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Pokémon K_S Villian-tine's prompt, "a book/reading" Now Grammarly'ed

K_S

Unrepentent Giovanni and Rocket fan
AN:​
Author's note/Salutation:

Welcome to the edited version of my Villiantine's prompts. As it says on the tin, there be editing... as well as some dividing. My frantic note storage made the O.G version a nightmare to read, so I'm splicing them up into standalone pieces and re-releasing so anyone who wants to read my most recent work can skip a migraine.

Enjoy!


Villains-tine prompt, a book/reading
Part 1


Summary:

It started as an idle day in. Trying to ignore Mother Nature's temper tantrum and pass the time. It ended with the discovery of a long-abandoned scion of the Sakaki bloodline. Other traumas are also revisited.

(where my situation/character notes for Antonio Sakaki, as well as other Sakaki's from Giovanni's family, are converted into narrative form)

Content warnings: Racism, criminal activities, established adult relationships, discussions of a pandemic,




Grace and Giovanni had, during the start of the day, taken a view of the world beyond their Forest-side home, and the consensus was mutual. No way in Hell were they going out. The normally blue skies were slate grey. Lightning snapped its electric fingers along the cloud banks like a Capo making death threats. The air was thick, and the wind hissed among the forest branches at a pitch that forewarned of a probable power outage.

The ground types were sheltering among the rock garden. Digging familiar trenches to prevent overflow from flooding their dens. The whole battlefield in his backyard was a crazed mess of tunnels set up to divert the upcoming overflow. Each scrape honed claws, so all the better for him. He ignored the looks his team canted up, cringing first at the sky, then at him. They were vetrens to his methods, and knew they weren't going to sit this out in their pokeballs unless it became a hurricane level threat outside.

It was one of the few downsides of having a trainer who believed whole heartedly in survival of the fittest.

Watching the subdued panicked excavation from the dry, sheltered, span of his porch, he only spoke up once. To warn Sandslash from the waterline, Giovanni waited until the spiney critter filled the tunnel and started working away from the house in safer soil. Content the rodent wasnt going to flood his house, Giovanni took a long sip. Least his 'mon note his frown and tear into the sod with too much enthusiasm.

'Queen was going quite a bit slower than her norm. She, he decided, would need a check up. After all the ground 'mon had set right his training grounds.

But that was tomorrow Giovanni's problem.

Today's finished his cup, left them to it. The consigliere, owed no man, 'mon, or Capo anything worth going into that upcoming downpour for.

So he went in, and let his lessers wallow in anxiety and wet both.

When the downfall came, it skipped Meowths and Growlithes stage and jumped right into the Persians and Arcanines. The Sakaki's had indulged intimacy with a childish twist. Lazing in a comfortable twining of flesh, pillows, and blankets that might have resembled a pillow fort in a certain light. Granted it was one build on a king sized bed...

The fireplace was set, going full tilt, and commandeering the place of honor previously held by the alarm clock was a tray of odd and end snacks and two cups.

The finest Cinnibarian blend was their favorite brew, though each had radically different opinions on what to put in it.

Hers was spiked with cinnamon, his with a splash of vanilla and cream. Indulging further weakness, and braving drafts and cool floors like a madwoman, Grace had indulged nostalgia further. She'd left him to slip into the attic. A quick root around, and she'd came back with some books from her old things.

Though books were a generous term.

They squeaked through existence on the merest of technicalities. There were the requisite covers and pages, everything was glossy, glaringly so. If there was a word to encapsulate them, "shiny" would have been in the top four spot.

Godawful gaudy and would have covered slots one through three.

Following the trend of irrelevance, the collection was more pictures than words.

She'd laughed at him and asked if he'd never seen a school photo album before. Then nestled into his arms, boodle in tow, she decided that his "no" was an invitation to catch him up.

The awards and titles doled out to the smiling children had baffled him. How they'd been decided, their merit, was a mystery. And her explanation, that they didn't mean anything at all, left him bemused. What was the point of it then? Some of the alien wordplay were references to old pop culture, and Grace had declared him "too young to be this clueless," and that at a later date, she was going to "catch him up".

She chattered about familiar faces. Friends, acquaintances, that weird kid in the back row... It rolled over his head, an idle storm, but he perked at the word rival.

"Welcome back," she'd snarked, then returned to reminiscing about her grade school days. And mildly rebuked, he paid her more than half a mind.

He supposed there was some charm to be found in a preadolescent rivalry that had been boiled down to "They'd been at each other's throats", with informative tidbits of "Little Ms. Perfect Wannabe had wanted to be a trainer". And that's all it'd taken to get Grace on board.

Because "Ms. Perfect" was the meanest girl in the second grade, having a thing for pulling Grace's hair. After one stinging assault, Grace had decided that she was going to be the best trainer Viridian had ever seen.

Spite had carried her through rigorous training. Getting her first 'mon, a Meowth, and permission to battle at a stupid young age, she'd been eager to get out and train.

One scratch attack later, because meowth weren't shy in slashing up their trainers, Grace decided that rivalries were stupid. She was going to run a 'mon petting zoo. Soft, fluffy, not bite-y things, were more her speed. And training, and trainers, could go rot.

Except Giovanni, because he was her special exception...

And Andre, because that man and that man's charmeleon were inseparable.

How that ambition had changed to nursing was quite the mystery.

He'd poked and prodded, and Nurse Grace Evens let slip none of her secrets. In tones, one was told about the bird types and the beedrill, she drawled out her sarcastic tale that was more snark than informative.

There was this fun thing called a "medi-experience share", and when someone equipped with that was passed a "degree stone"...

"For the last time, that's not how stone evolution works." Giovanni snorted. "So should I fear death via cancer per a surfeit of evolution stone radiation?"

"Only if I had gone into radiology." She countered sweetly.

Thunder rumbled above them, the windows rattled, and cradling her close, he considered what of his past he dared share. Because the lightning strikes were getting closer together and he could feel her heart hammering under his touch.

Grace's brave front would not hold forever.

For him, vulnerability and history were a calculated risk. He weighed truths to lies, and settled for a sanitized middle ground. Wheeling out a rather pedestrian tale of his childhood.

It was a mild defilement of old memories, all done for the sake of providing Grace a distraction.

He confessed he hadn't gone to school. His childhood was a thing peppered with just enough education to avoid sbario attention. The second they were able, the elder Sakaki's had pulled him out of academia, and tossed him at every apprenticeship they could. Some were of a mildly illegal slant, and odd jobs were at odd hours, which meant he never got to interact with kids on a normal schedule that weren't tied to his familgia. While he was deliberately vague, one of the shady gigs he expanded on. It had been a spat of plumbing jobs at what he'd suspected to be a mob hideout.

"Between frat boys and mobsters, I'd be hard to say which had the worst habits."

"Well, I'd say you avoided the worst of both worlds, you know the perks of taking a good shower, and you're living on the straight and narrow."

He snorted a laugh, and Grace considered something, one of her fingers tracing a path up his arm. Her nail was not cutting sharp, but a pleasant prickle along the circular scars that'd been Zio Sal's neglect more than anger. "So where's your coat of arms, Mr. My Family's Been in Existence for Centuries?"

"The tacky old thing with the white blob that's supposed to be a mew stamped on it? I wrapped my mother in it for her funeral shroud and burned it all."

"Gio!"

"In my defense, it was ugly as sin."

"Seriously! You could have given it to a museum or something, not indulge in some... history... deleting... arson kick!"

"Seriously," he chuckled, "it... doesn't exist." He deserved that pillow to his side. "I think Nona might have something like that, somewhere, but I wouldn't know what it looked like. Or could care less. It's an off-mainland treasure if it exists at all. I'm not passing it up to a mainland region, much less one as anti-Italian as Kanto."

"Alright, but you have to have something like a photo album, right?"

The no he uttered sounded lame, even to his own ears. He frowned in confusion because he knew lies. And this felt like a lie, even though he hadn't meant it as such.

Mind reaching back, through the years, he remembered that first plane ride to Nonas as a little boy. There'd been an endless seeming book, the old Madam drilling him on names and dates for the whole five-hour flight... He hadn't touched it since. But it'd been among her things, and perhaps he hadn't thrown it out...

Discharge met wind burst just right; the resulting racket sounded downright apocalyptic. Lights flickered, making Grace curl into him as the faux night's shadows spawned into impenetrability.

Before worry could set to roost that something was down rather than rattled, light returned with a staticy flick.

And the alarm went off, because it always did whenever there was a blip in the power grid.

"Fuck, Arceus damn it!" She was quicker than him, and closer. Digging the clock out from under the bed by its cord, Grace slapped the mute button with enough force his hand stung in sympathetic pain.

Unfortunatly Grace had hit the temporary mute button. The clock howled to life as soon as she set it down and pushed it away. The resultant tug to rip on its power cord from the wall and kill it for good was more than understandable. Even if the violence of her doing so had him half up and lunging to save the tray. If he hadn't they would have had a shit ton of laundry to deal with.

"I hate that thing."

Perversely enough, it was hers. Alarm clock and complaint both. Any attempt to replace it had been met with resistance as she swore it was the only thing that got her up after a bleed eye shift.

He'd pointed out that she could just not take those shifts anymore. She was her own Made woman. Why play these games? She'd rattled off her standard excuses. Obligations to coworkers preferred patients with special needs needing stability... And when he was unmoved, she told him to shut up. From the set of her shoulders and the pointed glare as she shoved the unplugged monstrosity back under the bed, he knew not to push his luck.

Between her mood and the aggravation of modern technology, another round of "why keep it?" would wind up with him on the couch.

