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Oh man, so many to reply to! I'll catch you on my next post -- got a busy Sunday noon. For now, here's chapter 191! Chapter 191 – Morning’s Rude Awakening Everything’s set up. “Gah!” Angelo squeaked, tripping over himself mid-Tailwind. Drawn gusts flowed around him haphazardly, kicking up...

And my Weekly Fic Rec this time around will be for StolenMadWolf's Somehow, I created the Universe one-shot, which takes the simple isekai premise except you became Arceus. It's more or less in three acts, where the first one is waking up and realizing what happened, then trying to make the...

For my final review of this week's Blitz, I'm taking a look at this one, whose title and premise have me curious about how you'd take it. In some ways, it started off predictable, but I think you made it your own, especially near the end. The tone of the first scene was funny but a little...

And my second review for your oneshots! Right at the start, I like the quiet implication of how this is a nocturnal activity by referring to sunset as arriving there early. In general, as I was reading this piece, I liked a lot of the indirect worldbuilding. I can appreciate doing that instead...

This is a short one but I wanted to see what some of your mainline stories are like, Wind! You seem to branch out into plenty of fandoms, yet I don't recall if I'd read something mainline-related from you, just PMD, until now. I have always wondered how something like a Rhydon would be able to...

I feel like it's a little redundant to give clues about it being the girl's diary and then outright say "these are clues that it's her diary," ha. Anyway, hi! Here for the blitz, and something about the premise of pumpkin spice--or rather, Pumkin Spice, in the Pokemon world, has me interested...

Hey Umbra! Saw this in the oneshot index and am giving it a whirl! An origin story of a fakemon, though the aesthetic gives me the vibe of the Original Dragon just starting off. Considering the title of the fic, it reinforces it, at least as a blind guess. Interesting motivation for Zygarde. I...

My Weekly Fic Rec this time around is for Tomatorade's What The Gods Gave Me. This one was such a fascinating premise that carried the momentum for the initial chapters, and then pivoted into a different, very similar premise only a few chapters later. The setup is strong and the cross between...

Hey tomato! This one's a review that, thanks to how short these chapters are, takes me all the way through chapter six! I'll be doing it mostly stream of consciousness as I read through the chapters. First thing I want to say is this is such a fascinating premise. What if a raven spontaneously...

Hey Fobbie, here for blitz and catnip! This one's a review of the prologue and first chapter. Opening after some of the action happened... Been a while since I've seen an opener like that. From the perspective of the Pokémon, it seems. The guy has to be a pretty accomplished trainer to have a...

I'd explained this in the discord, but for here as well: It actually is secure! It is impossible to intercept divine prayer. What IS possible, however, is reading the mind of the recipient as they're thinking about the prayer they'd just received, which is what happened here. It is also what...

Your first instinct is to hop to the roof and find an entrance there. Perhaps, as part of a flying god of death, the idea of taking an aerial approach comes naturally. Still, a second of consideration reminds you that Millie is still human... probably. You admit, her life aura feels slightly...

Chapter 190 – First Light “Hokay,” Star said, panting while flat on the ground. Not even enough Psychic energy to levitate. “Let me just… rest here for a second. Hoo… can’t move my psychic muscles at all…” “Psychic… muscles?” Zena asked. Dawn was just barely over the horizon. The black sky...

A Lot did! What's crazy is that a huge chunk of the second arc takes place over the course of 24 hours. I always think that's funny to remark about. I'm glad you've returned to the fic and are enjoying the new chapters. The third Act is actually a bit slow in pace, but you're getting through it...

I want to give a special mention for my Weekly Fic Rec, week 1 -- To The Letter! It's an incredibly approachable, very short one-shot story about a researcher going to an ancient temple and running into a swarm of Unown. But rather than see fantastical situations and dangerous fights, we instead...

And here as well for Blitz. The summary for this one caught my eye as being almost like a fairytale. Most of the following will be stream of consciousness, but this at the start is me after I'd read the first chapter and prologue. Overall, it does read like an old fairy take in the way it...

Hey there! Here's a review of the first five chapters. With how short these are, I wanted to get through quite a few before giving a review. Much of this is stream of consciousness, so I hope it'll be useful from the perspective of a reader going in blind. The summary gives me a classic premise...

Here for Blitz, but also to take a look at some new authors! Even though this is sort of associated with, or like a prequel to, another story, I trust that this alone will be standalone. That first line is very useful with information density, and I think it situates the main character and her...

Hey all, here's a selection of some of my stories here. You can also probably look up stuff on my Fanfiction.net profile (same username) and correlate any there to their ports here as well. Here are my two most recent short stories for easy reading. Note, all of my stories can be read without...

Things are getting strange. Creepy, even. And apparently you are the amalgamation of dead spirits and the literal god of death... and this is creepy! "Millie," you say. "What were you staring at? Should we check underground?" "No... I think it's... the roots," Millie replies. "I guess I had a...