Pyrocity
Youngster
- Pronouns
- He/Him
First of all, this story has been my saving grace this last week from unfortunately routine stressful holiday circumstances, so thank you very much for the welcome distraction, dear talented author.
Theres so many bits and pieces across the work that I could gush about really, but it’s just very incredibly written overall! Your prose has a lovely rhythm to it, getting in the right headspace of the characters while still being delightfully descriptive and addictive to read.
I really love what you’ve done with Kanto+Johto’s history in particular, the back and forth of politics, how the gym leaders end up taking over… the decision of sticking to mostly japanese names works in tandem with the world you’ve depicted (and the few that stray from said naming convention having their own significance as to why scratches a nice itch in my brain.) everything just fits together wonderfully.
I really like the idea of making Archer in particular having significance to Lance’s character- i don’t see a lot of people do very interesting things with him, and im curious to see how this will lead up to the hgss events (if there’s plans for that far, of course.)
I’m still making my way through Suicune’s Choice, but this one has really blown me away so far. There’s dozens of lines that i know will stick in my head for ages. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
Theres so many bits and pieces across the work that I could gush about really, but it’s just very incredibly written overall! Your prose has a lovely rhythm to it, getting in the right headspace of the characters while still being delightfully descriptive and addictive to read.
I really love what you’ve done with Kanto+Johto’s history in particular, the back and forth of politics, how the gym leaders end up taking over… the decision of sticking to mostly japanese names works in tandem with the world you’ve depicted (and the few that stray from said naming convention having their own significance as to why scratches a nice itch in my brain.) everything just fits together wonderfully.
I really like the idea of making Archer in particular having significance to Lance’s character- i don’t see a lot of people do very interesting things with him, and im curious to see how this will lead up to the hgss events (if there’s plans for that far, of course.)
I’m still making my way through Suicune’s Choice, but this one has really blown me away so far. There’s dozens of lines that i know will stick in my head for ages. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
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