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The thing I really love about this chapter is how efficient it is. I know it went through a lot of versions and a lot of stuff had to get cut, but it was worth it, because the end result is just so clean. It conveys a ton of stuff, and knows exactly what not to show. We don't need to see the...

Hey there, I'd been wanting to check this one out for a long time, and the blitz is the perfect opportunity! I think this fic opens at basically the perfect moment--we don't need to see the beginning of the crisis, or the beginning of the meeting. That's the real power of fanfiction, to skip...

Hey there, finally here to review this! I love how a silly Exquisite Corpse entry ended up inspiring you to make a whole chapter fic out of the premise of a Tropius trainer. And the fic doesn't waste any time launching us right into it! I think it was a good call to have Coleane get sent to the...

Okay but this is legit what I always say about PMD gameplay--traversing a dungeon isn't ever just one thing, each individual encounter or trap is trivial, it's the combination of all those encounters, all those traps, one after another until finally something gives. There's a fascinating...

[Glances at date of last review] Hmm... hmm... yes I see... let's all ignore that. SE8 Really funny to see Star as just this regular legend caught by humans, after all the world-scale god-tier crises. But I suppose it fits with the whole "gods are weaker in physical form" thing. Even weirder...

Back at this hell yea. Ch7 I just had to call attention to this for being the best visual ever. So, here we are at the party! Great job making everything feel slimy as all hell, despite the rich fancy veneer. The really interesting thing to me is how I never would have thought of 'shiny...

Somehow? I have never reviewed?? Tetra fic??? I thought i had to be mistaken, but no, I keep rolling you for Smeargle, not Catnip. :mewlulz: Well, this works out! I'd already read chapter 1, so onto chapter 2! I'm still constantly amused by just how thoroughly Koa expects everything to go...

Oh yeah, I should be able to offer an art prize. Same as before, one prize, whatever the highest tier is.

hope u enjoyed ur birthday soup cake, sorry about the no critical hit

The crushing grip of death released its hold, and it took Jade a few moments to realize that she could breathe again. She couldn't stop filling her lungs over and over, too grateful to care about the pain. They weren't dead. With each breath, it slowly became easier to accept that fact. It...

Name of fic - Kills-Other-Humans Link to fic - https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/kills-other-humans.1266/post-62575 # of Chapters you intend to read - Chapter 2

It's been a load of fun following everyone's progress on this project! Since I missed the initial signup, I decided to work on my own card on the side~

Jade stumbled off of Keldeo's back, mind still replaying that moment over and over, when the legend's blade cleaved through the lava beast's armor. They'd done it. Groudon was down, and that awful heat had receded. The buzz of adrenaline thrummed in the back of her head, keeping her going...

Jade really wasn't ready for that. She stared at the water horse, taking a few seconds to reboot her brain and process his request. He was asking her to join him. Well, it wasn't like she hadn't done it before, riding into battle on a legend. But it was different when it was her patron...

Hi there! Bit of a story behind this review lmao. I first read the Prologue + chapters 1/2 in February, but kept getting delayed when it came to actually writing up my thoughts. Then I finally picked it up again this month and figured, heck with it, if you had to wait this long, I might as...

In a hail of lightning and ice and fairy song and a half-dozen other things, Rayquaza was down, slipping limply from the ring's hold before spiraling away. Jade braced herself for the inevitable counterattack, throwing a hurried glance around for something or someone to duck behind. But the...

I'm glad folks liked the events of Chapter 52! It was a long time coming. ;P And now, another extra, because I just couldn't leave Starr alone for long, especially after Blacklight~ ~Chapter 52 Extra: Burn Away~ The sun had barely set, leaving the surrounding wilds lit with the reddish...

The last time Jade had seen Rayquaza was when it had fallen prey to the Rockets' trap. Its free will stolen, its power turned against them. Needing to use the horrifying power of the Primals to fend it off. But that was another time, in another world, far away. Right, so... fighting...

That overwhelming presence seemed to press in from all sides, threatening to smother them with its sheer power. Jade's chest felt like it was being squeezed, each breath taking more effort than the last, all the while a sickly unease prickled on the back of her neck. In other words, it felt a...