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Pokémon [M] The Fire In Her Heart

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Misfit Angel

Bug Catcher
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feminine
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A story written by Misfit Angel

I solve practical problems!
The Fire In Her Heart is a story that follows a goofy, socially outcast young woman named Julia as she tries to start a career as a pokémon contractor. Pokémon contractors are just that -- people who can be hired by non-trainers to solve mundane problems. By building teams that are focused more on solving practical problems and less on pushing the creatures to their limits in tournaments and league challenges, contractors fill a small but vital niche in society. Those who can't or don't want to keep pokémon of their own seek contractors out to find solutions to problems that they can't solve by themselves.

Need cargo delivered, and you're unsatisfied with how the trains are never on time? Have a precious pedigree Glameow kitten that is stuck in a tree and won't come down? Your young child got lost while hiking a trail with the family? Or maybe you've been wronged by a career criminal and the local police are too busy and understaffed to do anything about it? Well, those are just some of the things that contractors can help take care of. For a price, of course.

Who are you people?
Character images sourced from: Fantasy OC Creator
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The main character of this story is Julia Clarke, an awkward and goofy girl who led a reasonably successful life as a non-trainer until legal troubles saw her thrown in prison for nearly a year, costing her everything that her success had gained her. Readjusting to her new circumstances in life has been difficult -- nobody trusts her, nobody wants to hire her, and she's been pulled to the bottom of society, relying on charity and pity to get her through her days. But after another year of feeling sorry for herself, and with the insistence of an old friend, she realized that the only way out is through. Ready to take her life back, she's both dreading and excited for the hard work and self-determination that will be required of her.

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That old friend of hers is Rickard Karstensen, an acquaintance from her high school days. Rickard is an accomplished competitive pokémon trainer with half a decade of experience, having amassed 21 badges from four different regions and placed highly in numerous international tournaments, solidifying his status as a household name across the Storm Islands. A fount of knowledge and expertise, his guidance will shape her as she begins her journey as a pokémon contractor.

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This is our primary villain. I won't spoil too much about her, as I want her details, motivations and reasons for why she's a bad apple to trickle out as the story progresses.

These aren't the only characters that feature prominently, however! During her journey, Julia will meet and make friends with a variety of characters, such as the enigmatic Lydia Cole, the martial arts master known only as Mr. Higashi, the prim and proper Summer Goldwheat, and the plucky and determined Sheriff van Nystrom. This story will also feature character cameos from several other stories I've written over the years, either by making physical appearances, or by being mentioned.

Where are we?
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The Fire In Her Heart revisits the region that started my creative writing career, Storm Island. But Storm Island isn't just a single island anymore, the region has been broken up into an archipelago composed of multiple sub-regions! From the bustling and poorly named Mainland to the lost-in-time Broken Blackwood, the coastal forests and crumbling fortifications of the Marine Isles to the harsh and hardy badlands of the Cinder Steppes, and beyond into the Scattered Reefs, almost everything about the original Storm Island setting has been rebuilt from the ground up, and I'm excited to show it off!

What to expect from this story
The Fire In Her Heart is planned to be a fairly typical journey fic; the main characters will travel from location to location across the Storm Islands in search of work and glory. That said, there will not be a traditional gym conquest plotline, and the main characters will not be challenging any gyms (at least not in a traditional manner). Overall, this story can be described as slice of life, focusing on the struggles of characters who've had their lives turned upside down by factors outside of their control.

Overall, the pace of this story might seem slow. It's a frequent criticism I've gotten over the years and one I never seem to learn a lesson about, but that's just how I like to write things! Hopefully its pace isn't an issue, as I like to stop and smell the flowers -- and the Storm Islands are bursting at the seams with flowers!

Descriptions of physical fighting are one of my weak points in writing, and I'm using this story to hone that skill. During the second act, the main character's love of martial arts will enter the forefront, and as such, this story will feature human vs. human combat, as well as human vs. pokémon combat at certain points.

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The following will crop up at some point. Individual chapters in which they apply will be marked.
Hover over them for detailed explanations for how some of them will be relevant to the story.

[ strong language ] :: [ graphic physical violence ]
[ mild to moderate suggestive content ] :: [ transphobia ] :: [ body image struggles ]

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What will you find within The Fire In Her Heart? This list is not complete, and there is more to come!
[ custom characters ] :: [ custom region ] :: [ custom pokémon ] :: [ very few canon references ]​

Chapter listing

Prologue
Prologue: Shattered

Act 1: Deepest Blue
Chapter 1: Her Name Is Julia
Chapter 2: In The Garden Of Eden
Chapter 3: Let's Go To Land's End!
 
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Misfit Angel

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Prologue: Shattered

"Dude -- we've been looking at that house for months. We've got most of the money ready, we should buy it now before someone else comes and takes it! The payments on the loans won't be much! And it'll be perfect for us!"

A young woman was sat down at the Meadowridge Diner, having just been served her breakfast. Across the table from her, a similarly aged man tapped away non-chalantly on his phone, still awaiting his own breakfast.

"I guess," he answered.

She couldn't tell if he was engaged in their conversation or not, but continued anyways, "I'm just saying. A three bedroom house, and the beach is a five minute walk away? And for as little as 1,100 golden dragons? That is literal theft!"

Her companion smiled and laughed before taking a sip of his coffee. "I still can't help but shake the feeling something is wrong with that house if it's selling for that little, and is still on the market. Does it have a bad foundation, maybe? Or maybe the property taxes are insane? Maybe it's even haunted?"

She crossed her arms and leaned back in her chair. "True... Why don't we go talk to the real estate agent again, see if we can't give it a closer inspection? It's my day off, so if we can do it today, that'd be great!"

"Well, I've got nothing going on today, other than keeping an eye on my investments. Got a good feeling about Diamond Construction -- heard they've just finalized a contract with Vogel Real Estate to build another skyscraper up in Crestfall."

With total disinterest, she sidestepped his commentary about the stock market and continued. "I'm just... I don't want to pass it up, ya know? Three bedrooms for that price, anywhere in the city? That's a really tough ask. And I wanna be in a place where we don't have to worry about making it work when we start having kids."

He glanced up at her. "When? No longer saying if?"

She shrugged. "You put a ring on my finger. I figured that sealed the deal, ya know? You know how much I've been talking about it..."

"You're really committed to this, aren't you?"

"You aren't?" she asked before nodding fervently. "I just feel kinda left out, you know? Two of my brothers had two kids each by the time they were my age... And I've always had a stupid rivalry thing with them, trying to prove I was just as good as them, or better, at everything..."

"I dunno if rushing into motherhood is something you should apply that rivalry to. And, I still dunno if I'm ready myself. The promotion my boss has been promising me still hasn't happened, yet..."

"Come on, you've been coming up with reasons why you're not ready for almost a year now... When will you be ready? Will you ever be?" she questioned, before thinking, "That's a deal breaker for me, if not... Am I wasting my time on this guy?"

He looked up into her eyes and stared for a brief while, causing her to giggle shyly and look away. "If it's what you really want... It's getting harder and harder to say no to you -- I'll call the real estate agent when we're done with breakfast. Once we get moved in, we'll start working on it."

She squealed with joy at the prospect and grabbed her glass of tea, holding it up halfway across the table. "That a promise?"

He returned the favor and clanked his coffee mug against it. "Of course. Anything for you, dove."

"Okay, now that part," she smiled before taking a sip and then pointing at him accusingly. "That part's a lie. 'Anything' is a big promise."

He smirked and nodded his head in defeat. "Almost anything. Don't go asking me to kill anyone."

About half an hour passed as they discussed their future together. Mundane topics came up, such as what color walls they'd have in each room of their new house, how they'd deal with pushy neighbors, and the design of fencing they'd square their yard off with. Topics of a more personal nature came up as well, such as the idea of getting a pet pokémon to practice the concepts of parenthood on, and which they should get. They were divided over the idea; she wasn't totally on board with the idea, worrying about the possible dangerous interactions between a pokémon and a newborn, but decided on a Skitty if they were to get one. Her partner wanted something large and loyal, who could protect them while they were out together as a family, and suggested a Stoutland. In the end, they couldn't reach an agreement, but they had time to figure it out.

As they were discussing the matter, the dull roar of the diner slowly dwindled, and it caught her attention. She looked around to see if something was wrong before noticing a large police presence outside of the door. "Uhhhh," she bleated as she watched the ten-member strong task force enter the diner. She had a quick glance around to see if anything or anyone obvious stuck out that would require such a heavy response, but she saw nothing. She grabbed her fork and shoveled another scoop of eggs up. "Should we be worried?" she asked.

Her partner eyed the officers nervously. "Dunno. I'd be ready to hit the floor, just in case. Things get pretty violent when they arrest those Ridge Rioter punks. And they've been arresting a lot lately."

In the moment between focusing on her cup to have a gulp of her tea, putting it back down, and returning her focus to the tense atmosphere that had been building, she saw the entire team of officers approaching their side of the diner. Very abruptly, the team stopped in front of her and her partner. She glanced over at him. "Tamaz, you didn't do something stupid, did you?"

He shrugged and shook his head, with wide eyes.

"Ms. Clarke," the lead officer said. "Let's make this easy. Please stand up."

Her heart stopped and she froze, fork of eggs halfway between her plate and her mouth. Were the police really looking for her? And if so, why would they be?

"Put the fork down, ma'am!"

"Officer, what's this about?" Tamaz asked as she lowered the fork.

The officer glared at him. "Please step away from the girl, sir. We wanna do this easily."

"That's my fiancée you're talking about! I demand to know what the fuck this is about!"

"Ms. Clarke, you're under arrest for breaking and entering, grand larceny, destruction of private property, --" the officer started listing off as he grabbed her by the wrist, sending the fork falling to the floor. "-- attempted arson, and conspiracy to sell stolen goods."

"What?!" she roared as she tried to wrestle her hand out of his grip. "That's -- What are you talking about?!"

"Resisting arrest!" the officer added before his partners came in to help restrain her.

"'Ey! Get your hands off my girl!" Tamaz yelled as he tried to intervene.

"Tamaz, no!"

"Someone restrain this guy!"

She realized it was a bad idea to resist, but her instincts kicked in and she started pushing away at them. Her left shoulder and elbow burned with pain as they tried to pull her arm behind her back, and before she knew it, she'd been slammed hard enough into the table to topple it, and her with it, to the floor. "Get your -- Aah! Stop! My arm!!"

"I got her, I got her," one of the officers said as he dived on top of her.

With the surge of adrenaline fading, her senses returned and she stopped struggling, but evidently it didn't matter anymore -- the officers seemed to assume she and Tamaz were still fighting them and continued handling both of them roughly; a knee was pressed against her back, her legs were restrained and forced embarrassingly far apart, she felt hands unnecessarily all over her hips, and her arms were yanked hard enough to nearly dislocate her shoulders.

"Gahhr!" she growled as handcuffs were locked around her wrists. "Stop it, stop it! That hurts! And get your hands off my ass!"

As she was lifted up and escorted away, she looked back towards Tamaz and saw that he too had been wrestled to the ground and had a black eye. "Uhh... Help me... Anyone..." she squeaked.

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Nine months later
Oak Hill Correctional Facility


"Ugh..." Julia groaned as she slouched on the bed of her cell. Her left hand was latched onto a large bruise on her thigh, while her right hand was poking and prodding at a bloodstained bandage above her right eye.

She sustained those injuries the night before, when an argument had broken out in the cafeteria, which subsequently turned into a full on brawl. Her only participation in the fight was to observe it from a distance, until she was grabbed by another bystander and thrown into the fray. Despite attempts to escape and deescalate the situation, she was seen as a fellow combatant and thrown around like a tantruming toddler's toy.

That morning, fellow detainees were taken from their cells one by one to meet with the warden, her own cellmate included. When her cellmate didn't return, she tried to ask the guards where they were being sent. Her attempts were met with silence, leading her to conclude that they were being moved into a more secure and strict wing of the facility, or possibly thrown into solitary confinement.

"I'm gonna get more charges put over my head, aren't I..." she mumbled. "They don't care who starts fights or who participates in them, do they... Tt! Another ten years onto my sentence, I bet... Just walk me to the damned gallows at this point, I'll tie the damned noose myself..."

Her doomsaying was interrupted by the sound of rapid clanging; she looked up to see one of the guards running his baton against the bars of her cell. The guard peered through the bars and locked eyes with her. "Ms. Clarke, the warden wants to see you."

Her blood ran cold and she slumped over. "I don't want to go. If I'm going to solitary, just take me straight there. I'm sick of getting yelled at for shit I didn't do."

The guard reached for his keyring and slid one of them into the lock. "Whether you want to go or not, you are going. Hands."

She sighed loudly, then pushed herself off of her rock-hard bed and approached the bars. Without instruction, as she'd done it dozens of times by that point, she slid her hands through the porthole and waited for handcuffs to be wrapped around her wrists. In short order, she was released from her cell and started following the guard through the facility.

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"Be on your best behavior, now," the guard said as he reached for the handle and pulled the door open.

"I always am..." she thought as she entered the room. "Not that it ever makes a difference."

