stood up. “I’ve been suffering from terrible ones lately. I can’t sleep on my own without experiencing them, I’m falling behind at work, and I’m tired and I really hate it.”

A storm cloud formed above him, hovering over his head like a Honedge. Jeanne’s eyes widened and she snapped her fingers, making the sword hover over her own head instead.

“Wait—”

The cloud swung like a toy hammer, bonking her head off like a pumpkin off of a scarecrow. Jung stared, trying to process what he had just witnessed.

“But yeah—” Jeanne’s decapitated head spoke—”Hoothoot’s upstairs in the Fire Boss’ Quarters if you need to see him. Just wake him up.”

Her body picked her head off the floor and screwed it back onto her neck like a loose bolt on a screw. Jung nursed his temple.

“I need to get out of this dream before I lose my mind.”

“Then eat it!” Jeanne offered her arm, which turned into a corncob. “That’s a surefire way to get out of a dream, and I’ve got a few free ones, so I don’t mind.”

Her corny arm dripped with salty butter. He wanted to bury his face in those kernels and chomp it all down. But… he couldn’t. That would go against his personal code.

“Um, I’m on a diet. Is there any other way I can get out?”

Her arm turned back to normal. “Wait, so you don’t eat dreams at all?”

“I swore I would never do that as long as I stayed in the human world.”

“Woah, so you went completely cold turkey?” Jeanne nibbled on a tiny finger of corn. “That would drive me mad.”

He pointed to the splattered cakes on the floor. “I have a sweet tooth to compensate – it’s the only thing that satisfies that craving.”

“Well, I hope you have a good dentist. But whatever floats your Gogoat.” She closed her eyes, fiddling with the fluff by her neck. “Hmm, I don’t think I can just click my heels and say ‘there’s no place like home’, but there are ways to force you to wake up.”

Jung gulped. He knew where this was going. “I have to die in the dream to wake up. The mind’s response to that sort of primal fear is to release adrenaline.”

“Yeah, whatever you said, sounds like a lot of technobabble to me, though.” She stood up. “And how do you wanna die?”

“Quickly and painlessly, please.”

“Alright.” Jeanne raised her fingers, about to click them, when she smiled back at Jung. “If you’re still around when we wake up, it’ll be nice to talk in person. I hope the snoring hasn’t put you off too much.”

“No, not at all. In fact, I find you to be rather charming and a good conversationalist.”

“Well, thanks, Jung. I’m not looking for any guys, though.”

“I’m not interested in girls myself.”

“Fair play. You ready?”

He took a deep breath, anticipating how he’d meet his untimely demise. Whatever happened, it would be good to tear off the band aid. “I’m ready.”

She clicked her fingers and just like that, a falling piano crushed Jung.



Jung woke up in a cold sweat and with a pain he couldn’t quite describe. He remembered what happened in the dream, but that didn’t explain why his body ached. Then he realised he lay flat on his nose — he must’ve fallen to the floor when he hypnotised himself into slumber. What an idiot. When Jung sat up, he nursed his poor face. He didn’t know how much more abuse his snout could take today.

The next thing he noticed was the cracked window near the entrance. It was still daylight, but the early evening sun reared its head, casting the dilapidated building in an orange glow. How long was he out cold for?

“Hey, hey, hey!” A Drowzee ran into the room like an overgrown potato with legs. “Hi! You’re new! Who are you? How are you doing?”

“Oh, hello!” Jung said, putting on a smile for the young chap. “I’m Jung, and I’m fine, thank you. What’s your name?”

The Drowzee sucked his thumb. “Don’t have one yet, but that’s okay, just call me Drip, that’s the name I kind of like, everyone calls me that, cuz I’m always drooling and stuff, oh hey, I’m drooling now!” He sniffed his pig-like snout towards Jung’s pocket. “What’s that? Is that a bag? I’m starving as well! Bored and starving and tired, like a… I dunno, a Slowpoke in the desert! Can I have it? Can I have it?”

Jung pulled out his pack of bonbons. He was going to save that for himself, but there was no harm giving his sweets to a child that wanted some. “Help yourself.”

“Thanks, four eyes!”

The instant Drip got ahold of the pack, he tore at it with such voracity that the bag exploded, bonbons rolling all over the floor. This didn’t deter him as he planted his face on the floor, sucking the sweets up like a vacuum cleaner. His nose certainly looked like a nozzle for one.

Even though Jung didn’t expect to have his travel snacks pilfered, somehow he didn’t mind. He giggled at the sight of the hyperactive tapir. Now he needed to get down to business and meet this Hoothoot. That name still threw Jung off — he pictured a giant owl roosting in an office, but he knew it was another Hypno.

Before Jung made his way towards the dorms, he glanced at the Drowzee, who continued to chomp at the last of the bonbons with delight. Once he finished, however, Drip deflated, tracing his finger along the cracks in the floor.

“Are you going to be alright on your own?”

“Yeah.” Drip looked at Jeanne. “I’m gonna stay with her — I like her dreams.”

Jung stared at him a moment longer. He didn’t want to judge his parents, wherever they were, but leaving a kid alone to his own devices in a place like this, Drowzee or not, put a pit in his stomach. This was no environment for any ordinary child. But it also wasn’t his business to intrude on another dwelling’s business.

The rest of the old mining building stood in various states of disarray. Cracked hardhats sat on rusted coathooks in the corridors leading up to the dorms. His feet left impressions on the dusty floor – the building had probably accrued decades of detritus. There were loose floorboards, heaps of clothes and all sorts of other debris.

As Jung searched the hallways for the staircase, he heard snoring from one of the rooms. He followed the source, taking him to a communal dorm room where dozens Hypno slept on ruined bunk beds and disused mattresses, with different Drowzee resting by their feet to feed on their dreams. His heart sank at the sight. They deserved better than slumming in a ruined building.

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Chapter 3 - Nightmare

NebulaDreams

Ace Trainer
Partners
  1. luxray
  2. hypno
Chapter 3: Nightmare

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Content warning: The nightmarish imagery is up tenfold here, including references to animal abuse and self harm, so please be cautioned. I’ve tried my best to keep it T rated here, but be forewarned that it is still intense.



Jung ventured upstairs to where Hoothoot apparently stayed. As Jeanne stated, he resided in a room of his own where the Fire Boss’ Quarters used to be. Lucky him. Jung almost knocked on the door when he remembered this dwelling wasn’t too concerned about privacy. Since Hoothoot could’ve been asleep, Jung carefully turned the knob and the door creaked open.

Hoothoot’s room was relatively more lavish compared to the common rooms, though the quarters still showed their age with the chipped plaster walls and the tiny spots of mould in the corner of the ceiling. In the middle of all of this, Hoothoot slept with his legs crossed, surrounded by an abundance of blankets and pillows, some of which looked too fancy for an old mining facility. Jung wondered if it was stolen.

The squeaky door didn’t wake the elderly Hypno up. Nor did Jung’s footsteps upon the aged floorboards. Although Jung got up to arm’s reach, he considered turning back since he never liked rudely snatching someone from their slumber. But Jeanne told him that it would’ve been alright, so he needed to tear the bandaid off.

Jung patted Hoothoot’s head. His fur was all coarse and wiry. He wouldn’t budge, so Jung did the only thing he could think of at that moment: tug on his ears.

“Huh?” Hoothoot whispered and yawned all at once. “Who’s there?”

“I’m new to this dwelling,” Jung said, kneeling down. “I believe you’re Hoothoot.”

“You woke me up just to tell me that?” Even as he talked, he kept his eyes closed. “And just as I was about to have a good dream.”

“Sorry for intruding. Jeanne said it was okay.”

“Oh, her.” Hoothoot scratched his yellow and grey beard. “Well, I like her, so I’ll let it slide. For now.”

Jung inwardly sighed in relief.

“So, Hoothoot. My name’s Jung–”

“Did I ask?”

“Not really. I’m just saying, for formality sake.” He wanted to ease himself into the conversation, but he didn’t know if he wanted to spend more time than necessary with Hoothoot. “I’ll be direct with you, I might need you to read or eat my nightmares.”

Hoothoot stopped scratching.

“How interesting!” Hoothoot grinned, showing his toothless gums. “Come on now, go to sleep so I can chow down.”

“Just like that? You know I can’t just do it on the spot.”

“It’s okay!” He pulled out a huge pendulum from beneath the covers, which looked like it was broken off of a grandfather clock. “I’ll do it myself!”

“Wait, hold on a minute!” Jung almost tripped over the hem of his longcoat. “Please don’t do it right away!”

“You wanted to be direct, didn’t you?”

“Yes, but not like this.” He sighed. “I’d really like to avoid hypnosis if I can, both getting hypnotised and hypnotising someone.”

“Ah, right.” Hoothoot crossed his arms and grumbled. “I sometimes forget we can’t just do that anymore.”

This was going to be a long day. “Wouldn’t you like to know what’s been going on first?”

“Not really. Lots of Hypno come up to me and I just eat some of their nightmares on the spot. Last one I ate tasted like blue cheese.” He smacked his lips. “Delish.”

Jung didn’t want to know what Hoothoot considered disgusting.

“I’m surprised you can do such a thing. I always throw up after eating one.”

“Then you need to build up your tolerance, I’m surprised you’re still alive with such a weak stomach.”

“That’s not the problem, I want to stop these bloody nightmares from happening in the first place!”

This wasn’t like Jung. Well, maybe it was. He didn’t know how to deal with an old Hypno, let alone old people in general. In any case, that got Hoothoot’s attention as he defensively waved.

“Hey, there, I’m just playing around. What’s troubling you?”

Jung sighed. Finally, they were getting somewhere. He repeated what he told Jeanne and also explained his job situation. As he spoke, Hoothoot stroked his beard like a kung fu master from an old action flick.

“Well, stress can cause nightmares, indeed.” Hoothoot said. “When I was your age, I was still in the wild, and believe me, the stuff you’d see there gave me plenty of nightmares. Imagine being chased by an Ariados the size of one of them tall buildings!”

“Skyscrapers.”

“Yeah, those. Then getting caught, trapped in its web, then forced to have its babies.” If Jung had tea, he would’ve spat it out by now. “Well, I adopted them in that dream, I didn’t lay them myself.”

Marginally better.

“I don’t even remember what dreams I had.” Jung shuddered. “I just remember waking up, feeling like I was about to die, like my heart would stop, it was beating so much. Sometimes, I thrashed in the bed before I realised I had woken up.”

“Night terrors,” Hoothoot hissed. “You have it worse, then.”

“Yes, and I’d like nothing more than to stop this mess.”

Hoothoot paused, continually stroking that beard. Jung scratched his chin reflexively, wondering if he was capable of growing stubble that long, or what equated to stubble for Pokemon with fur.

“I’ve had young’uns, much younger than you, that have had these night terrors. It’s the most common in Drowzee. Although they have parents they can confide in, they often come to me and tell me about their nightmares. A lot of things can cause it. Stress, as I said. Seeing someone else’s nightmare. And other Hypno pass on as well, which they sometimes see in their dreams, and it can kick up quite the fuss. We grow up to, what, how many years? You’re a doctor, aren’t you?”

“38 years.” Jung shivered. Saying it out loud really put into perspective how little time Jung had to make his mark on the world, especially compared to humans.

“And that’s assuming you don’t get caught by any predators, battle yourself to death, or die of some other cause. Here, though, we don’t have to worry about that. We basically farm each other and bother nobody else.”

“But then…”

“So, Hypno eventually pass on. And when they do, they linger, like an afterimage. We see them in our dreams. We might even talk to them for a little bit, sometimes consciously, sometimes not. They either die a second death when that memory fades, or they morph into something unrecognisable from when they were once flesh.”

Jung focused on the spots of white mould in the corner. Did he know anyone like that? Yes. But he didn’t want to think about that for now.

“What are you getting at, Hoothoot?”

“Oh, nothing.” He grumbled. “I know I don’t have much life left, so I’m just reflecting, I suppose.” Jung wanted to offer words of comfort to him, but his mind drew a blank. “Anyway. When you’re ready, go to sleep and I’ll be there to chow down on your tasty nightmares.”

Jung grimaced and laid down, getting into a comfortable position in that fortress of blankets. As expected, it felt like lying on a cloud.

“I still don’t know how you can stand eating them. They stink to high heaven.”

“Well, yeah, they do, but compare them to human delicacies. Did you know some humans have this dish where they incubate the eggs of certain Pokemon, particularly Ducklett, just long enough for it to develop but not long enough for it to become a hatchling?”

“Well, I wish I didn’t know now. But it’s not implausible.” He traced his hand over his face. Even outside of work, he couldn’t stop thinking about that Eevee.

“Alright, then compare it to that. Or Durin berries. If you think of it as an acquired taste, then that makes it digest a little better.

Jung put that thought aside for now. He didn’t want to have even worse nightmares than before, imagining what other barbaric delicacies humans cooked up.

“If you want, you can hypnotise me into sleep.”

“Sure thing.” Hoothoot retrieved his giant pendulum. “Be warned, you will experience parts of those nightmares before I reach them. Not all of it, but you won’t like it one bit.”

“I understand.”

“Alright, so you’ll drop in an instant once I use my powers. Nod and I’ll do the deed.”

Jung took a deep breath. He must’ve been very powerful to have those capabilities. Hopefully, he used them for good in his lifetime. With nothing left to lose, Jung nodded, and Hoothoot’s eyes flashed pink.

--

Jung peeled his own face off like a sticker. He still saw with his bare eyes wide open, but the outer shell fell apart like the rind off of an orange. He offered it to the first Pokemon in line: a Yamask. It wore Jung’s face over its clay imitation of a countenance.

“Please, don’t.” Jung’s mouth flapped over the clay’s etched line. “You don’t need to do this – you’ve already given so much.”

Jung waved them away for the other Pokemon in line to come out. The next in line was a Machop. He peeled off a bit of muscle of his own arm and offered it to them. They ate the pieces of his bicep and smiled with a chocolate-covered mouth. He didn’t bleed. His body was all a confection. It didn’t even hurt to take pieces of his body away. His eyes were gobstoppers. His teeth were pieces of candy corn. His bones… were just bones, made of marrow, but everything else that connected to them was made of sweets.

A Sylveon with no ribbons. Jung gave them his arms. Although he couldn’t use his hands, he still offered himself to the other Pokemon in line. And when he had no more parts, he offered his bones as well. A Banette. A Froakie. A Pikachu. A Komala. A Pangoro. By the time he was finished with all his patients, he didn’t even have a claw or a metatarsal left. Just his soul, floating outside of its shell.

An Eevee popped out of the darkness, the one with scars lining their body. He begged at the floating orb with his eyes, whimpering like a beaten dog. Jung would’ve loved nothing more than to help that Eevee. But neither of them were ready yet. If he gave too much, then Jung would disappear too, and he wouldn’t have anything left.

“Jung?” He finally spoke. “It hurts. Everything hurts.”

One of the scars reopened a gash on his side. The wound was pure black.

“Please, help me.” He tried to nuzzle against Jung’s spirit, but his snout passed through Jung’s core. “I don’t wanna go back. Don’t take me back there. They’ll kill me.”

Jung tried to say sorry, but he had no mouth to apologise with. Another scar reopened across the Eevee’s face.

“You’re just like them. You’re a monster. You wanna eat too?” The Eevee offered his paw. “Then eat. Think about it. I’m tasty. Imagine sinking into those nice dreams. And flesh. I bet you wonder what Eevee meat tastes like too. Just like the others.”

Jung wanted to run away, but his soul was fixed into place.

“Or what if I eat yours?”

The Eevee’s face contorted into something completely unrecognisable. All Jung saw was that hundreds of teeth and eyes replaced the face, and the tails behind the body whirled like a whip. All of the eyes squinted at Jung. Behind all of that darkness, there were faint shades of yellow, as well as stitches that connected each eye together. They looked like they were all grafted from the faces of dozens of Hypno.

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Before the maw consumed him, Jung recognised one set of eyes from the patchwork mouth. Brown eyes. Her eyes. Those sunken lids.

“Jung, play that record for me again, please.”

Hoothoot popped out and twirled his pendulum. Instead of sucking Jung’s soul, everything else, the malformed Eevee included, got sucked into the Hypno. Everything turned blacker than black, except for the glow of Jung’s soul and Hoothoot, whose belly expanded with an orange glow like a Toxicroak’s sac. Then Hoothoot deflated like a balloon, squeaking as he floated away.



Jung appeared inside a giant birdcage. It had everything him and Alice needed: a hallway, a kitchen, a lounge area, a bathroom, a bedroom, a piano room, an attic, a hamster wheel, some birdfeed, and an electronic chandelier, spread across three floors. But aside from the artificial light, there was nothing else illuminating the indoors — outside the birdcage, it was just pitch black. A Fletchinder bigger than Jung chirped inside the lounge room, head touching the ceiling. Alice. The feathers on her body fell like snow, melting onto the floor. She yawned as she nursed her broken wing.

“I don’t even know what to do today. I just feel so sluggish.”

Don’t strain yourself, Alice.” He gently grasped her good wing. “Better to rest than to keep spinning your wheels.”

“I know, I know.” She looked outside the draped window. “I mean, we’ve watched everything you suggested, I’ve got all these books but I never feel like reading them.” A whole library of books spun around the room like disco lights. “And I keep buying them.”

You can never have too many, I suppose.” Jung looked through the translucent walls into the piano room. “Perhaps you could try opening up your slots for more students.”

“I’m not doing that.” Alice pecked the floor. “I can’t even play a note without freaking out anymore. I try to calculate the notes I’ll play, then I’ll worry about messing up the next one, then— oh, what’s the point anymore?” She plucked one of her own feathers out — a bad habit of hers as her plumage had many gaps in them, revealing her bare skin. “How can I teach anyone in this state?”

Jung didn’t have an answer for that. He knew how debilitating her anxiety was. For all the time he spent studying psychology online and trying to get into the programme at the university, he still didn’t know how to help her, and her family didn’t think she needed a therapist. The sertraline sat in the bird feeder, packed like Wishiwashi in a crushed tin box.

Why won’t you switch up your medication?”

“I don’t know,” Alice sang. “I’m scared of what’ll happen if I stop taking them — they’ve been helping me sleep at night.”

But they might help you — and you might be able to play the piano without spiralling or feeling like a zombie, with the right pills.”

“Yeah, I suppose.” She preened her remaining feathers. “I think I might put on that jazz record, see if that inspires me.”

I’ll be in my room.” Jung traced his hand along her fuzzy side. “I hope you find something to get past your block.”

“Thanks.” Before Alice left the room, she turned to Jung, her head drooping. “I don’t deserve you, Jung.”

“Don’t say that.” He forced a smile. “You’re good company.”

“I wish I could be better, though.” She shook her tail. “Never mind.”

Jung was alone now. The notes of the saxophone and harp drifted from Alice’s bedroom. That would be good background noise as he got back to his studies. He didn’t know if he wanted to leave, but he didn’t know how long Alice would be around in this state. He didn’t even want to think of what his life would be like without her, even though that possibility loomed above him more than ever.

Something else crackled from the record player’s sound system: voices.

“Ugh, disgusting creature,” Alice’s mother said.

“I’m surprised she still keeps that thing around,” her sister said.

“Well, she doesn’t want to get rid of it,” her father said.Besides, it still helps with her insomnia.”

Before Jung could listen to any more of this nonsense, Hoothoot phased through the cage. He didn’t immediately raise his pendulum, instead, staring at Jung with lowered eyes.

“What are you waiting for?” Jung asked, realising this was a dream.

“This isn’t a nightmare. At least, it doesn’t seem like one.”

A Fletchinder skeleton materialised in the room, strung up, hung on hooks, and encased in glass as if she was an archaeological exhibit.

“It is a nightmare. For me, anyway. I don’t like to revisit this place.”

“Alright. I’ll get down to business.”

Hoothoot half-heartedly opened his maw. The birdcage, Alice’s skeleton, everything in it, dissolved into a murmuration of Starly, flying away, taking Hoothoot and Jung along with it.

--

Jung stood in chains. His back was bruised. His arms shivered, struggling to stay up even if they were bound above his head.

A long-haired human with a blank face, a long powdered wig that reached their waist, and a star-studded sceptre that doubled as a microphone approached Jung, tugging his ears.

“Well, do you confess?”

Everyone waited. Liliane. Amelie. Alice. Pierre. The rest of the judges, juries and executioners, most of which were taken up by Kangaskhan. They stood before him on their podium. Most of them sat idly as they stuffed their faces with fried Torchic or chocolate truffles.

Confess what?” Jung asked. Just for that, the human struck his face with the sceptre on the jagged end. He was numb to it.

“Your sins.”

Did I eat too many sweets without brushing my teeth?”

“Yes.” The human caressed their sceptre like a baby. “But also, look at the screen.”

A large, silver screen materialised from nowhere and flickered to life. A CGI intro to some courthouse show played, the one Jung was live on. Judge Judgy appeared as a presenter, recapping the case as they waved their sceptre. The plaintiff was everyone in the world. Humans and Pokemon alike. The defendant was Jung, chained to the chandelier. The crime? Existing. And giving the dentist a migraine because of his sweet tooth.

Can I call a lawyer?

“Did you forget that Pokemon don’t have legal rights at all?” Judge Judgy cocked their head at a 90 degree angle. “Why make laws for something that has no right to exist? At least, among humans. You have no defense.”

Oh, right.” Jung only had himself to blame for being born with yellow fur. “I apologise then for being born.”

“That’s more like it.” They turned around, hair swirling around them like rolling waves. “I suppose I could give you a lighter sentence for confessing and apologising, but remember, you have no rights.”

Why bother talking to me at all then?

Judge Judgy turned back and snapped their crooked fingers. Jung’s knees buckled and his arms stretched to impossible lengths to accommodate the chains. This made Jung into a chair for the judge to sit on.

“Know your place, you foul Hypno.” They ground their heel into Jung’s fingers. “What are you even talking about? Why do you think I care about the azimuth compass? The skipping record? The Ekans eating itself? That’s all I hear from you, even though you learned our language. We’ll never learn yours, we don’t owe you that much.”

“What do you want?” he groaned.

“I’ll tell you what I want, what I really really want, and that’s for you to decide for yourself. Why would I give you the satisfaction of having an answer? What difference does that make to the way I treat you?”

“None.”

“Exactly, so shut up.” Judge Judgy pointed their sceptre to the Kangaskhan. “Judges, juries and executioners? What is your verdict?”

The cubs popped out of their mothers’ pouches and pressed the big red buttons that sat before them on the jury’s desk. It made a buzzer like the losing sound on a game show. Jung scowled. Liliane, Amelie, and Alice pressed a smaller green button, which dinged like a doorbell. They were outmatched.

“Alright. The verdict has been decided.” Judge Judgy mercifully stood up. “Jung Hypno, for crimes against humanity and Pokemon alike, and for not flossing your teeth, you are sentenced to an eternity of humiliation.” They pointed the microphone towards him. “Now, bark into the nice little Mikey.”

Woof.

They bashed his head with the end of the rod.

“Not good enough! You need to be convincing, acting is reacting, you’ll never hit the awards season if you don’t put your all into it! Walk on all fours and bark like the dog you deserve to be!”

