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Pokémon Final Ascent

IFBench

Rescue Team Member
Location
Pokemon Paradise
Partners
  1. chikorita-saltriv
  2. bench-gen
  3. charmander
  4. snivy
  5. treecko
  6. tropius
  7. arctozolt
  8. wartortle
  9. zorua
Final Ascent

Sky Tower Summit

You were almost there, you were at the summit. Only a few more floors until the three of you reached the peak.

You glanced at your companions taking this trek up Sky Tower with you. Acacia, your Chikorita partner that you met the moment you first woke up in this world, was close behind you. From the drooping leaf, you could tell he was as exhausted as you were. And Temsik, your Absol friend who saved you from Articuno's wrath, was by his side.

Though Temsik looked almost…fearful? Their fur stood on end, their tail was held low, and their horn kept twitching. You had never seen them like that before.

No, you couldn't let that turn you back. You had to keep going. You were almost there. Or there would be nothing but a crater to go back to. Didn't matter how bruised you were getting, you needed to keep going.

It became harder and harder to take each step. You were getting really tired, with your heavy shell starting to weigh you down, and you could barely breathe this high up. You were running low on supplies, too, and your injuries were piling up.. But you had to keep going.

As you reached the room with the stairs, your exhaustion caught up with you, and you collapsed onto your back.

"Lidequir!" Acacia cried out, rushing to your side. "Are you ok?"

You weren't. You wished you could just keep going, you knew how dire the situation was, but you couldn't.

"Can…can we rest here? Just for a bit?" you asked, looking up at your partner. "We're by the stairs, we can go to the next floor if anything comes after us."

"We can't," Temsik said, horn twitching frantically. "The falling star is almost here! We can't slow down!"

Acacia picked you up with his vines, turning you to face him.

"Lidequir. We can do this. We have to do this."

They had done this before, when the three of you were fleeing up Mount Freeze from Team ACT. Back then, even though you felt like you couldn't go on, their urgency had helped you keep moving.

And while normally you appreciated their drive to help you keep going…you couldn't take it right now.

"Please," you pleaded. "I…I can't move another step."

Temsik looked terrified now, but they sat down by your side.

"Fine," they said. "But we can't afford to wait long."

Acacia was trembling, but set you down, laying a vine on your back.

Were you dooming the world by doing this? You hoped not. You wanted to keep going, but you just couldn't move anymore.

"Thank you," you said, between deep breaths. Then, trying your best to smile, you said, "So. Sky's the limit, huh?"

Acacia briefly swung his leaf in front of his face, frowning.

"Lidequir, it's not the time for this!" Acacia said, stomping a foreleg into the cloudy ground.

Your forced smile faltered a bit.

"Sorry," you said, coughing. "Just…trying to stay calm. We're almost there."

We were almost there, but were we ready?

You were starting to think that you weren't.

"Are you nervous?" Acacia asked.

"...yeppers. I am," you said, looking up towards the sky. "I…don't know if we're prepared enough. We're low on supplies, we're low on energy, we're all out of breath. We're not even gold rank yet."

You weren't even in this world for a season, and you were already part of the only hope to save it.

You felt so, so overwhelmed.

"I… just don't know if we can do this, Acacia," you murmur, looking down. "Wouldn't Team ACT be better—?"

"Lidequir, don't say that!" Acacia interrupted.

You looked up, seeing his leaf lash from side to side.

"Why not?" you asked. "They're fully evolved, and they're gold rank, too. They're better than us in every way I can think of."

"We never chased anyone to the ends of the continent over a rumor," Acacia harrumphed. "And Xatu chose us for this mission, not them. There was a reason for that!"

You blinked.

"I thought you thought they were the coolest?" you asked, tilting your head.

"The whole rumor incident took them down more than a few pegs for me, but even without that… we've already come further than them," Acacia said.

You tilted your head. "How?"

"Look, Lidequir. I know that it might sound crazy at first," he said. "They're fully evolved, while we're just a Chikorita, a Squirtle, and an Absol. They're gold rank, while we're still silver. But we've already surpassed them in other ways. Who was it that rescued them?"

Temsik nodded. "They couldn't defeat Groudon, after all, and yet we did. And who was it that held out faith in each other's innocence until the end? You? Or them?"

Charizard's worst joke ever aside…they never believed in us. It was only us and those we had helped who had faith in us.

If Temsik didn't trust us, we'd have been killed by Articuno's talons. If Acacia didn't trust me, Caterpie might never have been rescued.

We made it this far because of our trust in each other.

"...Us," you said.