Previous visits to the warden's office were tough experiences. The atmosphere was always starkly confrontational, despite the fact that she was powerless in that room -- any yelling she was subjected to couldn't be returned, and any hopelessness inflicted on her was hers alone. The energy that day was much different; it was a welcome change, but one that had her mind working a mile a minute to discredit.

"W-what are you doing here?" she asked as she spotted her legal counsel sitting at the desk.

"Ah, Ms. Clarke! Please, have a seat," the warden said in an uncharacteristically warm tone. "I understand that your lawyer has some good news for you regarding your trial."

She rested her hands on the back of the chair and leaned against it, rather than sitting down. "What's this about? Are they moving the date up?"

The lawyer looked up at her and shook his head. "Even better news. The case against you is being dismissed, and the charges are being dropped."

Despite it being good news, her heart took a dive. It almost sounded too good to be true, and surely was, in her mind. "D-dropped?" she squeaked. "D-dismissed? Am I hearing that correctly?"

"You are. I just got done speaking with the prosecution's team and the judge, and due to a lack of evidence tying you to the crime, he dismissed it with prejudice. You're a free woman!"

The news overwhelmed her. Her grip on the chair was the only thing that initially saved her from a crashing fall as her legs started to quiver, but when her knees buckled next, the chair toppled to the floor alongside her. She groaned with pain as she landed directly onto the bruise that was on her thigh.

"Oh my!" Her lawyer extended his hand out toward her. "Do you need help getting up?"

She let out a deep breath and pushed herself to her knees. "I-I'm okay! Just keep talking, I can hear from down here."

"Pardon my curiosity, but lack of evidence?" the warden asked. "She was in here for nine months, and they didn't even have the god damned evidence to make a solid case against her?"

"Yeah," she interjected. "What fell apart?"

"I dunno how he got his hands on it, but some guy who runs a CGI company up in Ambervale -- who used to work as a forensic analyst for the Crown Intelligence Agency -- got in touch with me. He pointed out several inconsistencies with the video footage they were using as their key evidence. In short, it was fabricated."

"Tt. Of course it was," she barked as she found her way back to her feet again.

The warden shook his head disappointedly. "Falsified evidence? You fuckin' clown court people, I swear. Utterly hopeless. Look at that god damned gash on her forehead! The poor girl got beaten senseless last night because of falsified evidence?!"

The lawyer raised his hands defensively. "Hey, not like I was the one that brought the charges against her."

The warden grumbled, then motioned for her to approach his desk. "Let me get those cuffs off of you, miss. We'll have you sign some legal forms and out the door within the hour. Your mother is already here to take you home. Enjoy the fresh air and the sunshine, Ms. Clarke, and congratulations!"

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- Fixed some wonky grammar
- Fixed some consistency issues with honorifics and other dialogue
 
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Misfit Angel

Bug Catcher
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[ strong language ]

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Chapter 1: Her Name Is Julia

11 months later
City of Azure Ridge, Storm Islands


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"...reports of gang violence near Periwinkle Park overnight... ...represents an alarming rise in..."

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"...defended the title with ease last night, defeating all seven... ...reign as league champion smoothly approaches its unprecedented ninth year..."

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"...go over to George in the weather center... ...another scorcher, with temperatures reaching the triple digits again with no..."

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"Mmm?" a young woman's voice called out from under the covers of her bed.

Beside the door to the bedroom, an older woman was stood there, leaned against the frame. "Just making sure you get up on time, Julia," she said.

"Nnng..." the voice responded as the sheets of the bed began to rumble with movement. "What time is it..."

"Just about 8:30 AM. I wanted to make sure you were up before I left for work. Don't forget, Rickard's supposed to be over in about an hour, right?"

"Mmm. Days run together lately, but I didn't forget," the voice answered, before the person it belonged to emerged from the sheets, her tangled mess of dark brown hair falling over her bare shoulders. "God damn... Trouble sleeping again."

"I bet, between the excitement and the heat," the older woman said. "Hey, good luck today! Hopefully this whole idea of yours works out for you."

"Not gonna try and talk me out of it?" Julia asked.

The older woman chuckled, smirked, then shook her head. "Nah. Now that I'm more familiar with what this contracting stuff is meant to be, and how passionate you are about it, I'm less worried about it all. Especially with someone like Rickard looking out for you. 'sides, I gotta get running, so I couldn't argue it again even if I wanted to." The woman entered the room and approached the bed, then leaned over and kissed Julia on the forehead.

"Ugh, mom!" Julia responded with an embarrassed laugh. "Thanks. I'll be careful today."

"Good. Think you'll be home in time for dinner?"

"Hopefully! I don't anticipate Rickard and I will actually do much today, but... the guy's an unstoppable go-getter, so who knows? If I won't be, I'll call and let you know."

Her mother smiled and nodded, then made her way out of the room. As her mother was halfway down the stairs, her voice called out, "Check the medicine cabinet, by the way! Don't forget your sunscreen today!"

Julia groaned with contentment as she stretched, and threw the covers off of her in a burst of energy. She sat at the edge of her bed and reached for her phone, then checked to see if she'd gotten any messages either overnight, or earlier in the morning; nothing.

Fr: Julia Clarke, 8:27 AM
'Hey, you up yet?'


After a moment of waiting for a reply, she put her phone back down and let out a deep sigh as she thought about the day ahead of her, and the days hopefully behind her. The past few months of her life had been characterized by staying inside and rarely leaving her bedroom, avoiding a society that had seemingly forsaken her. In her own little community -- the quiet suburb of Cerulean Creek, part of the larger Azure Ridge Metropolitan Area -- it seemed like no one trusted her; people would stare when she walked by or talk quietly amongst themselves, most likely about her. The treatment she received often made her wish she was invisible -- if people simply ignored her, that would be a lot more tolerable.

The source of her poor reputation in her neighborhood was without a doubt the legal trouble she found herself in nearly two years ago. At the time, she worked as a clerk at a high end fashion boutique and jewelry shop in downtown Azure Ridge, and by all means was an excellent worker -- always on time, helpful to customers, knew where everything was. Her boss had taken a shine to her and was talking about promoting her to a low level managerial role...

...And then one day, she was arrested on suspicion of participating in a nighttime heist that saw display cases smashed and looted, the office ransacked and the safe emptied and destroyed. The next nine months of her life were a hard-fought legal battle in which she was facing a lengthy prison sentence -- potentially 35 years -- for a crime she knew she didn't commit. In the end, the charges against her were dropped; the initial trial ended with a hung jury due to inconsistencies in how some of the evidence related to the crime, and the second trial ended abruptly when it was discovered that some of the evidence used to initially bring the charges against her had been fabricated. Though her name had been cleared, her reputation had been dragged through broken glass and never recovered. The worst part was that despite the charges being dropped, they remained on her criminal record.

She found it hard to participate in society afterward. Within days of the trial ending, her bank account had been forcibly closed due to piling up fees, and she was forced to move back in with her parents. Rumors about her swirled in the neighborhood, with many starting to feel like she was a leech who escaped justice and ran home to cling to the charity of her parents. Because she was still technically a criminal according to official records, it was difficult for her to find a job, and when she did, it rarely lasted long. Eventually, she gave up and withdrew into the isolation she currently found herself in. Why bother contributing to a community that seemed to despise her?

Eventually, an old friend from high school reached out after hearing about everything that had happened -- Rickard Karstensen, a famous pokémon trainer who had spent the past few years making a name for himself abroad. She was completely shocked to see that someone she hadn't spoken to since their school years -- and had become famous since then -- was actually taking the time out of his busy and successful life to speak to a deadbeat woman about the drama that had destroyed her own, and then went a step further by taking her word for it. She wondered if he had an ulterior motive of some sort, but was pleasantly surprised when he started talking to her about taking back control of her life by becoming a pokémon contractor, rather than taking her side at his place as some sort of corroded trophy wife.

At the time, she'd never heard of the concept of pokémon contractors, though quickly learned what they were; contractors were similar to trainers, but rather than building teams and training them to challenge various Leagues across the world, contractors instead built teams aimed at solving practical problems, and then sold their services to non-trainers. Contractors filled a small but important role in society, allowing people who didn't or couldn't own pokémon the means to access the more useful qualities of the creatures, without navigating the tricky legal morass of ownership or the hassles and responsibilities of training them. It instantly clicked in her head when Rickard likened it to renting landscaping equipment: it's cheaper to rent an excavator than own one, especially if you don't need one often enough to justify the purchase.

The idea appealed to her, but she wondered if it was even worth the effort; she cited her experiences around town with people not trusting her, and reasoned that would carry over toward her attempts to start a career as a contractor. Perhaps that would be the case, he admitted, but he theorized that doing honest work for people willing to give her a chance might be the thing to finally turn her reputation around. It was difficult at first, but a glimmer of optimism had entered her mind for the first time in over a year, and she was willing to nurture it.

On top of that, and more importantly in her mind, becoming a contractor would help solve her largest problem: it would enable her to be her own boss. She had only just turned 23 years old, but she already found herself to be completely jaded by the life of a working-class adult -- overworked, underpaid, and liable to be either replaced at a moment's notice, or thrown in front of an oncoming train when things go badly. To leave that all behind and find her own way in the world was a potential dream come true. If she still struggled to fit into a society that refused to give her a chance at redemption, she could earn enough money to at least leave the city and its bad vibes behind.

Being a pokémon contractor wasn't without its risks, however, and she realized she would be living rough if she made a serious effort at it. But that trade-off was well worth it, as it could give her the one thing that all of the minimum wage jobs in the city couldn't afford her: the freedom to make her own choices, live on her own schedule, and make up the rules as she went. Sure, she only ever led a stable life beforehand, where her basic necessities were covered by a paycheck, earned in a structured environment as part of a team working towards a common goal, but...

"Figuring things out truly independently can't be that hard, can it? Less fortunate, less educated people than myself figured it out centuries ago. Surely I can, too."

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Fully dressed after her quick shower, Julia stepped in front of her mirror and examined herself closely. "Ahh... Am I showing too much skin?" she idly mused as she tugged at the tight, black fabric of her tanktop -- already clinging uncomfortably to her in the humid air -- and then ran her hand down her hip towards the bottom of her orange plaid knee skirt. "It's supposed to be really hot today, but I don't want him to think I'm some sort of floozy now... I'm dressing a lot differently than he'll remember..." What concerned her the most was the plunging neckline of her top, and as she ran her finger along it, she shook her head.

She dug through her wardrobe for something more modest to wear -- perhaps a button shirt to cover up her exposed shoulders and chest, and long socks to cover up her legs, but she couldn't find anything comfortable. All she could see was heat. With the thermometer hanging on her window already reading 93°F before 9:00 AM and the forecast calling for temperatures in the triple digits, she needed to avoid that heat, especially if their planned trek through the Queen's Summer Gardens was going to happen.

"At least I'll be protected from the sun a little bit..." she said as she grabbed a loose-fitting black polo shirt and rushed it on. She examined herself in the mirror again and nodded approvingly. "Right, now what am I gonna need to bring with me today..."

She wasn't sure what to expect about the upcoming day. Her and Rickard had spent the past week planning things out for his visit: they'd meet up at her home, grab breakfast together and then head to the Summer Gardens to hunt down her first pokémon. But she also remembered what he was like when she latched onto his friend group in high school, memories characterized by him making the decisions for everyone, and then struggling to keep things on track as distractions popped up.

"Has that changed at all? Should I expect him to be as scatterbrained as I remember?" she wondered. "The guy's a professional trainer now, surely he's more focused these days?"

She grabbed a notebook off of her dresser and had a quick look through one of the dog-eared pages. Various ideas for the day were found on that page, including a comprehensive list of pokémon species that were commonly spotted in and around the Summer Gardens, the basics of ensuring a successful capture, as well as the dos and don'ts of a first time trainer. She quickly looked through each bit of information, then slowed down to re-read what she'd written about the pokémon she expected to find at the Summer Gardens. The list was nearly 30 entries long, but she narrowed down her hopes to just four potential favorites:

"Emberwing, the Flame pokémon. #15 on the Storm Islands National Register. Fire and Flying dual type."

"Maybe I'm expecting too much by starting out with something that's already an evolved form, but I've been doing some reading on its predecessor (Flarefeather) and it looks like people consider it unreliable and weak. Maybe that's just the opinions of competitive trainers, tho? Might work for me, but I'll see what Rickard thinks. At the very least, its ability to fly would be extremely useful as a sort of scout, to help search for things. Missing children jobs, yeah?"


Another favorite was one she picked more for practical purposes than anything else:

"Stormlands Morevitikha, the Ghillie Goat pokémon. #34 on the Storm Islands National Register. Grass and Ground dual type."

"What an adorable little bugger! Supposedly they're not the best in a fight due to their skittish nature, but once they get used to their trainers or their surroundings, they pack incredible power if trained properly. I dunno if I could do it properly enough to unlock a Morevitikha's full potential, but at the very least, one would make a useful companion as a beast of burden -- supposedly that's what they were initially domesticated for, thousands of years ago in the Javikhetta mountains. I'm sure I'll be able to find work as some sort of courier, and that's where this guy will shine! And if I get too tired to carry on, which let's admit, I will, I can rely on one of these to carry me across the finish line!"