Jung tried, though his arms were still stuck to the chandelier. He couldn’t reach his arms down.

What do you expect me to do with these chains holding me?!”

“Nothing. Even though you have no control over it, we still expect you to fall in line. Remember, you are beneath us, not even worth the dust at the bottom of my shoes.” They raised their heel, sharp tip aimed above Jung’s head. “Now put your hands on the floor and bark.”

Hoothoot appeared in a Houndour suit, plastic horns protruding from his head. With one bark, he sucked up everything in the room.

--

Jung stood in a white room, facing an invisible mirror that reflected himself. He admired his features. He tugged at the tip of his ears. He adjusted his glasses. Look at that fur. Look at that longcoat. Look at that long nose. Every feature was fixed perfectly into place. Except, one thing was missing, his pendulum.

It didn’t matter. Jung had tossed it away in the ocean on Alola’s fine beaches. He watched it sink to the seabed. From now on, that blasted piece of metal would no longer dictate his life.

The reflection moved. Jung’s soft, round eyes morphed into angular features until Jung’s mirror image stared back at him. Its squinting, pinprick eyes peered into his soul.

“████,” it said.

“Yes, that’s what I am.” Jung crossed his arms.

“█████.”

“Oh, so you have a one word vocabulary, that’s fine, I guess. I only thought it happened in that TV show…”

The Hypno pointed at him with one hand. The other raised a silver pendulum. Polished to perfection. Not a speck of orange or green on it. It dangled the pendulum in its paw.

“█████, █████, █████,” It chanted along with the swaying of the coin.

Jung tried to speak. He couldn’t. The psychic force stitched his mouth shut. His body was now a cage for the Hypno to open, and it possessed the skeleton key to his soul. It raised its arm, then Jung raised his. It tapped its foot, Jung tapped his foot. It took a few paces back, as did Jung. It ran towards the mirror, and Jung crashed through the substrate.

Shards pierced through Jung’s skin. He broke through the psychic field long enough to scream, like a Chespin jumping on hot coals. His mouth closed again. Damn it, that Hypno did this on purpose. Of course it would. All Hypno were complete, utter bastards that deserved to be put down like dogs.

Including Jung.

The Hypno didn’t stop there. It grabbed a huge glass shard off the floor. Jung grabbed a huge glass shard off the floor. It raised it to its stomach. Jung raised it to his stomach--

No, no no no, no no no, no no no no no no no nonononononononononono

Jung resisted, pushing with all of his might as if pushing a bulldozer. The shard stopped short of piercing his belly. It stopped.

That Hypno opened Jung’s mouth, letting him breathe a sigh of relief.

Jung knew what was coming before the glass plunged into his--

--

Jung woke up thrashing and screaming. His heart thundered in his chest. His breaths, raspy and choked. Hoothoot embraced him, hugging him as he cooed against his face.

“Shh, shh, it’s alright. You’re awake now.”

Jung felt like such a baby. He hadn’t been this scared since— no no no, he was always scared. He didn’t want this. Jung didn’t want to be a part of this anymore. He didn’t want to be a Drowzee or a Hypno.

Hoothoot’s body was so warm. So soft, despite age frizzing up his fur. Jung couldn’t stop himself from sobbing into it as it soaked up his tears.

“Oh dear me.” Hoothoot stroked the back of his head. “I’ve seen nightmares in my lifetime, but yours… yours is the worst I’ve come across by far. You’ve given me the first stomach ache I’ve had in a while.”

“I’m-- I’m-- I’m-- I’m so sorry--”

“No, shh, it’s okay.” He squeezed Jung tighter. “You’ve got nothing to be sorry about.”

Jung had no immediate reply to that. Hoothoot kept hold of him until he gathered himself, however long it took. Even when Jung’s heart slowed, he still clutched Hoothoot for dear life, and Hoothoot didn’t let go either.

“Hoothoot,” Jung croaked. “Why is this happening to me?”

“You… you’ve experienced a lot in your short life so far. I don’t know the details, but I felt it in your dreams.” He caressed his back. “We bear a huge cross, being Hypno. It’s hard to keep one’s spirits up when the world is against you.”

“How do you deal with it?” Jung sighed. “I don’t want to put up with this for the rest of my life. No matter how I make myself look or what I do, it’s still not enough for people.”

“I’ve put up with it all my life. Even back then, Hypno were feared all around the world, some of which was for a good reason. Do you know about the Dreamdivers?”

Jung’s breath quickened. He never wanted to remember them ever again, in dreams or reality.

They were a nomadic pack of Hypno in Kanto, travelling from place to place to search for prey. They hypnotised people. Pokemon. Human children. They even kidnapped some of them and harvested them for their dreams. Some of their victims either died of starvation or other causes as a result of the hypnotism. The offending Hypno were tracked down and culled on sight. Then word spread through the region, then the rest of the world.

It may have happened decades ago. Or centuries ago. They might as well have been urban legends. Either way, it wasn’t a rare occurrence for Jung to get comments comparing him to them.

“Yes, I do.”

“Then you know how they ruined everything for us. The thought that a member of our species would do that to innocent people shakes me to my very core.”

Jung pried himself away from Hoothoot’s embrace. He wanted to run. He didn’t want to listen to any more of this. Seeing Hoothoot’s surprised expression, Jung gripped his paws.

“Sorry, I don’t know how much more of this I can take. So you’re saying that humans are right to fear us and there’s nothing we can do about it?”

“You can, just that you can’t change people’s minds all at once, as much as we are capable of doing so if we’re truly desperate to. The damage has already been done and I’ve accepted that.“ Jung was unsure if he echoed that sentiment. “Besides–”Hoothoot shut his eyes–”I’m with other Hypno that admire me, and I admire them too. I don’t need the approval of stinking humans to feel content. So why do you?”

Jung blinked. “Why do I do what?”

“Well, you said it yourself, no matter what you do, it’s still not enough for people. And caring after other Pokemon, some of which despise you on sight for what you are, sounds highly stressful as I said. That could be what’s causing your nightmares.”

Jung pulled back, clutching his arms. “But I haven’t felt like this before and I’ve been working there for nearly a year now.”

“Alright, then do you make sure to eat plenty of nice dreams? You need them to keep your strength up.”

“What does that have to do with anything?”

“You mean you don’t eat any dreams whatsoever? Isn’t that like a carnivore deciding they want to only eat veggies?”

“ I eat plenty of other stuff that my body digests, thank you very much. Sweets and cake satisfy similar needs to those dreams.”

“Sweets and cake, you’ve got a whole nightmare platter there.”

“Again, what does this have to do with anything?”

“Those foods make you hyper. If you go to sleep while your brain is active, you might have more nightmares. And if you’re using them as a substitute for dream eating, that leads to more nightmares because of stress. I thought someone like you would know that.”

“I’m a psychologist, not a doctor.” Jung scoffed. “And I’m not eating another Pokemon’s dreams if I can avoid it. I’ve only eaten nightmares lately in order to put my patients at ease, just like you have now.”

“Then quit your job.”

Jung backed away, standing by the door.

“This job is all I have. Without it, I’m worthless. And–”

“You seem to tie your self worth to your work.” Hoothoot gazed through him, his eyes as piercing as a Noctowl’s talons. “Is that what you tell your patients, that if they don’t give themselves selflessly into every action they take, they’re not worth the same comforts any decent Pokemon should afford?”

“No, that’s…” Jung sputtered, trembling on his own words. “That’s not…”

“I’ve said it before, but if this job is causing you this much grief, then what’s the use? Especially if you don’t seem to enjoy it?”

Jung took a deep breath. He needed to gather himself. Jung was the therapist, not the one needing therapy.

“Enjoy isn’t the right word. As an adult, you simply have to do things you wouldn’t otherwise want to do.”

“I know a lot of adults, well, adult Hypno, and they beg to differ.”

“But these Pokemon need me!” Jung covered his mouth. He didn’t mean to yell. “I’ve found a community with them and my human coworkers. And I feel like I have a purpose when I’m helping others move forward in life. So I want– no, I need to look after them.”

“Alright.” Hoothoot sighed. “It seems like you’ve made your mind up about that. The point about the sugar still stands. And really, what is the worst thing that can happen if you eat another Pokemon’s dreams?”

“It steals sleep away from them.” Jung paced back and forth across the room. “I couldn’t live with myself if I ended up draining their energy to the point they couldn’t function.”

“But it’s all in moderation – we know that first hand since we benefit off of one another. And eating one person’s dream doesn’t have too many lasting effects, just like losing an hour of sleep doesn’t. So why not ask another Pokemon or human if they’re willing to lend you the dreams that they want to volunteer?”

Jung opened his mouth, then closed it. He didn’t have a retort there. Of course, asking his patients was out of the question since that would be taking advantage of their vulnerable position. He still wasn’t particularly close to many people, save for Amelie, and asking her felt wrong.

“Because I have nobody to ask.” Jung looked at his feet. “I don’t have what you have. I don’t know any other Hypno in my life right now. I don’t have many friends. I can’t get too attached to my patients either, it’s not proper.”

Hoothoot hummed, stroking his beard again. As he pondered. Jung’s stomach rumbled and ached. It was worse than all of the hunger pains he had before. And of course, he forgot to bring more snacks, because he was a stupid Hypno. How was he supposed to know he’d be out this long? But Jung hid his grimace.

“I don’t know what the other Hypno think of you. And of course, we try to be careful about how many Hypno we allow in this place. But while you’re here, why don’t you ask if any Hypno or Drowzee have any dreams up on offer? Tell them I gave you my blessing.”

Hoothoot’s words put a bitter taste in his mouth. It felt wrong to suddenly waltz into their dwelling and make such a request as an outsider. And it felt even worse to break his streak after ages of abstaining from dreams. He came close to eating the dreams of his patients a few times, sure, but he swore he wouldn’t give into temptation.

But what harm could eating one tiny little dream do?
 
Chapter 4 - DrEaM

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Chapter 4: DrEaM

Jung’s feet felt like cinderblocks, walking through those hollow hallways. Those nightmares were a shock to his system. His tummy cramped with the mother of all hunger pains. What he saw in there as well… was that what happened in his subconscious? Oh god, what was wrong with him?

No, that had to wait. No point in psychoanalysing himself for now. All he needed was to go back downstairs and mooch off of somebody else’s dreams.

It was dark. He must’ve been out cold for god knows how long. He could barely find his way down the stairs, almost missing the first step. Jung took a moment to catch his breath. After a few seconds, his eyes adjusted to the darkness, and he continued his descent. The floor creaked beneath his weight. The air tasted stale. The chatter of Hypno echoed from afar. With the ambience of the hallways, he half expected a Gastly to pop out of the walls. As he came downstairs, the draft blew in through a cracked window, making him shiver. That did little to elevate his mood.

Thankfully, he found solace in the newly-occupied lounge room, lit by candlefire. This time, the Hypno were awake, and the room bustled with activity. Some Drowzee played together, chasing each other around the house. They were probably hyperactive waking up from their dream-eating sessions.

Some played with Hypno, either amusing each other by using telekinesis on different objects in the room, or playing board games. From the tattered game boxes, they had probably been left in the building since before it was abandoned. The air was filled with yawns from the Hypno, though. One, then another, then the rest of the room. Even Jung yawned.

“See?” one Hypno said. “Told you you’re contagious.”

“Aw, shut up.” The other Hypno threw a chess piece at them, only for the offending Hypno to stop it in mid air. “Anyway, it’s your turn — you’ve been staring at the board for, like, a while now.”

Despite their tiredness, it was nice to see them having fun even under these conditions. Jeanne was awake too, reading one of her books by candlelight. She was separate from the others, sequestered in her book nook, but she smiled as she read, so she seemed satisfied.

“Oh, hey,” Jeanne said. She was a sight for sore eyes after all that dream nonsense. “Wow, you look much different in person.”

“How so?”

“Those clothes.” Jeanne tilted her head. “You look like you’re about to dissect a Politoed.”

“Well, I guess I am a doctor in a sense.” Jung yawned again. He didn’t realise how tired he was that even the act of standing still felt like an ordeal. “Sorry, can I sit down on one of these armchairs?”

“Go for it!”

“Thank you.” Jung sighed and slumped to the adjacent armchair. “My word, I feel dreadful.”

“So he showed you your nightmares? Must’ve been bad for you to get winded like that, though we all get ‘em at some point.”

“I know. It’s not just that, it’s–” Jung shook his head. “Nothing. I… I’m fine.”

“Okay, if ya say so. What did Hoothoot tell you?”

“To start eating dreams again.” Jung sat up, patting his belly. “I’m honestly considering it at this point.”

“Well, I’d be happy to lend a hand, but us Hypno need to recharge our batteries, y’know. That’s why we have times where we stay awake and feed off the Drowzee — we need to refill the well so there’s a bit of meat to our dreams.”

“Ah, understandable. I don’t wish to intrude on your dwelling, it’s just that I don’t know who else to ask. Not that I know if I want to ask.”

“It’s tough, especially if you’re mixing with humans and all.” She puffed her cheeks. “My trainer used to think the whole idea was creepy. And even if he let me eat his dreams, that meant having to share the same tent with him while he slept.”

Jung blinked. “That’s… I never thought of that, but I can imagine how difficult that would be. Not to mention embarrassing.”

“My teammates offered, so at least I got my fix.” She scratched her nose. “Tell ya what, when Brie wakes up, I’ll ask him if he’s got a free slot.”

“Thank you.”

Jeanne went back to reading her book. All the other Hypno and Drowzee did their own thing. As much as Jung wanted to talk to them, he didn’t know how willing they were to approach him, if they even noticed him. He saw no sign of Drip anywhere either. Out of boredom, Jung glanced at the disused grandfather clock towed away in the corner of the room, missing its pendulum.

Eventually, Jung stood up and peered at the book Jeanne read. The paper was off yellow and the pages had a few tears in them — the page Jeanne read featured an illustration of a menacing-looking bard with some sort of instrument leading a line of Rattata through a medieval street.

“Is that the man I saw in your dream?” Jung asked.

“Yeah. I only read it once before, but dreaming about that made me think of it again.” She hummed. “It’s not my favourite story, but it has an interesting history to it.”

“I don’t think I’ve heard of the Organ Grinder before — the legend, not the hurdy gurdy. How does it go?”

“Okay then…” She flicked back to the starting page. “In the old Kingdom of Camfora, which was later named Camphrier, there was a Rattata infestation.” The illustration featured a horde of Rattata chewing through wooden crates, food supplies, and the flooring of peoples’ homes. “And along came a bard, the fabled Organ Grinder, bedazzled with colourful garments. He promised to hypnotise the Rattata of Camfora in exchange for coin.”

The bard looked suspiciously Hypno-like, especially with the ears in his pointy hat.

“And so, he struck the hurdy gurdy, ensnaring the throng with his song. One by one, he led the Rattata to the edge of a cliff, where they each fell to their doom. The mayor, however, only paid a pittance for his services, snubbing their saviour.”

The next page featured the Organ Grinder leading a mass of human children down the same path as the Rattata.

“As revenge, he played to an audience of 200 children of Camfora. None of the townsfolk noticed as their young were led astray, for they were enchanted by his song too.”

The last image featured the Organ Grinder staring back at the reader with a mischievous grin. They were completely naked for they had turned back into a Hypno and abandoned their clothes. The hurdy gurdy was absent, replaced instead by a pendulum.

“Neither child nor adult knew he was a Hypno in human skin.”

Jung scoffed and sat down. How preposterous. That was just a shaggy dog story, no investment in the characters whatsoever. Wait, why was he critiquing a fairy tale, of all things? No, he had to read in between the lines.

“So… the message is to not trust any Hypno you see. Or perhaps, anyone in general, for they may be a Pokemon in disguise plotting to kill you.”

“Sorta? Could be about paying your debts and keeping promises, could be about stranger danger.” Jeanne flicked through more pages. “Back then, a lot of humans still feared Pokemon, and vice versa. The only thing you could do back then was simply survive til the next day. So they wrote fairy tales to warn children not to play with fire or cry wolf, or follow the suspicious Pokemon.”

That checked out, as sad as it was to think about. Again, he had to count his blessings. Then he had a thought.

“Was there a time where we weren’t feared?”

“Hard to tell, not a lot of stories really talk about us, so I dunno if it was always the case. We were used as therapy mon, like Chansey, though more for putting patients to sleep.” She winked at Jung. “You couldn’t have picked a better job.”

“Yes.” Jung took a deep breath. He was very lucky to be in this position. He had to remind himself of that.

The cheese-eating Hypno walked in from the kitchen. If Jung had to wager a guess, that would’ve been Brie. He waved at Jeanne, only to lower his hand when he noticed Jung.

“Who’s this?”

“A city slicker,” Jeanne chimed in. “He just needed our help with something.”

“Mmm hmm.” Brie squinted, staring through Jung. “We shouldn’t be taking anyone else in.”

“According to who? It doesn’t bother Hoothoot.”

“It bothers me. I’ve dealt with enough trouble getting back here, I don’t want some rando in the mix at the moment.”

Brie huffed as he went back to the other room. Jung rose, looking at the door.

“I don’t mind leaving if I’m being a problem here.”

“Ignore him. I’m sure you understand why we have Moony out there guarding the place.”

“To stop humans from getting in.”

“Yeah, and Brie doesn’t like anything that poses a risk to that. If those rangers found out where we’re staying, they’d kick us out.”

“But you’re not doing any harm here.”

“It won’t make a difference to them since we’re Hypno.” She slammed the book shut. “And this is a historical site, after all.”

“Right.” He remembered the state of those mines. “What happened here?”

Jeanne cleared her throat. “From what I remember — don’t know where I got it from —, decades ago, everyone used to dig here for coal, since they still used steam trains and had boilers and such. When coal became useless, all the mines in Kalos went bust, and all the workers either moved on or struggled to find their feet afterwards. I think the folks left in charge of protecting this place wanna do something with it, so we’re not even supposed to be here.”

“Balderdash. This place seems like it’s been closed for ages, what are they even planning to do with it?”

“Turn it into a theme park? Or a mansion? I dunno, beats me.”

“And ignoring that, you all have every right to stay somewhere safe, especially taking care of your Drowzee.”

“I know that.” She shook her head. “But whatever. It is what it is.”

Brie popped out from the other room. “I don’t suppose you can read out that recipe for me, Jeanne?”

“On it!” She grabbed an old cookbook from the shelf and padded across the lounge room. “Oh, you can come with, if you wanna sort this dream eating thing out.”

Jung had nothing else to do, so he followed her into the next room.

A pair of Drowzee sat beneath the kitchen table, munching on morsels of cheese. Jeanne and Brie were hunched over the dusty counter, where there was an empty plastic bag, a bag of flour, and a few other ingredients in the mix as well.

“Oh, I wish we had one of those seashell moulds,” Brie said, adjusting his ratty apron. “Those madeleines sound scrumptious.”

“Imagine stealing a whole metal tray and carting it back, though,” Jeanne replied.

“Don’t tempt me.”

“Hide it under your fur, maybe?”

“I wish. I’d steal a whole kitchen from those humans if I could, imagine all the stuff I could make. Don’t suppose you’ve ever tried madeleines while you were out there, Jeanne?”

“Nah, my trainer was more of a spicy sort of guy.”

“He had bad taste, then.”

Jung felt like he was intruding, but somehow, despite the age this place showed, it felt like home.

“I love madeleines,” Jung chimed in, trying to get a peek of what they were working on. “There’s one bakery in my city that sells massive ones with these hard chocolate shells as well, it really compliments the soft spongy texture.”

Brie sharply turned. “I didn’t ask you.”

“Aw, come off it, Brie. This guy has quite the sweet tooth, don’t you, Jung?”

“Yes. And I can’t say I’m an expert at it, but I’ve dipped my paws in the dough before, so to speak. I’m certain that cakes make up 90% of my diet.”

Brie silently turned back to the counter.

“I’m surprised you can bake anything with that stove.”

“Barely.” Brie huffed.

Jung pushed himself next to Jeanne, giving him a view of the counter. Brie’s dust-caked paws whisked some batter in a chipped pottery bowl.

“So, I think Jung has something to ask you,” Jeanne said.

Brie’s frame deflated like a balloon. “What is it?”

There was no chance Brie would be so accommodating towards Jung right now. He needed to change the subject.

“Have you tried making madeleines without the mould?”

Jeanne knitted her eyebrows, while Brie raised them.

“You need the tray for that, don’t you?” he asked.

“Not strictly, the shape doesn’t affect the taste. The seashell is only a tradition. Therefore, you don’t need a mould to make them since they only require the same ingredients.”

“So they’d just be tiny sponge cakes.”

“Yes, but you could also press a fork into the mixture on the tray.” Then he had another idea. “Oh, Jeanne, do we have enough ingredients to make them?”

She blinked, then turned her nose to the book as she flipped back to the page with the recipe on them. “We’d need two eggs, some caster sugar, flour, baking powder and butter, and maybe a grepa berry for some zest as well.”

“Well, it’s not as if I can make grepas grow on trees, can I?” Brie mixed with gusto, spraying flecks of batter flying on the counter.

“Well, yeah, they’re berries.”

“Oh. Whoops.” He blew a raspberry. “I guess I could try, though. Wait, I’m making something with similar ingredients, aren’t I?”

“Yes,” Jung said, “and you can have choco chip madeleines as well.”

“Wow, so this might actually work!”

“Indeed! I can help you if you’d like as well!”

Brie shifted over, making some room for Jung at the counter. From there, they got to work, mixing in the extra batches of ingredients for the changed recipe. Jung didn’t mind a bit of dirty work in the kitchen, and thankfully, Brie seemed to mellow out in his presence.

Next, they poured the mixture onto the tray. Each cake was supposed to be tiny and evenly spaced out, but because of the delicate nature of the work and their limited supplies, the sizes varied from pea sized to cookie shaped. But this didn’t deter their experiment as they popped it in the oven.

Brie wiped his paws on his apron and rested against the counter, exhaling contentedly.

“Well, I hope this works. Then again, it’s always fun just messing around in the kitchen.”

“Indeed.” Jung smiled. “I forget how fun it is to bake sometimes.”

“Oh yeah, Jung, was it? What’s your situation? Who trains you?”

“Ah, no, no. I work by myself, so I don’t need a trainer.”

“No way.” Brie hummed as he cut up a morsel of blue cheddar on the side. “What sort of place would let a Hypno in?”

“A place that needed my abilities and my expertise.” He wrinkled his nose as Brie offered him some cheese. “I’m good, thank you.”

“You’ve got to keep your strength up.” Brie patted his stocky belly. “Besides, you’re missing out on some crazy dreams.”

“Yeah, I can always smell ‘em,” Jeanne scoffed.

“I know what cheese dreams feel like,” Jung said, “I just don’t like the taste. Anyway, they let me use the kitchen in the canteen sometimes, but even then, I don’t have much spare time to bake something.”

“You get a whole canteen to yourself?” Brie put the piece aside and bit a whole chunk out of the wheel. “Can we swap places?”

He would’ve said no, but given their circumstances, that seemed foolish. “I wouldn’t mind.”

