Lol no
Youngster
- Pronouns
- He/him
Hello, everyone!
This is my first fanfiction, in english! So, as you can understand from the last sentence, english is not my first language. Please bear with me a little and don't throw the fic away for some errors, or do... I am not your boss. I open to any tips to improve it.
The plot is happening after the events of Pokémon Legends: Arceus, in the Hisui region. But some years later, so there won't be any of the known characters from the game, or we can imagine it happening in a different timeline with similar events, like Ultra Sun and Ultra Moon. What I mean it's that the Diamond and Pearl Clan know about Palkia and Dialga existing, the battle against giratina already happened and yadda yadda... It's just to let you understand.
So, let's begin, I hope I will complete this someday haha;
The figure was that of a boy of average height, just over twenty years old, wearing a long dark gray jacket, a shirt of a dull purple color with tribal signs on the chest. The pants were black and loose, which ended in boots of the same black, but darker. The hair was a very dark brown, worn upwards in long spiky locks.
"It's been a while since I've seen a sunset like this..." the guy commented, bringing a hand to his forehead as he turned his gaze to the sun that was now disappearing behind the horizon, bringing with it the bright light with which it colored the sky. "Here in the Village they must enjoy perfect days... I think they're having a great time." he then added, huffing as he was now near the large gate of Jubilife Village.
"Hey, you! Stop!" a voice alarmed the guy. A man dressed in red and with a large straw hat suddenly jumped out near the walls of Jubilife Village.
"Um... what's the problem?" asked the boy impatiently while the guard showed a stern expression.
"It's almost night. We're about to close the gates... no visitors allowed." explained the man, raising an open hand forward, signaling the young man to stop.
"But... you are kidding!" exclaimed the boy in disbelief. "After all the way I've come, you want to lock me out?" he then asked, shaking his head. "The gate is still open, can't I just go for a jog and get in?"
"NO!" shouted the guard without moving from his position. "When I'm on duty, visitors aren't allowed in here after dark." the man explained, slowly moving a hand behind his back. The boy didn't go unnoticed.
"But it's not the... after dark yet..." the young man tried to justify while the other gritted his teeth.
"You insist, huh..." the guard simply commented, while with a quick gesture of his hand, he took out a round capsule from which, with a flash, a brown, rodent-like Pokémon came out. "Bidoof, Rollout!" the guard ordered while his Pokémon curled up and then launched itself at the boy, who promptly dodged the blow.
"Attacking without warning?" the boy asked, moving a hand to his belt. "Where are the Poké Balls... Oh, on the other side." the boy said absentmindedly, also taking a capsule from which a little monkey with a flame for a tail came out. "Chimchar, Scratch!" the boy commanded while his Pokémon threw itself towards the enemy. The Bidoof, however, had already turned around and hit the Chimchar, continuing to roll.
"Hehe! You better give up right now!" the guard commented confidently. "Throwing a Chimchar, a fire Pokémon, on a rock-type attack... a classic amateur move." he then added.
"Damn, how stupid I am..." the boy thought, looking seriously at the battlefield, while the enemy Bidoof was returning to Chimchar. "I didn't remember if I had the Balls on the right or left of my belt and that lost moment cost me." he then added with a grimace. "Chimchar, let's try again: Scratch!" the boy commanded while the Pokémon skillfully dodged the enemy's attack for then hitting him to the side with a lash of claws.
"Bidoof!" the guard called while the rodent lost its stability due to the attack and fell to the ground.
"Ember!" the boy replied as Chimchar leapt into the air and spat out numerous spherical flames from its mouth that hit his opponent, knocking it out.
"Damn..." the guard complained, retreating his Pokémon. "But let's see how you do with this!" he declared, sending out a Pokémon that looked like a weasel with a yellow collar. "Buizel, Water Gun!" the guard then ordered as the Pokémon shot a jet of water from its mouth.
"Ember!" the boy repeated as Chimchar emitted more flames, which collided with the water attack, causing a cloud of steam. However, Buizel's attack had an advantage over the reaction, and it continued its run, breaking through the fog.
"Did I hit him?" the guard wondered in confusion, unable to see the situation clearly. "Dang it... Water Jet!" Buizel created water around himself, which he then used as a propulsion system to charge headlong towards his enemy, his two tails whirling wildly. There was a thud, as if the hit was a success, and the guard smiled in satisfaction. The cloud cleared, and the guard could see that his Buizel was looking around, next to him, there was a a Pokémon, but it didn't look like Chimchar. "NO! GET AWAY!" the guard yelled to warn his Pokémon, but it was too late.