"We're better than them in the ways that matter. They even thought so themselves given that Alakazam helped Xatu make the Teleport Gem that took us here," Acacia said. "Team ACT doesn't matter anymore. We have each other."

Maybe you really were prepared. The three of you were together, and that was all you needed.

"We're almost there, Lidequir. We can do this," Acacia insisted, nudging at you. "We've made it to Mount Freeze, we've defeated Groudon, we can climb a few more floors and talk to Rayquaza."

"...alright. Thank you," you said, standing back up with Acacia's help. "I think I'm ready to continue."

"Then let's go," Temsik said, heading towards the stairs.

You took as deep of a breath as you could, in, and out. Then you climbed up the stairs, alongside your friends.

Almost there. Almost there.


Temporal Spire

You hurried across the crumbling floors and walls, not stopping for a moment. You couldn't stop, no matter what. Time was running out, and you had to get the Time Gears to the pinnacle.

"Apoyime?"

That was your Piplup partner, Pahelia, calling out to you. But you couldn't stop, you had to keep running.

You were thankful for your Treecko biology, letting you scurry on walls around precarious segments. But this part was a straight stretch, so you just ran down the floor of the hall—

"Apoyime, wait!" she cried.

You dug your feet into the ground, and skidded to a stop, right before a hole in the floor. You had been so focused on hurrying, that you weren't looking where you were going.

You turned around, relieved that you stopped in time. But you had to keep running, you had to—

"Apoyime!" Pahelia called. "We can't keep going at this pace!"

"Wh…wh…" you began, but you were too nervous for speech currently. You put your hands out instead, and turned to sign language.

"Why not?" you signed, your tail twitching in impatience, before you took in how Pahelia looked.

She was running ragged, some of her feathers missing. She was covered in bruises, and her breaths were shallow.

"I can't keep up," she said. "And you almost fell into that hole. We need to slow down."

Your expression softened, but you shook your head. The tower was literally falling apart, you couldn't slow down!

"But Temporal Tower," you began to sign, before Pahelia interrupted you.

"Is crumbling, I know. But what if you fell in that hole?" she asked. "We'd have lost even more time."

You paused. That was…a fair point. Not only would you have been separated, but you'd also have had to climb back up from the previous floor. You couldn't afford to waste time like that.

You signed, "Alright."

"Please, be more careful," she said. "I don't know what I'd do if I had to go on without you."

Those words made you uneasy. You noticed how she was trembling as she said that, her flippers held over her chest. She was scared of losing you.

You knew that you didn't have much longer to exist. Once time is restored, you'd cease to exist.

You'd already made your peace with that. But what about Pahelia? What would she do once you disappeared?

… You could spare a bit of time, to make sure she stays safe.

And part of that is making sure that she's ready for what you know is coming.

"Pahelia. I want you to promise me something," you signed, beginning to tremble.

"What is it?" she asked.

You wondered how much to tell her. That you'd be gone no matter if you win or lose? Or should you just keep it extra vague?

No, Pahelia could take it. She was so scared when she first met you, but she'd grown beyond that. She was strong, you knew she was.

But it wouldn't do any good to have her break down right now, either.

You decided to keep it somewhat vague, but enough to get the point across.

"Promise me…" you began to sign, before taking the leap and beginning to speak. "Promise me, that, if…if something happens to me up there, that you'll carry on."

"What…what do you mean?" Pahelia asked, looking worried. "Apoyime…"

"Promise me," you pleaded with words. "Promise me that you'll live on for me. Please."

"But…" she began, looking away. Then she hesitated, before she looked you in the eyes. "I promise."

At least one of you would live on now.

"Thank you," you signed, before continuing to run through the tower, though at a slower pace than before.

Time was running out, but you didn't want to waste these last few minutes you had with your partner.


Glacier Palace Great Spire

You and Vernir navigated the rooms and corridors of the spire, searching for the stairs. You had no idea how much farther you had to go, but the dungeon's icy winds were getting stronger and stronger. You had a feeling that you had long since passed the point of the Glacier Palace you reached on your first visit.

You hoped the others were doing well. Virizion, Emolga, Umbreon, Espeon, Dunsparce… You had hoped they could have come with you to help, but that chasm was too wide to go across, and someone had to keep things together back at Paradise and Post Town.

As you continued through the spire, you began to hear a wheezing noise. Was that the winds of despair? You tried to fidget with your scalchop to distract yourself, then your joy ribbon, but you couldn't get it out of your head.

Then it dawned on you, the wheezing was coming from your Snivy partner.

At once, you turned around and went to Vernir's side, putting a paw on his back.

