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Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. From what I remember last time, there was fire dog gerbil thingy but then Koa was already thinking about his next destination because teen I guess. I am unlikely to...

Chapter 78: Water-Type Under the Bridge Entry 2201 The newcomer has spoken with a couple of Sages. They said it was just simple questions. About the world. About the Sages. About me. Apparently she ran away from her home. Otherwise, she's kept mostly to herself. Something about her aura feels...

Week 1 rec goes to @Inkedust's Pathways of Arcadia. Still in its infancy at the moment, but folks on Discord seem to like the worldbuilding that Inke's put into this so far. For my standpoint, without spoiling the actual content it is a world whose lore is centered around a particular trio of...

Level of Prize: Level 3 Type of Prize: Art Method of Contact: Discord (ambyssin)

Can I catch up with this fic before the end of the week? Probably not, but it won't be for lack of trying. Back to Fire Emblem we goooooo. SE 1-3 -I personally disagree with the structure of the first parts of this chapter. Rather than making them extended flashbacks (in what's already an...

Yeah, that's quite true for the game itself. I don't really establish a timeframe for the recording but I considered that recording to have come from before Rose went all in on his dumb Darkest Day idea and needed Leon around to tame Eternatus. He's basically Pokelon Musk. Left to fanon to...

Eh, I figured I'd just finish things out at this point. I'm not that far right. [checks chapter word count] [chuckles] I'm in danger. 66: It's one six shy but this number does get a chuckle out of me since everything's gone to shit. Happy accident. -Sleeping on the top bunk? But I thought...

I suppose in that sense, it was mission accomplished for you, then. XD That's because second-person is haaaaaaard and writing anything beyond a one-shot is haaaaaaaaaarder. I seem to recall Persephone wrote in second-person, but I'm not sure if her current project still uses that POV or not...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. Since I last read, apparently this fic was finished! 🎉I doubt I can do all the remaining chapters, though. At the very least, I do remember that, last time, Lance got...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. 1: Well, is it the first chapter or the prologue?! Make up your mind. :screm: -Is Edward a serperior? That's my best guess based on the opening description here...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. I am still a ways off ever catching up, which is fine. Last I checked, an onion had crashed the village to destroy Haru's worldview. 16: Not me realizing I hadn't...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. 12 -Yeah, there's probably a more elegant way to introduce Team Anima rather than multiple paragraphs of exposition. Like describing their accents as the conversation...

Blitzy New Year! Disclaimer: My blitz reviews are stream of consciousness styled rambles. Let me know if you have any questions. Prelude -Interesting framing tool to have this written out as one side of dialogue to sell the storyteller aspect as best you can in a fully prose format. -Vulpix and...

This is a standalone one-shot written as a present for a 2018 holiday gift exchange. The requested prompt was "overcoming a loss." I'm archiving it here for posterity's sake. I do not consider it representative of my current writing abilities. It's set in the world of Pokémon Mystery Dungeon...

Hoo boy, yeah. Still in the fic tutorial, for better or for worse. I do think you do a very good job of moving the tour along. There aren't these pauses to the chapter for exposition like before, save for that bit in the beginning. That one gets a pass since it's kinda framed as being stated to...

So, I actually compiled a trio of recommendations as part of the ongoing Heartache campaign. And because I'm lazy, I'm going to copy-paste it. So, presenting... Amby's TR underrated PMD sampler platter for possible Review Blitz consumption! For these recommendations, I'm picking fics from...

Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Path of Valor Synopsis: When a dreepy princess, two classmates, and their servants are sucked into an alien world ruled by a tyrannical deoxys, they kickstart a chain of events endangering the omniverse. With the fate of all worlds hanging in the balance, can this...

Chapter 77: City of Unfortunate Events It wasn't quite the level of chaos Seifer had seen in the shaky videos of Venish, but that wasn't for lack of trying. Various muscular pokémon ran down the main street, tossing small seeds at nearby shops and restaurants. A few lobbed the seeds up toward...

I know I got assigned this for V-Wheel, yet I don't find myself with all that much to say about the chapter over all. It's not a bad chapter by any means. I just think some of the stuff at the healer's den failed to hold my attention because the fic has, at this point, established a pattern of...

Chapter 76: Hot Off the Press The Renegade cannot reconcile that the Benefactor embodies the Old World. That is why he ruined the Great Harmony. Why he relentlessly seeks the Benefactor's destruction. For every attempt the Benefactor makes at repairing the Universe, the Renegade lashes out...