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Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Fractured Elements

Navar

Professional Mudkip Lover
Location
Brazil
Pronouns
He/Him
Partners
  1. swampert
  2. chesnaught-apron
  3. lucario-mega
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In a bustling city, history is about to begin anew. After all, legends are meant to be rewritten.

Altair, a Lokix, had always wanted an adventure of his own, growing up on tales of heroes. He found a kindred soul in Mack, a Cyclizar, and over time the two became friends, and eventually, partners.

Right when their luck runs out, the emergence of a sudden crisis involving mysterious crystals gives them the opportunity of a lifetime, and together with an Aggron and Lycanroc, Altair and Mack go on the adventure they’d always wanted.

A new hero. A new legend.


Act 1

Task 1: A Jump To The Sky
Task 2: Spark Like A Meteor
Task 3: Next Level
Task 4: Rising Fighters
Task 5: Deep Breath
 
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Task 1 - A Jump To The Sky New

Navar

Professional Mudkip Lover
Location
Brazil
Pronouns
He/Him
Partners
  1. swampert
  2. chesnaught-apron
  3. lucario-mega
Task 1 - A Jump To The Sky


They were surrounded. Smoke and flames around them, everywhere. And if that wasn’t bad enough, Duskull were circling them, grunting and screeching. It was a tall building, with shattered windows nearby. Once upon a time, Pokémon were able to work there, but now every chair and table was destroyed.

In the center of it all were two Pokémon, both battered. The first of them was a Lokix, his yellow scales glistening with the light of the fire as he clutched his red scarf. Next to him was a Cyclizar, catching his breath and struggling to keep himself standing.

“Hiro, this is madness! We can’t possibly beat them!”

The Lokix looked down at his hands, seeing how much they were trembling. “I’m starting to think you have a point, Yato.”

“Of course I have a point! Plus, this building’s gonna collapse at any moment!” Yato pointed at the windows with his tail. “C’mon, if we do it now, we’ll be able to escape Spidops—”

Before anything could happen, the two managed to hear a loud rumble coming from the ground, way off in the distance. It didn’t take long before it cracked open. Rubble flew in the air, hitting most parts of the room, including the mooks, though some managed to escape the strikes. Hiro, though, kicked each rock that flew towards him and Yato to protect both.

A screech filled the air before they saw a Pokémon jump from the crack, sticking to the ceiling.

It was, apparently, a Spidops. Apparently because, while it certainly had the looks of one, its skin was red and black, with mechanical parts attached like wires in each arm, ending on pointed tips. Despite all the fire around, it didn’t appear to be in pain.

“Tch! I thought I took care of Spidops-Aug before!” Hiro stepped back, groaning.

No response other than a shriek. Spidops opened its jaw, threatening to shoot webs at them.

Yato put a hand over his head. “Hiro! We don’t have time for this! Just jump on my back already and let’s get the hell outta here!”

“...Good point, buddy.” Hiro managed to jump backwards, dodging a shot from Spidops, seeing the strings fall on the floor, right where he was. Another jump and he landed on Yato’s back, riding him.

“Ki ki ki ki!” Some of the Duskull were preparing to fire spheres of pure ectoplasm at them.

Luckily, Yato managed to outrun them, quickly picking up speed as he ran towards the window.

“This might be our only shot! We can’t waste it!”

They were almost there, after dodging the fire coming from all the enemies behind them. Yato could see the light of day and sprinted faster than before, not looking back. A good decision, too, because the building’s shaking told of its imminent collapse.

However… Hiro wasn’t having the same ideas. He waited for Yato to get close enough to the exit before the Lokix turned around—still on the Cyclizar’s back.

“Sorry, pal, but I gotta end it here and now! Spidops-Aug is mine!"

“Wait—Hiro, don’t!”

Hiro took a deep breath, jumping off of the Cyclizar. His extra leg was already unfolded, and thanks to the building falling, he was able to aim exactly at where Spidops-Aug happened to be. His opponent hissed, firing webs. And yet, none of them hit Hiro. It was like he was able to dodge them all without even trying.

“AXEEEEE…”

The tip of his leg began to burn up, and the distance between them was closed.

“KIIIIIIIIICK!”

Hiro roared, swinging his leg down on the monster with the force of a proper axe, hitting Spidops right on the stomach, sending them both crashing down against the ground.

All that Yato could see was a powerful explosion, the shockwave it released throwing him out of the building.




“Isn’t it exciting?!”

A Lokix was inside an office, standing in front of a table, accompanied by a Cyclizar. On the other side of this table sat a wide, pot-bellied Grimmsnarl, who held multiple pieces of paper in his hand, staring right at it. He didn’t seem particularly impressed, and was even grumbling a bit.

Every so often, he’d look at the Lokix, who wore a red leather jacket and had a bright, blue scarf wrapped around his neck. The Cyclizar next to him had a big yellow scarf around his neck and goggles over his head.

“Trash, trash, super trash,” the Grimmsnarl said, flipping through the pages while looking at the two ahead of him. “I said you two were fired. Why do you insist on coming here with this mediocre screenplay? You’re actors, not writers.”

“Well, Director Diego, it’s very simple! For starters, I think I’m the face of the show—”

“Altair, you were the main character. And as I’m sure you know, Hiro was written out, having suffered a debilitating leg injury.” Diego glared right at the Lokix. “Our test audiences are already enjoying the new lead. It will revitalize our brand! We’re doing a reboot, after all.”

Hearing that, the Cyclizar hissed, the frills on his chest expanding.

“Hey, we never agreed to that! It wasn’t on our contracts, you ass! We didn’t even get paid for our last episode!”

Diego now glared right at the dragon. “Then you shouldn’t have been seen drinking, Mackenzie. Our brand is important, and many kids watch our show. We can’t have one of the lead actors showing such a rude message to children.”

“Fuck off, it’s Mack!” Another snarl from him. Now he was mad. “And besides, our show can be watched by Pokémon of all ages! It’s not just children!”

“...Babe, it may be watchable by everyone, but it’s for kids, first and foremost.” Altair looked to the side. Man, he hated when Mack got heated. That mouth of his always said the worst things.

“See? Your partner is right. For once, that is.” Diego put the papers on his table, then had a hand over his head, sighing. “Look, your contracts are terminated, and that’s final. You have already been replaced.”

Altair’s eyes were both widened once he heard it. His firing had happened only a couple of days before, and he already had a replacement? Who the hell was replacing him?!




“Joe Onodera?! They’re replacing me with freakin’ Joe?! That Heracross can’t act! A log of wood is a better actor than him!”

Altair left the building, walking into the busy streets. Today, it seemed, was a very cloudy day, as if his mood couldn’t get any worse. He kicked a pebble, watching it roll through the streets.

“I know, I know.” Mack wasn’t far behind, putting a hand over Altair’s head. “We did our best, y’know.”

“Weren’t you fuming just a few minutes ago?” The Lokix bit back a scowl.

Mack shook his head. “Oh yes, I’m fuming, but I’ll do what I always do: drink my sorrows away.”

“Tch. I’ll join you. This stings.” Altair closed his eyes. He seemed to be thoughtful for a moment. “...Grandmother once said, ’Once you know the real thing, you won’t be fooled by an imitation.’”

Well, Altair did it again. One of the proverbs his grandma used to say. Sometimes Mack wondered if that old lady actually said those things. “What?”

“Joe. He’s nothing but an imitator! And not even a good one! Oh, I hate that guy…”

He tapped a foot on the ground. Over. And over. And over again. Too many times. “Our audiences aren’t stupid. They won’t like an imitator.”

Altair walked forward, and Mack followed him. The streets were a tad busy today, it seemed. He saw some Pokémon walking ahead, forming a line. All of them were Golett, except for the one in front of this line, an Emboar with blue flames and a rugged look on his face.

This crowd went away quietly, while Altair and Mack walked on a different direction, turning right.

And they were oddly quiet today. Until Mack opened his mouth.

“Man, don’t you think those things look creepy?”

Altair looked at the direction the guards had left through. “Oh yeah, them. I don’t know what they’re called.”

“They’re called Golett.” Mack shrugged. “But yeah, they’re weird. I heard they don’t speak.”

“Really? Man, then how do they get orders…?” Altair winced. “Y’know, say what you want about Gilded Corp, but at least their sentinels are good at protecting us.”

“Their security is efficient, yeah.” Mack looked to the side. He saw a few advertising boards on the walls, some food stands, item stands, a lot of places. But that wasn’t where he wanted to be. “The point is: they’re kinda creepy. I don’t really trust them. Especially with all the rumors.”

“Good point, honestly.” Altair kept walking. “This bar is, uh, it’s in another district, right?”

Mack stared at him. “...Altair, now is not the time. I’m not in the mood.”

“C’mon, but I didn’t even ask yet!”

“I know what you were going to ask, and the answer is no. I’m not doing it. Not now.”

Altair pouted, moving his body around dramatically. “Oh, Mack, my beautiful lovely Mack! You won’t accept my simple request?! We’d get to the bar so much quicker!”

“...Tch. Shut up, Altair,” Mack groaned, before dropping to all fours. “Hop on.”

“See? Now, that’s much better.”

And with that, Altair sat on Mack’s back, while the Cyclizar prepared to go, putting his goggles on.

Mack dashed ahead, running as fast as he could. Altair had a point; this was a lot faster.

Meanwhile, above them, above the very city, up in the sky… there was a twinkle, one with rainbow-coloring. Anyone looking there would see it.

Of course, the couple didn’t. They had other things to think about, after all.




Reaching the bar didn’t take a lot of time. Especially since Mack had been running at top speed this whole time. He took some care in not hitting anyone nearby, dashing out of the way before anything troublesome happened.

And, eventually, he skidded to a stop, with Altair jumping out of his back.

“See? What did I say? It was a way better idea.”

“I only narrowly avoided being hit like, three or four times.” Mack stood up on two legs, rubbing some dust off of him. “Rusty Tails pub. My favorite.”

In front of the two was a tall building, with two or three floors, and a rather rustic look, made out of wood. There was a sign above a door, where the twin tails of a Floatzel could be seen holding a glass of beer.

Alongside this, the duo had also seen an Aggron in front of the door, wearing a buttoned up, yellow vest and looking like he’d seen better days. One of his horns was bent upwards, while the other was broken.

He had a frown on his face, not particularly happy. Altair approached, snapping a claw at the big Pokémon.

“Howdy, Tyron! How’s it going, man?”

“Hm…? Altair? Mack!” Tyron looked down so he could see them both, before flashing a wide grin. “Man, it’s been a while since you’ve been around. I’m… I could be better, honestly. Being a bouncer isn’t as exciting as I thought.”

Altair looked at Mack, and in turn, Mack looked at Altair.

“Job trouble too, huh?” Mack rubbed his head, sighing. “Me and Altair got fired. We just came over to feel better.”

Tyron blinked. “I don’t think alcohol is the solution to that.”

Then again, it took him a great deal of effort to get drunk.

“But whatever, this isn’t a problem. You guys can come in.”

Mack looked behind Tyron, seeing the door. “I don’t hear any music. Is the chief here?”

“The chief?” Tyron tilted his head, then shook it. “Nah. He had some business with the mayor.”

“Huh. Makes sense. I heard they’ve been friends for ages.” Mack shrugged, before he walked forward.

Altair, though… he took a bit longer to enter the building. “...For what’s worth, Tyron, I’ve been having issues with work too. I dunno, I kinda wanna go on an adventure.”

Something that Altair thought just wouldn’t happen. But it was a dream for him.

“Being part of something exciting, like all the shows I was in.”

Sighing, Altair walked forward, entering the bar.




Away from everything and everyone, near a large wall, a Pokémon fell. From the roof of a building, or maybe even the sky. Whatever the case, this Pokémon fell.

The Lycanroc bonked his head against the wall, before falling again, panting heavily.

“Urgh…”

He coughed, body going numb, like he wasn’t used to it. Next thing he knew, he was leaning a hand against the wall nearby and trying to force himself to stand.

“What… where… who…”

Even though he was standing now, everything still hurt too much for him to focus. There was, however, one constant that he noticed.

Or rather. Multiple things.

So many things were wrong. His body felt too heavy. His legs felt like they were going to fall apart. There was… so much fur on him. His teeth were too big.

He turned around, looking at the wall behind him. And so, the Lycanroc climbed it—at least, he started to. It was a huge wall.

“Hey! You're in a restricted area!”

The sudden voice made him fall on his ass. Groaning, he turned around and saw a Gengar. A bit overweight, with a yellow hat.

“You're near the edge of this city! You could have fallen off!”

And the Lycanroc didn't say anything. He winced, feeling something grinding nearby. He heard…

A high-pitched, ringing sound. It was too grating on his ears, like someone plunged a claw through glass. And this sound had only gotten louder. Something…

“S-Something’s coming.” The Lycanroc muttered to himself, trying to move, but stumbling and almost falling.

“Something? What are you talking about?” The Gengar approached, lifting his arm and revealing a walkie talkie. “Security? I might need help over here.”

What was going on with him? He shook his head, trying to ignore this and at least get a semblance of stability. Enough to leave this place. Enough that…

Honestly, he didn’t know what he was going to do afterwards, but right now, he just knew he needed to run. Run like crazy. Run anywhere, anywhere at all!

His body was screaming, begging him to get away. From what, though? Or maybe from “who”. Either way, he knew he had to ditch this place.

“S-Sorry dude, I can't be here!”

He bolted. Ran away as quickly as possible, dodging a grab from the Gengar.

His ears were practically splitting open from this sound, and he tried to figure out where it came from.

Because, to him, it felt like it was right on top of him. Looking up, he saw…

Sparkles? Rainbow sparkles, right at the top of the sky. Or at least, it looked like it was at the top.

Whatever. He had to run, and run he did. Like his life depended on it. Because, as far as he was concerned, it did.

Even if he had no idea what was going on. Or even… who he was.




Mack chucked the glass on his table, letting out a sigh. He took a moment to look at his drink, and it was almost full.

“Not having the chief around sucks.” Mack groaned, putting his head on the table. “He always told us fun stories, even if they’re not true.”

“You just miss him because you want to stare at his chest.” Altair blurted out, tapping the table with a claw.

“Oh, shut up! You do the same!”

“Yeah, but I own it, unlike you.” And Altair did his best version of a smirk. “But yeah, it’s not the same without the guy. He’s busy, though.”

“Shouldn’t be.” Mack pouted, crossing his arms. “I can’t even drink my sorrows away now.”

The bar was quiet. Altair and Mack had their own little table, tucked away in a corner, while the others were a bit distant. But that was fine; they wanted to be by themselves anyway.

“Anything on the TV?” Mack didn’t move his head from where it was, so he didn’t look up to see the screen. “Well, anything good.”

“Yeah, showing people having good lives and going on adventures and—”

“What?”

Altair stopped. He really did go on a small tangent again, huh? At least it was with Mack around and not some other person.

“I wanna go out, man.” Altair sighed. Now drinking almost sounded like something fun to do. “The reason why I wrote that screenplay is because… I thought it’d be cool. That I’d get to keep acting. But what I really want is to have an adventure of my own.”

“Oh, that… that.” Mack raised his head, before taking a heavy sip of his drink. “Look, Altair. I love you, you know that. But sometimes in life, we don’t get what we want.”

It hurt him to say that, but Mack had to. And he continued.

“We’re out of a job, rent is due soon, and… I dunno, it seems like daydreaming isn’t what we’re supposed to be doing.”

“...” Altair stopped, but he wouldn’t stay quiet for long. “Grandmother said this: ‘Make the world revolve around you.’ It’s more fun to think this way.”

“She had an answer for everything, huh?” Mack sighed. He couldn’t exactly fault his partner for thinking this way. He had a similar opinion, though not entirely the same.

“Hmph.” Altair raised an arm, before ordering some fries for him. He could use the grease. “But yeah, I want to do something important. An adventure.”

“Maybe we’ll get to have one, maybe not. But… for now, we should focus on getting our life together.”

“Aye, aye.” Altair was the one putting his head on the table now. “Stupid Joe Onodera and his stupid job and that stupid director with his stupid brand…”
Nothing Mack could say would be helpful at the moment, but he put a hand over Altair’s head. Maybe that would be worthwhile. He wasn’t sure, though at the very least, he tried. He could say that.




He was still running. The Lycanroc. He kept running, falling a few times as he prowled his way through the busy streets.

“What the hell is up with this city?! How is it so big?!”

But it wasn’t what annoyed him, no. What annoyed him was that little fact that his ears were still hearing that dreadful noise.

Somehow, he had to save himself. From what, though?

“H-Hargh. Haaaaaaah…”

He stopped. Not because he wanted to, but because his body wouldn’t allow him to run anymore. From what he understood, he was in the middle of a street, seeing some outdoor ads. One of them had what he understood as a “Golisopod” with a beard, pointing at the viewer.

It also had some text underneath the bug:

We’d like you to join the Gilded Guard!

Following this text was a list of benefits. He didn’t exactly understand what this meant, though at the same time, he figured it wasn’t too important.

Right now, he had another issue: breathing. He did his best to breathe, but for some reason, it took him a lot of effort. Like… there wasn’t a lot of air around the area.

And all the Pokémon were staring at him. Like he was a freak. Or. Or something.

Why?

“Need to… n-need… to breathe…”

Taking a look around, the Lycanroc managed to see a building that had an Aggron in front of it. He was looking right at him, confused, much like everyone else in this place.

And the Lycanroc was quiet. He said nothing. He tried to leave, to move, but his body wasn’t answering him. It was as if he couldn’t control his body. Like he wasn’t used to it.

“Hey! Are you okay?!”

The Aggron from before started walking towards him, with the Lycanroc trying to move away. His legs trembled, and he started to fall.

Started, because those heavy hands of the Aggron caught him, lifting him up.

“Hey, hey! What’s up, lil guy? Are you alright? You don’t look like it.”

“N-Need… to… e-escape. Something’s… c-coming. Something’s coming!”

“Hey, don’t worry. You’re safe,” he kept his arm in front of the mutt, not willing to let him fall. “Name’s Tyron. You’re not from around here, are you? That’s why you’re hyperventilating. We’re airborne.”