"Vernir! Are you ok?" you asked.

His scales were losing their green coloration, turning brown. His tail was dragging on the ground, the leaf on the tip wilting. The scales around his eyes had a bit of frost on them.

"I…I'm fine. We need to keep going," he said, trudging forward.

His breaths felt far too shallow. Could he even make it like this?

"Vernir…we can rest if you need it," you said. "We still have time."

He looked like he wanted to protest, his eyes narrowing a bit, but he simply sighed, and wrapped his arms around you in a hug. He looked so exhausted…

"It's…so hard to breathe," he rasped. "And it's so cold, too…"

What could you do? You couldn't leave him behind, no way!

Vernir was there for you ever since you crash landed next to him. He helped get you a place to stay, he was always willing to listen to you. He even risked his life to save you from Kyurem. He was the best friend you ever had.

But it didn't sound like he could make it much farther…

You still had your joy ribbon on. Maybe it could help filter the air for Vernir.

You took off your joy ribbon, and untied it back into a piece of enchanted cloth. Then, you gave it to Vernir.

"Alright. I want you to hold this over your nostrils, and try to avoid breathing out of your mouth as much as you can," you said. "Hopefully this should help you breathe easier. It's just a little further."

As he held it over his nostrils, you could see the green beginning to return to his scales.

"I'm here for you no matter what," you said, giving Vernir a hug.

Vernir began to smile, his tail lifting back up.

"Thank you, Gen," he said. "It's a bit easier to breathe now. You sure we're that close?"

"Yeah… we must be," you said. "Let's just keep going."

You meant for that to sound more enthusiastic than it did. Vernir must've noticed, judging by the look on his snout.

"Gen?" Vernir asked, putting an arm on your shoulder. "You've been going for a long while now, and you haven't stopped except to help me. Aren't you getting exhausted?"

"What do you mean?" you asked.

"You've been going nonstop ever since we reunited in the Holehills. Did you even sleep after Kyurem attacked you?" Vernir asked.

You didn't, but Vernir doesn't need to know that right now. Not when the fate of everyone back in Post Town and Paradise hung in the balance.

"I'm fine," you lied.

Truth be told, you couldn't be further from fine. You were tired, bruised, freezing, and terrified. The moment Kyurem decided you didn't belong in this world kept replaying in your mind, over and over.

But if you kept going, you could distract yourself from that all.

Vernir pulled you close with a vine, a concerned expression on his snout, and said, "Please, be honest with me."

You paused for a moment, before deciding to tell your partner the truth.

"...no, not really," you admitted. "I've…kinda just been trying to distract myself ever since…"

"Hydreigon?" Vernir asked, a sympathetic look on his snout.

"...yeah," you said.

You didn't think you'd ever be able to forget seeing Hydreigon's frozen body shatter into pieces, or the brutal beatdown Kyurem gave you immediately afterwards.

"...I'm sorry. I wish…" Vernir paused.

"That it didn't have to happen?" you asked.

"...yeah," Vernir answered, tail drooping back down.

"And just…" you began, looking down. "We managed to pacify Munna, but Kyurem's still out there. What if we have to face them again?"

Vernir hugged you again, keeping the cloth on his nostrils with a vine.

"It doesn't matter either way. Maybe Kyurem's not even in this dungeon right now. But if he is…" A determined look crosses Vernir's face. "Then we'll face him together. Like we've always done since we first teamed up."

You hesitated, then hugged Vernir back. "Thank you. I couldn't have made it this far without you."

"And I couldn't have without you," Vernir said. "Forward, together?"

"Yeah," you said, smiling as you took a step. "Together."

The two of you continued searching the floor for the stairs. You felt a bit chillier without your joy ribbon, but seeing Vernir not suffocating, and him supporting you in turn…it was worth it.


Tree of Life Trunk

Wood creaked underfoot as you traversed the trunk of the Tree of Life. The grand Tree keeping the planet alive, reduced to a dull gray. You could hear branches snapping with each step you took.

The Tree of Life was dying, and you and your partner had to stop it.

Your Meganium partner was staring at a patch of color in the wood. "Look, Ayueg! Color! We're not too late! The Tree is still alive!"

That was a bit of relief, but you had to keep going.

"Hopefully it stays that way," you said.

You were about to continue on, before noticing that your partner wasn't moving from their spot. Instead, they were…breathing on the patch of color?

"Leviene? What are you doing?" you asked.

"I read once that Meganiums can revive dead plants just by breathing on them!" they said. "Maybe it'll work on the Tree of Life, too!"

You simply stared, as Leviene breathed on the color. You cared for them with all your heart, but Leviene was such a dork sometimes.

