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'Ancestral techniques'? Beds of straw? This sure sounded like some woo bullshit, but who was to say it wouldn't work in this place. He rolled his eyes a little before padding over to the other bed and sitting down on it. "Let's just see if this works."

Great, so the entire reason they were doing this in the first place didn't pan out? Fantastic. He scowled at the Hydreigon for a moment, thinking. On the one hand, calling forth the spirit of some asshole just for some fucking advice didn't sound remotely worth it. They had better psychics...

Daycare? Sure. Of course it was. "You can say that again." He shook his head. "Let's go talk to your dad." <><><><><>

Dave gave her a skeptical look. He hadn't exactly sounded like some sort of noble altruist. But whatever. If Brisa wanted to? Why not. See this guy for himself. Let him explain whatever sorry-ass excuse he had. Maybe Dave could have a word or two with him. "Sure. Okay. Where are we going?" He...

"Hmmm." Brisa's fucking dad, though? "I don't know, would he even help? Do we want his help? You made him sound like the world's biggest shitbag. Why do we want to even ask him?"

Dave blinked. "What? You sure? I'm sure there are some psychics in Cibus that aren't that motherfucker."

Dave quirked an eyebrow. "Yeah, that's pretty specific. What are you thinking?"

"Yeah, no, not really. They're smarter than people often give them credit for, but they can't talk. They can express basic ideas, like 'I'm hungry' or 'go away', but no complex communication or abstract thought the way we think of it, as far as anyone can tell."

"Huh." Even as a Poochyena he couldn't quite relate to that. But speaking to Brisa about it was a... pretty interesting perspective. They'd always seen her hunter's instinct as something fundamentally animalistic that her human, reasoning half just had to rein in. But here was a sapient Pokémon...

“Yeah, she’s very good at this. Still getting used to it, you know, being normal here.” Mia had spent all her human life essentially wanting this while they tried to get her to keep it strictly to games with her sister, because humans were squishy and she could murder one in the blink of an...

“Yeah?” Dave looked up from Mia’s fighting exercises. She was darting all over the place, lunging at imaginary things with precise slashes of her glowing scythes. “What’s going on?”

Reviewed one chapter of The Legendarian Chronicles. +1 593 words +1 theme (previously reviewed 33 chapters on the Serebii.net forums)

Reviewed chapter 34 of The Legendarian Chronicles.

I have arrived, to review... chapter 34, the first chapter I didn't properly review yet! Hoooopefully this is the start of me catching up on reviewing this on TR. The repetition of "It wasn't supposed to be this soon" feels awkward, possibly accidental? Technically it sounds like she's quoting...

Reviewed one chapter of The End: Rekindled. +1 810 words +1 theme

Reviewed one chapter of The End: Rekindled.

Back for chapter two! Snubbull has two l's. I enjoy this worldbuilding flavor - both showing the level of technology they have and, as Cleo points out, it's a quickly-assembled temporary town. Repetition of "supplies" feels a little awkward here to me. More good characterization - this...

A review for the new version of chapter one of Pokémon: Legendary Adventures. +1 2517 words (not all of them are about the new version specifically, but enough are, haha) +1 theme

Reviewed one chapter of Pokémon: Legendary Adventures.

As in, the thing where long quotes get cut off at a certain length and you have to click to view the full quote. I think I've gotten the impression that's the thing that's glitching out when this happens. I could be wrong, though.