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Pokémon Starlight's 2025 Drabble Bingo

Starlight Aurate

Ad Jesum per Mariam | pfp by kintsugi
Location
Route 123
Partners
  1. mightyena
  2. psyduck
Heya, here's a triad of Drabble Bingo, the card courtesy of Negrek! I went with:

New Friend
Into the Unknown
A Fresh Start

Waylaid by ThievesThe Winding RoadSleeping Rough
New FriendInto the UnknownA Fresh Start
PinnacleDark AlleywayHorizon

Enjoy!


A New Friend


Slivers of moonlight shone through slats in the window. Tod glanced at his alarm clock.

4:43 AM

He sat up. There was no more use in trying to sleep. How many times did he sleep in the last few months?

Tod considered making breakfast, but he wasn’t hungry. He turned on a light, grabbed a book, and began to read:
For my soul is filled with evils
My life is on the brink of the grave
I am reckoned as one in the tomb
I have reached the end of my strength

But his mind quickly wandered. It was impossible to focus on the words. Even reading held no more joy for him. He returned the book to the nightstand. Just as he turned off the light, he noticed a movement from the shadows.

Tod peered into the darkness, and it peered back at him. As his eyes adjusted, he saw a dim red glow—and a deeper darkness beyond the silver streaks of moonlight.

The startling red eye would probably have terrified him in days past. But Tod didn’t often feel terror anymore.

As a child, his mother told him that Duskull would take misbehaving children away, never to be seen again. The fear of being spirited away was enough to make Tod behave properly. But he was an adult now. And after months of sleepless nights, days of forgetting to eat, and fighting just to get through each day, Tod was unbothered.

“Have you come to take me?” he asked the Duskull, which only gazed at him unblinkingly. “Fine. Wherever we’re going can’t be worse than this.”

Duskull floated over to Tod. Now that the Pokemon was fully lit by the moon, Tod saw its wispy body with crossbones on its back. Duskull merely continued to gaze at Tod, its head (or its whole body, as it lacked anything more than a skull) tilted to the side as though it were curious.

Tod smirked. “Not going anywhere? Just going to float and stare, huh? Then why even bother coming in here? You’re not going to eat my emotions, or my soul, or kidnap me and send me to your spirit world. What do you do, then? Just mill about and watch people? What kind of a life is that?”

The smirk faded from Tod’s face as he gazed at the waning moonlight.

“Yeah… what kind of a life is this?”

Duskull floated closer to Tod. He sighed.

“Sorry about that… It must be hard to just float about and not really have anyone to be with.” A wan smile crossed his face as Duskull settled on his knee. “But, hey, you’re not alone.”


Into the Unknown


“What is that?”

“We’ve done it! We’ve finally found it!”

Dreymon’s heart pounded furiously within his chest as he brought his pickaxe down full force. The rock wall crumbled away before him, revealing glints of golden light beneath. His assistant, Quimby, hung back.

“Are—are you sure, Dreymon? Something seems odd about these golden lights…”

But Dreymon ploughed away, the light growing stronger with each strike. Eventually, a large section of rock wall fell away. Dreymon and Quimby gasped.

A corridor of what seemed to be pure gold lay in front of them, opening into several side hallways. Glyphs of an unintelligible language were carved into the ceilings. But even more shocking was the overwhelming presence that filled the minds of Dreymon and Quimby—an inhuman presence, yet vastly intelligent. And, somehow, Dreymon knew that there were hundreds—perhaps thousands—of these psychic beings with them.

As the thought entered Dreymon’s mind, he suddenly realised that the glyphs—which he thought had decorative circles—were blinking. A sense of awe and fear flooded his heart as he saw several glyphs detach from the walls and float before him. His fear abated as he received the mental sensations of these strange creatures. They bore no malevolence, and were just as curious about him as he was about them!

“Quimby… this wasn’t the treasure I was expecting to find… but I’m not disappointed!”


A Fresh Start


The salty wind whipped his face as he stared out over the seaborn cliff.

“Throwing them away, then? For good?”

Rosie placed a hand on Dustin’s shoulder as he stared at the wooden box in his hands. Its contents were light—just bits of clothing, really—but it seemed to grow heavier as he stared at it. It was time to get rid of it, to be done with it, to let it all go. But those thoughts only made it more difficult to stop holding on.

Dustin took a shaky breath.

“Yes, Rosie. I found the owners of that Marowak, and I apologised for what I did. I found the little Cubone and apologised to him, too. They… they forgave me.”

Rosie squeezed his arm. “Forgive yourself, too.”

Dustin nodded.

“I can’t pretend it didn’t happen. But it doesn’t have power over me anymore. I won’t let it destroy me.”

At these words, he cast the box over the cliff. The lid detached as it sailed down, and the contents fluttered in the wind before being lost to the sea. As Dustin and Rosie turned, he glimpsed a bright red R set in the black jumper wave at him, a last farewell of his previous life.
 

tomatorade

The great speckled bird
Location
A town at the bottom of the ocean
Pronouns
He/Him
Partners
  1. quilava
  2. buizel
A little midnight snack for me :]

A New Friend

I like this one. It's got an arc. and in very few words, too.

The formatting of the book passage is a little weird. Part of it is forum issues, I think, but part of it is like... is it a poem? It's described as a book and formatted as a poem so I wasn't sure how to read it, really. Or maybe it's something else, I just thought it was a little awkward for some reason. It does sound like it's a passage from something but I don't know what that something is.

I like the way this one is written. It's a little edgy, but the prose feels more spare. Even than the other drabbles, which are all shorter. The straightforwardness helps both for the size of the fic and the idea of it. I get the bleakness more and while these aren't necessarily meant to all be connected, I like the contrast it has with the other stories. They're all hopeful, to some extent, but they get unique tones each to set them apart.
Also minor nitpick: Tod as a name is so close to Todd that it tripped me up every time I saw it.

Into The Unknown

I'm mining...
for diamonds...

Cute little golden piece about the discovery of unown. I found this faintly sinister for some reason? I think because everything I've seen about unown makes them seem like little freaks.

This is the weakest drabble to me. It is just an idea, at the end of the day, as all drabbles are, but compared to the other two it's simpler and doesn't have much of a spin. It's a compelling image on it's own but not much more than that. Though I did like the passages here. It has a distinct image to it.

A Fresh Start

I think this one is my favourite. It's the most efficient, complete story. It's got a little twist to the end. I think it's most effective in the way it begs you to question what the box is about and feeds you a couple bits of information to see the ending before it comes, and it's only a couple paragraphs long which is pretty smooth. It's structured very well, I guess. And hooked me in the first two sentences which is maybe more important for a drabble.

I think you could probably axe that final "...a last farewell of his previous life.", it feels redundant with what came before. I thought the image of the R waving back at him was clear enough to express that idea without being explained.

Thank you for these little drabbles :]
 
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