"...I don't think one Meganium's breath is going to do much for the Tree when it's in this state," you said.

"But I gotta try!" they said, breathing harder.

Was now really the time for their antics?

"Leviene, we need to stop Dark Matter…" you began, before trailing off.

Leviene's signature smile was different than usual, and not just because they were a Meganium. It seemed…like a forced smile.

Something was wrong, and not just with the Tree.

"Leviene, what's going on?" you asked, putting a hand on their back.

They froze, then stopped breathing on the color spot to lean into your feathers.

"...I was just thinking about Serene Village," they said, antennae drooping.

Oh. Their hometown, our hometown…rendered completely silent…everyone likely turned to stone…

"Are you worried about everyone?" you asked.

Leviene turned their neck away, shaking.

"...Remember how I said how I was scared to look for everyone, because they'd probably be…you know?" they said.

How could you forget? Leviene had looked like they were about to break down. You couldn't blame them. After escaping the Voidlands, returning to an empty home hit both of you hard.

"Yeah. I remember that," you said.

Leviene looked at you, the petals around their neck drooping.

"Part of me really wishes that I looked for them," they murmured. "It feels like I just abandoned them all. What if I could have helped them?"

It would be a lie to say that you felt the same about yourself. You had lived there in Serene Village for months, and to see it in such an empty state…knowing that everyone there was probably turned to stone…Simipour, Raticate, Goomy, Shelmet, Farfetch'd, Carracosta…

You had shed many tears with Leviene when you discovered what happened to the village.

"Leviene…" you hug their neck. "It's not your fault. You didn't abandon them. We're helping them right now."

Tears began to flow from Leviene's eyes, as they collapsed.

"But pops is probably stone right now! I should have at least looked for him!" they cried. "We saw our Expedition Society friends get absorbed by those things in the Voidlands! What if that happens to pops, too? What if that means they're gone for good, and we'll never see them again?!"

You couldn't help but worry about that. It had been plaguing your mind ever since you learned that Bunnelby had been caught by the Voidlands beasts.

You fought back your own tears, trying to put on a brave face for Leviene. It was so rare to see them like this.

You'd do your best to be there for them, though.

You gently rub your partner's neck. "You were scared of what you might find. It's not your fault. I'm scared, too."

Leviene craned their neck to look you in the eyes. "You are?"

"Yeah. I'm…scared that I'll have to see Nuzleaf again, or that we won't be able to defeat Dark Matter," you said.

"I'm…scared of that, too," Leviene said. "It already caused so much destruction, it's the reason Serene Village is empty. What if it sends us back to the Voidlands? Ayeug, I can't do that, I can't go back there and face all of that again if we fail! I'm…not brave enough for this"

"I know you're scared," you said, hugging Leviene tighter. "But we've made it this far. We've solved the mystery of the Ancient Barrow, we made it into the Expedition Society. We made it out of the Voidlands, and we made it this far up the Tree of Life. Were you scared for those?"

"...yep. I was," Leviene said, laying their head on your shoulder.

"Bravery isn't about not being scared. It's about going forward, even if you're scared," you said. "You're brave, you're one of the bravest Pokemon I know. You've made it this far, and I'll be right there with you the rest of the way."

"...alright. I'll be brave. For you, for pops, and for everyone," they said, stepping away from the patch of color. "Let's keep going."

Their tears were drying up, and as they continued trotting down the corridor, you kept a hand around their neck.

You were scared, too, but with your partner by your side, you felt brave enough to take on whatever challenges laid before you.

Together, the two of you continued your final ascent.
 

Nekodatta

Pokémon Trainer
Pronouns
She/Her
Partners
  1. koraidon-apex
  2. miraidon-ultimate
  3. skitty
Sorry the review took so long, I was kind of busy these days!

I really like the idea of the fic, it expands a little bit on the various pairs of heroes we already know from Eternal Shadows and Days of Heroes. I like reading these little snippets from their adventures.

-- Sky Tower --

So first we have Liquedir, and of course they are still a Squirtle. I'm so used picturing them as a Wartotle it took me a moment to remember. Also, I really love the little reference of Temsik the Absol. (I suppose it's a Ghost Trick reference... Because if it isn't, that's an amazing coincidence)

I like how, even as it's not technically mandatory to bring Absol with you, a lot of people headcanon them as part of the final mission and part of the squad (I know I did when playing)

Lidequir, it's not the time for this!" Acacia said, stomping a foreleg into the cloudy ground.

Your forced smile faltered a bit.

