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Brisa winced at Owen's condition. "This fella was the first sent in by Diyem," she mused, to be heard by anyone close by. "He was, possibly, our ace. This ain't boding too well." She eyed the training dojo. "Anyone up for some sparring? I have a feeling we'll all need to train."

"Well met, stranger," said Brisa, being caught between the newcomer and the rest of the group. "I'm lux- I'm shinx Brisa, and these are my associates. We're new to this... world. Who might you be and what're your intentions?"

There sure was a lotta conversation. Brisa put out a paw and shook the proffered claw firmly. "Brisa. I'm a... a shinx, and unlike a lot of folks here I'm new to this... sort of thing." She gave him a hard look for a second. "Don't go pickin' me up like you did that poochyena fella. I hope...

There sure was a lotta conversation. "Not excited. Resigned, maybe. Just solvin' problems in my head and hopin' I find a way to exist alongside... all this. For however long we're here. I have the feelin' it's gonna be longer than they think." She gave Cynthian an appraising look. A scholar...

Brisa prowled up alongside the stifled roselia and sat on her haunches. She realised that she wasn't that much larger than Cynthian now. They would all be on even ground with each other save for boldness of character and quickness of mind. They would surely need plenty of that. "I never know...

A town square full of strangers. Not local strangers, but visitors as Brisa was — ugh, this place was going to be so crowded. Priority one after defeating the magikarp, find a home that was a little more out of the way. Actually, it would likely be critically important to get some reconnaissance...

Brisa gave a nod to Cynthian. Ignored Flame's jibe. To Curio, she said "Hey yourself." She wondered what was going through the lucario's mind that she should greet her so softly. Maybe Brisa would ask after the fight, assuming they both survived. With scars like that, Brisa expected she was a...

It didn't come as much surprise that Diyem knew Brisa was there, but it sent sparks down her back all the same. She once again considered her options. She could walk out. She could interrogate this charizard for the information those who'd already departed had not thought to seek. Demand...

I'd like to volunteer for reviewing, writing, and art. I'm a renaissance cat.

Hi Umbra! Sorry to keep you waiting for your catnip review. To compensate for my delay, I've read the first two chapters. I have to say, they were a pretty fun read! There's a lot being done right here. Characterisation is clear and distinct mostly through expression and dialogue, the prose is...

Player Type: Front Lines Character Name: Brisa Escarpa Aliases: Brisket, Bzzap, Breccia, Bolas, Bitch, Bronte, Zeraora of the Outworlds Species: Mountain Luxray Ultra Familiar: Zeraora Luz Shadow: Sombra DM control: Full Basic Personality: Somewhat terse, and uncomfortable with uncertainty in...

Well, this was cute as heck! It was a pleasure to read, and pretty breezy for its length. As a piece of xenofiction, Finding Mahoun does a lot right. The social structure and lifestyle of the rattata and the threatening world they live in are communicated well and make sense; these aren't...

5m, done in a state of 😢 about how much i could actually get done inside the time limit. Can you tell what body parts I had less time to do? I can. Oof. next person pls droaw my D and D pc she is called Gauri and she is a tigre as you can probly tell she is a total badass n redy to kill...

This is a tricky one for me. I don't really "do" favourites, and there are countless pokémon I'm about equally fond of. Still, I'd have to say that Mewtwo is definitely up there for more or less the same reasons as yours! He's been a long-held minor fixation of mine for a bunch of reasons, and...

Hi, Chibi! It's been a while I know, but it's time to finally give this a review at last. Great work, and I'm keen to read on!

Hey Nebby! I'm glad to finally be leaving a comment on TCATS, it's about time. This is a pretty strong opening chapter — I have a sense of Shine's character and an investment in seeing him get the answers (and peace) he needs, the setting feels fuller for having the kind of details I really...

My (F9, 18 in human years) human partner (F19) went to live away from home to attend uni and left me behind. Instead of waiting for her to come home, I also left and made a lot of changes to my lifestyle and appearance. I don't expect she'd recognise me if we ever met each other again, but I...

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Dropped a review yesterday, forgot about this thread though! 😬