"Do you think there's... like a... Zapdos up there who's done the 'mon equivalent of hit the sultry music, got his girlfriend over, and they're doing love loops or something to make baby Zapdos over our heads?"

That was an image for the ages.

But realistically?

"There's not enough discharge going off for one Zapdos, much less two," He ruled. "The last Zapdos sighting off of Vermilion left miles of molten rock, blasted everything taller than a blade of grass, and people went deaf from the thunder. I guess if you need a god 'mon to bitch at... Palkia?"

"HIS Pearlescent Embessary of Space isn't supposed to be petty enough to be moving choice bits of sky matter to scare us, mere mortals." His chuckle made her rib him. "Alright, fine, I'm spooked, Mr. Unflappable. You're fine. And a troll, but that's how I pick them." She huffed. "The TRIO is supposed to be better than that." She flinched as the lights flickered again. "Not that I'm saying HE might get bored occasionally. But..."

"Maybe it's Pikachu season?" He wondered. Taking the opportunity to get her to curl into him. She steadied in his arms, distracted and comforted.

And that finger was back to tracing, swirling around one particularly thick scar by his wrist. Her strokes slowed as she spoke.

"You're the trainer, not me. Are they?"

"No idea. There are almost nine hundred of these pain-in-the-ass, god-mode capable critters. And you want me to know what gets them in the mood?"

His mind... might be lingering in the gutter a bit today. But with the thrumb of thunder rattling his bones, her warmth, and proximity, it was a recipe to put him in the mood.

A kiss-nip on her shoulder got her to tip her head back with a smile and hum. Her wordless acceptance of his offer of distraction was met with him pressing kisses along her jaw and down her neck. As he worked, her nails continued their patterns along his arms in feigned indifference.

Feigned, because he could feel and hear the uptick in her breathing and pulse. Her muffled, throaty chuckle was sweeter than any Persian's pur.

And her hand was busy. Her nails scraped along his skin in a distracting pattern.

Was she writing something, or doodling? He couldn't tell, but the feathering touch and its attendant edge made him want her more.

With a blistering crack, the lights gave up the ghost. He snarled a soft oath at God because it figured. Spite done, for now, he shifted his grip. Loosened but close enough to be present. He was not going to take advantage of the claustrophobic dark. Because he knew Grace's phobias.

His once coaxing motions turned to steadying. He twined their hands together, interlocking their fingers to still their tremor. Curling so he could press his head into her back, between her shoulders. He felt her shiver in his hold, as thunder spit and snarled above their heads.

He slowed his breathing, humming a familiar tune; his calm cut through her panic.

She followed his lead, no longer on the edge of hysterics, but definitely not happy.

"Sorry... sorry... it's so fucking stupid... I know it's just thunder..."

Distraction. Her panic flicked a sympathetic twinge of nerves over him, and he grabbed the first idea he had and ran with it.

"I'm scared of Garchomp."

She stiffened in shock. Very much aware of the old saw, of a Sakaki never admitting weakness.

And perhaps she wondered where this was going.

Honestly he was wondering himself.

"One of the strongest 'mon in the ground type genome. Why do you think I don't have one? During a Rocket assault," he needed to edit this, quick, "its off the official records..."

It was sloppy as shit, was what it was. But the floodgates were open. She could hear that familiar inflection, a breathy rush that told of his control giving out. He loosened his grip because while she might pick and scratch in her terror, he had a habit of crushing whatever was under his hands. He'd not hurt her. Unfortunately, letting her get free meant that she could turn to him in concern. Coward he was, he closed his eyes as he continued.

"You know I get called in to help with rabid mon?" He felt her nod. "It wasn't feral. It was augmented. This splinter cell of Rocket had gotten hold of a berserk gene, a god complex, and decided to start End Times."

He swallowed and recalled his doctor's advice. That sometimes those horrid things you saw tumbled out, and that if he was safe, to let it.

Here and now, there was nowhere safer. But that didn't mean he didn't feel regret in indulging.

"Pitch dark room... this biped thing that was all spines and soft sand sloughing off. You couldn't breathe when it was near. All you could hear was hissing. That's it, no footsteps, and you couldn't scream. You choked. Everything was muffled. It was twice the size of a man, almost as broad... and it made this awful raspy chitter. It was... talking to itself while it killed. Raving. Tearing through men and 'mon, croaking, "So hungry."

So very hungry.

They both shuddered, and Gio swallowed.

"I'm sorry, it... I was going to make light of it but..."

The truth had tumbled out. A dangerous truth that was almost totally uncensored.

"It happens." She poked him, and he cracked open his eyes. There was nothing but affection undercut by concern. "Gio, the doc said this is going to happen. You had a messy time, we both did. And you," another poke, "bottle things up. That's bad."

He huffed a wordless nonsense noise that he let her decide the meaning of.

Her arch tone and prod told him she was suspicious but she wasn't calling him out on his bullshit, yet.

"You letting it out is good. Is it going to make a mess, yes. Do I care, no."

A look of horror slid across her face, and Giovanni braced himself.

"Seriously, Gio, in all truth... You have nothing on that last super flu. My first year in Scrubs, I thought I could handle anything. And then this mutation moseys out, and it's a real killer. Most of my patients got cramps so bad they were immobilized, a few older folk got broken legs. It was like something from the Dark Ages. There were relentless fevers, and everyone got sick. Young adult, old, child, they just staggered in vomiting... You want to talk about a mess?"

Her tone warbled, a ghost of old suppressed hysteria trying to come to the fore.

"The first round of symptoms was cramps that could snap bones, and add on unrestrained vomiting, and diarrhea. It lasted for seventy-two hours in mild cases. People were coming in with bone bruises, immobility, and were utterly desiccated. We needed an all-hands-on-deck until they were able to modify the vaccine. Everything smelled and tasted like vomit." She swallowed back remembered nausia. Her fingers feathered up his chest, as she used the touch to remember she wasn't there.

That it was now, not then.

As for him, he hadn't been in the Regions. He'd been trapped off the mainland by sheer chance. A famiglia meeting that had been meant to last days, and been nearly half a year per that illness. Being trapped among the swarm of Sakaki's had been it's own hell. He'd ran his affairs remotely, been basically untouched, but he'd lost enough men, lost enough revenue, to know the damage was bad.

Grace's narrative added a fresh hellish skeen to the disaster he'd missed out on by sheer happenstance

"You burned your clothes at the end of the day... And it was damn virulent. You saw the quarantine scrubs, the whole body covering?" He nodded, the news had been controlled but not that controlled. He felt her resultant shiver. "I hated those, not because you got bruises wearing them. You did, everyone did, that wasn't the problem. It was with all those layers you couldn't see anyone. The person next to you could pass out mid-IV. And you wouldn't know why. You'd be left scrambling between a panicking patient and your peer. Not knowing if it was sickness, or exhaustion, or just some older practitioner's heart just giving out from stress."

"That happened." Her voice was tight, old loss, familiar pain at some mentors passing. His hands ran soothing patterns down her back, she let out a shutter sigh. "During the worst, the beginning, when they were yanking doctors out of retirement, the stress would peak and.."

Silence, while both stared unseeing into empty space.

"I know its not a Rocket monster from hell, but it's a sort of proof, you know? I've seen and done things. And if I need to, I can do it again. So... don't hold back. Not for my sake. I'm not glass, I won't break"

Giovanni sighed and repeated the tired mantra for days like this.

"Sometimes it comes out," Then he pecked the top of Grace's head, both a thanks, and an apology. "And I get the sentiment. Thank you for trying."

Lightning rumbled outside, a crackling slash that made him wonder if he shouldn't go to a second-story window and check for two Zapdos going at it.

"I'd really like to get out of Stephen King's head now." Grace whimpered, stiffening against him.

"I could see if anyone in the extended family could arrange someth-" She really was abusing that poor pillow. And him. He'd of felt ill-used if she'd hit, but somehow she managed to miss. He wrested the softness from her for himself, tucking it behind his back. "A simple no would have sufficed."

"No mob jokes."

"You know. Ah ah," his mild scolding kept her from ripping off the sheets. Well, it was her own fault that she was out of pillows. He'd made quite the nest and wasn't budging. "Let me finish... I think I do remember something. Madam Sakaki," Because he'd never lied about what his mother was, Grace was very well aware that his mother had been Kanto's Capo de Capi. He'd had to swear on everything sacred to him he hadn't inherited the title, that she wasn't marrying into some evil Saprano's knock off.

Rocket, not being a monarchy, didn't believe in members inheriting thier rank. So it hadn't been a lie when he told her he wasn't anything like his mother. Either in rank, or personality...

"She had an old picture album,"

Really, if the lightning didn't let up, he was going to poke his head out and see if some stock horror villain was nattering about bringing a cadaver to life...

And if there wasn't a better sign, a better atmosphere to fit the mood, he couldn't think of one. The beginning of a horror film, and Madam Sakaki, the ideas fit together like a hand in a glove.

"I can't guarantee "no mob", but I can promise most of them are old enough to be safely mocked without fear of retribution. Most of them likely being dead..."

She gnawed her lip, outre morals wrestling with boredom and fear. Finally curiosity pushed through, giving her enough wiggle room for her to hang her scruples. And perhaps indulge in gossip against old mobsters centuries dead.

"You have a deal."

It was the best one he'd gotten all week.
 
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K_S

Unrepentent Giovanni and Rocket fan
Villian-tines,
prompt number 26
A book, part 2




He'd had to go to the basement. Part to ensure the generator for the fridge and emergency line was working properly, part to root through a few boxes in the back. There were, to his surprise, some old Sakaki keepsakes among the deeds and dated deals. Nothing incriminating, mainly a few odd and end things that he felt like someone had just dumped half a desk into his packing while his back was turned.

He found the black-bound book halfway in.