“A-Airborne…?” A wince from the Lycanroc. It certainly explained why he felt there was no air. “Where… a-am I?”

“Lux City.” Tyron answered, stating in the most gentle tone he could muster. “I work in this bar, d’ya wanna come in? I can get you some water.”
“That doesn’t seem bad. I—”

The ringing sound came back, only this time, it felt stronger. He yelled, covering his ears and whining. He fell to his knees, groaning in pain.

“H-Hey! Hey! Someone call a doctor! This guy needs help!” Tyron looked around, and…

Damn it. He had to do something! He had to–

CRRRRASH!

A meteor struck from the sky—transparent, crystalline, and with a rainbow glow to it. It hit the ground right next to them, with the shockwave sending both Tyron, the Lycanroc, and everyone in the vicinity a long distance away.




Altair waited for his fries. He was hungry, defeated, and yeah, there was rent to be paid later. Everything could not be any worse than this.

But then came that loud noise. Altair barely had enough time to react to it when the shockwave hit, shattering the walls of the bar and bringing a gust of wind that tossed him and Mack to the ground.

“G-Guh!”
He hit the ground hard, groaning from this, and then a few logs of wood fell right on top of Altair.

“M-Mack?! Mack! Where are you?”

A grunt later and Altair kicked the logs to the sky with his extra legs, before curling them again and standing. Mack was also on the ground, just shaking some rubble off of him, and coughing.

“Bleh! What just happened?!”

“No idea. But we’re—”

Altair was interrupted by screaming coming from outside, along with some sounds of blasts. With the door and the wall around it now kicked open, they could see what was coming from the outside.

A large, crystalline formation, with a beige glow to it. Next to this formation was a midnight Lycanroc, knocked out on the floor, as well as—Tyron. He was knocked out too.

“H-Hey! Look, it’s Tyron! And some Lycanroc!” Altair pointed there, but then he noticed the other thing, which was a bit more important at the moment.

A Tyranitar, with a body that glimmered with the same beige tone as the rocks behind it. It was as tall as Tyron, but in some areas of its body, crystals were protruding, most of them rather sharp. It unleashed a vicious roar.

“H-Holy—” Altair winced from the roar, enough that he almost fell down, though Mack helped him stand. “What is that thing? It’s a Tyranitar, but it’s all…”

“It’s full of crystals!” Mack said after rubbing his eyes to confirm he wasn’t just seeing things. Though he almost wished he was. “T-The guard is probably being called already. We should get out of here.”
Mack took a glance behind him, and the rest of the bar was in shambles. Most of the customers were trying to leave, only to be paralyzed with fear by the roar.

“...” Altair looked ahead, at that beast. He was scared, yeah. He was trembling, and if he could, he’d be sweating right now.

But at the same time, something told him that he should act. More than ever, that he should be fighting. This was his call. A call to adventure, maybe.

And with that in mind, he started to smirk.

“Mack, babe, love of my life. I’m going to beat up that Tyranitar.”
“W-What?!” Mack reeled back in shock. “Are you serious?! We’re not members of the guard! We can’t go around picking fights!”

“This is our moment, Mack. And besides, I’m done standing around. I’ll be an adventurer!”

Altair stepped forward, cracking his neck. “Are you with me?”

“...Through thick and thin.” Mack muttered. Why did he have to do vows?

They were ready for the battle ahead.

Or they thought they were.

In any case… they had to go.

Author's Note:

So, a few things first!

The characters Hiro and Yato are some references I made. Hiro comes from Hiroshi Fujioka, the actor that played Kamen Rider Ichigo (the first Kamen Rider). Yato is just me shortening Hayato Ichimonji, the second Kamen Rider(character, not the actor). Joe Onodera is named in two ways. First, Joe Odagiri, the actor that played Kamen Rider Kuuga. Secondly, Yusuke Onodera, who's an alternate reality version of Kuuga from a different show.
 
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Task 2 - Spark Like A Meteor New

Navar

Professional Mudkip Lover
Location
Brazil
Pronouns
He/Him
Partners
  1. swampert
  2. chesnaught-apron
  3. lucario-mega
Task 2 - Spark Like a Meteor


When he came back to his senses, everything around him was ringing. It was like that sound from before, only this time he couldn’t actually hear anything else. Just this ringing.

The Lycanroc groaned, trying and failing to stand up. Just when he thought his ears were back to normal, he heard a loud roar close by.

Too close for comfort. He looked ahead, and saw the Tyranitar covered in crystals, attacking… some kind of creatures. He didn’t know what they were called—teal and blue clay, with some sort of rugged, lumpy appearance.

Those creatures were firing dark spheres at the Tyranitar, who simply roared them away, making the attacks hit the ground.

But, what was important right now was that he hadn’t been attacked. Yet. He couldn’t tell for sure if that thing would attack him, but he also didn’t want to know.

“Charge! Golett, focus on getting close to this creature! We can’t let it attack these civilians!”

Another voice. Another loud one. His ears perked up as he saw an Emboar roaring orders to those things—Golett, apparently. He wondered why he didn’t recognize them, but given the situation right now, it wasn’t that important.

Not long after the command, two of the Golett seemed to disappear into the shadows, moving through the ground, only to emerge next to the Tyranitar.

“Urgh… you okay there, man?”

Yet another voice. Only this one, he managed to recognize. The Aggron from before.

“I-I don’t know. My ears are ringin’, and I feel like my head is gonna burst open…”

“Hangover? S-Sorry, tried to joke.” Tyron groaned, managing to sit. Not stand, just sit. When he looked at the fighting going on, he winced. “The guards came by pretty quickly… unless we spent more time knocked out than I thought.”

“Tch.” Lycanroc tried to stand, and though he managed, his body felt heavier than ever before—which was funny, given he barely remembered anything—and he fell down again. “D-Darn.”
Tyranitar roared. Energy gathered next to its mouth, forming a bright white sphere. In turn, the Emboar whistled.

“Golett! It’s using a Hyper Beam! Raise as many barriers as you can! We’re not losing to this creature!”

At once, the Golett circled the area, raising their hands and forming a translucent barrier. Each one did this, and the barriers combined to make a stronger one.

“W-We need to leave. N-Now.” Lycanroc tried to get up again, but his body wouldn’t move. He stared at the Tyranitar, thinking… thinking…

Something about how it looked felt familiar to him. He couldn’t put it into words, but there was a familiarity.

The ground shook, and just like the Emboar had said, Tyranitar fired a beam from its mouth. It hit the barriers, and immediately, they all began to crack.

Fortunately, none of them broke, but the cracks were getting bigger every second that passed.

“H-Hold it! We have to hold it!” Emboar proclaimed, reaching his hand out forward. “We’re not being beaten today! I don’t know what this thing is, but the Gilded Guard is not losing—”

Crrrrrack.

Crrrrrrrrrack.


CRRRRRRRRRRACK!

All of the barriers shattered like glass. By this point, the Hyper Beam had lost most of its potency, but instead, a shockwave was unleashed in the area again, raising a gust of wind that knocked the Golett to the ground.

Their leader, though, managed to keep himself standing, covering his face with an arm.

“We are not faltering! Master Aurelius will not have it!”

The Emboar gritted his teeth, focusing energy into himself. All of a sudden, his muscle mass seemed to increase. His body hardened slightly.

The Golett surrounding him were toppled to the ground, though they quickly got up.

“Good. I didn’t train you for nothing,” Emboar said, as he looked the Tyranitar up and down, eyes drawn to the huge chunks of crystals on its body. “Aim for those things! Shatter them!”

Lycanroc was still watching. He wasn’t… exactly interested in seeing this, but he also couldn’t stop himself from looking. Something was wrong about this. His head pounded.

“We should go. I mean it.” Tyron groaned. Despite his words, he didn’t actually want to go.

He saw the guards fighting. Punches. Headbutts. Ghost-type attacks. All of them hit the Tyranitar, but it hardly looked like it did more than crack those crystals.

The attempts of the guard to fight the thing weren’t working. In that sense, Tyron felt like he had to do something. Help them out.

“I can’t… c-can’t leave,” Lycanroc muttered, interrupting Tyron’s thoughts. “M-My body… it won’t move. I can’t stop lookin’. What is this…?”

“You might wanna do something, then,” Tyron said, slapping his cheeks. “We’re not supposed to fight in the city, but the guards aren’t doing much! We gotta help them!”

Lycanroc didn’t exactly agree with this idea, but something inside of him urged him to do it. To fight. The only problem with this was that he didn’t exactly know how.

Maybe this was the sort of situation that he’d only learn if he went there and tried. As if the adrenaline would make him know how to fight. This didn’t make as much sense as he thought it would, but… it was what he went with.

Tyranitar let out another roar. Its body was cracked, and some crystals had been shattered. However, it simply turned around, looking at the crystalline formation behind it.

“W-What’s it doing?!”

The rock-type monster grabbed the crystals, and what happened next was simple enough. It absorbed the crystals, restoring itself and fixing all the cracks on its body. As this happened, the formation lost its color, turning transparent.

“I-It’s healing!” Lycanroc blurted out, pointing at the beast.

“Who let the civilians close…?” Emboar shook his head, then glared at two of the Golett. “Evacuate them, you morons!”

And with that, those Golett turned to face Lycanroc and Tyron, stepping towards them.

However, Tyranitar was still there. And it would still fight. It roared again, charging another beam. Unlike the one from before, however, this one was beige. It also looked like a bunch of rocks were coalescing together, before gathering into a sphere.

Emboar took notice of this, and when he looked, he felt his whole body shiver. The area around him shook, trembled. He was sweating.

“G-Golett! Protect barrier, now! Whatever this attack is, it’s not pretty! We need to protect the civilians!”

The Golett all gathered around Emboar, and all of them, including their leader, reached out both arms, forming multiple barriers.

Tyranitar roared again, firing the sphere. It broke apart, launching various rocky splinters at the barriers.

This time, however…

The barriers shattered instantly, and each member of the guard was hit. Emboar roared out in pain, receiving the brunt of the splinters, more than all the others.

But they managed to do one thing right: they protected those civilians. In the end, the guards fell down, knocked unconscious.

And Tyranitar was still active. Still there.

“W-What…?”

Lycanroc trembled. That level of strength felt unreal. There was no way he’d be able to fight it.

It got worse. Tyranitar now looked right at Lycanroc, fixing its gaze on him. It snarled, rows of sharp fangs making themselves known.

“O-Oh no. Oh no! I-It’s gonna come after us! We can’t possibly fight it!” Lycanroc shouted at his companion, but the Aggron didn’t hear it.

Or maybe he heard it and simply ignored the words. “That’s why we have to fight it.”

A bouncer like him dealt with shady stuff before, but never on this level. Still, Tyron didn’t enjoy the idea of doing nothing.

Admittedly, neither did Lycanroc. But he was weak. He didn’t know what was going on right now. Would fighting really help him? He looked at Tyranitar.

Something about it was tugging at his head, though Lycanroc couldn’t really put it into words.

Tyranitar roared again, stomping towards the two.

“GGGGRRRRRRRRRROOOOOWL!” it snarled. Heavy steps shook the ground and echoed all around. “GRRRRRRRR—”

Suddenly, it stopped. It began to breathe heavily, struggling to do so. A moment of weakness, from the looks of it. Anyone would be able to take advantage of such a moment.

“...C’mon, Mack! Now’s the time!”

There was a dash, and a green blur appeared on the scene; a Cyclizar, to be exact. He ran as fast as he could, while a Lokix was on his back.

They got close enough to the Tyranitar, and the Lokix jumped, uncurling one of his extra legs and aiming right at Tyranitar’s stomach.

“HIYAH!”

Altair kicked him with all the strength that he had. His leg hurt from doing it, but he still pressed on. The impact made Tyranitar stumble backwards, and with the force, Altair managed to jump back, landing on his feet.

“T-They actually attacked it…?” Lycanroc managed to mutter, looking at the duo. “W-Who are you?”

“Mack, Altair! Man, am I glad to see you two!” Tyron waved at them.

Luckily, Altair was pretty close to his friend. “Yo, Tyron. I’m not sure what’s going on, but I recognize a call to adventure when I see one!”

Mack ran next to Altair, before standing up and putting his goggles on his head again. “We got knocked out for a bit, but we’re awake! And Altair wanted to do something. Y’know how he is.”

Lycanroc blinked. Clearly, these three knew each other, and he didn’t. But he also still felt unable to leave. Not when…

“That crystal’s still around. As is that Tyranitar,” he said—and honestly, Lycanroc had no idea why he blurted these things out. “But we won’t be able to hurt it.”

…How did he know that?

“There’s four of us. We gotta be able to fight this thing now!” Tyron cracked his knuckles, looking at his friends, and then at Lycanroc. “Ain’t that right?”

“The things I’m dragged into…” Mack sighed. Well, it was too late to back down now. He didn’t even want to assess the situation. He just wanted to get this over with.

“C’mon! It’s getting back up!” Altair pointed at Tyranitar.

And he was right. The monster moved its head, releasing a loud crack, before roaring again. It was looking at the four, yes, but its main focus seemed to be on Lycanroc.

If I don’t fight it, then…

Lycanroc winced. Yeah, he didn’t want to do this. But he also didn’t have any other choice. “Is it a bad time to say I have amnesia?”

“Really…?” Altair blinked. Okay, yeah, it was a bad time. Whatever. “It’s covered in crystals, and it’s angry. Which one of us is the strongest?”

Tyron stepped forward. “I’ll try to wrestle it! You guys focus on hitting it hard!”

And before he got an answer, Tyron charged ahead, while Tyranitar did the same thing. Before long, Tyron grabbed Tyranitar’s hands, holding them tight with his own.

To his surprise, Tyranitar had a lot more strength than he expected. He was actually being pushed back!

“H-Holy—” Tyron tried his best to keep it together, before he let out a roar.

The sound coming from him was very similar to scraping metal. It was enough to make Tyranitar cringe and snarl, distracting it for a moment.

“O-Ow, ow, ow!” Lycanroc covered his ears. This sound was a bit better than the one he heard before, but it was still pretty annoying.

Altair winced a bit, though he didn’t seem too bothered. He walked forward, with Mack by his side. “Let’s give ‘em something to be shocked about!”

“Right!” Mack ran—a bit faster than Altair—while his front hand charged with electricity. “Tyron! Out of the way!”

Tyron didn’t need to stay close to Tyranitar forever. He heard Mack, and immediately used his strength to move the beast as he turned around, pointing Tyranitar right at Mack.

With a jump, Mack launched a bolt of electricity towards Tyranitar. The attack connected without a hitch, and Tyranitar roared in pain.

Despite this, there weren’t any visible cracks on its body, or any signs of damage. For all they knew, this attack was useless.

“Tch!” Altair was back with his friends—plus that strange mutt. “What do you mean we can’t defeat it?”

There wasn’t a lot of time before Tyranitar struck again, running towards Lycanroc.

“I-I don’t know, but look! It’s comin’ right at us!” Lycanroc pointed, managing to take a few steps back, with some difficulty.

Tyron swung his tail at the Tyranitar again. Though this time, the attack didn’t seem particularly effective. Tyranitar hardly moved, and instead snarled loudly.

It grabbed Tyron’s tail, grasping it with all its strength. Which, surprisingly, was a lot of it. Tyron was yelping in pain from this, his whole body tensing up in response.

“O-Ow, yeow! Y-Yeow! G-Guys?! A little help here?!”

Lycanroc watched this happen with wide eyes, but even then, he didn’t do anything. It wasn’t that he didn’t want to. Rather, he couldn’t. He had no clue how to do any of the attacks the others were doing.

However, the more he looked at Tyranitar, and the crystal, the more he could sort of… understand what was going on there. He wasn’t sure why, but it came naturally to him.

“That thing… it has a power we don’t. We won’t be able to defeat it, not how we are right now!”
“Dude, you’re speaking nonsense!” Mack glanced at him, though he decided not to say anything more. He had to concentrate on the fight at hand. Speaking of which…

Tyranitar smashed its head against Tyron, and in turn, the Aggron yelped in pain. He was still pretty close, though. Close enough to land a punch right on Tyranitar’s stomach.

“My strength’s gonna make ya cry, ya bastard!” Tyron groaned, swaying his hand. The attack hurt him, somehow. Maybe that beast had thicker hide than usual, given the crystals.

“Grrrrr!” Tyranitar stumbled backwards a few feet. Then, it opened its mouth, gathering energy again. The same rocky sphere from before appeared once more.

“T-Tera Blast!” Lycanroc suddenly blurtled out. “It used that attack before! When it took out the guards! But I think it’s weak when it uses it! We might be able to use that!”

“How do you know that…?” Mack squinted. Oh well, he wasn’t about to let this info go to waste. “Altair! We all need to strike it!”

Tyron nodded. “I’ll make a Metal Sound! You lovebirds get in there and hit ‘em with all ya’ve got!”

Lycanroc winced. He didn’t think this plan would work. Sure, the attack would leave Tyranitar vulnerable, but that didn’t mean they would win. Either way, they had to try.

Altair jumped on Mack’s back again, and the two ran back a few meters to get some distance.

“Let’s go for the finisher!” Mack said, putting his goggles on. “C’mon!”

Tyron breathed in as much as he could, and then let a roar out, producing the same scraping metal noise as before. Lycanroc winced, his ears twitching. He was the only one that didn’t do anything, and that pissed him off.

He felt like he should be able to help out. To do… anything that would improve the situation. Unfortunately, he wasn’t sure what that could be.

“Maybe…” Lycanroc felt a lump on his throat. He had to know some attacks, and seeing Tyron roaring like that gave him an idea. Just like him, Lycanroc breathed in.

And just like Tyron, he let out a roar! A loud, canine roar that, along with Tyron’s attack, managed to get Tyranitar to stumble. The perfect opportunity had finally presented itself!

“Let’s go, my dashing machine!” Altair braced himself to jump as Mack began to run.

“I told you to stop calling me that!” Mack huffed.

Despite that, he quickly ran, speeding up as much as he could, while Tyranitar prepared the attack, the sphere growing bigger.

