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The starting scene is quite interesting with a Riolu wandering around a mysterious dark void! Then, a mysterious dark figure shows up, though it doesn’t remind me of any specific pokemon as of now. I am also intrigued by it referring to the Riolu as “Number Ten.” After that, we see the Riolu...

Here for the Review Blitz! I admittedly don't remember the story of X and Y all that well, so I do apologize if I get confused by some parts. Also I will be assuming that this isn't intentionally ZA-compliant, because of the fact it was written before ZA. I am actually decently sure I do...

Here for the Review Blitz event! I am going in slightly fandom-blindly due to me not being a huge Gen 5 fan, but I hope to enjoy this regardless! This is an excellent description, it managed to get a nice chuckle out of me. :mewlulz: I hadn't realized his hair was that long until now! I like...

Another Blitz review! Definitely an interesting opening paragraph, the prose is quite interesting and shows the scene quite well. Some of the wording does feel a bit weird, such as the wording "the old wood". Is it intended to describe a forest? The phrasing "of course" feels somewhat weird to...

I like this introductory sentence. Normally I would prefer a specific time period, however, I think the vagueness works for this one due to the fact that history books do sometimes leave things vague. This intrigues me, as I don't remember the Johto games mentioning any specific war. Did you...

Am I allowed to post covers of books i haven't actually read?

I like the text "Ignis Aurum Probat" it sounds cool! Due to me knowing a little bit of latin, i know Ignis means Fire and i'm decently sure Aurum means Gold. Could you translate it for me?

Here for the blitz! I think this is an alright starting line, though I would suggest a small change with the wording and punctuation. Of course, you did say this is an older work, so I understand you might not be as willing to make edits to it anymore. Here's more suggestions for slight...

Here for the Blitz! So, we seem to be starting off with Turo’s POV. I like the descriptions of Turo’s emotions regarding how he’s stuck in a more primitive time. His frustration at the lack of technology is shown quite well. Is there a reason why you chose this date specifically? I enjoy...

Here for the Review Blitz! The story starts off with an interesting poem, I wonder if it has any symbolism or something like that. The names of the Articuno and the Moltres remind me of summons in the Final Fantasy games, is this intentional? And is the Zapdos’s name, Quetzal, also a...

I updated my pfp because I think Mega Absol might be my new favorite pokemon

Happy birthday!

Thank you for the review @Spiteful Murkrow! I personally did think it lacked a bit of the positive feedback, especially the whole "show don't tell" suggestion. It doesn't really fit my personal writing style, as I prefer to write in a way where I can clearly understand the characters' emotions...

(I hope it's alright for me to ask this here) The fic's 16+ rating seems a bit overkill in my opinion, I have read up to around chapter 20 and I haven't found any parts of the fic that were too much for me. As someone under 16, is it alright for me to still read and comment on the fic like I...

I’m here for the review blitz! The main character of this fic seems to be Koa, who lives in Canalave City and seems to have an interest in legendary pokemon. Another character introduced around the beginning of the fic is Blake, who is Koa’s cousin. Blake also seems to own an Absol which he...

Chapter 4 - Into The Mossy Grotto Shade seemed to be shocked by Akari’s statement. “You want me to be your teammate?” “Why not?” Akari replied, continuing with: “You helped me travel through the Autumnal Woods, assisted me in getting here, and a whole bunch of other stuff. I believe you could...

I could maybe draw some art (though it would have to be on paper instead of digitally)

I got Rank Y

I wrote 276 words for Warped Creation a couple days ago, logging it now My trainer card: https://forums.thousandroads.net/threads/tr-writing-buddies.1867/post-74432 Warped Creation Progress: 4/4 Day streak: 1 Words remaining for next level up: 233 Total words written: 2178 Z-A Current Rank...