“We’re lucky that we have this kitchen at all,” Jeanne piped in, flicking through the recipe book. “Not that we need to eat or anythin’, but it’s nice to have something that isn’t spirit food sometimes.”

“I’m sure both of you need a dose of reality here and there.”

“Indeed.” Brie chewed slowly, swallowed, then sighed. “Well, it’s the only thing that gives me hope here, baking. It reminds me that I’m living, not just surviving.”

“I suppose that’s all we can do, find hope in hopelessness.” Jung stared at the old, dusty floorboards. “I apologise if we got off on the wrong foot. I hope all of you are finding ways to cope with this living situation – I also realise I’m in a privileged position myself.”

“Nah, it’s okay.” Brie shook Jung’s paw. “We’ve been managing on our own for some time now, like…” He pulled back, tenting his fingers. “Um, Jeanne, help me out.”

“I’ve been here for two years, and Brie’s been here longer than I have, so it’s not like this is new to us. We’re all misfits here.” Jeanne glanced at the two Drowzee who happily dozed off next to each other, murmuring in their sleep. She pointed at one of them. “We found her abandoned in the woods.” Then pointed to the next one. “Him and his parents came here, but one of them passed away after an encounter in the wild.”

Jung clutched his chest. “How horrible.”

“As I said, it is what it is.” Jeanne patted Brie’s shoulder. “At least we’ve got each other.”

Jung never felt something like this before, this sense of community among Hypno. It was impossible for him to stay here for too long, but he could dream. And helping Brie out brought heat to his cold chest.

He came here for a reason, however. And the tension between him and Brie eased for now, so perhaps it was a good time to bring it up.

“I came to ask for a favour,” Jung started. “I’ve been having terrible nightmares lately, and Hoothoot recommended that I eat somebody’s dreams. Is there anyone that would be available in your schedule?”

“Ah, of course! I’m pretty sure I can fit you in.” Brie pulled out the clipboard and Jeanne picked up a pencil from the table. “Drip’s the odd one out at the moment, so he still needs to give his dreams to someone, if he’s willing to.”

“Okay, we’re sorted.” Jeanne scratched something out, then scribbled in Jung’s name. “You know that Drowzee you gave the bonbons to? You’ll be feeding off of him.”

Jung grimaced. “Somehow, that sounds wrong. Especially from a child.”

“You’re eating his dreams, not biting his head off. Besides, he went to sleep early, so you’d be doing us a favour by putting his dreams to good use.”

“Sorry, I’m still not used to that. Anyway, I’m immensely grateful for you two. I–” Jung’s nose twitched at the smell of burning dough. “I think those cakes are ready.”

Brie pulled the tray out with his own telekinesis, placing it carefully onto the stovetop. The batter solidified and rose to mixed results. Some came out with their signature dome shape and fluffy texture, others came out lumpy or conjoined. For the finishing touches, Jung grabbed a fork and pressed its prongs into the batches. They served as suitable facsimiles of seashells, which Brie hummed at.

“Now the moment of truth.” Brie peeled the cake off with his powers, then placed it on his tongue. He chewed, chomped, and savoured before swallowing. All the while, Jung, and Jeanne waited with bated breath.

“It’s… bland.” Brie stuck his tongue out. “Even the sugar doesn’t seem to help.”

“Oh.” Jung tried one, which only confirmed Brie’s comments. It tasted like cheap chocolate with a spongy texture. And there was an odd, smoky aftertaste from the charred wood. “Ah, well, I’m sorry this didn’t work.”

“Nah, I have the same problem with those other cakes I keep making.”

Unexpectedly, Brie put the tray aside and hugged Jung, burying him in a sea of fluff. This was… nice. Really nice. Jung could get used to this. Before he could hug him back, Brie let go.

“Thank you, though, for helping me.” Brie smiled. “I had fun. That’s what matters.”

“I’m glad.” Jung stroked his hot cheek. “I had fun too.”

“Get a room, you two.” Jeanne picked one madeleine off the tray and popped it in her mouth. “I mean, chocolate is chocolate, so that’s nice. I give it a solid C minus.”

“Is that a good thing or a bad thing?” Brie asked.

“It’s passable, barely.”

“Passable is good enough. Next time, I might add some of that zest.“ He turned to the two dozing Drowzee. “We should start giving these out – they’ll be first come first served.” Brie put a few more on a chipped plate, along with some cheese. “I’m saving this for Drip when he wakes up.”

“Ah, right, where is he?” Jung asked.

“He’s snoozing in the dorms.” Jeanne waved to the door. “I’ll lead you there.”

So that was settled. Jung waved back to Brie as he re-entered the lounge area. Then back through those dark, dank hallways. Something bumped. It was subtle, but noticeable. Where it came from, however, he couldn’t quite place. He listened again. It stopped. That was bizarre. It certainly didn’t do wonders for this place’s vibe.

“Jeanne, can I ask who on earth’s knocking?”

“Ah yeah, it’s nothing.” Jeanne replied. She walked to the source of the sound and pulled open the door to reveal an old water closet with rusty pipes. “This place has baths and everything, though we don’t really have running water here. So sometimes, the plumbing gets all creaky.”

Jung inhaled. It smelled musty, but not terrible, and Jeanne didn’t have any odour to speak of. “How do you bathe then? And even with the dream-eating, you need to stay hydrated as well.”

“Well duh. There’s a quarry we bathe in near the mines. That has a freshwater spring as well we usually drink from. Or we steal the bottles from different places.”

“Right, I wondered how Brie was able to acquire those ingredients.”

“I hope you don’t have a problem with it. It’s not like we have much choice.”

“Oh, no, I wouldn’t dream of judging you for it.”

Jeanne turned back and cocked a finger gun. “Ha, dream. Good pun.”

Jung scoffed. He didn’t even plan that joke.

After that detour, they reached the dorms, the exact same one Jung visited before. Drip lay curled up like a baby on a floor, clutching a blanket. Beside him was a candle and a few picture books -- one in particular was Perry Pignite, which featured the titular Pokemon tending to a farm in a soft, watercolour art style. Beside it was another book on cultivating farmland. And Drip’s dreams tasted of strawberries, bonbons, soil and… metal. Like the taste of blood.

That made Jung stop in his tracks. He considered turning back when Jeanne sat beside Drip, stroking his side.

“He’s been going through a lot lately,” Jeanne said. “I’ll let him tell you when you see him in his dreams.”

“Alright, thanks, Jeanne,” Jung said, sitting down alongside him. He stared at Drip for a moment, observing as he muttered in his sleep, tossed and turned, and sometimes kicked at the air. He looked so relaxed. Who was Jung to take that away from him? And yet, those dreams were being presented to him on a silver platter.

“Jung.” Jeanne patted his back. “Ya don’t have to if you don’t want to. Either way, I think he’ll like you visiting him. I also think he took quite a shine to you, from what he told me in my dreams.”

“He did?”

“I mean, you gave him your sweets, so that’s one way to get on his good side.”

Right, of course. He’d forgotten after getting swept up in all that nightmarish chaos. But no, it would be fine. Jung laid down beside Drip, held out the pendulum in front of him, and chanted one, two, three…



Jung was a Diglett, poking through the earth and back into the soil. He found himself in various clearings, forests and odds and ends in the world, even poking through the seabed at one point, until eventually he popped out into a farmland filled with strawberry trees. Those strawberries were ripe for the picking, glistening in the sun, juices dripping down their pips.

A Drowzee in overalls emerged, holding a shovel. He dug the Diglett out, using all of his strength and might to uproot him. The rest of Jung emerged, sporting a regular Hypno body except with a very smooth, Diglett-like head and a bulbous nose.

“Hey, hey, four eyes!” Drip greeted. “Well, beady eyes, this time, anyway, this is my dream! How’s it going?”

Jung smiled. “Well, it’s quite the impressive farm you’ve cultivated here.”

A Drilbur in a sunhat sniffled and snuffled at the soil, finding Jung and Drip.

“Oh hello, Perry,” the Drilbur said, “I hope those Bunnelby aren’t going to pester us today!”

“I’ll whack ‘em with this if they do!” Drip held his shovel out. “Hey, let’s have one of those tea parties, haven’t tried one of those before, four eyes, have you had one?”

All three of them sat at a table, pouring each other tea that changed colour out of its spout at random.

“Why, yes, I love tea parties and picnics,” Jung said, taking a sip. It tasted like freshly mowed grass. “I especially like a good afternoon tea for lunch.”

“Whaddya mean, afternoon tea, so you drink tea when the sun’s in one spot, why not drink it at any time, and also how is tea supposed to be lunch?”

“No, afternoon tea is a type of ritual that involves drinking tea and eating scones with jam and cream.”

“Ooh, I’d love that, but not the way Brie makes ‘em.” He stuck his serpentine tongue out. “Brie tried baking scones and they tasted like coal!”

A bunch of charcoal pellets fell onto the table, smashing up all the tea sets. They continued drinking regardless. Drilbur nursed a Sinistea in his claws. He drank it and immediately dropped to the floor, legs sticking up in the air.

“I’m fine,” the Drilbur said, “I’m just getting acquainted with this fine chap.”

“This fella’s body’s really interesting!” the Sinistea squeaked. “He’s gonna make a good host!”

Jung couldn’t decide whether he was amused or discomforted. Either way, he had to know what was ailing Drip.

“Jeanne tells me you’re going through a lot,” Jung said, gently placing his saucer on the messy table. “Are you alright?”

“Yeah, I’m fine, I’m fine!” Drip shouted, jumping up and down on his seat. “I’m good! D’you wanna see the farm, I’ve got Leppa berries growing as well, they’re really juicy!”

Jung chose to indulge in this fantasy for a bit longer. He stood up and followed Drip, holding his hand. Despite his small stature, he managed to pull Jung along with so much force that he yanked his arm off. Drip politely popped it back in place.

“Thanks, Drip, I hate it when that happens.”

As Jung strolled along the muddy patches, he saw all kinds of berries. Oran, Lomen, raspberries, starberries, nozzleberries, berryberries, until they stopped in front of a large Leppa tree. It was upside down, its roots holding up the sky, and its branches digging into the earth, Leppa berries hanging off of the leaves. An Ekans snaked across the deadwood, wrapping itself around a Leppa. Something smelled of carrion — a bunch of Murkrow pecked at a spot in the ground.

Jung’s stomach churned. This smell didn’t deter the Drowzee, however, as Drip elongated his arm and dug into the Leppa, shaking off the Ekans.

“Sssilly boy,” it hissed. “I’m protecting you, don’t eat that.”

“Why, what’s the worst that can happen, Leppas are Perry’s favourite food, I wanna try!”

“So, Perry’s the Pignite on the picture book?” Jung asked. He was a regular Hypno again, except he held the shovel this time. “Can you read, then?”

“A little, Jeanne taught me a bit, words are still funny to me but I like the pictures, and I like Perry!” He smiled widely. “He’s a farmer! I’d like to farm as well! Can Drowzee work in farms where you are?”

“Well, they could in theory.” Jung twirled the shovel in his hands. “I don’t see why it wouldn’t be possible.”

“Cool! I’m gonna do that, then!” Drip twiddled with the strap of his overalls. “Ain’t anywhere to plant though, this place is full of rocks, wild’s too dangerous, ‘specially since—”

A mouth-sized chunk fell off of the Leppa, getting swallowed up by the mouth-shaped ground. Drip nursed his head, letting go of the Leppa, which sank into the soil.

Drip fell on his knees, holding up his hands to Jung. “Get that Leppa, please, I’m starving!”

Jung dug into the soil, digging out patches of the earth, digging tunnels into the ground, digging into the earth’s core, until he hit something.

A dead Drowzee. It held its skeletal hand to Jung.

“I’m only gonna go and explore,” it said, “I won’t take long, Drip.”

Jung screamed, dropping his shovel, trying to dig his way back out of the ground. Then the hole closed over, leaving him underground. With that thing. He lit a match, from a box that materialised out of nowhere, and struck it until him and Drip were inside the caves with the body. Jung stared at the corpse.

“I…” Jung didn’t know how to find the right words for it. “Who is that?”

“My bro, Droop.” Drip tucked his legs to his chest. “He’s gone… dunno where he is.”

“Gone…” Jung started assembling the jumbled puzzle pieces, connecting the decayed limbs of the Drowzee back to its original body. “Do you mean, kidnapped?”

“That’s what they told me, the Hypno. I didn’t wanna think about it, but I know it’s true. They keep tellin’ me there’re bad people out there, snatching Pokemon away.”

“Right.” Jung grabbed a fistful of soil, letting it run from his palms. “I’m so sorry you’re going through this at the moment — I can imagine it’s a huge burden for you to bear.”

Drip’s face fell. “I keep seeing him like this.” The soil moistened, turning from dirt to water. “I dunno if he’s dead, but if I’m never gonna see him again, he might as well be.” Droop’s body floated in the water, carried by the Wishiwashi, Magikarp, and eaten by the other weird fishes.

“I wish I could tell you I knew where he was.” Jung sighed. “In fact, that’s what I came here for, since people have been accusing Hypno of kidnapping Pokemon.”

“Right.”

They sat on the seabed, observing the schools of Magikarp, the shoals of Inkay, the reefs of Corsola and the swarms of Frillish. Jung’s pendulum floated underwater, glinting in the sunlight refracted by the waves. Drip was silent, expression morosely looking on, but he was holding himself together, it seemed. The dream seemed stable enough that it didn’t collapse, unlike his other patients. There was an eerie pleasantness to the environment, unlike his nightmares.

“You seem to be coping quite well,” Jung remarked.

“I guess.” Drip swam through the currents. Jung didn’t follow him. “I still have everyone else. Jeanne’s nice. Brie’s nice. Hoothoot’s nice. Everyone’s nice. I know I’m not alone, even if it’s hard sometimes.”

“Yes, you know that, but you know you don’t need to put on a brave face either. Grief, well, any form of loss can work differently for people, and it might only hit you much later on when you’re given time to let it sink in.”

“I know. I mean, I dunno, but I know. Other Drowzee like me know, so I know.”

“But you shouldn’t have to deal with something like that when you’re so young.” Bubbles from his breath cascaded upward. “At your age, it just seems so… I don’t know. It’s unfair.”

Drip didn’t have a further response to that, getting carried away further by the undercurrents. How was he so calm about this? Jung sank rather than floated, staying where he was on the ocean floor. He came here to eat his dreams. How could he in good conscience do that when Drip was going through so much?

Drip reappeared with a mermaid tail, weaving through the ocean like silk through a loom.

“Did you say you wanna eat?” His tail turned into a battered Clauncher tail. “Go on, take it!”

Jung stared at the crispy, succulent looking shrimp. “No, I can’t.”

“Why not? That’s what everybody does here, what does it matter?”

“But you lose something each time your dream gets eaten, right?” He wrung his hands together. “It’s wrong.”

“What’s so bad about it?” Drip spun around underwater. “We all eat, I eat, they eat, we give and take, we share and share alike. Your tummy looks so empty.” He shrank and swam through the whole in Jung’s stomach, then back around. It tickled.

“I’m fine.” Jung ground his teeth. “I swore I wouldn’t.”

“Why?”

“BecauseI know the harm it can bring if I let it get out of hand.”

A Fletchinder floated down to the seabed, unconscious but not drowning. Drip stared at it and poked at its side with a finger.

“Don’t touch her— I mean, it.” Jung tugged at his ears. “Without getting into specifics, I used to know a human who would let me eat her dreams. She knew how much it meant to me. But one day, I got greedy and ate too much. She couldn’t get out of bed for two days.”

He still remembered the rising and falling of her chest. His wide-eyed panic, reflected in her soft gaze. The shouts and swears of her family. That time he spent floating in that dreadful pocket dimension.

“We don’t do that here.” Drip turned into a whole fried Clauncher. “I share. Jeanne shares. So it’s okay.”

“I know, but…” Jung shook his head. His features shifted. His body expanded. Hair rapidly grew, floating down to his shoulders. He stood tall over every sea creature around him. He felt monstrous. He felt unstoppable. And he was hungry.

He seized Drip, holding him up to his open maw. Jung was about to chomp down, but he restrained himself, just barely. Drip’s form rapidly changed between his Drowzee self and his Clauncher self as Jung’s drool showered him.

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“It’s okay, four eyes. Really.” Drip’s ears drooped. “I’m gonna be okay. And you seem nice, so I know you won’t eat too much. Everyone here’s nice too. You’d like it here.”

Jung wished he could believe that. He had a job. And responsibilities. And a duty. And something to atone for. Not just for his past greed, but for every Hypno who humans looked down upon. He would prove to them that he wasn’t a filthy, dream-gobbling predator. He—



It took a moment for Jung to adjust to reality. Whenever he experienced a rude interruption during his treatment, it always scrambled his brain, like unplugging a hard drive from a computer before it was ready to be ejected. His hands shook. His feet wobbled. The room spun before him. He supported himself on one of the bunk rails until his vision steadied. Then… noise. Banging. Screaming. Blows being exchanged. What… what on earth was—

Drip tugged on his longcoat.

“Jung… I… what…”

Jung grabbed his hand, clutching it in a death grip.

“Hold on. Don’t worry.”

Jung crept through the empty dorms, hoping nobody saw him. He hid to the side of the doorway and peeked out. Nothing there except the darkness. But he heard a frenzy of shouts echoing from afar — some in the human tongue, some in the Hypno tongue, all slurred together into a cacophonous soup. Paws thumped across the hallway, getting closer, inching closer. Jung clutched his pendulum. Drip whimpered.

It turned out to be Jeanne. She pointed at the two, wide-eyed and panting.

“Guys!” she yelled, “they— they’re coming!”

“Who’s coming?”

“Those rangers! They found us!”
 

canisaries

you should've known the price of evil
Location
Stovokor
Pronouns
she/her
Partners
  1. inkay-shirlee
  2. houndoom-elliot
  3. yamask-joanna
  4. shuppet
  5. deerling-andre
As promised (a while ago lol), here I am with the ch3-4 thoughts I had.

“So, Hoothoot. My name’s Jung–”

“Did I ask?”

chapter 3 jung gets ratio'd

“Not really. Lots of Hypno come up to me and I just eat some of their nightmares on the spot. Last one I ate tasted like blue cheese.” He smacked his lips. “Delish.”

Jung didn’t want to know what Hoothoot considered disgusting.

jung is weak and will not survive the winter

“Yeah, those. Then getting caught, trapped in its web, then forced to have its babies.” If Jung had tea, he would’ve spat it out by now. “Well, I adopted them in that dream, I didn’t lay them myself.”

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Jung grimaced and laid down, getting into a comfortable position in that fortress of blankets. As expected, it felt like lying on a cloud.

a cloud with mold in it

“Please, help me.” He tried to nuzzle against Jung’s spirit, but his snout passed through Jung’s core. “I don’t wanna go back. Don’t take me back there. They’ll kill me.”

but thats how you evolve into ghosteon!!

Everything turned blacker than black, except for the glow of Jung’s soul and Hoothoot, whose belly expanded with an orange glow like a Toxicroak’s sac.

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A long-haired human with a blank face, a long powdered wig that reached their waist,

Is the long hair referring to the wig or natural long hair underneath?

Jung’s knees buckled and his arms stretched to impossible lengths to accommodate the chains. This made Jung into a chair for the judge to sit on.

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“████,” it said.

“Yes, that’s what I am.” Jung crossed his arms.

“█████.”

“Oh, so you have a one word vocabulary, that’s fine, I guess. I only thought it happened in that TV show…”

Is the first word being only four characters instead of five intentional or a mistake? Oh and this is cool as fuck by the way.

You’re eating his dreams, not biting his head off.

nyehehe

And Drip’s dreams tasted of strawberries, bonbons, soil and… metal. Like the taste of blood.

So they can taste the dreams before they actually start eating them, like smelling?

“This fella’s body’s really interesting!” the Sinistea squeaked. “He’s gonna make a good host!”

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“Cool! I’m gonna do that, then!” Drip twiddled with the strap of his overalls. “Ain’t anywhere to plant though, this place is full of rocks, wild’s too dangerous, ‘specially since—”

A mouth-sized chunk fell off of the Leppa, getting swallowed up by the mouth-shaped ground. Drip nursed his head, letting go of the Leppa, which sank into the soil.

Drip fell on his knees, holding up his hands to Jung. “Get that Leppa, please, I’m starving!”

I didn't really get what happened in the middle paragraph - did Drip just nurse his head in confusion at the piece of Leppa falling down or something? The sequence of events would make the most sense if something hit him and he nursed his head in pain, but it doesn't seem like that's what happened.

He shrank and swam through the whole in Jung’s stomach, then back around. It tickled.

*hole

“BecauseI know the harm it can bring if I let it get out of hand.”

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General Thoughts

So the thing in Chapter 3 that I mentioned having critique about in DMs has to do with Jung's attitude on Hypno, specifically the self-loathing, and it kinda ties into the courtroom dream sequence. I feel like I haven't had a very good handle on what Jung himself really thinks and feels. I'd been reading a lot of them as something heard and sarcastically repeated by Jung, and that the reason they were still hurtful were because he knew other people thought that of him - but this chapter, then, has a bunch of places where the intention seems to be that Jung does think this about himself and Hypno and that he has internalized it. The thing is, though, that many of them are pretty extreme and/or abstract, and it's hard to imagine someone accepting them without bargaining, especially when we do see Jung push away his anti-Hypno notions numerous times. I think it'd be better if these self-loathing thoughts and notions were more subtle and insidious - something that's trying to convince Jung of Hypno being bad rather than outright stating that they are.

To give an example, Jung's crime being "existing" and him agreeing with that feels like it wouldn't happen with someone who clearly values logic - but if his crime had been, say, "scaring children and making them cry" by simply being around, the idea is "I am bad because I invoke fear and revulsion in people" rather than "I am bad," period. Existing and just being around are basically the same action (or inaction?), but one has a reasoning to it, and Jung feels like a character that would always want a reasoning for things.

I hope that makes sense, but if you're still wondering something about that, we can talk in DMs. For now, though, I'll cut it short so I can get to the other stuff I wanted to say.

So aside from that - and don't get me wrong, it's really not a glaring issue or anything, I just think it was something that could be improved - I liked the chapter (well, I've yet to read anything of yours I didn't like) and the dream sequences, though my favorite was the Alice one. I think it was because it was tied to something we didn't yet know about so it had mystery to it, but also because I felt like it was the most subtle and down-to-earth. But of course the others have a good reason to be extreme, since they are meant to be night terrors.

In chapter 4, I was a big fan of the Drip dream sequence. Drip has a clearly hyper child -like way of talking, and his dreams reflect his innocence, and that makes the reveal of the Drowzee skeleton hit that much harder. I like that it's "buried" underneath the nice, normal world as fears and trauma often are buried. We also feel like we're digging into a mystery alongside Jung because, well, we are.

I also liked the other characters featured as they had clearly distinct personalities without being too archetypal. Brie starts off rude, but he warms up quickly to Jung without it feeling forced. Jeanne' easygoing, but she's well-read, and I found it interesting that she doesn't take personal offense to the Organ Grinder story the way Jung does.

