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Logging more reviews! Four of Equital's Bingo drabbles, here: https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/equitials-miscellaneous-flash-fic-and-short-stories.706/post-33392 At about 900 words it seems

Gosh I made the mistake of reading this at work and almost got a little choked up. All these oneshots were really sweet and adorable, and really nice! I really enjoyed the varying viewpoints and styles, from a wild pokemon, to humans, to legendaries to the fairytale vibe of the final pieces...

"Well thats a relief," Koa said. It really wasn't. In fact, it sounded like a nightmare. "You sure do good protecting the Tree then. I hope there's no way to disable or get past the projections though, is there? I wouldn't want the spy to try that. Although if you told us more about your lovely...

"Ah right," Koa replied. He'd already heard about the incident with Raven. "Has anything else unusual happened, maybe before that? Do you remember a strange dark red storm or anything like that even?" He paused, then added. "You know, I heard there's more than one spy, maybe you saw something...

Koa forced himself to relax. "You're right, Xerneas," he said, dipping his head. "We do need to stop the spies. A lot of us are pretty stressed about it. That's why we came to see you, actually. One of the reasons. Do you have any ideas about who the spy could be? Maybe someone you've seen that...

"Oh sure, we'll be leaving in just a second," Koa retorted glaring. He tensed eyes scanning for any dangerous. Inside, his fear rose, a voice screaming in his head that this was wrong, so wrong. This wasn't right. His heart stuttered in his chest, but he didn't show it, staying focused. What...

Koa stared at the sight, agast. He'd heard that Diyem was acting weird, sure. And he knew Xerneas might have something to do with it, but between everything else going on, he'd pushed that to the back of his mind. But now that it was here in front of him, it was hard to ignore. "Okay, what the...

https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/heroes-after-all.46/post-33307 Review for chapters 4 & 5 of Heroes After All!!

So I can't actually remember if I reviewed 4 or not but I wanted to reread anyways cause I liked it, so here I am with chapters 4 & 5! You've got a good balance of plot and pacing, switching between the two viewpoints of Riolu and Aaron. Both stories feel relevant and meaningful, and it builds...

Logging another review for WSBS! https://forums.thousandroads.net/index.php?threads/white-swan-black-swan.551/post-33303

This is a speed review and I'm at work so I won't go super critique. Even so I thought this chapter was quite good! I really enjoyed it and I think the pacing is moving nicely. The tone across chapters feels consistent and each chapter reveals a little more about the world, Odette and this...

Koa's eyes lit up at the suggestion. A Colosseum fight sounded like fun. He'd never had the chance to properly spectate on those before. Smilling, he nodded in agreement. "Yeah, I'd like that too." He hadn't found out much, but perhaps he had made a new friend, which was more important to him...

"Okay... well thank you guys for all your help. If you remember anything else, let me know." He paused, ready to turn away, then hesitated. Something about the Mew's attitude rang true with him. He couldn't just leave like this. Like this was some kind of interrogation. Not when he knew how it...

Koa nodded absently. "Sorry for bothering you guys," he admitted. "I've had this stuff on my mind awhile and I guess everyone on the team is still worked up about the spy." He let out a sigh. Perhaps it was best to leave them in peace. One thing did bother him though... "Shield.... Back on...

Didn't he know what that felt like. Trying not to think about everything that bothered him? "Well, at least Telum is still out there," he murmured comfortingly. "Maybe there's a way you can go back."

Koa relaxed a little and nodded. He probably wouldn't get any other good information from her anyway. "Yeah, sure. Can you tell me about Telum? Not like... anything scary if you don't want to, but the cool parts. Stuff you and Shield did, or just things about your world?"

Koa flinched at the reprimand and back up a bit, his head drooping. He hadn't meant to upset her, but this was important. "I'm sorry..." he murmured, then paused as he took in Sword's words. Something with three fingers? That almost sounded like - "Did they by any chance... have a red scar on...

Koa took a long moment to think. "Do you maybe remember how many fingers this person had?" It was an odd question, but it was the only thing he could think of.

"Thank you," Koa replied. "This really does help." He mused a little longer. He hadn't wanted to interrogate Sword but if she had anything that could help, they needed to know. "Hmm... He? The person who grabbed you was a male? Do you remember anything else? A size or a voice, or even if they...

Hey uh.... does anyone know of a dark red storm or something? I'm talking to Sword and she said she remembers seeing one when she woke up.