"Sorry," you said, coughing. "Just…trying to stay calm. We're almost there."

I like this little bit giving a new meaning to Lidequir's constant joking, it's their way to cope with the situation.

-- Temporal Spire --

I really like the combo of Piplup and Treecko (I was also a Treecko in my first explorers playthrough aw), and how you make use how every Pokémon's unique biology by having Treecko run on walls, that has to be really useful in a dungeon!

This one was a bit shorter, which I guess it's... Appropriate, with all the emphasis about having to hurry and time running out. Wouldn't have made sense to have them sit around talking like in the first scene, so I think you did nicely to show that different sense of urgency!

-- Glacier Palace Great Spire --

Then it dawned on you, the wheezing was coming from your Snivy partner.

Oh no, the moment I remembered Vernir was a Snivy my face fell, that must have been terrible for them in the cold : (
I wish the games acknowledged your partner being a specific species that maybe had some advantage or disadvantage in certain plot important dungeons, it would have been really cool to have even just a couple of little personalized lines of dialogue here and there.
Anyway I really like that you took it into consideration here! Gates is the only one I haven't played by I know a bit of the major plot points so the partner being even more vulnerable to the cold is cool.

-- Tree of Life --
Again, I really like how you make use of the characteristics of each Pokémon here, namely that a grass type and a Meganium even more would obviously try to revive the Tree "their" way!
(Also my partner is Super was also a Chikorita aw)

All in all, I liked how each scenario put the focus on how it's been affecting each pair of Pokémon, without making them feel repetitive or too similar to each other, which I think was quite difficult to do!
I liked this a lot!
 

Venia Silente

For your ills, I prescribe a cat.
Location
At the 0-divisor point of the Riemann AU Earth
Pronouns
Él/Su
Partners
  1. nidorino
  2. blaziken
  3. fearow
You have been chosen! As one of the stories I'll review for my attempt at Review Blitz. Why? Because I wanted to take a look at what other people write canon-PMD like, tbh.

You were almost there, you were at the summit.

Right at the start it's written in second person, which is something that at least for stories based on the PMD canon games doesn't vibe wrong. Defo would be more immersion-breaking for me if this was Mainline with its blank-slate protags.

Also adjacently, thanks for avoiding the "Y/N" / "Your Name" trope. It's annoying as hell.

As you reached the room with the stairs,

We have a party that's just about the corner of the point of no return in the Rescue games it seems. I have to really commend them on managing to climb this much of the tower before finally getting to a room with stairs tho! I wonder how did they manage before this point. Perhaps using Acacia's vines for swinging...

Still, it seems being able to see the good in "good but not perfect" is one of if not "the" themes for this story. A protag who feels they are not good enough, a party who is just this short of the Boss Room, a joke that is just a plot ticks or two ill-timed. This section is about being just not good enough, and that *still* having to be enough.

Temporal Spire

WHoo hooo!! Explorers!!

Also it was a good surprise to see the change of scene and setting. At first I expected this story to be mostly a fully self-contained Rescue Team end quest, but seeing more PMD is always good. Hopefully there's Gates after, too!

You were thankful for your Treecko biology,
Treecko player with Grovyle the Thief! Yay! One would think stories with this setup would be more common, given how thematically appropriate it can be played (and that you get two cool Pokémon for the prize of one, the reverse of what Mainline usually does).

Doesn't matter much to me we don't have Treecko-Grovyle screentime in this one in particular, it's just the storyline implications that make it sweet for me.


"I can't keep up," she said. "And you almost fell into that hole. We need to slow down."
Now we have a bit of a change of pace: it is the partner who can't catch up. And considering what they'll have to get to after the Boss Battle, speaks of a very bad day going on for them. I really liked how in this segment the impatience, or eagerness because of *time*, is more patent than in the previous segment. Ya know, this being the Tower of Time and all.

"But Temporal Tower," you began to sign, before Pahelia interrupted you.

"Is crumbling, I know. But what if you fell in that hole?" she asked. "We'd have lost even more time."
First, ouch. Yeah that's a particular annoyance in various videogame dungeons where if you step on the wrong tile you have to redo and that's - once again - more curious because of time.

...Didn't Rayyyylmao's tower in Emerald have that mechanic, too?

(I might be wrong but I seem to also remember that TT was one of the few times the crumbling and decaying state of the Final Quest stage was also a minor plot point - at some point I think Grovyle mentions that if the Tower decays more, it just won't be possible to place the Time Gears in... well, place.)

