Pokémon A Comprehensive Guide to Items in the World of Pokemon

[Astinus]

This was really enjoyable to read! Really creative too! I like how you took items that were just made to be helpful in the PMD games and gave them all interesting backstories and recipes. And not only the items themselves! You built a world that has some rich history to it, and I liked that you just dropped mentions of them in this.

Or, as I found out soon after I reunited with Lidequir after the Falling Star crisis, sometimes the light goes towards the nearest therapist.

I’m sure I don’t need to remind anyonne about the tale of Marian the Cubone, or the “Ultimate Scarf” incident.

Like both of these. They're just mentioned, but they made me want to ask the writer of these pieces what the full story was. I see that you have more PMD fics. Though they might not be about these events in particular, I am interested in checking out more of your fics just to get more of this world.

(Also, that "anyonne" is a typo.)

With the slang “sus” on the rise, and its similarity to “sitrus”, we could see the appearance of a “sus berry” before too long.

As someone who says "sus" in real life, I do not have a problem with that! It's also cute to wonder the origins of human slang in the PMD world.

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It felt a little weird for this to mention "people" when the majority of the ones reading this would be Pokemon.

All in all, this was really cute and enjoyable!