Next up on her wishlist was her personal favorite, and the one she wanted the most:

"Avalynx, the Glacier Cat pokémon. #81 on the Storm Islands National Register. Ice and Dark dual type."

"This guy looks great. Looks cool, sounds cool, literally is cool (to the touch)! He'd make a great snuggle buddy during the summer months, especially here in the Storm Islands. My only worry is that I've been reading trainer opinions on pokémon that don't evolve -- which includes Avalynx -- and many discount them for what tends to be middle-of-the-road strengths. Those that evolve tend to be among the strongest and most capable, but is that something a casual like me should worry about? As far as usefulness in terms of contract work, hmm..."


The final one that caught her attention during her research was a strange creature known as Boltoad:

"Boltoad, the Ampedphibian pokémon. #77 on the Storm Islands National Register. Water and Electric dual type."

"Boltoad is an odd one, but a cool one. The thing has a massive electrified tongue! I dunno exactly what kind of work I should expect as a contractor, but this thing's crowd control abilities might come in very handy -- not only can it restrict targets with its massive tongue, it can also create electrical fields to paralyze anything I get into a fight with. Could be handy to have, especially if I start taking on hunting work?"


"Hopefully I can get one of these guys... It'll be kind of a disappointing start to my career if I get stuck with something I didn't plan on..." she mused as she closed the notebook and reached for her phone again. Having not had her message returned by Rickard, she grew a little concerned. "What is taking this doof so long to respond? Maybe he got held up hanging out with his dad or something... Guess it has been a while since they've seen each other."

She slid her phone into her purse and wrapped it around her shoulder, then headed for the door; if he wasn't going to come to her in a timely manner, she was going to pay him a visit instead.

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The weather outside was dreadful for such an early morning; the temperature was boiling hot and the sun blasted down through the cloudless sky. The only reprieve from the early summer scorcher was the strong breeze blowing in off of the Atalacian Ocean, mighty enough to sway the coconut palms dotting the smoothly sloped cliffs that led towards the beach.

"Ugh..." Julia groaned as she tried to shield her eyes from the sun with her hand. "Is it just me, or has the sun gotten brighter over the past year..?"

Her journey towards Rickard's house took her down towards and across the famed Azure Ridge Boardwalk, a neighborhood filled with ritzy hotels, fancy restaurants, old fashioned arcades and high end shops -- one of which was her former workplace: Jedediah's Jewelry and Gemcutting. She stopped for a brief moment and looked through the window, and found that little had changed in the two years since she had worked there; the staff on site were the same, and the display cases that were smashed and looted shortly after she left on that final day were repaired, filled with what looked like the same overpriced crap that had gotten her arrested. She shook her head and continued along, and before long, she'd reached the end of the boardwalk, heading down a set of stairs that led to a row of homes along the waterfront.

"It was the second one after the stairs, right?" she wondered aloud as she tried to remember the one and only time that she'd visited Rickard's house during her school years. "...Assuming his dad still lives on the beach... probably should have looked into that first, heh."

As she approached, she watched a pair of men emerge from the far side of the second house, carrying a large picnic table across the lawn. She felt something primal in her activate for a split second as she observed the difference between the older and the younger of the pair, the younger lifting with ease and the older one struggling to maintain his grip and his breath.

"Holy shit..." she muttered to herself as she stopped and leaned against the fence. "Is that what Rickard looks like these days? Dude's huge!"

"...and nice and easy! Down we go," Rickard said as he gently lowered the picnic table down onto the grass. "Got anything else that needs moving?"

The older of the two paced around in distress, trying to catch his breath. "I do, but maybe... we can tackle that some other time."

Rickard nodded, then placed his left hand to his right shoulder and swung his arm around in a circle. "I'll be home for a few weeks, there will be time."

The older of the two collapsed onto the seat of the picnic table, almost losing his balance during his careless descent. "I know I'm getting older, but god damn, I am outta shape... Definitely wouldn't pass the physical test to keep my job... Your mom would be so disappointed in me."

"Nah, she'd be proud. You kept me headed in the right direc..." Rickard said before staring off into the distance -- straight in Julia's direction. He lifted his arm and waved towards her. "Ey, Jules! Mornin'!"

"Morning," she replied, pushing herself away from the fence and towards the gate to the property. "What happened to you?" she asked, eyeing him up and down. "I almost didn't recognize you! You used to be so scrawny..."

"Heh," he bleated as he quickly examined his muscled arms, glistening in the morning sunlight. "Turns out you get in shape pretty quick when you run laps around the Kingdom of Lanark. Swimming across rivers, climbing mountains, scampering through thick forests and spelunking through caves..."

She couldn't help herself and reached out towards his bare arm, giving it a gentle squeeze. "Wow... To think I once beat you in an arm wrestling contest..."

Mr. Karstensen snickered from his seat at the picnic table. "Think she's in love, Rick. Look at the hunger in her eyes! Good to see you out and about again, Julia!"

She broke her attention away from his physical attributes and cleared her throat. "I tried getting in touch with you, but you weren't answering. Figured I'd come and see if you made it to town safely."

"Ahh, yeah..." He reached into his pocket and pulled his phone out, then waggled it around fruitlessly. "Kinda skipped my mind that I'd need a local SIM card to connect to the Islands' networks. So much is similar between the Storm Islands and Lanark that I kinda forgot I was in a foreign country the whole time. I was gonna pop on over to a convenience store on my way to your place, get that sorted out."

"Pop on over? Sort it out?" she repeated. "You've gone native while you were in Lanark, haven't you?"

"Oi, none of that poppycock, love!" he said, putting on his best worst Southwest Glastonian accent.

She giggled. "You could have at least called on your dad's landline."

"Oh yeah, landline phones still exist..." He turned to address his father. "You mind if I take off now?"

Mr. Karstensen dismissed the two with a hand gesture. "By all means, catch up with your friend. I appreciate the help getting this thing moved up here."

"I'll be back soon, then, dad," he said with a courteous head nod, before leading Julia back towards the boardwalk. As he did so, he untied the shirt that had been wrapped around his waist and slipped it on over his tanktop. "Sorry about that. I was gonna have him send you a message saying I couldn't contact you, but it slipped my mind -- he threw me quite the welcome home party last night."

She looked back as Mr. Karstensen pushed himself to his feet and towards the house. "Is that why he looks hung over?"

"Eeeeyup," he said nervously, before eyeing her up in a similar manner that she did for him. "Still wanna head to the Summer Gardens?"

"That was the plan," she quipped.

"Awesome, just confirming. That outfit -- man, it's actually cute! I thought I'd never see you in a skirt, you were always so loudly opposed to them."

She smiled. "Thank you. I've been making an effort at dressing more girly... Got sick of people calling me sir all the damn time."

"Oh yeah? Not doing the androgynous femboy thing anymore?" he asked, before his attention shifted from her legs to her face. "Guess that explains the longer hair. And the makeup, too."

Her smile faded. "I was a tomboy!" she barked.

"There's a difference?"

She glared at him and sighed. "Yes. We talked about this -- I've moved on from all of that."

His jovial nature faded somewhat and he raised his hands in a defensive manner. "Jules! I'm just messin' with ya!"

It bothered her more than she let on; though she never thought of herself as ugly, she also thought that she was never blessed with the natural beauty that she felt she should have, and figured it was one of the major sources of bullying she went through as she was growing up. In elementary school, she was teased for her boyish hobbies and love of martial arts movies -- a love owed mostly to growing up with three older brothers; in middle school, the bullying centered around her cutting her hair short to mimic popular overseas styles; finally, in high school, she tended to dress in long and loose clothing to cover up her lack of a distinctly feminine frame, evidently a massive crime amongst her fellow students, and one that earned her the nickname of 'Mr. Clarke, karate kicker'.

Her head shook and her voice quivered. "I just said I was sick of it, and your first instinct is to joke about it?"

"N-no! Uhh, well, mmm..." he sheepishly bleated.

"Please don't. This is a sore point for me."

He bowed his head in respect. "I am so sorry. Gotcha, loud and clear! I didn't realize you were completely dropping the 'is she a he, is he a she?' routine, or how much it bothered you, or that there's even a difference between tomboys and femboys. Won't happen again, ma'am."

"Thank you. And it's Julia, by the way. Sick of Jules."

He chuckled nervously in an attempt to disarm the tense atmosphere. "The point I was originally trying to make is... Well, that outfit isn't the best for a hike. And you look a little light on preparation for a day out."

She crossed her arms and looked off to the side. "Yeah, well, I've got nothing to spend, so..."

"Yeah, I know. I'm not judging. If you need me to, I'll be your sugar daddy while I'm home."

His joking indeed did lower the tension and she burst out laughing. "Oh my god! Don't word it like that! What is wrong with you?!"

"Heh heh."

"Still got that class clown sense of humor, huh..." she muttered. "You couldn't be my sugar daddy even if you wanted to. I'm older than you, remember?"

"Yeah, yeah. Six days! Doesn't count!"

She unfolded her arms and nodded. "If you wouldn't mind, that would be very much appreciated. Kinda hard to get started on this contractor business if I can't even afford a pokéball for my first capture."

"Leave it to me," he said, matter-of-factly. "We'll drop by Outdoor Outfitters before we head to the park, I'll get you sorted with what you're gonna need."

"Thanks."

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Nearly twenty minutes had passed by since they arrived at Outdoor Outfitters, time spent mostly apart -- Rickard had been focused on the practical aspect of her upcoming career, while Julia found herself instantly magnetized to the apparel section of the store. Fashion had been a hobby of hers since she graduated, but one that was cruelly denied to her during the financial struggles of the previous two years. She didn't expect to buy anything, but just looking was enough to raise her spirits.

She was in the middle of browsing through a selection of spaghetti-strap camisoles, building several color-coordinated outfits in her mind, when Rickard's voice called out from the end of the aisle. "'Ey, there you are! Was worried I lost ya, heh."

"Just looking through some clothes, that's all... Don't get to do that much these days."

"Perfect, because look at what I found," He approached with a visor spinning around his finger, its orange rim immediately catching her eye. As he stopped beside her, he lowered the visor towards her waist. "Look at that! Almost a perfect match with what you're wearing!"

She grabbed it and held it up to her leg, then smiled. "Yeah, that's pretty close! I've been trying to find matching clothing for this skirt since I got it..." She handed the visor back to him. "Hats aren't really my style though, ya know? I love my ponytails too much."

He refused the visor. "I wanna get it for you, even if you don't think it's your style. I saw how much you were struggling with the sunlight on the walk over, this thing'll be a lifesaver while you're out on the road. Trust me."

She looked down at the visor again. "You think?"

"I know," he said as he adjusted the rim on his own ball cap. "I think I'd have gone blind if I didn't pick this hat up. Besides, visors are perfect if you still wanna wear a ponytail, they don't cover your hair!"

She undid the strap and wrapped it around her head, then grabbed her phone to have a look at herself in the camera. "Mmm... I still dunno if I like it, but... You've got a point about the sunlight. The walk to your house this morning was pretty brutal."

"You didn't leave your room much over this past year, did you?"

"I guess not..."

He gently jabbed his elbow into her side. "Vampiiiiire!"

"Shut up, that was just a phase!" she protested as she pulled off the visor and carried it along with her. "Okay, so... Pokéballs, a water bottle, purification tablets, a visor... What's next on the shopping list?"

He pointed down at her feet. "What about those shoes? They comfortable? Reliable?"

She kicked her left foot out, showing off her pastel yellow canvas shoes, which were stained with splashes of mud and starting to fray along the heels. "Comfortable? Yes. Reliable? I dunno. I haven't done much hiking since high school, so I couldn't tell you."

"Wanna look at some boots, then?"

"Are you sure?"

"Remember, I'm the expert here."

She looked around and then spread her arms with a shrug. "Lead the way. I'll observe and learn."

"Pick out what you like, and we'll compare it with my suggestion."

He briskly led her across the shop towards the footwear section and let her run wild. She wasn't even sure where to begin; what would she actually need? He suggested a pair of boots, but every pair of boots she'd worn since her early school days tended to outstay their welcome and become disturbingly uncomfortable after an hour or so. She loved her current canvas shoes and was tempted to get a replacement pair in a different color, but recalled how useless they were at keeping her feet dry on rainy days. She started browsing through the sneakers section, thinking they'd be a fair compromise between practicality and comfort. Before she even got started comparing styles and colors, she saw Rickard round the corner and start walking down the aisle with a box in his hands.

"Damn, found something already?" she asked.

"Mhmm. Think you'll like 'em."

"How are you so fast at finding this stuff?" she asked as she accepted the box from him.

"Experience. I'm always in these kinds of shops looking for new stuff. Helps that they've got Outdoor Outfitters branches overseas, and most of them have the same layout."

She opened the box and her face lit up as she looked the pair of boots inside over. Yet again, he found something that matched her current wardrobe, a black pair of combat boots that looked as if they'd extend up to either her shins or knees. The most striking feature on them were the bright orange soles, as well as the matching laces. "Where have you been the past few years?"

