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wow im finally here it's only been 2 weeks With just one line, you manage to instantly tell us what kind of story this is going to be. 👌 Ferry still hasn't quite seemed to figure out what's going on, but that's okay, he'll catch on. At first I was a bit surprised that you were going to be...

I Can’t. Believe. I never commented on chapter 4. So first of all, I want to say that I love the air of suspense that this chapter set up. The introduction of the mystery, the buildup, and the payoff were all very satisfying. To say nothing of the fact that I can't believe I missed the...

Hey, glad to see you working on this again! And hoo boy, you sure captured the desolate air of their journey well. I hadn't realize just how ill-prepared they were for traveling out in the wilds! It made for an unforgiving atmosphere, which of course made it all the more appropriate that...

You know, I'm glad you opted to post these two chapters together. One, since they're pretty short, so one might not have been enough. And two, because of the fun contrast in seeing the two completely opposing views on this meeting. The instant we switched to a human pov I was like "oboy this...

Hoo boy, I'm glad I decided to check this out. You pretty much caught my attention right away with that... ahem flattering picture of Doran painted by the opening paragraph. I'm already totally on board for your interpretation of medieval Kalos, and after such a short opener too. Like Namo, I...