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Chapter 11 review I can only imagine how drunk you would have to be to offer a fire type as a light. Or how young. Still it is a funny mental image and at least she isnt having a marmar do the honors. And at least shes not young enough to whip out something that knows flash as a...

I found chapter one and per its instructions... Have been reading this wrong? I dont think ive seen such convulted instructions since my last ikea project or chose your own adventure manuel. Ah well i'll see if i can enjoy it even if my orders a bit... Scattered. Getting up that platue sounds...

Chapter ten Should i find chapter 1... Possibly... Do i wanna know how the meeting between our friendly trainer and jess goes even out of context? Yeah. I'll find chapter one in a little for now out of order it is. I can kinda see why team AQUA is so rabbid but then i've seen land locked...

Review for chapter nine Ah a roadside entertainer... And while stylisticially it might be an odd mix of ukelel and pyrotechnics theres enough novelty to get the cash flow going per the donations to the case. And bonus points for the tune being catchy too. Ah e-corispondance the joyous...

Lovely little intro. A bit of safely stretching of wings and wrangling of independence... And yes baby steps in starting in the backyard... But still it is a start. And the tent didnt crash down so brownie points there. Ah the first nibbles of wanderlust... Guessing from the dialogue hints...

With an intro like that you know pov messed up and messed up nig. Like lifethreatening big. And i wouldnt say brings comfort and eases giilt... It just comes across as a "lets avoid disaster domimoes" sort of stroke. Love how neery is getting walked over by pov. Smooth mr. Water type. Bery...

Truth review Hm so this is possibly n and a legendary dragon. Fun. I suspect.when hes not feeding the fire the dragon is lit up about knee high and n's almost fully visible. From a distance thats gotta look hilarious. Random man talking to random feathered knee. Wonder what he is mathing...

Love that little caveat.. as normal as it could get, that's not forboding at all... And with the nods towards events of the Manga we got our setting... I'm surprised he didn't move to the fringe of town so that his Rapidash could have more room to roam. As an ex-Roclet and considering his...

Review reply... Well, when the logo goes pillage and then burn... yeah the village isn't going to do well for itself unless it's a firework hot spot. Then it's a case of taking the dragon down with it, but that doesn't seem the place of the ripe victim for Mr. collector, or rather mr. actor, so...

Si the setting is pretty as a picture. Funny how snorlax is anti trainer and weavial is like "you keep telling yourself that,.." And lovely stand off that goes nowhere but down.. Seems like a call back to the anime episode between the metapods. And in which weaviale is like "im gunna have to...

Considering who this is centered on i cant see it going well... And considering the gift is a consumable I wager the lower it gets the worse she gets. It'll be an interesting progress bar to say the least. Its so wierd to think of anyone associating with lusa' being affectionate or even...

Hi torchic' stealing your format hope you dont mind Fics w 3 or less reviews. Roost a gift fic Chapter.one has been reviewed enough to disqualify for the bonus. Eveything else qualifies. Chapter. "buisness as usual" is over the 7 words so it earns the length bonus Chapter 21 " signed and...

I though intackles this one. Guess not. Lets fix that. Well theres some symbolic stuff about dogneat dog and finders keepers but i suspect guzmas logic is going to come out as "it was there". Followed by a "and no one else was" Wellnits preservation of skull culture which is an aspect of...

Nice intro establishing this as a help request thread... I was kinda hoping to see some review feplies ect in the same style but ah well this chunks really good... And the gripes... Yeah unless you hug onto bite ghastlys are going to be a pain unless you overtrain to shadow claw and i think...

Per this intro and possible memory dream i suppect tupelo is jungs newest patient. Definitly picking up on some possible traumatic transport here... I gotta admit i love the idea of jung having a named plushie to sleep with. And smart to have his own coping pick me up to start his day. And...

Alright, those names have to be a nightmare.. does the far-left bird go... "Right.. other right... wait who is the other right today?" if they wake up first? Perhaps, closest, furthest... I mean I get why the center might roll with it but the fringes heads I hope have another naming system...

Looks like marsh has a plan. Wonder what hus criteria is besides trainer though? Wonder what interesting entails for a water mud critter? Yeah heaven forfend younuse the walking route... For walking. Granted hes shown enough skill to get himself this far along wonder if mega is his end game...

Well its a double edged pun. Charron in mythology being the man to usher souls into the after life... So his ties to pluto in the english naming are obvious (if downplayed to a subordinate which i found hilarious) then as you said the japenese versions name literally is mr. Underworld... So...

May I say trying to get a story done for everyone on the blitz promotion had been an adventure... on Pride mode, with one HP... Tough in all seriousness if some of you are noticing errors... well I'm mainly regulated to getting your reviews done on my cell and it has no spell check. So...

Well I am here for the whump fest... very late but present I guess? also I like your artwork, it adds a nice touch. It's interesting to see mere moments in that the accessories of his profession are so pivotal to his well-being that Flygon checks for them first before focusing outward. As a...