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Dragon's Dance, Chapter 2! +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 12

It's been 3000 years but here I am for chapter 2! Aw. This is really touching. and i freakin CALLED this lmao no regrets The word choice of "shriek" was a bit too visceral for me and I thought someone actually shrieked until I read more carefully. Ah, nice. I really like this part -...

Well, it follows the same logic as my other PMDesque fics, in which ferals and civilized pokémon are different species altogether, with a feral and civilized variants for every pokémon species we know. Feral pokémon are non-sapient or, as the exact threshold for sapience is debatable, much less...

I have not, but that is a good idea. I used to be afraid of drawing humans and unfamiliar poses, but I may have the courage to tackle it nowadays. The quote "it doesn’t break beautifully" is the core of his argument. He thinks birds are more beautiful intact than broken, since they've got...

Oh my goodness I am being spoiled with all these reviews. :O Mass reply time! Plant matter in general I think was my idea. I hear crabs are pretty much nature's garbage disposals, but to make the famine more sensible, I'm restricting it to flora. Ah, it appears that I wrote this section...

Reviewed Chapter 1 of A Home Far Away! +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 8 And through my art prize contribution, I should get +2 to my score, bringing it to 10. I'd like to claim a companion Pokémon, but I haven't managed to decide what mon I'd like yet - I'll need some time to...

Hey there! Read Chapter 1, here are my thoughts. This felt like kind of a strange question to ask...? Were I to find myself in that scenario, I'd assume it was trash someone threw away, and its origins wouldn't really interest me any more than a stray glove's. This feels kind of off here...

finished art prize for @windskull of muse the absol! click to view on deviantart.

Reviewed the prologue of PMD: Path of Valor. +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 6

Hey! I'd been wondering for a while if I should check this story out, since I know Guiding Light didn't go so well for me and I kind of felt bad about that. Now with the Blitz, though, might as well! I've read the prologue, and here are my thoughts. ohhh god i'm going to read all the following...

Well, I'm sufficiently far enough in the story now that I can decide to split the rest into two for a total of three parts. The final may be shorter than the others, but I'd rather have it that way than have the second part be much longer than the first. Anyway, rated PG still. This part...

logging another one! Iktsuarpok +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 4

starting what i hope to be a long list! but we'll see. Chapter 1 of Raingurl, Make It +1 chapter +1 theme total change: +2 blitz total: 2

Hey! Here from Catnip, looking at the first chapter, naturally. I'm trying to wrap my head around this sentence but it's not really working out for me. Does the compass in this context mean a navigator that would point to the set destination? Or is it a traditional compass in that it always...

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA IT'S BEEN THREE MONTHS BUT HERE WE FINALLY ARE. chapter four. things happen in this one, you'll love it. rated mature again because language and violence. okay thank you for reading and enjoy --- CHAPTER FOUR Life --- Dappled sunlight dances atop the forest scene. The...

december is almost free for me so i hope to participate :quag:

Alright, here from Catnip! Like said before, I'd reviewed the first chapter some years back, so I'm reading and reviewing the second instead - though not without a skim of the first to refresh my memory. Anyway, here are my thoughts. I'm not sure what word supposed to be here, but probably not...

whoa i can't believe i didn't post here Seiren My (18M) adoptive omanyte son (2monM, resurrected twice) who carries the spirit of my god (13.8bilM) has recently become so obsessed with an inkay pop star (?F) that He no longer pays any attention to me. How can I kill her and get away with it...

Hey there, I'm here from Catnip. I've read the first chapter and here are my thoughts. I apologize for a lot of them being about grammar and wording, but I just tend to be pretty pedantic when it comes to that stuff. As I went on FFN out of curiosity to see what the reviews on there were like, I...

5 minutes is only so much time oh gosh oh frick next persom plese draw DA BEEST (very scray) he is like HOUNDOME combine with TAUROS and PANGRO