"Spark!" the guy ordered to his yellow and chunk Pokémon, who starts charging electricity through his horns for then tackling the Buizel. "And now, Elekid: Quick Attack!" the guy said, and his Pokémon moved as fast as possible, hitting with a punch the Buizel, who was already suffering from the previous electric attack. The Buizel fell to the ground without any energy. "Victory!" said the guy showing a V-sign with his fingers, while his Elekid was laughing with arrogance.
The guard huffed, retiring his Pokémon. "You take advantage of the steam to change your Pokémon, so I couldn't see the switch..." the guard commented while the boy pulled back his Elekid into the Poké Ball. "You are not as bad as I thought... now that I notice, your shirt... you are from Pearl Clan!"
"Yes, I am." the guy replied simply. "The name is Raphael, from the Pearl Clan! I am here because the village chief called me here... well, he called for my father, but the old man wants me to take responsabilities for what it will be the future of the clan... so, here I am." the boy explained, even though the explanation looked like more a leash out to himself than an answer to the guard.
"Meguro called you here? I didn't hear anything about it." the guard said, while he was looking skeptical to Raphael, who starts walking in the gate direction. "Stop, I said!" the guard showed his open hand again to stop the young man.
"What? Again? What about the fight we just had then?" Raphael asked perplexed.
"It was not to decide if you can enter or not... it was to chase you away!" the guard answered while Raphael started to have an eye twitching.
"Y-you... there's no way I'll go all the back way to my clan or that I wait out there for tomorrow, with the random weather which is hitting the region lately? I'm gonna enter, pal... I don't think you can't stop me anyway." Raphael started moving towards the guard, who looked a bit intimidated by the other guy and he kept repeating that Raphael needs to stop.
"You are forbidden to enter." a voice made Raphael to turn around. He could see a group of people behind him, he didn't even realize they were getting close to him. A man and a woman dressed just like the guard who lost against Raphael, there was then a girl with cobalt eyes and hair, her hair tied in a long braid that fell over her left shoulder; she was dressed in blue, with a P stylized on her shirt. But the voice came from a tall men in his thirties, wearing loose-fitting red camouflage clothes with dirty combat boots, and with unkempt brown hair.
"I have no mercy for suspicious people." he said, letting out a big boulder-like Pokémon, with four arms. "Graveler, Self-destruct..." he said. And his Pokémon started glowing, making Raphael realizing the danger, but it was too late. An explosion happened, which hit Raphael squarely.
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After a moment made totally of void, the young man opened his eyes again.
"Oh, what the..? OUCH!" Raphael wondered as he pulled himself up from a bed, before feeling a pang in his stomach, and he had to put a hand on it as if to try to stop the agony.
"Oh... you're finally awake." commented the girl with blue hair who was at the entrance a while ago; now sitting on a chair, next to the boy. "You're in the recovery room of the Team Galactic headquarters... you took a... nasty hit." explained the girl while Raphael shook his head looking at the sheets as if to clarify his memories.
"AH! YES! THAT GUY!" Raphael shouted in dismay and fury, starting to check around.
"Quiet! There are others sleeping here!" the girl scolded him while Raphael closed his mouth and started to study the room. Indeed, there were many other beds, and some were occupied by people who were sleeping. The young man looked back at the girl, studying her carefully, so much so that she began to feel embarrassed.
"Did you rob me?" Raphael asked as the girl widened her eyes.
"Wha- no... this is you 'thank you' for the fact I took you and brought you here to get cured?" the girl said, visibly offended.
"But weren't you with the guy who attacked me?" Raphael asked, confused and trying to be on guard.
"Um... yes, my name is Julie, and I'm a member of the Survey Corps." the girl introduced herself, bending down for a moment. "The one who knocked you out was Saliat, the head of the Security Corps." she then said with a desolate look. "He's a bit of a brash guy and takes his role very seriously... he saw you arguing with one of his men and so..." the young woman said, scratching her head while Raphael looked annoyed at the justification he had just received. "But in the end I had you brought here to the Jubilife village to make sure you were okay." the boy gave a skeptical look.
"No. Let me get this straight..." Raphael said, perplexed, while Julie started listening. "I had to fight that guard and I was attacked by you because I was trying to get into the village... and then you took me in the village anyway? The place which I was attacked because I wanted to get in?" the boy asked, unable to understand the logic of events. "That explosion must had hit you harder than how it hit me." he said, looking away from Julie.
