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Nice, another chapter! I'm going to have to catch up before I get truly, hideously behind. Chapter 3 Oh man is someone ever in for an unwelcome adventure! It's neat how excited Haru is about getting into the family business, though; it's pretty rare to see a PMD protagonist with ambitions...

Hmm, an AXSIS VR device. I bet that doesn't do weird things to your brain with repeated usage or anything. Oh man, there's so much I want to check out here. For one, I wonder if there's anything interesting in that saved mail folder. > Open archived mail And also... I would feel guilty about...

NaNoWriMo's right around the corner! Who's planning to participate, and what are you going to work on? This year I'm going to be working on the same thing I have for the past several years, my main chapterfic, Salvage. I had hoped to finish it for NaNo last year, but then instead of doing that...

Treat or Treat 2019 No tricks here! As October winds down, with the prospect of shorter days, NaNoWriMo, and the holidays looming, let's take some time to relax and have a bit of Halloween fun! Treat or Treat is a casual story feedback event that's quick and low-stress, with the primary goal of...

I recently spilled way too many words about why pokéball shelves are bad, which got me thinking... Have you ever accidentally screwed up your own worldbuilding? Are there elements of the pokémon canon you find it really hard to write around? Or are there problems you've seen in other stories...

Hey, welcome to the forums! I actually haven't read an alternate Ash story before, so it will be fun to follow along with this one. I'm curious to see how different it'll feel from a standard OC trainerfic. You mentioned a couple of times that this chapter is a lot of setup/worldbuilding kind...

Welcome! It sounds like you're working on some interesting projects--seemingly-human kids developing pokémon abilities + Team Rocket is definitely relevant to my interests. We definitely have some writers here who've been working on epics since they were twelve and know what it's like to go...

Ah, the secret project appears at last! This is a fun one, and of course perfectly appropriate for the season. I can see why you wanted to keep it under wraps until just the right time. :) I haven't seen Young Frankenstein, so I'm not totally clear on what elements come from that versus what's...

Oh man, it's so awesome that you're planning to open your own fansite. PLEASE link/announce it here when you do! It's rare to see people starting fansites these days, so it's always exciting to me when it happens. Also, thanks for reminding me of Eonlight Valley... I was never a member there...

Well now, those sure are some spells! Somebody's been a lot more lucky than Fiametta in the lotto, that's for sure. Also, of course you have to buy some shitty app to open a window. But there must be some way to move around in the physical world, or it doesn't seem like these spells would do...

Hey, welcome back, Adam! It's great to see you around again. Good to hear you're feeling better about your writing, and I hope you had fun revisiting this story. It'll be fun for me, too, to see how things have changed in this iteration. Some more sentence-level and grammary things, and then...

Oooh, I think I told you ages ago that I wanted to know how Red ended up meeting/getting involved with HELIX in the first place, so it's awesome to see that you've written a story about it. Oh man, imagining Red actually asking grieving people those questions. Yikes. Have a go at reviving a...

Somehow the "waste land" references you've got here only hit me about two hours after I wrote my last review. They work wonderfully for Orre and for this story--some great imagery there, and a fitting frame for the bleak picture you want to paint here. No comma after "enormous." For adjectives...

You can't say that and not give us your thoughts on food webs! Controversial among humans, or pokémon as well? Are there vegetarian omnivorous pokémon, or carnivores who look for meat substitutes or look for "ethical" prey?

The anything goes corpse is now up! Enjoy the mayhem, and thanks to all the writers! It's a lovely beast you've created.

Welcome to our anything goes corpse! Armed with only the last two sentences of a previous writer's work, our authors have constructed for you an epic tale contains pretty much anything you could want: poképrom, the scientific method, deadly neurotoxin, suddenly noir interlude, and cats, this...

I totally didn't realize that you wrote fic, so it's cool to be able to have look now. Since some people already checked out your PMD story, I figured I'd give this one a look. Always here for a good "pokémon but humans too" fic! That rejection letter was such a pitch-perfect "thanks but no...

Huh, the dispute between Finnar and Calem is way more intense than I realized. I wonder if these organizations they work for, which are apparently at odds, have anything to do with the battles that have been going on so far. We still don't really know why the malamar are doing what they're...

Ugh, I doubt Fiametta appreciates AXSIS outing her to everybody. At least it sounds like the AXSIS EnforcerFriends or whatever don't have a good handle on her whereabouts, and either she's not with TT or they haven't thought to check TT's place yet. So the Suburbs crashed all the devices it was...