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Hey, 133TFR33k! Sorry for the delay in this review. I'm looking at the first three chapters here; I know you're interested in feedback on the later chapters especially, so I'll be back to check those out later. My impression is that the story diverges farther from your gameplay as things go...

Aaaaa, happy belated birthday, Sind! I hope you had an awesome one!

All right, that settles it! Great job to us, I guess, heh. I'm guessing we have perhaps one or two posts to say any goodbyes to Millie/Dark Matter (or theoretically N, but I guess he peaced), and then hopefully a little send-off with Weavile and Yveltal as well. Don't think we necessarily need...

Sounds like you have a good attitude about things! I would say that it's less that people here aren't interested in reading others' fics, but that it's often hard to find the time on top of writing one's own. Good on you for taking a proactive approach to finding feedback, though. Some authors...

Ooh, that's such a good catch! I completely forgot about there being two Yveltal.

Woo! Final stand time! Gotta do our best and see where everything lands. Even if we do take out Xerneas here, I'm curious what might come next. We still have a Dark Matter installed in a kyurem... and surely we haven't seen the last of Millie, either. Perhaps we'll have to try to Claim Xerneas...

Feel free to ask around on the Discord for review trades, too--more people will probably see your message there! We'll also probably have another round of our review-trade game Catnip Circle in a couple weeks, too, so feel free to jump on that.

Happy birthday!! Hope you're having a great one (and perhaps get some fine turkey entertainment to go with it)!

That image appears to be credited to this artist, although unfortunately you still might not have any luck contacting them; they may not speak English. In general unfortunately I'd say that you shouldn't include fanart if you aren't able to find the artist to get their permission to use it.

Welcome to the forums! That's an awesome story--accidentally popping out 50k words is no mean feat. Sounds like you had a lovely time writing it, too; sometimes it feels like the characters do their own thing and the story writes itself, but that's definitely not a universal experience. Congrats...

Posting music to go with your story is totally fine! To me it would make the most sense to have the numbers within your stories be links themselves, rather than have them point to a separate thread with links--most convenient for readers to just click as they're reading along if they'd like. But...

Welp, here we go! :copyka: I think this turn is actually pretty straightforward, since we don't actually have a lot of options left here. For offense I think we've pretty much got Icicle Crash and... Rocky Tackle? I'm not even sure those would properly combo; I think Icicle Crash is ranged...

kyuegh birth?????? Hope you have an awesome day out there!

Eyyyy, happy birthday! I hope you have a wonderful day!

Welcome to the forums! Sorry to hear the art scammers on FFN have been getting to you. They really are a plague. If you're looking for feedback, probably your best bet is to look for a review exchange. We just had a round of Catnip review trading, so it'll probably be a couple weeks before the...

If Diyem is an example to go by... the answer is yes! Nope! Don't like that! Aight, I'm gonna go for it. @Mirage , feel free to add World's Guardian, or do something completely different with your actions if you think there's a better option! > Catapult + Poison Jab @ Xerneas' Core >...

Hey, matt. Here with a Catnip review for your first chapter! It looks as though this is the beginning of a trainer journey story following Hilda, so it's interesting that you open with a pokémon's perspective. I hope there'll be more through Oshawott's eyes later in the fic--there's relatively...

I think at this point going for a big attack seems like the best option? idk that it'll disrupt the geomancy, but we don't have taunt or anything that could potentially work better, so we might as well give it a shot. We also want to get as much damage in as possible before all those buffs go...