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Chapter 20: Stranded, part III Paleolithic Era, in the area that will be known as Kalos. Sada had been missing for a couple of days now. Personally, Chalo wasn't particularly worried. Sada had always been a bit more of a free spirit, and now that she could just fly away with Winged King, she...

Chapter 19: Stranded, part II While Sada was out looking for food and generally making herself much more useful for their immediate survival, Turo had slowly started to examine the building they had sought refuge in. The lights didn't work; he had tried the switch -after figuring out where it...

Chapter 2 Turo's arms embraced her slowly, carefully, like he wasn't exactly sure how to move his arms yet. The movement was not stiff like she expected: she had quietly wondered, while working on the model, if muscle memory would be part of the information that had been encoded in the brain...

Chapter 18: Stranded, part 1 Sada knew that something was wrong as soon as Turo had led her out of his place wearing only his normal clothes and not the ones he usually showed up with. But she had tried to rationalize it away. Maybe he simply didn't want to go to the village today. Maybe he...

Chapter 17: After Hours, part II "One day, not one hour more" Ortega's words had come to put a definitive end to his time with Sada. In the hours while he waited for her to wake up and her wound to heal completely, he had nervously expected Moreau to come marching in at every moment, asking...

I remember already reading this chapter so now it's my occasion to review it. It's extremely interesting, we get a sudden POV change to an already existing Latios, and this already tells me that there can be more than one legendary of any kind. From his mannerism something tells me he's not...

Chapter 16: After Hours, part I Sada immediately noticed that something was up as soon as she landed in the usual meeting spot with Winged King to wait for Turo's arrival together. The snow was high and had been falling without pause for a couple of days now. Every time they landed, the dragon...

All right, let's review chapter 2! There is a POV shift, and I am admittedly a bit lost to who we are following now or even where we are. It took me a moment to connect the name Rui and the mention of Orre with the Coliseum character, so I guess she's become a trainer in this setting, nice...

All right, I'm here for our review exchange! I admit to coming into this completely blind and have no idea what to expect, except that there will be a lot of art references which could be quite fun. Right from the start, I like how you describe the setting of the scene with quite some vivid...

Chapter 15: Closing Time When Turo walked into the TTDL the day after his latest report, well into the afternoon since his last jump had been late at night again, he initially didn't notice anything wrong in the couple of looks he got from people he crossed in the corridors. Then he walked into...

I've written quite a few little bonus chapters here and there for Timeslip, usually missing scenes, drabbles, little things from other characters's perspectives, or, like in this case, in-universe documents. I will post them here and there at the point they better fit in the story. This is...

Brionne!

Here for Review Blitz like we talked about! Chapter 1 The premise of the fic I found immediately quite interesting: a "reverse mystery dungeon" plot with a Pokémon sent to the human world can lead to some fun scenarios and ideas, especially because humans are usually seen as this almost...

Chapter 14: Visiting Hours « Are you... sure you will be okay?» she asked doubtfully as Turo got down from Winged King's back. He looked... lucid, but he had drunk quite a bit, and she knew how strong that stuff was. And how good Turo was at hiding what he was actually thinking. « For what?»...

Here for Review Blitz! I had my eyes on this story for a while, mostly because I spotted a Nidoran protagonist and of course the little Lugia and it all looked really interesting. Apart from that and the fact that it was MD based, I didn't really know much. I really liked this Prologue as an...

Here for Review Blitz and chapter 5! I liked the battle between Hazard and the ponyta because it showcased what makes battles in fics interesting to me: that a battle is much more than just launching moves at each other and that the outcome depends on a lot more than simply who can bust out the...

Here's mine Timeslip Here on Thousands Roads More is already posted on Ao3 Rating: 16+ (Contains some light swearing and some mentions of violence and injuries, both for human and Pokemon characters.) Genre: Trainerfic... kinda...? Let's say it's a "Professorfic" in a way lol Also Romance, and...

I suggest giving more hints (like type, generation) in the future to avoid people getting completely stuck and stopping the game. (Since when is Feebas fast at swimming?) No idea, but if it's amphibian... Swampert? I kinda remember it being described as sluggish..

Rattata?

Poke-Italy for me!