I think that's all I had in mind. Looking forward to chapter five! That was a hell of a cliffhanger.
 
Chapter 5 - Reality

NebulaDreams

Ace Trainer
Partners
  1. luxray
  2. hypno
Chapter 5: Reality

Jung stared blankly at Jeanne, loosening his grip on that poor Drowzee. What? How? What was going on?

Jeanne grabbed Drip’s arms, taking him away from Jung. Drip sniffled into her chest.

“Jeanne… I’m… I… help…”

“Drip, please, listen to me—”

Drip covered his face and shook his head.

“Listen to me.” Jeanne’s tone was calm yet firm. “You’re gonna be okay. Now, hide in one of those beds.” She pointed to the nearest mattress.

“But—”

“Nobody’s going to hurt you as long as you stay there. I guarantee it.” She smiled — Jung could tell she forced it. “And if they lay even a finger or claw on you, I’ll make sure they regret it. Alright?”

Drip locked eyes. He stared for a moment, blinking away the tears. Then nodded.

“Good.” Jeanne led him to the bed, almost tugging his arm. She tucked him in. “Keep the blanket over yourself. Pretend you’re sleeping. Cover your ears. Whatever you do, don’t get out.”

Drip reluctantly pressed his hands against his ears and curled up in a fetal position. Jung stayed where he was, watching this unfold, his blood turning colder and colder with each passing second.

He’d entered bedlam. This was complete madness. In all these years, putting up with being a Hypno, he never had to deal with this situation. Was this what they regularly had to go through? The rangers. Why were they here? Was this a raid? What did the Hypno do to them to deserve this?

“Jung, not you too.” Jeanne knelt down and grabbed his shoulders.”Pull yourself together.”

Jung didn’t respond. He tried to. Whatever words he had for this situation only came out as random sounds. But he knew he needed to act. He managed to give her one tiny nod.

“Can you stand?” she asked. He supported himself up by using the wall, though his feet felt like clay again. “I need you to come with me. Can you fight?”

“F-fight?” he spluttered, “no, I swore I wouldn’t—”

“Tough shit.” She grit her teeth. “We’re outnumbered. We need to stop those guys otherwise we’re all gonna be captured.”

“But—”

Jeanne pinned him against the wall.

“D’you think they’re gonna stop? We’re Hypno! I can barely get through to ‘em myself, but you speak human all the time, don’t you?”

Jung blinked. He started to see what her approach was. “Yes.”

“Then talk to ‘em. Tell ‘em what’s really happening.”

“But how if they’re fighting the others—”

I don’t know how — I’ll make a distraction or somethin’, but we need to get their attention first. So will you help me?”

Her gaze could’ve turned him to stone. He didn’t want to stay in the dorms and hide. But he didn’t want to go either. What would Jung contribute? He was a writer, not a fighter. They would outnumber him in seconds. What was the alternative? Turn tail and abandon everyone? There was no way he could do that, not after getting to know them for a day. So, steeling his resolve, Jung took a deep breath.

“Yes, okay.”

“Good.” She slapped his shoulder. “Now follow me.”

He tailed Jeanne, following closely behind her. Each step Jung took into the hallway made him want to throw up. Everything was so dark except for the flashlights and the purple and orange flashes of attacks coming from the front. Sounds came from the lounge room. Something banged, smashed and clinked against the walls.

“Get out!” Brie screamed. “Stop bothering us!”

Jung was about to run when Jeanne stopped him. They continued traipsing towards the hallway as that awful banging and clanging continued. Then Brie screamed from afar. Something thumped against the floor.

“Oh god, what are they doing to him?” Jung whisper-shouted, only to get shhed by Jeanne. Another flashlight pierced through the darkness of the hallway. Jung froze. Where could he hide? What could he do? He couldn’t hide. They had Pokemon. They would sniff them out. Oh god, he was dead. They were gonna die.

Jeanne held out her hand. She lifted a loose floorboard with her telekinesis and flung it against the source of the light. The person holding it grunted. Then a Houndoom slipped out, sprinting towards them with bared fangs that emitted smoke.

Jung fell backwards as he flinched at the rapidly approaching dog, but Jeanne dove in and punched the Houndoom in the jaw with a glowing fist. He lost balance and fell to the floor, groaning in pain.

Wow, she could certainly pack a mean punch. Focus Punch, perhaps?

They didn’t have time to savour that victory as a black ball of energy exploded in Jeanne’s face, blasting her across the hallway. It came from a Gengar who popped out from the shadowy ceiling.

Oh, so they had Gengar too. Great. Just great.

Everything was happening so fast. Jung was useless here. Why couldn’t he fight? Come on, do something!

S…stop,” he croaked. It fell on deaf ears as several rangers ran towards Jeanne, throwing an Ultra Ball at her. With a white flash of energy, she disappeared. In the midst of this ranger rush, everyone ignored Jung. Why? Weren’t they going to capture him too? No, wait, he was already assigned to a Pokeball; that wouldn’t work. So what did he have to lose?

Jung stood up, clenching his fists.

Stop.”

He spoke so quietly that nobody heard him, but standing up got their attention as a couple of the rangers bolted towards him. He held out his pendulum, hoping to dissuade them, but he was cornered — Gengar to his left where the lounge room was, another Houndoom to his right where the other end of the hallway stood. He recognised that Houndoom. Fabian’s Houndoom. Oh god, he was here too? His hand shook as he gripped his coin. This wasn’t going to end well for him.

A yellow blur zipped into the room. A black bolt descended upon it with gnashing teeth. Screaming.

The Houndoom’s fangs sank into Drip’s arm.

No.

They didn’t.

Who would do something like this?

“Reg, stop!” Fabian yelled, diving in to get that stinking dog back in his Pokeball, away from that helpless Drowzee. Everyone stopped to witness this unfolding. The rangers halted. The Pokemon stopped charging. They forgot about Jung. Drip’s agonised cries flooded the room as he clutched his mangled arm, flailing and shouting. All that escaped his mouth were incoherent screeches of pure, unfiltered agony.

That was no mere bite. That was an attempt on Drip’s life. The life of a child.

This… No. Jung couldn’t accept that.

Wouldn’t accept that.

Unacceptable.

Jung rushed into the fray. Hands raised to grab that ranger. Jung pounced on his back. Put his fingers to his temple. The pendulum was just a vessel, not the source of one’s power. Jung had that power in him all along. As soon as it happened, his mind linked with Fabian’s.

What? his mind yelled. What happened?

I happened. I’m sorry. Now, walk up to your teammates and speak to them through me.

I… Okay…


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(art by inkls)​

Jung jumped off the human and joined Drip, shielding him from whatever would come next. The other rangers stared as Jung flicked his wrist, as if conducting an invisible orchestra. One step. Two steps. Fabian glowed white with the onslaught of torches illuminating his body. Jung raised his hand. Fabian raised his hand.

What are you doing?” Both of them said. “This… I’m utterly appalled by this. You have harmed an innocent child. A child.” The Drowzee’s cries weakened into sniffles. “His name’s Drip. We Hypno give each other names too, just like you. He likes bonbons, he has a family, and he has dreams, just like any kid would. Whatever reason you have for invading his home, this is absolutely barbaric.

The rangers spoke in hushed tones. Their Pokemon stared at their feet.

Do I have your attention now?” Jung pointed to himself. Fabian pointed at Jung. “I can speak the human tongue. We don’t need this pointless violence or this farce. I won’t attack if you won’t, all I want to do is talk.”

Jung laid his hand on his heart. Fabian laid his hand on his heart. He awaited their response. One of the rangers, the one who commanded the Gengar, stepped forward and nodded. Then the rest nodded as well. Jung still kept his distance from the human he hypnotised — he forced him to rejoin the group before he would sever the mental link.

Thanks for letting me use your body, even though you didn’t have a choice.

Okay… where was I? You… I recognise you. You just hypnotised me.

I did what I had to do to protect my kind. I’m sure you understand.

I think I do… oh god, what’ve I done?

That’s enough. Go back.


Jung released his grip on those invisible strings, handing Fabian’s mind back to his body. That ranger collapsed into the arms of another, clearly overwhelmed by what he just experienced. Drip licked his wounds, trying to mitigate whatever damage that mongrel dealt him. Jung sharply turned back.

Oh, for Pete’s sake, help the poor kid already! Do none of you morons have a potion on you?!”

One of the rangers immediately went to Drip’s side, only to get more screams in response. Drip backed up against the wall, burying his head in his lap, whimpering all the while. Jung wanted to take that potion and shove it down that human’s throat. Instead, Jung snatched it off of him with no quarrel and took matters into his own hands, gently taking Drip’s bad arm. Drip only nodded — still not in a speaking state, and who could blame him? He allowed Jung to spray him down, which made him wince with the stinging sensation, but quickly healed his wounds. Once that was done. Drip didn’t move. He continued curling up into a ball, even shutting out Jung’s attempts to console him.

Jung wanted to help him right away, but he needed to explain his business to the rangers. He presented himself before the team and straightened his dirty, tattered longcoat, retrieving an ID from the wallet in his pocket.

My name’s Jung Hypno, junior therapist at Anistar. I’m not a part of this dwelling. I only came here because I’d heard a bunch of Hypno were caught up in this kidnapping fracas. People back home thought I had something to do with it, and I got harassed, so I wanted to prove beyond the shadow of a doubt that my kind wasn’t responsible for this nonsense. Which they’re not.” He gestured to Drip. “In fact, they’re the victims of this as well, not the perpetrators as you’ve most likely been informed. I assume that’s why you all came here.”

“We…” Fabian started. “That’s what the commissioner told us, yeah. That this was high priority and that if we saw any Hypno, we would take them all back for questioning. And the first Hypno we saw tried to force us away, so we assumed there was a reason for it.”

That was probably Moony.

But you automatically assumed this was their wrongdoing.” Jung sighed, pointing to the Ultra Balls on the belts of the rangers. “You captured them without giving them a say first. If you spoke to them instead of trying to fight them on sight, then none of this would’ve happened.”

“But—” the ranger commanding the Gengar interrupted—”they’re not supposed to be here either, this is private—”

Shut up, you halfwit. These Hypno have nowhere else to go, because everyone has rejected them. Where else are they going to stay other than an abandoned building where no one can bother them?”

“Then why were they seen near the hotspot?”

Because Drip’s brother is missing!” Jung didn’t care if he shouted, he was completely done with this. “They were all out there, looking to find him, not kidnap him! Are all of you really this dense? Just ask any of the Hypno you captured what they were doing out there!

That disarmed him for now. Another fished out one of the Ultra Balls and drew it out. Jeanne emerged from the white light, on her knees, about to raise her hand when Jung stopped her.

No, Jeanne, it’s alright!” he called. “They won’t fight you anymore, they just want to talk.”

Jeanne blinked at Jung. He couldn’t tell what went through her head then. “What do they want?” she whispered through clenched teeth.

Tell them what your situation is. About Drip’s brother disappearing. Why you’re here.”

Jeanne closed her eyes. She looked as if she was about to collapse in Jung’s arms. But she sat up and faced the ranger team.

I…” she spoke in human as well. “We… live here. With each other. We don’t hunt. Don’t go out. Know not to bug humans. Droop’s missing. We looked. Couldn’t find him. Gone. Drip…”

Drip crawled to Jeanne’s side, hugging her for comfort. She saw the dried blood on his arm and stood up, holding him in one hand, raising the other.

You bastards! What did you do to him?!”

Jeanne!” Jung yelled, blocking her view. “Don’t!”

“Give me one good reason! We’ve stayed in our own lane this whole time, and these monsters come in and treat us like animals! They’re the animals!”

“You won’t get through to them like this!” He dropped his human act. “Please, for Drip’s sake, let’s save the fight for later — I don’t know how much more this poor boy can take.”

Drip buried himself in her neck tufts. He seemed so peaceful there. Jeanne glanced at him and lowered her hand.

Look. Search this place.” She gestured to the rest of the building. “You… you’ll find nothing. Just books. And blankets. And cake… we made some earlier. Brie’s good. A good cook. Just… don’t…” Her face crumpled up. “Don’t take this from us. Please…”

Jeanne dropped to her knees, sobbing into Drip’s head. Jung tried to save his tears for now, looking at the rest of the ranger team. They wore a mix of reactions on their faces — some detached, some guilty-looking, some even started rubbing their eyes. He hoped this was enough to ward them away. They started talking amongst themselves. Varied whispers of ‘what should we do?’, ‘do we take them back?’, ‘do we leave them be?’, and all of that. Then Fabian stepped up, clutching his arm.

“We’ll search the place. That’s what we should’ve done to begin with, but in the meantime, we need you all to cooperate. And while we search, we’ll heal up everyone, then we want you to tell us everything that’s happened. When this Drowzee went missing, what all of you have been up to in the meantime, everything. Does that sound agreeable, Jung and, er, Jeanne?”

Her ears perked up at the mention of her name, as did Jung’s. So he did listen after all. Jeanne dried her eyes and nodded, handing Drip back to Jung. The Drowzee didn’t settle as easily as he did in Jeanne’s embrace, but at least he wasn’t crying. For now.



The next moment went by quickly yet slowly all the same. The rangers picked up a portable healing station from one of their vans outside and patched up everyone they captured, including Drip for good measure. Despite this, Drip still wouldn’t talk, and wouldn’t leave Jeanne’s side either, shaking in her arms.

Once they finished up, they gathered all of the Hypno outside, releasing them one by one while explaining the new situation to them. It was a miracle none of them retaliated against the rangers, though they would’ve been justified. Most bizarrely of all, Hoothoot entered the scene, shambling out of the doorway. He saw the commotion and tilted his head.

“What’s going on?” he said, scratching his beard.

“Oh, hey, I wondered where you were.” Jeanne grumbled. “Could’ve used your help earlier, you know.”

“I’m a heavy sleeper! And yes, I saw all of the ruckus in the living room. So these humans really tore up the place, didn’t they?”

“Yeah.” Jeanne sighed, grabbing his arm to help walk him to the group of Hypno. “Just talk to them, though, and they’ll leave us alone.”

“Well, yes, I should think so!”

One by one, they all recounted their stories. Jung recalled visiting the dwelling under Moony’s supervision, as well as what he did there and how the Hypno made him feel at home. He didn’t mention the dream-eating stuff. While Drip couldn’t speak about his experiences, the other Hypno and Drowzee chipped in, telling them when his brother went missing, where he was last seen, and where they looked to try and find him.

“Just out of curiosity,” the Gengar’s trainer started, “why didn’t you report this to the police or one of us?”

Brie stomped forward and shouted at them all, though it fell on deaf ears. It was Jung’s turn to translate, though he had to paraphrase and leave out all the insults.

He said: ‘Isn’t that obvious? You people hate us. Do you really think we were gonna come up and tell you? That’s suicide!’”

The trainer tried to speak, but ended up cutting himself off. Hoothoot stepped up next, speaking through Jung.

You humans have to understand that our kind has faced resistance wherever we’ve gone. We’ve been chased out of our homes. We’ve been hunted by wild Pokemon just by virtue of being Hypno. Trainers will seldom take any Hypno in. There are all sorts of other superstitions both humans and Pokemon have about us.

Drowzee fare a little better in your world, and some trainers bond with them, but once they evolve into Hypno, a lot of them are no longer wanted. They’re released back into the wild, sometimes to their demise, without the humans really knowing their struggles or wanting to understand them.”

One of the rangers shifted positions, nursing his temple.

I’ve seen it all happen in my life as a Hypno, and more. I’ve lived for as long as you rangers probably have, perhaps even longer. So, can I ask, do all of you rangers see us as vermin? Pokemon to be cast aside and forgotten about?”

The ranger team turned to look at each other. They didn’t seem to have an answer for that from the blank and puzzled expressions on their faces.

Alright, I’ll make it simpler for you.” Hoothoot raised his paw. “Raise your hands if you’ve ever met a Hypno before tonight.”

Out of the dozen or so rangers there, none of them had their hands up.

Right, I see. You don’t know us, so how can you even judge us for what we do?” Hoothoot closed his eyes. “Of course, we know about the Dreamdivers too, so even I can see cause in your fearmongering, but we are not them. That’s all I have to say.”

Hoothoot sat down on the rocky floor, supported by Jeanne. Silence followed. Only the chirping birds, the susurration of the branches and the wind whistling through the cracks in the building filled the void. His stomach ached again. The thought that so many Pokemon, none of which did anything wrong, could be subdued that easily made his blood curdle. And all for those humans to back away so easily...

This never should’ve happened. How did it happen? Did they happen to spot Moony on a leisurely stroll? Was this planned? It must’ve been if there were so many rangers coming in.

Or what if Jung’s intrusion alerted them all to their hideout?

He’d never be able to live with himself if he was responsible for driving them out of their homes. But he had to know.

Ahem.” Jung glanced at Moony, who slept soundly curled up in her impromptu cape. “So, I assume you caught Moony first. How did you spot her?”

“We didn’t,” Fabian said. “She must’ve spotted us. She tried to hypnotise our team.”

Jung looked to the rest of the Hypno, who didn’t bat an eye at this confession. Although he hated rudely awakening someone, Jung pulled the blanket from beneath her, stirring her from her slumber.

“Lemme sleep,” she groaned, rubbing her eyes. “I had such a good nap.”

“Moony, please, tell me, did you try to hypnotise them all?”

“I only wanted those dummies to turn back. I wasn’t gonna drive them off a cliff or anything. That’s what I’ve done with humans in the past, just make them go about their day as if nothing happened, no harm no foul. I’ve done it before with groups and we’ve been fine.”

“But hypnotising them all at once? How powerful are you?”

“I told you I can put up a fight.” Moony closed her eyes again. “Is that all?”

“Yes, that’s all.”

“Alright, see you in the morning then.”

And just like that, she fell back to sleep, snoring and kicking at the air in the midst of a dream that tasted like marshmallows and mooncakes. It sounded like she needed the rest. Jung relayed this back to the ranger group.

“Aw, jeez, that’s all?” A younger ranger stepped up. “I nearly crapped my pants, I thought she was gonna kill us.”

Well, now you know she had no intention of doing so. But before that, you were planning on coming here anyway. What drove you to this spot?”

“We followed you.”

Jung’s heart stopped. He suspected the worst, but he still wanted to believe otherwise. The instant he said that, he felt the eyes of the other Hypno group boring into him, aside from Jeanne, Brie and Hoothoot. But which ranger alerted the team to their presence? The only person he could think of was—

Fabian, did you tell them?”

“Yes.”

Right. Of course. Just like the heat of the Houndoom’s breath, a fire stirred in Jung’s belly. Fabian, that snake. Jung didn’t have the energy to snap at him right now, so he tempered the flames within him.

So you suspected me after all.”

“Well, yes. I admit, I still wasn’t that convinced, but you seemed good enough at hiding it, whatever you were doing. And I needed to know about the Hypno. Hell, we were told to follow any trace of their whereabouts, so we didn’t have much say in the matter — any clues about the kidnapper were better than none. And my Houndoom sniffed you out, finding you in that building.” Fabian sighed. “Sorry, it was nothing personal.”

Jung wasn’t entirely convinced either. But never mind. He just wanted this whole ordeal to be over.

So, what happens now?”

After the ranger team briefly huddled, Fabian stepped forward.

“We don’t know. We were told to clear you all out, but we found nothing suspicious in the building, so I don’t feel like it’s right to give you the boot. You are, however, still trespassing on private property since this is a heritage site.”

Jung didn’t have time for this. “And nearly ripping a poor Drowzee’s arm off is an act of severe misconduct — you are responsible for controlling what your team does. This is assault, no matter whether it’s done to a human or a Pokemon.”

Fabian blinked, nursing his Houndoom’s Pokeball.

“We’ll continue this later once I report back to the rangers at the top. Until then, you’re all free to stay here.” The group of Hypno let out a collective sigh of relief. “Not only that, we’ll tell them about the missing Drowzee and we’ll do everything we can to try and find him. We have dozens of cases like this, so we’re not going to abandon them.”

Jung didn’t know how useful they’d be. But the Hypno were finally given a voice, which still mattered.

“And, er, Jung, you live in Anistar, right? We’re reporting back there in the morning anyway, so we can drop you off if you want. How does that sound?”

Jung looked back to Drip, who sat, rocking back and forth. Jeanne looked like she had something to say to him. The rest of the Hypno glared at him. Jung knew he had overstayed his welcome, but he couldn’t leave that child like this. Now he had time away from dealing with the rangers, he could focus on bringing Drip back to earth.

Do you mind waiting a little while?” Jung asked the rangers. “I need to check on the Drowzee quickly, make sure he’s okay after— you know, that happened.

He spoke the last part with a lick of venom to his voice. None of them chose to argue with him. Jung worked his way through the gathering. Everyone had their eyes on him. He was about to approach Drip when one Hypno blocked his way and grabbed his coat by the collar.

“Do you know what you’ve done?” he spat. “We all got along fine until you came here! What are you, some human in Hypno’s clothing?”

“Hey hey hey!” Jeanne stepped in between the two. “If Moony thought he was gonna be trouble, she wouldn’t have let him in!”

“I don’t care about that. I just want him gone — the sooner we get them out of here, the better.”

Jung took a deep breath. It wasn’t personal. “I don’t plan on staying here much longer, but I can’t in good conscience leave if Drip’s in shock.”

“Eh, he’ll be fine, it’s just a matter of time.”

“But I’m trained to deal with situations like this. I’ve dealt with Pokemon who have gone through heaps of trauma, and this is a highly traumatic accident for someone like him.” Jung brought his hands together. “And it’s the least I can do after all of this mess I caused.”

“No, Jung, you haven’t done anything wrong.” Jeanne’s ears drooped. She shooed the other Hypno away, who seemed to drop the argument, and she led him to Drip. Jung knelt down to meet him.

“Alright, Drip. I’m sorry about everything that’s happened, but I need you to cooperate with me.” Jung gently grasped his paws. “Can you understand what I’m saying?”

He’d said this in an especially slow and gentle tone. Thankfully, Drip nodded.

“Okay. Now, focus on your surroundings. Take note of what you see. What the ground feels like beneath your feet. What my hands feel like. What smells are in the air. How cold the wind feels against your fur.”

Drip’s eyes moved around, gradually looking from left to right, down at his feet, up to the sky, then back to Jung.

“Alright. Focus on your breathing. Try to relax. Sit down if you must. Breathe with me, like one, two, three, like this, see?”

Jung held his breath for three seconds, puffing up his chest, then letting it all out. Drip did the same with his shaky breaths, one two three, then exhaled. They repeated the process numerous times, and throughout each time, Drip felt more animated. He didn’t move so stiffly. He breathed in and out with more vitality. Even then, he still wouldn’t talk. What would bring him down to earth? Some food? Did they have any? Oh, right, he remembered!

“Brie,” Jung said, “can you get that plate you saved for him, please? I think it will help.”

Brie rushed in and out of the building, bringing out the samples of madeleines and cheese for Drip to try. He remained by Jung’s side as he handed him one of the cakes.

“He made this, by the way.” Jung held it on the flat of his palm. “It was an experiment, but it’s something you might like, anyway.”