"Sitting on this shelf, probably," he answered.

"No. You. Do you know how difficult it is to find black and orange clothing? And now you find two matching pieces within ten minutes of each other?"

He shook his head as he closed the box on the boots and offered it to her. "Mmm. Can't say I understand that difficulty, black and orange aren't really my thing. Though I guess I haven't really seen those two colors together very often, now that I think about it."

She angled the top of the box open again and squealed with delight. "Black, orange and in my size!"

"If you get this excited over matching clothes, I can't wait to see the look on your face when you get your starter!"

"Think they'll be comfortable? I've never had good luck with big boots like this..."

"Absolutely," he said, lifting his leg and wiggling his foot. "I've got the same brand, Airwalkers. They're amazing -- a little on the expensive side, but I'm happy to pay that for you."

She rotated the box and caught a glance of the price sticker: 3 golden and 20 silver dragons. "HOLY F--! Are you sure?"

"Absolutely. A drop in the bucket."

"How rich has this guy gotten since we were in school?" She shook her head lightly, then opened the box yet again to gawk at them. "Th-thank you!"

"Ya know... It's so good to see this. I didn't know you so well back in high school, but you always felt so... so reserved. I didn't really see much emotion out of you, but now that it's coming out? It's a good look for you."

She closed the lid again and looked down bashfully. "Was never really... ya know, comfortable with that many people. I enjoyed being a part of your little gang, but it was definitely overstimulation, to the max. All the time."

"Fair enough! We were a bunch of rabble-rousing cavemen, weren't we?" he asked before nodding, then started looking at the department signs that hung from the ceiling. "Right. You're gonna need something bigger than that purse if you want to take this job seriously."

She furrowed her brow and thought about it. "Will I? Even if I just take odd jobs around the city?"

"Didn't you say you wanted to move on from Azure Ridge? Maybe get a fresh start somewhere where people don't know your name? Your past?"

She paused for a moment before letting out a sigh. "I guess I did. I'm a little afraid of leaving my comfort zone, but --"

"Leaving that comfort zone is pretty essential to this job," he interrupted, grabbing her by the wrist and pulling her towards a different section of the shop. "Remember, you're not doing this alone. I'll hold your hand while you get used to all of this, okay?"

She was a little put off by how much of a bulldozer he was being, but at the end of the day, she trusted him. Of all of the people she knew, he was certainly the most qualified to guide her into her new career; it had been three years since he started his own career as a competitive trainer, and in that time, he'd earned ten badges across the Kingdom of Lanark, seven from the bordering Kingdom of Glastonfell, as well as two each from the Republic of Groenvelden and its neighboring Duchy of Aldaine.

Based on the books she'd read as she prepared to get her start as a trainer herself, she knew a bit about the subject: most trainers who set out with the goal of challenging a regional league only get their first badge after perhaps ten to twelve months of effort and dedication, and less than a quarter actually earn the traditional eight badges required to issue a challenge of the regional elites. It was still all a little bit esoteric for her casual understanding, but it felt quite remarkable that he'd earned as many of them as he did, in as short of a time span as he did. She wondered why he never made an official challenge of Lanark's Rose League, but she got the inkling that he wasn't interested in glory -- he seemed too far down to earth for that.

All said and done, when they were finally finished gearing up for the day ahead of them, as well as the career ahead of Julia, they walked out with a backpack, her matching boots and visor, as well as a heaving helping of travel and trainer supplies -- a bedroll for unplanned nights in the wilderness, a dozen pokéballs to get her started, various forms of medicine for taking care of her future pokémon's ailments, bug spray to keep her most-hated variety of pokémon at bay, a coil of rope to aid in climbing and tying things down, a HyperLiteEX lantern for lighting her way in dim environments, as well as a hunting knife for survival emergencies. She almost felt as if she were being equipped to enter a warzone, but understood the practical nature of every thing he'd gotten for her.

"Sometimes the wilderness is a warzone. Always be prepared, and thankful when you don't need to be. Anyways, should we finally get started?"

She was utterly gobsmacked at his generosity, especially towards someone he only really knew as an acquaintance from years ago. It almost felt alien to her -- were people really capable of that level of kindness? She'd only ever experienced that from her parents, but to see others capable of it warmed her heart.

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Chapter 2: In The Garden Of Eden New

Misfit Angel

Bug Catcher
Pronouns
feminine
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[ strong language ] :: [ mild suggestive content ]

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Yes, this chapter title is a reference.

Chapter 2: In The Garden Of Eden

The Queen's Summer Gardens, the pair's destination for the day, were a public access park adjacent to the private residence of the Queen of the Storm Islands, Queen Eden Stormborne. Despite not being part of the Queen's property, it certainly seemed like it was -- it was a plot of land characterized by idyllic trails through fields of wildflowers, curated gardens filled with exotic flowers and masterfully trimmed topiaries, and speckled with dozens of varieties of flowering trees that reached full bloom during the transition from late spring to early summer. The gardens were famous among trainers from across the isles as a one-stop-shop for an unusually large variety of pokémon species to hunt for -- it was so lucky for Julia to live less than a mile away from these bountiful fields and forests!

"So, what exactly are you looking for?" Rickard asked as he studied a lengthy list of species that were known to share territory within the park grounds. "Looking for something cute and fluffy?"

"Cute and fluffy is welcome, but not what I'm after today. I want something reliable for taking on contracts, rather than just an expensive mouth to feed."

He laughed. "You'd be surprised at how reliable some of the cute and fluffy ones are. The biggest surprise for me was Wooloo -- fluff incarnate, but it packs a surprising amount of power under that fleece. The gym leader at the Caelton Henge over in Lanark has one that completely destroyed me a few months back!"

"Really?" she asked, focused on the wilderness around her rather than what he was saying.

"Yeah. Really brutal combo, actually, and one I picked up after being hit with it: the gym leader adapted a technique known as Bide and combined it with the Rollout attack. I didn't even think it was possible, but that allowed it to just soak up hit after hit after hit, and by the time it was ready to attack, it just started smashing my team down like a wrecking ball. I haven't perfected it myself, but I've been utilizing it lately and it's been pretty effective against difficult opponents. Very high risk, but very high reward type of combo. Lesson being: don't discount the cute and fluffy ones, they can still ruin your day."

She blinked. "I understood... maybe ten percent of that."

He burst out in laughter. "If I ever start going over your head, please, let me know! Questions are welcome."

"I'll be asking a lot, no doubt," she said, reaching into her purse for her notebook. As she flipped through the pages, she continued, "I've got a short list of things I'm looking for, narrowed down to a list of four top picks." She stopped flipping pages and handed the notebook over. "What are your thoughts on these ones?"

"Hell yeah, she did her homework! For once in her life."

"Shut up, smartass. Not like you ever did it, either."

"Heh heh heh!" He accepted the notebook and studied it voraciously. "Mmm. Mmm! Good list so far!"

"So far?" she asked. "Was I supposed to put more on there? I do have more on the next few pages, but haven't really written down much other than names."

He shook his head, then smirked. "I'm gonna go back overseas by the end of the month, and when I eventually return, I expect to see that you've captured every one that you've written down on this list, and more!"

She shook her head lightly. "Rick, I'm not becoming an abusive competitive trainer, or some unhinged and neglectful collector. I'm only going to grab what my various jobs require."

"Heh, fair," he said, looking back down at the list. "So. Emberwing, huh? That might be a little bit difficult to start with, but I like your ambition."

She nodded. "Thought so, but I had a look at its pre-evolved form -- Flarefeather -- and I wasn't too impressed with professional trainers' opinions on it. Slow, weak and surprisingly lacking in fire-based capability, despite its name."

"Flarefeather was actually one of my first catches. Third one, I believe, and those assessments have been correct in my experience. My own Flarefeather was difficult to train properly because it struggled so much in battle. I was kind of hoping it was one of those diamond-in-the-rough types that get a big power boost when evolving, but sadly not. Even with consistent training, I've found that Emberwing just struggles to compare with other, easier to raise pokémon."

She crossed her arms. "Hmm. So, cross it off the list?"

"Well... I'd put it low on the list. Emberwing still has its charms -- especially if you like birdsong. It sings a beautiful song when it's happy and excited!"

"Not exactly useful..."

"Not the most, no," he replied before moving down the list. "Morevitikha? The Stormlands breed, specifically? Solid choice, if you ask me."

Her face lit up at his appraisal. "Yeah?"

"Your assessment here is very spot on -- there's a bit of training required to unlock their potential, but once you do, they're solidly reliable for just about anything you can throw at them. Well, except things that require flying, heh," he said, continuing to read further. "You're right about them being useful as beasts of burden, and I definitely bet they'd come in handy if you had a proper saddle to put on one."

"Not gonna lie, that was the biggest part of why I gave it a look. I imagine it'll be kind of a struggle at first to walk the long distances I'll probably have to, so riding one would help me get more done in a quicker time, right?"

He nodded. "Just keep in mind that pokémon have their limits, too. If you were to ride a Morevitikha around everywhere, it'll just get tired and wouldn't be in top form for when you need it for a battle, or whatever else your job might require."

"Oh... Yeah, good point..."

"Do you still skate? Might be worth riding around on your board while you're in the city instead."

She shook her head. "It's been a while... One of the wheels snapped off a few months ago... I tried getting starting as a professional skateboarder, actually. I was in the middle of filming a demo reel when I tried a nosegrind at the shopping center downtown, and I must have smacked the wheel hard on the curb -- sucker came right off and sent me flying into some hedges."

"Yikes!" he exclaimed, before smirking. "Still got that clip?"

She glared at him. "I do, and I'm not about to show it to you! But yeah, I don't ride it anymore. I couldn't afford to get it fixed. Such a shame, I loved that board..."

"Ah, bummer. Want a hand with that?"

She shook her head. "I dunno how useful it'd be, I'll be out in the wilderness a lot, won't I?"

"As a contractor, you'll probably spend a majority of your time in cities, actually. A skateboard would certainly be useful for getting around while conserving the energy of your pokémon."

She nodded. "Maybe that'll be what I spend my first earnings on, getting that thing fixed up. Or buying a new one."

"You sure?" he asked, returning his attention to her notebook.

"Yeah. I appreciate the offer, but you've already been so generous. I don't want to rely on help too much, you know?"

"Gotcha, I respect that," he said with a nod. "Next on your list is Avalynx, right?"

"Think so."

He shook his head fervently. "Absolutely not."

"Oh?" she asked, slightly deflating. "Why is that?"

His attention broke away from the notebook as he looked around. "Well... Are you sure we can even find them around here? They like cold climates, right?"

She answered with a nod, "They do, but one's been spotted here in the Gardens as recently as last week."

"Hmm. One. Sounds like a bit of a wild goose chase if you ask me," he said, before shaking his head again. "Still, it's not gonna happen. They're vicious and notoriously difficult to train. Without a doubt, you'd just get yourself killed trying to train one, especially as your first."

"O-oh. I guess... Oh. Good point?"

He snickered. "You've definitely got the heart of a competitive trainer in you if Avalynx caught your eye, but you definitely don't have the experience to make it work. They're... They're great! Just not --"

"Okay, okay, I get it. I'm not ready to even try it."

"Don't mean to be a downer, but it's my job to make sure you start this career off safely."

"Crossed off the list, then," she said with a sigh. "They look so coooooool though..."

"Heh," He looked back down towards her bubbly handwriting again. "Boltoad, huh? I'm not too familiar with that one, actually. What about it caught your eye?"

"Well, I've written a little about it, but I can go more in depth if you like. But let me ask a question, first."

"Hit me with it."

"How valuable would you say stunning an opponent is in battle?"

He smiled. "Super valuable. I guess that's Boltoad's specialty?"

"Crowd control in general is -- it's got an electrified tongue that can strike targets, oh..." She paused to take a second to look around, taking note of a tree about 15 feet away from them. "From here to that tree?"

"Wow, impressive range. And electrified? So this thing is capable of long range stunning attacks?"

She nodded happily. "Yep! And not just with its tongue, which can also be used to restrict people and pokémon quite effectively. It's been known to create electrical fields from afar, too, that it uses to stun opponents so that it can close the gap and get into range."

"Impressive... I'm gonna have to get one of them for myself before I head back overseas."

"I'll be honest, they're kinda gross, but they sound almost essential for a contractor. They've got just too much utility to pass up, regardless of what kind of job I take on. Hunting to capture something for someone? Check. Trying to grab something that's out of reach? Check. Even bounty hunting? Check."

He grimaced at the thought. "I wouldn't get into bounty hunting until you're supremely confident in yourself. That's dangerous stuff."

"Believe me, I know. Lord knows our dads tell us enough stories about their police work to scare me away from doing it myself, heh. But in the far future, maybe that's an option. It pays very well."

He nodded silently. "So we're narrowed down to two, then? Morevitikha and Boltoad?"

"Flip the page. Those four I listed were my favorite picks, but I also have others I wanted to look at in case none of those worked out."

