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"Okay, good. Let's move on down the street, then, check the other shops before we come back here." Just the same, Dave first stuck his nose to the ground briefly and concentrated on the smells of the people walking around the marketplace right now, seeing if his Odor Sleuth could find anything...

"Right. I'm thinking we try walking around, looking or sniffing or whatever, and seeing if we see or detect anyone who seems infected, or anyone suspicious who could be a transformed Darkwhite. While it's not too busy we can probably start by entering the shops and making sure the shopkeepers...

Reviewed chapter two of the envy of eden.

Hoo, boy, chapter two. This was something. I thought you picked a fun choice of POV with a camera drone Rotom, and the fight was intense! Everything continues to be beautifully written. Everyone once again completely fails to meaningfully address the opposing point of view, as people do...

Dave sighed in irritation as Truffle left. The fucking God Squad sure weren't getting any less suspect. "Yeah, well, it's cool for the town if we find nothing, but personally I'd really love to, you know, actually learn something from this exercise." He sniffed at the ground, trying to recall...

Wrote 500 words.

Dave's reaction to the Radiance:

Dave, who'd trotted along with them, rolled his eyes. "Oh, sure. Arceus is totally there to help, except it just so happens his 'vision is distorted' about anything relevant. How convenient."

Reviewed chapter 1 of envy of eden.

I am here again, having read chapter one! God, your prose is beautiful; I kept wanting to highlight bits. I think you did a fascinating job of characterization here: Vaselva genuinely loving Hilda but doing so because other people took her away from her mother and presented her with a purpose...

Dave looked with dismay at the others touching the light one after another (had they all lost their damn minds?) but looked up at Truffle's words. "Hey, I've got this move Odor Sleuth. Is that going to be able to sniff her out?"

Dave stared at him. "Look, you want us to touch and take in some dodgy-ass light that, what, 'overuse can lead to harming yourselves'? And it's fine and dandy because you think it comes from your god? Am I seriously the only one who thinks this rings about fifteen different fucking alarm bells...

Reviewed Cosmic Reversion!

Oh, Jesus fucking Christ. What the fuck. Dave felt his hackles rising. "Okay, so, let's say hypothetically I don't want to be inducted into the radiance cult?"

Here for Catnip circle! I thought this was nicely written overall, and I enjoyed seeing a pretty different sort of one-shot, focusing on character relationships in a PMD world where an apocalypse is looming. The atmosphere was pretty soulcrushing, and you did a good job showing Oli and Sadie's...

For turn 7, Dave uses two Blast Seeds on Darkrai.

Going to just preregister some autobattle for turn six, in case I forget before I go to bed (turn five should be forced rest). If Dave has two actions on turn six: - Use Assurance, on Thyme if Thyme's Tiny Reviver Seed has not been used, otherwise Pepper. - If his own Tiny Reviver Seed...

For turn 4, Dave will be using Psych Up on Nip.

For turn 3, Dave is using Assurance on Thyme.

Provisionally, my actions for turns one and two are Psych Up on Nip and then Howl on Cabot, Nip and Starr.