Altair already knew where he’d strike; right at the creature’s neck. He was still a little worried, but with this team of his, there was no way he’d lose!

Maybe that was the adrenaline talking. Either way, he was ready for the attack. Tyron and Lycanroc kept the annoying sounds as loud as possible, while Mack crossed the distance.

Tyranitar was ready to strike, aiming at all of them—no, at Lycanroc. Altair grimaced, before he jumped off of Mack, uncurling one of his legs and aiming right at the Tyranitar’s neck.

“There’s only one group that can stop you, and that’s us!”

His strike landed. Altair kicked Tyranitar’s neck as hard as he could, managing to hear those crystals cracking. He let out a battle cry, even though his foot was hurting like hell from this strike.

The result of this hit was that Tyranitar’s neck moved, shifting its view to the crystal nearby.

But the attack it was preparing didn’t stop. All that changed was its target.

Tyranitar blasted the crystal with a flurry of rock pellets, creating crack after crack in the area.

Everything happened at once, like a chain reaction.

The pellets broke through the crystal, shattering it.

The energy inside burst out, launching shards everywhere… and at everyone..

Mack.

Tyron.

Lycanroc.

Tyranitar.

And Altair.

Shards rained over all of them.

In particular, Altair felt a huge shard sink into his stomach. His eyes widened in response, and he fell down, screaming in pain. It was like his entire body burned.

He could hear his friends screaming. All of them. Loud screams, piercing the air. Altair didn’t know which one of them had a louder one. All he knew was…

Everything in his body hurt. This was no joke. He managed to look at his stomach, and the crystal was still lodged there. But… it seemed to be seeping inside of him, absorbed by his skin.

Then suddenly, Altair felt a surge of energy. And… Tyranitar was still there, above him, before lowering its head in an attempt at biting Altair’s off.

“G-Get away. Get away!”

The surge of energy ran through Altair’s entire body, and without thinking, he kicked Tyranitar again.

Only this time, his kick was much stronger than before. He felt the pressure of his body against the crystalline structure Tyranitar had, and with that, the beast stopped moving.

Its body completely stopped, before cracks spread all around it. Altair panted, seeing this. And then, the cracks became too big, shattering Tyranitar into bits and pieces.

“W-What…?”

Somehow, Altair had managed to take it down with that lone attack.

“Y-You… you did it. You got… y-you got that power. Th-The crystals’ power…”

Altair glanced to the side, seeing Lycanroc on the ground, along with Tyron and Mack.

“What are you talking about?”

“I…” Lycanroc groaned. He didn’t know the answer. He couldn’t say anything. And his body felt too heavy.

So did Altair’s. He panted, feeling his body burning up.

Something was wrong. Altair couldn’t move, and he felt… he heard… he saw…

Flashes. So many flashes. Too fast.

Blurred figures—black and green, black and pink, black and blue. Something purple around their necks. Chasing him. Chasing someone. Something.

Sparkling ground. Sparkling sky. Falling to the ground.

And then he fell to the ground, unconscious.
 
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Task 3 - Next Level New

Navar

Professional Mudkip Lover
Location
Brazil
Pronouns
He/Him
Partners
  1. swampert
  2. chesnaught-apron
  3. lucario-mega
Task 3 - Next Level

Altair opened his eyes. His whole body felt like he got beaten up, like… like training, but on a whole other level. Or maybe he was having a nasty hangover. This was why he didn’t drink.

“Urgh… where am I…?”

He looked around, and the answer made itself clear instantly: inside a prison cell. A very tiny one, with a barred window overlooking the city, some big beds, a gate that he couldn’t break out of, and…

Three other Pokémon. Mack, Tyron, and that Lycanroc he didn’t know the name of. All four of them had a bracelet around their arms.

“Oh, you’re awake!” Mack perked up, jumping from the bed and then running to give Altair a hug.

“W-Wait, wait! It still hurts, it still hurts—” Altair wasn’t fast enough, though by the time he got hugged, he didn’t reject it. Rather, he returned the gesture, nuzzling Mack slightly. “Why are we in a prison, by the way?”

“The guards think we’re dangerous.”

And now Lycanroc spoke up. He was close to the gates, looking left and right. “We were knocked out, and they dragged us here. Something about disturbing public peace.”

“They’re a buncha bullies, that’s what!” Tyron groaned, sitting on a bed on the other side of the cell. Unfortunately, he wasn’t all that comfortable, and the bed creaked beneath him. “We saved them! And, uh, I have no idea how we did that. But we did!”

Altair winced. Right, right. Everything was coming back to him. The fight. The Tyranitar. And that Lycanroc saying some weird stuff. “...Great, this is just what I needed.”

“Hmph. I think we can point fingers in this situation.” Mack let go of his partner, before crossing his arms and frowning as he looked at Lycanroc. “Hey, you know more than what you’re telling us. The stuff you said back then…”

“No idea,” he answered without looking at them. “I don’t know why I said all those things.”

“What? You expect us to believe that?!” Mack was ready to go and knock some sense into the guy, but Altair touched his shoulder to get him to stop.

Altair looked at Mack first, then at Lycanroc. “Maybe we should hear him out. I’m curious.”

“We don’t even know his name,” Tyron interjected, raising an arm. “...And for what it’s worth, when I saw him, he was freaking out.”

“My name…?”

Lycanroc stopped, like he was considering what they said. He honestly had no idea. The option in this case, then, was to say the first one he had in mind.

“Uh, it’s Cole.”

“Hmph.” Mack pouted, puffing some smoke from his nostrils. “I’m not convinced. And I saw that Tyranitar was looking right at you.”

“That is weird.” Altair nodded. Mack had a point! “Can’t blame us for wantin’ some answers, though. Can ya?”

Tyron stood up from his bed, hearing the loud creak from it. “Yeah, we need to know.”

“Great, just great! Wouldn’t it be nice if I had all the answers with me?” Cole turned around, then rolled his eyes, putting a hand on his hip. “But I don’t. I really don’t. When we were fighting, I just sorta… knew some stuff.”

“Like the crystals’ power.” Altair said. He vividly remembered that part. And remembering it gave him a pit in his stomach. “What’s that about?”

“I. Don’t. Know.” Cole hissed, practically letting out a snarl. “All I know is that their power helps fight those things.”

Altair didn’t say anything to that. Mostly because he was focused on that pit in his stomach. It felt too intense to be fear or any kind of reaction of the sort.

His vision grew blurry for a moment. His legs trembled, and Altair felt like he’d fall.



He didn’t. However, he kept quiet about this incident.

“...Maybe we need to deal with this in a good cop, bad cop way.” Mack cracked his neck. “Look, I just don’t wanna be in prison, ‘kay?”

“None of us do.” Tyron pointed out. He was rather calm about all of this, all things considered. “And I don’t think it’ll be helpful if we start beating each other up.”

Altair and Mack both looked at each other, before the Lokix spoke up. “We’re not.”

“Look, look. Listen.” Cole rubbed a hand against his head, groaning. “The point is… I’m not sure what happened there. I can’t remember much. Hell, I barely remember my name!”

“...You have amnesia?” For a brief second, there was a spark in Altair’s eyes. “Hey, hey, hey! Wait a minute! What if—”

“Altair! No,” Mack interrupted, shaking his head. “He’s not a human!”

“What makes you think he isn’t?!”

“What makes you think he is?!”

Tyron blinked, watching these two have a small argument. He looked to the side, seeing that Cole was utterly confused by what the couple was talking about.

“Uh, word of advice, humans are… I dunno, they’re these weird creatures. Sometimes they pop up. Though they tend to turn into a Pokémon like us, and lose their memories.”

“Really…?”

Well, if that was the case, Cole could understand why that Lokix was quick to say those things. Still, he didn’t know for sure. After all, he couldn’t remember much.

“Yeah, they’re cool, I think. Our mayor used to be one!” Tyron shot a grin.

“Huh, neat, I guess.” Cole shrugged. He didn’t particularly care about this, but well, it wouldn’t hurt to talk about it.

Altair looked at Cole, like he was scanning the Lycanroc for something. “...Okay, nevermind. He doesn’t look human-y to me.”

“I love you, but you’re just being arbitrary about this. None of us can tell!” Mack sighed, shaking his head.

“I’m sure there’s some way of telling! I mean, it makes sense! Humans are so weird and mysterious. How else would he know about the crystals?!” Altair kept pushing, though Mack didn’t seem that amused about it.

Before any of them could continue their conversations, they all heard footsteps. It got them all to shut up.

And it didn’t take long before a Mienshao appeared, wearing a black jacket with an orange band around her midsection, with footwraps and gloves on her legs and hands.

Art by Weebawoof

She took a long look at the four, unimpressed, and scowled at them.

“It’s your lucky day,” she huffed. “The mayor wants to see you.”



The mayor’s office was big, and decorated. Shelves lined the wall, full of leather-bound books and high, arched windows that poured light across the room.

Another wall had a bunch of pottery. Plants, some tables with chairs. The floor was squeaky clean, to the point one could almost see their reflection when looking there, and a long row of carpet lined the center.

On the other side of the office was a massive oak desk, with a neatly stacked pile of paper, a framed picture of a ghost-type Zorua along with a Zoroark wearing goggles. A phone hung there, or at least its base, as the receiver was being held by the mayor herself.

She was a Froslass, wearing a dual-colored dress: cyan on the upper part, deep blue on the lower part with snowflakes adorning it, and a bow tie at the upper area of her dress. She also had a long, wide-brimmed white hat with blue ribbons. Finally, she had a golden ring on one of her fingers.

Art by Z102

“Yes, we just received news of it a few hours ago,” she was saying. “Another formation of crystals. Right in the middle of the city. Kinda tore down Dex’s bar, or at least the front of it.”

She stopped talking for a moment, waiting for an answer.

“He was just with me a while ago, but I sent him back there.”

A pause, so she could grab a glass of water and drink a sip from it.

“And the formation was destroyed. I’m not sure how, but there’s only shards there now. Witnesses say a group of four was responsible.”

Once again, she was waiting.

“I’m not sure. They should be arriving here soon.” She looked behind her at the door. No visitors yet. “On that note, don’t you think it’s a little strange? The crystals remind me of—”

The answer this time came a little quicker.

“...You can’t blame me for asking. But if you say they’re not related, I believe you.”

Finally, she heard a knock on the door, turning around. “Excuse me, but I think they arrived. I’ll have to cut this call short.”

She put the phone down. “Please, come in!”

And the door opened. Altair, Mack, Tyron and Cole all entered the room, followed by the Mienshao from before.

“Thank you, Dahlia, for bringing them,” the mayor answered, hovering outside her desk and nodding at the Mienshao. She stopped in the middle of the room to address the new arrivals.

“I’m sure you all know me. Well, not personally, anyway.”

Cole looked at her like he was seeing her for the first time. Which, well, he was. “Uh, I’m not from around here. I don’t know where I’m from.”

“Is that so…?”

She went a tad closer to Cole, though she was smiling. “Who knows? Maybe you’re like me! But let’s not jump to conclusions, alright? I was going to introduce myself anyway.”

Then, she moved back a bit, so she could see all of them.

“My name is Meggie. I am the mayor of this town.”

The Froslass didn’t wait for them to reply, and she was already looking at the others. “And you are… Mack, Altair and Tyron, yes?”

“She knows our names?” Altair looked at Mack. “Dude, she knows our names!”

“Noted, Altair, noted.” Mack merely shrugged at his partner’s words.

“...Cool,” Tyron whispered. Of course, even his whisper was rather loud. “Ma’am, I wanna apologize. I’m just a bouncer, but I couldn’t stop myself. I had to try and fight that thing!”

Cole scoffed upon hearing that. “Nobody asked you to. And we were all fighting it.”

“Yes, you all fought that creature. But that’s not what’s important here.” Meggie floated back to her desk, sitting on a chair. “What matters is that you defeated the creature.”

“It was shattered into… pieces.” Altair winced, putting a hand over his stomach. Right where the shard landed. But there was no wound or anything. As far as he could tell, he was healed. “One of them stabbed me, but I can’t see it.”

“Wait, what?!” Mack shouted, looking his partner up and down incredulously. “But you don’t look like you were stabbed!”

“Hm?” Meggie took a look at the Lokix, then shook her head. “I’m… sorry to disappoint you, but when the guards picked you, there was no visible wound. Otherwise, you would be at the hospital right now.”

“...Really?” Altair tilted his head. Okay, that was confusing. “Uh, I guess there was an intense battle, maybe I was seeing things.”

“No,” Cole spoke up, his ears twitching. “I saw the shard hit you.”

Mack immediately glared at Cole, baring his teeth. “And you did nothing to help him?!”

“Actually, I think we were all hit.”

Now it was Tyron’s turn. He raised his hand and cleared his throat. “I remember being hit by the crystals, and then feeling them… enter me. Then it happened to both of you. Dunno about Cole, I passed out right after.”

“Curious.” Meggie let them speak for a while, but she felt that it was the proper time to return to the conversation. “This creature is not the first of its kind. I’ve heard reports of them showing up all over the planet.”

Cole shivered while she spoke. Why did this feel so familiar to him?

“How do you know all of that?” he asked.

“An associate of mine is investigating them.” Meggie raised the glass again, taking another sip. “So far, people have merely ran away from these creatures. None of them were actually inside any cities, until today.”

“Hey, frosty lady.” Altair crossed his arms. “You said we defeated it, then you say people ran from these things? Doesn’t add up.”

“That’s exactly it.” Meggie floated in place, addressing the Lokix. “Somehow, the four of you were able to strike down one of the creatures.”

“The mutt knows something.” Mack pointed at Cole, still glaring at him. “He said Altair got the crystal’s power.”

“You are such a tattletale.” Cole rolled his eyes. Whatever, now all eyes were on him. “I don’t know for sure. All I know is that Altair absorbed it. Honestly, seems like we all did. Only when that happened did he kill that monster.”

“My point, exactly.” Meggie looked at each of them, slowly. “Something happened to the four of you. Something that enabled you to destroy them. And I’d like to find out what.”

Altair heard her loud and clear, and he slowly started to smile, mandibles clicking together, and his antennae twitched. When Mack saw that, a shiver ran down his spine.

“...Great, you made him all excited. I hope you can handle it, Mayor.” Mack sighed. He really didn’t have the energy for it.

“I have a proposal to you all.” Meggie flashed a smile at them. How amusing. “Help us deal with these creatures. Think of it as a job. An opportunity to do good.”







Oh. Oh, oh! Altair had to repeat the words inside his head, just so he could make sure that he wasn’t hearing things.

A job?

An opportunity to do good?


Well, the last part wasn’t entirely up his alley—he wanted to make a name for himself, but still…

This was it! This was the opportunity he wanted! An actual adventure!

“YES!” Altair shouted, doing his best not to hop all over the place. “I’m in!”

“Yay…” Mack put his hands over his head, sighing. “...If it’s a job, are we getting paid? Because honestly, I don’t wanna go if we’re not being paid.”

“Of course you are.” Meggie kept her smile. “You’d deserve payment for a service like protecting the city.”

Cole, on the other hand, was quiet. When the crystal shattered, he heard the same ringing sound as before. And he felt calmer.

He didn’t know what was up with him. Who he was, where he came from, all those things. To him, it sounded like investigating would be the best way of getting answers.

“Fine, fine. I’ll join the group.” Cole rubbed his mane, grimacing. “But don’t expect me to be buddy buddy with you. I barely know you lot.”

“I…” Tyron began to speak, but then he stopped, shutting his mouth. “I don’t know if I can help. I only barely did when we were fighting that thing.”

Meggie shook her head. “Wouldn’t it be a good idea to try it anyway?”

“I mean, I guess I do wanna get stronger, and helping others is good, but…” Tyron looked down, only to feel someone poking at his thigh.

Altair.

“Grandmother once said, ’People become stronger through adventures.’”

“Sheesh, that too…?” Tyron managed a weak chuckle. “I suppose… I guess I could try, yeah.”

“Great, we have a full group!” Altair managed a short hop, and even then, he was still restraining himself a lot. “We’ll need a name, and a roll call! And a pose! And—”

“Not so fast. I’m assigning someone else with you as well.” Meggie tapped a finger on the table. “Dahlia. She will be accompanying you, though she has her own business to deal with. You don’t need to worry about her raining on your parade.”

Altair deflated, but he kept a grin up. “Fine, fine. I’ll add her to the roll call!”

They really remind me of our group, hm? Meggie chuckled for a bit, then cleared her throat. “Alright, I think that settles things, doesn’t it?”

“Yes, ma’am!”

He really, really, really wanted to jump right now. But suddenly Altair’s stomach flared up again. He kept his hand on his stomach, groaning as he tried to suppress the sudden pain.

Everything around him was blurry, and his hearing ebbed. He couldn’t make out what anyone was saying. There was a shout from… Mack? And he saw the blurry Cyclizar look at Cole—at least, Altair thought that was Cole.

Next thing he knew, Altair lost control of his legs. His body trembled, and he fell, right down on the ground.

There were still sounds surrounding him, but he couldn’t make any of them out.

All he heard was ringing.



It came more intensely now. Those visions.

He was running. Running for his life.

But from who?

At one point, suddenly running became a great struggle.

Then he tripped and fell.

There was someone cackling behind him, and when he moved his head to look at them, Altair only saw blurry figures. Three of them.

He recognized them. And at the same time, he didn’t. It was… difficult to explain.

They felt familiar, but he hadn’t seen them before, had he?

Like something was still missing. What he understood was how much his heart was racing. They were going to attack him, do something to him. He didn’t know what, but the very fear nearly made his heart jump out of his body.

These guys were trouble. And if they caught up to him, they’d–!



Then Altair woke up.

When he came to, he was lying in a hospital bed. His vision was still rather blurry, but otherwise, things were looking pretty normal. If not for the fact this was the third time he got unconscious on the same day.

That was… part of the job, maybe?

“Altair! You scared the crap out of me!”

He knew that voice well. When Altair looked to the side, he saw Mack.

“Oh… hey there, babe. Sorry for passing out. Again.”

