MegaAbsolOfDespair
Certified Edgelord
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I’m here for the Mini Blitz to review Chapter 4! Sorry if I end up forgetting anything from the previous chapters, it’s been a while since I last checked out the fic.
The chapter starts by directly continuing on from the previous one. I remember Brian the Riolu and Lance the Zorua saving Marty the Zebstrika and Gama the Croagunk in the previous chapter.
After that, Brian and Lance arrive in Heavenwind Town. They seem to have stopped by Heavenwind on their way to Bright Dawn.
Then, we are introduced to Percival the Corviknight, Teslan the shiny Luxray, and Vergil the Luxio. The electric types seem to be threatening Percival and the residents of Heavenwind in exchange for money.
Brian and Lance seem to want to defeat Teslan’s squad to protect the city!
The two encounter Teslan and his squad, and they fight against each other. At first, I was a little confused with the “attacking like a ghost” part since I didn’t realize who the dialogue belonged to, but I figured it out eventually. In general, after I understood the scene, it was a pretty clever strategy.
I liked the hopeful end to the chapter, and I hope to see Lance and Brian defeating Teslan’s squad!
The chapter starts by directly continuing on from the previous one. I remember Brian the Riolu and Lance the Zorua saving Marty the Zebstrika and Gama the Croagunk in the previous chapter.
After that, Brian and Lance arrive in Heavenwind Town. They seem to have stopped by Heavenwind on their way to Bright Dawn.
Then, we are introduced to Percival the Corviknight, Teslan the shiny Luxray, and Vergil the Luxio. The electric types seem to be threatening Percival and the residents of Heavenwind in exchange for money.
Brian and Lance seem to want to defeat Teslan’s squad to protect the city!
The two encounter Teslan and his squad, and they fight against each other. At first, I was a little confused with the “attacking like a ghost” part since I didn’t realize who the dialogue belonged to, but I figured it out eventually. In general, after I understood the scene, it was a pretty clever strategy.
I liked the hopeful end to the chapter, and I hope to see Lance and Brian defeating Teslan’s squad!