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Man, how did I know it was a Jynx before they even confirmed it? Anyway, hi, chapter 4 (and 5) time! And wow, chapter 4 one is practically half the length of the previous chapter. It's promising in a way, since I suspect that means more might happen in a short time? That's my thought going in...

Chapter 3! An overall slow chapter, and I'm very antsy for something to finally actually kick off the story, to be honest. More on that with my stream of consciousness thoughts below: The adamancy for not telling her child something important about the key just to lead to mystery and drama is a...

This is a review for chapter 2! The first two scenes were cute and showed kids being kids. However, I feel that those first two scenes were a bit redundant to one another. The first one was good for establishing that they were still just kids and so on relative to the first chapter, but the...

Heya Vray! This is a review for chapter 1, crossposted from FFN. Interesting opening, starting with some intrigue and context less exchanges, but I was able to follow just enough to get into the scene. This is a decent opener despite the lack of context, so good job there. Also, bonus points...