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Huh, well how about that? Nip tipped the jar, letting the now-heavy lump roll out and into his paw. He raised it up and down a few times, testing the weight, and then held it still so that he could get a better look. Sure enough, it wiggled just a little before settling down in his grip. He...

No one else had made a motion to yet try and put their Shade in a stone, so he supposed that duty fell on him. "Sure, fine. Whatever." Nip made a gesture akin to a noncommital shrug, then opened up his jar the rest of the way, reaching his hand in to grab the stone. "I guess you just sort of..."...

Logging: 1000 words written 2 hours drawing review for 2 chapters of PMD Elegy for Humanity (502 words excluding quotes)

Hey Phant! About time I got around to this. Let’s jump right in. To start off, I want to say you have a strong story hook. We get into the action very fast, and there’s a ton of lore packed into this chapter. You’ve stuff like how certain pokemon abilities (like absol’s disaster sense, for...

"Uh... did anyone else see that?" Nip asked, not taking his eyes from the jar. "The glowing stuff, I mean." He glanced up at Chip and Soda. "It, uh... tried to eat the stone. I think. The stone started glowing while it did that. Now it's just... laying down next to it. And it's still glowing."

Nip paused to stare at Owen, twitching his ear to acknowledge the concern of others. Letting it out like that seemed... a bit reckless, to say the least. "Well, if nothing else, it wouldn't hurt to..." He trailed off, placing his jar on the ground. He pried it open just enough to drop the lump...

Nip picked up the container he was keeping his shade in, peering inside. In certainly didn't seem distressed being around his lump. But, then again, what did he know? He didn't ask to be a dad. And to be frank he wasn't sure he was ready for that kind of commitment. Yet here he was. "I have...

Nip frowned slightly, bringing a claw to scratch against the side of his face. "So... do you know if it's painful or anything like that? For the shade, I mean. Like... does it kill it?" He paused, shaking his head. "I'm probably overthinking this. It's just that my kin have strong feelings about...

Nip returned to his sleeping space for just a moment, returning with his own lump. His brow furrowed as he tried to think back. "Well... I remember Starr throwing something at one of them. I just assumed the blow killed it. That would account for the fifth one, right?

Nip, who had elected to take a nap, sat up as the pokemon entered the building. Soda and Flesh he recognized. But the third one? He'd never seen a pokemon like that, with its smooth body and disembodied parts. A pokemon like that had to be a ghost, right? Kind of like a haunter's hands weren't...

"We have time to work out how to tell Maple," Nip said, raising his voice enough to be heard. "Telling her is inevitable at this rate, but we have more pressing matters to work out. Namely... searching for our missing members. For all we know, Brisa and Starr could be in some sort of danger."

Nip looked away from Cynthain. There was nothing he could do to help there, so he chose to keep his distance. "Diyem has a point," Nip admitted. "He has no reason to make this up. If anything he'd benefit more by continuing to hide this from us." He stood up and looked upwards before addressing...

"I mean no offense but... I find that difficult to believe," Nip admitted. "The hero part, at least." He shook his head. "It doesn't really matter, in the end. He turned his attention to Mellow next. "The radiance is a powerful tool. We shouldn't just avoid using it entirely, I think. We...

Nip let out a long breath, sifting and sinking lower into his nest. So many had missed or ignored or not paid attention to the earlier story? Not paying attention was the fastest way to get killed. Sure, it was only a story, but the point stood! Hopefully, they were at least paying attention...

Nip took a step forward. "I'm a decent tracker. If we can find a lead, any sort of lead at all, then I'm more than willing to help with the search."

Nip paused, trying to think back to what had happened just as the bubble had started to collapse. "There was a... One of the Great Three. Giratina, the Neutral. I think Maple — the leader of the, uh, God Squad, you might know her — called them in for help when the bubble started to collapse...

"It's just a suggestion," Nip countered. "The last thing we want to do is wander off and get further lost. There's already two of us missing, after all." He looked like he wanted to say more, but he closed his mouth when he caught sight of the approaching trio. Oh, so they already recognized...

Nip shook his head. This was... real bad, to say the least. Though his thoughts were mostly aimed at Diyem, he also spoke them out loud to address the rest of the team. "We have no idea where Maple is, nor how long it would take her to arrive. We can get in contact with the other members of her...

For the third (fourth? He needed to stop making a habit of this) time, Nip found himself in an unfamiliar civilized area. Everything had been so chaotic, he hadn't had time to process everything that had happened since the bubble began collapsing. All he knew was that two of their number were...

The sweet taste of victory was short-lived. Nip's ear and feathers drooped as he looked at the shimmer of sunlight above them. "Not to cut the celebration short but... I get the feeling we better get out of here..."