A quick flip proved it to be part photo album, part scrapbook. Nothing dangerous caught his attention as he skimmed. The back was a glued-together mess, but besides that oddity, nothing stood out. He tucked it under his arm and rooted out an odd decoration to take its place.

Because the book had been holding down someone else's tax reports. A quick skim found them to be Zio Sal's. What the man was doing, owning a bakery when he couldn't boil water, was not Giovanni's business. What was, was that the base of the papers was starting to rise. Alarmingly. Like an accordion compressing in reverse.

Making a mental note to have a burn day, before the bakery papers roused to sentience, Giovanni headed out.

Persian, the brat, had been napping down below. Making her regal presence known among the dust bunnies and topmost boxes. Smoothing the hair she'd swatted when he dared to get too close to her lofty perch, Giovanni left her to it.

The unrepentant cat wasn't one to tolerate being ignored. She hopped down from her perch of old Sakaki odd and ends with the grace of a drunken donphan. All thumping and thudding despite her speicies supposed grace and elegence. Her last jump caused a box to topple.

Its fall was marked with a glassy "tink a link" of something breaking. Mobster and feline froze. Waiting.

When Grace didn't hollar about the ruckus Giovanni glared down at Persian. Clearly the decade old soundproofing had held, saving thier asses. But did she appreciate his effort, or find something like repenence?

Nope.

Sure the ruckus was done Persian flicked her ears up. The fuzzy brat looked up at him, eyes half lidded, licking a paw. When he left, she followed. Meowing at his heels, mewing about everything but an apology. And because of that, he ignored her nudge, the mute request for a good petting.

Used to being ignored when she was being a little demon, Persian murred under her breath about head scratches and treats from Grace.

A snarl from the sky kicked up while Gio was locking the basement door behind him. Persian, as cats did popcorned. That fun feat of going from standing to flying straight up in a perfect vertical jump that ended in her landing with her claws drawn. Each leg thumped and clicked heavily on impact.

Ears pinned back in alarm, Persian glared at him, clearly blaming him for Mother Nature's shenanigans.

Or perhaps for not warning her.

Well she'd been a demon, and no one ever could accuse a Sakaki of being nice.

Persian yowled like a Legend was breaking in through the window. Barrelling down the halls, up the stairs, like a fuzzy klaxon. Tail poofed and raised like a broken flag to declare her surrender to the world.

Snorting, Gio picked a slower path to the bedroom. All Persian had to do was appologize. He'd open the basement and she could go back down to being oblivious. But no. Off she went to get snuggles from Grace.

Stupid cat.

Grace pulled her attention from the quivering Persian that was trying to meld into her side when he strolled in. A ghost of her old curiosity lit her eyes as she tipped her head at him.

"I found it."

"Is that the Necronomicon?"

He'd read Lovecraft and got that reference, thank you very much. As a reward for his labors, he might have taken the softest blanket from the bed-nest and bundled in. Glaring at the woman and cat from his nook of warmth, like an angry kakunna.

"If I say sorry, will you share?"

There had been a spill between him coming and going. Sheets were stripped and pushed out of the way. She'd made do with what hadn't been soaked, but from her shiver, it wasn't enough.

So much for avoiding laundry.

He considered Grace and Persian; both were employing their infernal puppy eyes. He glared at them and crunched up among the folds.

Grace's hands found the edge of his sanctuary and started tugging and prodding at the seams.

"If you let me in, you'll be warmer." Lies. If she left him alone, he would stop getting cold air coming in. "And you can share and care your vampire book-"

He rolled his eyes, unfolded the edge, and acquired a Grace lamprey as a result.

Persian could damm well take her cat pillow at the foot of the bed, and like it.

To be... completely fair... the "vampire book" seemed to have been started back when cameras weren't a thing. It was done backwards. Starting in near pre-history, and became more modern as it went. Pages had been added in, though how Giovanni had no clue.

The artist hired for the first few generations of Sakaki had taken the idea of somber and monochrome to whole new levels. And the Sakaki's within seemed to have an unhealthy obsession with dark colors.

"Seriously," Grace drawled, "why does everyone look like a vampire?"

Pointedly not looking too closely at the teeth of a distant uncle, Giovanni hummed. "There must be some Sakaki genetic inclination towards wearing black."

"That level of bad taste better be a recessive trait."

If Grace were raised as a Sakaki... well, Giovanni might have feared for his manhood. As it was, her insinuations warmed him better than the best scotch and a blazing fireplace. Toes curling in pleasure, his answering smirk was tender.

Before she could decide if she wanted to take him up on that unspoken offer, Persian decided to flaunt her nesting instincts. Indulging a slinky sort of kneed woth a Theif twist. The result was one stolen pillow and sheet, and the feline twisted into a snug cat croissant at the foot of the bed.p

More than familiar with the cat's "it's raining, and I don't care" facade, Giovanni ignored the show. He had Grace in his arms, something to read, and mercifully, the thunder was on the decline.

A few pages later and he had to wonder if he hadn't screwed his eventual children with some prophecy. There wasn't a lick of anything other than an accent in white or red. It looked like he was seeing a procession of great-aunt and uncle funerals. if it hadn't been for the text scribbled around each shot he wouldn't of.guessed the shots were the acknowledgment of births or family gatherings.

"Did you notice, no one's smiling?"

Hm. That was an interesting contrast between Grace's "books" and this one. But it was an easy one to explain.

"Sakaki gatherings are somber events." Gio mimed Nona's inflection since such shrillness was beyond him. "Men are meant to be sober, loyal, and strict."

"Ung." Grace stilled her relentless burrowing into his side. "You hear this bull, uterus? You need to damn well reject these genes he's talking about. Girdle those eggs. Or no more fun times. Ever. I swear it."

He laughed, and if she took advantage of that to steal a pillow back. Well, it was his fault for indulging, and he was more than capable of adjusting her position, despite her protests, and making her serve in place for what she stole.

As the text became more modern, he started to recognize people beyond obscure, historically inaccurate one-liners. In the areas where he recognized the handwriting, the purpose of documentation had changed.

Pictures, some candid, some formal, stood beside a folded paper that, when teased open, proved to be a death certificate. In a few cases, the papers were several pages long. A few were even a medical examiner's uncensored reports.

After a few pages of this, Grace stopped. "Gio, we aren't reading your mom's "hit" book, are we?"

He... couldn't believe the Madam would be that stupid... this could be something as mild as her notating everyone's deaths so she could savor the ones she hated without drawing attention to her sport...

A sort of feel-good indulgence for the depraved...

But Sal's picture blew a hole in that. A candid hospital shot where he'd been recuperating from having two broken arms and a broken leg. He was awake in the shot, his cast-bound leg raised insanely high on its sling. There wasn't a nurse in sight, or a doctor, or anyone. Just the old mobster, who wasn't that old in this shot. The injured Sal was possibly younger than Giovanni was now. The Made Man's wounds were fresh, his eyes wide and glazed.

"He can't have been seeing visitors. Not with his eyes like that. He's drugged to the gills."

"Probably best we don't know anything else," Giovanni warned.

He turned a page and saw two little girls. Arm in arm, dressed in their Sunday best and trying to look sober. Their sparkling black eyes told tales. The littlest was nine, the other fifteen.

It took him a long moment to recognize Gemma and her little sister Saphrina on the page. The eldest was long gone, the youngest a fresher loss. Dead at twenty-one, at least if the gossip was right.

It felt positively alien to realize that he was older than his big niece Gemma, that he'd outlived her and her spitfire of a younger sister. He was older than them both now. He flipped through a few pages to see if Saphrina's kids were within but the book was too out of date to tell that tale. The first few pages were blocks of bound papers, a near pouch of documentation in... binary? The code was too thick for him to understand. So he ignored it, flicking back to familiar pastures.

Grace took the hand not holding the book, twined their fingers. They leaned against each other, looking at the picture of those two girls for a very long time. She knew of Gemma, the young woman was one of the few familgia members that had a picture in Giovanni's home, on his personal work desk, no less.

"You know, if you want to know, you could just call."

Grace was a smart thing, having sussed the reason for his flipping ahead, though he hadn't said a word. But her solution was more than it seemed. More than an insultingly easy phone call.

Saphrina had overt ties to the Mob. Grace's encouragement to reach out was an offer to mutely tolerate the social fallout of that contact. And, in theory, it might even work. But there were more than just Kanto law enforcement to consider.

With a sigh, Giovanni shook his head, moved to turn a page. "I went legit. Barring Executives and the Madam, the rest of the famiglia won't have a thing to do with me... and being around them would be..." He could imagine the shrill screams of P.R. Worse, any smirching of his name was an invitation for the police to all but move in.

Between the scuffles Grace had kicked up during her wild social justice crusade years and Giovanni's... well, everything... the police and the Sakaki's in close proximity were not a good combination. To put it very mildly.

He huffed, and she released his off hand to pin the one twiddling the page.

"You know, when I was younger, it didn't bother me. But now, sometimes, it does."

She took the book and turned back to the girls that had been told not to smile. He wished they had dared to defy that order. Seeing them happy would have been nice.

"Tell me about them?"

"Gemma and Saphrina Sakaki Corosso were sisters in arms. Hell-bent on breaking the mind of every sbario they could."

Until Gemma couldn't, a bullet in the head ending her career stupid young. Saphrina had carried on the proud Sakaki cause of being a royal pain in the authorities' ass. Skirting that fine line between brave and stupid until an encounter with police brutality had left her unable to walk.

Oh, she'd recovered, but after?

She'd been too scared to carry on after that.

"So if I'd seen them during my civil unrest days?"

Grace had attended protests and rallies against everything corrupt she could. Hell, she'd even had a record in corporate circles.

