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Hey there! Haven't posted in this thread in a loooong time. Have been reading, though. I was at 187 before, so I've read chapters 188 and 189. For whatever reason, I'm having some trouble organizing my thoughts for this, so you're unfortunately gonna get something kind of disjointed. Either way...

@NebulaDreams Thanks for the review! While I am disappointed that the "good half" of the first chapter also appears to have had substantial flaws, I am thankful for the honest and constructive feedback. I will likely, though, still leave the first chapter alone for now in order to focus on...

Thanks for the chooonky review! There may be a misunderstanding here - angels and demons are both born in Heaven and Hell respectively, and have no prior lives. The "virtuous" in Heaven and the "sinners" in Hell are the humans that are having their afterlife, and they remain as humans (though...

Hey there! I have returned, and I have read Chapters 2 and 3 this time. Let's jump in. I think the last sentence could be on its own paragraph, since when it shares one with the line of dialogue, it initially looks like the "she" refers to Sada and not her mother. Different but related thing...

Hey there! Was going through fics for the Blitz and this one's premise caught my eye. I've read Chapter One, and boy howdy, you weren't kidding about the child abuse part. Ooh, humans are present? And the Froslass eat them, I presume? Nice. I liked this line, it's cool. (bowling pins falling...

Hello everyone! So, I took some time to think about things, and I've decided to merge the first and second chapter after all. They were originally the same chapter, but I split it in two because of its length. However, I figured now that it would really be important that the two leads meet in...

The deity is indeed named Arukei - however, all instances of "god" like this also refer to Arukei. I just wanted to make sure to refer to Arukei by name a few times so people understand that I'm not writing a version of the Christian God but something else. Whether or not a given phrase will...

Going to recommend stuff by two very talented friends of mine! First up is @NebulaDreams. Just earlier today, he made his own promo post so I'll refer you to that for those for all the links, but I'll still take a moment here to gush about his works as a whole. I love love love love love...

Hey there! I'd heard you talk about this story's premise on the Discord and been somewhat interested, so I figured the Blitz was the perfect time to check it out. I read the first chapter - let's jump right in. Nice line - gets across well how hard he studied in a slick way. It's a bit jarring...

New Blitz, new promo post! I think I'll try a slightly different approach this time... --- Hunter, Haunted Also known as my magnum opus! This is a psychological horror thriller with some darkly comedic elements, focusing on my version of Red from the first playthrough of Twitch Plays...

Hey there! This is a story that's an AU of my characters from Hunter, Haunted and its sequel The Bringer. However, this is entirely original fiction with no Pokémon to be seen. No knowledge of HH or its sequel is necessary as I have written this to work as a standalone (though it may be made...

Hey everyone. Bad news. After several months of writer's block on this story, I've decided that I won't be finishing it. I just got stuck and didn't have enough passion for the story to push through. Add to that the fact that I showed the remaining draft to my friend and they thought it was a...

i can provide 3 character art pieces! these would be full body and full color with some shading and a solid-color background. examples:

omg i wrote drabble. its a bit longer than the other ones in this thread but i hope thats fine. content warning for (spoilers) . im open to concrit but just reactions are fine too. --- This had been a terrible idea. A trek through a thick forest with a path that was two-thirds mud after the...

Thank you for the review! I think I remember specifically looking this up while writing and read that corpses do sink (since you and I float only because we have air in our lungs), but thinking about it now, I think that might only go for fresh corpses. They probably do float up to the surface...

Hey! Here for Catnip. Let's get to it. So the first thing that I noticed in this story when I started reading is that the opening scene is a bit hard to visualize, mainly with regard to the weapon. The weapon is first explicitly mentioned being present at this part: Which is quite a ways into...

Congratulations to all the winners! I'm also very honored to have been a betareader for @NebulaDreams' winning story. As for the link to my story, it is here: https://forums.thousandroads.net/threads/a-day-at-lawrence-pok%C3%A9mon-sanctuary-2024-contest-oneshot.1776/

Hey there! The results of the 2024 Oneshot Contest, its theme "Magical but Mundane", are up, so posting the entries to the forum is fair game. This was my entry. I don't think it's among the better stuff I've written, but it seems that the judges liked it. I do also like it myself, just maybe...

I think it's been quite some time since you read the first chapter, so I don't blame you for forgetting that there were talking pokémon in it. But yeah, pokémon can learn to talk in this universe. This actually receives an indirect retroactive explanation in The Bringer: there are talismans in...

Hey there! Here for Catnip. I read up to and including JOHTOVID - DOUBLE. Here are my thoughts. Oh, it's an exposé. I thought it was just going to be a vlog. Interesting. Oh, xey're actually going through the storyline of each region, not just becoming the champion. Cool! suuuuuuuuuuure it...