He turned the page and started to read from her list of runners up: "Ooh, interesting! Stormlands Vulpix? Rhyhorn, not bad, but maybe a little difficult to start with... Speckled Southwinds Exeggcute? Oh, right, those ones evolve into that tall ass version of Exeggutor, good choice! Sandile... Mmm, seems kinda dangerous, and I don't think we'd find them here in the Summer Gardens... Skarmory? Interesting, but... A bit advanced for someone just starting out. Hmm... Hey look, a cute one, Pachirisu! I knew you had it in you! I'll keep an eye out for that one... But between it and Boltoad, I think Boltoad would offer more utility."

"Figured."

After another moment of further study, he closed and offered the notebook back. "Well, how about we just get started and see what pops up?"

She nodded, unfolded her arms and vaguely gestured in two different directions. "Lead the way!"

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Their time together in the Summer Gardens felt like it was less about catching Julia's first pokémon and more about catching up on each other's lives since they last saw each other, at their graduation ceremony five years prior. Though she enjoyed the attention and his seemingly genuine interest in her life, she started to feel like he was more interested in learning about the woman she grew into, rather than interested in helping to get her career started; he asked all sorts of questions about the jobs she struggled to maintain and seemed to revel in the almost pointless details she gave, and seemed deeply interested in her social life -- or rather lack of one. Though the subject of having someone special in her life never explicitly came up, she reasoned he'd heard enough tangential details to put together that she was single.

"Were my initial fears about this guy right? Does he have some sort of ulterior motive with me?" she wondered as he dug into her life, and rarely gave her an opportunity to do her own digging into his. "Or is... is this what it's like to finally meet someone who's just interested in people beside themselves? I really can't tell anymore..."

As they crossed the flower-choked meadow towards the northern foothills, they focused less on each other and more on the environment around them -- the meadow was awash in wildlife, from Lesser Lampchaser Butterfrees congregating amongst the flowers to Blacktail Bunearies dashing in and out of the protection of the tall grass, as well the odd Vernal Deerling cautiously poking its head up from the field.

Rickard stopped in his tracks and held his hand out at chest height to block her movement, then pointed towards the tree line. "Hey, how about that one over there?" he asked. "The big, tall and handsome dude."

She at first started looking for a person, but realized he was probably talking about a pokémon. It took her a brief moment to find it camouflaged against the pale bark of the Elizabethan Elderleaf trees around it, but she eventually spotted the blonde and tan striped creature that was stretched out atop a fence that marked the meadow's edge. "What, that Furret?"

"Yeah."

A shrug followed. "What about it?"

"What are your thoughts on that one?"

"Uhh. Don't know much about them, to be honest. I dunno if they're really my style, though. Or reliable."

"You've got your head set on reliability, which is good, but don't seem to have any understanding of what reliability means. It might come as a surprise, but about 95% of all pokémon are reliable in some form. Furret's definitely reliable in terms of foraging for food while out in the wild -- it's got an excellent sense of smell, and its great at climbing trees to grab things like fruit and nuts."

"Is that so? I guess it makes sense," she admitted, continuing to study the sleeping Furret.

He reached for his belt and grabbed a blue-topped pokéball that was decorated with sparkly scales. "Maybe this will be a good example... Picked him up pretty early in my travels." He pressed the button on it, then gently tossed the Net Ball up into the air; with a loud bang and a cloud of windswept bubbles, a small brown creature with massive front teeth dropped to the ground and started sniffing around at its new surroundings.

She shyly inched away from the diminutive creature as it made a beeline for her ankle and continued its dog-like snuffling. "A Bidoof, huh? I did some reading on them, nobody takes them seriously."

"And for good reason -- I took this guy into several dozen battles before I finally gave up on him as a fighter. He only won one of them, and just barely. Against a Caterpie."

"Ha, poor guy. Sounds about right. But you've obviously kept him around for a reason... Hmm..." she said as she knelt down and gingerly extended her hand. As the Bidoof lifted its head to inspect her fingers, she took note of its sharp front teeth. "I'm gonna guess that he helps you set up camp?"

"Bingo. He's great for gathering firewood if I have to camp out in the wilderness for an extended period of time. He may not be a great battler, but he's an invaluable member of my team, and not just for chopping through wood -- he packs some surprising physical strength and is able to move large objects for me, as well as clear rubble from landslides when we're up in mountain valleys. Not to mention his natural swimming capability, which makes him an excellent fish-wrangler."

"Hold up, this guy can move heavy objects, showcasing his strength, reduce rocks to gravel, which should be effective against a large portion of hard-bodied pokémon, and cut down trees, which should make mincemeat of the hundreds of plant pokémon you come across, yet he can't win battles?"

He shrugged and spread his hands, then grabbed his pokéball and recalled the Bidoof. "I don't get it either, but I still love him. Point being, he's reliable in a different way than novice trainers focus on."

She nodded, taking his expertise seriously. "I'll keep that in mind. Maybe I've got a little to learn about what reliability actually means, but... I dunno. I think I'll pass on Furret. Maybe in another life I might have found that one interesting." She looked back at the fence the Furret had been sleeping on and found that it had disappeared. "Doesn't matter, anyways. Seems we spooked it away."

He started following the trail again. "So which way do you wanna go? The trail splits up there at that magnolia tree, looks like. We heading into the wetlands, or up into the hills?"

"Hills first, I think," she said. "I'd rather get them out of the way first -- I don't wanna tire myself out and then have to climb up them."

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The dark tones of the grove at the foot of the cliffs started to fade as they made their way up the winding paths and stone-carved stairs, up the plateau that separated the northern and southern sections of the Summer Gardens. Between the shrub-choked cliffs beside them and the pockets of poplar trees that called the area their home, the color green quickly became overwhelming, the perfect camouflage for one of Julia's top picks for a starter pokémon: the Stormlands Morevitikha.

It didn't take long before they started to spot small herds of them, though unfortunately they were out of reach. In their ancient ancestral habitat of the Javikhetta Republic's southern mountain ranges, Morevitikhas were known to scale sheer cliff faces that seemed absolutely impossible to climb as a means of escaping predators, and the various breeds that had emerged from that common ancestor over the past 9 millennia were no different.

"How is that even possible..." Julia wondered as she watched a pair of Morevitikhas climb the nearly vertical wall of stone in front of them. Despite the heavy cover of vegetation, it was as if the Morevitikhas knew how to find their footing. "It's like I'm looking at a glitchy video game."

"Like running up a mountain on a Mudsdale in that cowboy game I used to play all the time."

"Ha, yeah, that's what I was thinking of. That looked so stupid, and you were always so pleased with yourself!" she said with a laugh. "What's the likelihood we'll actually be able to find one down here on the ground?"

He crossed his arms as he watched the rest of the herd make the same arduous climb as the initial pair. "I'd say it's likely. The shrubs are starting to thin out towards the top, so there's probably not much for them to graze on up there compared to down here. No doubt we'll find something as we follow the trails. The trick will probably be to catch them between the trail and the cliffs down -- I imagine climbing is the easy part for them, but getting down in a panic is a whole different story. Don't think they'd risk taking a deadly tumble just to get away from us."

"I'd hope not!"

He led her further down the trail, and in short order, they found a location that matched his theory: the trail hugged the sheer cliffs to the left, and a small field of wildflowers sat to their right, fenced off from a large drop over another set of cliffs. As he predicted, a large herd of Morevitikhas peacefully grazed along the field, with one or two keeping a close eye on the two as they followed the path.

As they observed the herd, she got a closer look at them. She'd seen photos of them while doing her research, but they didn't do the creatures justice; the goat-like creatures stood on all fours, with their shoulders being even with her midsection and their heads being extending just above her chest. From their shoulders to the tips of their tails, they were covered in long, stringy grass that drooped and danced in the wind, with similar growths from the base of their horns. Each member of the herd had wildly different horn designs; some were straight forward like a bull's, others were curled like a mollusc's shell, and more were pointed pointed straight upward, ending in a gentle curve. One even had a pair that curved behind the head and merged into a single piece. According to her reading, both male and female Morevitikhas had horns, but the male's were notably larger, hinting at the herd structure, which appeared to be at least 80% male.

"Guess the herd won't be impacted too much if one of these lovely lads just disappears..." she thought.

"I know they were the first one we came across, but are you sure you're okay with a Morevitikha?" he asked quietly, slowing down.

"I think so," she answered without sounding too sure of herself.

"Just sayin': we can keep looking for others on your list if we catch one, but if you're not committed, I... don't exactly need one myself. I don't want to traumatize one of those poor things if neither of us are going to commit to it."

She nodded. "I understand. I like what I see of them already, and I should probably focus more on utility than battle capability. So yeah, I think I've made my choice."

"Heh, like a kid in a toy store," he whispered before giggling. "Seem to recall that was how you approached dating in high school, yeah? First come, first serve?"

She turned to glare at him, then lightly smacked his shoulder. "Good glory, don't word it like that! You're making me sound like I was some sort of who'er... I've actually put a lot of thought into this over the past few weeks."

"Fair, fair, I'm just messing with you, though maybe I should let up a bit..." he said before he unhooked two of his pokéballs from his belt. He offered one of them over to her -- an all black pokéball that was covered from top to bottom with streaky valleys of red and orange translucent resin, resembling an orb of magma. "Take this one and head further down the trail. What I wanna do is corner one of these, and I want you to call out one of my pokémon to act as a block -- keep them contained so they don't just run down the trail and get away from us. I'll keep this side contained."

"I think I get what you're saying."

"Keep an eye on me, we're going to have to release my pokémon at the same time, so I'll do a hand signal. Otherwise the noise of unleashing one will spook them and ruin our element of surprise."

She nodded. "Okay. Hopefully I don't screw this up," she said, cautiously separating from him as she headed further down the trail. As she kept a watchful eye on the herd of Morevitikhas, with them returning the favor, she wondered what Rickard had even given her. It dawned on her that despite their lengthy discussions of his career, she knew very little about the pokémon he had. "What is even in this thing?" she asked herself as she examined the Magma Ball closer. "And is it friendly? Whatever's in here has never seen me before, is it gonna freak out and attack me?"

She took up a position in the most narrow section of the trail, flanked on both sides by the cliffs on her right and the fence on her left, with barely enough room to extend her arms. She raised her hand and waved it to signal that she was ready, and almost instantly, she saw him toss a pokéball up into the air -- already a breach of the agreed upon plan. The intense hiss of crackling electricity radiated across the plateau as a massive bipedal yellow and black creature dropped to the ground. She immediately recognized it from some of her reading -- an Electivire. Bedlam ensued as the Morevitikha herd spotted the Electivire and started to scatter like bugs.

With the cue given, she clicked the button on the Magma Ball that Rickard had given her, and with a rushing wind of hot, smoky air, a massive quadrupedal creature formed beside her. The creature towered over her, its shoulder height being at least a foot and a half higher than her head. A regal, glowing mane of bright orange fur flickered much like roaring flames, yet very little heat radiated from it. Underneath its shaggy coat of flame-like fur, its skin was a translucent orange, and what looked like a constellation of bright stars and dim connecting lines -- which seemed as if they would line up with the creature's bone structure -- shined through it.

"Woah! What the hell are you!?"

The creature turned around to look at her and let out an other-worldly purring noise, showing off a mouth of translucent fangs.

"Easy, easy there... I'm... I'm Rickard's friend," she gingerly said. She pointed behind the great beast and continued, "All he wants us to do is sit back and block this exit, to prevent those Morevitikhas from running this way." She was pleasantly surprised as the creature fixed its attention on the panicking herd of Morevitikhas and stood its ground.

Rickard's Electivire charged forward into the wild stampede, with its cable-like appendages appearing to lock onto various members of the rampaging Morevitikha herd, switching between apparent targets in quick, jerky motions. A bright flash of light preceded a thunderous shockwave, and an arc of plasma between one of the Electivire's cables and one of the Morevitikha herd lingered in the air for a brief moment. The Morevitikha's muscles rapidly stiffened, dropping it to the ground without much of a fight.

She watched as Rickard unlatched a pokéball from his belt and gripped it between his two hands like a baseball pitcher. With incredible precision and power, he rocketed the ball towards the fallen Morevitikha and impacted it at the base of its horn, causing it to dissolve into a red blob of light that was sucked into the ball. After a few unceremonious wiggles, the ball stopped moving, and he started approaching to pick it up.

"Damn, that quick?" she wondered.

She started her own approach, followed quickly by the blazing creature beside her. As soon as the two had left the chokepoint, the still-active herd went rushing by and poured out of the area in a panic.

"Easy peasy!" Rickard said as he held the pokéball aloft. He tossed the pokéball up in the air towards her. "Catch!"

With ease, she jumped and reached up into the air to catch the pokéball with just one hand, earning a clapping cheer out of him. She studied the ball closely, taking note of her reflection in its red top, and with a wide smile on her face, hunched over with child-like excitement.

"See, I knew it. A kid in a toy store!"

"Oh shut up!" she shouted in a playful manner, then tried her best to regain her typical stoic composure. "I'm just... Happy, you know? My life since I left high school has been absolutely destroyed, and this is the first step in a positive direction. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart."

