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[["Oh, what the bloody hell is this!" Yami Bakura throws the tea into the air. The cup and saucer crashed to the ground and shattered into hundreds of tiny ceramic shards. "You're going to bloody accuse me of being a bloody murderer because I've done bloody nothing?? I'm more dangerous than all...

Hi all, sorry for being so inactive. I had a lot of real-life things to attend to these past two days. I thiiiiink I'm all caught up on the thread, but with the 5 million threads of logic and the suspicion in the back of Yami Bakura's head that everyone is lying (it's in the nature of an ancient...

[[Yami Bakura smiled. "Try me," he growled. "That sounds fun. I've never tasted lead before." Looking back to where the Pikachu had lain, Yami Bakura grit his teeth. "I knew we should have eliminated someone, you cowards. Now we're wasting precious time. And there wasn't even anything to show...

[[Yami Bakura smirked. Perhaps Dave and Diyem hated others, but Yami Bakura hated them most. But he couldn't let them know that--he had to play off as if he were sweet, shy, and British, just like his host. But this talk of no-lynching was not amusing for Yami Bakura. Wouldn't there be some...

Both fair points! I am definitely in favor of "showing, not telling" and as I had tendencies to go overboard on that I tried to dial it back. Here, I did more of the telling because I honestly wanted to get into the meat of the story where things happen. I've had different opinions on whether...

For whatever reason, this following area stuck out to me (sorry for not quoting originally lol not sure why I missed that) You're certainly not egregious about it, and most places I think you do a good job of switching dialogue between two people. I just felt like the tags/descriptions in this...

Hey! Thanks so much for giving the reviews; I really appreciate pointing out the typos and inconsistencies that I never noticed after all these years >_< I see the opening is slow; I'm not sure how else to begin the story and since I'm still working on later parts of the story, trying to rewrite...

[[Yami Bakura looked around. The place was flat, featureless, and smoggy. Almost like the Shadow realm, but brighter and without the soul-shredding monstrosities that turned everyone's existences into a living hell. How boring. He swept his gaze over the crowd standing with him. What were...

Wrote a review for Continental Divides here!

Hey! Sorry this review is less organized than usual; I'm on my tablet instead of computer and it's more difficult/annoying to move stuff around. Oh I totally agree. Just thought I would check out of curiosity lol. Thanks for the clarifications! Chapter 3 Just a general comment is that you put...

For the current prompt: Silver stormed away from Giovanni—they fought again. Why couldn’t his dad just understand that serving raw steak at team dinners was a great idea? “Hey!” a grunt with teal hair shouted. “Who are you?” Your boss's son! Silver snapped. “Gible-gible-gib!” The grunt...

Giovanni laughed, his heart soaring with exhilaration as he played with the rare, highly-valuable Pokemon before him. But even though Gible was rare and monetarily near-priceless, this Gible had more to it—it loved being Giovanni, it gave him affection, it was his friend. And what better way to...

Aw yay, this looks like fun! Thanks so much for putting this together :D Name: Yami Bakura Species: ancient demon-spirit inhabiting the body of a 16-year-old boy Appearance: kinda scrawny pretty-boy with long white hair Basic personality traits: bloodthirsty (literally and figuratively)...

You review me, I review you! When you said that you had an Aqua/Magma story, I HAD to read it. I don't often find other fics or one-shots about these evil teams! And while neither has made an appearanc yet (unless someone is undercover??) you've got a neat little story so far. It seems to me...

Oooh this is so much fun! Q. So what's Drowning about? Drowning is a story about a young woman who recently finished college and wants to spend her life doing good--namely, helping restore the ocean she loves so much. She and her water Pokemon join Team Aqua, but after a run-in with Team Magma...

Hey! So glad to see you here. And for whatever reason I hadn't noticed Continental Divides--I definitely need to check it out now! I'm such a sucker for Team Aqua and Team Magma :love: Bot things end up getting covered in later chapters! I appreciate the feedback on them. I had written this...

Chapter 3 Maressa trudged down the wooden dock. Behind her, the forested hillsides stretched without end. She glanced back—a few miles north lay Route 118, and just west of that was Mauville City. Home. A wave of nostalgia washed over Maressa—but at the same time, she felt no desire to go...

I was not here for any previous RP/mafia game, but I think they sound fun! I also like the idea of drabbles prompts and a joke art exchange. Tbh I'll take part in whatever is decided, but the ones I mentioned are my favorites :)

Chapter 2 Maressa tightened the ties of her bandanna as she stared at her reflection. Closing her eyes, she straightened up, took a few deep breaths, and looked at herself once more. She tried to keep calm but her reflection only showed how anxious she was. She paced back and forth, sat down...

Thanks so much for the review! I initially didn't notice that anyone had commented here so it took a while for me to see this, haha. Yep, all of the characters here except Bakura/Yami Bakura are made up by me. In Season Zero, Yami Bakura revealed he had a TON of human figurines that he had...