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Koa stared at the sight, agast. He'd heard that Diyem was acting weird, sure. And he knew Xerneas might have something to do with it, but between everything else going on, he'd pushed that to the back of his mind. But now that it was here in front of him, it was hard to ignore. "Okay, what the...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/heroes-after-all.46/post-33307 Review for chapters 4 & 5 of Heroes After All!!

So I can't actually remember if I reviewed 4 or not but I wanted to reread anyways cause I liked it, so here I am with chapters 4 & 5! You've got a good balance of plot and pacing, switching between the two viewpoints of Riolu and Aaron. Both stories feel relevant and meaningful, and it builds...

Logging another review for WSBS! https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/white-swan-black-swan.551/post-33303

This is a speed review and I'm at work so I won't go super critique. Even so I thought this chapter was quite good! I really enjoyed it and I think the pacing is moving nicely. The tone across chapters feels consistent and each chapter reveals a little more about the world, Odette and this...

Koa's eyes lit up at the suggestion. A Colosseum fight sounded like fun. He'd never had the chance to properly spectate on those before. Smilling, he nodded in agreement. "Yeah, I'd like that too." He hadn't found out much, but perhaps he had made a new friend, which was more important to him...

"Okay... well thank you guys for all your help. If you remember anything else, let me know." He paused, ready to turn away, then hesitated. Something about the Mew's attitude rang true with him. He couldn't just leave like this. Like this was some kind of interrogation. Not when he knew how it...

Koa nodded absently. "Sorry for bothering you guys," he admitted. "I've had this stuff on my mind awhile and I guess everyone on the team is still worked up about the spy." He let out a sigh. Perhaps it was best to leave them in peace. One thing did bother him though... "Shield.... Back on...

Didn't he know what that felt like. Trying not to think about everything that bothered him? "Well, at least Telum is still out there," he murmured comfortingly. "Maybe there's a way you can go back."

Koa relaxed a little and nodded. He probably wouldn't get any other good information from her anyway. "Yeah, sure. Can you tell me about Telum? Not like... anything scary if you don't want to, but the cool parts. Stuff you and Shield did, or just things about your world?"

Koa flinched at the reprimand and back up a bit, his head drooping. He hadn't meant to upset her, but this was important. "I'm sorry..." he murmured, then paused as he took in Sword's words. Something with three fingers? That almost sounded like - "Did they by any chance... have a red scar on...

Koa took a long moment to think. "Do you maybe remember how many fingers this person had?" It was an odd question, but it was the only thing he could think of.

"Thank you," Koa replied. "This really does help." He mused a little longer. He hadn't wanted to interrogate Sword but if she had anything that could help, they needed to know. "Hmm... He? The person who grabbed you was a male? Do you remember anything else? A size or a voice, or even if they...

Hey uh.... does anyone know of a dark red storm or something? I'm talking to Sword and she said she remembers seeing one when she woke up.

"Do you remember where you woke up?" Koa asked, after a moments consideration. Perhaps if they could investigate the area it could lead to more clues. Or perhaps they could find whatever scared her. "Anything you can share could help, even little details or stuff that seems dumb," Koa added.

So that was something. It had to have been awhile ago, he guessed. It had to be before Team Spectrum arrived? He cocked his head. "I don't suppose you remember what you were scared of? Someone? Something?" He frowned trying to think harder. What else, what else... "Was it something on...

"Someone said the term Blacklight? So that's what you based the name on?" he narrowed his eyes in thought. He felt like he was missing some piece of the puzzle. She couldn't have heard it from Team Spectrum. Something wasn't adding up. "Where exactly do you remember hearing that word? And when?"

For a moment, Koa couldn't help but think on how having a regular conversation with a Mew was the least strange thing he'd done in awhile. A short time ago he probably would have freaked out at meeting a legendary. Now he was just chatting with one. He shook his head admantly. "You shouldn't. I...

"That's good," Koa replied earnestly. He took a seat in the grass. "How's the transforming going? Can you turn into other Pokemon besides Charmander yet?" It felt nice, actually making a difference. Sword was here because of what they'd done.

Finally. It had taken some time but he'd finally found them. And... Was Sword a pink Charmander? Hm. Maybe she was trying to get back to her old form. "Excuse me," he said, approaching the two. He offered a friendly grin. "My names Koamaru. I don't know if you remember me, I'm on Team...