That'd been a fun find.

During his giving her a tour of one of his legit businesses, his head of civilian security had barged in like a Tauros with its tails on fire. Giovanni had gone from placid tour guide to grim Made Man in moments. Expecting to hear that they were under attack by some upstart anti-Rocket insurrection. The commotion had much tamer roots, thank God.

It was just the man having a fit. The head of security had seen Grace on the cameras, and he remembered the fiery red head with her silver colored eyes. The story had come out around a slew of widely inappropriate, angry posturing. The guard had claimed that Grace had assaulted him during a protest against Viridian co'.

Grace's defense had been lackluster at best. She'd accidentally dropped the sign. It'd been heavy.

Surprised at that spot of rather passive aggressiveness, Giovanni had given his fiancée a long, long look. She hadn't elaborated. Or amended her words to become an actual apology.

Knowing Grace... each facet of her behaviour was damning.

"I have everything under control," he'd soothed the irate guard. "And I'll personally oversee her conduct. You have nothing to worry about."

Part curiosity, part to shut the man up, Giovanni did some independent research. It had resolved to be one of those fun social upheavals during his early days as an entrepreneur. He'd nominally owned the company, inherited it in the upheval of his mother's death, and promptly forgot about it during his league training days.

It'd been Madam Sakaki's pride and joy.

Suffice to say its practices were overtly evil and wasteful. Enough so the locals, mainly stereotypical conflict avoident Kantoese, had raised hell.

Grace, and fifty other young adults (a sprinkling of do-gooders, ex-employees, and families thereof) had waged a mudslinging war with both the intellectual property the company produced as well as one noisome CEO. Going over the man's files, Giovanni found himself agreeing with the picketters. The CEO should have been shot, rather than allowed power over anyone.

A quick perusal found he had been killed in prison, which took that chore out of the Rocket's hands..

As a whole, the disgraced business had been a slew of greedy bastards.

And that observation was coming from him.

They'd been an economic blight in their time. Chugging down every resource they could. Likely realizing, as he cleaned house, that they were near the top of his to-do list and...

And the attendant incident report, when things had hit boiling point, was one of those grey things. Yes, there'd technically been an assault. One of the kids of the protestors had chucked mud balls. Yes, the security teams should have been rotated out to prevent them from lashing out due to unresolved stress, but Giovanni had had no clue things were this dire.

The end result was a mini-riot that ended with his security head having to take a mandatory leave of absence due to a concussion. Grace hadn't dropped a sign; she'd used it to break out of the scuffle because someone had armed the unarmed guards with illegal guns.

Recalling that fun aspect of Grace's pre-winning career, Giovanni smirked.

"If there was a chance to throw something, anything, at a copper, Gemma would have had your back."

"How was her aim?"

He made a so-so motion with a hand.

"She once tossed her pokeball with a sirviper, fumbled, and hit herself in the head with it. The ball released the snake on her back."

The snake had gone full constrict mode the second he was out of his pokeball... It'd taken three adult Sakaki's to pry Gemma out of her beast's loops.

"You know, she got me into training?"

"You mean you weren't born riding a rabid rhyhorn?"

Giovanni laughed. "The madam wasn't that deprived."

Not quite, but it was a very near thing.
 
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Hello there! Here I am for your catnip reviews and here's to a nice day or night!

Part 1:

Giovanni and Grace, a villains-tine story. Y'know, it took me until now to realise the title's suppose to be a play on words with valentine and I'm ashamed that I didn't figure it out earlier.

Anywho, the story starts off pretty neatly, a cute little cosy room with rain and thunder outside. Giovanni and Grace (who's an OC, right? 'cause I can't remember if she was an official character or not) snuggle up and enjoy each other's company and getting a bit... frisky. But then boom, thunder rolls in and cuts the power.

Having the both of them trauma dump and bonding because of said dump is just so cute. Was a really adorable scene when Giovanni tried reassuring her by sharing one of his fears and it really shows just how much he trusts Grace. I really really enjoy this scene, excluding the contents of said trauma.

The trauma between them was certainly scary. I like that Grace's trauma is a lot more... well grounded, something that has a lot more realism than Giovanni's and it really bounces off after the monstrous Garchomp story and I have to say it does an amazing job detailing just how horrific unknown diseases can be and the terror of being a first responder isolated from the rest of the world for months. 9/10 would recommend.

Part 2:

A nice little conclusion to this 2 parter. Giovanni's, his fiancée and his big kitty relaxing and reminiscing over family history.

I like the nice, cosy and wholesome vibe that the chapter provided despite the characters talking about Giovanni's er... crime-oriented family. And the content about Giovanni's history was pretty interesting though I'm a bit lost on some of it... I'm assuming it's probably because this is supposed to tie in with your main fic or something.

But anyway, I enjoyed this little fic and its cute, cosy vibe so let's head on to my line-by-line comments:

Lightning snapped it's electric fingers along the cloud banks
Wrong 'its'
Watching the subdued panicked digging from his pourch.
Misspelled 'porch'?
When the downfall came, it skipped Meowths and Growlithes stage and jumped right into the Persians and Arcanines.
Ooh, I like this Pokémon-fied saying, easily able to make it even harsher by evolving said Mon, really cool
Today's finished his cup, and sliped in.
Misspelled 'slipped'?
The Sakaki's had indulged intamency with a bit of a childish twist.
Misspelled 'intimacy'?
Lazing in a comfortable twining of flesh, pillows, and blankets that might of resembled a pillow fort in certain right.
The correct word here is 'might have' or "might've"
They squeaked through existence on the merest of technicalities. There were the requisite covers and pages, everything was glossy, glaringly so. If there was a word to encapsulate them, "shiney" would have been in the top four spot.
Very rich person vibes, eh? What's next? Sipping some red wine and smoking cigarettes?
And her explanation, that they didn't mean anything at all, left him bemused. What was the point of it then?
Well, obviously, Mr Giovanni sir. It's to make the kids feel good about themselves and motivate them. Have you truly never have someone reward ya for a good deed? That's kinda sad if so
Spite had carried her through rigorous training. Getting her first 'mon, a Meowth, and permission to battle at a stupid young age, she'd been eager to get out and train.
Spite, one of humanity's greatest motivators. Wonder how far it alone will take her
One scratch attack later, because meowth weren't shy in slashing up their trainers, Grace decided that rivalries were stupid. She was going to run a 'mon petting zoo. Soft, fluffy, not bity things, were more her speed. And training, and trainers, could go rot.
Oh okay, lol. Nvm, she instantly gave up
And Andre, because that man and that man's charmeleon were insepertable.
Misspelled 'inseparable'
How that ambition had changed to nursing was quite the mystery.
I mean, it's not too far fetched to imagine it's because: Little girl + Cute things = Taking care of cute things then maturity fucks everything up
There was this fun thing called a "medi-experience share", and when someone equipped with that was passed a "degree stone"...
Lol? Is that how Nurse Joys were born? Via 'degree stones'?
Do you think there's... like a... Zapdos up there who's done the 'mon equivalent of hit the sultry music, got his girlfriend over, and they're doing love loops or something to make baby Zapdos over our heads?"
Wh-why the hell is that the first thing that goes into your mind?
I guess if you need a god 'mon to bitch at... Palkia?
I would've thought Lugia would be the next best mon for weather stuff
Alright, fine, I'm spooked, Mr. Unflapable. You're fine. And a troll, but that's how I pick them." She
Misspelled 'unflappable'
There are almost nine hundred of these pain-in-the-ass, god-mode capable critters. And you want me to know what gets them in the mood?"
Well over a thousand now actually, if you include the regional forms, megas and gigantamax
During a Rocket assault," he needed to edit this, quick, "It's off the official records..."
Period, capitalised and non-capitalised as there's a comma to continue the dialogue
Being trapped among the swarm of Sakaki's had been it's own hell
Wrong 'its'
He'd ran his affairs remotely,
Wrong 'run'
Grace's narrative added a fresh hellish skeen to the disaster he'd missed out on by sheer hapstance.
Misspelled 'happenstance' ... also if all of this misspellings were supposed to be because of Gio's accent then uh, you can ignore them I guess
""You burned your clothes at the end of the day... And it was damn virulent. You saw the quarantine scrubs, the whole body covering?"
An extra quotation mark
Because he'd never lied about what his mother was, Grace was very well awaretaht his mother had been Kanto's Capo de Capi.
Misspelled 'that' and missing a space
Rocket, not being a monarchy, didn't believe in it's members inheriting thier rank.
Wrong 'its' and misspelled 'their'
"You have a deal."
Nice little end to the trauma bonding, amazing couple goals here!

Part 2
What the man was doing, owning a bakery when he couldn't boil water, was not Giovanni's business
He was either money laundering or just plain stupid
Ears pinned back in alarm, Persian glared at him, clearly blaming him for Mother Nature's shenanigans.
Big adorable kitty
He considered Grace and Persian; both were employing their infernal puppy eyes. He glared at them and crunched up among the folds.
Stoic, cold mafia leader on the outside, heart of gold on the inside
" Men are meant to be sober, loyal, and strict."
Extra space here.

And alright, I'm done here! Twas a fun, cutesy read that warmed my heart. So see ya and have a nice rest of your day!
 
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K_S

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Hi realized i missed this, lets get to fixing that...

Hello there! Here I am for your catnip reviews and here's to a nice day or night!

Part 1:

Giovanni and Grace, a villains-tine story. Y'know, it took me until now to realise the title's suppose to be a play on words with valentine and I'm ashamed that I didn't figure it out earlier.

Its home base/old version/origin point actually spells it out and its a valentines day prompt... but still undrtstandable...

