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Reviewed four chapters of Sparkfire's "Refracted Differences", two chapters of OSJ's "Continental Divides", and two chapters of Flyg0n's Legendary Adventures. Total word count there is 2303 words. Beyond that, posted chapter 23 of "Liberators of Fate", writing 2766 words in one hour and a half...

cracks knuckles I'm back to do this thing! Final week has arrived, and with it, my juice has returned, now, those are my reviews for today! Refracted Differences - Reviewed all four chapters, total of 1003 words, 4 points for me! Continental Divides - Reviewed chapters 2 and 3, 658 words in...

Oh, hi Tetra, Navar here. Finally decided to check your story out! I’m reviewing the first two chapters, and yeah, memey garbage is just what I do, screaming at the cool stuff. Beyond that, I take my time to write my thoughts immediately after I read a certain scene, so this review is live...

Hi OSJ, Navar here! Like I said, I’m gonna read more of your story, this time I’m reading two chapters, hopefully you’ll enjoy this review. I’m craving for some Hoenn stuff today, so this fic will hopefully satiate that! This is mostly live, I’ll write my thoughts just as I read the scenes, so...

Hi Spark, Navar here. I’m going to review all four of your chapters here, and maybe in the process I’ll make you feel a bit better about your writing. I read your fic before, but I didn’t review it, so take this as my opportunity to do so. My reviewing style was already explained when I reviewed...

Dungeon 23 - This is a test Walking through the streets alongside the Marowak, Lance began to ponder what Scar meant by "test". Was it another mission? Was it a battle? An investigation? That made him curious, especially because the Marowak refused to answer when Lance asked before. "Hm. I...

The Marshtomp was having his meal in silence, having decided to keep his mouth shut until spoken to. Big crowds were always his enemies anyway.

Shiron looked down, unsure of what to say. "...Look, maybe you can train that?"

Logging even more reviews right now. 1 - Death is Lonely 2 - The meaning of gifts 3 - The envy of eden 4 - Clockwork Journeys A total of 1485 words written for those reviews.

Phew. I actually managed to review even more stuff today! Here are my new reviews! 1 - Reviewed two chapters of Namo's "Death is Lonely". Here's the link. 608 words, two points! 2 - Reviewed Sparkfire's oneshot, "The Meaning of Gifts". Here's the link. 290 words, one point! 3 - Reviewed...

Oh hi there, decided to review your first chapter for the blitz here! So, a retelling of Explorers? As someone that played those games multiple times, this should prove to be a fun experience. As a quick side note, I loved the cover! It's so well drawn! First things first, uh, I noticed some...

Hi Kint, decided to review your story once again, haha. Let’s do this, shall we? You know the drill by now, so I’ll cut to the actual review. Now this chapter has a different point of view, I think. Unless Harmonia is like, N. If they are, then well, nice job! If not, then it’s just a big...

Hi Spark, since the blitz is happening I decided to read your oneshot here, and review it. Now I always say this to whoever is getting my reviews, but please don't expect anything critical. I am a terrible critic, so this is just me going all "This is cool!" at the fun stuff the fic, or oneshot...

Hi Namo, decided to review your other story this time for the bliz. Anyway, I’ll go do this now. I decided to try my hand in a different type of review, since your scenes are longer than the other fics, and that new type is me making my review of a chapter by giving the thoughts on each scene...

Logging a review of 8 chapters for Path of Valor. 2104 words here.

Reviewed Amby's "Path of Valor". My newest review is here. 2104 words counted by me, so 8 points, and I also reviewed 8 chapters, so yeah, 8 points! Although I reviewed the prologue earlier on, as you can check right here, so by the theme I should have one extra point, so 9 points, bringing my...

Well Amby, this is it. As I promised I’m making a large, beefy review for your story. I say this everytime I’m making one of those large reviews, but my comments are fresh. As soon as I’m done with a chapter, I already make the review for it, so the content stays on my mind. Another detail that...

Shiron sighed, taking a deep breath. "...Look, I don't have much experience with... Shadow attacks. You and I are the newest additions, but... I'm here if you need support, Saltriv. You're a nice Pokémon. I believe in you."