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I imagine behaviour like that would give plasma both a focus on thier "league is evil angle" (see cynthia) as wellas someone to actually go after personally if someone was acting like that going through the league.

Chapter 15 review Huh now smart ic move might be to turn and bail after planting bugs or something... But knowing ash he's likely to plow into the lions mouth headfirst. I'm surprised pet's able to keep a pokerface through this since his position is the apex of" i know who knows who knows"...

Honestly all my characters start as notes in notebooks or scrap papers... That migrate to word docs... That get put into folders for each setting... That i will then drag from personal computer to a internet worthy unit as time permits , and last step is iplug the charactet notes into the aprop...

Chapter 9 response I really hope avern believes ai-tur' and his stated preference/status as an asocial soul. Converstaion and people arent a need and that is probably pivitol in the ai retaining his sanity in this timepoint. Its a fine point between liking yet not needing others and i'm not...

Chapter 8 response I kinda think the joys cognetive dissodence are definitly going to be ai-tur' and avrens main default reaction to turo for the rest of thier lives. Free mental gymnastics for.everone who encountered the original and his mad schemes... So does ai. Have the means to catch any...

Chapter 7 response I suspect avern would like bio-tur' to actually appologize and give approval and thats making things complicated between ai-tur' but letscall that a pet theroy and let it go at that. Laughs. Love how avern just called it and shot down ai's verblal tic of correcting... Even...

Chapter 6 response Yeah gotta admit being told off as irrational by an ai has gotta sting. Especially when the burn is directed at a man of science... And somewhere/somewhen organic-tur' is rolling in his grave. And no one with any sense cares... I am surprused celebi isnt chilling with a...

Chapter 5 response Aw man panic attack.. I was hoping i missed the mark but cue avrens internal screaming... And imposture syndrome... Ouch pain 101 here we come. Ai-tur is possibly trying compression/grounding? The motions seems too big for celebi... Honestly having lived through and...

Chapter 4 review Avren has a case of denail i think. the ai is all but family. I mean if you think about it he was built avren's father from the ground up... Turo just skipped the "mom" step. Granted avren could skip over that revelation and focus on the complexity of sounds like... Acts...

Chapter 3 response I am trying to poke through the bulk of your fics... Time to write on the phones a bit touch and go so i am a bit slow and definitly grammer challenged these days but i am hoping to get through everything before novembers holidays kick up and kick me in the tail as a result...

Chapter 2 response I dunno lights on after time travel seems really really important. As in we arent alone anymore... But then this is a mon protag so some featherheadedness is anticipated. (Though not ash levels) Snorts... Love how celebis partner is literally backseat driving timetravel...

Chapter 1 response Lobely how avern is admiting to being a hair unhinged here. Granted globe trotting to get a mon screams ambition or desperation and i suspect this isnt a common mon here... Hm small and floating sonpossibly psychic type... and per setting (scarlet/violet) and avern having to...

I can wait for you to finish then hunt down the comic for a compare contrast after the fact...

Review chapter 7 Yeah i think telling cyrus how to do anything much less slapping down on his sore spots is a good way to be offed later down the line. The fact that cyrus is still twitching hours later definitlt spells bad things for charons continued life span once he gets his head on...

Chapter 6 review/reply I got some odd looks cackling at my phone in public. Thanks for those saturn vs fish images. In which cyrus aquires captian obvious as his new title and says... Yep charons on a killing path and guess who he's aiming at. Poor saturn having to wrestle with it all day...

Also wrong franchize i know but i keep seeing this in my head

Chapter 5 review So kaisei is the luckiest idiot ever... Nice... While it makes saturns job easier i can see a few ways it could be made harder. Not knowing the target (i havent had the pleasure to read the manga) i am going to guess they might have some tie to heatran but thats a shot in the...

Chapter 4 review reaction Lovely title drop there between cyrus and saturn. I think his only escape hatch now is to play everyone against everyone... So keeping a link to cyrus isnt quite so illogical crush fanboy activity it might seem at firat glance. Still you really can grasp here how...

Chapter 3 reaction Well cyrus perfectionism and purity obsession does leave him a few vulnerabilites... Granted generic bottled waters an amgle i wouldnt have figured on... Of course what saturn doesnt hear he doesnt have to report... Smart of him... Well knowing charon i suspect he's got...

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