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"Yeah. I'm a pokémon." Brisa pulled herself together as best she could. It wasn't much, but at least she could talk without choking on her words. She wiped her face a little drier with her paws—not that it mattered, in the dark. "What, you think I'm just like Owen, that I just battle hard? No...

"Accidents? You think that's all that's on my mind? An accident?" Brisa wrestled down a sob. "Is it an accident if you know you're dangerous? If you don't keep yourself in check? I should fuckin' know better. This isn't the first time I've gone too far in a fight. It isn't the first time I've...

Brisa gawped at the litten. "You're still sayin' that? When you said that back at the dojo about me fuckin' losin' control and hurtin' Curio, I didn't get it. Then I start a fuckin' fight with you and do you a dozen kinds of injury, and you're still sayin' that? What the fuck is your criterion...

Brisa didn't react at first. When she did speak, it was uncharacteristically gentle. "I'm sorry you had to be here at all, Starr," she said. Starr gave her an incredulous look, and she shrugged. "I'm glad it's you down here with me, though. You're tougher than most of the posse. You might have...

Brisa looked up from yet another vivid recollection of the fight to see Starr in front of her, mad as hell. She kept eye contact. Her stomach twisted. "Of course I care," she said, with bite in her words. "You still don't have the first idea what's goin' through my skull right now, huh." She...

"Alright," said Brisa. She pulled herself into a sphinx pose and rested. She would recover very little energy, but at least she wouldn't exhaust herself further. It was the best she could manage. "I tried that already," she called flatly, as Starr pressed against the boulders in a vain effort...

Brisa wasn't sure how long it had been when Starr finally woke up. She'd had enough time to ruminate in her own despondency to eventually get up, pace about looking for resources or routes out, and try contacting the posse via telepathy and badge. Naturally, she'd found no leads. All evidence...

Brisa came to first, feeling much as she had after the last two mass combats the posse had undertaken. Exhausted, pained, vaguely numb. A quick check confirmed that nothing seemed broken. Incredible, given how unreserved she'd been in the fight. The fight... they'd performed well. Her new...

Short, sharp reviews are the order of the day~! Further notes on ch15: Loved that Astrid called Jade a little shit lmfao The way you described Mewtwo's Pressure and how overwhelming his presence was one of my fave things about this chapter. Ch16

Two days hiding her face hadn't helped. It didn't matter. She would meet her purpose. Brisa was quiet at the edges and back of the party as they gathered, left for the Silver Trench, and faced up against Lugia. All that mattered was that she fought. Did her duty. She hid from Curio and...

Haste I on Turn 1 on Starr.

Reviewed envy of eden, which was a BLEC prize. 1 short prologue and 1 full chapter, 230w. Reviewed Legendarian Chronicles, 3 chapters and a little "extra" about teleporting, 550w.

Hi Chibi! As requested, reviews for the time being will largely be in the form of abbreviated reactions. Ch13: Ch14: Teleport Extra: This was pretty cool! Surprised it's not threadmarked but you do you. Nice to learn a little more about it and its limits and why it's not a major logistics...

Hi kint! I read the first two entries, since the first was short and I've been dealing with the oneshot comp instead of reviewing this. Sorry for the wait. So, first up I love the introduction. It was so clear and so striking that I could practically see it in cinematic form, and it was a...

What the fuck was she doing. How had her intention to make an apology turned into this? Brisa put her forehead to the ground and gave in to weak, agonising sobs. She'd never been in this much pain. How had this seemed worth it only seconds before? "It was a mistake to come here," she said...

Brisa's body was ragged, beaten, drained of all energy. She felt like a single smear of pain across the ground. Still, she clung to consciousness. She looked up at Starr, one eyes still screwed shut, and her mouth pulled open into a miserable red grin. "I didn't come here to fight you... but I...

She was a storm, flash and thunder amidst rolling darkness, and she made no effort to protect herself. There was no reason to. She took each slash and paid them back with tearing bites. She would fully feel the pain later. Later, but not now. Lightning danced at her mouth. "Come on!" she cried...

Brisa's jaws lit up in an instant. This was an unexpected result, but it was still an oncoming melee. She knew what to do about those. She went in with a focus she'd not had since before the Radiance had touched her a week ago. Controlled, confident, drawing on reserves of energy she didn't...

Fierce joy gave way to fierce anger. She forced herself to breathe despite the tightness in her chest. She'd thought that at least Starr would respect her combat ability. Goddamnit, goddamnit, fucking salt and fucking sand YES she was a fucking pokémon! Why wasn't that enough? You're a...

Starr adapted so fast. She was bold, fearless. Salt and sand, they should have been battling from the day they'd arrived. This was the opponent she'd hoped for, oh yes. Brisa's mind was back on automatic tactical analysis now. Half a dozen options ripped through her brain and she came up with...