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For Week 4, Hunter, Haunted still gives a bonus, but I think everyone's heard of HH already. Given that, I'd actually like to post to promote a story I recently took out the back and shot, The Way Home. The Way Home is the story of a man that wakes up after a traffic accident has killed him. He...

Hey there, been a while! Unfortunately, I bring sad news. I've decided that I won't be finishing this story. I came to that conclusion months ago already, but didn't get around to making it official. I'd like to share how the story was supposed to end, though. It has been a long time since I...

I'm baaaaack! big dogy... *soyjak point* Damn, yeah. Since I don't recall there being any Pokémon in schools in your setting (GeL being the exception, but it definitely seemed like an exception), it would be pretty hard for Pokémon to get jobs that require education. There seem to be a few...

Reminder about my oneshots for Week 3: Into Light The third place winner of TR's 2022 Villain POV Oneshot Contest. It's about a man whose wife was taken from him by ghosts trying to get rid of a new troupe of Misdreavus that's arrived in Ilex Forest. As the contest title suggests, this one has...

Hey there! Decided to read this one since I'd heard good things about it and also you as an author and a person in general. This isn't a (full?) review since I couldn't actually come up with enough to say, but I did want to post in the thread to still say some things. First off, this is very...

Okay! It's time for the second chapter. Before that, though, I should mention a few changes I added to the first chapter after it was first uploaded: <changelog moved to first chapter's post> They're not huge things, but I think they help make both Heaven and Andre more interesting. Also, I'm...

@StolenMadWolf Thanks for the review! It's totally fine that this isn't your thing! You gave it a fair shot and it just wasn't in the cards. I do want to mention a few things before you go, though, so that you're left with a more accurate understanding of what this story's trying to do. I...

Hi Neb! Here to read and review this, as I wouldn't miss a new Nebfic for the world. The first chapter's all that's out so far, so that's what I looked at. Ah, first person, that surprised me. So used to third person from you. This isn't any kind of criticism (would be very stupid to criticize...

Hey there! Haven't posted in this thread in a loooong time. Have been reading, though. I was at 187 before, so I've read chapters 188 and 189. For whatever reason, I'm having some trouble organizing my thoughts for this, so you're unfortunately gonna get something kind of disjointed. Either way...

@NebulaDreams Thanks for the review! While I am disappointed that the "good half" of the first chapter also appears to have had substantial flaws, I am thankful for the honest and constructive feedback. I will likely, though, still leave the first chapter alone for now in order to focus on...

Thanks for the chooonky review! There may be a misunderstanding here - angels and demons are both born in Heaven and Hell respectively, and have no prior lives. The "virtuous" in Heaven and the "sinners" in Hell are the humans that are having their afterlife, and they remain as humans (though...

Hey there! I have returned, and I have read Chapters 2 and 3 this time. Let's jump in. I think the last sentence could be on its own paragraph, since when it shares one with the line of dialogue, it initially looks like the "she" refers to Sada and not her mother. Different but related thing...

Hey there! Was going through fics for the Blitz and this one's premise caught my eye. I've read Chapter One, and boy howdy, you weren't kidding about the child abuse part. Ooh, humans are present? And the Froslass eat them, I presume? Nice. I liked this line, it's cool. (bowling pins falling...

Hello everyone! So, I took some time to think about things, and I've decided to merge the first and second chapter after all. They were originally the same chapter, but I split it in two because of its length. However, I figured now that it would really be important that the two leads meet in...

The deity is indeed named Arukei - however, all instances of "god" like this also refer to Arukei. I just wanted to make sure to refer to Arukei by name a few times so people understand that I'm not writing a version of the Christian God but something else. Whether or not a given phrase will...

Going to recommend stuff by two very talented friends of mine! First up is @NebulaDreams. Just earlier today, he made his own promo post so I'll refer you to that for those for all the links, but I'll still take a moment here to gush about his works as a whole. I love love love love love...

Hey there! I'd heard you talk about this story's premise on the Discord and been somewhat interested, so I figured the Blitz was the perfect time to check it out. I read the first chapter - let's jump right in. Nice line - gets across well how hard he studied in a slick way. It's a bit jarring...

New Blitz, new promo post! I think I'll try a slightly different approach this time... --- Hunter, Haunted Also known as my magnum opus! This is a psychological horror thriller with some darkly comedic elements, focusing on my version of Red from the first playthrough of Twitch Plays...

Hey there! This is a story that's an AU of my characters from Hunter, Haunted and its sequel The Bringer. However, this is entirely original fiction with no Pokémon to be seen. No knowledge of HH or its sequel is necessary as I have written this to work as a standalone (though it may be made...

Hey everyone. Bad news. After several months of writer's block on this story, I've decided that I won't be finishing it. I just got stuck and didn't have enough passion for the story to push through. Add to that the fact that I showed the remaining draft to my friend and they thought it was a...