Mack shook his head. “Don’t apologise! But… are you okay? The doctors said you had a massive fever! Something about the heat being… right in your stomach?”

“I feel fine.” Altair shrugged. But he realized that the burning was where he felt that pit before—in his stomach.

How weird. He wasn’t a doctor, though. He couldn’t tell what was up with his own body. “...Look, okay. Maybe I’m not fine, I am in the hospital, after all.”

Which reminded him, there were two more Pokémon with him.

“Uh, where’s Tyron? And Cole?”

Mack looked at the door. “Waiting outside. I’m allowed in because, y’know.”

“Yeah, you’re bound to me~” Altair gave him a wink. “But seriously, I feel fine. Earlier I felt this weird pit in my stomach, and then there was the burning, but other than that, I’m alright.”

“Pit in your stomach?! That’s not fine at all!” Mack groaned. How could his partner be so stupid?

“Maybe I’m just hungry. Dunno.” Altair shrugged. Really, his stomach felt weirdly empty, so hunger sounded like a reasonable option.

Before either of them could say anything else, however, the door opened.

And from the door came a white, ghost-type Zoroark, wearing a doctor’s coat, and with some papers in his hand. He wore glasses, which he quietly adjusted before closing the door.

“Hello. I’m Doctor Rory, and you’re my patient today,” he said, looking at Altair first, then at Mack. “...Although your boyfriend might as well be a patient, given how anxious he was before you woke up.”

“He can be like that.” Altair said in the most calm tone he could muster. “Anyway, what’s up, doc? I was told I passed out and had a high fever.”

“Mister Mack authorized me to perform some exams on you while you were unconscious.” Rory said, giving the papers to Altair. “Please take a look.”


Altair looked at the doctor, going quiet, before he looked at the paper.

There was an x-ray of his abdomen, which would be normal except for a weird formation right on his waist. It almost looked like a belt, though the ridges were a bit sharp. Crystal-like.

“...What?”

Mack poked his head nearby to look, only to blink a few times. “Uh, what?”

Rory sighed, sitting on a chair nearby. “There is a formation of crystals inside you.”

Mack kept blinking. Looking at the exam, looking at Altair, and then finally at the doctor. “Can’t you guys, I dunno, do a surgery on him and—”

“No,” Rory interrupted almost immediately. “They seem to have become entangled with your nervous system. Removing them now would either kill your boyfriend or leave him paralyzed.”

“W-Wait, what?!” Altair practically jumped out of the chair, only held back by Mack pushing him down. “You’re tellin’ me there’s this thing inside me and you can’t even take it out?!”

“That is exactly what I’m telling you. But there’s a silver lining to this.”

Altair’s antennae moved down. “...That being?”

“They don’t seem to be causing you any visible damage. It’s almost as if the crystals are…harmonizing with your system.”

“You’re saying they’re benign…?” Mack raised a hand. Honestly, he was going to yell, but they were inside a hospital.


“We don’t know much. Yet. But…” Rory sighed again, putting his hands on the pockets of his coat. “My mother is investigating these crystals. She was the one that sent you here. I’ll be receiving samples of them, and hopefully, I can figure out if they’re malicious or not.”

Altair raised a claw, but then lowered it. Yeah, he wasn’t sure what to do now.

“...Damn it.” Mack muttered, shaking his head.

So, after those exams, the doctor didn’t actually know anything? Mack didn’t want to accept it. Even with the silver lining mentioned.

“You mean that, if we help her investigate, we’re helping Altair as well?”

“Exactly.”

“Urgh, this is annoying!” Altair groaned, covering his face with a claw. “It ain’t stoppin’ me, though! I’m going on this adventure!”

“Apparently, me too. I have an actual reason to go.” Mack sighed. Again, he was being dragged into things. “Sometimes you give me a load of trouble, y’know that?”

“Yeah, that’s why you lo-lo-love me~!” Altair winked at him.

He should have been freaking out more over this. Altair… felt like he should.

But he wasn’t.

And maybe that small detail was what scared him more than anything.



Altair wasn’t the only one in the hospital. Certainly not the only one hospitalized due to the fight the other day.

In one of the rooms, an Emboar rested, laying on a hospital bed and covered in a blanket. He groaned, trying to stand up, though the moment he tried, he fell right back into the bed.

This didn’t stop him from trying again. And again. And again.

“Ryker.”

He perked up, only to see the door had been opened, and a Golisopod had entered the room, adorned with rings around his inner arms, and in one of his eyebrows, along with a light pink sash on his waist.

“Master Aurelius.” The Emboar immediately tried to, at the very least, sit in the bed. With a lot of effort, Ryker managed it. “S-Sorry, sir. I wasn’t able to defeat that… thing.”

“So I’ve heard.” Aurelius raised a brow, taking a step closer to him. “Yet, those civilians with you managed to do it. And now they’re being watched by the mayor herself. Curious, isn’t it?”

“...Really?” Ryker tilted his head. “Sir, sometimes you don’t make much sense.”

“Hmph. If you weren’t a simpleton, maybe you would understand me better.”

Aurelius moved to the side, looking out the window, right as Altair and the others walked down the hallway.

“The Golett pawns are being repaired as we speak.” He flexed his claws slightly. “And I am rather curious about this crystal business.”

Ryker blinked. “Sir…?”

“We’ll be watching this, and making some research of our own.” Aurelius only glanced at Ryker. “For the time being, I want you to recover. I can’t have my best soldier in bed.”

“...T-Thank you, sir.” Ryker nodded, gulping afterwards. The flames next to his neck burst for a moment. “But I feel fine! I’m ready to jump into action!”

“Your tenacity is admirable.” Aurelius kept looking at the window. “My mind is made up. You will recover, and then you will help me research these crystals. I have a feeling they will be important.”

“Sir, what about the mayor?”

Aurelius turned around, nodding to Ryker. “What do you mean? I’m cooperating with her. It’s in both our best interests that we investigate. After all, the Gilded Guard has this purpose, does it not?”

Ryker didn’t wait a moment before he gave out his answer. “I suppose so, sir.”

“Good. Now, recover. I have bureaucracy to deal with.” Aurelius rubbed a hand against his head, sighing. “I will return to check in on you.”

Ryker saluted him. “Aye, aye, sir.”

Author's Note: I guess I can use this opportunity to say that yes, this is a sequel to Liberators of Fate. How much further down the line? That’s for me to know and for you to find out. Anyway, despite the status as a sequel fic, I don’t think you need much information about the other story. If you wanna read it, then by all means, but it’s not required at all.
 
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Spiteful Murkrow

Busy Writing Stories I Want to Read
Pronouns
He/Him/His
Partners
  1. nidoran-f
  2. druddigon
  3. swellow
  4. lugia
  5. growlithe
  6. quilava-fobbie
  7. sneasel-kate
  8. heliolisk-fobbie
  9. axew-irune
Heya, ran a bit late, but I’m here for P-Wheel. Though a new story, huh? Not sure what that one’s going to entail since I didn’t think that Heroic Dreamers was already done, but I suppose there’s only one way to find out:

Task 1

They were surrounded. Smoke and flames around them, everywhere. And if that wasn’t bad enough, Duskull were circling them, grunting and screeching. It was a tall building, with shattered windows nearby. Once upon a time, Pokémon were able to work there, but now every chair and table was destroyed.

In the center of it all were two Pokémon, both battered. The first of them was a Lokix, his yellow scales glistening with the light of the fire as he clutched his red scarf. Next to him was a Cyclizar, catching his breath and struggling to keep himself standing.

Well damn, not wasting any time at all for that actiony opening there.

“Hiro, this is madness! We can’t possibly beat them!”

The Lokix looked down at his hands, seeing how much they were trembling. “I’m starting to think you have a point, Yato.”

Just mentally filing it away that the (lizard) bike is Yato and the bug is Hiro. Though does that mean that we have a Hiro Protagonist in this story? /s

“Of course I have a point! Plus, this building’s gonna collapse at any moment!” Yato pointed at the windows with his tail. “C’mon, if we do it now, we’ll be able to escape Spidops—”

Before anything could happen, the two managed to heard a loud rumble coming from the ground, way off in the distance. It didn’t take long before it cracked open. Rubble flew in the air, hitting most parts of the room, including the mooks, though some managed to escape the strikes. Hiro, though, kicked each rock that flew towards him and Yato to protect both.

Small wording tweak suggestion, but I think that the ‘it’ here should be made more obvious that it’s the ground. Though as a bigger thing to consider, it’s probably worth showing a bit more of the blow-by-blow of the room effectively exploding and Hiro and Yato kicking back the rocks.

Also, if you wanted to go full weeb given that your bike and rider duo have Japanese-vibing names, you could’ve rolled ‘Gun/Koma’ and ‘Shibiko’ even if that would’ve required Yato to not be a guy and like 5 people would’ve gotten the reference. /s

A screech filled the air before they saw a Pokémon jump from the crack, sticking to the ceiling.

It was, apparently, a Spidops. Apparently because, while it certainly had the looks of one, its skin was red and black, with mechanical parts attached like wires in each arm, ending on pointed tips. Despite all the fire around, it didn’t appear to be in pain.

That’s… one hell of a Spidops there. Sounds more like the Spidops equivalent of a T-800, really.
:wtfuckle:


“Tch! I thought I took care of Spidops-Aug before!” Hiro stepped back, groaning.

Well, maybe it really is the Spidops equivalent of a T-800.
:copyka2~3:


No response other than a shriek. Spidops opened its jaw, threatening to shoot webs at them.

Yato put a hand over his head. “Hiro! We don’t have time for this! Just jump on my back already and let’s get the hell outta here!”

“...Good point, buddy.” Hiro managed to jump backwards, dodging a shot from Spidops, seeing the strings fall on the floor, right where he was. Another jump and he landed on Yato’s back, riding him.

Shame that Yato doesn’t lug around some sort of music player for moments like this, since this feels like this moment would pair really well with some sort of loud and aggressive melody right about now. I might have a few recommendations considering my own motorbike anole antics lately.

“Ki ki ki ki!” Some of the Duskull were preparing to fire spheres of pure ectoplasm at them.

Luckily, Yato managed to outrun them, quickly picking up speed as he ran towards the window.

I feel like the underlined would work a bit better with a bit more detail provided of what exactly them getting ready to use Shadow Ball(?) looks like visually, ditto Yato outrunning them.

“This might be our only shot! We can’t waste it!”

They were almost there, after dodging the fire coming from all the enemies behind them. Yato could see the light of day and sprinted faster than before, not looking back. A good decision, too, because the building’s shaking foretold of its imminent collapse.

A couple wording tweaks here. Though boy this is a really memorable opening in general. Definitely very different from the ones of the past two stories of yours that I’ve read.

However… Hiro wasn’t having the same ideas. He waited for Yato to get close enough to the exit before the Lokix turned around—still on the Cyclizar’s back.

“Sorry, pal, but I gotta end it here and now! Spidops-Aug is mine!"

[ ]

“Wait—Hiro, don’t!”

A moment where I feel that it probably makes sense to show off a bit more of Yato’s alarmed reaction for the readers.

Yato:
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Hiro took a deep breath, jumping off of the Cyclizar. His extra leg was already unfolded, and thanks to the building falling, he was able to aim exactly at where Spidops-Aug happened to be. His opponent hissed, firing webs. And yet, none of them hit Hiro. It was like he was able to dodge them all without even trying.

“AXEEEEE…”

The tip of his leg began to burn up, and the distance between them was closed.

“KIIIIIIIIICK!”

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Boy, this action sequence is really delivering on the hype moment right now. Good job, really.


Hiro roared, swinging his leg down on the monster with the force of a proper axe, hitting Spidops right on the stomach, sending them both crashing down against the ground.

All that Yato could see was a powerful explosion, the shockwave it released throwing him out of the building.

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Honestly, even if I had some quibbles here and there, that is hands-down one of the best action sequence openings I’ve read in this fandom. Good job there.

“Isn’t it exciting?!”

A Lokix was inside an office, standing in front of a table, accompanied by a Cyclizar. On the other side of this table sat a wide, pot-bellied Grimmsnarl, who held multiple pieces of paper in his hand, staring right at it. He didn’t seem particularly impressed, and was even grumbling a bit.

So on a scale of ‘1’ to ‘getting punched out like the juvies in AKIRA after their bike antics’, how much trouble are these two in right now?

Every so often, he’d look at the Lokix, who wore a red leather jacket and had a bright, blue scarf wrapped around his neck. The Cyclizar next to him had a big yellow scarf around his neck and goggles over his head.

“Trash, trash, super trash,” the Grimmsnarl said, flipping through the pages while looking at the two ahead of him. “I said you two were fired. Why do you insist on coming here with this mediocre screenplay? You’re actors, not writers.”

“Well, Director Diego, it’s very simple! For starters, I think I’m the face of the show—”

Oh, so these two are actors. That would explain a thing or two about how cinematic the opening was given that it’s literally their pitch meeting for their screenplay.

“Altair, you were the main character. And as I’m sure you know, Hiro was written out, having suffered a debilitating leg injury.” Diego glared right at the Lokix. “Our test audiences are already enjoying the new lead. It will revitalize our brand! We’re doing a reboot, after all.”

Hearing that, the Cyclizar hissed, the frills on his chest expanding.

“Hey, we never agreed to that! It wasn’t on our contracts, you ass! We didn’t even get paid for our last episode!”

… Lovely director there. So what’s the over/under that Altair and whoever the Cyclizar is have likely gotten turfed out by a Zoroark troupe? Since it’s kinda hard to beat an actor that can also double as the VFX team. ^^;

Diego now glared right at the dragon. “Then you shouldn’t have been seen caught drinking, Mackenzie. Our brand is important, and many kids watch our show. We can’t have one of the lead actors showing such a rude message to children.”

“Fuck off, it’s Mack!” Another snarl from him. Now he was mad. “And besides, our show can be watched by Pokémon of all ages! It’s not just children!”

Oh, so that’s what Cyclizar’s name is. And for reference, if you’d hidden your booze in the equivalent of a coke bottle, you’d likely have kept your job if you didn’t let yourself get super hammered since everyone would be none the wiser.

[ ]

“...Babe, it may be watchable by everyone, but it’s for kids, first and foremost.” Altair looked to the side. Man, he hated when Mack got heated. That mouth of his always said the worst things.

“See? Your partner is right. For once, that is.” Diego put the papers on his table, then had a hand over his head, sighing. “Look, your contracts are terminated, and that’s final. You have already been replaced.”

:bidoof:


Guessing that there’s no actor’s guild in this setting to help drag this process out.

Altair’s eyes were both widened once he heard it. His firing had happened only a couple of days before, and he already had a replacement? Who the hell was replacing him?!

Motorbike anole, but robot? Since just saying, I have one I can lend Diego if he doesn’t mind shelling out for music licensing fees to Avex. /s

“Joe Onodera?! They’re replacing me with freakin’ Joe?! That Heracross can’t act! A log of wood is a better actor than him!”

I can’t tell whether that’s a sign that Altair and Mack’s show is going to crash and burn, or else if that’s just Altair coping and seething right now. Though duly noted that Pokémon have proper surnames in this setting.

Altair left the building, walking into the busy streets. Today, it seemed, was a very cloudy day, as if his mood couldn’t get any worse. He kicked a pebble, watching it roll through the streets.

“I know, I know.” Mack wasn’t far behind, putting a hand over Altair’s head. “We did our best, y’know.”

“Weren’t you fuming just a few minutes ago?” The Lokix bit back a scowl.

Altair: “Mack, I swear to gods, if you’ve been drinking now of all times, so help me…”
:gardexhausted:


Mack shook his head. “Oh yes, I’m fuming, but I’ll do what I always do: drink my sorrows away.”

[ ]

“Tch. I’ll join you. This stings.” Altair closed his eyes. He seemed to be thoughtful for a moment. “...Grandmother once said, ’Once you know the real thing, you won’t be fooled by an imitation.’”

Sure is ironic that Altair would get that advice and then go into show business where you literally have to pretend to be something you’re not to make a living.

Well, Altair did it again. One of the proverbs his grandma used to say. Sometimes Mack wondered if that old lady actually said those things. “What?”

“Joe. He’s nothing but an imitator! And not even a good one! Oh, I hate that guy…”

I’ll just take that as a sign that we’re going to get to meet Joe at some point in this story. Though I’m unsure whether he’s going to turn out to be a massive ass, or else someone who’s actually a nicer guy but just a bit mid as an actor and clueless about Altair’s resentment.

He tapped a foot on the ground. Over. And over. And over again. Too many times. “Our audiences aren’t stupid. They won’t like an imitator.”

I mean, the fact that you’re not being actively swarmed by fans kinda suggests that you’re a bit smaller-time than you’re assuming at the moment, Altair. ^^;

Altair walked forward, and Mack followed him. The streets were a tad busy today, it seemed. He saw some Pokémon walking ahead, forming a line. All of them were Golett, except for the one in front of this line, an Emboar with blue flames and a rugged look on his face.

This crowd went away quietly, while Altair and Mack walked off in a different direction, turning right.

Just making a mental note about the Shiny Emboar there. Since him and the load o’ Golett sure felt like a rather particular thing to highlight if they were all truly pure randos.

And they were oddly quiet today. Until Mack opened his mouth.

“Man, don’t you think those things look creepy?”

Altair looked at the direction the guards had left through. “Oh yeah, them. I don’t know what they’re called.”

“They’re called Golett.” Mack shrugged. “But yeah, they’re weird. I heard they don’t speak.

Well, there’s going to be a very fast way to prove or disprove that one, since I can already tell that we haven’t seen the last of them.

“Really? Man, then how do they get orders…?” Altair winced. “Y’know, say what you want about Gilded Corp, but at least their sentinels are good at protecting us.”

Okay, just filing that one away for later, since color me mega doubtful that these two aren’t going to wind up in conflict with Gilded Corp at some point.

“Their security is efficient, yeah.” Mack looked to the side. He saw a few advertising boards on the walls, some food stands, item stands, a lot of places. But that wasn’t where he wanted to be. “The point is: they’re kinda creepy. I don’t really trust them. Especially with all the rumors.”

