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  1. unrepentantAuthor

    Reverse World ~ Rockfall Cavern

    "Alright," said Brisa. She pulled herself into a sphinx pose and rested. She would recover very little energy, but at least she wouldn't exhaust herself further. It was the best she could manage. "I tried that already," she called flatly, as Starr pressed against the boulders in a vain effort...
  2. unrepentantAuthor

    Reverse World ~ Rockfall Cavern

    Brisa wasn't sure how long it had been when Starr finally woke up. She'd had enough time to ruminate in her own despondency to eventually get up, pace about looking for resources or routes out, and try contacting the posse via telepathy and badge. Naturally, she'd found no leads. All evidence...
  3. unrepentantAuthor

    Reverse World ~ Rockfall Cavern

    Brisa came to first, feeling much as she had after the last two mass combats the posse had undertaken. Exhausted, pained, vaguely numb. A quick check confirmed that nothing seemed broken. Incredible, given how unreserved she'd been in the fight. The fight... they'd performed well. Her new...
  4. unrepentantAuthor

    Pokémon The Legendarian Chronicles

    Short, sharp reviews are the order of the day~! Further notes on ch15: Loved that Astrid called Jade a little shit lmfao The way you described Mewtwo's Pressure and how overwhelming his presence was one of my fave things about this chapter. Ch16
  5. unrepentantAuthor

    [Destroyed] Air Continent ~ Silver Trench

    Two days hiding her face hadn't helped. It didn't matter. She would meet her purpose. Brisa was quiet at the edges and back of the party as they gathered, left for the Silver Trench, and faced up against Lugia. All that mattered was that she fought. Did her duty. She hid from Curio and...
  6. unrepentantAuthor

    Official Actions

    Haste I on Turn 1 on Starr.
  7. unrepentantAuthor

    Official Actions

    Reviewed envy of eden, which was a BLEC prize. 1 short prologue and 1 full chapter, 230w. Reviewed Legendarian Chronicles, 3 chapters and a little "extra" about teleporting, 550w.
  8. unrepentantAuthor

    Pokémon The Legendarian Chronicles

    Hi Chibi! As requested, reviews for the time being will largely be in the form of abbreviated reactions. Ch13: Ch14: Teleport Extra: This was pretty cool! Surprised it's not threadmarked but you do you. Nice to learn a little more about it and its limits and why it's not a major logistics...
  9. unrepentantAuthor

    Pokémon the envy of eden

    Hi kint! I read the first two entries, since the first was short and I've been dealing with the oneshot comp instead of reviewing this. Sorry for the wait. So, first up I love the introduction. It was so clear and so striking that I could practically see it in cinematic form, and it was a...
  10. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    What the fuck was she doing. How had her intention to make an apology turned into this? Brisa put her forehead to the ground and gave in to weak, agonising sobs. She'd never been in this much pain. How had this seemed worth it only seconds before? "It was a mistake to come here," she said...
  11. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    Brisa's body was ragged, beaten, drained of all energy. She felt like a single smear of pain across the ground. Still, she clung to consciousness. She looked up at Starr, one eyes still screwed shut, and her mouth pulled open into a miserable red grin. "I didn't come here to fight you... but I...
  12. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    She was a storm, flash and thunder amidst rolling darkness, and she made no effort to protect herself. There was no reason to. She took each slash and paid them back with tearing bites. She would fully feel the pain later. Later, but not now. Lightning danced at her mouth. "Come on!" she cried...
  13. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    Brisa's jaws lit up in an instant. This was an unexpected result, but it was still an oncoming melee. She knew what to do about those. She went in with a focus she'd not had since before the Radiance had touched her a week ago. Controlled, confident, drawing on reserves of energy she didn't...
  14. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    Fierce joy gave way to fierce anger. She forced herself to breathe despite the tightness in her chest. She'd thought that at least Starr would respect her combat ability. Goddamnit, goddamnit, fucking salt and fucking sand YES she was a fucking pokémon! Why wasn't that enough? You're a...
  15. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    Starr adapted so fast. She was bold, fearless. Salt and sand, they should have been battling from the day they'd arrived. This was the opponent she'd hoped for, oh yes. Brisa's mind was back on automatic tactical analysis now. Half a dozen options ripped through her brain and she came up with...
  16. unrepentantAuthor

    Official Actions

    Beta read a thing for @Tanuki , too! It's called Your Friends Are In the Walls, in case he shares it here.
  17. unrepentantAuthor

    Official Actions

    Crawl Logging Did Johto's latest challenge. Also, I wrote 3283 words recently for that oneshot comp I ran and forgot to log them, and I also read twelve fuckin' oneshots if that helps. Mechanical I'd like to purchase Haste I and its prereqs, and give Brisa's +1 radiant boost to status, on...
  18. unrepentantAuthor

    The 7 Day Fic Challenge!

    Day 1: a fic you liked when you were younger. I was actually gonna share No Antidote but @kintsugi beat me to it, and I don't feel I can say enough that she didn't already! So instead I'm sharing Pokémon Ultimatum, which is one of the first fics I can remember reading. It's been revised and...
  19. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo

    The relief and catharsis of a real fight with Starr, finally, was almost enough to dull Brisa's anger. But not entirely. The tactical part of her mind came to life in a scattered sparking, barely-used of late. She wouldn't be given the opportunity to wail on Starr unhindered, so she'd need to...
  20. unrepentantAuthor

    Treasure Town ~ Marowak Dojo
    Threadmarks: Day 20, Morning ~ Two violent animals

    It was like only the two of them were real. Brisa made a sound that was somewhere between the word "alright!" and a battlecry. This was too personal for a shock. This warranted teeth. She charged forward, unheeding of her tired body, her living lightning at her mouth.
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