Drip sniffed and prodded at the cake. He inspected it, then cautiously brought it up to his mouth and took a bite. Small chomps. He hummed and took the rest, then picked at more of his plate. Drip took one piece, then another, then crammed the rest in his mouth, chewing with increased vigour.

And then Drip burst into tears, bawling into Jung’s chest. The other Hypno continuing eyeing him, possibly not understanding Drip’s outburst of emotion — Jung didn’t entirely know if it was positive or negative yet.

“I’m—” Drip blubbered. “I’m sorry, I was so scared and wanted to help but that—that Houndoom… he’s—”

“Ssh, ssh, it’s alright.” Jung started sniffling too. “He’s gone now. They won’t hurt you anymore. You’re fine.”

Jung gave Drip the time he needed to let it all out, after hours of agonising silence. It took a moment before Drip finally calmed down, drying his eyes. Some of the other Hypno and Drowzee joined him, kneeling by his side to make sure he was okay. He smiled in their presence.

“How do you feel now?” Jung asked.

Drip glanced at the other rangers, then hid behind the Hypno crowd again. “I’m still a bit scared. But I’ll be fine. I think.”

“Right. Make sure to get plenty of rest.” Jung handed the rest of the plate over to him. “There’s more there. I don’t know if you’re a fan of blue cheese, but if you need some comfort food, it’s there.”

“Yeah, okay.” Before he took the plate back, Drip hugged Jung one last time, and Jung carefully embraced him, trying not to drop any of his food. Finally, Drip took his share and went back to the Drowzee and Hypno.

What a relief. Well, it remained to be seen since he didn’t know how it would feel long term. But at least now, Drip seemed stable. Now it was time to face the music with the other Hypno he’d intruded on. He met Jeanne, Brie and Hoothoot again, who all huddled together. Jung stared at his feet, unable to look them in the eye.

“I’m sorry—”

“Ah, come off it, Jung.” Jeanne smiled. “If it hadn’t been for you, we’d all be in the slammer. Or whatever they have for Pokemon.”

“I would’ve faced them off myself.” Hoothoot scratched his beard. “I can lift cars off the ground.”

“You missed your chance to show off, gramps.”

“I know, curse my old age.” Hoothoot embraced Jung, rubbing his back. “Thank you for helping us, and for the tasty nightmares. You’re always welcome here.”

Jung had waited so long to hear those words from anyone. He’d never had this level of hospitality before from a group of complete strangers, except maybe a few of his patients. But this was different, much closer. Brie joined in the huddle, ruffling Jung’s ears.

“I’ll keep making those madeleines. I swear, they’re going to be really good by the time you get back.”

“So you don’t mind that an outsider almost forced you out of your home?”

Brie shrugged. “I mean, I do, kind of, but you also got them to back off a little, so it balances out. It’ll be much easier to get in and out with anyone bothering me.”

“And I bet Moony will get a bit more rest,” Jeanne said, eyeing the drowsy Hypno.

“I’ll take that, then.” Jung stepped back and bowed before them. “Thank you all for making this a pleasant day, I wish we got to spend more time together under better circumstances.”

They all waved him goodbye, but before Jung turned back, Hoothoot cleared his throat.

“Remember to take it easy. You don’t need to be so hard on yourself.”

“I’ll try not to.” He didn’t know how much of it would stick. Jung needed to work, and the wellbeing of his patients mattered above all else. These nightmares would just sort themselves out on their own.
 
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Heyyy chapter five! Let's go.

Jeanne knelt down and grabbed his shoulders.”Pull yourself together.”

Missing space.

“F-fight?” he spluttered, “no, I swore I wouldn’t—”

This looked a bit odd punctuation wise... it might be something you can do and I just didn't know, but it's odd.

“We’re outnumbered. We need to stop those guys otherwise we’re all gonna be captured.”

The second sentence could do with some punctuation, I think.

Jeanne pinned him against the wall.

“D’you think they’re gonna stop? We’re Hypno! I can barely get through to ‘em myself, but you speak human all the time, don’t you?”

Jung blinked. He started to see what her approach was. “Yes.”

“Then talk to ‘em. Tell ‘em what’s really happening.”

This exchange was very weird to me - Jeanne starts her line like "they will never listen to us, we're Hypno" and ends it like "hey Jung you know how to speak human, can you talk to them?" in basically the same breath. I think it either needs to start differently or have a pause in the middle where Jeanne realizes that Jung can be of help.

“But how if they’re fighting the others—”

I don’t know how — I’ll make a distraction or somethin’, but we need to get their attention first. So will you help me?”

Missing opening quote in the second line.

only to get shhed by Jeanne.

This looked a bit weird. "Shushed" would be more familiar.

Then a Houndoom slipped out, sprinting towards them with bared fangs that emitted smoke.

This wording kinda makes me wonder how they're emitting that smoke. Is it like a smoky Fire Fang?

Jung fell backwards as he flinched at the rapidly approaching dog, but Jeanne dove in and punched the Houndoom in the jaw with a glowing fist.

immediate vision in my minds eye

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A yellow blur zipped into the room. A black bolt descended upon it with gnashing teeth. Screaming.

The Houndoom’s fangs sank into Drip’s arm.

No.

ALL YOU HAD TO DO WAS STAY IN THE DAMN BED DRIP

One of the rangers immediately went to Drip’s side, only to get more screams in response. Drip backed up against the wall, burying his head in his lap, whimpering all the while.

This is a really heartwrenching scene but I'm also thinking that Drip sounds like a squealing pig and laughing about it.

Jung gave Drip the time he needed to let it all out, after hours of agonising silence.

"Hours" is exaggeration, right? I didn't think of it as such as first, which made me pause for a bit.

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General Comments

I have to admit that I didn't remember Fabian by name as it had been a while since I read the chapter he was in. I don't know if that effect is the same for someone that would read the chapters a shorter time apart, but it might be good to have a small reminder of who he was as he's brought up.

Very freakin hype to see Jung use hypnotism. It's creepy and weird even when done for good purposes and without harm, so I totally see why he doesn't want to do that.

I really like the stuff with Drip here. Poor boy. And I like that the madeleines become relevant - it makes what was a kind of fluff-y scene have more relevance to the story.

Towards the end, I wondered for a bit if this was actually the last chapter as it had the vibe of an ending, but of course I still feel like there are things to address, like Jung's aversion to dream eating and the whole kidnappings thing... though I don't know if the latter is within the scope of this story. Anyway, it just has me wondering where we are in the story between the beginning and the end.

That's it for my thoughts! Good stuff as always, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
 
Chapter 6 - Half Awake

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Well, thanks for reading and staying along for this wild ride! This is the most fun I’ve had with writing fanfic in a while, and getting back into it made me realise how much I love the process.

Dreamdiver will probably be my main fic project from here on out, so please stay tuned for more chapters at some point. I’ll probably experiment with shorter stories next since this was quite a big one. Without further ado, here's the final chapter of The Sleep of Reason Producers Monsters!

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Chapter 6: Half Awake

The ride back home was the longest half hour of Jung’s life. He didn’t like riding in cars in general as the motion sickness gave him headaches, but since he was seated in the back of a police car, he felt like a criminal. If everybody saw him like this, they probably thought he was one.

An officer drove at the front, though she kept silent for most of the journey. At one point, she mumbled to herself as if she wanted to say something, but then dropped it. A pregnant silence followed, broken ten minutes or so later by a phone call.

“Hello?” she spoke into her earpiece. “Yeah, I’m almost done with my shift.” She sighed. “I’ll tell you what happened later, but it was rough.”

Someone else spoke, though it came out as muffled through the speaker. If he had to guess, the caller was the officer’s partner. “No, I’m fine, we’re all fine. I guess it went better than expected”—her gaze darted to the front mirror that reflected Jung—“though I think we all screwed up here, if I’m being honest.”

Jung’s gaze darted to the window — he tried not to react too much to what she said.

“No,” she continued, “not much closer to figuring out what’s going on. Uh huh. Oh, cool, can’t go wrong with pasta! You have some wicked cooking hands, I swear. Can’t wait to try it...”

They went back and forth for a few minutes, pretending as if Jung wasn’t there but clearly acknowledging his presence regardless. They talked more about leftover dinners, how their days went, and how the kids were. Jung squirmed in his seat, feeling like a third wheel even though it was none of his business.

Once they arrived in Anistar, the officer put her partner on hold as she focused on the road.

“Is this the place?” she asked Jung, pointing to Anistar’s Therapy Centre For Pokemon.

Jung nodded.

“Alright then, you’re free to step out of the car.”

Thank you,” he said, trying to hide his disdain through that friendly voice of his.

“Oh, and stay safe.”

He nodded and shut the door behind him. After she drove off, Jung took a detour afterwards to the nearest convenience store, stuffing a whole basket full of snacks for dinner — a consolation prize to himself for dealing with this whole omnishambles. He would’ve liked a cake, but the bakery was shut, so this would have to do for now.

As Jung walked back home, chomping on a chocolate bar with peanuts, he suddenly realised how quiet it was around this time. Streetlights flickered above. Only one or two cars passed by the road. The odd Pokemon occasionally howled or screeched in the distance. And people on the other end of the road stared at him as well. How much further away was the clinic again? Right, just two minutes. His ears pricked up. Jung checked behind him. He thought he heard footsteps, but there was no one there. Thank God.

Finally, he got back. It was always eerily quiet at night with its faint orange glow indoors and the hums of electricity, with the occasional shuffling of footsteps from the night staff. Or disquieting, depending on how rowdy the inpatients were. Jung headed straight for his office. It only just dawned on him how much he missed this room with its plush double bed, his plushies, the views from the window, his stash of snacks in various nooks and crannies, and his desk. Then again, it was his home.

He only realised how sad that sounded when he thought about it — living in this office. He had wanted to get an apartment, but he had no references, and no landlord would ever let a Hypno take up a tenancy. Well, Pokemon in general seldom did, but he had a fat chance.

He made that cup of tea he picked out from Liliane’s shop. It soothed his soul, as he expected. Jung flopped down on his bed. He felt tired. So tired. He had another free day tomorrow, so he had plenty of time to catch up on his sleep debt. Jung buried himself in his duvet and succumbed to his fatigue.



“Jung? No, no no no, get them away from me! PLEASE, STOP THEM! STOP BITING ME! STOP—”



He didn’t have a good night’s sleep as planned. Not even the tea helped. All he had was the image of Drip’s mangled arm, following him into his dreams and back into reality. He couldn’t believe this happened. To a child. And yes, it was an accident, but there was no excuse for it.

Jung tossed and turned in bed, burying his head under the pillow to try and smother those thoughts. But they wouldn’t leave him. How could they? There was so much he wanted to say to Fabian, so much he wanted to do to him. He wanted to fire him. Not only that, he wanted to humiliate him so badly that he’d never show his face in public again. He wanted to strangle him. Make him feel what Drip felt. And even that would be a fraction of the pain he deserved for letting a Drowzee come to harm.

Jung needed a walk. But it was so early. Who knew what would happen to him if he went out at this hour? Everyone in town hated him. He had no one to talk to at this time either. The patients needed to sleep. Amelie was asleep. Jet was asleep. And he needed to sleep. And he couldn’t. He was all alone. Alone. Alone.

Jung stood up, stomped to his computer desk, and dug into the drawers until he found the box of Somnifera. His last resort. He popped a pill out of the casing, got a glass of water, and shakily raised the pill to his mouth. Whatever happened from here, well, he didn’t care, he was too tired to care anymore.

Swallowed.



Jung slept like a baby. So much so, in fact, he had trouble getting out of bed. His body felt like lead. The side effects said to expect drowsiness afterwards. Hopefully, once the day started, he would have more energy to spare. Except he didn’t. Even as the sunlight shining through the blinds streamed on his face, he wouldn’t stir. But strangely, he felt fine. Yesterday’s events were behind him.

But then they came crashing forward again when the door knocked.

“Jung, it’s me,” Amelie called. “I know I’d usually call or email you, but the police told me about what happened last night since I was the closest emergency contact. Are you okay?”

He didn’t respond.

“Sorry, I’m coming in, alright?”

A creak. Door shut. Footsteps. Jung shifted the blanket away, revealing himself before her. She always looked so full of energy. He didn’t know how she did it. When she locked eyes with Jung, that energetic expression fell.

“Did you get any sleep at all, Jung?” she asked.

Yes.” He let out a massive yawn. “At last.”

“And you still look tired. Good thing you’ve got the day off again.” She went to pull up a chair when she glanced at the desk. “Sleeping pills? I’d be really careful with those if I were you.”

I know, I’ll try.” Jung lied.

Amelie grabbed the seat and sat beside him. They stared at each other for a moment, not saying anything. Finally, Jung mustered up the strength to sit up, facing her at eye level.

How much do you know?”

“They told me about the raid. How you stopped it. How they settled things afterwards. They might want to contact me for further questions about you, so I gave them my details.”

Right. Do they need anything else from me?”

“You gave them your account last night, so no.” Her expression was hard to read. Then her lip tugged. “Jung, you should’ve told me you were planning on going there.”

I know.” He sighed. It was too early for this. “I’m sorry, it was irresponsible, and if I knew they would’ve done, well, that, I never would’ve put myself at that much risk.”

“It’s alright, I’m just saying. If anything were to happen to you, that would be a huge loss for us. And me.” Amelie frowned. ”Though a raid on a Hypno dwelling...”

That was the understatement of the century. Jung took a deep breath. “Did they tell you that a Houndoom almost bit a Drowzee’s arm off?”

She blinked. “No.”

I saw it happen before my own eyes.” Jung sat up, legs hanging over the edge of the bed. “They were closing in on us. They apparently weren’t trying to harm anyone. Apparently. That Drowzee ran in — he was terrified, by the way. He probably wanted to help. Or see what was going on since he had to hide beforehand. He must’ve spooked the Houndoom, but that wasn’t his fault.” His shoulders slumped.

He cried and screamed through the pain. Even after they healed him, he wouldn’t talk. I had to do a little work off the clock to help him snap out of his fugue. Need I mention his brother was kidnapped, when the reason why they invaded their home in the first place was to investigate the kidnappings?”

Amelie dug her nails into her trousers. “That’s… they only mentioned that someone got hurt, but didn’t mention how or why.”

He didn’t have the energy to be upset. Not right now. Instead, Jung slumped out of bed and slowly walked to his desk where his empty glass of water lay. He stared for a moment. Then, he threw it across the room, which shattered against the wall. He thought it would’ve made him feel better. It didn’t.

Amelie’s chair squeaked against the floor as she bolted upright.

“We need to complain to them.” Amelie’s tone was severe. “What was the name of the Houndoom’s trainer?”

Why does it matter?” Jung nursed his forehead. “What’s the point? They’re not going to care about us. If they didn’t have the decency to admit it to you, then what makes you think they’ll take our complaints seriously?”

“We need to try. Of course, we can’t fix everything, but we’ve had to step in for other Pokemon when trainers were abusing them. We have a say when people put Pokemon at risk.”

“You have a say. Humans have a say. We don’t.

“Still, if we don’t say something, they might be able to harm other Pokemon, especially Hypno, without recourse.”

Right.” Jung crept back to bed and slumped onto the mattress. “I’m just so sick of this. I can’t go out without fearing for my safety, or mind my own business without someone harassing me in some shape or form. A trainer hit me with a Pokeball because he thought I was responsible.”

“You can’t let them win.” Amelie closed her eyes and sighed. “Whatever you do, do not let the bastards grind you down.”

I’ve tried that, I keep trying that, but that doesn’t change people’s minds. I mean, I’m a resident of Anistar at this point, and I still don’t feel safe here.” He held his head in his hands. “None of this is fair.

Amelie had no immediate reply for that. What could she say that would remedy the situation? She didn’t know what it was like, personally speaking. He breathed in and out, in and out. Venom rose in his throat, threatening to spill like wine reaching the brim of a glass. This all started with those hack journalists — everyone in Anistar must’ve read those papers.

Wait, did the news say anything about the raid? He gathered the energy to slump back to his computer desk, logged in, then browsed the same pages he did yesterday. He stumbled upon the same article as before, ‘Police send out search party for missing Pokemon’, except there was no picture of Hypno on the front page, only an image of a clearing. In the body of the article, the previous mentions of Hypno were all scrubbed out, until the last paragraph:

‘A candle of Hypno and Drowzee affected by the incident were questioned about the kidnappings, and they reported that one of their young, a Drowzee, went missing around the same time as the other Pokemon. No further leads have been found.’

Jung slumped onto his chair and sighed. That was… better than nothing, he supposed. It omitted a lot about how poorly the Hypno were treated, but at least they were vindicated now — a chocolate chip in a sundae of Tauros crap. Whether that had any influence on the general public of Anistar remained to be seen.

“Well?” Amelie asked from across the office.

They’ve now posted updated information on the kidnappings, so I think they did some damage control there.” Jung closed his eyes. “Nothing about what the police or rangers did that night.

“I’ll stand by what I said, what they did was unacceptable.” Amelie stood up, typing something into her phone — probably taking notes. “I’m going to see what I can do to help, contact the authorities, get back to the police that called me, anything I can do off the clock.”

It still stung that Jung felt so powerless to change anything here. Still, chocolate chip in Tauros crap. And in truth, he couldn’t sit by and do nothing. His actions had to have some consequences to them — yesterday was proof enough of that.

I’ll do anything I can to help as well — well, I must. It’s my mess. What do you think I should do for now?

“Relax, if you can. Watch a film, spend all day in bed, or better yet, go outside and take a breather.”

Jung took a deep breath. “I know it’s probably best to get some fresh air, but I don’t know if I can go out after yesterday. I don’t know if I can take any more of people’s crap.

“I don’t know what to suggest to change their minds, as much as I wish I could. But if you’re just going about your day, then, pardon my Kalosan, fuck what other people think. You deserve to feel at home here.”

I know. At least, I know that in my head.” Jung stared at the closed blinds. It was such a lovely day out there, though it always was in Anistar. Constant sunshine, the sloshing of the sea around him. He would accomplish nothing by moping around all day. Jung coursed his hand through his fur — it was all dusty and unkempt. And hairs stuck to his hand as well, so it was shedding season. Either that or he was stressed. In any case, he needed some TLC.



His first port of call was to get a nice trim. Jung reluctantly exited the clinic, fully clothed this time, and weaved through the various streets and avenues of Anistar. He still got glances every now and then, but it wasn’t as intense as last time. No teenagers coming to trip him up or self-righteous trainers coming to capture him.

At last, he entered Paws for Thought, the groomer he frequented. Coming inside immediately brought him at ease as the pink interiors greeted him. It seemed to be going through a dry spell as there was only one other Pokemon, a Delcatty, being attended to, looking all regal as they clipped her nails.

“Get them just right, please,” the Delcatty said, though the human couldn’t understand her, “I have to look perfect for tomorrow’s contest.”

The rest of the groomers were mostly nowhere to be seen. Jung’s personal groomer Thomas, a twenty-something with bleached-white hair, waved to him from the reception desk.

“Hey, long time no see.” Thomas’ tone wasn’t its usual chirpy self. “As you can tell, we’re completely swamped here.”

Ah yes, I can tell from all the dead air in here.”

The human let out a hollow chuckle. “Nah, in all seriousness, I’m ready to hang myself, it’s so quiet. We’ve got one or two other people booked in, but the rest, nobody seems to go in for walk-ins with all the kidnapping stuff going on.”

Jung winced at that. “I’m sorry to hear. I seem to forget how much of a ripple effect it has on this city.

“Yeah. None of our clients have had their Pokemon go missing, thank god, but I’d be devastated if that happened.” He glanced at the Delcatty, who purred as the other groomer ran a comb through her fur. “Of course, I’d be out of a job, but I just love these Pokemon too much to see them go like that. The world’s going to the dogs, I swear.”

I suppose all we can do is find hope out of hopelessness.” Jung fished out his wallet for 3,000 Pokedollars. “And that’s what I came here for as well. I’ve been through a lot since this happened, and I need a glowup, as they call it.

“As good a time as any, then.” Thomas smiled and popped out of the desk, taking Jung’s things. In the meantime, Jung allowed himself into the shower room where he was given the privacy to wash himself. Most bipedal Pokemon that trainers brought along were able to wash themselves unassisted, but it was the shedding that he couldn’t take care of himself.

He dried himself off with a couple of towels, then allowed Thomas in as he blowdryed Jung’s coat. It felt like having a jet turbine blown in his face, but it did the job as the fur all came out in satisfying clumps. Thomas did the rest of the work with the electric razor, which was Jung’s least favourite part of the grooming, so he closed his eyes, trying to relax.

I don’t see Flora in today,” Jung said.

“Nah, we let her stay at home, not much point bringing her in for a few Pokemon.”

Right.” The last time he saw that Aromatisse, she still had problems controlling her aromas, but she was a lot more stable. “Has she been doing alright since the last time we met?”

“Yeah, still doing good. Of course, I’ve got you to thank for that.”

Oh, well, it’s nothing. I’m just glad that she’s able to manage her anxiety.

“Yup, that, and she doesn’t stink out the place anymore. Oh, and how’s work at the clinic?”

Ah, it’s… kind of going a bit pear-shaped. It’s rewarding as ever, but it’s just hard, and I’ve been going through a rough patch lately.

“Yeah, I know what you mean, sorta. I mean, I love my job, but that doesn’t mean I get sick of it sometimes. Especially with some of the rowdier Pokemon you get.” Jung briefly opened his eyes, seeing the faint scar on Thomas’ hand.

"I don’t envy having to groom Litleo. Or many Pokemon for that matter.” And now the part where Thomas trimmed under Jung’s arms. “I’m sorry, I can imagine it gets really awkward having me as a customer.”

“Not at all! I just see you as being a really hairy human.”

That got a laugh out of Jung, the first he had in a little while. “That’s the awkward part, having to trim a hairy, naked human.”

“Eh, work is work. At least you’re not biting me or screaming or using whatever powers you have.”

I suppose not.

Now came Jung’s favourite part of the grooming session: being combed. He hummed in delight as Thomas ran the brush through his newly-trimmed fur. It was like a massage, it hit all the right spots, and… oh, he didn’t care about what it felt like. This was just bliss. Pure bliss.



Now he was looking his best, Jung decided to walk around town for a bit, just to test the waters. His heart rate elevated whenever he passed by somebody, though this was nothing new. All the while, he waited for the other shoe to drop, for someone to make a comment about ‘that Hypno’, for someone to trip him up, for someone to try and capture him. It was always at the back of his mind.

He entered one of Anistar’s shopping districts, which was a narrow street lined with shops on both ends sandwiching the roads for buses, bikes and Gogoat to ride through. Thankfully, it wasn’t the peak time of day yet, so it wasn’t too crowded. Perhaps it was time to find somewhere to eat since it was approaching noon, and he hurried to his favourite eatery located in—

He tripped. Jung caught himself before he fell on the floor and turned around to see who did it, but there was no one around him. Just him and his longcoat, which got stuck beneath his foot.

