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Logging a review for chapter 3 and 4 of Context Switch and one for chapter 18 of Path of Valor.

Well, I’m a bit later than normal, but better late than never, right? Chapter 18 Excuse me, what? So what’s next? The party eating at a restaurant called WcDonald’s? :p Actually, if multiple planets got swallowed up into the Qliphoth, then why is Rayquaza’s Needle here? Shouldn’t it be...

Chapter 3 I like how Paren and Bracket got a rivalry now XD Aw, too bad it gets cut off and we don’t find out what the problem is. I kinda wish this was written out as dialogue so we could see the man’s explanation instead of merely being told that he explained it. Show, don’t tell and all...

Logging 12 hours of writing. Also distributing his bonus points: - +31 Stamina - +5 Attack Upgrading Strike V to Ultima Replacing Fortified with Quick Healer As for Cabot's Unleashed: - Blacklight Synergy Once per turn, the user can store a single one-shot boost effect such as Sure...

Turn 2: Use Strike V at Maple’s Head.

Reviewed chapter 1 and 2 of Context Switch (redux)

Oh, hi there. I’ve been meaning to read this one for… quite some time, so glad I’m finally getting around to doing so. Without further ado, let’s jump right into it: Chapter 1 Gonna start off with a nitpick, but the “This” should be uncapitalized here. Heh, it will be fun to read the OG...

Cabot looked at Pleo and smiled. "Yeah. I'm glad I met him and made such a great friend." Pleo nuzzled his side, making Cabot chuckle in response. As he pet the Lugia's head in return, the Rampardos paused upon hearing his stomach growl. He looked down at his belly in surprise, before turning...

Cabot and Pleo looked at each other again, before turning back to Shiron. Cabot rubbed at the back of his neck as he thought of the best way to explain things. "Well, it's a bit of a long story," Cabot began. "You know how I said that most gods in my world were killed centuries ago? Well, in...

Wrote up a review of chapter 1 and 2 of Kuki's Tale.

Hey there, Adam! Here to review the first two chapters just like I promised you. Wanna start off by saying I really like the cover art. It’s cute and seeing those two Mew would certainly brighten up anyone’s day. ^^ Gonna start off with a nitpick here. When you introduce a new character into...

"So he's a human back in your world?" Cabot asked. "Oh, so kinda like Starr's brother then!" Pleo exclaimed. "He's a human in her world, but a Zeraora here."

"Oh, what is he like?" Pleo wondered. "Is he someone you know from your world?"

"Oh, that's pretty neat!" Cabot replied, wagging his tail slightly. "Most on the team come from places where there's more land than water, so it's nice to hear there's someone who can relate to that." Meanwhile, Pleo looked around a bit, shifting impatiently before turning to Shiron with a...

Cabot blinked. "Uh... alright then." He scratched his cheek and wondered for a moment if Shiron was perhaps oversimplifying things a bit, but opted not to press the matter. After all, for all he knew Shiron's parents really were bad people. With how different everyone's worlds were it was...

"So, you wanted to go on this journey like everyone else, but your parents wouldn't let you?" Cabot asked, wincing slightly. "That... must have been rough. When I was younger I wanted nothing more than to go on adventure and see different islands, which was a big reason why I joined the navy in...

Cabot and Pleo looked at each other in surprise for a moment, before turning back to Shiron with a cheerful smile "Heh, well that sounds good to me," Cabot said. "You always seem pretty nice, so I wouldn't mind getting to know you better as well." "You're a human in your world, right?" Pleo...

Cabot looked up and saw a Swampert approaching them. He recognized him to be Shiron, someone from the team who he'd talked to a couple of times in the past but never really got to know all that well. "Oh, hey there, Shiron!" the Rampardos greeted, waving back at him. "How are you?" "Are you...

"Oh, Cabot! Look at these ones!" Cabot turned his head to see Pleo had walked off to examine a bunch of colorful flowers in the grass. With spring approaching the weather inside of Destiny Village had become a lot more tolerable to Cabot, which had made him want to go out for a walk in the park...

Logging 12 hours of writing. As for BLECs, me and SM published another chapter of Fledglings for about 18600 words. On top of that, I reviewed chapter 17 of Path of Valor earlier today.