"Weren't nothin'."

"You can say that again!" she said as she ran her fingers along the valley that split the pokéball between the red and white halves. "You barely touched this thing and it's already in a pokéball!"

He shrugged. "This is how most of my captures go, these days -- Bolt's been through countless battles and knows how to incapacitate pretty much anything. He's crazy powerful in that regard."

She glanced up at the blazing canine creature beside her. "Speaking of crazy powerful, how about this thing?" she asked, before sheepishly offering her spare hand out for it to investigate. "What even is it? Literally never seen one before... Is it that... What's it called? Hentei?"

He honked with laughter. "Oh my god, Jules, no! It's Entei! You're thinking of something else!"

"W..! N-No! Look, I don't speak a lot of Tohjoan! How the hell should I know the difference!?"

"Uh huh. Miss weeb doesn't know the difference."

"Honestly!" she protested as she winded up and punched him lightly.

It took him a moment to contain his snickering. "No, it's not an Entei, though that'd be pretty kick ass if I had one. It's actually Ginger!"

"Ginger," she repeated, wondering if that was someone or something she was supposed to remember.

"You don't remember her? Didn't your dad briefly bring home a Growlithe that flunked out of the Canine Police Academy? That was Ginger."

"Oh! I'm not sure I ever saw her, actually. You have to remember, I was out of the house a couple months after we graduated and only moved back in with my parents after the trial."

He nodded understandingly, then walked up to the flaming beast and wrapped his arms around her bulky, fluffy neck. "Ah. Well. Your dad and my dad tried finding a good home for her, and I offered to take her in when they couldn't. She's been one of my bestest buds ever since."

"Heartwarming tale, but that still doesn't explain what this thing is," she said in an inquisitive tone, cautiously plunging her hand into the flame-like fur around its neck. She was pleasantly surprised to see that the flames weren't actually real, and were only mildly hot to the touch, rather than something that would incinerate her in an instant. "Huh. I know Growlithe evolves into Arcanine, but I'm pretty sure that's it. Are you saying there's more to it than that?"

He nodded. "Yup. Growlithe's final evolved form, as far as I'm aware, is known as Arcanferno."

"Arcanferno? Never heard of it..."

"I'll tell you all about it, but first..." he started before circling behind her, and then poked her neck.

"Ow! What the fuck!?" she shouted as she started rubbing at her neck.

He let out a snickering laugh. "We should get you out of the sun, this is some pretty bad sunburn."

She sighed. "Knew I forgot to put my sunscreen on somewhere..."

"You burn easily, goodness. We haven't even been out here that long, maybe an hour?"

She grumbled. "Must be my Éireann heritage, I guess. We definitely burn quick. And I didn't even get the cute red hair for the trouble!"

"Hey, my ancestors were Isfjellan, it's not like we can handle the sun much either."

She reached out and tugged on his long sleeve, then grabbed his gloved hand. "But you're cheating, covering up like some sort of haz-mat specialist. Guess I get it, though..."

"Ha. How about we head to the PokéCenter? We can get your Morevitikha looked at, and see if they can do anything for your sunburn."

"The PokéCenter? Would they?"

"Of course! Trainers spend lots of time on the road and we're notorious for being careless and risky. They're definitely no substitute for a doctor at a proper clinic, but if you have a simple issue, the staff at a PokéCenter can usually help deal with it."

She folded her arms and nodded in his direction. "Okay, lead the way, then. I'm actually not sure where the nearest PokéCenter is."

He chuckled. "Jules -- Err, Julia, I haven't been here for almost five years. You think I know where it is? But we'll find it."

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This is what I used as visual inspiration when drafting up the design concept for Arcanferno's translucent skin and constellation bone structure. Elegon, a creature from World of Warcraft, blew me away when I first saw it, and I've always wanted to see more of this design style ever since.
 
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Chapter 3: Let's Go To Land's End!

"Ow, ow, owwww!" Julia protested as she tried her best to sit still on a small medical bed.

"Don't blame me, blame yourself," said a nurse, slathering a foul-smelling ointment onto Julia's sunburnt neck. "Ya gotta be careful out there in the sun, especially now that summer's rolling around."

"I know, I know! I just forgot -- ow! -- to put my sunscreen on my neck, that's all."

The nurse grabbed Julia's lower arm and lifted it for a closer inspection. "Fair enough, the rest of you looks fine. Just remember that the next time, yeah?"

"I will."

After that little exchange, Julia sat there in silence, contemplating her situation. She wrestled with whether it was absent-mindedness or carelessness that landed her in that cramped closet-like room at the PokéCenter, but ultimately, did it matter? Either option was a basic failure in foresight, and it brought forth worries that she was going to suffer a lot more silly-but-harmful defeats of her own making in the future.

She wondered: was she really ready to get started as a pokémon contractor, this quickly? She'd spent the past month or so reading up on useful information for people starting out as pokémon trainers, survival guides for navigating the wilderness, and other similar books and articles, but it was all theory. Was theory capable of covering her shortfalls, especially in a profession where she would be in regular contact with dangerous environments and deadly, sentient weapons of potential mass destruction?

She'd gotten it into her head that within a week, she'd be ready to leave the nest and start stomping around the archipelago, but now she wondered it if was the right idea. Sticking close to home, learning the ins and outs of pokémon ownership, doing some training and confidence-building exercises before starting her career seemed like a smart idea -- but would that be a waste of the time and money she didn't have?

Her thoughts were interrupted by a soft whirring hum and an acute sensation of cold pressing against her neck. The strange shift from burning pain to soothing coolness caught her off guard and she reflexively fidgeted. "Eep!"

"Don't! Try not to move, please."

"Sorry. What are you doing, out of curiosity?"

"Testing out my new favorite toy -- it's called a dermal regenerator. Supposed to help with minor cuts and scratches, seems to be doing a good job in reducing the irritation from your sunburn, too."

"Oh, neat, that's a thing that exists? Sounds like science fiction."

"I thought so, too, before I got it. Ya ever hear of that bio-tech firm up in Ambervale, Gen-EX? This fancy little thing was developed by them. They make a lot of amazing little gadgets that make my profession so much easier."

"Oh, yeah, actually. My friend's mom worked in the Gen-EX R&D labs about a decade ago. I'm sure they do good work, but I dunno if I trust that company, to be honest. I've heard some stories. Mostly about unethical practices they get fined out the ass for."

"From some fringe conspiracy websites, I bet. Not everything you read online is true, dear."

"How about the stories from my friend, who had a mother who was a senior researcher there?" she shot back. "But I can already tell that's not a discussion worth having, so... Well, yeah."

The nurse shut off the dermal regenerator and painlessly ran her fingers along Julia's neck. "Just as well, think I'm done here. How's it feel?"

She ran her fingers up and down her neck as well. "Great! Thank you. Is there a mirror in here?" she asked, before spotting one in the corner of the room. She reached for her phone, turned on the selfie camera, and inspected the work done on her. There wasn't a spot of irritated skin left on her neck, nor did she have any noticeable tan lines. "Wow! That's impressive."

The nurse smiled. "Still don't trust it?"

She rolled her eyes slightly, then grabbed her polo shirt and slipped it over her head.

"If you're going back out into the sun, please remember your sunscreen this time. Your skin is going to be extra sensitive for the next couple of days."

"Yes ma'am. Thank you. Can I get this ointment stuff off of me, or should I leave it on? Smells awful."

"Ehh. Leave it on overnight. Think you're all set, have a good day now!"

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"All fiiiiixed!" Julia happily sang as she entered the waiting room of the PokéCenter. She did a light twirl and ended with her back facing Rickard. "How's it look? I got a glance through my camera in the mirror, but I want real eyes to tell me."

He lifted up her ponytail and glanced over her neck. "Wow, they're pretty good at treating sunburn these days! If I didn't know any better, I'd say you weren't even outside today."

"I know, incredible, right? The nurse had this small handheld device she called a dermal regenerator. Said it came from Gen-EX."

"Oh. Yeah. Guess they do work on some neat stuff like that," he said with a complete lack of tone or energy.

She brought her hand to her face in disappointment at herself. "S-sorry. I shouldn't have said it. I wasn't thinking," she bleated as she turned around to face him.

He shrugged. "It was a decade ago, at this point. Not like it's a fresh wound or anything."

She didn't think of it as the words slipped through her lips, but she knew exactly why Rickard's tone changed so drastically: the friend's mother who worked at Gen-EX -- officially known as Gen-EX Biomedical and Advanced Pharmaceuticals -- all those years ago was Rickard's mother, Ashlynn Karstensen. She wasn't an expert on the details, but she did know that Ashlynn worked within the R&D department on some sensitive projects for the Storm Island Royal Army, projects so sensitive that not even her husband ever seemed to have learned about what she was working on.

Tragically, Ashlynn and her entire team of scientists lost their lives under mysterious circumstances -- the official story being that an industrial accident had occurred, in which the advanced technology they were working with malfunctioned and caused a 'containment breach' that led to the team's deaths. What that containment breach entailed, the public never learned, and any journalists who seemed interested in discovering the details suddenly became very disinterested, and in fact started praising the official story given as the unassailable truth.

Henrik Karstensen, Rickard's father and a veteran investigator with the police force, was never satisfied with the story the public was told and did his own digging into the incident. Within days of starting his own investigation, he was visited by a pair of lawyers from Gen-EX as well as the Highlord of the Royal Army, telling him to drop his investigation immediately for national security reasons, and that there would be dire consequences if he did not comply. He objected to being threatened, only to be told that it wasn't a threat, merely an explanation of protocol. The only thing he ever learned about the incident that claimed the lives of his wife and her team was that she had written a panicked farewell on her workstation computer in her final moment. What she had written, and what it meant, he could never seem to say -- he always went silent before abruptly demanding a new topic to talk about whenever asked about it.

At least, that's the story as far as Julia understood it. It was all hearsay she'd heard from her own father, a longtime friend of Henrik's. She could never determine whether either of the two were telling a tall tale about what happened to Ashlynn, but why lie about something so tragic, something that definitely seemed to have traumatized her husband, and led to him being threatened by an advisor to the royal family?

"Still. There are some subjects I just shouldn't --"

"Jules. It's a free country, you're allowed to talk about Gen-EX if you want. I'm not in the business of telling people what they can and can't say." He glanced over at her and saw her hanging her head dejectedly, then gently smacked her in the shoulder. "I just wouldn't be a good conversation partner for that topic, that's all!"

"Fair."

He let out a disarming laugh. "Well, seems like Gen-EX have done some good work in her absence, at least. Maybe that little gadget was one of the things she worked on."

"Maybe!"

He pushed himself off of the wall that he'd been leaning on and approached the window. "So! What do you wanna do now? You wanna call it a day here, or do you wanna go on some more adventures together?"

She turned her phone's screen on and inspected the time: 1:17 PM. "Hmm. Seems a little early to call it a day, but I dunno what we could do."

"How are your legs feeling?"

"Better, now that I've gotten off of them for a bit. Why?"

"You up for a hike to Land's End?"

"Oh... Land's End? I dunno about that."

Though she'd never visited the resort town, she'd heard a lot about it from her former boss at Jedediah's Jewelry and Gemcutting, who spent long stretches of the year living there. Land's End rested on the aptly named peninsula that jutted out east of the city of Azure Ridge, and was a playground for the wealthy elite from all across the Storm Islands; among the top 100 most expensive residential properties across the country, 94 of them were situated along the picturesque milky white marble cliffs.

"Is there even anything for us poor slobs to do there? Far as I know, it's mostly just mansions, hotels and a beach, isn't it?"

"It may be famous for being a quarantine zone for the Storm Islands' worst people, but remember: it's a resort town. There's plenty to do out there! Parasailing, horseback riding along the beach, deep sea diving, Wailord watching... But there's an old friend of mine that I wanted to visit, and I want to introduce you to her."

"Oh yeah? You've got a friend in Land's End?"

"Dr. Faith van der Linde, you ever hear of her?"

She shook her head.

"Fair enough, guess she's not famous or anything. Well, she's a marine biologist. She studies water pokémon and frequently relies on people to bring her research subjects from across the islands. No doubt she'd have a bit of contract work for you to get started with."

"I'm convinced, that's all I needed to hear!" she said with enthusiasm. "Maybe while we're there, I can chuck a brick through my old boss's window."

"...Serious?"

"Didn't you hear? I was arrested for grand larceny. I'm a baaaaaad girl."

"Ha! Well, if you wanna take a detour to do that, that's your business. I totally understand that."

"I'm not serious, no," she said with a laugh. "Mind if I stop by home for a bit? I should probably let my parents know I won't be home for dinner, and grab my sunscreen."

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The stretch of land between the urban metropolis of Azure Ridge -- a city of a dozen and a half skyscrapers that boasted a population of 3 million -- and the ritzy commune of Land's End was an extremely alluring sight to her. Now that she'd seen it, she wondered why she'd never made the short journey towards the edge of the city to soak in the picturesque vistas. From their vantage point, they could see the numerous atolls that speckled the surface of the Atalacian Ocean, as well as the peaks of hundreds of small islets and rocky spires that dotted the eastern horizon. The milky cliffs of Land's End itself shined brightly in the distance, though its abject beauty was certainly ruined by the ugly mansions and high rises that polluted the once-pristine shores of the area.