"You have a lot of nerve to talk to your savior like that!" Julie commented hysterically; pointing a finger at Raphael who pretended not to notice out of spite.
"Quiet... people are sleeping." he said, causing Julie almost to hit him.
"Anyway, it's because... after you um... fell to the ground..." the girl commented, trying to choose the right words "The guard at the gate said that you tried to explain that you were invited to come to the village... and we saw the Pearl Clan symbol on your shirt... and Saliat said that apparently the leader of that clan was coming for something... and well, well... we realized we were wrong." the girl explained with a desolate expression but sketching an apologetic smile. "We didn't mean to hit the leader of the Pearl Clan... I apologize for-"
"I am not the leader. The leader sent me here, but I don't have that title yet." he said huffing.
"Oh... oh.. what a luck!" she said bringing an hand to her chest.
"What do you mean? It's less serious because I am not the leader?" Raphael asked bothered by Julie's words, by the girl widened her eyes, realizing what she just said. "Nevermind... huff... but what day is it? And what time is it?" the boy asked, tossing in bed while Julie tried to invite him to calm down. "There's that meeting with the leader of Galaxy Team!"
"Calm down... you slept a long time. It's morning now... when is the meeting?" Julie asked.
"Morning? Of the day after you attacked me?" Raphael asked while Julie nodded perplexed. "Damn it! The meeting is this morning." the young man said, jumping out of the bed in pain, under Julie's surprised eyes.
"So you're a captain of the Pearl Clan? I don't know much about you." the girl commented looking at Raphael like she was suspecting a bit of him. "You're not someone who disguised himself as a member of Pearl Clan to sneak into the village, are you?" Julie asked in shock, putting her hands over her mouth.
"Are you getting these doubts now? After you asked me sorry because you attacked me?" Raphael asked in an annoyed tone. "Anyway, no... my name is Raphael, and I came here basically to act as the leader of the Pearl Clan... since I'm his son." the boy explained with a huff, while Julie looked at him in surprise.
This is my first fanfiction, in english! So, as you can understand from the last sentence, english is not my first language. Please bear with me a little and don't throw the fic away for some errors, or do... I am not your boss. I open to any tips to improve it.
The plot is happening after the events of Pokémon Legends: Arceus, in the Hisui region. But some years later, so there won't be any of the known characters from the game, or we can imagine it happening in a different timeline with similar events, like Ultra Sun and Ultra Moon. What I mean it's that the Diamond and Pearl Clan know about Palkia and Dialga existing, the battle against giratina already happened and yadda yadda... It's just to let you understand.
So, let's begin, I hope I will complete this someday haha;
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Chapter 1: The name is...
It was sunset in the Hisui region. A few purple clouds were moving slowly in the orange sky, and the weather was not too hot and was pleasant. The dirt roads that led to the Jubilife Village were not deserted despite the impending night that was coming, in fact someone was walking calmly towards the village.Chapter 1: The name is...
The figure was that of a boy of average height, just over twenty years old, wearing a long dark gray jacket, a shirt of a dull purple color with tribal signs on the chest. The pants were black and loose, which ended in boots of the same black, but darker. The hair was a very dark brown, worn upwards in long spiky locks.
"It's been a while since I've seen a sunset like this..." the guy commented, bringing a hand to his forehead as he turned his gaze to the sun that was now disappearing behind the horizon, bringing with it the bright light with which it colored the sky. "Here in the Village they must enjoy perfect days... I think they're having a great time." he then added, huffing as he was now near the large gate of Jubilife Village.
"Hey, you! Stop!" a voice alarmed the guy. A man dressed in red and with a large straw hat suddenly jumped out near the walls of Jubilife Village.
"Um... what's the problem?" asked the boy impatiently while the guard showed a stern expression.
"It's almost night. We're about to close the gates... no visitors allowed." explained the man, raising an open hand forward, signaling the young man to stop.
"But... you are kidding!" exclaimed the boy in disbelief. "After all the way I've come, you want to lock me out?" he then asked, shaking his head. "The gate is still open, can't I just go for a jog and get in?"
"NO!" shouted the guard without moving from his position. "When I'm on duty, visitors aren't allowed in here after dark." the man explained, slowly moving a hand behind his back. The boy didn't go unnoticed.
"But it's not the... after dark yet..." the young man tried to justify while the other gritted his teeth.