[ ]


“Good point, honestly.” Altair kept walking. “This bar is, uh, it’s in another district, right?”

Mack stared at him. “...Altair, now is not the time. I’m not in the mood.”

“C’mon, but I didn’t even ask yet!”

I feel that it might have made sense to get into some of said rumors a bit more than what you were currently doing there since it’d be a handy way of dropping in some foreshadowing about the story and where things will be going. Though I see that Mack has his priorities straight™ at the moment. Does that mean that he also runs around while drunk? Since if so, that’s going to be a sight to behold.

“I know what you were going to ask, and the answer is no. I’m not doing it. Not now.”

Altair pouted, moving his body around dramatically. “Oh, Mack, my beautiful lovely Mack! You won’t accept my simple request?! We’d get to the bar so much quicker!”

“...Tch. Shut up, Altair,” Mack groaned, before dropping to all fours. “Hop on.”

[ ]

“See? Now, that’s much better.”

Snerk. Though just filing it away that Mack’s not anywhere near as gung-ho about being a mount as he is while on-stage.

Mack: “And why am I doing this instead of just going to the corner store and getting a bottle of Jose Murcuervo to suck down in the alleyway again?”
:gardexhausted:

Altair: “Because that’s even sadder than getting sloshed at a bar and you’d probably get arrested for getting drunk in public?”
:joltyshrug:


And with that, Altair sat on Mack’s back, while the Cyclizar prepared to go, putting his goggles on.

Mack dashed ahead, running as fast as he could. Altair had a point; this was a lot faster.

Meanwhile, above them, above the very city, up in the sky… there was a twinkle, one with rainbow-coloring. Anyone looking there would see it.

Of course, the couple didn’t. They had other things to think about, after all.

Ah yes, time for these two to have a:

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pl3YXl_m0uk


sequence. Though I kinda wonder if it’d have made more sense for these two to notice the twinkle but then blow it off afterwards to go and get their drinks.

Reaching the bar didn’t take a lot of time. Especially since Mack had been running at top speed this whole time. He took some care in not hitting anyone nearby, dashing out of the way before anything troublesome happened.

>some care

Just saying, ‘weaving through traffic wildly’ isn’t going to hold up to a cop as ‘taking care in not hitting anyone’. >:V

And, eventually, he skidded to a stop, with Altair jumping out of his back.

So can Mack drift, too? /s

“See? What did I say? It was a way better idea.”

“I only narrowly avoided being hit like, three or four times.” Mack stood up on two legs, rubbing some dust off of him. [ ]

Rusty Tails Pub. My favorite.”

‘Pub’ would presumably be a part of the establishment’s name and also be capitalized. Though yeah, this place is a dive, I can already tell. Though I kinda wonder if we should’ve seen a bit more of what this pub is like in the section with brackets there.

In front of the two was a tall building, with two or three floors, and a rather rustic look, made out of wood. There was a sign above a door, where the twin tails of a Floatzel could be seen holding a glass of beer.

Alongside this, the duo had also seen an Aggron in front of the door, wearing a buttoned up, yellow vest and looking like he’d seen better days. One of his horns was bent upwards, while the other was broken.

Oh, there’s the pub description. Even if I kinda wonder if at least some part of this should’ve been in the prior highlighted section.

He had a frown on his face, not particularly happy. Altair approached, snapping a claw at the big Pokémon.

“Howdy, Tyron! How’s it going, man?”

“Hm…? Altair? Mack!” Tyron looked down so he could see them both, before flashing a wide grin. “Man, it’s been a while since you’ve been around. I’m… I could be better, honestly. Being a bouncer isn’t as exciting as I thought.”

Oh, so these two know him. From the sound of it, it’s not just from going to drink at this place either.

Altair looked at Mack, and in turn, Mack looked at Altair.

“Job trouble too, huh?” Mack rubbed his head, sighing. “Me and Altair got fired. We just came over to feel better.”

Tyron blinked. [ ]

I don’t think alcohol is the solution to that.”

Then again, it took him a great deal of effort to get drunk.

Oh yeah, I’ll bet in between how big he is and his Steel-typing.

“But whatever, this isn’t a problem. You guys can come in.”

Mack looked behind Tyron, seeing the door. “I don’t hear any music. Is the chief here?”

“The chief?” Tyron tilted his head, then shook it. “Nah. He had some business with the mayor.”

Wait, wait, wait. Just how big of a deal is the bar act such that they’re able to just go and—

“Huh. Makes sense. I heard they’ve been friends for ages.” Mack shrugged, before he walked forward.

Ah. Yeah, that would explain a few things there.

Altair, though… he took a bit longer to enter the building. “...For what’s worth, Tyron, I’ve been having issues with work too. I dunno, I kinda wanna go on an adventure.”

Something that Altair thought just wouldn’t happen. But it was a dream for him.

“Being part of something exciting, like all the shows I was in.”

[ ] Sighing, Altair walked forward, entering the bar.

I feel like these sections in general should be expanded a bit more to show off a bit more of Altair’s thought process and Tyron/Mack’s reaction to him waxing poetic about “boy I wish I could do something awesome”, even if I can already tell that he’s going to get roped into something of that ilk fast since that’s how these stories work. (And ‘pretend hero becomes a real one’ is a pretty fun premise in general.)

Away from everything and everyone, near a large wall, a Pokémon fell. From the roof of a building, or maybe even the sky. Whatever the case, this Pokémon fell.

The Lycanroc bonked his head against the wall, before falling again, panting heavily.

“Urgh…”

He coughed, his body going numb, like he wasn’t used to it. Next thing he knew, he was leaning a hand against the wall nearby and trying to force himself to stand.

Oh, hello Mr. Rainbow Twinkle. I wonder if that’s a sign that he’s human or if he’s something else.

“What… where… who…”

Even though he was standing now, everything still hurt too much for him to focus. There was, however, one constant that he noticed.

Or rather. Multiple things.

So many things were wrong. His body felt too heavy. His legs felt like they were going to fall apart. There was… so much fur on him. His teeth were too big.

Okay, yeah, Mr. Rainbow Twinkle’s (formerly) human. I can already tell.

He turned around, looking at the wall behind him. And so, the Lycanroc climbed it—at least, he started to. It was a huge wall.

“Hey! You're in a restricted area!”

The sudden voice made him fall on his ass. Groaning, he turned around and saw a Gengar. A bit overweight, with a yellow hat.

… What does a Gengar look like overweight anyways, since they’re already kinda rotund? ^^;

“You're near the edge of this city! You could have fallen off!”

Wait, implying there’s a sheer drop on the other end of that wall? Just what on earth is this place’s geography like anyways?

And the Lycanroc didn't say anything. He winced, feeling something grinding nearby. He heard…

A high-pitched, ringing sound. It was too grating on his ears, like someone plunged a claw through glass. And this sound had only gotten louder. Something…

Okay, yeah, I don’t blame Mr. Rainbow Twinkle for reacting poorly to that since that’s some “nails-on-a-chalkboard” tier SFX there.
:sevidazed:


“S-Something’s coming.” The Lycanroc muttered to himself, trying to move, but stumbling and almost falling. [ ]

“Something? What are you talking about?” The Gengar approached, lifting his arm and revealing a walkie talkie. “Security? I might need help over here.”

What was going on with him? He shook his head, trying to ignore this and at least get a semblance of stability. Enough to leave this place. Enough that…

Honestly, he didn’t know what he was going to do afterwards, but right now, he just knew he needed to run. Run like crazy. Run anywhere, anywhere at all!

I feel like it probably would’ve been worth it to show off a bit more of Lycanroc’s internal frazzling and panic right now beyond what you presently have in this moment.

His body was screaming, begging him to get away. From what, though? Or maybe from “who”. Either way, he knew he had to ditch this place.

“S-Sorry dude, I can't be here!”

He bolted. Ran away as quickly as possible, dodging a grab from the Gengar.

Yeah, I don’t think he’s going to let you off that easily, just saying. Though I suppose we’ll see those Golett or whatever ‘security’ here entails show up in about 30 seconds.

His ears were practically splitting open from this sound, and he tried to figure out where it came from.

I feel that this entire paragraph feels very “told” at the moment. It would probably be a bit more exciting to see our human(?) friend here do this in a bit more live-time while this is quite high-level and summarized here.

Because, to him, it felt like it was right on top of him. Looking up, he saw…

Sparkles? Rainbow sparkles, right at the top of the sky. Or at least, it looked like it was at the top.

Whatever. He had to run, and run he did. Like his life depended on it. Because, as far as he was concerned, it did.

Even if he had no idea what was going on. Or even… who he was.

Just mentally filing it away that our boy here is most likely something very, very different from a normal rock wolf. Given the story title, I wonder if we’re going to be seeing type-breaking antics or something like that.

Mack chucked the glass on his table, letting out a sigh. He took a moment to look at his drink, and it was almost full.

I think something like “set” or a more forceful “slammed” works better than “chucked” since “chucked” makes it feel more like he threw said glass without any care for its contents.

“Not having the chief around sucks.” Mack groaned, putting his head on the table. “He always told us fun stories, even if they’re not true.”

“You just miss him because you want to stare at his chest.” Altair blurted out, tapping the table with a claw.

[ ]


“Oh, shut up! You do the same!”

“Yeah, but I own it, unlike you.” And Altair did his best version of a smirk. [ ]

But yeah, it’s not the same without the guy. He’s busy, though.”

I feel like you have a bit of reaction moments from Mack and Altair that would’ve been worth showing off a bit more, especially if Altair gets a bit more disappointed after his smirking moment.

“Shouldn’t be.” Mack pouted, crossing his arms. “I can’t even drink my sorrows away now.”

The bar was quiet. Altair and Mack had their own little table, tucked away in a corner, while the others were a bit distant. But that was fine; they wanted to be by themselves anyway.

I feel like the underlined would work a bit better more in either Altair’s or Mack’s own thoughts. e.x. a throwaway example from Mack’s perspective would be something like: “After getting screwed out of his big break by that bastard Grimmsnarl, the Cyclizar frankly only cared about the company of a stiff pint… or six.”

“Anything on the TV?” Mack didn’t move his head from where it was, so he didn’t look up to see the screen. “Well, anything good.”

“Yeah, showing people having good lives and going on adventures and—”

“What?”

Altair stopped. He really did go on a small tangent again, huh? At least it was with Mack around and not some other person.

That didn’t really feel like much of a tangent to me. I feel that something like:

“Yeah, it’s the new fall lineup. One of the new dramas. Showing people having good lives and going on adventures and—”

Might sell it a bit better since you have a compact answer and then the tangent attached to it.

[ ]

“I wanna go out, man.” Altair sighed. Now drinking almost sounded like something fun to do. “The reason why I wrote that screenplay is because… I thought it’d be cool. That I’d get to keep acting. But what I really want is to have an adventure of my own.”

Careful what you wish for, buddy. Though I’ll say that it makes for a really fun storytelling premise.

[ ]


“Oh, that… that.” Mack raised his head, before taking a heavy sip of his drink. “Look, Altair. I love you, you know that. But sometimes in life, we don’t get what we want.”

It hurt him to say that, but Mack had to. And he continued.

Underlined once again feels like something that would benefit from more “showing” and less “telling”

“We’re out of a job, rent is due soon, and… I dunno, it seems like daydreaming isn’t what we’re supposed to be doing.”

“...” Altair stopped, but he wouldn’t stay quiet for long. “Grandmother said this: ‘Make the world revolve around you.’ It’s more fun to think this way.”

I’d bust out the Bubsy reaction macro, but I get the feeling that the story’s going to wind up going this way whether Altair and Mack want it to or not. :copyka:

[ ]

“She had an answer for everything, huh?” Mack sighed. He couldn’t exactly fault his partner for thinking this way. He had a similar opinion, though not entirely the same.

A couple more spots where i feel like it’d have been worth showing off more of Mack’s reaction and making the narration a bit less “told” and a bit more “shown”.

“Hmph.” Altair raised an arm, before ordering some fries for him. He could use the grease. “But yeah, I want to do something important. An adventure.”

I’m of two minds of this moment. On the one hand, it feels a bit strange to suddenly have a completely summarized moment in this otherwise very focused back and forth between Mack and Altair. Maybe one sidestep would be to have Altair having already ordered the fries offscreen and the waiter/ess drop it off in a summarized fashion? Food for thought, anyways.

“Maybe we’ll get to have one, maybe not. But… for now, we should focus on getting our life together.”

“Aye, aye.” Altair was the one putting his head on the table now. “Stupid Joe Onodera and his stupid job and that stupid director with his stupid brand…”


Nothing Mack could say would be helpful at the moment, but he put a hand over Altair’s head. Maybe that would be worthwhile. He wasn’t sure, though at the very least, he tried. He could say that.

Small newline error here.

He The Lycanroc was still running. The Lycanroc. He’d kept running since the walls, falling a few times as he prowled his way through the busy streets.

Some tweaks I’d recommend for this first paragraph here.

“What the hell is up with this city?! How is it so big?!”

But it wasn’t what annoyed him, no. What annoyed him was that little fact that his ears were still hearing that dreadful noise.

Somehow, he had to save himself. From what, though?

We’re going to find out in like 30 seconds, aren’t we?

“H-Hargh. Haaaaaaah…”

He stopped. Not because he wanted to, but because his body wouldn’t allow him to run anymore. From what he understood, he was in the middle of a street, seeing some outdoor ads. One of them had what he understood as a “Golisopod” with a beard, pointing at the viewer.

It also had some text underneath the bug:

We’d like you to join the Gilded Guard!

Okay, this time, I will bust out the exploitable macro for this moment:

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Following this the text was a list of benefits. He didn’t exactly understand what this meant, though at the same time, he figured it wasn’t too important.

Just mentally filing it away that human(?) here is literate. Which I suppose is something that should keep me from being a bit too reflexive in assuming that he’s human.

Right now, he had another issue: breathing. He did his best to breathe, but for some reason, it took him a lot of effort. Like… there wasn’t a lot of air around the area.

And all the Pokémon were staring at him. Like he was a freak. Or. Or something.

Why?

He has an obvious nonstandard appearance, doesn’t he? Is he actively still trailing rainbow sparkles?

“Need to… n-need… to breathe…”

Taking a look around, the Lycanroc managed to see a building that had an Aggron in front of it. He was looking right at him, confused, much like everyone else in this place.

And the Lycanroc was quiet. He said nothing. He tried to leave, to move, but his body wasn’t answering him. It was as if he couldn’t control his body. Like he wasn’t used to it.

So wait, did Lycanroc slump over? Did he just abruptly freeze up in place, or…?

“Hey! Are you okay?!”

The Aggron from before started walking towards him, with the Lycanroc trying to move away. His legs trembled, and he started to fall.

Started to, because those heavy hands of the Aggron caught him, lifting him up.

“Hey, hey! What’s up, lil guy? Are you alright? You don’t look like it.”

Just mentally noting that Tyron is actually fairly sociable. Wouldn’t have expected that one from a guy working as a bar bouncer.

“N-Need… to… e-escape. Something’s… c-coming. Something’s coming!”

“Hey, don’t worry. You’re safe,” he kept his arm in front of the mutt, not willing to let him fall. “Name’s Tyron. You’re not from around here, are you? That’s why you’re hyperventilating. We’re airborne.”

Oh, well. That would explain why the Gengar was shouting at Lycanroc to stop climbing the walls. I see we’re really up there in terms of tech level in this setting. I wonder if it shares one with your prior stories, since I thought those two were a bit closer to the present day in terms of what was possible technologically.

[ ]


“A-Airborne…?” A wince from the Lycanroc. It certainly explained why he felt there was no air. “Where… a-am I?”

“Lux City.” Tyron answered, stating in the most gentle tone he could muster. “I work in this bar, d’ya wanna come in? I can get you some water.”

[ ]


That doesn’t seem bad. I—”

I feel like this moment would make sense to show off a bit more of the characters’ reactions to each other and maybe a bit more of Lycanroc’s thought process here.

The ringing sound came back, only this time, it felt stronger. He yelled, covering his ears and whining. He fell to his knees, groaning in pain. [ ]

“H-Hey! Hey! Someone call a doctor! This guy needs help!” Tyron looked around, and…

Damn it. He had to do something! He had to–

CRRRRASH!

Whelp, I think you’re a bit late there, buddy.

A meteor struck from the sky—transparent, crystalline, and with a rainbow glow to it. It hit the ground right next to them, with the shockwave sending both Tyron, the Lycanroc, and everyone in the vicinity a long distance away.

Yeeeeah, I’m going to heavily take the under on that city staying in the air for much longer.

Altair waited for his fries. He was hungry, defeated, and yeah, there was rent to be paid later. Everything could not be any worse than this.

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But then came that loud noise. Altair barely had enough time to react to it when the shockwave hit, shattering the walls of the bar and bringing a gust of wind that tossed him and Mack to the ground.

“G-Guh!”


He hit the ground hard, groaning from this, and then a few logs of wood fell right on top of Altair.

“M-Mack?! Mack! Where are you?”

Small newline error here. Though yeah, this day’s just going from bad to worse for them. On the plus side, they’re probably not going to have much in the way of obligations once the dust settles afterwards.

A grunt later and Altair kicked the logs to the sky with his extra legs, before curling them again and standing. Mack was also on the ground, just shaking some rubble off of him, and coughing.

“Bleh! What just happened?!”

“No idea. But we’re—”

Altair was interrupted by screaming coming from outside, along with some sounds of blasts. With the door and the wall around it now kicked open, they could see what was coming from the outside.

Oh yeah, that sounds positive™ for everyone there.

A large, crystalline formation, with a beige glow to it. Next to this formation was a midnight Lycanroc, knocked out on the floor, as well as—Tyron. He was knocked out too.

“H-Hey! Look, it’s Tyron! And some Lycanroc!” Altair pointed there, but then he noticed the other thing Pokémon, which was struck him as being a bit more important at the moment.

A Tyranitar, with a body that glimmered with the same beige tone as the rocks behind it. It was as tall as Tyron, but in some areas of its body, crystals were protruding, most of them rather sharp. It unleashed a vicious roar.