Much to her delight, a heavy canopy of palm fronds sheltered them from the sun after they made their way down the cliff and onto the beach. She looked up at them, dancing in the breeze, and marvelled at how many there were. "I know I shouldn't be surprised, since I saw them every day on my way to school and then to work, but... I never thought about why we have so many palm trees in this area. I thought we weren't far enough south for them to grow."

"I think it's less about latitude and more about climate. Now, don't take my word as gospel, because I'm far from an expert, but there's... something about deep ocean currents and high altitude jet streams that cause warm tropical air to come up this far north. Might have something to do with the Stonewall Range way out in the ocean, too. Pretty sure they block the air and water currents from moving normally? I dunno. But whatever is the cause, it creates the perfect environment for tropical vegetation to thrive, at least on the southern shores here."

"Is that why it gets so ungodly hot and miserably humid starting in April? And why we get battered by a dozen hurricanes every year?"

He shrugged. "I assume so. I can't imagine any other reason these islands got their name."

"I'll be honest, I dunno if I believe it," she started, running her hand across the soft, pale bark of several of the palm trees beside her. "Warm ocean currents and jet streams make sense if the entire islands were like this, but, what is it, 200 miles north? The Snowfall Steppes are still covered in snow and it's almost summer? How can there be such a massive difference in climate in such a short difference in distance?"

He raised his hands defensively. "Hey, I did say I'm not an expert. Maybe there's a different explanation, but if there is, I don't know what it may be."

"That makes me wonder, does it snow in Lanark at all?"

"Yup! Not as much as you'd expect considering how close it is to the Arctic Circle, but it does."

"Jealous! I wanna see some snow..."

"You haven't, still? It's as easy as hopping on the underground railway and heading up to Hearthglen."

She shook her head and squeaked, "No money..."

"Well, I figure that's the case now, but you never took a day off and went up there while you were working at that fancy jewelry place?"

"This is actually the first time I've left the city. Never really felt like I had a reason to leave until my trial happened, and by that point, I didn't have the means."

"Well then! Before I head back overseas, I wanna take you up there to see the snow, then. You'll love it!" He lightly and playfully jabbed his hand into her side. "Course you'll have to dress warm for the occasion, it's pretty cold up there, heh."

Though she wanted to, she didn't respond to his jovial and playful nature -- something was preventing her words from getting out. After a few moments, she finally took a deep breath and lowered her head to block her eyes from his view with her new visor. "Thank you. Thank you."

"Thank you? What for? For finally getting you out of the city?"

"No. It's just... it feels like someone finally gives a damn about me again."

"Oh, uhh. Hey, I'm sure there are people out there who care about you."

She shook her head and then raised it a bit, with tears forming in the corners of her eyes. "Nope. I don't have any friends anymore. Nobody to hang out with. Nobody to call for long talks at night. Nobody special to share candid moments with. On the rare occasion I left my bedroom, people would just brush past me, or ignore me, or even avoid me. It's so... so demoralizing. Shit, even the girl who does my hair at the salon doesn't make small talk with me anymore!"

"And hair stylists are notorious for talking too much!" A brief snort-laugh escaped him before he caught it and brought it under control. "Rough... Do you put yourself out there in any way?"

"Not anymore, but I tried. I used some dating apps, hoping I'd meet some people who'd give me a chance, but I never found what I was looking for."

He cocked his head to the side in confusion. "Dating apps? Wha-- Why? I'm not sure dating apps are what's going to get you a bunch of friends, heh. Unless, well, you know -- you're trying to use that to attract friends."

"Pfft. Why do you think I stopped trying? The guys I met on there only wanted one thing, and the girls I met on there seemed offended that I didn't want that one thing."

He snickered. "You're a mess. We've gotta work on your ability to understand social norms."

"Trust me, I've tried to understand, and given up years ago. I'll always be the awkward weirdo who doesn't get it," she said with a laugh. "At least I realize now that I was barking up the wrong tree by doing that, so give me a little credit!"

_.~"(*.~"(*.~"(*.~"(*.~"(*.​

No more than a quarter of the way through their journey across Land's End Beach, exhaustion started to kick in. It was a constant fight to keep her legs moving, and she left a faint cloud of dust behind her as she dragged her feet through the sand. Her breathing started to become heavy and labored, and she wondered whether the trip to Land's End would be worth it in the end -- surely she could find a good first contract back home, she reasoned.

"I do have a bit of a reputation, but not everyone in Azure Ridge knows who I am, right? Why am I going to snob central again?" she thought.

Rickard looked back at her and smiled.

"What are you smiling at, dork?"

"Ha! Getting tired?"

"A little..."

"Thought so. Been watching you stomp pretty heavily the past few minutes."

She tried to adjust her gait to make it less obvious that she was exhausted, but it was too difficult; after kicking her foot against a submerged coconut and nearly losing her balance, she finally agreed to it. "Okay, yeah, I'm struggling here... Sorry."

"No need to apologize for discovering your limit and then respecting it. Wanna find somewhere to take a break, or do you wanna ride your Morevitikha for a bit?"

"Uhh," she said before grabbing the hem of her skirt. "Not without a saddle to sit on. A break sounds great."

He peered forward and identified a large flat sheet of stone just beside the water's edge and pointed out towards it. "Up there looks like a decent spot. Nice and flat, it's got some trees for shade, too."

She breathed out sharply as she picked up the pace, eagerly awaiting the rest that taunted her. "No pain... No pain..!" she huffed, earning a smirk and a shake of the head out of Rickard.

When they arrived, Rickard made himself comfortable on the bare, flat stone by simply sitting down and folding his legs over each other. Julia tried similar, kneeling to maintain her modesty, but the hard, jagged rock was much too rough on her knees and shins. Instead, she dropped her backpack beside her and unhooked her bedroll, using it as a mat to rest upon. On her belly, she began to kick her feet back and forth in the air as she watched the waves and the wildlife out at sea, and breathed a sigh of contentment.

"So," she started, to break the awkward silence that was overtaking them. "What kind of pokémon do you actually have? Of all the things we've talked about over the past few weeks, that hasn't really come up."

He reached down for his belt and unhooked the leather strap that held his pokéballs to his hip, then placed it on the stone between them. She studied the collection closely, marvelling at the variety of designer pokéballs he owned. Every color of the rainbow was represented, and they glittered brightly as the sun poked through the palm fronds.

"You've got nine?" she asked as she finished counting them.

"Yeah. Most people usually stop around five, but... Well, I'm not most people, heh."

"Yeah, I've noticed that when I look at trainers as they pass through the city," she asked as she grabbed one of them to inspect it closer. "Any reason for that?"

"Tradition, for the most part. The most successful early trainers of the modern era tended to keep five, and that's a number that stuck for the most part, but it's not like it's a regulation or anything. Some people push it to six, and then there's complete psychos like me who push it even further. Honestly, I usually carry between 13 and 15, but... Didn't feel the need to bring that many home with me."

The ball in her hand featured a dull brown top and a slightly brighter tan bottom. The only remarkable feature about it was its texture -- rough and gritty with the feel of baked clay, and not perfectly round in shape. "What's this one? Looks like someone took a brick and polished it."

"Oh, that's a Mud Ball. My Bramblemire, Fennel, is in that one."

She raised her eyebrow as she studied the non-descript clump of high-tech dirt. "Never heard of one of those."

"You familiar with Quagsire? The Woopers over in Lanark's Bramblemurk Marsh don't evolve into Quagsires, but Bramblemires instead. They're actually kinda neat, they're like land-dwelling pufferfish that are covered in venomous spikes."

"Note to self, do not cuddle," she joked as she placed it back into its holder. Next, she picked out a design that she recognized -- a bejeweled purple one with a large letter M engraved onto it. "A Master Ball, huh? What's inside?"

"That's my pride and joy, Rime -- a Glacizard."

"Ooh! Is that like a Charizard, but icy?" she asked, prompting a nod from him. "Can I see?!"

"Unfortunately not. Once temperatures start approaching the upper 80s, he literally can't handle it and starts wilting like a dying flower. I honestly should have left him in the care of my bestie back in Lanark, now that I think about it..."

"Aww," she murmured as she slid the ball back into its slot. As she looked his collection over, one of them stood out among the rest, and she wrapped her fingers around it as she slid it out of its slot. "What's with this one?" she asked as she held it aloft. "It's a cube!"

The 'pokéball' resting in her palm was anything but -- a cube of cold, black metal, with copper venting on its sides and a glass hemisphere on the top. She couldn't tell if it was some trick of the light, but it appeared there was a billowing fog roiling within the glass hemisphere.

"Oh! You familiar with ghostly pokémon at all? You capture them in those instead of pokéballs. It's called a spirit trap. I believe it was invented by the guy who's currently in the Storm League's Elite Five... Dr. Belmonte was his name, I think?"

She turned the spirit trap around in her hands, taking note of the miniscule pipes and wires that were visible through the venting. "Is that so? I always thought you could just catch stuff like that with a normal pokéball, but I guess not?"

"Without a tangible body, you're gonna need something a little different than a standard pokéball. My Mimikyu, Camilla, is in that one."

"Ooh! Cool! I've always wanted to see one of those!" she said with excitement as she offered the spirit trap to him.

He slid it back into place. "Later tonight, then. She's not a fan of sunlight." He reached for another from his collection and held it aloft -- a fully black ball that featured a silver spiderweb pattern on its top and a ring of red gems on the bottom. "I can definitely show you this one, though."

She protested wildly as she took note of the web design. "Absolutely not. I hate bugs!"

He shook his head and motioned for her to pass the ball to him. "Lucky you, then, I don't have any bugs! Well, not with me, at least. I think you'll like this one!" He clicked the button on the ball and it to opened with a gust of eerie wind and a wolf-like howl. Just before them, at the edge of the water, a small humanoid creature began to form.

The creature looked almost human, but clearly wasn't -- made obvious by the fact that it had just come from a pokéball. The diminutive being was overtly feminine in appearance, with a pair of bushy and spiky pigtails adorning its head, a curvy figure, and a face full of soft features -- though rough around the edges with its messy and rugged appearance.

"Woah! What is that thing?" she asked in amazement.

The diminutive creature approached gently, then put its hands to its hips. "Thing? Did you just call me a thing? Such disrespect!"

"Holy shit! It talks, too?!"

Rickard laughed. "This is Anya. She's a Rockibelle, and yes, she can talk."

Julia looked back towards Anya. "Like, full Éireannic conversations?"

Anya nodded. "Yes ma'am. And Glastonian. Constantian, as well. Oh! And the old Constanti-Romatti dialect, too. And Isfjellan. And --"

"She speaks the language of my ancestors better than I do, and it only took her a month to figure out its complicated verb conjugation mechanisms that I can't figure out myself. Not to mention seven other languages..."

Julia stared blankly for a moment. "This is weird, I didn't know pokémon could talk. Not, like, human languages, at least."

"Of course we can!" Anya said with pride. "Well, umm. Kinda! Are you a trainer yourself, miss Julia?"

"I guess? I mean, I just got started today."

"You speak to your pokémon, right? You give them orders, ask questions, yeah?"

She shrugged. "I haven't yet, but I'm sure I will."

"We understand your human languages just fine. Speaking them... That's another question for most species."

"Huh."

"Yeah," Rickard added. "There are some pokémon species out there that have the right anatomical structures for spoken languages that are much like ours. Something like a Sandile isn't going to be able to speak to us in ways we can readily understand, but something like a Rockibelle? Easy for them."

"Never really thought about it, but I guess that makes sense." She looked back at Anya, who was staring a hole into her with narrowed eyes. "Uhh, did I --" Her words were left unfinished as the Rockibelle's eyes flashed with a bright lavender glow, and all of a sudden, she felt her sense of hearing fade abruptly. The noise of the ocean waves in the distance, the dancing palm fronds above them, the singing birds surrounding them had all faded beneath a dull, almost imperceptible angelic humming.

"Do something to upset me? Of course not! Just showing you that physical speech isn't the only thing I can do!"

The strange, ethereal voice sounded a lot like Anya's, but the Rockibelle's mouth didn't move at all. The voice echoed in strange ways that didn't seem to match her material surroundings, seemingly bouncing off of walls or objects that weren't physically present around her; it came from nowhere, but felt like it was everywhere, and unexpectedly loud on top of it all. She was stricken by a sudden and intense nausea, and fell over into the soft sand behind her, then raised her hand to her head to try to combat her mounting dizziness.

"Anya," Rickard said sternly, catching the Rockibelle's attention; the bright glow encompassing her creepily-large eyes faded in an instant, as did Julia's lightheadedness and dulled sense of hearing. "What'd I tell you about doing that?"

Anya lowered her head in dejection. "Sorry!"

Julia rubbed at her aching temple. "...the hell just happened..?"

"Telepathy," he answered as he extended his hand out to help her back to her feet. "Dizzy still?"

