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So chapter 4 is... not at all what I expected given how chapter 3 ended. I figured it'd be Ember going to Oran Farms, or else already being there. Though now I have the sense that's going to happen offscreen, with this chapter introducing us to people she's going to run into who are going to...

Three's a small chapter that appears to serve as Ember saying her goodbyes to her uncle. I have a feeling his stories and teachings will come in handy for at some point after she leaves, given the prominent focus it gets. (Also RIP her dad's got one heck of a whacky RPG name.) This is where the...

So, I wonder if the new prologue was written partly in response to Namo's earlier feedback. Adding in something to maybe grab readers' attentions and pull them in. The biggest takeaway is that it's a shady conversation with some shady characters. I think you could've been a biiiit more generous...