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Hey there! I'm here for Catnip. Here are my thoughts on the story. Another Professor & AI fic, huh? Guessing you're really into their concept as characters. It does, though, mean that I will again have fewer feedback to give as some of the thoughts I would have otherwise had were already...

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EDIT: The part in this chapter where has been changed. Now he hiiiiiiii besties i am still alive yes and i have been very slowly writing. here is chapter 14. don't ask me when the next one's coming. it might be this year or it might be next year. it probably will not be the year after that...

Kohath raised a brow. Well, now he'd directly been asked. And the bird had clearly alluded to his physique, not any beasts he might have had with him in some of those strange spherical containers. He wanted him to fight with his fists. That was clearly foolish, but he did want to know what this...

Kohath's brows raised in surprise as the old man climbed on the stage and gave his accusation. There were two sides to the story now. It reminded Kohath of the many arguments he'd had to settle during his time as tribe chief. Well, which one was telling the truth? The bird or the old man? Had...

Since enough time has passed, I've decided to make a new post instead of editing my old one to boost the thread a little! --- Name: Michi Koizumi (art by me) Species: Human Gender: Female Age: 12 Appearance: Tohjoan (Japanese) by ethnicity. Physique typical of a girl her age. Mid-length...

As the bird and the ape from the play showed up in the flesh, Kohath raised his brow. This was an unexpected development. They'd come back from the dead? That shouldn't be possible. Not unless they had come back as ghosts who had now taken on their old appearances, and at that point, who's to...

His conversation with the old woman over, Kohath made his way to the crowd of the play that had been spoken of before. He sat down on an empty seat, his view of the stage clear thanks to his height. Kohath stroked his beard. The play seemed to depict the fable central to this festival. He...

Kohath wanted to ask more about this 'camera', but the woman was already leaving. "I am Kohath," Kohath introduced himself, bringing a fist to his chest, "king of the Helixians. Fare well, Satomi Kurusu. Enjoy the festival."

"I have heard that there are houndoom in cooler, more humid places that are fiery rather than of the earth," Kohath said, scratching his chin. "Perhaps that is the same kind." He listened to the woman's explanation. "I see," he said. "Those mon are not native to my region. It is interesting to...

"I see." Kohath, of course, had additional questions. What was this fuel made out of? What was an 'engine'? How did the energy of burning turn into the motion of the wheels? Was it similar to that contraption Helix had built, the one where water was boiled to become steam and it would push the...

As Kohath looked around, it was immediately clear he was in another time and culture. He did, however, know enough that he could recognize the place as some kind of festival. Then the old man spoke, confirming his suspicions. He supposed that whatever was translating the others' speech to him...

Thanks for the review! Gastly are able to create illusions in the anime, like in the episode with the infamous mongoose and Venustoise. Since I don't think it's addressed in the story: sapience is required to speak human languages (unless you're just parroting words), but there are many...

Hey! Here to review this for Catnip. Insatiable, I think. I like this touch of the AI having superhuman sensory capabilities, being able to pick up motion a human couldn't. This kinda made me stop and think for a bit. Wouldn't she have a memory of a hallucination instead? This is a legitimate...

Character Name: Kohath I Species: Human (Helixian, which are humans enhanced by HELIX) Pronouns: He/him Mask: Desert Houndoom, such as this one. Appearance: Two meters tall, very muscular with body hair. Bronze skin, yellow eyes, enlarged canine teeth, dark brown short curly hair and a trimmed...

oh my god my naive ass thinking trials could be done in a day. i underestimated bureaucracy and you're to thank for those! thanks for giving me the idea of journals in the discord. the year being small is probably never going to get addressed so i'll tell you that it's the amount of years that...

Here to review Chapter 7 for the Roulette! Sorry I'm late. I see, so he was in a "war" on pokémon rather than a human-human war. Interesting. I have to stretch my suspension of disbelief a little at an evolution method not being public in the age of the internet, even if trainers are...

hey all! managed to finish the chapter in time for Bringer Wednesday. i've been kind of out of it writing-wise, though, so i don't know how long it'll take to finish the next chapter. rated mature for gore, brief torture and a mention of a sexual predator. --- CHAPTER THIRTEEN Unexpected...

oh wow almost forgot today was a chapter day! good thing i didn't, or i would have uploaded a chapter slightly late. the horror! i know i've said this before but this time i really mean it: whether i will have the next chapter done by next week's wednesday is uncertain. i no longer have a...

whoops one day late. anyway here is another chapter. rated teen for some misogyny and transphobia, skin carving and mentions of violent acts. --- CHAPTER ELEVEN Reset Andre --- The doorbell rings. Must be Red. I put away my brush and go to answer the door… Wait. I can sense a presence. Is...