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Triple-posting because I finished reviewing 3 chapters of Pokemon: Legendary Adventures at 1,100 words.

Here for catnip! I see kintsugi has already reviewed the whole thing, and I'm not going to be able to do quite that much in 48 hours ^_^; But I can give feedback on a few chapters! It's nice to see a trainer fic with an Original Character--though they used to be all the rage, I feel like they...

Double-posting because I didn't realize I never logged chapter 17... So here's a 5,400-word chapter of Drowning. Also Chapter 19 of The End. ... AND Chapter 18 of The End. I'm preeetty sure I'm back on track now.

Here to recharge ye BLEC points I'll have a lot to put down soon but I keep forgetting to log stuff lol. Here is a 5,500 word chapter of Drowning.

I'll add another: Carraig na Coinnle: My boss sent my Grumpig and I out in the middle of a snowstorm to get some medicine and I somehow wound up in this huge creepy weird ice castle! It's filled with pretty lights--wait, what's that thing?! Under a Bed of Clover: I had a bad run-in with Team...

I (23F) got caught by a bunch of weirdo Magma creeps and realized Team Aqua is a bunch of creeps so I decided I'd leave but then kept changing my mind and my Golduck (20M) keeps getting mad at me for staying with TA. AITA for hanging around??

Back at it with the next chapter! I'm wondering if the three totally different scenes makes this chapter feel disjointed. If you have any thoughts, let me know! Enjoy! Content warning: someone's legs are cut into Chapter 18 The waves slapped the rockfaces, spraying them with white foam...

Going for another supercharge damage boost

Doing a supercharge AoE damage boost.

Hey hey hey! Here for the latest chapter! Aww yeah, an Enigma opening! This certainly doesn't bode well for Rio. Super nitpick here--whenever I see any quotation marks, punctuation (like that period) is put inside them, not outside. I think it should just be "forward." Heh, this is a funny...

Name: Tabitha Species: Mightyena (though normally a human) Appearance: He's a rather large Mightyena with matted, tangled fur; his scruffy appearance befitting his rough personality. Personality: A human who doesn't know how he became a Mightyena and has no idea why he's at a holiday party...

Hey hey! Here for Chapter 18: Oooh once Spark said that her whiskers shorted out, I reralized that Harlequin was right about the food being tainted. Ooooh dang Rio is cold. He comes across as genuinely scary/frightening and capable in this scene, what with successfully tainting the Pokemon and...

Hey hey! I am back on schedule with this next chapter--I know it's soon after the previous one, but at this rate, I'll hopefully be back on track. Chapter 17 The walls, floor and ceiling were all made of the same drab metal. Tabitha sighed inwardly—working in places like this all the time...

Day 6: So sweet it hurts! Share your favorite fluff fic or a fic that made you feel some feels. Fic: Featuring Wally by Dramatic Melody Summary: Hoenn reporter Russel travels to the Alolan Battle Tree to interview Hoenn native, Wally! Status: Complete This is a fic that is short and oh so...

Been a while. Logging a few things: Reviewed latest chapter of Continental Divides Reviewed The Inalienable Dreamless Reviewed latest chapter of The End: Rekindled Posted a new chapter of Drowning at ~5,000 words.

Well, this is about 10 days late. My apologies, and I'll do what I can to get back on schedule with these chapters! I decided to try a new style of writing with this chapter: instead of just summing up things that happen over a period of days, I put in snippets of the dialogue and things that...

Hey there! Thanks so much for stopping by--it's nice to see the Review Tag move along. And yes, haha. I originally just wrote this to have a piece explore grief of someone losing someone else they love, and when I chose a Ratticate, it kinda turned into the rival from the games. Oh, for surer...

Hi! Quick reply before the chapter review: Oh cute! And yep, 'Cloe' is pronounced as 'Chloe'--her family is from Ecuador, so I think it's a Spanish spelling of the name. Here to take a look at chapter 17 =D 3 things about this paragraph: 1. I normally associate the term "sleazy" with a...

October Day 7: Share a fic that made you like a pokemon you hadn’t previously. The Inalienable Dreamless by NebulaDreams Word count: 11,000 Status: Complete Summary: A confused Banette wakes up in a fiery room with no escape, seeing visions of a girl with black hair, an enigmatic Hypno, and...

Hey! So glad to see you posted this! Ever since you mentioned a therapeutic Hypno, I've been itching to see where you'd go with this :) I point out a few things I noticed with the meat of my thoughts at the end. I think you might want to either get rid of "regardless" or put a comma after...