Hey, Altair. Remember how you were going on and on about wanting to be a hero earlier? :copyka:

“H-Holy—” Altair winced from the roar, enough that he almost fell down, though Mack helped him stand. “What is that thing? It’s a Tyranitar, but it’s all…”

“It’s full of crystals!” Mack said after rubbing his eyes to confirm he wasn’t just seeing things. Though he almost wished he was. “T-The guard is probably being called already. We should get out of here.”

Wait, is he Terastalized, or…?

Mack took a glance behind him, and the rest of the bar was in shambles. Most of the customers were trying to leave, only to be paralyzed with fear by the roar.

Wait, there were other customers present in the bar? I didn’t realize that until just now since it wasn’t really described earlier.

“...” Altair looked ahead, at that beast. He was scared, yeah. He was trembling, and if he could, he’d be sweating right now.

But at the same time, something told him that he should act. More than ever, that he should be fighting. This was his call. A call to adventure, maybe.

I feel the wordless quote isn’t really needed here. Also, this strikes me as another “told and not shown” moment going on since I feel like we’re being told stuff by the narration that would be a lot more interesting to see play out more through Altair’s thought process.

And with that in mind, he started to smirk.

“Mack, babe, love of my life. I’m going to beat up that Tyranitar.”


W-What?!” Mack reeled back in shock. “Are you serious?! We’re not members of the guard! We can’t go around picking fights!”

“This is our moment, Mack. And besides, I’m done standing around. I’ll be an adventurer!”

Mack: “Altair, you play adventurers on television! The hell are you going on about?!”
:grohno~2:


Altair stepped forward, cracking his neck. “Are you with me?”

[ ]


“...Through thick and thin.” Mack muttered. Why did he have to do vows?

They were ready for the battle ahead.

Or they thought they were.

In any case… they had to go.

I feel like Mack’s moment here would work a bit better showing off his hesitation before he gives in and goes along. Though I’m going to heavily take the under on this ending well for Altair without a lot of help, probably from Tyron and Lycanroc there.

And that feels like a good place to leave off. On balance, I feel like this is a pretty strong first chapter, especially that opening scene, man. All sorts of stylish and you were clearly having a lot of fun putting together something that vibed like an action movie. The cast is also shaping up to be pretty fun, in between Altair and Mack as the washed-up TV stars with life and personal problems who have a bit of a combative friendship with each other. Lycanroc feels like a pretty promising plot herald, and while we didn’t get a solid bead on Tyron, I can tell we’ll see more of him from your story’s cover art. I thought the more high-tech setting was also a fun change of pace. Definitely one of those things that can get a bit tricky to pull off, but thus far, it’s been done well, and I hope we’ll get to see more of this flying city and what’s holding it up assuming it survives the next two chapters.

On the more critical end, I felt that this chapter had a couple on-and-off recurring issues that weighed it down a little. The first was that the later scenes seemed to have some serial issues with “telling and not showing”, which was a bit surprising since the first scene seemed like it generally avoided it, and to its benefit. There’s some leeway here and there, but in general, it’s more interesting to show things such as events, character reactions, and the like playing out via actions or internal processes as opposed to being told on a high level that something happened or that a character felt/thought something. I also felt that you had some moments where you didn’t have quite enough description in your narration. It was primarily little character moments that were glossed over that might have been fun to see, but there were also a couple details such as the bar having other patrons beyond Altair and Mack that felt like they were withheld from moments where they would’ve been worth bringing up.

But altogether, I thought that even with those quibbles, this was a great start to your story, @Navar . I’m admittedly not sure when I’ll wind up coming back for more since I’m a little stretched thin at the moment, but when I do, I’ll be looking forward to seeing where you take things.
 
Task 4 - Rising Fighters New

Navar

Professional Mudkip Lover
Location
Brazil
Pronouns
He/Him
Partners
  1. swampert
  2. chesnaught-apron
  3. lucario-mega
Task 4 – Rising Fighters



Cole was launched into the ground, rolling around and getting dirt all over himself. By the time he stopped, he found himself coughing repeatedly, the dust getting inside his mouth.


“Oi, oi! I didn’t do anything!”


On the other side of the field was Mack, standing up and cracking his neck. His goggles were over his eyes. “Oh, well, you see, we’re sparring. It’s for team building. Only… I get to yank some answers off of you!”


“I already told ya I don’t know anything, you moron!” Cole gritted his teeth, forcing himself to stand up. “And this sparrin’ isn’t gonna work! I don’t even know how to fight! I roared, but that’s it!”


“Heheheh.” Mack grinned, snapping a finger. “What’s-her-name lady said we should be sparring, and I happen to be the perfect partner for this!”


“…You have issues, man.” Cole sighed. To think they needed to do this before getting to work… he hardly wanted to spend his time fighting, especially when he didn’t know how.


“Trust me, I’m well aware of—”


“Suuuup, guys!”


Heavy stomps interrupted both of them, and as Mack and Cole looked to the side, they saw Tyron, carrying a batch of cookies. He had a grin on his face, and his tail swayed to the sides.


Next to him was Altair, munching on one of the cookies. “I didn’t know the Gilded Guard had a whole courtyard for fighting, but I guess it makes sense.”


“Hey! I didn’t say you could eat one of them!” Tyron glared at the Lokix beneath him. “C’mon, they’re for all of us to share.”


You’re the one that asked me for my help cooking it, big guy.” Altair shrugged in response, shoving the rest of the cookie into his mouth and chewing on it. “Don’t like it, don’t ask for me to help ya.”


“…Cookies?” Cole blinked. Well, for the time being it seemed that they weren’t going to fight. Great!


Mack glanced at Cole. “Your amnesia is incredibly convenient, y’know that? You don’t know shit about the crystals, but you know what cookies are.”


Cole decided to ignore what he said and just move on, turning his attention to the cookies. His nose picked the scent up rather easily. “Man, these smell nice. What kinda cookies are those?”


“Chocolate chip!” Tyron smiled, making his tail sway harder. “And a secret ingredient! Altair insisted we add it.”


“Oh?!” Mack perked up, walking towards the other two. “Is it that ingredient?”


Tyron raised his head. “Hey, how come you know what it is?! I had to close my eyes while he added it…”


“Grandmother once said,” Altair cleared his throat. “It is fun to add a secret flavor so that no one knows. But… it’s more fun to find it.”


“Granny is full of those sayings, huh?” Cole reached out a hand, grabbing one cookie and then chewing on it.





He didn’t find anything. Not the secret flavor, but not any flavor. Cole was eating nothing, if something like that was even possible.


But why? He looked around, and the others were eating just as much as he was. Mack had a delighted look on his face, as did Tyron.


The only one around that didn’t have such a look was Altair. If anything, Cole thought he looked puzzled.


“Did I make them wrong…?” Altair grimaced, grabbing another cookie and chewing on it. “I can’t taste much of anything. There’s a taste, but it’s kinda bland.”


“Really?” Mack asked between chomps. “Cuz it tastes great to me!”


“Me too,” Tyron added.


“Huh, weird.” Altair shrugged. “I probably just didn’t flavor it enough. A thought for next time.”


“Well, I didn’t think it had a lot of flavor either.” Cole decided to point out. Might as well, right? “But I dunno. Never had this before.”


Mack looked at him like he was going to throw daggers into Cole’s heart. “I see, I see.”


“Guys, guys, guys!” Altair shook his head, having finished his cookie. Then, he chuckled, moving ahead to the middle of the arena. “I’m sure y’all wanna discuss how to bake cookies, but there’s more pressing matters at hand! Or paw! Or claw!”


Mack looked at the other two, before grinning. “Oh, okay, for once Altair has a good idea! You guys should listen to him!”


Cole and Tyron both tilted their heads, at the same time.


“Now, we’re adventurers! And as adventurers, we need a team name! I have some ideas, ahem, ahem!”


Altair cleared his throat, before spinning around and snapping a claw. With his free arm, he flicked his jacket dramatically.


“Team Soar, team… Squadron! No, wait, that’s redundant. Hmmm…”


He walked around in circles, claws folded behind his back. “You guys can give me suggestions, y’know.”


“Is he… always like this?” Cole blinked. What other reaction could he even have?


Mack sighed. “Uh, yeah. When he gets excited about something, he does this. Sometimes I have to put him on a leash. But I’m with him on this one. We do need a name, if we’re gonna… work together.”


The last two words were said with a bit of venom behind them. Cole had that impression, anyway. “Uh huh.”


“Team Gotcha and Go! Goootchaaaaa… and go!” Tyron smiled and raised his voice, before faltering slightly. “Hm, nah. Don’t like it. Doesn’t roll off the tongue that well.”


Suddenly, Altair stopped, raising his head. “Wait, wait! I know! Team Rumble. We’re always ready for this kinda stuff! Rumbling adventurers!”


Mack clapped his hands together. “Hey, that’s not bad!”


“I guess it’s doable.” Cole shrugged. A little too zesty for his taste, maybe. But it wasn’t the worst thing in the world.


“I like it! Have a reward!” Tyron threw another cookie at Altair.


And he caught it easily. “Thanks! But that’s only half of our job here. We still need to make a roll call.”


“A roll call…?” Great. Cole was even more confused now.


“Hm, hm, hm! Like this, hold on!”


Mack cracked his neck, before snapping a finger. “Tracking! Terminating! I’m always at mach speed~!”


He raised one arm and pointed at the sky, grinning.


“See? It’s this easy!” Mack flashed a smile, putting his goggles over his head. “Ya just gotta try it!”


Cole watched this in silence, only managing to reply once Mack was done with the show. “Uh, cool, I guess.”


“I’ll get my own, haha!” Tyron beamed, slapping his tail on the ground and flexing his arms. “Ya bet!”


“Heh, nice to see you guys are excited about this. It’s gonna be fun!” Altair snapped a claw again. Fun, except for that weird thing inside his body.


…He shouldn’t be thinking about it right now. It wasn’t the time for that.


“Speaking of which…” Mack glared at Cole, gritting his teeth. “We’re not done with our fight just yet! I want some answers!”


Cole closed his eyes, taking a deeeeeeeep breath, before opening them. “Sure, I’ll answer you. As long as I actually have one. Y’know, amnesia.”


Mack walked back into the field, stretching his arms. His goggles were in front of his eyes again, and he looked right at Cole. “Don’t give me any excuses!”


“Huh, they’re gonna fight.” Tyron grabbed a cookie and ate it. “Should we do something?”


“Hey, Mack?”


“Yeah?”


Altair pointed at the Cyclizar. “Kick his ass.”


“Wh—hey! We’re supposed to be on the same team, doofus!” Cole snarled right back at Altair.


“Yeah, but Mack’s my partner. I get to root for him the most~”


Cole figured he wasn’t going to win that argument. Relenting, he looked at Mack, who was on all fours, ready to pounce.


“Alright, alright. What do you want to—”


But before Cole could finish his sentence, Mack had charged towards him, raising dust, before colliding his head against Cole’s stomach with enough strength to send him to the ground.


“D-Dude!” Cole coughed, as he winced in pain from the attack. “What was that for…?”


Altair wanted to say something nice to Mack, given he did do a good job. With a Quick Attack, but still.


But in any case, this didn’t feel right. Not at the moment, anyway.


“I thought you would like, roar at me and force me back.” Mack stood up. Sure, hitting him helped with that pent-up anger Mack had, but this was almost too easy. Like that guy couldn’t fight, or something.


“I-I don’t know… h-how I did it… a-amnesia. Don’t know almost anything about… w-where I am.”


Cole groaned. He stood up with some difficulty, wincing and holding a paw over his stomach.


“You don’t know…?” Mack tilted his head.


Damn it, he was feeling sorry for him! The guy that he was pissed off at! Mack then wondered what he should do about this. He couldn’t just be friendly out of nowhere, could he?


Well, he could. He just didn’t want to.


“Tch. If you can’t fight, sparring is kinda pointless, isn’t it?” Mack rubbed the back of his head. “Do you remember anything?”


“B-Barely remember my name.” Cole took a step back. “And look, I’m not making excuses. I really don’t know.”


Altair figured he might as well speak up. “Y’know, Mack. Maybe you’re pushing him too hard?”


“Whose side are you on?!” Mack shook his head. And he glared at Cole again. “C’mon, we’re not done! I’m sure you know something! I’m gonna yank it right off of you!”


“…Tch. Fine, let’s get this over with already.”


A grumble and Cole positioned himself. Mack did the same, moving back again. It looked like the positions they took before, and Cole wondered if Mack was going to try the same attack.


Not that he knew what it even was.


He was still charging at him. This time, though, Mack lifted an arm, his claws shimmering with energy. Cole didn’t get this, but he understood that a hit like that would hurt a lot.


He moved to dodge it. Except Mack was still trying to hit him with this attack. Over and over again, he kept swinging, and Cole was still dodging, but only barely. The issue was that Mack was faster than him.


“Come on, you bastard! Just let me hit you!”


Cole continued to dodge, moving back a little. So far, he managed to hold his own, but he knew that it was only a matter of time before Mack managed to connect.


There had to be something he could do. Anything to stop Mack from hitting him. Cole winced, dodging another swing.


But then, Mack swung his tail, hitting Cole right on his legs, and so, he fell on the ground.


“W-Wait!”


Mack didn’t wait. He was ready to claw at Cole, and in turn, Cole closed his eyes, bracing himself for the impact.


Tcccccchnk!











Nothing happened. Cole opened one of his eyes, only to see a bunch of rocks floating around him; Mack had hit one of them, and judging by his widened eyes, didn’t expect Cole to pull this off.


Cole himself didn’t expect it. “W-What… what is this?”


“Stealth Rock.” Mack said, pulling his arm back. “Didn’t know ya had this move.”


“Trust me, me neither.”


Mack glared at him. “Bastard. You probably hid this move!”


“H-Hey, Mack. Easy,” Altair interrupted, trying to placate Mack. “Maybe he didn’t know he could use it. This stuff happens.”


The Lokix was not expecting to be the one putting some sense into Mack.


“Again, what side are you on?!” the Cyclizar huffed, glancing at his partner, before turning back to Cole, still fuming.


“Why are you so angry at me anyway? I ain’t done nothin’ to you.” Cole winced. He really wasn’t in the mood for this.


Mack heard him loud and clear. He was left snarling at the Lycanroc before approaching him, grabbing his neck.


“You don’t get it! You showed up along with those crystals. Altair got hurt because of this, and you know more than what you’re telling us!”


“I’m fine! I’m fine!” Altair walked towards the arena. “Mack, don’t let this get into your head.”


“S-Shut up!” Mack let go of Cole, moving back a bit, and looking at everyone nearby. “H-How are you not concerned?! Are you this dense?!”


But he didn’t wait for anyone to reply. Mack dropped to all fours and dashed off, away from Altair. Away from everyone.




Hotheaded.


Mack got called that a fair share of times. It just… happened, over and over. And, yeah, it was fine. He got used to it. To be fair, it was also the truth.


His tendencies could get the best of him, and that was in good circumstances.


But other times, Mack could run away. Like he was doing right now.


Trying to run away, going through the market district. Maybe he could hit a bar!


If only Chief’s bar was fixed already…


Mack groaned, stopping for a moment to catch his breath. But when he did, he felt the ground beneath him shake with a slight rhythm.


“Huh?” The Cyclizar turned around, on edge for a moment, but relaxed when he saw what – or rather, who – was causing them.


“Wait up, man!”


Behind him was Tyron, struggling to keep up the same pace as Mack. The Aggron looked at his left leg a few times, groaning while he was half running, half walking. Somewhere in the middle.


“C-Can’t… can’t run… l-like ya do.” The Aggron panted, catching his breath.


“Leave me alone, Tyron.” Mack let out a scowl. “I just wanna be by myself.”


He turned around and started to walk again. Tyron, in turn, did his best to follow him.


However, Tyron wasn’t doing a very good job. He was far behind Mack, and couldn’t catch up, not without exerting himself more.


“H-Hey! Mack! C’mon, we’re friends, yeah?! I wanna hear you out! Someone has to!”


The commotion was drawing attention towards the two, and Mack felt his face heating up. “Tch, you doofus. What part of ‘I wanna be by myself’ don’t you get?!”


Mack really wasn’t in the mood for this. He started to run. The only issue with this was that Tyron happened to be running as well.


Or he started to. Tyron put as much as he had into the walk, only to stop and cry out in pain. He collapsed onto his front, struggling to keep himself standing with only one leg.


“G-Grgh! Mack, Mack, c’mon!”


“What is it now…?” Mack finally turned around, seeing Tyron in that state. His eyes widened, and he immediately bolted towards him.


Mack stopped when he was close enough. “Dude, what happened?”


“Haaah. Pathetic, aren’t I? S-Sorry.” Tyron shook his head, wincing. “I can’t run for long without my leg aching like this. Been this way since I was a wee Aron.”


“I didn’t… I didn’t know. Sorry.”


And now Mack had no idea what he was supposed to do. Comfort him? Tyron was there to talk to him, which was the last thing that Mack wanted.


Tyron groaned. His leg ached, but that didn’t feel important. Not right now. “Look, I don’t know what’s up with Altair, but he’s not the only one hurting. I’m hurting too. And I still wanna do this.”


Mack bit a lip. “We can talk. Just, uh, not in the middle of the street.”


“Buy me a snack first.” Tyron grinned. “No, but seriously. Let’s grab something to eat. I left the cookies back with the others.”


“…Fine, fine. My treat.” Mack rubbed the back of his head.




Half an hour later, and the two were inside a restaurant. Tyron sat comfortably on a chair, while Mack was on the opposite side of him. They were looking at each other.


Or rather, Mack was looking at Tyron… or rather, Tyron’s plates. There were six of them, all with only bits and pieces of pies remaining.


As for the Aggron, he was currently licking some remaining pie off of his face.


“When I said it was my treat…” Mack tried to keep the annoyance out of his voice. “I thought you ate like, uh, everyone.”


“I weigh at least six times as much as you do. Of course I eat more than most folks. Us big ‘mons need a lot of fuel to keep us going, after all!”


