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Hey, welcome! I know you a little bit, of course, though I wasn't aware that you did any programming. That's cool, and I'm always surprised by how many fanfic people also dabble in code. It's great to have you, and I hope you enjoy your stay!

Hey, roule! Glad to see you around. Hope you're had fun returning to writing.

This turned out great! I love how managed to net us two badges in the very first post and then it took all the way in part seven to get us back on track. Also love the "duct taping pokémon together" leitmotif that managed to continue for about half the story before disappearing completely...

Is... is that... MoThErFuCkInG mIrAcLeS? :o) > CHAT: MiraclesMatter

A couple of short chapters! I'm glad to see Kenya again, of course. It's great that she's just been casually continuing her journey while the rest are all off getting sucked into ultra beast fights and whatnot. Of course, she can't escape the plot forever! It's also very telling that her first...

On to Chapter 2! It's "bolt upright." I think this would sound a little better if you rephrased it so you aren't repeating "the wall" near the end. One thing to watch out for is that when a character calls another by their name or title in dialogue (e.g. "Hey, Tim!" or "Whatever you say...

Welcome to the forums! Thanks for posting your story. Just reading the summary, it's like, whoah, this is going to escalate quickly, heh. I don't have any familiarity with Voltron, so I'm glad this story doesn't require it! I'll let you know if I manage to get lost anyway. One thing to watch...

Nice to see the next chapter up! Hope the writing's going well on the next. *afterwards One thing to look out for in dialogue are cases where a character refers to another by name or title. This is called a direct address, and you always put a comma before the person's name. Like here: There...

Aww, Desta. :( At least it seems like we were able to cheer her up a bit. Also, hmm, those potential SuburbanSprawl game devs dying in lightning-related incidents... Subtle! AXSIS is just kinda subtle like that. Classy. I like this game more already! Although it's probably pretty dangerous to...

Feeling a bit nostalgic and a bit wistful, so I thought I'd make a thread on the off-chance anyone here wanted to talk fansites with me. Are there any fansites (pokémon or otherwise) that you enjoy visiting, or did in the past? Have you ever made a site, or wanted to? I've run a fansite of my...

Welcome to you both! @windskull I'm tickled you've visited the main site before! I tend to assume that most people here knew of the forums first. There are quite a few fans of PMD fic here, so I hope you find something you enjoy reading! Namohysip's Hands of Creation is one to check out if you...

Oh, book two? Interesting. Do you have a sense of how many books this is going to be overall? Wow, harsh! Gotta admit, I'm so used to seeing Serena used as the protagonist in X/Y fic that for a second I got confused by the fact that he's champion here, heh. I guess if Serena is Finnar, it makes...

Welcome again! Nice to see this here, and I like having the prologue and first chapter posted together here like this. The prologue flows nicely into the start of the story, and having chapter one gives the reader something a bit more substantial to bring them into the story proper. I've already...

Oh hey, glad to see you here! Hope you decide to bring your fic over, it would be a great excuse for me to get caught up on it. >>;

A simple question, but one it's always fun to see the answers to, I think. What keeps you coming back to reading or writing fanfic? For me, it's probably the variety more than anything. This is why I love being in a huge fandom like Pokémon. There's so much stuff out there, and even after being...

Another Smash fic! And I have to admit I... have no idea who any of these people are, heh. I've certainly heard of Banjo and Kazooie, but I've never played any of the games these characters appear in. So as far as I can tell, your characterization is great! *an ursine *Master Chief You need...

Oh, that's some nice art! I'm curious how the clothes would be different now that you've switched over to a sci-fi setting. You've gone and reminded me of how much I like those trait scale meme things... Going to have to restrain myself before I spend a ton of time on filling them out for all my...

It's great to see another chapter of this! The journey bit is pretty much inevitably my favorite part of a story, so it's a lot of fun to see Prim and Ferry on the road here and get to see a bit more of Kalos. In the first sentence, you're missing a word after "there." I think the second one is...

Hmm, as far as the conversation with Oak goes, I would say simply trimming a little of the discussion of the battle strategies would help. I think you establish that Red knows his stuff, and that he's close with Oak, pretty quickly... once Oak gets around to his follow-up question, I felt like...

Eyy, we're starting on the journey. I've been waiting for this, and I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit! It's mean, but I'm also giggling. :P Ah, Kekoa, interrupting Genesis' religious experience with a giant "FUCK!"... *used to, maybe? Just missing the closing quotes. Ahaha. Pixie objects to...