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Catnip for you too! This was a cute story! It was very predictable in terms of the beats that would happen if only for the meta reason of the story's length. Once there was a cry in the forest, I knew exactly what was going to happen by the beat. That doesn't mean the story was bad, though. In...

Catnip time! I really liked the transition from being so ignorant of what his situation was to eventually showing the relation of our perspective to humans and just following orders. But showing little hints now and then of exactly what happened by the time we got to the midway point...

Heya! This is gonna be a review of the prologue through chapter 4! Small note, you used the wrong "than" in your opening statement/legal disclosure. The opening prologue was a very far zoom out of the state of affairs for the world, very much like a cinematic prologue without dialogue. I...

Hey there! This will be a review for the prologue and first two chapters. This is a strong opening line. It's basic and doesn't describe too much, but it does start right in the action. Something I can appreciate in particular about this story is how it doesn't really idle around for much...

Alright, time to give this one a look. This'll be for the first two chapters! We're opening with a somewhat standard quiz with the twist of something clearly going wrong in the process. Very clearly this is going to be important down the line, so I'm curious on where that will go. One thing I...

Hey there, Luker! It's finally time for me to take a peek at this one! This is going to be a review of chapter 1 and the prologue. I'll give some stream of consciousness thoughts as well as end thoughts. Interesting prologue. It seems slightly too detailed to be just a throwaway setting, right...

A story about a Pikachu and an Eevee is definitely drawing upon the classics! The way the prose is going for the opening is interesting. Third person present, but the italics seems to be for when things are happening in the scenery, but no italics if it pertains to dialogue? However, there are...

Oh, interesting! This time we're looking at something of a look at Gladion escaping from Aether, are we? I thought it was very clever how you skipped right to the actual escape plot and how it all happened instead of trudging through the actual plotting of it. You could have started at some...

Chapter 145 – Unexpected Life The doctors had insisted Zena stay in bed and recover from those wounds, which were still bleeding mildly despite her Mystic healing. Being struck by the Judgement of Arceus, as it turned out, was more difficult to heal. But Zena insisted a little harder that she...

Personal goal is to get enough for a sprite companion as is tradition. I think 6 is the cap, so this may be it until I do either replacements or find some other milestone goal!

Review made! Have a HoC.

This is a review of chapter 1! The first three scenes between perspectives of Ash, Pikachu, and Jenny set up an interesting field for what was to come. It seems, based on the narrative, that Ash was going to be the one to fight against the Team Rocket uprising that was happening ever since the...

Yep, I plan on going over some of these earlier chapters a bit more thoroughly one day, maybe some time soon come 2023, but otherwise, it's been nice to see you enjoy these chapters! Hopefully you'll enjoy what's to come soon. -- Chapter 144 – Triple Luck There was no way Star had given...

Chapter 143 – Fly to the City Cipher Castle was strangely lonely. There were very few guards actually patrolling the area inside, and all the halls were far too large to be considered anything but excessive. Owen walked down a now-familiar passageway that was at least ten feet in width and...

Heya Vray! This is a review for chapter 1, crossposted from FFN. Interesting opening, starting with some intrigue and context less exchanges, but I was able to follow just enough to get into the scene. This is a decent opener despite the lack of context, so good job there. Also, bonus points...

Chapter 3 Ah yes, our first somewhat antagonist or at least opposing force. It's interesting just how big and wide this facility is, actually. It makes me wonder just how much funding they're getting and what the ulterior motives would be for it. I suppose that's somewhat for the prologue in...

Chapter 142 – The Life They Live “Xerneas… What an awful god,” Trina muttered under her breath, riding atop Alex’s greater head. The Hydreigon wasn’t really sure how he’d wound up as the Snivy’s noble steed, but as he flew down from the Voidlands’ portal and toward the ruins of Hot Spot, he...

Chapter 141 – Final Wings There he stood, the final remnant of Rhys, mindless and operating on the basic instructions that he had left behind. His battle stance was the same; Owen knew it all too well, even though the memories would be even more painful and prominent to Team Alloy. But Owen...

Chapter 140 – The Last Remnant Sun. Sky. Warmth. Light. It was approaching winter, and yet somehow even the bitter cold felt warm in the afternoon daytime. Because it was the first time many of them had truly been able to experience daytime at all. It didn’t matter that it was just outside of...

Chapter 139 – Gone, and Remembered “You must think you’re perfectly clever,” Qitlan said, sneering, but Owen could see the hostility in his eyes. “I’ve already figured everything out.” The Charmeleon slowly got up from the wall, glancing at his shoulder that now had a hole going through it. “I...