Second:

Dialga: «They dare criticize my Tower!»
Dalvin: «Really, you've left it be quite a mess.»
Dialga: «It's NOT a mess! it's just eternally unkempt...»
Dalvin: «Should I also mention it's not really a Tower? Like, get off your high Palkia-horse. It's just a spire. Twelve or so centuries more and it'll be a Mound.»
Dialga: «...I resent having gotten you hired sometimes.» <_<
Dalvin: «Well in this scene commentary I'm having the time of my life.» ^_^

Like, really, big villains usually tend to keep their Final Boss lairs in a better state. Tho we can't really fault Dialga (or Dusknoir, or Darkrai...) for this one.

Third:

There's that "good, not perfect" thing again. Sometimes trying for perfect can get you wrecked, and with the fate of the world on the line, yeah there's a good argument for taking it slow. (Also for stopping to check a map if you have one; I've never really seen stories acknowledge that the games give you a basic but stable form of mapping Mystery Dungeons).

Certainly this Temporal Climb would be the bane of speedrunners, ironically enough, imagine asking one of those to remain still and not try to glitch through the walls or ACE the ending screen at a time like this.

… You could spare a bit of time, to make sure she stays safe.

And part of that is making sure that she's ready for what you know is coming.

Aaaaand ready the tears! That separation between player and partner of little concern is certainly... a staple of PMD game endings.

So we have the two characters, more or less at the edge of time, take some of their own to get their own matters in order. I feel it's a vaulable scene.

In the end a pretty good segment. It reminded me of a line of Beast from the X-Men animated series, paraphrasing: “although I may be in a hurry, I won't act in a hurry”.

Glacier Palace Great Spire

Gates! WHoooo-Hooooo!

Also:

Glacier Palace Great Spire

Dalvin: «Oh? Was this dumpster a "Tower" before, too?» ^_^
Kyurem: «...» <_<
Dialga: «...» >_>
Kyurem: «You put him on ice, or I will...»

And we got to the segment of a game that needs some love and live! It's good to see. The team this time seems to be Oshawott and Snivy. Not to mention the Oshawott is Gen, too! Certainly there's lots of love for Gen in this server and fandom, he's the best and most lovable.

Oh yeah there were also the mandatory NPCs and Virizion doing time as a part-timer as usual, and they've now fallen behind thanks to the plot.

Funny too, because:

You had hoped they could have come with you to help, but that chasm was too wide to go across,
Emolga: - can fly.
Dunsparce: - also can fly.
Espeon: - is a cat, so f* gravity.
Umbreon: - uuuuh always goes where Espeon goes? ^_^
Virizion: "I don't have to do anything. I'm a part-timer, remember?"



But it's fair: someone has to help back home. So it the turn of our protag and partner to solve the day... which is now endangered because the Winds of Dis Pear or whatever won't allow the characters to breathe in this place.

Oooh if only they had brought a breathing apparatus... Really, no one has invented those in PMD? Or if perhaps there was something else they could do.

Vernir -falls to the ground dramatically: «It's so hard to breathe in here...» v_v
Vernir -stands up gloriously: «Oh well, I can always photosynthetize!» ^_^

Not that it would help much at about -25°C. (That's about -11°F for y'all non-metric weirdos ^_^ )

I mean, I do seem to recall it's explicitly said in-game that other than the actual Final Boss chamber, the Final Boss Corridor sections are open to sunlight coming in. Who knows, maybe I'm wrong and it's time for Vernir to die and Gen to dis pear~

Still, like I parenthesaid before, won't help much with the cold.

This segment, like the others, seems to be about carrying on when you are close to the end (in more than one way, too). Unlike the previous two, the point is made explicit about carrying on and pressing on without rest from "before". It's usually another plot event, a relevant save point, perhaps the Point of No Return. In this case, we are told by the characters the pivotal point was Hydreigon's death. What's important here is that the characters are able to verbalize it.

I guess it speaks of a healthier way to copie with the current trauma?

You took off your joy ribbon, and untied it back into a piece of enchanted cloth. Then, you gave it to Vernir.

Oh! That'll serve as a replacement for a breathing apparatus in a pinch! I guess we have yet some more "good, not perfect" theming here.

Speaking of Hydreigon...

"...I'm sorry. I wish…" Vernir paused.

"That it didn't have to happen?" you asked.

One thing that Gates has going for it that Explorers was not truly able to deliver (not that I recall, tho that's perhaps for the better, who knows) is that the characters get to live with the kind of on-screen hurt and damage that can not be reasonably undone. As far as they know, Hydreigon died a horrific death, there's no way it's "not real", and the Player and Partner had to live the scene through, there's no "lalalalalala I'm not hearing" it.