"You insist, huh..." the guard simply commented, while with a quick gesture of his hand, he took out a round capsule from which, with a flash, a brown, rodent-like Pokémon came out. "Bidoof, Rollout!" the guard ordered while his Pokémon curled up and then launched itself at the boy, who promptly dodged the blow.
"Attacking without warning?" the boy asked, moving a hand to his belt. "Where are the Poké Balls... Oh, on the other side." the boy said absentmindedly, also taking a capsule from which a little monkey with a flame for a tail came out. "Chimchar, Scratch!" the boy commanded while his Pokémon threw itself towards the enemy. The Bidoof, however, had already turned around and hit the Chimchar, continuing to roll.
"Hehe! You better give up right now!" the guard commented confidently. "Throwing a Chimchar, a fire Pokémon, on a rock-type attack... a classic amateur move." he then added.
"Damn, how stupid I am..." the boy thought, looking seriously at the battlefield, while the enemy Bidoof was returning to Chimchar. "I didn't remember if I had the Balls on the right or left of my belt and that lost moment cost me." he then added with a grimace. "Chimchar, let's try again: Scratch!" the boy commanded while the Pokémon skillfully dodged the enemy's attack for then hitting him to the side with a lash of claws.
"Bidoof!" the guard called while the rodent lost its stability due to the attack and fell to the ground.
"Ember!" the boy replied as Chimchar leapt into the air and spat out numerous spherical flames from its mouth that hit his opponent, knocking it out.
"Damn..." the guard complained, retreating his Pokémon. "But let's see how you do with this!" he declared, sending out a Pokémon that looked like a weasel with a yellow collar. "Buizel, Water Gun!" the guard then ordered as the Pokémon shot a jet of water from its mouth.
"Ember!" the boy repeated as Chimchar emitted more flames, which collided with the water attack, causing a cloud of steam. However, Buizel's attack had an advantage over the reaction, and it continued its run, breaking through the fog.
"Did I hit him?" the guard wondered in confusion, unable to see the situation clearly. "Dang it... Water Jet!" Buizel created water around himself, which he then used as a propulsion system to charge headlong towards his enemy, his two tails whirling wildly. There was a thud, as if the hit was a success, and the guard smiled in satisfaction. The cloud cleared, and the guard could see that his Buizel was looking around, next to him, there was a a Pokémon, but it didn't look like Chimchar. "NO! GET AWAY!" the guard yelled to warn his Pokémon, but it was too late.
"Spark!" the guy ordered to his yellow and chunk Pokémon, who starts charging electricity through his horns for then tackling the Buizel. "And now, Elekid: Quick Attack!" the guy said, and his Pokémon moved as fast as possible, hitting with a punch the Buizel, who was already suffering from the previous electric attack. The Buizel fell to the ground without any energy. "Victory!" said the guy showing a V-sign with his fingers, while his Elekid was laughing with arrogance.
The guard huffed, retiring his Pokémon. "You take advantage of the steam to change your Pokémon, so I couldn't see the switch..." the guard commented while the boy pulled back his Elekid into the Poké Ball. "You are not as bad as I thought... now that I notice, your shirt... you are from Pearl Clan!"
"Yes, I am." the guy replied simply. "The name is Raphael, from the Pearl Clan! I am here because the village chief called me here... well, he called for my father, but the old man wants me to take responsabilities for what it will be the future of the clan... so, here I am." the boy explained, even though the explanation looked like more a leash out to himself than an answer to the guard.
"Meguro called you here? I didn't hear anything about it." the guard said, while he was looking skeptical to Raphael, who starts walking in the gate direction. "Stop, I said!" the guard showed his open hand again to stop the young man.
"What? Again? What about the fight we just had then?" Raphael asked perplexed.
"It was not to decide if you can enter or not... it was to chase you away!" the guard answered while Raphael started to have an eye twitching.
"Y-you... there's no way I'll go all the back way to my clan or that I wait out there for tomorrow, with the random weather which is hitting the region lately? I'm gonna enter, pal... I don't think you can't stop me anyway." Raphael started moving towards the guard, who looked a bit intimidated by the other guy and he kept repeating that Raphael needs to stop.
"You are forbidden to enter." a voice made Raphael to turn around. He could see a group of people behind him, he didn't even realize they were getting close to him. A man and a woman dressed just like the guard who lost against Raphael, there was then a girl with cobalt eyes and hair, her hair tied in a long braid that fell over her left shoulder; she was dressed in blue, with a P stylized on her shirt. But the voice came from a tall men in his thirties, wearing loose-fitting red camouflage clothes with dirty combat boots, and with unkempt brown hair.