He didn’t know why he thought the longcoat added anything to his appearance since the clinic didn’t have a strict dress code. Perhaps it connoted professionalism, trustworthiness, intelligence. But when he looked at himself in the window of one shop, he realised how much of a front it was. A front that might not’ve even worked. Even he didn’t feel comfortable in it, instead, feeling cold and clinical.

Jung wandered along the street, browsing through the many windows of different shops, until he found a vintage clothes store. The interiors with its three piece suits and bowler hats looked like it belonged in a silent picture film. But there were clothes of other kinds in that shop, including Alolan shirts, one of which was on the display. White flowers on a pink background, what a good combination. And it suited him.

No, he would probably look silly in it. Jung went on his way, pretending that shop didn’t exist. Then he caught Jet on the other side of the street, carrying a gallon bottle of water in his paws. Jet caught Jung. As soon as that Blastoise saw him, he changed his course, waddling across the quiet road to the other side where Jung waited.

“Jet,” Jung said. He didn’t have his lanyard on him. “Well, what a surprise.”

“Yeah, I don’t usually catch ya on my days off.” He eyed Jung up and down. “You look different.”

“I do?” His ears perked up at that. “Well, I did just go for a trim recently.”

“Shame, I missed all that fluff. Though I suppose it’s gettin’ hotter here.”

“Yes, perhaps.”

Jet stared at the rest of the streets. “You doin’ anything else right now?”

“Not really.” Jung wrung his hands together. He never usually asked Jet on his own initiative, but now was the perfect chance. “I was thinking of going to that creperie, though. Would you like to come with me? I’ll pay.”

“Can’t say no to free food.” Jet patted his stomach, then blinked. “I mean, uh, thanks, Jung.”

Jung smiled and started walking side by side with Jet. He spared no expense once they reached that pancake stall — strawberries and cream for Jung, chocolate with hazelnuts for Jet — and they sat by their usual spot near the waterfall as they ate.

“So,” Jet said, nursing his crepe, “word’s goin’ around about what happened.”

Jung took a huge bite out of his lunch. “Yeth,” he said with his mouth full.

“The rangers say different stuff, but the truth travels quickly. They hurt a kid, didn’t they?”

“Mmm hmm.” Jung didn’t have the energy to recap the events.

Finally, Jet bit into his crepe, demolishing it all in one go. He wiped the chocolate off his face before he next spoke. “Believe me, none of us are happy with that. At all. I’d quit my job if I ever let a Pokemon get beaten up like that Drowzee did.”

“I dealt with those idiots first hand.” Jung squeezed the crepe in his fist. “Did they tell you I was there?”

“Yeah, they did. And from what I heard, you were quite the hero.”

Jung scoffed. “No I’m not. I just did what anyone would do in that time of need.”

“But you didn’t have to go to that dwelling by yourself.”

“Well, I wouldn’t have gone if you didn’t give me that push.”

Jet tilted his head. “I didn’t. You did it off your own back, so give yerself more credit, Jung. And our force thinks good things of you, so we’ll put in a good word for you.”

Jet laid his paw on Jung’s back, but he backed away from him.

“Sorry, I just...” Jung’s face scrunched up, on the verge of tears, but they wouldn’t come out, not just yet. The fact that Jet was here and a part of that wider network of law enforcement only rubbed salt in the wound. “Do you mind if I ask you something?”

“Go ahead.”

Jung paused, thinking of a way to best phrase it without offending Jet. “What made you want to become a patrol mon? Did you ever think, that in this line of work, that people like you would allow innocent Pokemon to come to harm?”

Jet blinked at him, clearly taken aback by his outburst. Crap, he definitely took offense at that.

“I...” Jet twiddled his claws. “I’m a part of it, but I’m only really stuck in Anistar. I’m there when there are fires, I’m there when a bunch of trainers get in a big fight with their Pokemon, I’m there when strays are being rowdy or need help.” He took a deep breath. “Even if I was in that bigger patrol force, Pokemon can’t go on missions on their own. Humans usually call the shots.”

Jung’s stomach twisted. He regretted what he said. “I’m sorry.”

“No, I get why you’re mad. I’m mad too.” He clenched his fists. “I just wanted to say that I don’t really have much power here, it’s a bigger mess than I’m involved in.”

“I know.”

“But to answer your question, all I ever wanna do is keep Pokemon safe. I love Anistar, y’see, bein’ around the ocean, bein’ back with my trainer. I have lotsa good memories of this place and I don’t wanna see it go downhill. That’s why I volunteered.”

“Yes.” Jung moved along the bank, getting closer to Jet again. “And from what I’ve seen, you have a good sense of duty.”

“Yeah, and I like my team. They’re a bunch of good guys. Or at least, they try their best with what they’re given, y’know. We’re all caught in the middle of this, but we wanna try and get to the bottom of this kidnappin’ situation.” He smiled at Jung. “I think you inspired me to start lookin’ as well, since I’ve started askin’ Pokemon around on my time off.”

“Oh, have I?” Jung tried to hide his flushed face. “And any leads yet?”

“No dice, but I’m gonna keep at it. That’s all I can do, really.”

“Yes. I guess that’s all we can do: our best.”

The conversation trailed off from there. Jung took the time to finish his pastry, needing to fill that void in his gut and in his heart. After that, he tried to find a way to pick their chat back up. But he couldn’t. And neither could Jet, until he suddenly spoke up.

“I hope the whole patrol thing doesn’t get in the way of us bein’ friends and all.”

Damn, Jung couldn’t have come across as more hostile if he tried. “No, of course it doesn’t. I value what we have.”

“And I do too.” Finally, Jet stroked his back again, and this time, Jung stayed, letting his friend soothe him. “Say, how about that stroll along the beach I promised? I’m givin’ myself a break before I start looking again.”

Jung leaned into his shoulder, not caring how he looked in front of the passersby. “I’d love that.”



Jung ended up having a great day out, which was a rare occurrence. As they walked across the warm, smooth sand, they did a bit of catching up; talking about what the Hypno gang was like, what strays Jet helped to feed, what shows they watched. There was never a dull conversation with Jet. Jung also felt more at ease around Jet, as his presence made the townsfolk seem more peaceful while still feeling somewhat pensive.

Once they said their goodbyes, Jung came back home in the evening. He decided to keep riding that high, making cookies in the clinic’s kitchen. He didn’t usually have time or motivation to bake, but this was an exception since Brie inspired him again. He tried one himself — although it could’ve done with more cornstarch to make it chewier, it was still delicious. As thanks, he also left some for the other staff members in the fridge, and Jet as well. Hopefully, they enjoyed it as much as he did.

He also left a bag of peanut butter treats for Lotte near her dog bowl. She deserved it for being so kind to him, and to everyone else in the clinic, especially that Eevee.

On the way back to his room, Jung got a whiff of a patient’s dreams in the garden. This one gave off a scent of cheese, the good, rich, creamy kind, not the smelly, mouldy kind that Brie had. So he followed it until he entered the open space, and there was that Eevee, all alone.

He looked so peaceful sleeping there on his side among the grass. The shade of dusk blanketed him — his scars weren’t so noticeable in the dark. He even purred as he slept, and it was rare for the Eevee to make any noise that wasn’t a growl or a screech. Jung stepped closer to inspect the Eevee’s dreams, just at a cursory glance. Although he didn’t enter his dream state directly, his dreams radiated different smells.

He imagined the Eevee traipsing through a cheddary garden, unsullied by human hands. There were bushes made of parmesan and trees that grew any number of fine cheeses by the block: edam, smoked, gouda, and every nice cheese imaginable. Jung imagined him poking his head through holes, only to find more cheese, and if he hit any dead ends, he would eat his way through it to make another path, savouring its tangy, meaty flavours. There was no end to this garden of cheesy delights.

Jung snapped out of his fantasy, realising what he was doing. He held his pendulum out as his mouth dripped a waterfall of saliva. The dull flash of the pendulum on the corroded coin made Jung stop. He saw his petrified gaze in the dim reflection.

And in that reflection, he saw the Hypno in his dreams, in the shattered mirror, staring back at him.

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SparklingEspeon

Back on Her Bullshit
Staff
Location
a Terrace of Indeterminate Location in Snowbelle
Pronouns
She/Her
Partners
  1. espurr
  2. fennekin
  3. zoroark
Hello! I’m here for a very late catnip—hope this review is large enough to make up for it!

If there’s one thing that I can always say about your fiction, it’s that I’ve never seen anything like it anywhere else. No-one seems to focus on the types of ‘mon that you do, even without that the world is constructed in such a way that it feels very richly built, and has a distinct vibe. Just from reading this one story I would believe that a world exists outside of Jung’s purview, which is a major accomplishment to me world-building wise. I haven’t really read anything from Dreamdiver before jumping into this, I’ll admit; but even without the supporting context and prior attachments I found this still well-told and potent all the same. The prose in particular was nearly immaculate, I don’t know that I have much I can say to that except, good job!

Hypno isn’t a pokemon that I would have imagined you’d have an easy time making endearing, but I really liked all the hypnos in this fic. Jung is very relatable, of course, but all the others also have their own personalities and dispositions (I think the art also helped characterize them well—there’s a lot of good art in this, but that piece was definitely my favorite). They feel more human than a lot of the humans in this fic, and I’m pretty sure that wasn’t an accident.

I liked a lot of the themes in this, especially the contrast between Jung’s life—he eats sweets that aren’t doing great things for him health-wise to cover up his natural dream cravings, sleeps at his work because no landlord is going to lease him a home, suffers phobia everywhere he goes—versus how the wild hypno are living. Even though they’re living in a trashy mine entrance and have to steal things from humans to survive, it feels like they’re a lot better off than Jung, in a way. The ending, especially, contrasts that Jung can eat all the sweets he wants, go to the barber and get his fur cut, and live in a room that’s nice and furnished, but at the end of the day he’s paying a far deeper price to live amongst humans.

I also liked the way that you characterize dreams—referring to them constantly as cheese-flavored made me shiver, but that’s just because I don’t like cheese, lol—they’re very surreal but also easy to follow, and I thought in particular Drowsee’s dream was fascinating to watch. Especially when Jung began to influence it too, and it felt like the dreams kind of melded for a bit. Interesting to think that maybe all hypno/drowsee are lucid dreamers, so dreaming to them feels like it could be a social event, while dreaming to us is more like a weird hallucination we don’t remember well once we’re awake.

The story ends without the kidnapper ever being found or even particularly relevant, which initially confused me a bit. But thinking on it more, it makes sense—this was never about the kidnapper, it was about how it affected the hypno, and so I think what we were told was all we really needed to see as far as Jung was concerned. I’m not sure some “find the kidnapper” plot would have really done much for the story, rather than make it more cartoony, I guess. (I feel like if this were a film of some kind, Jung would absolutely have had to face down with the kidnapper at some point… but that’s not really how things pan out in real life)

As I said in the last block, the real story here seems to be Jung’s mental state throughout the whole sequence of events. Nothing gets resolved and that’s realistic—the kidnapper isn’t going to be caught, the hypnos aren’t going to get better lodging, the rangers aren’t all going to have a heel-turn change of heart, Anistar isn’t suddenly going to get any less dodgy on pokemon rights. But Jung, who spent the first chapter of the story in this sort of mental decline, does get a little better. I feel like the story had sort of a downer ending to me, because like I said before, he’s really just putting a bandaid on all his actual needs so he can continue living with humans… even though I don’t think what he’s doing is sustainable in the long run. I think you said before that you’d be doing some more works for this series, so maybe it’s something you’ll focus on more heavily there. It felt kind of tragic in practice though.

If I had to raise one criticism, it’d be that I’m not toooo clear on how hypno biology works—it feels like they have to eat dreams to survive, but also have stomachs as well, which feels like this weird middle ground to me. Because the question is, if they came about needing to eat dreams, then why would they have stomachs for eating normal food as well? My thoughts were that maybe they need a balance of both, and the dreams provide them with something that normal food can’t give them, but I’m not really sure I got an impression one way or the other from the story as is. Though, maybe this is something that the other stories explain better than this one does. Not sure. I will say life seems to suck for Jung either way, because it does feel like something he desperately needs, and eating sweets is the equivalent of taking a medicine that suppresses but doesn’t fix the issue. In general I’m a bit surprised that even if hypno are stigmatized as pokemon, there wouldn’t be some kind of accommodations for this tbh—though I’d imagine Jung is too prideful to take them. I get the vibes from some background details that Anistar in general isn’t very friendly to pokemon :(

Overall, I had a lot of fun with this! It was definitely heavy, but it was a well-written heavy, and it comes with that slightly lightish vibe and well-done prose that’s really easy to read through. Feels kind of like a dream(that’s not cheese flavored but something else nice, insert your favorite food of choice here). Probably gonna circle back around for the other works in this series at some point.

~SparklingEspeon
 

NebulaDreams

Ace Trainer
Partners
  1. luxray
  2. hypno
Thanks, @canisaries, for the comments!
Is the long hair referring to the wig or natural long hair underneath?

Whoops, long haired wig.

I didn't really get what happened in the middle paragraph - did Drip just nurse his head in confusion at the piece of Leppa falling down or something? The sequence of events would make the most sense if something hit him and he nursed his head in pain, but it doesn't seem like that's what happened.

I don't remember what I had in mind for that scene either, I think Drip got a headache as a result of the repressed thoughts about his brother starting to surface. If I were to edit it, I'd cut the first sentence out.

So the thing in Chapter 3 that I mentioned having critique about in DMs has to do with Jung's attitude on Hypno, specifically the self-loathing, and it kinda ties into the courtroom dream sequence. I feel like I haven't had a very good handle on what Jung himself really thinks and feels. I'd been reading a lot of them as something heard and sarcastically repeated by Jung, and that the reason they were still hurtful were because he knew other people thought that of him - but this chapter, then, has a bunch of places where the intention seems to be that Jung does think this about himself and Hypno and that he has internalized it. The thing is, though, that many of them are pretty extreme and/or abstract, and it's hard to imagine someone accepting them without bargaining, especially when we do see Jung push away his anti-Hypno notions numerous times. I think it'd be better if these self-loathing thoughts and notions were more subtle and insidious - something that's trying to convince Jung of Hypno being bad rather than outright stating that they are.

That is a good point about the self-loathing. Reading back, if I recall correctly, the intent behind the line where Jung agrees with his crime being 'existing' was meant to convey sarcasm, though I don't think that came across that well. The court was meant to be an extreme version of the public's perception surrounding him, which he resists but is ultimately powerless to face up against. I do think I could've been more subtle with those self-loathing thoughts in other places; in previous drafts, I played up more of his suspicions surrounding Hypno, which felt out of character for him.

Anyway, I'm pleased that it isn't a story-breaking issue, so I might just do a quick line edit later indicating the sarcasm there.

Going onto the rest of your comments, I'm pleased you liked the Alice and Drip dreams as well. I plan on exploring Alice and Jung's relationship much later on, but that will probably be endgame stuff. Also stoked that all the other side characters landed as well since I wanted to create the feeling that this Hypno dwelling has a rich history with a wide variety of Hypno and Drowzee banding together as a found family.

This wording kinda makes me wonder how they're emitting that smoke. Is it like a smoky Fire Fang?

Whoops, I meant the Houndoom has smoky breath.

immediate vision in my minds eye

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Jeanne: "FALCON PAWNCH!"

ALL YOU HAD TO DO WAS STAY IN THE DAMN BED DRIP

Drip should've turned up with a baseball bat and said 'YOU PICKED THE WRONG HOUSE, FOOL!'

This is a really heartwrenching scene but I'm also thinking that Drip sounds like a squealing pig and laughing about it.

Goddamn you, Canis, I live for your comments.

"Hours" is exaggeration, right? I didn't think of it as such as first, which made me pause for a bit.

Yeah, I probably should've said 'what felt like hours of agonising silence from him'. I think chapter 5 would all take place in the span of one hour.

I have to admit that I didn't remember Fabian by name as it had been a while since I read the chapter he was in. I don't know if that effect is the same for someone that would read the chapters a shorter time apart, but it might be good to have a small reminder of who he was as he's brought up.

So getting to the rest of chapter 5's comments, yeah, Fabian was only meant to fill in this role in chapter 2 and 5, so his name isn't super important, but it still could've done with a reminder.

Super glad this chapter landed with the big 'oh crap' moments. I really wanted to sell the horror of Jung being forced to use hypnotism, as well as Drip's breakdown when the Houndoom bites his arm. Funnily enough, the callback to the madeleines in this chapter came at the last minute, though it linked back nicely to the previous chapter because the point of that scene was to show a peaceful scene and further humanise the Hypno before everything goes to shit.

You'll probably end up reading chapter 6 anyway soon since it's all up there, but the next chapter is the last chapter of the story. The kidnapping part is a bit beyond this story's scope, but I want to continue it in future Dreamdiver chapters.

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Hi, @SparklingEspeon! It was well worth the wait, and I'm super pleased you read all of this fic!

Super glad that this story works without prior knowledge of the Dreamdiver stories. My aim is to create standalone stories that nevertheless form a bigger connected piece when read together. It's also nice to know that this feels like a unique take on the Pokemon world; I guess I didn't set out to be different from all the rest, I just wanted to apply my own observations about the world and my attitude towards writing fantasy to Pokemon fanfiction, which you might've seen before in I, Isobel.

Interesting to think that maybe all hypno/drowsee are lucid dreamers, so dreaming to them feels like it could be a social event, while dreaming to us is more like a weird hallucination we don’t remember well once we’re awake.

Yeah, that's an angle I like exploring with Drowzee/Hypno and personally, it makes more sense to me that they see dreams as a way to bond and also form pieces of one's identity (like how Moony mentioned that Drowzee get their names from important dream symbols). Jung even references lucid dreaming and shows his ability to keep himself grounded in a dream (and make other Pokemon realise they're dreaming) in his first fic, The Inalienable Dreamless.


If I had to raise one criticism, it’d be that I’m not toooo clear on how hypno biology works—it feels like they have to eat dreams to survive, but also have stomachs as well, which feels like this weird middle ground to me. Because the question is, if they came about needing to eat dreams, then why would they have stomachs for eating normal food as well? My thoughts were that maybe they need a balance of both, and the dreams provide them with something that normal food can’t give them, but I’m not really sure I got an impression one way or the other from the story as is. Though, maybe this is something that the other stories explain better than this one does. Not sure.

That is a good point about Hypno biology. I don't think it was super clear, but as evidenced by Jung, not eating dreams at all has its own effects, so the ideal Hypno diet involves a balance between the two. I didn't think too much about how Hypno would process such foods since if dreams make up their main diet, their stomachs would be adapted to process that instead of regular food. It might be something I elaborate on in future instalments.

As I said in the last block, the real story here seems to be Jung’s mental state throughout the whole sequence of events. Nothing gets resolved and that’s realistic—the kidnapper isn’t going to be caught, the hypnos aren’t going to get better lodging, the rangers aren’t all going to have a heel-turn change of heart, Anistar isn’t suddenly going to get any less dodgy on pokemon rights. But Jung, who spent the first chapter of the story in this sort of mental decline, does get a little better. I feel like the story had sort of a downer ending to me, because like I said before, he’s really just putting a bandaid on all his actual needs so he can continue living with humans… even though I don’t think what he’s doing is sustainable in the long run. I think you said before that you’d be doing some more works for this series, so maybe it’s something you’ll focus on more heavily there. It felt kind of tragic in practice though.

And yeah, the fic does end on a bit of an inconclusive and depressive note, though I envision this story as being a mid-season finale where a lot of characterisation is further fleshed out and there is some plot progression, but the characters aren't quite at the point where they need to be in order to fulfil their arc. For future fics, I want to explore Jung going through a downward spiral and hitting rock bottom before he starts to take control of his own life again. And while it doesn't come across as much in this fic since it isn't specifically about the treatment of his patients this time around, Jung is also bound by his duties as a therapist, though this fic is also meant to raise whether he helps Pokemon out of a genuine need to be supportive, or as a societal obligation, or both.

I will say life seems to suck for Jung either way, because it does feel like something he desperately needs, and eating sweets is the equivalent of taking a medicine that suppresses but doesn’t fix the issue. In general I’m a bit surprised that even if hypno are stigmatized as pokemon, there wouldn’t be some kind of accommodations for this tbh—though I’d imagine Jung is too prideful to take them. I get the vibes from some background details that Anistar in general isn’t very friendly to pokemon :(

I also don't think Anistar will ease up anytime soon. It isn't specifically Anistar, though, most of the Pokemon world is quite hostile towards Hypno, and what Jung experiences in that city is a symptom of a much bigger problem. I would like Anistar to ease up on Hypno at some point since I don't want it to be all doom and gloom for them, but it's not going to be instantaneous. On that note, I am curious to hear your thoughts about how discrimination is handled in this fic.

Anyway, really glad you liked this, and that the fic didn't feel as if it was trying too hard to be heavy.
 

Flyg0n

Flygon connoisseur
Pronouns
She/her
Partners
  1. flygon
  2. swampert
  3. ho-oh
  4. crobat
  5. orbeetle
  6. joltik
  7. salandit
  8. tyrantrum
  9. porygon
I'll hop straight to commentary, then give some thoughts :}

He lost his ability to speak. All he’d been reduced to were the ramblings of a skipping record or an infant. No words, only names. All Jung had was a name. Not even a name. His species. The only thing that mattered. The only thing that made him matter to people.

“Hypno! Hypthhh! Fhhhh. Ghhhhhhhahhghghghghghg–”

Sand climbed down his throat and filled his maw.
I really love the visceral descriptions of dreams here, and the kind of .... ethereal? confusing? nature of them. The way things don't quite lead into the next in a typical way? Its hard to explain but it does a great job capturing the dreamy-ness of it.

Also big :copyka: at the 'His Species. The only thing that mattered.'

I actually read far ahead, I was going to do 1 chapter, but got so absorbed I had to read more, and I love how all these details come to a boiling point later. Jung, feeling like his identity lies utterly in his species, but in particular his identity is wrapped in the discrimination he faces.

Also in a non-anime world, there's quite a bit of horror mixed in with the idea of only being able to repeat your name.

Ultimately, it was just some stuffed toy he got from the local Make a Mon shop.
BUILD A BEAR FOR POMEMON??? :DDDDD
I love these lil references you toss in

First, there was the fact that Pokemon went missing. That could’ve been anyone, including his patients or even himself. Second, Hypno were rumoured to be involved, and whether or not they actually were, it didn’t bode well for either party. Third, the news already framed the Hypno being behind it even if they didn’t confirm it as such. If someone who didn’t know any better read that, that would give them another reason to go against any Hypno they saw.
I hate media sometimes. Like there's the obvious underlying issues at large, but I just hate the way media twists narratives and manipulates and pits groups against each other for views. >:{
Anyways maybe I'm putting my personal rant in there, heh. Anyways what a horrible situation, and its doubly awful when its from some past thing that isn't lket go of and a false idea placed upon the whole group.

“It shouldn’t be that way, though.” Liliane looked at Jung with lowered eyes. “I guess I had it in my head for so long that Hypno were bad news with all the stories I heard that I couldn’t shake it off. Like a gut reaction, you know?”
I actually enjoyed this bit. It's not great how she behaved earlier but I liked that she was able to recognize that and try to change, which is very hopeful, you know? And I think thats something that can easily get missed, but is so important for me as a reader, when it comes to feeling like I am able to buy into aspectscertain fictional worlds. Its rarely touched on in a way that feels right but I just like this. I like when I see people can change from being sucky.