Considering the scene took place in a desert, one wonders if the Player and Partner had to watch some of the ice-encased pieces-of-Hydreigon melt away into... well, pieces-of-Hydreigon. Since I don't recall the games vanishing Hydreigon's body the way it's done with eg.: the storyline's fallen heroes.

Anyway!

What matters is our characters can acknowledge the trauma, recognize they're close to the Boss Battle and still in condition to Do Something about it. Ya know, the makeshift breathing mask helps. See? 2020 taught us something! Masking is important!

Just one final word to leave this scene on:

"It doesn't matter either way. Maybe Kyurem's not even in this dungeon right now. "
Lol. Lmao. Just imagine the disrespect if THAT had happened.

Tree of Life Trunk

Disclaimer: I have not played PSMD so I know very little of it. Heck, for that non-Dark matter I have not played to the end of Gates either but at least I know of the main stuff that happens because of the memes and such. Not much luck re: PSMD, of which just about the only meme I'm aware of is that 1/3rd of the game is about being in school and the entire thing sucking.

Anyway!

The grand Tree keeping the planet alive, reduced to a dull gray.
Climate change strikes again! *shakes fist*

Now we have a Meganium partner which is so nice because 1.- Meganium and 2.- evolved MCs. I understand the why the previous games did not allow it play-wise, but IMO it sucks narratively.

"Leviene? What are you doing?" you asked.

"I read once that Meganiums can revive dead plants just by breathing on them!" they said. "Maybe it'll work on the Tree of Life, too!"

You simply stared, as Leviene breathed on the color. You cared for them with all your heart, but Leviene was such a dork sometimes.
exCUUUUUSE me princess but Meganium is the best Grass Starter! And they have awesome powers! The TCG ability set for Meganium and the wording of some early 'dex entries seem to imply they can suck up radiation from some areas, too, which does is based on the capabilities of IRL plants. They (Meganium, not plants) (okay, fine, plants too) really deserve more love.

As the two characters take a bit of a forced rest they assess the reality of the situation. I dunno, I feel like... this rest is already healthier progress than what we had in the Gates entry?

As we progress in the games, the situation may be as dire as ever but it feels like the characters are now fundamentally better prepared emotionally to handle them. Kind of a reflection on how even if it's not the same characters in-universe, it's the "same player" so to speak. Dunno how else to word it, but I like the partial acknowledgement.

Can't say much more of the segment in terms of emotional impact without knowing more of the story, although I can say I see the characters here show one extra step of emotional maturity or of emotional fortitude, the ability to reflect back on previous steps and read them as something made and done, not falling to the psychological rollercoaster of "What If?" (Season 3 Episode 4: "What if Owen was Donald Trump?"... Boy do I remember that convo). Not that the characters in the previous scenes did not necessarily have that fortitude, but here at least the characters have enough oxygen and time and orbital delay that they do get to act on it, I guess.

Also because, curiously enough, some plants are hard to kill. One would think given its role, the Tree of Life is actually the Pokémon version of ivy or mint...)

"Bravery isn't about not being scared. It's about going forward, even if you're scared," you said. "You're brave, you're one of the bravest Pokemon I know."

Oh yeah! More "good, not perfect". Between this and the literally escalating path towards each finale, we see the continuity of themes across the scenes. It's the kind of thing that makes them feel more properly connected.

All in all, this story is quite to-the-point. We dn't get to explore more of the situation or the storyline of each game and team's antics, there's no need here (and there's room for that elsewhere in their stories, too). What matters is that the narrative has a bit of a message to pass to the characters, and they take it.

Also, there's a save point right before each Final Boss - not to mention this story already acts as a save point of sorts. it's important to not lose these developments!

Good work on giving screentime to every PMD game! Every!

Adventure Squad when
 

Starlight Aurate

Ad Jesum per Mariam | pfp by kintsugi
Location
Route 123
Partners
  1. mightyena
  2. psyduck
Hi, Bench! I'm here for the Review Blitz Catnip round. I don't think I've ever read anything of yours before, so I'm excited to get to see a bit of your writing! :D

Thoughts real quick before getting into the story properly: I've never been fully clear as to whether the Sky Tower is meant to be the same thing as the Sky Pillar, since one is from the main Pokemon games, and the other is PMD, but both are where Rayquaza resides. I've accidentally interchanged the two titles when I talk about it, so I think it's a tad confusing imo.

You were running low on supplies, too, and your injuries were piling up..
Not sure if this was meant to be an ellipse or a period.

Ah, yay! I'm a Squirtle!