Anywho, the story starts off pretty neatly, a cute little cosy room with rain and thunder outside. Giovanni and Grace (who's an OC, right? 'cause I can't remember if she was an official character or not) snuggle up and enjoy each other's company and getting a bit... frisky. But then boom, thunder rolls in and cuts the power.

Grace is a ofc of mine who pans out to be Silvers mom in much later fics... so, yes shes a new face.

Gio hates the electricity sub type so very very much right now.

Having the both of them trauma dump and bonding because of said dump is just so cute.

They both have issues. They both are healing from it together, its just they are wildly different issues.

Feel for thier marriage counciler. The mans not paid nearly enough.

Was a really adorable scene when Giovanni tried reassuring her by sharing one of his fears and it really shows just how much he trusts Grace. I really really enjoy this scene, excluding the contents of said trauma.

Glad it caught your warm fuzzies. They both love and trust each other (almoat) implicitly. Gio has his secrets (his mob background thst hes been slowly easing out of) as does grace (mainly her homelife which gio kinda knows about but shes not ready to really talk about it yet) they just have scalds of trauma, and, happily a system to deal with it.

Because these adults are responsibly adulting damn it. Theyve lived too much of others not stepping up so they try to do it right..

The trauma between them was certainly scary. I like that Grace's trauma is a lot more... well grounded, something that has a lot more realism than Giovanni's and it really bounces off after the monstrous Garchomp story and I have to say it does an amazing job detailing just how horrific unknown diseases can be and the terror of being a first responder isolated from the rest of the world for months. 9/10 would recommend.

Well thier life experiences are wildky different. But theyre trying to understand and support each other. Glad it got a 9/10.



Part 2:

A nice little conclusion to this 2 parter.

Actually theres 2 more parts theyre just i.p.

Giovanni's, his fiancée and his big kitty relaxing and reminiscing over family history.

And again bonding despite the differences.

I like the nice, cosy and wholesome vibe that the chapter provided despite the characters talking about Giovanni's er... crime-oriented family.

Gios kinda inseperatble from that element for the moment. So they touxh base on it pretty often..

Grace was no saint either.

That riot is the tio of an iceburg that Grace tactfully obscures under jer referals as "political activism".

I suspect had Gemma lived her and Grace woukd of been BFFs much to Gios horror.


And the content about Giovanni's history was pretty interesting though I'm a bit lost on some of it... I'm assuming it's probably because this is supposed to tie in with your main fic or something.

Its a long running series so yeah.

But anyway, I enjoyed this little fic and its cute, cosy vibe so let's head on to my line-by-line comments:

Thanks for taking the time to lwt me know i'll incorperate it in later in an edit session!

Wrong 'its'

Misspelled 'porch'?

Ooh, I like this Pokémon-fied saying, easily able to make it even harsher by evolving said Mon, really cool

Misspelled 'slipped'?

Misspelled 'intimacy'?

The correct word here is 'might have' or "might've"

Very rich person vibes, eh? What's next? Sipping some red wine and smoking cigarettes?
If left alone gio does do so. Grace doesnt mind the smoking. But the wine makes his kisses taste bad so hes had to cut back.

Well, obviously, Mr Giovanni sir. It's to make the kids feel good about themselves and motivate them. Have you truly never have someone reward ya for a good deed? That's kinda sad if so

Candidly he hasnt.

Spite, one of humanity's greatest motivators. Wonder how far it alone will take her

Oh okay, lol. Nvm, she instantly gave up

Misspelled 'inseparable'

I mean, it's not too far fetched to imagine it's because: Little girl + Cute things = Taking care of cute things then maturity fucks everything up

Lol? Is that how Nurse Joys were born? Via 'degree stones'?

Per the nurses in Viridian gen, yes.

Wh-why the hell is that the first thing that goes into your mind?

Because it can?

I would've thought Lugia would be the next best mon for weather stuff

Gio seriously wouldnt expect of know anything about lugia at this point. Hes kantoian thro and thro.

Misspelled 'unflappable'

Well over a thousand now actually, if you include the regional forms, megas and gigantamax

Cue gio taking a drink at that thought.

Period, capitalised and non-capitalised as there's a comma to continue the dialogue

Wrong 'its'

Wrong 'run'

Misspelled 'happenstance' ... also if all of this misspellings were supposed to be because of Gio's accent then uh, you can ignore them I guess

No. Its because grammerly catches 80% of my flubs, not 100 of then

An extra quotation mark

Misspelled 'that' and missing a space

Wrong 'its' and misspelled 'their'

Nice little end to the trauma bonding, amazing couple goals here!

Part 2

He was either money laundering or just plain stupid

Its Sal, stupid is the only option.

Big adorable kitty

Stoic, cold mafia leader on the outside, heart of gold on the inside

Only to a tiny select few.

Extra space here.
And alright, I'm done here! Twas a fun, cutesy read that warmed my heart. So see ya and have a nice rest of your day!
Thanks for dropping a line.
 

canisaries

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Hey there! Here for Catnip. I've read Part 1, and here are my thoughts.

When the downfall came, it skipped Meowths and Growlithes stage and jumped right into the Persians and Arcanines.
This is a cute spin on the phrase of "raining cats and dogs", going even further than just substituting cats and dogs with Pokemon and making them evolve to sell how strong the rain has become.

Though books were a generous term.

They squeaked through existence on the merest of technicalities. There were the requisite covers and pages, everything was glossy, glaringly so. If there was a word to encapsulate them, "shiny" would have been in the top four spot.
There were a couple of lines that threw me off in this chapter due to the odd word choices and sentence structures in a few places, but I think this bolded one actually made me confused. Saying "this book is barely a book" makes sense, but "this book is so little like a book that it barely exists in reality itself, as a book or any other entity" sounds like a madman's ravings. And Giovanni's not really acting anywhere near that level of insane in the rest of the chapter.

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So, my difficulties with parsing the prose aside, I did like the content of this chapter itself. I like the banter between Giovanni and Grace, and all the little details that are given about their lives make this seem like a glimpse into what is actually a much larger whole.

Giovanni, as I recall pointing out in some other review on this series, is characterized kind of differently from how he usually is in fic and I'm not yet sure if he leans more towards smooth mafia man with a code of honor or psychopath, but his feelings for Grace do seem to be genuine, especially considering he opened up about the Garchomp story (loved the Garchomp story, by the way) and put himself in a vulnerable position.

That's all I really have. Good luck in writing onward, and see you around.
 

K_S

Unrepentent Giovanni and Rocket fan
Hey there! Here for Catnip. I've read Part 1, and here are my thoughts.

Thanks for dropping a line!

This is a cute spin on the phrase of "raining cats and dogs", going even further than just substituting cats and dogs with Pokemon and making them evolve to sell how strong the rain has become.

Each Regions got a varient if they got a kitty and dog mon duo or equivulant. Glad you liked it.

There were a couple of lines that threw me off in this chapter due to the odd word choices and sentence structures in a few places, but I think this bolded one actually made me confused. Saying "this book is barely a book" makes sense, but "this book is so little like a book that it barely exists in reality itself, as a book or any other entity" sounds like a madman's ravings. And Giovanni's not really acting anywhere near that level of insane in the rest of the chapter.

Gios kinda feeling a bit unhinged w his first blush with kiddie academia.

He really really hates that book year book. He hissed at daisy when she exposed him to a comic book. Him getting a bit deraineged at media that isnt bor8ng as hell and or educational, size font 13, single type, and hyper realistic is a long running thing in his tales.

I'll have to make that clearer and yone down his foaming at the mouth...


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So, my difficulties with parsing the prose aside, I did like the content of this chapter itself. I like the banter between Giovanni and Grace, and all the little details that are given about their lives make this seem like a glimpse into what is actually a much larger whole.

Nice that it didnt feel too out there despite being pretty late game in thier story...

Giovanni, as I recall pointing out in some other review on this series, is characterized kind of differently from how he usually is in fic and I'm not yet sure if he leans more towards smooth mafia man with a code of honor or psychopath, but his feelings for Grace do seem to be genuine, especially considering he opened up about the Garchomp story (loved the Garchomp story, by the way) and put himself in a vulnerable position.

In the MANGA if its someone he cares for hes actually incredibly kind/considerate ect. Hes less sociopathic, but pretty egotistical... but he's wiling to choke down sadi pride for his long term goals.

I think the end of this story will 100% show why he is as he is and his moral stances... if you finish it youll have to let me know.


That's all I really have. Good luck in writing onward, and see you around.

As always a pleasuer
 
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K_S

Unrepentent Giovanni and Rocket fan
Villian-tines,
prompt number 26
A book, part 3



The pearly gates were not meant for him. He had no doubts about his final destination in the hereafter. So like any good thief, he stole what bits of paradise he could.


Comfortable, cocooned in warmth, Grace nestled against his side; there was little more he could ask for. Persian lay at thier feet, purring in her sleep. A tame pseudo thunder that drowned out the last gasps of the dwindling storm.


It was his turn. They'd passed the time trading tales. A benign back and forth that had him breaking down a distant scam one childhood ago.


Gemma, himself, and an infant Saph' were pulling the "child is crying, help us" card. Well, he and Gemma were. Saph was unfortunately encouraged to scream as the older kids had alternated between subtly pinching her and rocking the baby with artfully panicked faces to sell the scam.


Unfortunatly Saph' was loud. So the panic hadn't been all an act.


They nearly went deaf to get a shot at the wares of a rather upscale cioccolateria. And the torture had been compounded by the old woman who ran the place. She'd been a cold-hearted thing that had no empathy for a howling baby and panicky pre-adolescents.


"Deaf, really?" Grace hummed, twiddling pages in her fingers as he talked.