Jung saw a pair of booted feet which belonged to a young trainer, who kept on guard with his Delphox while bystanders watched. The boy stood in shock, staring at the metal sphere.

“Oh, shoot,” he said. “It’s already got a trainer.”
Aw man, in a world like this, this is an awful thing to do. It also makes me curious about the worldbuilding. Does Jung have like a private pokeball at home? Or do you get registered somehow so pokeballs don't work on you? I know in my world its sort of set up so that there's all these mutual agreements and such, and a pokeball won't work on a captured pokemon, and they can refuse it, but I wonder how exactly it works here, since it seems the pokeball didn't 'activate'?

Just something that got my wheels spinning.

Also what sort of Premium Grade Idiot would you have to be to try and catch a random Hypno casually walking down the street with a bag of pastries???? Ugh

Jung went on for what felt like minutes, so long that his throat burned. He had already caused a scene giving this youngster the dressing down of his lifetime, and as Jung went on his rant, nobody stepped in, not even the Delphox who passed the time by polishing their claws with a wooden nail file.
Okay the mental image of this is sending me.

I’ll tell you what, this utter troglodyte threw a freaking Pokeball at me, which, by the way, is classed as assault! It’s assault, for god’s sake, human or Pokemon!”
Fascinating! So throwing a pokeball at a trained/citizen mon is assault? (as I'd expect it should be in this world). I wonder about how training works in this world? my memory is fuzzy, although I'm sure I, Isobel touched on it. Is there preset agreements for when trainers are allowed to throw a ball at a mon? Or do they have to talk to them first? Engage them in battle maybe? Or are pokeballs brought only into play after you reach and agreement to be partners?

“Don’t tell me to breathe, I’m trying to do exactly that, all I can ever do is keep calm, god forbid I show any sort of emotion or express any sort of disagreement, I have to be the bigger Hypno all the time, I–”
Man I feel that, it sucks have to be the bigger one, one of those unfortunate sort of necessities.

“Beats me, all I know is that this ice cream fills it back up.
Lol, I like that not even Blastoise Jet knows how his own powers work.

Jet stomped off into the distance, and Jung looked the other way where the sign indicated the distance to Route 18. He didn’t know how far the journey would be or where it would take him, but he had nothing to lose at this point.
ohohohohoho. Nothing to lose indeed....


Okay so that covers my commentary! As I said before, I ended up reading way ahead, mostly because I was fairly invested in everything and wanted to see where it went.

I think Jung's stories really shine in a few key areas. Worldbuilding, character, and dreams. Considering this is the focus of the stories, thats a big win! I think you capture the world very nicely through the everyday life of Jung. You don't give too many details, but it also feels clear enough that this world is not quite like the games or anime.
I'll admit that this story/world is counter to my usual tastes, since I like the anime and games a lot, and enjoy much less humanesque takes on pokemon, I still found myself engaged by the characters and conflicts, which is a testament to your skill to make an idea I don't normally gel with still feel interesting.
I also feel like you do a good job making characters who are just fun to read about! Jet, Jung, and all the various side characters throughout are very... homey? It's the only word I can think of at the moment to describe them. They don't feel over the top as characters, but they still feel distinct from one another.
And lastly of course, throughout all of thise series, I am consistently impressed by how fantastically you write dreams. You really mix personal subconscious problems and the unpredictability of the dreamscape so dang well. It's always present but it never feels overly on the nose. :okgon: I desire to rob your dream writing skills.

Now something I want to mention is how you've handled the corse theme of this series, which is the discrimination aspect. I have to say, I think its deftly handled. The most important fact for me is that it never feels like it correlates 1:1 to anything in real life, which is a big thing for me. It feels grounded in its world, which allows the story to focus on the theme itself instead of uncomfortable allegories. You also balance it in a way that feels nicely subtle. There's people who are perfectly nice, people who are jerks, and people in between. There's also small rays of hope, that some people can change and see the error of their ways. Overall I think its really solid.

I don't actually have any criticisms. I ended up reading ch 1 twice for this review, but nothing particularly stood out to me from a critical perspective. I think once or twice I found the prose simple, but I don't think thats a negative at all, I think it services your world well. Also your prose during dream sequences is heckin excellent. Love it.

Many feelings for poor Jung, struggling to connect with his own kind, struggling with his own fears related to dream eating, and feeling like his only worth is in what he can give to others! I have a feeling you'll enjoy where HIWTHI eventualy leads but shhh.... I don't wanna spoil anything. I hope poor Jung can eventually find some peace down the line. :{

Overall, no complaints tbh! I can't wait to finish off the last chapters and see how this ends!!!
 

canisaries

you should've known the price of evil
Location
Stovokor
Pronouns
she/her
Partners
  1. inkay-shirlee
  2. houndoom-elliot
  3. yamask-joanna
  4. shuppet
  5. deerling-andre
Hey there! Now that I'm no longer busy with the anniversary review challenge, I'm finally here with the review for the last chapter.

They went back and forth for a few minutes, pretending as if Jung wasn’t there but clearly acknowledging his presence regardless.
I wasn't sure how I was supposed to understand this since these two claims seemed to be contradictory.

He nodded and shut the door behind him. After she drove off,
funny image: jungs coat gets caught in the car door and he gets dragged across the road



“Jung? No, no no no, get them away from me! PLEASE, STOP THEM! STOP BITING ME! STOP—”

I liked this brief nightmare scene - it gets the point across very quickly with minimal content, and it also invokes the choppiness of restless dreams.

Right.” The last time he saw that Aromatisse, she still had problems controlling her aromas, but she was a lot more stable. “Has she been doing alright since the last time we met?”
I read this like five times until I parsed this correctly for some reason. I think an addition of "than before" after "stable" would have made it clearer for me.

Jung wandered along the street, browsing through the many windows of different shops, until he found a vintage clothes store. The interiors with its three piece suits and bowler hats looked like it belonged in a silent picture film. But there were clothes of other kinds in that shop, including Alolan shirts, one of which was on the display. White flowers on a pink background, what a good combination. And it suited him.

No, he would probably look silly in it. Jung went on his way, pretending that shop didn’t exist. Then he caught Jet on the other side of the street, carrying a gallon bottle of water in his paws. Jet caught Jung. As soon as that Blastoise saw him, he changed his course, waddling across the quiet road to the other side where Jung waited.
did you guys notice that jung was looking at a hawaiian shirt, well known gay apparel, right before his boyfriend showed up? i htink he might be gay,,

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So like... there is something about this chapter that's hard for me to pinpoint or put into words. I think the best way to describe it is that I'm not sure what I'm supposed to take from this. I feel like all the scenes are perfectly fine by themselves and have the potential to serve the story, but strung together, I'm left with an unclear structure and many different moods that don't really lead towards anything in particular. If this was an interlude chapter, there'd be nothing wrong, because an interlude chapter exists within a status quo, but an ending is supposed to show how the status quo has changed... but here, it feels like a lot of these scenes could take place at any part of the story and have roughly the same effect.

I'm guessing that you didn't want Jung to become okay eating dreams yet during this story even though I kind of expected it (it seemed like it was going to be Jung's arc for this story). I can get that for the purpose of future stories, but it does mean that I'm left wondering what exactly changed between the start of this story and its end. A great alternate candidate for an arc resolution would be something about Jung's attitude towards Hypno in a more general sense - something that he would have learned through interacting with the other Hypno. Like maybe Jung acknowledges that wanting to eat dreams is natural for Hypno and that's not bad by itself, but he can still refuse to eat dreams because he doesn't trust his own abilities or self-control as an individual. But I see a downside in that suggestion, too, because I do like the ending scene itself as it is now (as well as the art, of course). Adding the kind of detail that suggestion involves detracts from the open-endedness and ambiguity.

Though speaking of ambiguity, there was that other thing that I think contributed to that feeling of "I'm not sure what I'm supposed to take from this" - the various moods. For the first two and a half scenes, there's a consistent tone of somber pensiveness. When we get to the "chocolate chip in Tauros crap", there's a notion of "hey, it isn't that bad", which then leads to the grooming scene of "let's focus on nice things". So far so good: we have a gradient from bad to better. Then we get Jung walking and tripping on his coat, making him think about his looks, and he checks out a shirt, but thinks it would just be silly. The mood is sorrowful - mood gradient is going downward. Then Jet arrives. Jung is happy. Mood gradient goes up. Then they talk about police brutality, with Jung being a bit confrontational with Jung. Mood gradient goes down, we are in ambiguous zone. They talk it out, mood gradient goes up. It stays up until the final bit of Jung finding himself about to eat dreams by instinct while he doesn't want to and, presumably, feels ashamed. Mood gradient goes down.

I'm by no means Structure Andy, often struggling with structure myself, but I feel like this back-and-forth of mood is part of why the chapter ends up feeling directionless. More specifically, it's "big down (aftermath of raid), big up (grooming), zigzag (between grooming and making up with Jet), small up (make up with Jet, continue having good evening), steep down (ending)". How exactly the pattern should look is dependent on what you want to go for, but I think it would be better if there was only one uptick instead of two (though the uptick can be gradual, maybe with a bit of zigzag).

I very much doubt that I've expressed myself in the best way here, so I'm completely down to talk about it through discord if it's unclear. I mean, my own feelings are kind of unclear and it already took a lot of thinking to get to these conclusions I have here. But I do wanna say that I really liked this story and all the Hypno worldbuilding in it - I genuinely doubt there are many, if any, other fics out there with this much thought put in regarding Hypno as a sapient non-evil species. Interested to see what's up next for Jung, and I hope you continue to enjoy writing about him. We enjoy reading about him.
 

BossCar

Pokémon Trainer
Pronouns
He/His
Well, hello there! Turns out I’m not completely done with fanfic (just when I thought I was out, they pull me back in). I ran out of inspiration for original stuff so I ended up coming back to the other Jung WIP I was working on alongside Teamwork Makes the Dream Work. I think I started work on it all the way back in April last year, then kept picking it back up in bursts.

In any case, this is probably the longest Jung project I’ve worked on and also my most ambitious one at a whopping 6 chapters (30k words altogether) and with a lot of chapter art to illustrate it. I will be posting these chapters every 4-5 days, and everything has been written in advance, so I’m confident that it will stick to a consistent schedule.

About Dreamdiver: Dreamdiver is a collection of episodic stories that each follow the adventures of Jung: a Hypno therapist who reads the dreams of distressed Pokemon in order to help treat them, each story following a different patient or problem. While this is an ongoing series, you don't need to read the previous stories to enjoy this one as they're self-contained, though it also enhances your reading experience if you have caught up with everything. The links to these stories are down below:
  1. The Inalienable Dreamless
  2. The Dreamer is Still Asleep
  3. Teamwork Makes the Dream Work
Summary: Jung the Hypno therapist starts suffering from panic-inducing nightmares that interfere with his work. There have also been cases of Pokemon being kidnapped near his city, and people accuse Hypno of being behind it. Determined to clear his own name and put a stop to his night terrors, Jung embarks on a journey to reconnect with his own kind and find the truth.

Content note: Although it still sits at a T rating, this fic is heavier than my other Jung stories. The nightmarish imagery from Dreamless is back, but this fic also focuses on themes of discrimination, both of which can get quite heavy at times, so be forewarned.

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Chapter 1: Dream

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Tar-like sand enveloped Jung. It covered his feet, his legs, his chest, his neck, everything save for his face. He barely breathed with the grains blanketing him like a steel duvet. It was barely enough to see the world ahead of him.

The sun bled into the sky. The sky was the colour of decayed oranges. There was nothing but tar ahead. Brown in a million different shades. A cold, dead wind blew dust everywhere, invading Jung’s dehydrated eyes and mouth. Not enough to bury him. Never enough to bury him. Just enough to make him suffer slowly, and for him to digest every particle of sand that life threw at him.

Wind howled. Roared. Screamed. Sang. The sand absorbed all the sound into tiny pockets, making the tone sound as dull as a rusted pendulum. Pendulum. Chimes. Clocks. Bong. Bong. Bong.

Nothing. The wind cut short. The dust settled. The sun’s wound dried, then decayed, oozing black. Black. Blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack. It loomed over Jung, taunting him. His only friend, the sun, a shell of its former self, like a hollowed walnut. Now he was alone. Alone. Always alone. Trapped, but never sinking. Living, yet suffocating all the same. Everything stayed still. He was the only living thing that moved. Or maybe, everything else moved along with him while he remained stationary. Like time. Clocks. Chimes. Pendulum. Pendulum. Pendulum.

Hypno.

“Hypno. Hypno… Hypno!”

He lost his ability to speak. All he’d been reduced to were the ramblings of a skipping record or an infant. No words, only names. All Jung had was a name. Not even a name. His species. The only thing that mattered. The only thing that made him matter to people.

“Hypno! Hypthhh! Fhhhh. Ghhhhhhhahhghghghghghg–”

Sand climbed down his throat and filled his maw.



Jung’s heart thundered in his chest. The sheets suffocated him, he couldn’t breathe, it was so dark, everything was disappearing, help, help, help–

No, that wasn’t it. Deep breaths, deep breaths. Oh god, his poor heart. Was this cardiac arrest? No, he just woke up. He remembered sand. Suffocating. Feeling completely and utterly alone and helpless.

Jung had another nightmare. Great.

This had been happening for the past few days. It had affected his performance to some extent – the sleep debt took its toll on his ability to dream read, but he still functioned and carried out his duties. This, however, was getting old. Jung didn’t even remember his nightmares in broad strokes, just that it felt petrifying and he hyperventilated after he woke up. But whatever he experienced, Jung didn’t want it to happen again. He already had a tough week since that Eevee had a breakdown and got aggressive with the other inpatients, though that wasn’t necessarily their fault. They had been through hell and back in the past.

Jung held onto his Plusle for comfort, though it did very little. Ultimately, it was just some stuffed toy he got from the local Make a Mon shop. Still, cuddling it relaxed his heart. Eventually, it slowed to a steady pulse, and he breathed a sigh of relief.

What would he do next? Jung wanted to go back to sleep, and he could’ve hypnotised himself into slumber, but that still wouldn’t remove the nightmares since he must’ve been troubled by something deeper. If that was a risk, then he was better off staying awake. Then what would he do? Twiddle his thumbs or cuddle his plushies all night?

He got out of bed to see what was on the news. First, on worldly affairs, Galar just launched their new Pokejobs programme. Good for them. There was a local article from the Daily AniStar, featuring some fluff piece about a Gogoat who won a gold trophy in a race, plus a champagne hamper for his trainer. He wondered if the Gogoat got any compensation for it.

Then, something else caught his eye, with a picture of a Hypno in the woods, no less. The headline read: ‘Police send out search party for missing Pokemon’.

Jung dove into his desk and chomped on a couple of chocolate bonbons. This wasn’t going to be pleasant.

‘Multiple Pokemon have been reported as missing from numerous trainers, including the famed battler Thierry Matthias. No concrete details have surfaced, though Hypno were found wandering Route 18, and as a precaution, police have sent out patrol Pokemon in order to investigate.’

There was a lot more to the article, but Jung couldn’t focus on that as he ate the whole bag of bonbons in one sitting. Oh, crumbs, this was a palaver and a half.

First, there was the fact that Pokemon went missing. That could’ve been anyone, including his patients or even himself. Second, Hypno were rumoured to be involved, and whether or not they actually were, it didn’t bode well for either party. Third, the news already framed the Hypno being behind it even if they didn’t confirm it as such. If someone who didn’t know any better read that, that would give them another reason to go against any Hypno they saw.

Oh, crumbs, crusts and…

Crap.” That was all Jung could say.

He had purposely avoided all of this discourse about Hypno until now. There was no point in reopening wounds about how his kind was perceived. But that nagging voice at the back of his mind needed to know. When he searched ‘Hypno Pokemon’ into Rootom, he found his own Pokedex entry:

‘It carries a pendulum-like device. There once was an incident in which it took away a child it hypnotised.’

It. What an ugly word. Jung wasn’t an it. Hypno weren’t ‘it’. They were just Hypno.

The rest didn’t inspire much hope, even with a plethora of articles and web pages to browse through. One popular site for trainer resources had one blog titled: ‘Can You Train a Hypno?’, which basically advised trainers to avoid Hypno at all costs even though it wasn’t illegal to capture and train one. They were seldom seen in actual league battles according to the page. There were also numerous mentions about Hypno horror stories in the Spookyghetti genre, which involved fictional accounts of Hypno kidnapping children or hypnotising people for certain... purposes. The less he knew about those purposes, the better.

Then there was that article about the Dreamdivers–

No, not now. Jung didn’t want to think about that now – he was doomscrolling at this point.

Either way, there wasn’t a lot of official coverage about Hypno as they mostly kept to themselves, and humans mostly kept away from them. It was like looking into a black box. But he also found an article that featured Drowzee and Komala hanging out with each other on a tree, documenting how some Alolan Drowzee kept Komala company in the wild. That was something to cling on to at least, like a cookie in a box of razor blade apples. Mmm, cookies.

Jung took his mind off of that report for now as he surfed through the web and played some browser games, including one that involved clicking cookies for hours on end, while eating from a pack of cookies in his stash. Before he knew it, light streamed in from the blinds of his window.

Did he seriously just spend hours pushing on a virtual collection of pixels to see numbers go up? And he also went through two packs of those choco chip confections. Jung massaged the lumps on his waistline… this was troublesome indeed. More hours at the gym today. But he had to work. There was another meeting soon. And he had to shower, and groom his crumb-crusted fur, and… oh, drat, he couldn’t remember.

Jung rubbed sleep from his eyes as he clicked on that imaginary biscuit, occupying himself until it was time to go. He didn’t even get changed into his uniform.

His movements through the hall were sluggish, so the hallway that only took him a minute to navigate to the briefing room felt like one of those five-and-a-half-minute hallways he encountered in his dreams. His three coworkers stared as he entered the room and gave a half-hearted reply.

“Are you okay, Jung?” Amelie, his boss, asked. “You’re five minutes late.”

I am?” That jolted him awake like the shock from a splash of ice water. “Oh my god, I’m so sorry, I lost track of the time!”

“Just sit down,” she curtly said.

This was bad. He was never late. Oh well, he’d make up for it by hanging onto Amelie’s words-- wait, no. If her speech was a precipice, then Jung had long since slipped off. His head bobbed up and down with the rising and falling cadence of her voice. He took a sip of coffee to awaken himself, but that didn’t cure his ailment. His eyes felt heavy, getting heavier, until finally, they shut and his head hit the table.

The noise startled everyone, Jung included. But pain overtook shock as he nursed his crooked nose. Definitely dislocated. Why did Arceus have to give him such a huge snout?

Ow…” he groaned.

“Jung.” Amelie pointed her marker at him. “What are you doing?”

Ah…” It suddenly dawned on him. “I just… fell. Fell asleep.”

He smacked his forehead. What a stupid Hypno.

I couldn’t sleep, I had those night terrors again. It’s no excuse, I know, but–” he stopped to yawn–”I’ve never felt this tired before, I’m sorry.”

“It’s alright, Jung.” She put the pen down. “Look, you’re in no condition to work at the moment. Have a break for the weekend and get some rest if you can.”

No, I’ll be fine.” He straightened his undone collar. “I can’t not work, especially with everything going on, I need to make myself useful or else–”

“No one else here takes their job as seriously as you do.” She looked to the two other therapists, and they nodded along with her. “Of course, it’s serious work, and it’s challenging as well. But you can’t work running on fumes when it’s such a cerebral process.”

What about that Eevee?”

“We can handle them.” Amelie took a deep breath. “Just give yourself some time to relax and sort this out.”

So they took Jung off his schedule. Dammit, what a failure. There was no point in arguing, however, and deep in his heart, he knew she was right. But what would he do with the rest of today? How would he get some rest? Maybe he could’ve had a herbal solution, or that Roserade’s aromatherapy, anything would’ve helped.

If it meant going to her shop, Jung would even buy some of Liliane’s wares. Besides, a part of him wanted to check up on Tupelo’s progress.

Jung couldn’t be bothered to get dressed. He only grabbed his bag, then ventured into town, retracing his steps back to her place with the nearby store. He tried to focus on the path ahead, not the people staring at him or occasionally whispering in hushed tones. After the news of that kidnapping, he imagined what they were all thinking, especially with the police being very active here.

The one saving grace was that he knew someone on the patrol force: Jet. He took a detour to the ice cream vendor to see if he was on break, but it was still morning. Right, of course. Jung already took too much time diverting from his path. He noticed more people staring. More humans questioning. He passed by a group of teens and–

One poked their leg in front of Jung’s feet, tripping him up, though he didn’t fall down.

“Go back to Lavender Town, creep!”

Fortunately, they just laughed it off and went on their way. Jung continued his journey, as usual, forcing himself to smile. He couldn’t let anyone see that it got to him.

The various strong scents of herbs, spices and berries greeted Jung’s lopsided nose as he entered. There were many leaves, nuts, vitamins and other health foods on display, and the woman, Liliane, was in the middle of the shop floor, stocking shelves from a trolley. As soon as she heard the bell, she turned and smiled, though it didn’t entirely reach her eyes.

Hello, Liliane,” Jung said, straightening his posture.

“Oh, hey Jung.” She glanced at the floor while holding a bag of cashews. “Um, how can I help you today?”

Jung rubbed his head. “I’ve been having these terrible dreams lately. I thought about possible solutions, and I think one of your remedies would help.”

Liliane paused for a moment, either thinking about what to recommend or mulling over Jung’s presence. She probably still hated him for what went down with Tupelo. Finally, after a few uncomfortable seconds, she put the bag of nuts away.

“I recommend chamomile tea -- the Galarish blend is the best, though I’d start with the teabags just to test the dosage.”

Would these get rid of nightmares or does it only help you to relax before bedtime?

“Depends on how your body reacts to it. I don’t wanna force you into it if you’re not sure, though.”

Well, I might as well get this.” Jung grabbed the teabags. He also found a box of pills on one of the shelves. Jung inspected the label, peering through his glasses. Somnifera. They were sleeping tablets, manufactured using the spores of various Grass Pokemon.

“Oh,” Liliane started, “and those would definitely work, but the dosage is a lot stronger. I’m not sure I’d recommend it since…”

Jung peered at the small print, which said ‘please consult your vet before giving to Pokemon’. What a load of steaming Houndour… manure. What was Jung supposed to do, go for a consultation himself? Would they give him a cone? Then again, he went to a groomer to get his coat trimmed, so it wasn’t a huge stretch.

I might as well get these too. They might not work well for me, but I’m just desperate at this point.

“I know, but I don’t want to be liable in case you get hurt.”

Trust me, I’m capable of making my own decisions.” He said it in a much sharper tone than he intended. Damn his lack of sleep. “Sorry, I don’t mean to sound so cranky.

“Well, alright, I guess if you’re sure.”

