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Hey there! I decided to catch up with this story for the Blitz. I read chapters 11-15, and here are my thoughts. I like that the train accommodates differently sized Pokémon. I like the whole section describing the train, really. I appreciate that the species of the World-Savers get reiterated...

Hey there! I'm back for more for our exchange. I've read chapters 5-10. Here we go. You'll want "if I was" instead of "if I'm" due to the tenses. I don't think either of these commas should be there according to grammar rules. Ooh, a radio. I wonder if it works through some kind of magic or...

Hi! Here to review two chapters as per our exchange. Looks like I've already reviewed chapters 1-2 ages ago, so I'll read and review 3 and 4. Missing closing quote. Comma instead of period. It's odd that the berry is described like something Gen has never seen before (to the point where he...

Hey there. I semi-randomly decided to check a bit of this out after hearing so much about it. I've read chapters 1 and 2, and here are my thoughts. First off, I gotta say I was surprised by the content warnings. The way this fic was spoken about made it seem rather dark, but those warnings look...