"I had tenitis for two days after." Giovanni griped. "And it had seemed worth it at the time."


"Mhm, and what'd you learn from all that?"


"Don't rob old mobster shops, they make all thier displays out of bulletproof glass." At Grace's prompt to "think harder," he added. "Also, crutches can't break open bulletproof glass, no matter how hard you swing."


Grace let out a low snort, quipped a line about how she would have paid to see him pulling a Tiny Tim. There'd been some payback delivered via pillow. But after, they settled into thier places, a bit breathless and short a pillow. Persian, the lazy girl, slept through it all.


"Now, where was I?"


"Explaining why Seph' understandably subliminally hates you?"


The flick of pages under her fingers added an interesting undertone to her sarcasm.


"One, she does not." Did not, would have been truer to reality. But for now, he ignored the proper tense. "She was perfectly fine after I slipped her some caramel. Second, we are jumping too far ahead."


"Not my fault..."


Grace was too old to sing-song. But then Giovanni was too old to instigate a pillow fight. As long as she wouldn't tell, he wouldn't.

The soft hiss zip of her fingers teasing the edges of the book helped Gio gather his thoughts. No, he hadn't been dressed as Tiny Tim, thank you very much. But making papier-mache look like a plaster cast had taken hours. While he went on to explain how Gemma had pulled that off, it was to the background music of rustling and purrs.


While many would have viewed the fact that Grace was aimlessly turning pages as he talked as her being distracted, he knew better. It wasn't indifference. Grace was always toying with something. The habit had taken some getting used to, but now served as a sort of barometer for her temper and interest.


The sound stilled a bit as her fingers got caught in the back block of coded text. Between sewn-in pouches, overstuffed with folded papers, brick might have been a better term. Still, her warning that he'd better not teach any of their kids that trick had a firm, tapped, staccato beat accompanying it.


Grinning like a loon. Because the idea of "Kids' was intoxicating beyond belief, he promised he wouldn't. It was an easy thing to offer. The scam was too reliant on too many variables. It required three bodies minimum, one of which was an infant. Unless Grace was willing to have that many kids in succession, it was an unfeasible ploy to pull off.


"I swear you're going to have to go through an ethics class before we even have one, Mr. Variables..."


The book was leveled at him like an accusatory finger. Before Giovanni could suggest she wield something else, anything else besides his family historia, gravity took matters out of thier hands. The staples, pins, and sewing, decades old and poorly executed, came apart mid-scolding gesture.


The result was the book dumped half a novella between the two.


Persian woke with an irritated "Murr" and rolled off the bed to leave the two stupid humans to thier nestmaking.


"Ah crap..." Grace winced at the disaster of mangled, encrypted papers. A quick flick through the book showed the photos were undisturbed.


"Merda indeed." Giovanni sighed, taking the book back and tucking it under his arm. "Well, I'm sure you, in your moral superiority, won't mind handling clean up?"


Grace groaned, but nodded. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to..."


"Grace," A firm tone bellied the soft peck on her lips. It was the kindest way to stop a spiral he's learned. "Sort it, burn it, I don't care. Just get it off the bed before I get back, alright?"


Gathering the laundry from earlier spills and feathers from other activities, he left her to it.


The last glance he had of her on leaving was her sheepishly sifting through the mess, her embarrassment slowly being felled by a familiar expression of frustration. Unrepentant bibliophile, he understood. Not being able to tell page one from another could be frustrating, but being born and raised in the Mob, he knew a deeper truth.


Sometimes it was best not to know.


Letting the Madam's little secret die with her... It was both a feasible and appealing option. If the mess was there when he got back, he'd do the job himself.


"Burning is an option, Grace, the fire is right there." He reminded gently, then he was closing the door on his way out.
 
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okay so Giovanni standing on his porch sipping his drink watching his ground types frantically dig flood trenches in a storm. not helping. just watching. making sure Sandslash doesnt flood his house and mentally noting that Nidoqueen is slow today and should probably get a checkup. tomorrow tho. tomorrow Giovanni's problem

So he went in, and let his lessers wallow in anxiety and wet both.

"lessers." he thought that about his own pokemon and then went inside to build a pillow fort with his wife LOL

the tonal whiplash between Made Man Energy and "cozy blanket nest on a king sized bed" is so good??

the school photo album stuff is really cute. Grace going through all these faces and Giovanni having never seen a school photo album before in his life. and her explaination of how she became a nurse being just... fake pokemon mechanics?

There was this fun thing called a "medi-experience share", and when someone equipped with that was passed a "degree stone"...

mhmmm

girl got scratched by one meowth and went "rivalries are stupid im gonna run a petting zoo" and then SOMEHOW ended up as a nurse and she will NOT tell him how. Giovanni going "thats not how stone evolution works" while shes making stuff up is so funny

the alarm clock scene made be chuckle. Grace slaps it, hits the WRONG button, it screams back to life, she rips the cord out of the wall, Giovanni dives to save the snack tray - and its HER clock that she refuses to replace

which!!

the Zapdos bit. Grace is scared of the storm so she copes by going "do you think theres a Zapdos up there hitting the sultry music trying to make baby Zapdos" and Giovanni SERIOUSLY considers the logistics. "theres not enough discharge for one Zapdos much less two." sir she was not asking for a scientific assessment

:3

okay but the Garchomp scene

god.

"Pitch dark room... this biped thing that was all spines and soft sand sloughing off. You couldn't breathe when it was near. All you could hear was hissing. That's it, no footsteps, and you couldn't scream. You choked. Everything was muffled. It was twice the size of a man, almost as broad... and it made this awful raspy chitter. It was... talking to itself while it killed. Raving. Tearing through men and 'mon, croaking, "So hungry.""

this is the best writing in the chapter and its not close. the sensory detail is genuinely horrifying - you cant breathe you cant scream everything is muffled and this thing is just CHATTERING to itself while it kills. "So hungry."

sobs

and he started this as a calculated distraction for Grace right? like he was gonna share a cute sanitized anecdote and then the floodgates opened and actual uncensored trauma came pouring out. he closed his eyes because he couldnt look at her while he said it ;c;

"I know its not a Rocket monster from hell, but it's a sort of proof, you know? I've seen and done things. And if I need to, I can do it again. So... don't hold back. Not for my sake. I'm not glass, I won't break"

;c;;;

and Grace matches him. shes like okay you had a berserk gene Garchomp killing people in the dark?? well i had a pandemic where cramps snapped peoples bones and my coworkers died mid-shift inside quarantine suits where you couldnt even SEE anyone collapse. dont hold back on my account buddy im built different

i wonder if he ever tells her the full uncensored version tho? like he caught himself editing mid-sentence - "its off the offical records" - does she know about the Rocket parts or does she just know he saw something terrible?

the ending is sweet. Giovanni remembering some old book from his first flight to Nonas as a little kid and Grace's morals wreslting with boredom and fear before she agrees to gossip about dead mobsters LOL. "you have a deal" is a good line to end on honestly

man... two scared people on a stormy day reaching for old ghosts. thats a good setup for parts 2 and 3

the prose is dense - sometimes the clauses stack up and i had to reread a couple sentances? but it kinda works for Giovanni's headspace where everything gets filtered through assessment and calculation. also two people in a room for a whole chapter and i never got bored?? idk how you pull that off but it works :D

i noticed some grammer issues btw! here u go!

- "vetrens" > veterans
- "Unfortunatly" > Unfortunately
- "it's own hell" > its own hell (possessive, no apostrophe)
- "familgia" > famiglia
- "thier" > their
- "skeen" > skein


ill be working on part 2 and 3 2morow!
 
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rimly

mini-blitz in a bottle
Location
a pocket dimension
Pronouns
They/She
the basement trip LOL. Giovanni goes down there for the generator and the book and Persian is just. napping on the boxes like a queen. he gets too close and she swats him and then follows him around meowing about everything EXCEPT an apology


A snarl from the sky kicked up, and the cat popped. Going from standing to flying straight up in a perfect vertical jump that ended in her landing with her claws drawn.


the VERTICAL JUMP. and then she just bolts down the hallway with her tail poofed "like a broken flag to declare surrender" yowling like a Legend is breaking in through the window. to go get snuggles from Grace. this cat has decided thunder is Giovannis fault and i respect that


which!!


Grace sees the old black book and immediately goes "is that the Necronomicon?" and honestly fair LOL. and then Giovanni steals the softest blanket and wraps himself up "like an angry kakunna" and Grace is trying to negotiate her way in like hey if you let me in youll be warmer. and hes like. fine. and immediately acquires a Grace lamprey. and Persian makes herself into a cat croissant at the foot of the bed. this is SO cozy


"Seriously," Grace drawled, "why does everyone look like a vampire?"


the family portraits are killing me. generations of Sakakis in all black and no one smiling and Grace is just roasting them


"That level of bad taste better be a recessive trait."


Grace i love you


mhmmm


"You hear this bull, uterus? You need to damn well reject these genes he's talking about. Girdle those eggs. Or no more fun times. Ever. I swear it."


Grace threatening her own uterus because of Giovannis family fashion sense. this woman is talking directly to her reproductive organs about genetic quality control and Giovanni just laughs. i would too honestly


but then the album shifts and this is where it gets me? the photos start having death certificates folded up next to them. medical examiners reports. the books not just a family album anymore


"Gio, we aren't reading your mom's "hit" book, are we?"


oohohho


Grace just said that out LOUD huh. and Giovanni doesnt go "no of course not" he goes "she couldnt be that STUPID" which. is not a denial!! he tries to rationalize it as like a feel-good scrapbook where the Madam savored her enemies deaths for fun. buddy thats still super messed up


and then Sals hospital photo. drugged to the gills, two broken arms and a broken leg, nobody around. whoever took that picture walked into a hospital room where a Made Man was incapacitated and alone and just. took a photo. like a trophy?? thats terrifying when you think about it


He turned a page and saw two little girls. Arm in arm, dressed in their Sunday best and trying to look sober. Their sparkling black eyes told tales. The littlest was nine, the other fifteen.