Liliane went behind the counter to serve him. She scanned the items, recited the price, accepted Jung’s money then gave him his change and his purchases in a bag.

Thank you, Liliane. I hope you’re doing well these days.” He turned to the door. “Take care.”

“Wait,” she called, reaching out from behind the counter. She maintained eye contact with him that time. “Um, I just wanted to say, I’m really sorry about the way I treated you the other week. I thought about it after Tupelo’s session and I honestly just felt really crappy afterwards.”

It’s alright. I know it takes some getting used to, talking to a Hypno like it’s normal.”

“It shouldn’t be that way, though.” Liliane looked at Jung with lowered eyes. “I guess I had it in my head for so long that Hypno were bad news with all the stories I heard that I couldn’t shake it off. Like a gut reaction, you know?”

I know.” He sighed. “I appreciate the thought, and I hope we can move on from here.”

“I do too.” She smiled, more genuinely this time. “If you’re curious, Tupelo’s doing better. I took your advice and–” she clicked her tongue– “okay, I only took part of your advice. I got him a new friend, one that can keep him company while I’m out of the house.”

Oh, which Pokemon?”

“A Pidgeotto, another rescue from his old reserve. He’s pretty intelligent and docile, and he can sit atop that tree, so he’s a good companion for Tupelo.”

Ah, good to hear.” He smiled back. “Let’s hope that his condition improves from here on out. Though if he doesn’t, please consider my other recommendation.”

“Yeah, of course.” Liliane slunk to the counter, resting her elbows on the surface. “It’s scary stuff. I heard this thing about traffickers, and if it’s anything like what Tupelo experienced, I can’t imagine what they’re putting other poor Pokemon through.”

Right, that. He offered a sympathetic look.

I expect the police will do all they can to find out the cause of it.” Of course, it meant a few Hypno were caught in the crossfire, but there was nothing he could do about that.

“Right. Well, I hope you get some sleep.”

Yes, thank you, and I hope the rest of your day goes well.” Jung waved before he left the shop for good, bag in hand.

Jung went on his merry way, skipping as he walked. He was happy that his efforts paid off and didn’t fall on deaf ears. As he walked through town, he also got a box of cupcakes from his favourite bakery as a pick-me-up. Now all he had to do was go back to the clinic, safe and sound, get to bed, put on some music, and relax to a nice hot cup of–

Bonk.

He fell to the ground. His head burned. He didn’t entirely know what happened at that moment, but once the pain cleared, he got up and saw the empty Pokeball which lay on the paved road. Did… someone throw that at him? And his cupcakes, oh no! All splattered on the cobblestones, baking in the sun.

Jung saw a pair of booted feet which belonged to a young trainer, who kept on guard with his Delphox while bystanders watched. The boy stood in shock, staring at the metal sphere.

“Oh, shoot,” he said. “It’s already got a trainer.”

It? Did he just call Jung an it? All this time carving out a name for himself, as an individual, only to get reduced to an it. An object. Inhuman.

That was it, indeed.

Jung stood and grabbed the Pokeball.

You, boy!” he yelled in human tongue, which really got his attention, as did everyone else. “What on earth were you thinking, throwing it at me?!”

“I--” he sharply turned to his partner, who shrugged. “I thought you were one of those kidnappin’ Hypno.”

Does it look like I’m snatching Pokemon away?” He gestured to his longcoat– wait, no, he didn’t put his uniform on. Everybody probably thought he was a wild Pokemon, yet why would he be wearing glasses or carrying a bag around if he wasn’t civil? Arceus, forgive him for what he was about to say. “Pardon my Kalosan, but are you effing kidding me?! I look after Pokemon for a living, the ones who need protecting, and all you do with your life is run around fighting animals and collecting trinkets, you waste of human skin!”

Even though it was directed at someone who totally deserved it, Jung felt bad for that insult, but it was too late to stop once he started.

And look what you’ve done to my cupcakes!”

“But, I…” The boy was close to tears. “I didn’t mean–”

I don’t care, you owe me 800 Pokedollars! You know, the thing you use to buy money, which I own and use because of all the work I’ve done! What, you’ve never seen a Pokemon using money before?! You’ve never seen me before, oh look, a dream therapist, he’s actually using his powers for good this time, he isn’t just some rotten Hypno that wouldn’t think twice about biting the heads off of newborn babies, I’ve never been more insulted in my life! I–”

Jung went on for what felt like minutes, so long that his throat burned. He had already caused a scene giving this youngster the dressing down of his lifetime, and as Jung went on his rant, nobody stepped in, not even the Delphox who passed the time by polishing their claws with a wooden nail file.

Then Jet arrived, that Blastoise who was usually always seen with ice cream in his stubby paws. Oh, great, what was he going to do?

“What’s goin’ on here?” he asked as he stepped in.

I’ll tell you what, this utter troglodyte threw a freaking Pokeball at me, which, by the way, is classed as assault! It’s assault, for god’s sake, human or Pokemon!”

Perhaps it was because some form of help arrived, or because he had ranted and raved to the point of exhaustion, but Jung collapsed to his knees and swiped his glasses off, pawing at his teary eyes.

Is this all it amounts to, being pelted at in the street?” He laughed, but not out of amusement. “What’s the point anymore? I’m so sick of dealing with this, every day.”

Jung tried to take a few deep breaths, but he was tired. So tired.

“Jung, breathe.” Jet held out his paws. “Breathe with me.”

“No, no, no!” Jung couldn’t be bothered to speak in human anymore. “Don’t tell me to breathe, I’m trying to do exactly that, all I can ever do is keep calm, god forbid I show any sort of emotion or express any sort of disagreement, I have to be the bigger Hypno all the time, I–”

Jet splashed water in his face. The cold rush, as well as the odd sensation of his wet fur clumping up, distracted him for a moment.

“What did you do that for?” Jung asked.

“Well, you needed to calm down. I’ve seen people on my trainer’s TV do that all the time. I hope it helped.”

Jung took a deep breath, running his hand across his drenched face. Well, it stopped his tirade, and people no longer looked on in morbid curiosity, having a mix of reactions from puzzlement to remorse. In the middle of this mess, the kid slunk away and his Delphox followed. Chasing him was pointless. He didn’t care about the money he owed at this point.

“Well, I feel better. Not good, but better.” Jung stood up, handing his glasses to Jet so he could dry his face. “Thanks, Jet.”

“No problem.” Jet presented his lanyard to the crowd and waved in an effort to drive them away. Thankfully, they took that gesture to heart as they dispersed. “Say, shall we talk about this over some ice cream? My treat.”

Jung took those glasses back and forced a smile, shaking Jet’s paw. “Yes, I’d love that.”



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Jet spared no expense when he said it was his treat. They went to the gelato truck that Jung frequented, and that was a usual place of solace for him outside of the clinic. The vendor knew Jet quite well as he gave him a gallon of his favourite vanilla bean ice cream. When Jung explained he was Jet’s friend, the human gave him a choice of up to three scoops on the house, even though Jung insisted on paying. So there they sat, on the fountain next to Anistar’s seaside.

The sun glistened on the sea, and the Wingull soared through the air, crying their various battle caws, mating calls and squawks as they swarmed this part of Anistar, preying on unsuspecting patrons for their meals.

“Sorry ‘bout that,” Jet said. “I know it ain’t always easy for you anyway.”

“It never has been, Jet.” Jung took a big bite out of a strawberry and clotted cream scoop. He was about to speak when his head suddenly ached, and he groaned in pain.

“Brain freeze,” Jet said.

Jung waited for the sensation to die down, then exhaled. “I thought people in Anistar would know better by now.”

“Well, it’s a mighty big place. Lots of trainers comin’ in for gym battles.”

“So it makes it okay for them to treat Pokemon like objects?”

“Nah, it doesn’t.” Jet ran his claws along Jung’s back – that always felt nice against his fur. “You’d be surprised by all the humans I run into that just don’t get it.”

“I wouldn’t be surprised, I’d just be saddened.” Jung sighed. “Sorry I’m being such a negative Nancy.”

“It’s alright to be upset.”

“I know.” Jung kept forcing a smile, hoping it would trick himself to feel better. “How has your day been so far?”

“Eh, okay.” Jet smacked his vanilla-coated lips. “A little boring, just keepin’ watch since a lot of trainers are comin’ in today.”

“So you’ve got nothing to do with the patrol going on at Route 18?”

“Nope.” Jet ate another big spoonful. “I know the actual police force have started lookin’ while I’m here patrollin’. Lookin’ for grunts, basically.”

“Grunts?” Jung tilted his head. “From what, Team Rocket?” He let out a hollow laugh, then coughed. “Sorry, couldn’t resist.”

“If I had a nickel.” Jet groaned. “But these guys aren’t made up like in those cartoons, they’re legit. Whoever they are, they’ve caused a great deal of trouble. Drugs, mainly.”

“So I’ve heard, not that I’ve known anyone having that problem.”

“Though, it’s when Pokemon like us start going missing that the real trouble starts. But that’s usually a job for the Lucario and such to chase after – mind readers, y’know.”

“I can imagine.”

Jet grit his teeth and dunked his head into the whole tub, slurping up its remains until he had more of it on his face than he did in his body. He shot a tiny splash of water from his back cannon into his hand.

“I still wonder how your water powers work.”

“Beats me, all I know is that this ice cream fills it back up. Anyway, this kidnapping business’ bad stuff. All of it.” He washed his face with the remaining water. “And unlike that show, these thugs aren’t just from one group of bad apples, they’re from trees that keep growin’ bad apples that keep growin’ into more trees, if that makes sense.”

“Yes.” Jung mixed it up by combining the strawberry with the coffee ice cream, which was delicious. “And now people are thinking that I’m responsible, or Hypno are responsible for what happened, just because some of them happen to live near where it happened.”

Jet crossed his blubbery arms. “They don’t think you guys are behind it, they’re just not rulin’ it out.”

“That’s absurd!” Jung crammed another scoop in his maw to pacify himself. “When was the last time a Hypno did something criminal in your line of work?”

“Well, I haven’t had to deal with Hypno, and the one Hypno I know, I trust with my life.”

Jung tried not to blush at that, burying his surprise and annoyance with yet another mouthful. “Okay, but you’ve heard the stories, right? What about outside of your area? Does your trainer watch the news?”

“Sometimes. But a case like that hasn’t happened with Hypno for a while.”

“Exactly!” Jung got to his scoop of lemon sorbet, about to take another bite when he saw that scoop looked suspiciously Hypno coloured. He couldn’t go anywhere without something reminding him of Hypno outside of living in his own skin. “You know what, I’m going to prove it and go out there.”

“To Route 18?”

“Yes. I want to know for sure that they’re not behind it.”

“But what if you get caught while you’re out there, if it is a trafficking problem?”

“Yes, that’s a good point, I suppose.” He chomped on the crispy wafer cone. “I’ll have to be on my guard. I don’t like using my powers, but if it’s in self defense, then by all means, I’ll do it. I just have to get to the bottom of this, I don’t think I can sleep knowing I’m not safe in my own city. Literally, I can’t sleep.”

“Why?”

“I wish I knew myself, but maybe those Hypno would help me find the cause of it, if I can find them.”

“It’s a long shot.”

“Absolutely. But I want... no, I need to do this.” Jung bit the last of his ice cream and stood up. “Besides, it will be nice to go for a bit of a walk. Clear my head. Get out of the city. I don’t do that often enough.”

“Well, you’re always free to walk along the beach with me again if you ever want to ask.”

“Thanks, Jet, I appreciate the offer.” He smiled. “Don’t you have to get back to patrolling soon?”

“Yeah, I do.” He returned the tub to the vendor. “I wish I could come with you but, you know, it’s not my place.”

“Of course.”

Before they left, Jet gave Jung one of his ‘big ol’ hugs’. Jet was substantially stronger than Jung and could’ve crushed him with his weight, yet he showed a great amount of restraint. Jung always appreciated his cuddles, especially at times like this. He wished it would last longer than this, but alas, they both had plans.

Jet stomped off into the distance, and Jung looked the other way where the sign indicated the distance to Route 18. He didn’t know how far the journey would be or where it would take him, but he had nothing to lose at this point.
Hi there, here for catnip!

First off, I think this is a very unique premise overall. Hypno does get a bad rap due to its dex entires, so it's a good conflict for the story. But poor Jung, having to deal with that just because he's a Hypno :(

Blaming Jung for that because Hypno is a rather realistic situation, sadly. One with a Pokemon twist, and I think you pulled it off well. You can tell that despite him lashing out at the kid, he's not bad. Rather, he's tired of being blamed and other factors. Who can blame him?

The concept overall feels like PMD meets the main games, which adds to the unique premise. As someone who has a lot of fun writing fluff/slice of life between Pokemon, I very much like the emphasis on Pokemon being individual characters. That's something I'd encourage writers to do if I were to give advice to those new to writing for Pokemon.

And given the title, I wanted to bring this up: If you want to do anything similar to this or expand on this, have a look at Bosch's works and all the peculiar symbolism in them. Caravaggio's works contain zero sunlight and are gritty and gloomy, but also have a dramatic use of lighting. Those could give some dream ideas or chapter ideas.

In any case, keep up the good work!
 

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I've always had a soft spot for Jung since I read his banette story (and wrote him into Winter Wonderland). I don't ordinarily like hypno or drowzee, but I adore Jung. He's such a lovely character, which makes this first chapter really sad. The prejudice towards hypno in a world where pokemon can do human-level jobs and master the art of human tongue carries an almost racist air. His struggles feel all too real.

I'm a bit of a sucker for this kind of plot-line, and I'm no stranger to writing similar things myself. This is a really strong opening chapter in that regard.

The characterisations are great. Every character has their own distinct personality from the get-go, and I immediately loved Jet. His love of ice-cream was delightful (and reminded me of the cops love doughnuts trope!) He also reminded me a bit of a biker, but I grew up around bikers and their bear-hugs XD

I'm already keen to know more about what's going on. I'll just share some quick random thoughts:

Tar-like sand enveloped Jung. It covered his feet, his legs, his chest, his neck, everything save for his face. He barely breathed with the grains blanketing him like a steel duvet. It was barely enough to see the world ahead of him.
This was such a powerful opening! Very vivid!
Jung held onto his Plusle for comfort, though it did very little. Ultimately, it was just some stuffed toy he got from the local Make a Mon shop. Still, cuddling it relaxed his heart.
Oh my goodness he has plushies!
Oh, crumbs, this was a palaver and a half.
Man that's so British I love it.
But he also found an article that featured Drowzee and Komala hanging out with each other on a tree, documenting how some Alolan Drowzee kept Komala company in the wild.
10/10 would love to see this. I'd also love a job just hanging out with koalas.
the Wingull soared through the air, crying their various battle caws, mating calls and squawks as they swarmed this part of Anistar, preying on unsuspecting patrons for their meals.
Even in the pokemon world the seabirds a thieving jerks.
Jet grit his teeth and dunked his head into the whole tub, slurping up its remains until he had more of it on his face than he did in his body.
If you aren't wearing it you've not enjoyed it.



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So much happened in this chapter. The meeting with the ranger was a nice outlook on the human opinion on hypno, contrasting with the presumptuous trainer in the previous chapter. The ranger seemed a lot more understanding, even if his houndoom wasn't. Even if he's a minor character it made him likable.

The hypno hideout was fun. I really enjoyed the dreamscape. It was colourful and suitably random. The way the dreaming hypno just kind of rolled with everything contrasted nicely with Jung's occasional 'wtf?' moments. I also liked the little explanation on why he craves sweets. I'd thought that was a stereotype alongside his love of plushies leaning towards the 'kidnapping' persona humans stick on hypno, but unless that's a happy accident or I'm overthinking things I don't know. Either way, it was nice to have an explanation.

Once again, you set the scene brilliantly. The descriptions make it easy to picture, and you can feel Jung's distress at the way the hypno and drowzee are living. The pokemon themselves seem to not mind at first glance, but Jung hates to see them like this. I do hope he manages to smooth things out and alter their unfortunate reputation.

For whatever reason, Jung thought it was a good idea to use repellent spray on himself. He only wanted to repel other Pokemon and avoid conflict, but if anything, it repelled himself with its noxious, musky stink: a mix of ammonia and carrion flowers. He preferred to smell like his favourite strawberry flavoured fur conditioner, not like a Skuntank.
Never thought pokemon would use repellant spray. And Jung using strawberry fur conditioner is kinda cute.
My name is Jung,” he said between clenched teeth. “What’s yours?”

Fabian.”
You've italicized the human's response which was a tad confusing.
“Thank you,” the Rapidash said, “m’neighdy.”
what XD
“And on that note, one of your kind, Moony, told me to meet Hoothoot, whoever that is.”

“Who?” a Hoothoot hooted behind him.

“That’s what I’m asking, who.”
I love dream logic
She clicked her fingers and just like that, a falling piano crushed Jung.
Slapstick dream logic
He remembered what happened in the dream, but that didn’t explain why his body ached. Then he realised he lay flat on his nose
His poor nose!
A Drowzee ran into the room like an overgrown potato with legs.
No. No. Don't you dare make me like drowzee!
The Drowzee sucked his thumb. “Don’t have one yet, but that’s okay, just call me Drip, that’s the name I kind of like, everyone calls me that, cuz I’m always drooling and stuff, oh hey, I’m drooling now!”
Seriously, stop! :wowzard:

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I have to pause my reading to comment on the opening of Jung's dream before I forget. This really reminded me of the story in Fruits Basket that Momiji tells. The way the man gives the parts of his body away until he has nothing left, but it still gives him happiness, seemed to be echoed by the way Jung keeps handing parts of him to his pokemon patients. Another thought was about Jung being made of candy. Puts his candy addiction into a whole other perspective D=

These nightmares really make his self-loathing apparent, and its really sad. It also makes me want to know more about his past. The way Alice's parents spoke about him makes it seem that even other pokemon hate hypno (either that or Alice wasn't actually a fletchinder, which makes her feather plucking a whole lot more dark... but I'm just using dream-logic here and probably overthinking things).

This was a pretty intense chapter. Jung's struggles are real. Hopefully embracing his need to eat dreams will help? Surely that alone doesn't make hypno into bad pokemon. That would be like saying lions are evil for eating wildebeast.

though the quarters still showed their age with the chipped plaster walls and the tiny spots of mould in the corner of the ceiling.
The little details like this are really nice!

Everything turned blacker than black, except for the glow of Jung’s soul and Hoothoot, whose belly expanded with an orange glow like a Toxicroak’s sac. Then Hoothoot deflated like a balloon, squeaking as he floated away.
Wow this was wonderfully comic XD
Judge Judgy pointed their sceptre to the Kangaskhan. “Judges, juries and executioners? What is your verdict?”

The cubs popped out of their mothers’ pouches and pressed the big red buttons that sat before them on the jury’s desk. It made a buzzer like the losing sound on a game show.
This was really cute and somewhat hysterical!

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I really like Brie. His aloofness at the start then the bonding session with Jung over baking went from 'jerk' to 'adorable' in a very believable manner. Looks like Jung has a new friend to share his sweets with. It amused me that their attempt at madeleines was a failure though! I also expected Jung to recoil at the smell of cheese when Brie shook his paw... I mean, Brie had just taken a bite out of a blue cheese wheel. That stuff reeks!

Drip's dream was pretty adorable and random. I really liked the tea-party. And diglett-headed Jung was hilarious. It spiralled smoothly into an internal conflict, which brought more questions and perhaps some answers for both Drip and Jung. Jung becoming a monster about to eat Drip was alarming, yet the little drowzee was oddly okay with it. I suppose when you're used to your dreams being eaten you just kinda roll with it.

Yikes, and the poor hypno clan has been found! I hope they get away unscathed!

“Those clothes.” Jeanne tilted her head. “You look like you’re about to dissect a Politoed.”
WTF do they do to pokemon in this world?!
“Was there a time where we weren’t feared?”

“Hard to tell, not a lot of stories really talk about us, so I dunno if it was always the case. We were used as therapy mon, like Chansey, though more for putting patients to sleep.” She winked at Jung. “You couldn’t have picked a better job.”
A little back-history here to a time where hypno weren't feared is nice.
“Oh, no, I wouldn’t dream of judging you for it.”

Jeanne turned back and cocked a finger gun. “Ha, dream. Good pun.”

Jung scoffed. He didn’t even plan that joke.
I like her already!
Drilbur nursed a Sinistea in his claws. He drank it and immediately dropped to the floor, legs sticking up in the air.

“I’m fine,” the Drilbur said, “I’m just getting acquainted with this fine chap.”
A bit of a Wonderland feel here XD and a very British-sounding sinistea!
He shrank and swam through the whole in Jung’s stomach, then back around.
This should be 'hole'
A Fletchinder floated down to the seabed, unconscious but not drowning. Drip stared at it and poked at its side with a finger.

“Don’t touch her— I mean, it.” Jung tugged at his ears. “Without getting into specifics, I used to know a human who would let me eat her dreams. She knew how much it meant to me. But one day, I got greedy and ate too much. She couldn’t get out of bed for two days.”
Oh wow this seems to answer my question about the fletchinder...

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Wow that raid was brutal. You portrayed the conflict of the human rangers as well as the hypno, and it worked. When they finally listened to Jung there was a mix of responses, and a real feeling of guilt. Fabian being used as a puppet was both dark and mildly amusing. Jung can speak, but seeing no one listening to him he had to take a drastic action.


Poor Drip. Why are you making me like drowzee? XD I adore that little bundle of joy. I was horrified when he got attacked by that abhorrent houndoom. Having demonic-looking dogs attacking innocent hypno feels like a deliberate choice to me, but I might be overthinking things. I'd be curious to know if you have a reason for choosing houndoom specifically though.

The chapter had a nice ending, with the rangers offering to help and letting the hypno keep their home for the time being. I was also pleased the hypno told Jung he's welcome in the future. The initial reactions had me worried he was going to lose his new friends.

“Nobody’s going to hurt you as long as you stay there. I guarantee it.” She smiled — Jung could tell she forced it.
This carries an air of foreboding...

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This was a nice ending chapter. Jung has some solid friends in Jet and Amelie. Even the man at the groomers seems to think highly of him. Yet Jung still thinks very low of himself, as echoed in the ending note to the chapter. I really feel for him.

A candle of Hypno and Drowzee
I've never heard of a group of hypno and drowzee being referred to as a candle before, but I like it a lot!
He imagined the Eevee traipsing through a cheddary garden, unsullied by human hands. There were bushes made of parmesan and trees that grew any number of fine cheeses by the block: edam, smoked, gouda, and every nice cheese imaginable. Jung imagined him poking his head through holes, only to find more cheese, and if he hit any dead ends, he would eat his way through it to make another path, savouring its tangy, meaty flavours. There was no end to this garden of cheesy delights.
I sure hope that poor eevee isn't lactose inolerant...

I enjoyed reading this a lot. I'm a little sad it's ended, but you've done so fantastically. The mystery isn't solved. There are still questions gone unanswered that leave the reader thinking about them after the story's conclusion. Will anyone find Droop and the other missing pokemon and children? What will become of the hypno clan? Will Jung ever get a restful sleep and feel accepted?
 
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