Tyron looked down at the plates, before tapping his stomach, letting out a sigh of relief. “Aaaaaaah… this can calm anyone down, don’tcha think?”


“Except for my wallet.” Mack winced. “At least I have a tab here, but still…”


“Could be worse. I could be eating something with gold.” Tyron shrugged.


“Oh, yeah…” Mack nodded. Aggron ate iron, didn’t they? Well, pure iron. Made sense they could eat other metals. “I’m glad you didn’t.”


“Eh, it’s fine. Gold’s tasty, but it’s bad for you. You get a belly. Or a bigger one, I guess.”


Mack blinked. Well, he really was glad that Tyron didn’t eat anything that had gold in it.


“I could have. This is payback too, y’know. I baked cookies for all of us, and instead you ran off.”


“I didn’t mean to—well, I did mean to run, but that’s not the point!” Mack put his head on the table, groaning. “Altair has a condition, and I’m worried nobody’s taking it seriously.”


Tyron looked right at Mack, not saying anything. A silent prompt to the Cyclizar to keep talking, which he did.


“It’s not my place to say, but uh, yeah. It worries me. And I know my temper can get the better of me.”


“Pretty obvious.” Tyron was going to speak more, but he refrained.


“Still, I’m not gonna be friends with that Cole guy. I dunno what he’s hiding, but my gut tells me that I should be wary.” Mack raised his head, puffing. “I mean, a guy gotta trust his gut, right?”


“Mine just tells me to eat more.” Tyron snorted, though he quickly quieted down, figuring out that this wasn’t the time for jokes. “Look, Mack, take this from the guy with a barely-functioning leg.”


Mack raised a brow. “Go on.”


“Just cuz your boyfriend has a condition, doesn’t mean he can’t enjoy life. If we’re havin’ this gig, might as well enjoy it, right?”


“I guess…” But Mack put his head down on the table, groaning again.


“The point is, I’m not gonna try to give the mutt a hard time. Try.”


Even so, Mack wasn’t entirely sure if he’d be able to restrain himself. And frankly, when he got back to the other two, he could tell Altair would give him that look with starry eyes, asking him to apologize to Cole.


Usually, such a look worked wonders. But Mack didn’t know if it’d work now.


“Tell me about him.” Tyron spoke up again, grinning. “Talk about Altair. How’d you two meet?”


“You want me to tell you that?” Mack was left blinking. “Well, it’s not really an interesting story. It’s kinda boring.”


“C’moooooon, I wanna know!”


Mack was not going to escape this, huh? He felt that he probably wouldn’t. And really, that wasn’t too bad. He could simply explain things.


Fine, then.


“Alright, alright. We—” Mack stopped after seeing two more plates being put into their table. “Did you order more?”


“What can I say?” Tyron patted his belly and licked his lips. “‘M hungry.”


Well, that was certainly something. Good or bad, Mack wasn’t sure. In any case, he figured it was best to explain it already.


“Me and Altair aren’t from around here. Y’know, big city. Travels around the world every so often. We’re from the Sand Continent.”


Tyron whistled for a moment. “Wow, I’ve heard some stuff about that place. Not very good to live in, is it?”


“Nah, it really isn’t.” Mack lowered his head for a moment. “But me and him? We learned to act together. Took a course. So after a while, Altair and I just kinda stuck around.”


“Heh. Nice, nice. It isn’t filled with details, but I like it.” Tyron grinned proudly, before taking half of the pie out with a chomp.


“…Remind me not to piss you off.” Mack gulped at the sight. “But yeah, I asked him out, and we started dating. Eventually we moved here. Got our jobs, and the rest is history.”


Literally, since they were fired. Mack was still annoyed at that.


“Neato.” Tyron finished the first extra plate, and then moved to the next, already having half of the cake eaten. “So that’s why you’re so worried about the guy.”


“S-Shut up!” Mack looked to the side, pouting. “…He’s important to me. But I know Altair, sometimes he doesn’t take things seriously, and I have to be the voice of reason.”


“And you don’t want to be that voice.”


Mack looked at Tyron, sighing. “Not all the time, no.”


“Guess it makes sense.” Tyron finished his food, patting his stomach, belching softly.


“…I’m gonna be broke by the time we leave, huh?” Mack grumbled. He did take up the offer of going out for food, so he couldn’t fault Tyron for having his fill.


Even if it was comically exaggerated. Whatever.


“Don’t worry about it, man. And don’t worry about your partner. We’ll take care of him, yeah? Then you won’t be the voice of reason all the time.”


“Really…?” Mack wanted to trust him, but really, Tyron was more of an acquaintance. A teammate now, though.


This entire conversation did at least calm him down. That then meant that they had to leave and go back to the others. Back to Cole and Altair.


I’m not looking forward to that…


Mack sighed. He reached out to a waiter, an Indeedee. “Put this on my tab, please.”


And then, he looked right at Tyron, narrowing his eyes.


“This job better pay well…”




Cole had recovered from all the attacks. When it came to Mack’s temper tantrum, he… didn’t recover from that.


In fact, he didn’t do anything. He sat in the middle of the arena, with a hand over his stomach. “This sucks.”


“Yeah, he can be like this sometimes.” Altair sat next to Cole, sighing. “I know Tyron left to pick him up, but it’s been a while. And no offense, but we’ve been here in silence for all this time.”


“Not like I have a lot to talk about.” Cole would have kicked a pebble, but he didn’t find any there. Instead, he was just groaning. “Uuuuurgh…”


“Mack does raise a good point, though.” Altair tapped Cole on the shoulder. “How does your amnesia work, anyway? I mean, if we’re assuming you’re a human…”


“I’m not sure why you’re assuming that, but whatever.” Cole rolled his eyes. “It’s hard to explain. I’m not sure you’d get it.”


Altair said nothing, but he was giving Cole a deep stare.


Enough for Cole to reconsider. “…Fine, fine. How do I put it? It’s like, I know stuff, but I don’t know how I know it.”


“…That makes zero sense.”


“I know! That’s why I said you wouldn’t get it!”


Cole pouted, crossing his arms. “I don’t have memories of who I was. But I know stuff. It’s like a feeling. Like I have the information, I just have no clue where I got it from.”


“Hm.” Altair moved in a little closer. “It’s that why you knew about the crystals?”


“Maybe? Like I said, I have no idea. I had a feeling. A hunch, if you wanna call it that.”


“That’s not gonna work with Mack.” Altair decided to lay on the ground. “He’d rather have something concrete.”


“Well, I don’t have that!” Cole snarled at Altair. “But I am trying. I feel the only way I’ll find out is if we… well, if we take this job. Which we already did.”


Altair raised his head. “And about fighting? Don’t know about it either?”


“Nope.”


“Bummer.” Altair closed his eyes. “Y’know, we’re in this together. Our destinies are intertwined. I have a hunch they are, so you’re not the only one having them.”


“I’m… I’m not sure that’s helping me.”


Cole didn’t look at Altair. But despite what he just said, he was less agitated than before. Talking things out, as it turned out, was a good way of easing his stress.


“I guess I gotta apologize to your boyfriend.”


“Oh, don’t worry. Mack’s gonna get his revenge. Eventually.” And Altair winked.


“That’s ominous.” Cole gulped. “And kinda creepy.”


“Yup!”


Cole didn’t say anything after that. Altair remained sitting on the ground next to him. The two of them couldn’t do much other than wait for the others to return.


“…Thanks. For talking with me.”


At the very least, Cole could say that. Altair didn’t reply, but Cole did hear a chuckle. So maybe… this wasn’t all that bad.


In the end, he wasn’t alone.

Author's notes: This chapter is named after Rising Fighters by Beverly.
 
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Task 5 - Deep Breath New

Navar

Professional Mudkip Lover
Location
Brazil
Pronouns
He/Him
Partners
  1. swampert
  2. chesnaught-apron
  3. lucario-mega
Task 5 – Deep Breath

Cole had never been inside a train. Or at the very least, he didn’t remember ever being in one before. Which meant that, since he was inside one now, he was taking in the view.

The view of the window, that is. He looked out of the window, seeing they were passing by some mountains as well as some forests.

“Don’t you think we’re going too fast…?” Cole gulped. He didn’t say this directed to anyone in particular, but the others were next to him, sitting.

“I actually think we’re going too slow.” Altair groaned, moving around on his seat.

“You need more patience.”

Mack had a cup of soda with a straw in it, and was currently drinking from the cup, slurping his drink slightly.

Meanwhile, Tyron was asleep, mouth opened and tongue sticking out of it. He didn’t seem bothered.

“Just sayin’. I’ve never been in one of these. Or, uh, lived in a city that floats in the sky.”

Cole winced. He was way out of his depth here, and he didn’t even know what his depth was! “So… is the speed normal?”

“Yeah, Cole.” Mack didn’t look at him. He didn’t need to. “Stop complaining and just enjoy the ride.”

“Hey, hey. We’re friends! Well, teammates.” Altair tapped Mack on the shoulder to get his attention. “And you said you’d play nice.”

Mack groaned, before returning to his soda. Meanwhile, Cole was still looking out the window.

“Where’s what’s-her-name again?” Cole asked.

“Here.”

Cole practically jumped from his seat after hearing the voice. Standing on the opposite side of them was Dahlia, who only gave the quartet a glance.

“I’m only here as backup. Don’t worry, I’m not interfering in… whatever you four are doing.”

“Thanks, lady.” Altair tapped a claw on the seat. “Anyway, I could use some intel. Where are we goin’, anyway?”

Dahlia raised a brow. “I thought I told you all. Were you zoning out or what?”

“He was.” Mack pointed out, sipping more of the drink. “But I paid attention.”

Cole shrugged. “I did, too. But I dunno what town this is anyway, so it’s kinda pointless.”

Hearing all those answers, Dahlia sighed. “Wintervale. The Gilded Guard imports some materials for training from it. As the name implies, it’s a thriving town, with a harsh winter. It also has a surprising amount of metals.”

“Oooooh. Cool~!” Altair puffed up his chest. “Pun totally intended, by the way.”

Mack nearly spit out his drink, coughing a few times. “H-Hah! Hey, that was funny!”

“I know, I know!”

“…Huh?” Cole tilted his head. This didn’t make much sense. But whatever. “Ahem, so we go there, we find the crystal, and then what?”

“Both Mayor Meggie and Master Aurelius requested a few samples. They need it for testing.” Dahlia moved her head to the side, looking at the window. “Try not to make a mess, yes? Otherwise, I have to clean it up.”

The fact that none of them had given her an actual answer should be worrying. And maybe it was.

Not long after, the train finally began to slow down, braking until it came to a stop.

Tyron woke up right as the train stopped, gasping. “W-What?!”

They had arrived at the station, and everyone got up to get off.


By the time Cole left the train, he immediately stumbled. His legs trembled, and he heard a familiar noise.

That ringing sound from before. It returned, and louder this time around. Enough for him to cover his ears. “Hhhngh. Anyone else hear this?”

“Nope!” Altair shook his head.

But he lied. His antennae were picking up something. Ringing. Faint. Annoying.

He ignored this, instead whistling as he looked ahead, out of the station.

A rather large town, with stone houses and buildings, Pokémon playing with the snow outside, and a mountain overlooking the town in the distance.

“This is Wintervale.” Dahlia blurted out, crossing her arms. “We’ll only stay here for as long as we need to.”

“And how long is ‘how long we need to’? Because I don’t deal well with this weather.” Mack shivered. His scarf helped, but not enough.

“As long as we need to,” Dahlia repeated. She moved ahead a bit, arms folded behind her back. “I received intel of where the cluster is. I’ll check it, while you deal with hotel reservations.”

“Aye, aye.” Altair saluted her with an arm.

“I could use some grub…” Tyron made himself known, yawning and rubbing his eyes. “Or a coffee.”

And Cole was quiet. The sound was too strong. “W-Wait. Dahlia. Can I… uh. Can I go with you?”

Dahlia turned to look at him, and nodded. “If you’d like to, of course.”

“Bye, Cole.” Mack waved him off, unable to hide the grin on his face.

“…Bye.” Cole rolled his eyes.

He left with Dahlia.

And now there were three other Pokémon around.

Altair put his hands on the pockets of his jacket, looking at his sides. “So! We gotta get a hotel reservation, but like, this is an adventure!”

“…Good point.” Mack started to wag his tail. “Maybe this could be a date. Wouldn’t that be fun?”

Ahem.” Tyron cleared his throat, startling both. “A date is fun, but being a third wheel isn’t.”

“Another good point.” Altair rubbed the back of his head. “Guess we should just get this reservation over with.”

“Problem is we don’t know how much time we’re spending here.” Mack sighed, before trembling from the cold. “…Okay, new idea: reservations first. It’s freezing out here.”

“Hm. Hold on.” Altair took off his jacket, tossing it to Mack.

And Mack caught it. He put the jacket over his head. It didn’t fully fit him, but the thought counted.

Besides, now Altair looked even hotter. And Mack was staring.

Altair knew that, giving him a wink. In turn, Mack looked away, heat rising on his face.

“…Guess I’m being a third wheel after all.” Tyron rolled his eyes and stepped forward, walking ahead into the city.

“Aw. Wait up, big guy!” Altair grinned, running towards him.

“Hm… he is pretty big.”

Mack ran after them both, still shivering a little from the cold.


The ringing noise hadn’t stopped, even when Cole left the vicinity of the town. Dahlia was with him, taking a few glances at him every so often.

“Are you alright?”

“I-I’m fine. Just…” Cole shivered. Not from the cold, but from the sound. “When I fought last time, with that cluster in your city, I spent the day hearing this ringing noise. And ever since we left the train, I’ve been hearing it again.”

“What…?” Dahlia looked at him properly now. For all she could tell, there wasn’t anything wrong with him. “Lycanroc have good hearing. Perhaps it’s just that?”

“Maybe. I wouldn’t know.” Cole shrugged. “But I don’t think it’s a coincidence that I’m hearing it again and we’re reaching a cluster—speaking of which, who named them that?”

“Miss Meggie did. Or one of her coworkers.”

“Uh, cool, I guess.” Cole didn’t have anything more to say about that. “So, anyway, I was thinkin’. Maybe this noise is some kind of cluster detection thingy. And the closer we get, the louder it gets.”

“I see.” Dahlia crossed her arms. “I already know where it is, or at least, the approximate location. Maybe we can test your theory.”

“…That was easier than I thought,” Cole muttered, before walking ahead. “Thanks.”

They were in an area full of snow. A field of snow, along with some hills. If there really was a cluster there, it had to be further in.

Cole couldn’t see it amidst the sheer white, but on the bright side, there wasn’t a storm or anything to make their lives miserable.

“We’ll keep going, alright? Until we can find the cluster.” Dahlia stated, though she didn’t look at him. Her eyes were on the field of snow.

“Okay, okay.”

A sigh. Cole decided to try focusing his hearing. Making as little noise as he could, and instead, checking how loud the sound was. He could still hear it, and honestly, the thing was grating.

But it wasn’t as loud as he heard it back then. It was a bit faint, honestly.

Maybe he couldn’t detect it. Maybe last time was a coincidence. There were so many things he didn’t know. This could be one of them.

Cole ignored the thought. He continued to walk, and eventually, he climbed the hill along with Dahlia. While he was doing that, the sound returned.

Not just that, but he actually heard it louder. Cole gritted his teeth, and then the sound grated his ears more.

“H-Hngh!”

The sound was too much. Too loud. Ringing. Ringing. Ringing.

Cole fell to his knees, clutching his head in pain. “H-Help! H-Help… m-me…!”

He couldn’t move. He wanted to move, but actually doing it was too much effort. His vision grew blurry, and while he felt Dahlia touching him on the shoulder, Cole couldn’t do anything about it.

“C-Cole! Get a grip! What’s going on with you?!”

Those words were there, but he could barely pay attention to them. Cole wanted to throw up, and it was a miracle he didn’t.

“T-Too loud.”

It took him more effort than he wanted, and even then, the words barely left Cole. They were muffled, only slightly louder than a whisper.

“Listen to me.” Dahlia touched both of Cole’s shoulders. “Focus on my voice. Everything else doesn’t matter, alright? Focus only on me.”

Cole could hear her. Loud and clear. In fact, she was too loud. But yeah, that made sense. It wasn’t like he had any other ideas right now.

So he tried it. Cole tried to focus only on what Dahlia said. Only on her words. Her voice. Her tone.

His body wasn’t moving. It wasn’t trembling, either.

“Good. Alright, now, try to relax, alright? Deep breaths. Deep breaths.”

Cole didn’t nod—because he couldn’t. But he tried what she told him. Breathing in… and out. In, out. Slowly, for a certain period of time. How long? Cole had no clue.

“You’re having a panic attack. But it’ll pass. It can’t kill you.”

Being close to the cluster was giving him this? Well, Cole assumed that was the case. And he didn’t want to stay like this. He continued to breathe, slowly.

His mind was only focused on Dahlia’s voice. Even the ringing didn’t seem to be there anymore.

Or, if it was, it happened to be a bit more manageable. “H-Hhhgnh. It’s… i-it’s gettin’ better. I-I think.”

“Alright.”

Cole continued, and his heart slowed down; slowed to its proper rhythm. He breathed in, then let it out.

He could still hear that noise, but it wasn’t that loud. It didn’t bother him nearly as much. When Cole realized that, his mind and body could relax again.

Until the panic disappeared. Cole twitched a finger, and it moved. He tried doing the same with his arms, and they also moved. His whole body moved, responding to his commands again.

“H-Holy. What was that…?”

“A panic attack.” Dahlia let go of him, standing up. “Are you feeling better?”

“I-I guess.” Cole still felt deeply shaken.

“If you’d prefer, you can return—”

“N-No.” Cole shook his head. “As much as Mack annoys me, he’s right. I probably know more about these clusters than I let on. I just, well, don’t remember. Exposing myself to them might jog my memory.”

“Hm, I see.” Dahlia raised a brow, taking a step forward. “Come, then.”

They walked for a little while longer, climbing the hill. Dahlia was ahead of Cole, and because of that, she saw the cluster earlier. Cole walked another step, before she put an arm in front of him to get him to stop.

