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Thanks for reviewing, ShiniGojira! :D Chapter 47 should be coming in a couple days, but in the meantime, here's another extra! This is a short one, again featuring May. I wish I'd given Quilava a bit more of a voice in it (I added a little bit more but couldn't make it what I would really...

Title: Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Eternal Shadows Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pokemon-mystery-dungeon-eternal-shadows.509/post-52648 Chapters: 1 Weekly theme: yes but already claimed for this fic this week, so really no

Chapter 3 Ahaha, I recognize these colors! Nice to see Arctozolt here - wonder what they're doing and why they're looking for Burhalla. The first-and-second-person POV is a fun choice here - what more natural second person is there than the person you literally share a body with? I do find...

Title: Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Eternal Shadows Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pokemon-mystery-dungeon-eternal-shadows.509/post-52529 Chapters: 2 (2!) Weekly theme: yes

Since you did wind up having the spoons to review TQftL, I'm here to start fulfilling my end of the exchange! You mention you'd like less focus on prose/grammar - I hope you don't mind a couple of grammar/typo comments anyway, but let me know if you'd rather I left that out entirely. I'm also...

Title: The Legendarian Chronicles Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-legendarian-chronicles.48/post-52458 Chapters: 1 Weekly theme: yes

Flashbacks It's great to see these at last! More buildup of the trio's relationship before it all comes to a head with chapters 23-25 is something the fic really needed, and I imagine it'll do a lot for new readers to get these nuggets, even if they may not quite understand the significance of...

Thanks for the reviews, all! I treasure your commentary <3 Anyway, chapter 46! We start the second of the fic's special five-chapter arcs, the Ouen League, with some revelations and some settling in at the tournament site. The Ouen League – Chapter 46: Day One Dear Participant MARK...

Title: Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/pokemon-mystery-dungeon-hands-of-creation.22/post-52390 Chapters: 1 Weekly theme: yes

Chapter 2 This is relying a bit too hard on the reader knowing Mystery Dungeon items off the top of their head, I feel, without really getting much out of keeping it hidden as far as I can tell. I'm assuming it's a Totter Seed, which Owen can use where he couldn't use a Totter Orb because the...

Title: Of Sand and Shadows Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/of-sand-and-shadows.458/post-52309 Chapters: 1 Weekly theme: yes

Bwahaha I like how Rui just keeps talking and making small talk with this totally silent grumpy dude. Also, enjoy Wes actually pausing before telling her the names of his Pokémon because he doesn't want to give too much out. Realistically, I guess it's possible Snagem could theoretically catch...

Title: White Swan, Black Swan Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/white-swan-black-swan.551/post-52258 Chapters: 1 Weekly theme: yes

Chapter 2 I enjoy this opening. It's characterization, but it's strong worldbuilding too: the idea that trading in a motorcycle for a Flying-type is even a thing for Odette to have never had the urge to do says a lot about the ubiquity of people traveling via Flying-type Pokémon. The fact she...

Title: the envy of eden Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-envy-of-eden.351/post-52202 Chapters: 1 Weekly theme: yes

Chapter xv Oops I meant to cycle around to other fics first but then I accidentally started reading this one last night and then I read the whole thing. Some way or another I didn't actually make the connection to the abused Conkeldurr from the Bisharp chapter until the end - it's been a while...

Name: David (Dave) Ambrose Pronouns: he/him Age: 40 Species: Human turned Mightyena Appearance: Just a somewhat scruffy-looking Mightyena. Blurb: Irritable atheist scientist who headed the inadvertent creation of eight Pokémorph children ten years ago and will defend them with his life. Got...

Title: the envy of eden Link: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/the-envy-of-eden.351/post-52120 Chapters: 1 Weekly theme: no

Goosebumps at the opening scene here. Always love these mythological angles from different Pokémon, touching on the same clash between the dragons. Missing a space between these sentences. I'm not 100% sure if this is an intentional reference to the Pokémon theme song but either way it made me...

Chapter 45 time! In which Mark and May finally arrive at the site of the Ouen League, and we see Taylor again (remember him?). Chapter 45: The Ouen League HQ Mark sighed in relief as they finally exited Champion Cave for what was hopefully to be the last time. He shuddered as the sudden...