;c;


the girls trying not to smile. and Giovanni realizing hes older now than both of them ever got to be - Gemma shot dead young, Saphrina dead at twenty one. he just sits there looking at this picture of two kids who didnt know whats coming and Grace takes his hand without saying anyhting


;c;;


the protest flashback section dragged a bit for me honestly? like we go from this really quiet emotional moment with the photo to a pretty long digression about Grace hitting a security guard with a protest sign during a Viridian Co. rally. the sign story is great and i love "she accidentally dropped the sign. itd been heavy" and the fact that she never apologized is very Grace. but all the corporate backstory details - the CEO going to prison, Giovannis investigation, the company history - i think trimming that stuff would let the sign incident and the return to Gemma land a bit punchier?


"She once tossed her pokeball with a sirviper, fumbled, and hit herself in the head with it. The ball released the snake on her back."


Gemma fumbled her own pokeball and beaned herself in the head with it and the snake went full constrict mode on her back. three adult Sakakis prying this girl out of her own pokemons loops LMAO. i want an entire book of famiglia stories like this honestly


"you mean you werent born riding a rabid rhyhorn?"


Grace please :D

some grammar notes:

  • "sirviper" > seviper (or Seviper)
  • "aviodent" > avoidant
  • "upheval" > upheaval
  • "familgia" > famiglia
  • "cleaned house,e" > cleaned house, (stray e)
  • "twiddling then page" > twiddling the page

next chapterrr!

The pearly gates were not meant for him. He had no doubts about his final destination in the hereafter, so like any good thief, he stole what bits of paradise he could.


okay this is a GREAT opening line. Giovanni just casually accepting hes damned and framing his whole cozy domestic life as a heist. "like any good thief he stole what bits of paradise he could." god. hes lying in bed with his wife and his cat and he thinks he got away with something


the cioccolateria scam story LOL. so baby Giovanni and Gemma are making infant Saphrina scream by PINCHING HER to sell a crying baby con at a fancy chocolate shop and it doesnt even work because the old woman running the place is heartless AND the displays are bulletproof glass. these kids tortured a baby for nothing


"Don't rob old mobster shops, they make all thier displays out of bulletproof glass." At Grace's prompt to "think harder," he added. "Also, crutches can't break open bulletproof glass, no matter how hard you swing."


Grace goes "what did you LEARN from this" and this man looks her dead in the eye and goes well i learned bulletproof glass is really hard. not a single moral lesson. not one. Grace is so right hes gonna need ethics classes before they have kids LOL


which!!


tiny Giovanni in a papier-mache leg cast trying to smash a chocolate display with a crutch. the mental image is killing me


While many would have viewed the fact that Grace was aimlessly turning pages as he talked as her being distracted, he knew better. It wasn't indifference. Grace was always toying with something. The habit had taken some getting used to, but now served as a sort of barometer for her temper and interest.


this is a quiet detail but its realy nice? Giovanni reading her fidgeting like data - the speed of page-turning tells him shes listening, the staccato tapping means shes being firm. its such a "weve been married long enough" way to show he knows her without saying he knows her yknow


mhmmm


and then the kids conversation. Giovanni "grinning like a loon" at the idea of kids and then immediately running tactical calculations on whether the scam would be feasible based on how many children Grace is willing to have in succession. this man heard "our kids" and went :D and then went actually wait would we have enough bodies for the chocolate heist tho. Grace threatening ethics classes is the only correct response


;c;


the book just FALLING APART mid-scolding gesture and dumping all the Madams encrypted secrets everywhere. decades old binding said nope. and Persian just rolls off the bed with an irritated "Murr" and leaves


Persian woke with an irritated "Murr" and rolled off the bed to leave the two stupid humans to thier nestmaking.


"nestmaking" LOL. Persian is so done with them. best character in this fic i stand by it


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"Sort it, burn it, I don't care. Just get it off the bed before I get back, alright?"


"Burning them is an option, Grace, the fire is right there."


oohohho. that last line. Giovanni just gently reminding her the fireplace is RIGHT THERE as he walks out with the laundry. hes not ordering her to burn them, hes not forbiding her from reading them. hes just... leaving the option in plain sight. and then internally going "if shes still sorting when i get back ill do it myself." he already knows shes not gonna burn them?? he KNOWS her "unrepentant bibliophile" brain is gonna win out over his suggestion. so he gave her the choice expecting shed choose wrong, ready to clean it up himself. thats such a Giovanni move - giving someone the illusion of a decision while having already calculated the outcome


i wonder if that makes him more like the Madam than he thinks? she left death certificates in a photo album, he leaves the fire as a suggestion. same family same vibes maybe??


man...


some more grammar notes:

  • "thier" → their
  • "tenitis" → tinnitus
  • "Unfortunatly" → Unfortunately
  • "he's learned" → should probably be "hed learned" (tense shift mid-paragraph)

okay so overall thoughts on the whole thing - i had a really good time with this. its such a simple setup, just two people stuck inside looking at old photos, and you keep it interesting the whole way through by layering in all these family ghosts and traumas without ever leaving the room which can be pretty hard actually! Giovanni is a great POV character cus everything gets filtered through this calculating mob boss lens even when hes being genuinely sweet and Grace is the perfect person to bounce off him - brave and snarky and fidgety and completely unwilling to let him dodge. the prose gets a bit clause-heavy sometimes? like theres sentences where i had to double back and reparse cus theres three subordinate bits before we get to the actual verb. but the sensory writing is realy strong (that Garchomp scene in part 1 lives rent free in my head honestly) and Persian is an absolute MVP scene stealer start to finish. good stuff, i had a great time with this one :D
 

K_S

Unrepentent Giovanni and Rocket fan
okay so Giovanni standing on his porch sipping his drink watching his ground types frantically dig flood trenches in a storm. not helping. just watching. making sure Sandslash doesnt flood his house and mentally noting that Nidoqueen is slow today and should probably get a checkup. tomorrow tho. tomorrow Giovanni's problem



"lessers." he thought that about his own pokemon and then went inside to build a pillow fort with his wife LOL
He's a bit of a mood swinger, Giovanni.

the tonal whiplash between Made Man Energy and "cozy blanket nest on a king sized bed" is so good??

Its kinda a reflection of mafioso norms to. To family and close associates theres (ususally/stereotypically) this unshakable steadfastmess and warmth. Everyone else tho...


the school photo album stuff is really cute. Grace going through all these faces and Giovanni having never seen a school photo album before in his life. and her explaination of how she became a nurse being just... fake pokemon mechanics?

Not fake exactly. Just streamlined anime girl nonsense that gio cpuld explain properly... but it'd take 10 pages.


mhmmm

girl got scratched by one meowth and went "rivalries are stupid im gonna run a petting zoo" and then SOMEHOW ended up as a nurse and she will NOT tell him how. Giovanni going "thats not how stone evolution works" while shes making stuff up is so funny

Its part of Grace's charm. Shes mysterious without being mean about it and Gio lives for that.

the alarm clock scene made be chuckle. Grace slaps it, hits the WRONG button, it screams back to life, she rips the cord out of the wall, Giovanni dives to save the snack tray - and its HER clock that she refuses to replace


Shes had that monster since med school. shes never going to get rid of it.
which!!

the Zapdos bit. Grace is scared of the storm so she copes by going "do you think theres a Zapdos up there hitting the sultry music trying to make baby Zapdos" and Giovanni SERIOUSLY considers the logistics. "theres not enough discharge for one Zapdos much less two." sir she was not asking for a scientific assessment

Gio thought he was being reassuring since... you know it means they wont die screaming via electricution... he sorta failed tho.


:3

okay but the Garchomp scene

god.



this is the best writing in the chapter and its not close. the sensory detail is genuinely horrifying - you cant breathe you cant scream everything is muffled and this thing is just CHATTERING to itself while it kills. "So hungry."

Being abke to hear mon sounds cute... then you get critters like that monster and it turns that gift into a horror story.

sobs

and he started this as a calculated distraction for Grace right? like he was gonna share a cute sanitized anecdote and then the floodgates opened and actual uncensored trauma came pouring out. he closed his eyes because he couldnt look at her while he said it ;c;

Got it in one.

;c;;;

and Grace matches him. shes like okay you had a berserk gene Garchomp killing people in the dark?? well i had a pandemic where cramps snapped peoples bones and my coworkers died mid-shift inside quarantine suits where you couldnt even SEE anyone collapse. dont hold back on my account buddy im built different

i wonder if he ever tells her the full uncensored version tho? like he caught himself editing mid-sentence - "its off the offical records" - does she know about the Rocket parts or does she just know he saw something terrible?

Ah so Gios still hiding his mafia status from Grace. Moral woman she is, he fears (justifiably) that she'd leave him if she knew. So no he never tells the uncensored version.

Grace knows gios mom and family are mob tied. But he "went straight" and got disowned ect so she thinks his hands are clean...ish..


the ending is sweet. Giovanni remembering some old book from his first flight to Nonas as a little kid and Grace's morals wreslting with boredom and fear before she agrees to gossip about dead mobsters LOL. "you have a deal" is a good line to end on honestly

The book is actually how the whole series started. Smol gio is shunted into a plane. He mother making him read it cover to cover and then pass test after test to make sure he's absorbing the info inside. Its how gio meets Nona/his grandmother and gets kicked out of Kanto.

man... two scared people on a stormy day reaching for old ghosts. thats a good setup for parts 2 and 3

the prose is dense - sometimes the clauses stack up and i had to reread a couple sentances?

