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Hey there! I read chapter 2 for Catnip, and here are my thoughts. my bet's on dungeon madness! "Suddenly the area all around him took an ominous tone to it" is pretty vague. I'm not sure how I'm supposed to interpret it. Typo in Farfetch'd. Missing capital at the start of the final sentence...

Hey! Read chapter 3, here are my thoughts. weird vistas? pog lol l o f e This paragraph confused me at first, and then I realized that by "slunk" it meant that Hiro had jumped down. To "slink", though, is to "move smoothly and quietly with gliding steps, in a stealthy or sensuous manner" or...

Hey there! Now that I'm no longer busy with the anniversary review challenge, I'm finally here with the review for the last chapter. I wasn't sure how I was supposed to understand this since these two claims seemed to be contradictory. funny image: jungs coat gets caught in the car door and he...

May 8th Game - Happy Mother's Day! Organizer: Canis Sign-ups open until Thursday, May 12th 10:00 EST [countdown here] You have until the end of the countdown to submit your fic of choice. You may change it anytime up until the rolling takes place. Submit to me via TR or Discord DM. Review...

id like the custom sprite attached to this post (joanna) as a companion

Reviewed chapters 6-10 of Of Sand and Shadows!

Hey there! I chose OSAS for the fic to review for the anniversary challenge, and I've read chapters 6-10. Quote Comments (6-10 combined): today were dancing for no reason. someday well disappear for no reason. wes coming in with SHE ASKED FOR NO PICKLES energy Missing space. Missing capital...

gimme one with ghost type things!!! im now the ghost type person!!!

big review i quag :quag: I'm pretty poor at history generally, but I'm trying to go for a roughly 1800s setting. Dracula by Bram Stoker was written in 1897, it seems, though I chose 1800s more on a vibe and the vague knowledge that it's when the literary genre of horror began. Oh, you'll...

Signing up with an excerpt of Judgment and excerpt from the first chapter of Batty for those that prefer not to read about capital punishment or just generally want something lighter. Judgment - Excerpt Source: Here Context: This story takes place in trainerverse, though a version of it where...

Does the "100 words per chapter" part mean that there must be at least 100 words concerning each chapter or just that the total word count of the review has to be the amount of chapters x 100? Like, for example, would a three-chapter catch-up review of 400 words not meet the requirements if...

hey new chapter here or part or whatever. im gonna be honest and say that the next part is probably gonna take even longer to write since i dont even know what its gonna have. lol rating for this chapter is teen for an emotionally abusive mother and not really anything else i think. enjoy ---...

@NebulaDreams Dear Agony Jung, Wrong, wrong, wrong. I should have known you had nothing of value to say. I had hoped that an educated man would have grasped my explanation easily, but it seems I was mistaken. Of course total control over reality will make me happy. I can just make myself...

Dear Agony Jung, I will not give you my name. In your reply, you may address me as "The Bringer". I have little faith in you responding with anything of value, seeing as you are still another mareep among mareep. However, I would be a fool to pass up the opportunity for a free, unbiased...

Read Chapter 5 of Of Sand And Shadows and left a review.

Chapter 5! And I took only... three months to get to it. Oh wow. hahaha no wes.... im an empath.... and i sense something horrible happened here.... Actually I like the mention of the tea set a lot, it brings both a sense of continuity and contrast between then and now. me toy Weird...

le crisis of faith has arrived

Hey there! I read up from the prologue to chapter 3. Here are my thoughts. oh thank god I initially was kind of confused on whether the voice was speaking to one person or multiple. On second read, I suppose it's just one person ("Observer") present and listening but "you all" refers to a...

Keeping it light this round as well. Name of fic: Of Sand and Shadows Link to fic: here Number of chapters to read: 1 or more

I don't have much to say to your response, but I would like to point out that humans and several plant species (like apples) evolved roughly the way they are in our world, so it's kind of excused by the canon already.