And who was it that held out faith in each other's innocence until the end?
Aw! I don't know what this refers to, but holding out faith in each other and believing the best in each other is so sweet! Friendship is one of my favorite themes.

The three of you were together, and that was all you needed.
❤️❤️❤️
You put your hands out instead, and turned to sign language.
Interesting! I don't usually see characters who sign to communicate. Do you know sign language?

You knew that you didn't have much longer to exist. Once time is restored, you'd cease to exist.
:O

Time was running out, but you didn't want to waste these last few minutes you had with your partner.
Knowing that the time you have with someone is (most likely) the last time you'll ever see them is really, really bittersweet. It makes those moments all the more special and harder to let time pass by.

Truth be told, you couldn't be further from fine. You were tired, bruised, freezing, and terrified. The moment Kyurem decided you didn't belong in this world kept replaying in your mind, over and over.
Agh, yes. I describe these moments as, "being unable to go on anymore. But there's no choice but to go on."

"Bravery isn't about not being scared. It's about going forward, even if you're scared," you said.
Yes, I LOVE this!

Together, the two of you continued your final ascent.
Ahh, what an ending! Saying that it's their "final ascent" leads me down so many possibilities--my first is that they're successful, but that it ends up costing them their lives. Or it could be that they're unsuccessful?

I take it that this ties in to your main fic, Eternal Shadows? I noticed the Oshawott named Gen, so that's what made me think of it. I'm unfamiliar with PMD, but I really enjoyed this collection! Tales of friendships, of bravery--continuing on even when the danger is so imminent--of not losing faith in each other, of sticking up for each other no matter what, all hit me really close to the heart. And you captured them so beautifully from a myriad of characters!

Your writing has a wonderful flow to it, and I really felt sucked in to the narrative. Especially with it being in second-person--it had me feeling more captivated and involved in the story!

I think you do a really good job with the emotional aspects throughout this one-shot: the atmosphere in each case is overall dim, and the characters are pushing forth through a mixture of desperation and hope. The parts where they just want to give up, where they feel unable to continue on feel so real. When despair overcomes you, you can't just "pull yourself up by your bootstraps and muscle through it"--you don't have bootstraps to pull, you don't have muscles to exert, and everything falls around you uncontrollably. Companionship, and living and fighting for others, is something that can really pull someone through when they aren't able to continue on by themselves. And I think that every one of these snippets showed that beautifully.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
 

SparklingEspeon

Back on Her Bullshit
Staff
Location
a Terrace of Indeterminate Location in Snowbelle
Pronouns
She/Her
Partners
  1. espurr
  2. fennekin
  3. zoroark
Hello! Making good on our review exchange from week one with a review of Final Ascent.

I thought this was a cool idea – the moment right before the final boss is definitely a heavy moment in all the PMD games, so seeing them lined up in a row like this is a nice and easy way to show the links between all the games, and what stays same across all the differences. I will say this felt a lot more like four drabbles strung together than a cohesive oneshot with a proper narrative, but given this is meant to be a snapshot I suppose that makes sense :p I did think there was a good emotional narrative! It feels like the tone starts out somewhat dreary, and by the end (the very end) it’s lightened up a little, perhaps through the repetition of the characters choosing to continue on despite the stress and tiredness and fear.

I noticed that you sort of emphasised similarities a lot between the four different scenes. Even though it’s different people and circumstances, it’s the same situation—that they’re stumbling along and then one of them asks to take a break—and similar dialogue in areas, and the differences come out in how the different characters react to the same situation. It’s a really clever plot machine! In general I thought you did a really good job of playing on the unique stressors and challenges of each of each hero-partner duo – though it’s the same situation, none of them feel the same, whether it’s the explorers hero concealing that he’ll be going soon, the gates hero cheering the partner up, or the two super kids wondering if they’ll ever see their friends and family again. (I also notice Gen is the Gates Hero here? I think I remember there being two gens in eternal shadows…)

Of all of them my favourite of course will have to be the PSMD one :p liked Leviene’s attempts to heal the tree of life (and her inevitable failure), and all the angst that follows wrt everyone getting sent to the voidlands and if they’ll ever see anyone again. I think my favourites sort of scaled with how far they were into the fic, probably because of my inverse familiarity with the games depending on how old they are but also because I think the oneshot sort of had to build momentum, and the scenes themselves were a bit short for that. It took a few scenes before the ‘beginning’ stage of the oneshot finally passed.

Overall, enjoyed this! You do a lot with a small amount of space, and as someone who enjoys The Calm Before The Storm scenes, you did a really great job of illustrating the PMD games here. Good luck with your writing!

~SparklingEspeon
 
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