Funny right before you wrote your review (about 4 hrs preceeding it) i actually brushed up some of these concerns.

but it kinda works for Giovanni's headspace where everything gets filtered through assessment and calculation. also two people in a room for a whole chapter and i never got bored?? idk how you pull that off but it works :D

Heavy character focus skill set.

i noticed some grammer issues btw! here u go!

- "vetrens" > veterans
- "Unfortunatly" > Unfortunately
- "it's own hell" > its own hell (possessive, no apostrophe)
- "familgia" > famiglia
- "thier" > their
- "skeen" > skein


ill be working on part 2 and 3 2morow!
i'll poke at 2 and 3 reviews as i can thanks for replying so quick.
 
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K_S

Unrepentent Giovanni and Rocket fan
the basement trip LOL. Giovanni goes down there for the generator and the book and Persian is just. napping on the boxes like a queen. he gets too close and she swats him and then follows him around meowing about everything EXCEPT an apology
Well she's very much a cat. And a pampered one at that.

the VERTICAL JUMP. and then she just bolts down the hallway with her tail poofed "like a broken flag to declare surrender" yowling like a Legend is breaking in through the window. to go get snuggles from Grace. this cat has decided thunder is Giovannis fault and i respect that

Its always gios faukt. As are all vet visits and all the times she gets wet.

which!!


Grace sees the old black book and immediately goes "is that the Necronomicon?" and honestly fair LOL. and then Giovanni steals the softest blanket and wraps himself up "like an angry kakunna" and Grace is trying to negotiate her way in like hey if you let me in youll be warmer. and hes like. fine. and immediately acquires a Grace lamprey. and Persian makes herself into a cat croissant at the foot of the bed. this is SO cozy

Coziness met, wonderful.

the family portraits are killing me. generations of Sakakis in all black and no one smiling and Grace is just roasting them

Shes gotta have her giggles sometime.

Grace i love you


mhmmm





Grace threatening her own uterus because of Giovannis family fashion sense. this woman is talking directly to her reproductive organs about genetic quality control and Giovanni just laughs. i would too honestly

Hey it worked. Silver's fond of fluffy black coats, but mixes up the rest of his assemble enough that he dodged the style vampire gene at least.


but then the album shifts and this is where it gets me? the photos start having death certificates folded up next to them. medical examiners reports. the books not just a family album anymore

Yeah... gio prob should of not skippped "the lumpy bits"... but then if he hadnt there wouldnt be more plot.

oohohho


Grace just said that out LOUD huh. and Giovanni doesnt go "no of course not" he goes "she couldnt be that STUPID" which. is not a denial!! he tries to rationalize it as like a feel-good scrapbook where the Madam savored her enemies deaths for fun. buddy thats still super messed up

Yeah and Grace is chewing her tongue not pointing out how messed up it is... Andre will be getting an earful next work day thats for sure.

and then Sals hospital photo. drugged to the gills, two broken arms and a broken leg, nobody around. whoever took that picture walked into a hospital room where a Made Man was incapacitated and alone and just. took a photo. like a trophy?? thats terrifying when you think about it

Well Madam Sakaki was terrorfying. And it was a firm warning. No one was safe, anywhere. Sal never sassed her ahain after that.

I was initially go8ng to have the scene be a church but figured that might be a bit too tasteless. Also Sals an athiest so the scene would of carried less weight.

;c;


the girls trying not to smile. and Giovanni realizing hes older now than both of them ever got to be - Gemma shot dead young, Saphrina dead at twenty one. he just sits there looking at this picture of two kids who didnt know whats coming and Grace takes his hand without saying anyhting

Shes trying her best to be supportive. Gio lost a lot to get where he is, and this is one of those open wounds.

;c;;


the protest flashback section dragged a bit for me honestly? like we go from this really quiet emotional moment with the photo to a pretty long digression about Grace hitting a security guard with a protest sign during a Viridian Co. rally. the sign story is great and i love "she accidentally dropped the sign. itd been heavy" and the fact that she never apologized is very Grace. but all the corporate backstory details - the CEO going to prison, Giovannis investigation, the company history - i think trimming that stuff would let the sign incident and the return to Gemma land a bit punchier?

Its really improtant to acquisition tho so for now (unless i can thinknof a way to thread it in other tales) i'll need to keep it as is for note taking purposes...

Gemma fumbled her own pokeball and beaned herself in the head with it and the snake went full constrict mode on her back. three adult Sakakis prying this girl out of her own pokemons loops LMAO. i want an entire book of famiglia stories like this honestly

Gio unfortunatly doesnt know much more than that. Now Nona would... but who'd wanna talk to her?

"you mean you werent born riding a rabid rhyhorn?"


Grace please :D

some grammar notes:

  • "sirviper" > seviper (or Seviper)
  • "aviodent" > avoidant
  • "upheval" > upheaval
  • "familgia" > famiglia
  • "cleaned house,e" > cleaned house, (stray e)
  • "twiddling then page" > twiddling the page

next chapterrr!




okay this is a GREAT opening line. Giovanni just casually accepting hes damned and framing his whole cozy domestic life as a heist. "like any good thief he stole what bits of paradise he could." god. hes lying in bed with his wife and his cat and he thinks he got away with something

Considering his history. He did. Theres an old saw throughout the series that Nona grills into Gios head. Happiness and mercy arent things a sakaki get to have in this lofe... and a lot of gios life is provong that true...


the cioccolateria scam story LOL. so baby Giovanni and Gemma are making infant Saphrina scream by PINCHING HER to sell a crying baby con at a fancy chocolate shop and it doesnt even work because the old woman running the place is heartless AND the displays are bulletproof glass. these kids tortured a baby for nothing

It wasnt for nothing. Gio got that carmel from somewhere after all... not shown gio used the crutch to pry the lid up. Tjey shoveled chocolates into gios backpack and bolted.

Grace goes "what did you LEARN from this" and this man looks her dead in the eye and goes well i learned bulletproof glass is really hard. not a single moral lesson. not one. Grace is so right hes gonna need ethics classes before they have kids LOL

You mean hes going to fail an ethjics class...

which!!


tiny Giovanni in a papier-mache leg cast trying to smash a chocolate display with a crutch. the mental image is killing me

Everytime a christmas charol plays grace is going to have a fiekd day....

this is a quiet detail but its realy nice? Giovanni reading her fidgeting like data - the speed of page-turning tells him shes listening, the staccato tapping means shes being firm. its such a "weve been married long enough" way to show he knows her without saying he knows her yknow


mhmmm


and then the kids conversation. Giovanni "grinning like a loon" at the idea of kids and then immediately running tactical calculations on whether the scam would be feasible based on how many children Grace is willing to have in succession. this man heard "our kids" and went :D and then went actually wait would we have enough bodies for the chocolate heist tho. Grace threatening ethics classes is the only correct response


;c;


the book just FALLING APART mid-scolding gesture and dumping all the Madams encrypted secrets everywhere. decades old binding said nope. and Persian just rolls off the bed with an irritated "Murr" and leaves

Persian is the only sane 1 tbh. As for book it was holding by a prayer...

"nestmaking" LOL. Persian is so done with them. best character in this fic i stand by it


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oohohho. that last line. Giovanni just gently reminding her the fireplace is RIGHT THERE as he walks out with the laundry. hes not ordering her to burn them, hes not forbiding her from reading them. hes just... leaving the option in plain sight. and then internally going "if shes still sorting when i get back ill do it myself."
he already knows shes not gonna burn them?? he KNOWS her "unrepentant bibliophile" brain is gonna win out over his suggestion. so he gave her the choice expecting shed choose wrong, ready to clean it up himself.

He just doesnt want the potential drama of dealing with the ex-madams mess in any way shape or fprm. Its less Grace will pick badly and more Grace will drag him into something that will hurt.

Once reminding her that the statue of limitations is passed for everything besides rape, tjerefore he's not to be involved unless this leads to a flesh trafficing ring, gio will let her do whatever she wants w the pages OUTSIDE OF HIS VISION.

Shes a grown adult. Her time is hwr own. He just wants to be in the dark about this project.

thats such a Giovanni move - giving someone the illusion of a decision while having already calculated the outcome

Hmm not quite..

i wonder if that makes him more like the Madam than he thinks? she left death certificates in a photo album, he leaves the fire as a suggestion. same family same vibes maybe??

Hes not as ruthless as the madam as Grace's discovery will unveil but thats for later chapters.

man...


some more grammar notes:

  • "thier" → their
  • "tenitis" → tinnitus
  • "Unfortunatly" → Unfortunately
  • "he's learned" → should probably be "hed learned" (tense shift mid-paragraph)

okay so overall thoughts on the whole thing - i had a really good time with this. its such a simple setup, just two people stuck inside looking at old photos, and you keep it interesting the whole way through by layering in all these family ghosts and traumas without ever leaving the room which can be pretty hard actually! Giovanni is a great POV character cus everything gets filtered through this calculating mob boss lens even when hes being genuinely sweet and Grace is the perfect person to bounce off him - brave and snarky and fidgety and completely unwilling to let him dodge. the prose gets a bit clause-heavy sometimes? like theres sentences where i had to double back and reparse cus theres three subordinate bits before we get to the actual verb. but the sensory writing is realy strong (that Garchomp scene in part 1 lives rent free in my head honestly) and Persian is an absolute MVP scene stealer start to finish. good stuff, i had a great time with this one :D
glad you liked the trip.. even ifnit was a cozy one ending on an ominois note...

Out of curiousity any guesses as to whats on the papers?
 
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