"I have no mercy for suspicious people." he said, letting out a big boulder-like Pokémon, with four arms. "Graveler, Self-destruct..." he said. And his Pokémon started glowing, making Raphael realizing the danger, but it was too late. An explosion happened, which hit Raphael squarely.
______
After a moment made totally of void, the young man opened his eyes again.
"Oh, what the..? OUCH!" Raphael wondered as he pulled himself up from a bed, before feeling a pang in his stomach, and he had to put a hand on it as if to try to stop the agony.
"Oh... you're finally awake." commented the girl with blue hair who was at the entrance a while ago; now sitting on a chair, next to the boy. "You're in the recovery room of the Team Galactic headquarters... you took a... nasty hit." explained the girl while Raphael shook his head looking at the sheets as if to clarify his memories.
"AH! YES! THAT GUY!" Raphael shouted in dismay and fury, starting to check around.
"Quiet! There are others sleeping here!" the girl scolded him while Raphael closed his mouth and started to study the room. Indeed, there were many other beds, and some were occupied by people who were sleeping. The young man looked back at the girl, studying her carefully, so much so that she began to feel embarrassed.
"Did you rob me?" Raphael asked as the girl widened her eyes.
"Wha- no... this is you 'thank you' for the fact I took you and brought you here to get cured?" the girl said, visibly offended.
"But weren't you with the guy who attacked me?" Raphael asked, confused and trying to be on guard.
"Um... yes, my name is Julie, and I'm a member of the Survey Corps." the girl introduced herself, bending down for a moment. "The one who knocked you out was Saliat, the head of the Security Corps." she then said with a desolate look. "He's a bit of a brash guy and takes his role very seriously... he saw you arguing with one of his men and so..." the young woman said, scratching her head while Raphael looked annoyed at the justification he had just received. "But in the end I had you brought here to the Jubilife village to make sure you were okay." the boy gave a skeptical look.
"No. Let me get this straight..." Raphael said, perplexed, while Julie started listening. "I had to fight that guard and I was attacked by you because I was trying to get into the village... and then you took me in the village anyway? The place which I was attacked because I wanted to get in?" the boy asked, unable to understand the logic of events. "That explosion must had hit you harder than how it hit me." he said, looking away from Julie.
"You have a lot of nerve to talk to your savior like that!" Julie commented hysterically; pointing a finger at Raphael who pretended not to notice out of spite.
"Quiet... people are sleeping." he said, causing Julie almost to hit him.
"Anyway, it's because... after you um... fell to the ground..." the girl commented, trying to choose the right words "The guard at the gate said that you tried to explain that you were invited to come to the village... and we saw the Pearl Clan symbol on your shirt... and Saliat said that apparently the leader of that clan was coming for something... and well, well... we realized we were wrong." the girl explained with a desolate expression but sketching an apologetic smile. "We didn't mean to hit the leader of the Pearl Clan... I apologize for-"
"I am not the leader. The leader sent me here, but I don't have that title yet." he said huffing.
"Oh... oh.. what a luck!" she said bringing an hand to her chest.
"What do you mean? It's less serious because I am not the leader?" Raphael asked bothered by Julie's words, by the girl widened her eyes, realizing what she just said. "Nevermind... huff... but what day is it? And what time is it?" the boy asked, tossing in bed while Julie tried to invite him to calm down. "There's that meeting with the leader of Galaxy Team!"
"Calm down... you slept a long time. It's morning now... when is the meeting?" Julie asked.
"Morning? Of the day after you attacked me?" Raphael asked while Julie nodded perplexed. "Damn it! The meeting is this morning." the young man said, jumping out of the bed in pain, under Julie's surprised eyes.
"So you're a captain of the Pearl Clan? I don't know much about you." the girl commented looking at Raphael like she was suspecting a bit of him. "You're not someone who disguised himself as a member of Pearl Clan to sneak into the village, are you?" Julie asked in shock, putting her hands over her mouth.
"Are you getting these doubts now? After you asked me sorry because you attacked me?" Raphael asked in an annoyed tone. "Anyway, no... my name is Raphael, and I came here basically to act as the leader of the Pearl Clan... since I'm his son." the boy explained with a huff, while Julie looked at him in surprise.