She shook her head before grabbing his hand, and with a hefty pull, she was back upright. She took a deep breath, held it in for a moment, and then let it out. "Phew... That was... certainly something."

He giggled. "First time's always the strangest! You get used to it pretty quickly." He turned back to Anya. "Anya, please remember what I told you -- only engage someone who's ready and willing. I won't remind you again."

Anya dropped to her hands and knees and bowed her head until it was almost touching the stone. "Please accept my apologies! I got carried away!"

"You didn't read her thoughts, did you?"

She shook her head fervently.

He leaned closer to Julia and asked in a hushed tone, "Did you get a tingly sensation in the back of your head?"

"No," Julia confirmed. "I guess that's the tell?"

"It is. She loves messing with new people. I had a hard time keeping her from reading people's thoughts when she first evolved, but looks like she's finally listening," he continued in his hushed tone before speaking up. "And getting better at being honest. Good girl."

"...What a fascinating creature," Julia said. She reached for her phone and started to search for information about the Rockibelle species. "So, uhh, what exactly is a Rockibelle? Don't think I've ever seen one of 'em before."

"Not surprising. They're not really a thing on this side of the world," he said. "Are you familiar with something called a Gothita at all?"

"Can't say that I am. Sounds like a subspecies of Chikorita, but I assume it's related to this thing instead."

Anya raised her head and glared at Julia.

"Related to this charming young lady. Sorry, that's gonna take some getting used to."

"Ha, no, it's not a breed of Chikorita. They're pretty popular over in Tohjo, where they come from. I'm actually surprised you haven't heard of them, ya big weeb!"

"I'm not a weeb! I just like ninja movies!"

He snickered. "They're psychic beings that typically evolve into Gothorita, and then into Gothitelle. I picked one up in a trade while visiting a Yazheni market in Lanark's capital city, a wonderfully wretched hive called Aughrim."

She stared down at the Rockibelle, noting its brightly-colored messy and spiked hairstyle, what appeared to be a studded leather vest -- which she couldn't determine if it was an integrated part of Anya's body, or just a fashion accessory -- and milky-white skin that looked to be covered in floral tattoos. "I assume this thi-- upstanding young lady isn't a Gothitelle, then. Looks more like, well, a punk rocker. Unless I was doing the goth thing totally wrong in our freshman year."

"Fascinating fact about Gothitas: the type of music they listen to seems to influence what they evolve into. I listen to a lot of that old early 90s alternative rock and grunge while I'm on the road, and I think that influenced her evolution."

"Surprised she didn't turn into a flannel-wearing lumberjack, then," she joked.

Anya looked up at Rickard. "What's a lumberjack?"

"I'll tell you about that later," he said, then grabbed his collection of pokéballs and fastened them to his belt again. "Okay, back in ya go!" he said as he lifted Anya's Goth Ball and aimed it at her. In a matter of moments, she was sucked back into the ball.

Julia felt a little strange about seeing it. Until that day, most pokémon were simply animals of middling intelligence to her, but Anya seemed to be on an entirely different level -- capable of speech and carrying on entire conversations with an expansive vocabulary, not to mention her ability to communicate acutely via telepathy. It didn't feel right to just... do whatever it is that pokéballs did to pokémon, but she wasn't about to argue the ethics of it. Rickard was the experienced master trainer, and Anya didn't seem upset that she was cooped up in one of them once she was finally out.

He glanced down at his watch, then checked his map. "Hmm. If we wanna make it there before sunset, we should probably get back to it."

"Mmm. Sounds good," she said before she spun around to her hands and knees and pushed against the ground. Worry crept over her as her legs protested her movements. "Uh oh... Umm... Hey, Rick?" she called out.

He turned around to look at her, and a smile crossed his face as he watched her try to push her way to her feet.

With a nervous giggle, she extended her hand towards him. "I think I need a little help getting up."

"Ha!" he howled before returning to her. He grabbed her hand and lifted her with ease, taking care to make sure that she wouldn't fall right back onto the ground. "Quite the walk so far, huh?"

"Yeah... I think this is the longest I've ever walked in my life," she said, wobbling a bit before finding her footing. "I had no idea how squishy I'd become over the past few years..."

"Shocking, really," he said as he let go of her, and then started to pack up her bedroll. "That was the first thing I noticed when I saw you this morning -- where'd those muscles go?"

"Tt! What muscles?" she asked incredulously. "I've always been tiny! I just hid it under my loose clothing."

"Okay, maybe not muscles, but you were toned back in school. Fit as a fiddle! And we both know how much of a jumping bean you were back then, too! You'd be sprinting up four flights of stairs in the time it took me to walk up one. Or how about that time you jumped off of a wall to climb onto the roof to get that little kid's ball back? Not to mention that you were an absolute menace in phys ed during school!"

She sharply exhaled through her nose as memories of her time in school surfaced. "Was kinda nice being picked before some of the boys, unlike all the other girls."

"That's because you had genuine value during the team sporting events. Remember during street hockey week where Andy tried to block your advance on the goal, and you cartwheeled over his shoulder, stuck the landing and then managed to score right after?"

She was overcome with a belly laugh so intense that it threatened her balance, and she grabbed onto him for stability. "Ha, holy shit, yeah! I remember that! Still can't believe I did that... Still can't believe I escaped without a high sticking penalty, too... But that's agility and stamina, not muscle," she explained. "And those both went in the bin alongside my hopes and dreams once I started working at that stupid jewelry shop."

"I wanna see that Julia return. This getting tired after a three mile walk, with breaks? It simply won't do."

"Heh, maybe. I've still kinda got those moves, but I'd need to work on my balance and timing again. I do miss doing stuff like that."

"Where'd you even learn that kinda stuff? I always figured you were just hiding a cupcakes and fairies personality behind the short hair and baggy clothes, but at the same time, you were always a step above even the best of the boys in terms of physical fitness. Maybe you weren't hiding anything anything after all, and were just simply a brash tomboy?"

A honk of laughter escaped her. "I mean, I hid some stuff. My corner of the bedroom was always covered in pink and glitter, though you wouldn't know it if you looked at me back then. But, the fact is, I grew up with four brothers, three of which were older than me. A lot of their mannerisms and hobbies rubbed off on me -- there were always those old martial arts movies playing on the TV whenever they were home, and I found them kinda cool and inspiring."

"So, too many ninja movies as a kid, huh?"

"There is no such thing as 'too many ninja movies'!"

"Ha. You know, you could say the same about me and wild west movies... But maybe it's good we watched all that garbage as a kid. They may have slightly rotted our brains, but we clearly got a lot of inspiration out of them. It took a while, but I've become super outdoorsy since starting this career, and I owe my early attempts at camping in the wild to the tricks I learned watching all those cowboy movies. I'll say one thing -- being quick on your feet will be invaluable while you're out in the wilderness building your team and your skills, so you should probably start working on that again."

"Yeah?"

"Never know when you have to climb a tree to escape a charging Ursaring, or escape a rampaging Rhyhorn."

She blinked rapidly and then looked in his direction. "Why would you tell me that on my first day, after I've already made a commitment with a capture? At least let me get used to the idea of being a trainer before you scare me with shit like that!"

"A warning like that can never come too soon, because you never know if you're going to find that Rhyhorn on your first day, or after your first year."

She squeakily blew air through pursed lips. "Good point..."

As they passed a large billboard that welcomed them to the commune of Land's End, he said, "Luckily, that won't be happening on your first day. Let's go and find somewhere for you to rest."
 
Partners
  1. suikaibuki
  2. ranyakumo
Okay, let me kick off actually trying to participate in one of these Blitzes for once with the latest triumphant return to the Storm Islands! This I wasn't expecting to see here, but I generally enjoyed your work from the past. Here's to hoping this is the one for you!

Right away in the first chapter, we're thrown into the action as after a would be future making scene (and at such a young age too!), our heroine is thrown into the clink out of nowhere. I don't remember the cops in previous iterations of this setting being so brutal or even implicitly corrupt. Or incompetent for that matter given the very blatant blunder that comes up very belatedly. It is not really the best explanation or excuse for the beginning of the fic, but it creates a mystery right away of who would want to frame her and why? Then we proceed to never hear from her fiance again after that, at least in the bit I've read so far. I do trust that he will eventually, but it's still a little jarring to see him disppear from the narrative after the prologue and not even get a mention afterwards. You'd think going to see him would be one of her biggest priorities, or that he would've visited her. Unless he like got thrown in for attempted obstruction of justice and really didn't get out? I don't know, it's a little loopy. Get a bit of a peek into the world meanwhile, like the Ridge Rioters. Shoutouts to competent lawyers at the very least.

That said, I'd like to think that the public would know about the inconsistencies in evidence just as much as the jurors did. It is almost a little forced for the public to make her into a full on pariah out of doubt, and the same could be said about the criminal record thing. It sort of makes me think that my idea of the police being corrupt is actually the correct one. At the very least given the warden, not all of them are if that turns out to actually be the case.

Of course, one of the biggest draws of your setting, at least to myself, is your original Pokemon. Also thank you for not saying Fakemon, that term is so dumb. We get to see discount Talonflame, Bellibolt's watery cousin, and even a regional variant talked about. Speaking of, I was initially unsure what to make of the style of the "dex" entries, which are really just Julia's thoughts. I'm a bit mixed after thinking on it after reading. It was interesting to see competitive talk come up, but it's just sort of there. More importantly, it wouldn't hurt to actually give some small descriptions of the appearance of each. Like, all we know of Emberflame is the name, which feels (and apparently the thing performs) like discount Talonflame. Not really the best thing to be doing with original Pokemon.

I don't really have much to comment on the characters themselves at this point. Julia feels like a redo of some of your old concepts, though that's not necessarily a negative. Rickard is pretty casual, and I remembered that Pokemon training in your ficverse is so insanely stringent. Though I forget if the implicit Pokemon 'requirements' ever came up before. This is clearly not a world where a Pachirisu can win worlds. Interesting worldbuilding with the places he got his badges from. All it sort of gives the setting an anachronistic feel with kingdoms and duchys coexisting with cellphones.

I'm liking what I've read so far, which is the prologue and first two chapters. Plus, I write a story with a character with an alternative job in the Pokemon world, so it's always good to see other things like this. Good source of inspiration too, heh. A contractor for hire that does whatever work, definitely a cool concept.

Some point form stuff:

- Oak Hill? Well when it comes to Pokemon Oak makes me think of one guy with eyebrows that make him very villany looking to me. Was that on purpose or did you not consider the good (???) professor?
- kknkknkk? What does that even mean? Is it a weird sound or it is something in by accident? Having trouble visualizing the sound in my head if it is one.
- Is the sun brightening thing foreshadowing, I wonder? Or is it just a throwaway line? I noticed you reused the vampire joke, heh. That one was a classic, even if our protagonist this time never really was one. On camera, at least.
- Is the "hentei" gag a reference to Entei from the old Bulbagarden IRC? Probably not since you didn't give the exact quote, but that's what it made me think of.

I'll be back for sure for the third chapter when I can. These first three were as much as I could read when on a drive and not pausing to jot down my thoughts, heh.
 

K_S

Unrepentent Giovanni and Rocket fan
Hi here for the blitz,

So I'm not adding it towards the review count as a chapter, but your notes/summary were pretty long and touched keypoints that I felt would have been funner to experience in the text of the story, as part of the world-building. It still does leave the question as to why these nationalities/peoples/places etc are relevant, but it's not a favored plot device of mine.

Regardless, of my quibble, the artwork was well done.

Ah house hunting, well this should be interesting. I'm guessing here that the two young people in the cafe are the house hunters? The lack of link between the conversations starting dialogue and the young woman being sat down at the Diner is having me question that. As it goes on it seems more likely, when the young man responds to said dialogue, so that confusion clears itself up.

Also, it surprised me that two young people can pony up for such an investment.

The young man's worries about haunting made me chuckle.

Tips head, alright considering he's worrying about investments and talking about several businesses they're probably fine, and we update from him and her to Mr and Mrs pretty quick. Inspections kids, oh my, we are rolling right into domesticity, aren't we?

And as their conversation runs on I'm feeling for the Mrs. Being hit with a possible deal breaker and stalling after marriage, yipe. I get his concerns, about the rivalry, but from what's been shown so far she's put more thought into it than pride, well so it seems so far... at least he seems to go along with it, though his word choice is raising a few hackles. Their diverting into mundane day-to-day chatter felt rather organic. The quibble of mon type for nurturing practice/kid testing was the first touchstone to the mon world thus far.

And we go from domestic to being thrown into the loving arms of a task force... Love how Clarke is just resigned in her "You did something didn't you?", when the focus is (seemingly) unjustly on her. The beat down/incarceration feels scarily real. The following prison time reminds me of 60 days (a tv series) really it does sound like this prison is a punishment extender more than anything else... Though I have to wonder why her charges were dropped it's good she's getting out.

Ah falsified evidence that'll throw things out real quick, but considering every job under the sun demands a clean record she's going to have it hard getting work/money, and resources. Well, at least if this place compares to RL. I supporse future chapters are going to elaborate more on the hardship.

Thanks for sharing and welcome to the forums.
 
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