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There was such a thing as tiptoeing too delicately around an issue. And this was it. The curse of the psychic was reading the ebbs and flows of others' spirits even when one didn't intend to. Which is exactly what Bahamut had done. He hadn't been around Saltriv much, but as best he knew they...

PMD: Eternal Shadows - 3 parts, 974 words PMD: Liberators of Fate - 5 parts, 1313 words something something blecs...

Sunbathing... by a window? Sounded appealing to some primal part, but not as good as being outside. "You know, if the cold weather is problematic, you could just ask Maple to make you a portal to Treasure Town. There's a beach there and the weather is much warmer."

PMD: Eternal Shadows - 3 parts, 974 words = 3 points

Ch 6: It’s the credits song from Gunvolt Chronicles! :D -If it were me, I’d italicize that opening paragraph to make it read like the character’s thoughts, since it’s in present tense. Actually, this pops up a handful of times in the Mossy Town stuff. -Did that one-shot orb actually kill the...

Bahamut's expression darkened. More early Colosseum abandoners? "I was under the impression you all were so eager to take part in that battle. Didn't you want to stay and, I don't know, sign autographs or shake hands or whatever it is famous people are supposed to do in this place?"

Bahamut had been prowling the halls. ... strange that that particular word felt like a more appropriate vocabularly choice. Must've been the body or something. He was going to slink back to his room, but sensed an aura close by. The necrozma glanced into a doorway. "You're back from the...

PMD: Liberators of Fate - 5 parts, 1313 words = 5 points

Merry reviewmas Part 1: Oh, this is an Assassin’s Creed fic? WEN EZIO? -FYI, the character you’re looking for if you’re cutting someone’s speech off is the em dash (—), not a typical hyphen (-). On Windows PCs, you can get it with Alt+0151 on the number pad. -Likewise, ten is one of those...

Sorry for double post, forgot to log two part review for PMD: Elegy for Humanity

More BLEC logs: Death is Lonely - 4 parts, 1053 words PMD: Double-Edged - 2 parts, 754 words

Death is Lonely - 4 parts, 1053 words = 4 points PMD: Double-Edged - 2 parts, 754 words = 2 points

Merry reviewmas! This is probably going to be redundant to what other people said. Oh well. @.@ Prologue: Someone’s about to die, aren’t they? -Very purple prose in those opening few paragraphs. I’m not entirely sure if Nevada here is supposed to be a dig at some rural town there or, like, in a...

Merry reviewmas Part 1: FRESH BLOOD FOR THE BACON GOD -Obvious comment about subverting the god ‘mon gender stereotypes with male Xern and female Yveltal. [cough] Anyway, opening bit mixes some of Yveltal’s dex logic with an actual grim reaper job of sorts. Or, perhaps, in the context of the...

Also two point review for PMD: Elegy for Humanity

"No, you're breathtaking!" Esper pointed at Darkwhite. "Oh, wait, wrong meme."

"Would be kind of hard to stealth into a place like that if a big ol' hole's been blown through it." Esper poked his forehead with his free hand. "Odds are Cray-Cray Kit-tay can get away with it because she's a gag manga character. Y'know, the ones who defy all logic and reality?"

Merry reviewmas Ch 1: Do we all fall down when this is over? 🤔 -Celeste is a cat. Good to know. And how dare Salac interrupt edgy husbando’s beauty sleep. -I think I’d have liked to open with a bit more description for Rainbow Valley. A hillside could mean anything, y’know? -oh hey look an...

"Nobody gives a hoot about ho-hos! They're not nearly as good as twinkies, anyway." Esper turned his nonexistent nose up, aptly failing to realize Ho-Oh was a pokémon.

Logging reviews for tiers + BLECs purposes: Fighting Nature - 5 chapters, 1294 words PMD: Eternal Shadows - 5 chapters, 1371 words