“There it is,” she said.

Cole looked ahead, and on the slope down, he could see it. A big cluster of crystals. Unlike the one he saw before, this had a bright red color. It also seemed slightly bigger.

Crystal-like particles floated in the air next to the cluster, and looking at them made Cole shiver, not just from the cold. Around the cluster was a long circle of yellow tape and some fences.

“I guess it’s to drive people away. Is this it?”

“Yes.” Dahlia reached out for her pocket. “We’re contacting your teammates.”


“Oh, c’mon, you’re telling us this fancy place only has two beds?!”

Altair tapped his claw on the reception’s desk. The receptionist, an Exploud, was definitely not amused by the constant tapping.

“YOU CAN EITHER ACCEPT THIS, AND STAY IN MY HOTEL, OR YOU CAN GET OUT. TAKE IT OR LEAVE IT, PAL.”

“Ugh.” Altair winced. “Did anyone ever tell ya you have an obnoxiously loud voice?”

“IT’S IN THE NAME. EXPLOUD, MORON.”

Tyron cracked his knuckles. “Look. We ain’t rich. If you want a fight, then you’re gettin’ one! But we’re not payin’ these egregious prices!”

Yup, sounds about right for how Altair handles things. At least it’s not messy yet. Mack sighed. He was behind the other two, because really, haggling had never been his forte.

And Mack would rather leave this to them. Besides, he got distracted by a ringing noise, reaching out for a pocket on Altair’s jacket.

Mack pulled out a round device shaped like a Bronzor, only with the outer ring being colored silver, and each of the spheres had a different color: blue, purple, red, orange, yellow, and green. In the middle of the device was a blue orb with another silver ring. It visibly sparkled on the inside.

“Hold on, guys.”

Mack stepped back, while the wood underneath him creaked slightly. He tapped the sphere in the middle once, and heard a beep.

“Altair? Do you copy me?”

It was Dahlia’s voice.

“Nope. Mack here, I was just holding on to his jacket because it was freakin’ cold outside.”

“Is that so? Okay.”

He heard a chuckle from the device, recognizing the voice as being Cole’s.

“Oh, I see the mutt is there too. Cool, really cool.”

“We have found the cluster. Have you done your reservation already?”

“Altair and Tyron are, uh, haggling. It’s kinda expensive.” Mack shrugged. “Although, if we leave the mutt outside—”

“Shut up.”

That was definitely Cole. Mack couldn’t help but snicker. “Sorry, sorry. I was joking. Maybe. So, what’s the plan?”

“I will handle the bureaucratic part. Your team will handle this. Tomorrow, that is.”

Mack nodded. “Hmmmm, alright. I’ll let the guys know. Over and out?”

A click could be heard, and the call ended. Mack put the device back on the pocket, and turned around. Altair and Tyron were still arguing over there.

Like idiots.

“I’m sorry, but…” Altair started to frown. He trembled, body shaking from top to bottom. “S-See, me and my boyfriend over there—”

Altair pointed at Mack.

“We’re low on cash, and we need a place to stay. It’s just for tonight, you know. I’m sick. I traveled here by foot with my boyfriend and my friends. My legs are killing me. I’m sure you can guess why. I mean, I have four of them.”

Exploud didn’t seem too fazed, but when he looked at Altair, he saw genuine sadness.

“Tch. You get a ten percent discount. Nothing more, nothing less.”

Mack blinked, before fighting to keep a smirk off his face.

That’s my partner. Always a great actor~


They waited until the evening of the next day. Altair figured this was probably the best time. Not that many people would be around the cluster, so they could go and do whatever they wanted.

So off he went with the rest of the guys. Dahlia, on the other hand, was left behind in the city.

“Was it really that easy?” Cole winced. He heard the ringing again, now that they were heading to the place from before. “Getting permission to act here.”

“Apparently, the mayor has a bunch of influence.” Mack shrugged. He put on his goggles, in case the snow got thicker. He shivered, too. “Let’s just get this over with.”

“It’s ‘cause the mayor saved the world a long time ago.” Tyron interjected, yawning. “I mean, the chief said it. Dunno if I believe him or not.”

“She did? Huh, cool. Was it related to the Enlightenment?” Altair beamed, walking ahead, away from the others.

“Enlightenment…?” Cole tilted his head. “Uh, just so you know, I don’t have any idea what that is.”

“We’ll explain later, mutt.” Mack shivered again. Normally, he’d be running off after Altair, but given the situation right now, it was too cold to be doing that. “Can’t you slow down?”

“Nope~!” Altair just kept running.

So did the rest of them. Well, except for Tyron. He had a reasonable pace, and he wasn’t going to bust his leg trying to follow them.

The closer they got, the more ringing Cole heard. But unlike before, he wasn’t having a panic attack because of the sound.

Altair was the first to arrive, though he didn’t look when the others did. Instead, he looked at the cluster. “Huh. Red, like my jacket. But kinda soft. And there’s some crystals floating in the air as well.”

“That’s freaky as shit.” Mack squinted. This time around, he didn’t see any Pokémon. “Maybe we just gotta destroy this one.”

“Hngh. I dunno.” Cole put a hand over his head. “I think we’re not alone.”

“Huff… h-huff…” Tyron was the last one, having decided to run a little bit. Not enough to hurt, but enough to catch up. “H-Huh. That thing looks so odd.”

Cole took a glance at him, though he didn’t do much else other than that. The ringing had gotten stronger, again. Plus, there was that feeling that they weren’t alone. Someone—one of the things from before, maybe—was around.

He would be proven right soon after. Altair’s antennae twitched, and he looked at all of them. Specifically, at Cole. Then, he threw himself at the Lycanroc, forcing them both into the ground.

Right as a tongue lashed forward, trying to hit Cole. Or where Cole was, to be exact.

Something jumped out of the snow, before landing on the ground. A Drizzile, yet not a Drizzile.

It looked off. Crystals protruded all over its body, particularly around its arms and legs. Its tail had so many crystals that it actually looked pointed. And there was a red sheen all over its body, so much that the Drizzile was barely recognizable as being shiny.

Drizzile looked at them, at all four, before retreating its tongue.

“C’mon. We gotta fight.” Altair helped Cole stand up.

Their opponent was looking at each one, eyes moving one after the other.

“Heh. You’re in luck, beast! You’re the first one to receive our roll call!”

Altair snapped a finger, before adjusting his jacket. His torso faced forward, and one of his arms was held horizontally across his midsection. He raised his other arm diagonally, with his claw pointed outwards. “The Dazzling Adventurer, Altair!”

“A-Already?!” Mack cleared his throat.

He spread his legs wide. A low, grounded position. One was bent forward, and the other stretched back. One arm was on his hips, and the other had two fingers pointing at his own head. “The Speedy Adventurer, Mack!”

And Tyron was next, taking a heavy step with his good leg, before flexing both of his arms. “The Powerful Adventurer, Tyron!”

“…Huh?” Cole blinked. What were they doing?

“Pssst, you’ll get your role later!” Altair snapped a claw. “Together, with the indomitable spirit of adventure!”

He inhaled as much air as he could, as did Mack and Tyron, before calling out at the same time as them. “Team Rumble!”

“Oh. C-Cool.” Cole wasn’t sure what just happened, but it was sorta interesting.

They had other things to worry about, though. Like the Drizzile.

It looked at Cole. Its eyes moved, one after the other. Then, it rushed, fist clenched…

With flames. Flames had emerged around Drizzile’s body, and Cole was too slow to react.

The punch hit him right in the face, and he was immediately thrown into the ground, screaming in pain.

He felt a very strong scent of iron in his mouth. Before long, Cole realized he was bleeding—one of his teeth fell out from the impact.

“H-Hhhgnh!”

“Mutt!” Mack snarled. This really was strange. “Since when can a Drizzile learn this attack?! That was Fire Punch, wasn’t it?!”

“We need to fight.” Altair cracked his neck, running forward.

So did Drizzile. It moved its head 180 degrees, looking at Altair before launching itself towards him, trying to lash out with its tail.

Altair unfurled one of his legs just in time to strike against the tail.

He knocked the dragon back, but could feel that leg burning. Altair hissed in response, but he was where he wanted to be.

“Mack! Tyron! You’re up!”

Mack dropped to his four legs, before dashing, raising a small cloud of snow as he rammed his head against Drizzile’s chest.

“Get away from him!”

He wasn’t doing this randomly, though. While ramming, Mack moved his head slightly, towards the direction that Tyron was.

“Hiyah!” Altair screamed, kicking Drizzile to add to the strike Mack was doing.

Their combined attack was enough to send the beast flying towards Tyron. And, in turn, Tyron cracked a grin.

“Heck yeah!”

Tyron rammed his head, smashing Drizzile as hard as he could, and sending it flying.

Cole groaned, standing up and putting a hand over his mouth. He still smelled and tasted the blood. “Mmmmfff. D-Did we win?”

“Not yet, mutt!” Mack blurted out, looking at where Drizzile was being launched towards.

Drizzile fell on the ground, and as it hit the snow, it immediately melted, with a loud sizzling sound audible to anyone nearby. It quickly stood up, hissing at them.

“How’s that even…” Tyron grimaced. “Didja guys see that?! It melted the snow!”

“Tch.” Altair braced himself, stepping hard on the ground. “Hey, Cole! Any idea what kinda trick this is?!”

But Cole shook his head. He looked at Drizzile, and the only reaction he had was hearing that stupid ringing noise again.

Drizzile shot itself towards them, before spinning in the air. Transparent crystals formed around it, before they turned red… and were set ablaze.

Then, they were all launched towards the ground. Altair’s eyes widened, before he jumped out of the way. “Mack! Help Cole out! I can dodge this on my own!”

“H-Hey! What about me?!” Tyron winced. No way he was fast enough to evade all the projectiles.

But he didn’t need to.

Tyron breathed in, before letting his voice out, producing a metallic noise. It was loud enough to blow away some of the crystals… but not all of them.

The remaining ones shot towards the Aggron and hit, sinking into his skin and causing Tyron to yelp in pain.

Meanwhile, Mack dashed as quickly as he could, grumbling to himself and tackling Cole so he’d be out of harm’s way.

Finally, Altair was making his play. He uncurled his legs again, before kicking the ground as hard as he could. The impact sent him flying, or rather, bouncing upwards.

Far enough that Mack couldn’t see him. “C’mon, mutt! Ride me!”

“Wha—” Cole didn’t have the time to think. He jumped on Mack’s back.

Mack ran, dodging the crystals. Tyron was still shouting, trying to blow away more of those attacks, but he didn’t do a particularly good job at that.

“W-Where’s Altair?!” Tyron yelled, the crystals hitting him before shattering. “This stuff stings!”

“He should be arriving anytime soon!” Mack said, halting himself after the crystals stopped.

Drizzile was still there, falling, though it wasn’t spinning around anymore. And above the creature was Altair, who had finally started his descent.

A gust of wind gathered around him, while his leg was aimed at Drizzile. The Lokix was faster, and so…

“HIYAH!”

Altair kicked Drizzile right on the back, the attack launching both of them down, towards the snow. It didn’t take long before both reached the ground, causing a large cloud of snow to rise in the air.

“Tch!” Mack closed his eyes instinctively. The goggles protected him, but he still felt the need to do this.

Cole had to protect his own, and the missing tooth was still giving him a throbbing pain.

But they were safe. Tyron groaned, not blown back by the sudden wind. “You guys alright?!”

Mack looked at the snow cloud ahead. “We’re fine—”

“Mmmm!” Cole gave Mack a quick flick on the top of his head, and in turn, Mack moved to the side, letting Cole take the fall.

“As I was saying, I think we’re fine.” Mack rolled his eyes. But he still had his gaze fixed on the sight ahead. “Altair hasn’t returned yet. He has to be fine.”

Cole groaned, trying to see anything. To his surprise, he managed it. It wasn’t clear, but through the cloud, he managed to see something.

The outline of crystals—Drizzile—hitting an even larger outline. It had struck the cluster, before falling to the ground.

Then, the ground shook. A roar filled the air, but it was distorted—the sound barely registered as anything alive. And the cloud dissipated. At least partially.

A hole was opened in the middle of it by Altair, who was yelping in pain and receiving a punch right on his stomach.

He didn’t have the time to react. He was launched back, flying through the air before landing on the ground once. Then, he was tossed again, falling a second time. And then, he flew a third time, only then falling and remaining down on the snow.

“Altair!” Mack immediately rushed to his side.

Not just him. Cole did too, and even Tyron was running. As much as his leg let him, that is.

While they were doing that, the rest of the cloud dissipated. Drizzile was still there, but something had changed.

Some of the crystals in its body had fallen to the ground, melting the snow around them. However, Drizzile didn’t care about those.

It looked at the cluster, having hit it before, enough that larger crystals had fallen.

What’s it doing…? Cole winced. His heart sank inside of him through something that he could only describe as a gut feeling that things would turn bad very soon.

Drizzile grabbed some of the crystals, before seemingly injecting them into its body. It hissed repeatedly, only for a shockwave to form around it.

But that wasn’t the end of it. After injecting the crystals into itself, Drizzile’s body began to change.

Indeed. The crystals had spread further, grown larger, fully encompassing it. It stuck out its tongue, as if to hiss.

It’s using the crystals to power itself up! Cole gasped, stepping back.

“H-Holy crap.” Altair groaned, trying to stand up. “That’s creepy, but… man…”

It hurt him to stand, and his stomach was burning.

Literally. Altair heard the crackling of fire, immediately taking off his jacket and rubbing it against his stomach to stop the spread of flames.

He was just in time to see the others arrive next to him. “H-Hey guys. Sorry, I thought I had this.”

“You idiot.” Mack looked away, at Drizzile. It was staring at him. No, at all of them. They were its prey. The thought alone brought a shiver down Mack’s spine. “We need a plan, and fast.”

Cole groaned, still holding his mouth with a paw. He looked at the ground, seeing those red crystals. Then, he took a glance at Altair.

A thought came to him. An idea, but a stupid one.

Why? Why am I thinking like this? It’s dumb.

“It’s coming back!”

Tyron moved ahead, right as the Drizzile shot a stream of flames towards them. His large, bulky body managed to block the attack, though Tyron was left with a stinging sense of pain through him.

“There has to be something we can do!” Mack pleaded. To who, though? He looked at Cole. “Mutt! Please tell me you have an idea. Anything at all!”

“…Tch.” Cole didn’t want to say it. He moved his paw down, feeling less blood. “I have one, but it’s stupid.”

Altair looked right at him. “Stupid ideas are my favorite.”

“Grab one of the crystals.” Cole said. He winced, maybe from the pain in his mouth, maybe from how scared this idea made him. “Use it. I… I think you can. It’s a gut instinct.”

The stream of fire stopped, and Tyron was left panting. Some parts of his body were stinged, bruised. “G-Guys! Whatever you’re planning, you gotta do it soon!”

“Use it… how?” Altair rubbed his arm.

Cole took a deep breath. I’m getting punched for this.

“You saw what that thing did! Use it, stab yourself with it, or something!”

“What?! No way!” Mack immediately looked at Cole. “How is that an idea?! Are you out of your mind or something?!”

Cole ignored all that Mack said, looking right at Altair. “Just trust me on this one, you can change too! Fight fire with fire!”

Altair grew quiet. He stared at the shards, only a few feet ahead of Tyron. If he jumped, he could grab one.

What was worse about this was that his brain was actually thinking this was a good idea.

“The way I see it, this thing is gonna be tough to beat. We struck it repeatedly, and we only managed to make it drop some crystals.” Altair let his jacket fall to the ground. “I’m with Cole! I think it’s worth a shot!”

Drizzile hissed again, before jumping ahead, swinging its tongue. Cole breathed in, and roared! The sound was enough to make Drizzile lose balance for a moment.

Tyron raised a fist in the air, before punching the ground. He didn’t break it, but he managed to raise a cloud of snow that obscured Drizzile’s vision.

And in that moment, Mack charged against it, knocking it back a little while. “Altair! You can’t be serious!”

He fell to the ground, while Altair picked up one of the crystals. “It doesn’t hurt, for some reason.”

Altair was putting a lot of trust on someone that he didn’t know. He glanced at Cole, who seemed almost saddened by the idea he had.

Just then, the cloud dissipated once more. Drizzile swung its tongue, before igniting it. The movement was too fast, and they couldn’t react.

Cole was hit. Mack was hit. Tyron was hit. Altair was hit.

They were all hit.

And they all screamed, falling down while Drizzile moved its tongue back into its mouth, hissing again.

“Urgh… what kinda power is that…?” Altair winced. He had dropped the crystal right next to him. “M-Mack. You good?”

“N-No idea.” Mack winced, trying to stand. Two legs or four, it didn’t matter. He couldn’t move. “A-Altair, wait! There has to be… has to be another way! Another way of beating this monster!”

Altair stood up, holding the crystal between his claws. He closed his eyes, letting a deep breath out… “We’re a team, which means I have to trust you guys. That includes Cole, too.”

“I-I know, but…!” Mack groaned, trying to stand.

“C’mon. If you can’t trust him, trust me.”

Mack couldn’t say anything to that, but Altair could.

“So, please watch it. My… transformation!”

He stabbed his stomach with the crystal. Immediately, the shard started to glow, and fire crackled around him.

“KHUH!”

But that wasn’t the end of it.

Altair felt his body going numb, while the color drained from the shard, leaving it transparent. And…

Crystals formed around his stomach, right where he stabbed himself. Altair’s eyes widened as he watched the formation spread to the rest of him.

He lost the movement in each area afflicted by this growth. Little by little, it covered him. It filled his legs. His arms. His waist. Stomach. Chest.

Altair let out a scream.

The sensations filled his head.

Author's Note: There's a lot I can talk about when it comes to this one. For starters, I'm really going along with the Tokusatsu vibes for this story. I mean, since 2020 I realized that I really enjoyed the art of Tokusatsu, so it's slowly been getting more and more influence in the way I write things. It's nice. The roll call for the team comes from GoGo Sentai Boukenger (which was adapted into Power Rangers Operation Overdrive). That's more or less my main inspiration for this one.
 
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