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  1. Namohysip

    Pokémon [COMPLETE] The Origin of Storms

    (Chapters 4 ~ 6) These ones were pretty well connected (and a pretty irritating cliffhanger in the middle of a scene, by the way—I’ve got other things I need to do that I can’t get to it right now!!) that left me easily flowing from one chapter to the next. For being such a lowkey story so far...
  2. Namohysip

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation
    Threadmarks: Chapter 20 – Blade and Fist

    Thanks for the feedback again, Adam! Glad you're enjoying yourself and the story's picking up for you. Chapter 20 – Blade and Fist Large mounds of dirt moved on their own, floating in the air. Little particles fell to the ground, collecting near the bottom of this forcefield. The evening sun...
  3. Namohysip

    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    Clearing up the last of my list before the switch to next week... I finally got to Salvage! Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >200, +2 Total: 9 Bad Idea was also a fun little drabble. Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >300, +2 Total: 9 And finally, Damaged Goods. God, we need another Orre game. Base: 3 Weekly...
  4. Namohysip

    Pokémon Damaged Goods [one-shot]

    AAAAAH! Orre! Orre! ORRE! Okay, excitement over, let’s actually take a look at what we’re doing here. So, Wes, Shadow Quilava, I think it was a good choice to just quietly ignore that Makuhita for the time being since Quilava has more symbolism as, you know a starter Pokémon. I also really...
  5. Namohysip

    Pokémon [ONE-SHOT] Bad Idea

    Short story, short review, but I'll just say that in an effort to keep things absolutely focused on a single scene--surely this entire series of events didn't last longer than small handful of minutes--you managed to allude to little glimpses of Karo's personality, and even a bit of world...
  6. Namohysip

    Pokémon Salvage

    (Chapter 1) Alright, time to finally take a look at this! The first thing that comes to mind when reading the first chapter, which kind of feels like a prologue with how distant the prose feels, is that while the actual prose is really nice, I think the distance and intentional vagueness of...
  7. Namohysip

    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    Got a few reviews in to end the work week. First, Misfit's Land of the Roses Base: +3 Weekly: Nope Words: >500, +3 Total: +6 And also, Negrek's Little God Base: +3 Weekly +4 Words: >500, +3 Total: 10 Running total: 171
  8. Namohysip

    Pokémon Little God

    (Part 1 ~ 2) Alright. I reviewed a few of your shorter works in the past, so this is more of the same! Although this time it’s not a one shot, but a short-shot. So I guess you could say that’s a promotion. In any case, I think this is a cute work so far! Sure, a bit of a foregone conclusion for...
  9. Namohysip

    Pokémon Land of the Roses

    (Prologue ~ Chapter 3) You know, I kinda wish I paid more attention to the sort of writing you talk about in discord, because if I knew this was the sort of writing you did for fanfiction, I think I would’ve hit it up sooner. Compared to the high fantasy tales other works love to do—to no fault...
  10. Namohysip

    Fan Fiction's Truth or Dare Dimension

    "Now, this is a fascinating place," an Alakazam remarked, stepping into the coliseum. "So, the only way out is to perform a dare? Or a truth, I suppose, hmm..." The audience in the stands watched curiously. "Hey, Nevren!" someone shouted from the left. "Ah?" He turned, spotting a bright-eyed...
  11. Namohysip

    The story behind your story's name?

    Titles are things that I don't really put an inordinate amount of time in. I have a little bit of cleverness to it, but I guess I put my efforts into the plot more than what I wrap it in. That being said, I guess I have some reasoning behind the names I give things~ I guess we'll get the big...
  12. Namohysip

    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    New Years is a mess, but I was able to at least squeeze in some time for a bit more reviewing. First, expanding my horizons further with Umbra's Heroes After All Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: A smidge above 600, +3 Total: 10 Grand total: 155
  13. Namohysip

    Pokémon Heroes After All

    (Prologue, chapter 1) Iiinteresting. So, I had no idea which movie you were referring to at first, so I ended up checking that out... Mystery of Mew--alright, so Lucario and aura powers, sweet! I'm a fan of those things, mostly because it can get pretty haywire, but it's so loosely bound that...
  14. Namohysip

    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    Starting off tonight with a bit of Seiren Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >500, +3 Total: 10 I was also curious and also took a look at Windskull's Non-Pokemon work posted here Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: Just under 500, +2 Total: 9 Grand total: 145
  15. Namohysip

    Non-Pokémon What's a Name to a Science Experiment? [Oneshot]

    I mean, Anti-Bravo works just fine. -- Hey, Wind! I know nothing about this fandom at all, but I do know a little bit about Katamari, at least! So, I thought this was a touching little story. The subject was mostly focused (mostly, I'll get to that later) and it didn't really dillydally once...
  16. Namohysip

    Pokémon Seiren

    (Prologue, chapter 1) Well, based on your judgement, I’ve finally decided to get into reading your work—but for real this time, starting with Seiren! I don’t know what to expect from this at all, to be honest, so despite all the references you make, the only thing I know to expect is that Red...
  17. Namohysip

    Pokémon Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Hands of Creation

    Thanks for the review, @Equitia and @qva ! I direct messaged you on discord some specifics about the beginning, Equita, since I'm particularly interested in polishing that up to make it more clear that it ISN'T a dream while still not dragging out that opener more than it needs to be. It's a...
  18. Namohysip

    Review Blitz: New Years Re-view-lutions!

    Incoming! We've got another one for Origin of Storms Base: 3 Weekly: 4 Words: >500, +3 Total: 10 And Del's Christmas Special -- I'd looked at and reviewed some of Del's stuff a while ago, and never really got around to seeing more off what she had to offer. I'm glad I did~ Base: 3 Weekly: 4...
  19. Namohysip

    Pokémon Soul Dissonance: A PMD Story

    Marshadow! Took me a little bit to realize what was going on. Hiding in shadows is definitely something I'm already familiar with regarding Marshadow, but I had to be sure, since I'm also friendly with very abstract or non-Pokemon concepts in Pokemon settings. (I mean, hey, PMD does it...
  20. Namohysip

    Pokémon Thousand Roads Mad Christmas Mash-Up!

    Aww, now this was great! Much like a few of the others, I think I'm gonna just appreciate this one for what it is, because it was a simple excuse of a plot to just see a bunch of our characters interact with each other. I'm gonna be honest, when you grouped Curio, Shine, and Owen together, I...
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